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25年2月云南高三统测英语试题读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I'm walking around the house with a severe limp and actively second-guessing the decision I’ve made. That can only mean one thing: I just ran my one race for the year.
Generally speaking, I’m not an athletic person, which means sinking into my leather sofa and watching NFL players running through the court is my favourite. Better yet, most of my office time is spent in front of my desk. My only “sport”, then, is walking to the leisure section for a cup of coffee. However, one day, out of nowhere, it came to me—why not do something semi-active occasionally That’s how I started to lift weights because it’s the form of exercise that requires me to move the least. Never in a million years, back then, would I think about running.
But, for the second time in a row, my 13-year-old, Betsy, signed in for this foolish 7-mile race
together with me and we were accompanied by a group of three extremely in-shape people. These guys are quite an opposite style. They bike and run countless miles, often on the same day. One has done dozens of Spartan Races, which are demanding obstacle courses that require you to dodge fire, mud, flip tires and throw spears. Another is training for a triathlon. He’s the best because in addition to being faster than me on foot, in the water and on wheels, he can also outlift me. You wouldn’t think that such individuals would want to associate with me, but we all belong to the same running club.
Why do I keep going if I don’t enjoy it and am getting worse every year Pushing myself, mostly. A “bad” idea is somehow less bad if you do it consistently on a regular basis. Besides, I don’t dislike the whole race, just the exhausting running part. I like seeing all the running club members I’ve known, and I love the free beer afterward. Running is just a minor stumbling block (绊脚石) on the way to the good stuff.
Paragraph 1: Anyway, I was there, waiting for the signal to start.
__________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2: Now, sore as my body was, I’m willing to call the race a success.
__________________________________________________________________
故事中文梗概
“我”平时并不是一个热爱运动的人，最喜欢的活动就是躺在沙发上看橄榄球比赛，工作之余也只是偶尔走去休闲区喝杯咖啡。然而，在13岁女儿Betsy的鼓励下，“我”连续第二年参加了一场7英里的跑步比赛。同行的还有三位极其健壮的朋友，他们热爱运动，擅长各种高强度的挑战，比如斯巴达障碍赛和铁人三项。虽然“我”跑得不好，也不太享受跑步的过程，但依然坚持参加。一方面是为了挑战自己，另一方面是为了和跑步俱乐部的朋友们相聚，以及享受赛后免费的啤酒…
主要人物： I（作者“我”）
次要人物：Betsy（我的女儿）、three extremely in-shape people（三位热爱运动的跑友）
叙事视角：第一人称
故事主题：励志故事（Inspirational Story）、克服困难(Overcoming Challenges)
续写思路建议
第一段，考生应该重点写比赛开始后“我”的感受。结合原文提到的“我”不太爱运动的特点，此处可以想办法表现出“我”跑得并不轻松。提醒大家一点，次要人物也不应该写漏。Betsy（“我”女儿） 以及 three extremely in-shape people（三位热爱运动的跑友）也应该在此段被提及。
除了描述身体上的酸疼之外，也应该描写“我”在顺利完赛后的积极感受，比如成就感和幸福感。文末，如果能稍微升华一下，把主题往励志故事（Inspirational Story）和（克服困难）(Overcoming Challenges)上归纳一下就更好了。
写作示范
Anyway, I was there, waiting for the signal to start. As the horn sounded, the crowd moved forward. Betsy raced ahead, full of energy, while I struggled to keep up.（合理的剧情安排：我不善于跑步，自然只能努力追赶） My three sporty friends ran confidently, their excitement pushing them on.（次要人物也需要提及）The first mile was okay, but soon I grew tired. My breathing became heavy, and my legs ached. By mile four, I was mixing running with walking, determined to finish.（合理的剧情设置：跑不动就跑走结合）My friends cheered me on as they ran ahead. Seeing the finish line, I forced myself into a final sprint, crossing it completely exhausted, with them waiting and clapping for me.（明确表示“我”完赛才能和下文的开头句中的success顺畅衔接）(92 words)
Now, sore as my body was, I’m willing to call the race a success.Limping around the house, I winced with every step, questioning my decision to run at all. My muscles ached, and even sitting down felt like a challenge.（合理的肢体动作和状态描写：全身酸痛）Yet, despite the pain, I couldn’t deny the sense of accomplishment.（积极的感受描写：成就感）Betsy’s excitement, the cheers from my running club friends, and, of course, the well-earned post-race beer made it all worthwhile.（尽力和原文中提及的概念互动）Maybe I’d never be a great runner, but I had finished again. Most importantly, I transformed the stumbling block into a stepping stone and proved that true strength comes from within.（88 words）
词汇和表达积累
horn n. 喇叭；号角
struggle to keep up 努力跟上
cheer sb on 为某人加油
limp v. 跛行；一瘸一拐地走
wince v.（因疼痛或不适）畏缩；皱眉
sense of accomplishment 成就感
well-earned adj. 应得的；来之不易的
写作示范一
Paragraph 1:
Anyway, I was there, waiting for the signal to start. The sun peeked through the clouds, casting a warm glow over the starting line. My heart was pounding, not just from the anticipation of the race but also from the fear of what lay ahead. Betsy stood beside me, her eyes shining with excitement. She looked so full of energy and determination, which made me feel a bit ashamed of my own hesitation. As the countdown began, I took a deep breath and tried to calm my nerves. The moment the starting gun fired, the crowd surged forward. I started at a slow, steady pace, trying to conserve my energy. The three in - shape club members quickly disappeared from my sight, their long strides carrying them far ahead. But I didn't let that discourage me. I focused on my own rhythm, one step at a time, ignoring the burning sensation in my legs that started to creep in after the first mile.
Paragraph 2:
Now, sore as my body was, I’m willing to call the race a success. Crossing the finish line, I felt a sense of accomplishment wash over me. Betsy was already there, waiting with a big smile on her face. She gave me a high - five and told me how proud she was. Looking around, I saw the other members of the running club, some of them resting, some chatting and laughing. The free beer tasted better than ever. I realized that this race wasn't just about physical endurance; it was about facing my fears and pushing myself beyond my limits. Despite the pain and the struggle during the run, I had made it through. This experience made me more determined than ever to keep up with my semi - active lifestyle, not just for the occasional beer but for the self - growth and the precious time spent with my daughter and friends in the running club. I was already looking forward to the next race, ready to take on the challenge once again.
写作示范二
Paragraph 1:
Anyway, I was there, waiting for the signal to start. The air was thick with the smell of anticipation and a hint of nervous sweat. The starting line was a bustling hive of activity, filled with runners of all shapes and sizes, each with their own reasons for being there. My eyes scanned the crowd, landing on Betsy who was bouncing on the balls of her feet, radiating youthful enthusiasm. She caught my eye and grinned, her smile a beacon of encouragement in my sea of doubt. The countdown echoed through the speakers, and my hands instinctively balled into fists. As the gun fired, a deafening cheer erupted. I took off, my legs feeling like lead weights. The three fit club members shot forward like arrows, their powerful strides eating up the distance. But I refused to be daunted. I found a rhythm, a slow, plodding pace that was all my own. With each step, I pushed away the thoughts of pain and fatigue that threatened to overwhelm me, focusing instead on the sound of my breathing and the thud of my feet on the ground.
Paragraph 2:
Now, sore as my body was, I’m willing to call the race a success. Crossing the finish line, I felt a wave of emotions wash over me. Betsy rushed towards me, her arms wide open, and we embraced in a tight hug. The other members of the running club gathered around, offering pats on the back and words of praise. The free beer in my hand was a symbol of my accomplishment, a well - earned reward. I looked back on the race, the struggles and the moments of self - doubt, and realized that this wasn't just about finishing a 7 - mile run. It was about breaking through my self - imposed limitations, about facing my fears head - on. This experience had taught me the value of perseverance and the power of a positive mindset. It had also strengthened the bond between me and Betsy, and deepened my connection with the running club. I knew that from now on, I would approach every challenge with the same determination, ready to take on whatever life threw my way.
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I'm walking around the house with a severe limp and actively second-guessing the decision I’ve made. That can only mean one thing: I just ran my one race for the year.
Generally speaking, I’m not an athletic person, which means sinking into my leather sofa and watching NFL players running through the court is my favourite. Better yet, most of my office time is spent in front of my desk. My only “sport”, then, is walking to the leisure section for a cup of coffee. However, one day, out of nowhere, it came to me—why not do something semi-active occasionally That’s how I started to lift weights because it’s the form of exercise that requires me to move the least. Never in a million years, back then, would I think about running.
But, for the second time in a row, my 13-year-old, Betsy, signed in for this foolish 7-mile race
together with me and we were accompanied by a group of three extremely in-shape people. These guys are quite an opposite style. They bike and run countless miles, often on the same day. One has done dozens of Spartan Races, which are demanding obstacle courses that require you to dodge fire, mud, flip tires and throw spears. Another is training for a triathlon. He’s the best because in addition to being faster than me on foot, in the water and on wheels, he can also outlift me. You wouldn’t think that such individuals would want to associate with me, but we all belong to the same running club.
Why do I keep going if I don’t enjoy it and am getting worse every year Pushing myself, mostly. A “bad” idea is somehow less bad if you do it consistently on a regular basis. Besides, I don’t dislike the whole race, just the exhausting running part. I like seeing all the running club members I’ve known, and I love the free beer afterward. Running is just a minor stumbling block (绊脚石) on the way to the good stuff.
Paragraph 1: Anyway, I was there, waiting for the signal to start.
__________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2: Now, sore as my body was, I’m willing to call the race a success.
__________________________________________________________________
故事中文梗概
“我”平时并不是一个热爱运动的人，最喜欢的活动就是躺在沙发上看橄榄球比赛，工作之余也只是偶尔走去休闲区喝杯咖啡。然而，在13岁女儿Betsy的鼓励下，“我”连续第二年参加了一场7英里的跑步比赛。同行的还有三位极其健壮的朋友，他们热爱运动，擅长各种高强度的挑战，比如斯巴达障碍赛和铁人三项。虽然“我”跑得不好，也不太享受跑步的过程，但依然坚持参加。一方面是为了挑战自己，另一方面是为了和跑步俱乐部的朋友们相聚，以及享受赛后免费的啤酒…
主要人物： I（作者“我”）
次要人物：Betsy（我的女儿）、three extremely in-shape people（三位热爱运动的跑友）
叙事视角：第一人称
故事主题：励志故事（Inspirational Story）、克服困难(Overcoming Challenges)
续写思路建议
第一段，考生应该重点写比赛开始后“我”的感受。结合原文提到的“我”不太爱运动的特点，此处可以想办法表现出“我”跑得并不轻松。提醒大家一点，次要人物也不应该写漏。Betsy（“我”女儿） 以及 three extremely in-shape people（三位热爱运动的跑友）也应该在此段被提及。
除了描述身体上的酸疼之外，也应该描写“我”在顺利完赛后的积极感受，比如成就感和幸福感。文末，如果能稍微升华一下，把主题往励志故事（Inspirational Story）和（克服困难）(Overcoming Challenges)上归纳一下就更好了。
写作示范
Anyway, I was there, waiting for the signal to start. As the horn sounded, the crowd moved forward. Betsy raced ahead, full of energy, while I struggled to keep up.（合理的剧情安排：我不善于跑步，自然只能努力追赶） My three sporty friends ran confidently, their excitement pushing them on.（次要人物也需要提及）The first mile was okay, but soon I grew tired. My breathing became heavy, and my legs ached. By mile four, I was mixing running with walking, determined to finish.（合理的剧情设置：跑不动就跑走结合）My friends cheered me on as they ran ahead. Seeing the finish line, I forced myself into a final sprint, crossing it completely exhausted, with them waiting and clapping for me.（明确表示“我”完赛才能和下文的开头句中的success顺畅衔接）(92 words)
Now, sore as my body was, I’m willing to call the race a success.Limping around the house, I winced with every step, questioning my decision to run at all. My muscles ached, and even sitting down felt like a challenge.（合理的肢体动作和状态描写：全身酸痛）Yet, despite the pain, I couldn’t deny the sense of accomplishment.（积极的感受描写：成就感）Betsy’s excitement, the cheers from my running club friends, and, of course, the well-earned post-race beer made it all worthwhile.（尽力和原文中提及的概念互动）Maybe I’d never be a great runner, but I had finished again. Most importantly, I transformed the stumbling block into a stepping stone and proved that true strength comes from within.（88 words）
词汇和表达积累
horn n. 喇叭；号角
struggle to keep up 努力跟上
cheer sb on 为某人加油
limp v. 跛行；一瘸一拐地走
wince v.（因疼痛或不适）畏缩；皱眉
sense of accomplishment 成就感
well-earned adj. 应得的；来之不易的
写作示范一
Paragraph 1:
Anyway, I was there, waiting for the signal to start. The sun peeked through the clouds, casting a warm glow over the starting line. My heart was pounding, not just from the anticipation of the race but also from the fear of what lay ahead. Betsy stood beside me, her eyes shining with excitement. She looked so full of energy and determination, which made me feel a bit ashamed of my own hesitation. As the countdown began, I took a deep breath and tried to calm my nerves. The moment the starting gun fired, the crowd surged forward. I started at a slow, steady pace, trying to conserve my energy. The three in - shape club members quickly disappeared from my sight, their long strides carrying them far ahead. But I didn't let that discourage me. I focused on my own rhythm, one step at a time, ignoring the burning sensation in my legs that started to creep in after the first mile.
Paragraph 2:
Now, sore as my body was, I’m willing to call the race a success. Crossing the finish line, I felt a sense of accomplishment wash over me. Betsy was already there, waiting with a big smile on her face. She gave me a high - five and told me how proud she was. Looking around, I saw the other members of the running club, some of them resting, some chatting and laughing. The free beer tasted better than ever. I realized that this race wasn't just about physical endurance; it was about facing my fears and pushing myself beyond my limits. Despite the pain and the struggle during the run, I had made it through. This experience made me more determined than ever to keep up with my semi - active lifestyle, not just for the occasional beer but for the self - growth and the precious time spent with my daughter and friends in the running club. I was already looking forward to the next race, ready to take on the challenge once again.
写作示范二
Paragraph 1:
Anyway, I was there, waiting for the signal to start. The air was thick with the smell of anticipation and a hint of nervous sweat. The starting line was a bustling hive of activity, filled with runners of all shapes and sizes, each with their own reasons for being there. My eyes scanned the crowd, landing on Betsy who was bouncing on the balls of her feet, radiating youthful enthusiasm. She caught my eye and grinned, her smile a beacon of encouragement in my sea of doubt. The countdown echoed through the speakers, and my hands instinctively balled into fists. As the gun fired, a deafening cheer erupted. I took off, my legs feeling like lead weights. The three fit club members shot forward like arrows, their powerful strides eating up the distance. But I refused to be daunted. I found a rhythm, a slow, plodding pace that was all my own. With each step, I pushed away the thoughts of pain and fatigue that threatened to overwhelm me, focusing instead on the sound of my breathing and the thud of my feet on the ground.
Paragraph 2:
Now, sore as my body was, I’m willing to call the race a success. Crossing the finish line, I felt a wave of emotions wash over me. Betsy rushed towards me, her arms wide open, and we embraced in a tight hug. The other members of the running club gathered around, offering pats on the back and words of praise. The free beer in my hand was a symbol of my accomplishment, a well - earned reward. I looked back on the race, the struggles and the moments of self - doubt, and realized that this wasn't just about finishing a 7 - mile run. It was about breaking through my self - imposed limitations, about facing my fears head - on. This experience had taught me the value of perseverance and the power of a positive mindset. It had also strengthened the bond between me and Betsy, and deepened my connection with the running club. I knew that from now on, I would approach every challenge with the same determination, ready to take on whatever life threw my way.