读后续写--40 小时失联后,爱的接力找到了她 讲义-四省天一大联考2025届高中毕业班阶段性测试五英语试题

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名称 读后续写--40 小时失联后,爱的接力找到了她 讲义-四省天一大联考2025届高中毕业班阶段性测试五英语试题
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续写题目
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Yoleanic ash from Iceland' s Eyjiafjallajokull made Europe' s airports shut down for nearly a week, leaving thousands of passengers stranded(滞留)across the globe. Among then was Agrnes' mother, Sophia Atila Kafu, who was stuck at Schiphol Airport in Amsterdam, nearly 4,000 miles away from Agnes, who was in Canada, waiting for her mother to attend her graduation ceremony.
This would hardly be notable were it not for the fact that Sophia was 64, had never been outside Kenya, had never been on a plane, had never been inside an airport, spoke only Swahili(斯瓦希里语),carried only 25 euros and didn't have a working mobile.
By the time Agnes realized something was wrong, Sophia had already been stranded at Schiphol for 19 hours. She had some emergency contact details with her but, so far, no call had been made or received.
Realizing that her mother was unable to seek help, Agnes called the airline, KLM(荷兰航空),to ask if they could search for her. The airline told her that there was too much chaos in the airport and that they would not be able to locate one particular person.
Unable to rest, Agnes contacted her friends and her colleagues for help. Soon, there were people from Boston, Toronto, New York and San Francisco working on a solution. By now, Sophia had been stranded for nearly 40 hours.
One of Agnes's friends sent an email to her contacts titled "Urgently need your networking help!" It begged, "Do you know anyone who's stranded in Amsterdam, or know anyone whose Facebook friends or Twitter followers might be there "
This email spread quickly among friends of friends. Within two hours, the email went into the inbox of George Bougias, the manager of Delta Airlines (a KLM partner). George happened to know Swahili. A few minutes later, George was on his way to the airport. He and six security agents began to comb the airport.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Para 1: Near midnight, they noticed a figure wrapped in a blanket outside the airport.
Para 2: Four days later, Sophia arrived in Canada in time for Agnes's graduation ceremony.
文章大意
冰岛火山灰致使欧洲机场关闭近一周,阿格尼斯的母亲索菲亚被困在荷兰阿姆斯特丹的史基浦机场,她身处加拿大,等待母亲参加自己的毕业典礼。索菲亚 64 岁,从未出过肯尼亚,没坐过飞机、进过机场,只会说斯瓦希里语,仅带 25 欧元且手机无法使用。阿格尼斯发现母亲失联后,联系荷兰航空寻求帮助遭拒,便向朋友和同事求助。朋友发邮件扩散求助信息,最终被达美航空(荷兰航空合作伙伴)经理乔治收到,他懂斯瓦希里语,带着安保人员前往机场寻找索菲亚。
故事山分析
开端:冰岛火山灰致机场关闭,索菲亚被困,阿格尼斯等待母亲参加毕业典礼。
发展:阿格尼斯发现母亲失联,联系航空公司无果,向朋友同事求助,朋友发邮件扩散求助信息。
高潮:乔治收到邮件,带着安保人员前往机场寻找索菲亚。
结局(待续写):找到索菲亚,她顺利参加毕业典礼。
伏笔及在续写中的回应
伏笔 1:索菲亚只会说斯瓦希里语。回应:乔治恰好懂斯瓦希里语,能与索菲亚交流确认身份。
伏笔 2:索菲亚携带现金少且手机无法使用。回应:在机场寻找时,这增加了寻找难度,凸显她孤立无援,也体现找到她的重要性。
伏笔 3:阿格尼斯联系航空公司被拒。回应:凸显求助艰难,为众人合力寻找铺垫,体现朋友同事帮忙的珍贵。
伏笔 4:朋友发求助邮件。回应:乔治收到邮件,开启寻找行动,是找到索菲亚的关键。
伏笔 5:乔治前往机场寻找。回应:在续写中引出找到索菲亚的情节。
续写要点
第一段:着重描写发现索菲亚时的场景,包括她的状态,乔治等人的反应,如何确认她就是索菲亚,以及索菲亚的情绪表现。
第二段:描写索菲亚到达加拿大参加毕业典礼的温馨画面,如阿格尼斯与母亲的团聚,母亲在毕业典礼上的感受,以及对这次经历的感慨。
情感线
故事从阿格尼斯对母亲被困的焦急担忧,到四处求助时的无奈与期待,再到众人帮忙时燃起的希望,最后在找到母亲并参加毕业典礼时转为喜悦与感动。情感层层递进,体现亲情的珍贵以及陌生人之间的善意带来的温暖。
故事线
火山灰致机场关闭,索菲亚被困。
阿格尼斯发现母亲失联,联系航空公司求助。
航空公司拒绝,阿格尼斯向朋友同事求助。
朋友发求助邮件扩散。
乔治收到邮件前往机场寻找。
找到索菲亚,她参加毕业典礼。
主旨升华句
This experience not only strengthened the bond between mother and daughter but also demonstrated the power of human kindness and the unity of strangers in the face of difficulties.
In the chaos of the stranded situation, the love of family and the help from unknown people lit up the way for Sophia, showing that hope always exists even in the most desperate moments.
The journey of finding Sophia was not just a physical search but a testament to the unwavering love of a daughter and the remarkable compassion that can emerge from the collective efforts of people.
Through this event, we witnessed the magic of connection and cooperation. Strangers became allies, and their combined efforts overcame the obstacle, highlighting the beauty of humanity.
This story serves as a reminder that no matter how far apart we are or how great the challenges may seem, love, friendship, and the kindness of others can bridge any gap and bring about happy endings.
写作示范一
Para 1:
Near midnight, they noticed a figure wrapped in a blanket outside the airport. George immediately quickened his pace and called out in Swahili. The figure looked up, her eyes filled with confusion and exhaustion. It was Sophia. George gently introduced himself and told her that her daughter had been worried sick about her. Sophia's eyes welled up with tears, a mix of relief and gratitude. She had been so scared and alone in this foreign place. The security agents helped her gather her things, and George accompanied her to a warm waiting area.
Para 2:
Four days later, Sophia arrived in Canada in time for Agnes's graduation ceremony. As soon as she saw her mother, Agnes rushed towards her and embraced her tightly. The two of them cried tears of joy. Sophia looked around in wonder at the grand ceremony, feeling proud of her daughter. Agnes introduced her mother to all the friends who had helped. It was a moment filled with love, gratitude, and the celebration of not only Agnes's achievement but also the power of love and the kindness of strangers.
写作示范二
Para 1:
Near midnight, they noticed a figure wrapped in a blanket outside the airport. George slowly approached, speaking softly in Swahili. When Sophia heard her native language, she was startled but also filled with hope. George showed her a photo of Agnes, and Sophia nodded vigorously, recognizing her daughter immediately. She started to pour out her worries and fears in a rush of words. George comforted her, assuring her that everything was going to be okay. The security agents surrounded her protectively, making her feel safe for the first time in days.
Para 2:
Four days later, Sophia arrived in Canada in time for Agnes's graduation ceremony. Agnes stood at the airport gate, anxiously waiting. When she saw her mother, she let out a cry of happiness. Sophia walked towards her with a big smile, her steps filled with newfound confidence. At the ceremony, as Agnes received her diploma, Sophia couldn't stop smiling, knowing that this moment was made possible by the love and help of so many. It was a memory that would stay with them forever, a beautiful reminder of the strength of family and the goodness of people.
参考答案
Para 1:
Near midnight, they noticed a figure wrapped in a blanket outside the airport. George, with a glimmer of hope in his eyes, walked closer and called out Sophia's name in Swahili. The woman looked up, her face pale and tired. It was indeed Sophia. She was too weak to speak much, but her eyes told the story of her days of fear and isolation. George gently held her hand and informed her that her daughter was safe and waiting for her. Sophia's lips trembled, and she murmured her thanks. The security agents provided her with warm drinks and a place to rest, while George made arrangements for her onward journey.
Para 2:
Four days later, Sophia arrived in Canada in time for Agnes's graduation ceremony. As she stepped off the plane, Agnes was there, waiting with open arms. The two hugged each other tightly, both crying with joy. At the ceremony, Sophia sat in the front row, beaming with pride as she watched her daughter receive her diploma. Agnes looked back at her mother, knowing that this special day wouldn't have been possible without the kindness of George and all the others who had helped. It was a moment of celebration, not just for Agnes's academic success, but for the power of love and the unity of people from all over the world.