2025届高三英语二轮复习：读后续写精华必备素材背诵与检测学案（含答案）

2025届高三读后续写精华必备素材
一、五种衔接首句的方法
1.延续首句主语，复现首句关键词
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. “Don’t panic!” he handed each one a wet towel, helping them clean the mess quickly. After that, Jeff stammered out their plan, his face flushing. However, Father laughed, “Sounds great! I can teach you to cook.” At this, Jenna and Jef almost jumped to their feet, joy in eyes. Under his careful guidance, it didn’t take long before the French toast and chicken porridge were ready. Everything settled, Father left the kitchen, promising to keep their secret.（2021年6月新高考Ⅰ卷）
2.描述首句引发的反应或动作(movement)
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. Meeting their smiling eyes, Mother felt confused until they presented the breakfast and said “Happy Mother’s Day”. Mother gave them a tight hug, “Unbelievable! You can cook! It’s the biggest surprise I have received.” Her face lit up with happiness. “They have known how to take care of others.” Father said in response to her excitement, winking at Jenna and Jef. They couldn’t help giggling. It was a secret only shared between them. （2021年6月新高考Ⅰ卷）
3.增加情绪描写(emotion)
When they came in my direction, I tried to show them the prettiest and happiest smile. Although I still felt a little scared of these dangerous people(情绪描写), I knew the burden on their shoulder--without a place called home, without a proper meal. So I truly hoped my smile could be some of the comfort. But hardly could I imagine that serving the salad could become so challenging and tough when facing a number of guests. They were almost like bees, coming one by one, never stopping！My smile froze gradually as one after another worn-out clothes were coming and pouring—now I was too busy to see their faces！Mixing the salad dressing and assigning one by one, I was almost like a cat on hot bricks, my hands racing. Fortunately, the helpful lady came to assist me, who took some loads off my shoulder. With her assistance, I finished my serving time smoothly.（2022年6月浙江卷）
4.增加场景描写(scene)
We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. The only light came from the faint glow of the moon and the occasional flash of lightning.(环境描写) We got stuck in the forest. And an unexpected shower added to the difficulty of us in finding a way home, for all the tracks we had made disappeared because of the rain. I was almost on the edge of breaking down when my father said, “Don’t worry, my son. I remember there is a river near the farm house. Find the river and we will be back home.” Finally, we found the river and got back to the house along it. Needless to say, we ate a late dinner.(2018年6月浙江)
5.结合法（场景描写＋描述反应和动作/复现）
At last, the town came into view but the sledge gave strange sounds. Barely slowing down, he went through the icy streets, avoiding anything that could met the sledge. And the sledge only stopped as he neared the doctor's house. The sledge, survived through the journey, broke down finally. Bob picked up his Jan eagerly and gently and made his way into the doctor's house. Luckily, Jan recovered fully from her fever. Love always makes miracles. （2021年新高考Ⅰ卷）
二、五种句间衔接表达
(一)、时间衔接
1.After a while/moment/ Several minutes/a moment later Shortly afterwards 不久之后
In the blink of an eye, ... 一眨眼工夫，
2.At that critical moment 在紧要关头 All of a sudden= Suddenly
3.After what seemed like ages/centuries, ... 似乎过了很久, ...
4. It was not long before sb. realized ... .不久之后， …
5. With time ticking by, ... 随着时间滴答滴答流逝，
6. from then/that day/that moment on,
(二)、地点衔接
On the way to… On arriving at the hospital, … On arrival,… 一到达
(三)、情绪衔接/心理描写衔接
1.To one’s surprise/ amazement/ to one's relief,
2. Encouraged/Inspired by his words, …
3.What impressed/amazed/delighted/disappointed/angered Sb. was that …
4.Unexpectedly/Surprisingly/Amazingly/Fortunately/Unfortunately/Thankfully,
(四)、感官反应衔接
1.看到：At the sight of ...，sb. ... 一看到...... Seeing the messy room,…
Looking around/scanning the room,… Noticing Susan's unhappiness,…
What came into my sight was ...
2.听到:On hearing the scream, he… 一听到......
3.感到: Sensing his anxiety,… Feeling anxious, …
4.想到: At the thought of …一想到 Thinking that …, …
5.回顾/意识到 Recalling/Realizing...,
(五)、转折过渡
But bad luck for sb, ... 但是某人真不走运，
But on second thought，... 但是转念一想，
But what happened next was pure unexpected/magic.
三、五种续写故事结尾方式
首尾呼应结尾：
文章开头：I had an interesting childhood . It was filled with surprise and amusements , all because of my mother -- loving , sweet , yet absent - minded and forgetful .我有一个有趣的童年，充满了惊喜和娱乐，都是因为我的母亲——有爱，却心不在焉，健忘。
结尾：Despite mom’s being absent - minded and forgetful , she was still a kind and nice mom .尽管妈妈总是心不在焉，健忘，但她仍然是一个和蔼可亲的妈妈。
升华主题结尾：(详解在后面）
总结概括整个故事
At last, the town came into view but the sledge gave strange sounds. Barely slowing down, he went through the icy streets, avoiding anything that could met the sledge. And the sledge only stopped as he neared the doctor's house. The sledge, survived through the journey, broke down finally. Bob picked up his Jan eagerly and gently and made his way into the doctor's house. Luckily, Jan recovered fully from her fever. Love always makes miracles. （2021年新高考Ⅱ卷）（总结概括：爱创造奇迹）
表达自己的价值观；
After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag. Inside the bag was a chicken taco. The next few minutes saw my wolfing down the delicious food. Tears welled up as I was chewing. It was awesome to know that while many people tend to ignore those in need, there are some kind-hearted ones who go out of their way to lend a hand. The good deed the foreign family did will never escape me. I am going to pass it down to create a much friendlier world. (2021年1月八省联考)
借用名言警句来升华主题
As a proverb says, ‘Every coin has two sides.’ Making full use of your strength is your achievement. Please remember that in no case will you give up especially in trouble. God is fair to everyone.”
画面定格结尾：
人物动作的画面定格
I understood immediately what my parents were worried about. It was me who had misunderstood my dad all the time, not the other way around. The next morning, I handed Dad my hard-earned cash. It only seemed fair. But he just took some of it. “That’ll do for now and thanks for helping with the family expenses, son. You are really growing up,” he said. After the talk, I went straight back to the farmer and took the extra work. (2021年6月浙江卷)
特殊寓意的物品画面
Years later, looking through the pictures I took of the bear, I could still feel a shiver down my spine. The pictures lay quietly on my desk, reminding me of that dangerous but worthwhile moment. (2020年7月浙江卷)
特殊寓意的写景画面
①The sky cleared up and the grass was green. Dawn had come. 天空变得晴朗，草色青青。黎明已经来临。（寓意：崭新的开始）
②Looking up, I saw the sun shine brighter than I ever knew before. I saw a tree in the distance glisten gently as it reflected the sun's rays. 抬头一看，我看到太阳比我以前所知道的还要明亮。我看见远处有一棵树反射着太阳光，发出柔和的光辉。（寓意：心情豁然开朗）
③The moon seemed to lighten the night. Dotted with glittering stars, the sky, midnight blue, gave the scene a fairy tale atmosphere. 月亮照亮了黑夜，天空缀满星光，蓝色午夜赋予这一场景童话般的氛围。（寓意：美好）
对话结尾：
A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from the university. To his great surprise, it was not just Poppy, but two dogs, that dashed out of the house as the doorbell rang. “Meet Pipan, Poppy’s new playmate,” exclaimed Dad. “Poppy has been gloomy ever since you left for university. We thought Pipan might cheer her up”. The boy beamed while patting both dogs: “I don’t know if I should feel thrilled for having a new puppy or sad because Poppy has found a new best friend!”.( 2020年1月浙江)
留白结尾：（给予读者想象空间）
The video was posted online the Monday before Halloween. I looked just like a pumpkin head in it. Embarrassed and a little annoyed, I fled to my room, but Mom stopped me. “You haven’t read the comments yet.” I scrolled down the screen and marveled at the stories the viewers shared about Halloween. One girl recalled celebrating it with her brothers and sisters, and thanked us for “bringing her home”. The words brought warmth to my heart and tears to my eyes. I felt I felt a warm festival atmosphere spreading in my lovely family, which meant a wonderful Halloween night would begin. (2021年1月浙江卷)
四、三种情绪描写句式
(一)：情绪形容词1+情绪形容词2, sb do sth, doing sth.
感到...和..., 某人做某事1, 并做某事2
1. Delighted and confident, Director Xie shown his great talent for dancing, hoping to attract more people to visit his hometown.感到开心和自信的，解局长展示了他舞蹈的天赋，希望吸引更多的人来他家乡旅游。
2.Nervous and scared, Peter managed to step onto the stage, starting to deliver his speech. (感到)紧张和害怕,彼得勉力走上舞台,开始发表演讲。
3. Determined and inspired, David raised his head, looking at me with gratitude.
感到坚定和受到鼓舞,David抬起头，感激地看着我。
练习：
1. ________________(沮丧和无助的), Eric burst in tears, wondering what to do next.
2._________________________(感到放松的和快乐的), David waved at me immediately after crossing the finish line , conveying his happiness and gratitude . （2022全国1卷）
(二)、情绪形容词+as sb+be动词，sb (still) do sth.
尽管某人（感到）...，某人仍做某事
尽管很紧张， David 决心完成赛跑。
Nervous as he was , David became determined to finish the race.
2.尽管很伤心，他还是竭力忍住眼泪。Sad as he was, he tried hard to hold back his tears.
3.尽管很着急和不情愿，我还是按照爸爸的要求去洗碗。
Anxious and unwilling as I was, I still did the dishes at Dad's request.
练习：1._ (尽管他很害怕和紧张), Helctor still plucked up his courage to explain what had happened to Mr. Alder.
2. , he carried on climbing the mountain.(尽管他又累又饿)
(三)、sb was so+情绪adj+that从句 某人如此... ...以至于
倒装句：so+情绪adj + was +sb +that从句 某人如此... ...以至于
他吓得一句话也说不出来。
So scared was he that he was unable to utter a single word.
2. 她太伤心了，突然哭了起来。So sad was she that she burst into crying.
3. 她气得忍不住大叫起来。So angry was she that she couldn’t help shouting.
练习：1 that she slept on the ground. 简太累了，只好睡在地上。
2. that my mind went blank. 我太紧张了，脑子一片空白。
3. that I walked closer to hug them tightly.
我被深深地感动了，走近紧紧地拥抱他们.
4. that my face turned pale and my palms were sweating.
我如此害怕以至于脸色变得苍白，手心出汗。
五、主题升华句
(一).“自救与他救”主题升华（人与自然）
1. Where there is a will, there is a way.有志者事竟成。
2. Perseverance prevails.坚持就是胜利。
3. Roses given, fragrance in hand.赠人玫瑰，手有余香。
4. Somebody sometime somewhere will shine a lamp of hope for you.有时某处有人会给你点亮一线希望。
5. A minor action could make wonders.一个小行为就能创造奇迹。
(二) “逆境、成长、希望、态度、梦想”主题升华（人与自我）
1.What doesn’t kill you makes you a fighter.杀不死你的终将使你强大。
2.A fall into a pit, a gain in your wit.吃一堑,长一智。
3.Fear never builds the future, but hope does.恐惧不会铸造未来，但是希望可以。
4.The journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step. 千里之行始于足下。
5.Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。
6.God helps those who help themselves. 天道酬勤。
7.No sweet without sweat. 没有汗水就没有收获。
8.When life gives you lemons, make lemonade.当生活给了你柠檬，就做柠檬水。
9.Happiness depends on your mindset and attitude.幸福取决于你的心态和态度。
10.If the dream is big enough, the facts don’t count.心中有目标，风雨不折腰。
11.The world always makes way for the dreamer.这个世界总是会给梦想家让路。
(三)、亲情(人与社会)
1.Family is a life jacket in the stormy sea of life.家庭是人生惊涛骇浪中的救生衣 。
2.When trouble comes, it’s your family that supports you.当麻烦来了，是你的家人来支持你。
3.In this world everything comes to an end except mother's love.在这个世界上，除了母爱，一切都会结束。
4.Our family is like the branches of a tree.We may grow in different directions, yet our roots remain as one. 我们家就像一根树枝。我们可能向不同的方向生长，但我们的根仍然是一个方向。
5.Families are stuck together by love, so spread it around like glue.家庭被爱粘在一起，所以把它像胶水一样分散在一起。
6.It was at that moment that I had a full understanding of the significance of family.就在那一刻，我充分了解了家庭的意义。
7.Only then did it dawn on me that we should never take love for granted.
直到那时，我才明白，我们永远不应该把爱视为理所当然的事。
8.Not until then did I become aware of the significance of family.直到那时，我才意识到家庭的重要性。
(四). “诚信与友善”主题升华（人与社会）
1.Honesty is the best policy.诚实乃上策。
2.A small act of kindness can make a big difference.一个小小的善举可以产生很大的影响。
3.Be the light that gives light to other people.成为指引人前进的光。
4.Kindness is repaid with kindness. 善有善报。
5.The acts of random kindness spread. 不经意的善举会广泛传播。
6.No act of kindness, no matter how small, is ever wasted.任何善举，无论多么微小，都不会被浪费掉。
7.It dawned on me that a moment of kindness could mean so much to another, and that a simple act could make the world so much better.
8.Never had I anticipated that a random act of kindness would inject such great power into others and change their life.我从来没有预料到，一个偶然的善举会给别人注入如此巨大的力量，改变他们的生活。
(五).其他1. Learn to walk before you run. 在学会奔跑之前要学会走路。
2. Every coin has two sides. 凡是都有利弊。3. Great minds think alike. 英雄所见略同。
4. More haste, less speed. 欲速则不达。 5. Look before you leap. 三思而后行。
6. Justice has a long harm. 法网恢恢疏而不漏。
7. Don’t put the cart before the horse. 不要本末倒置。
（六）.精彩结尾句式赏析
1. Every time we mentioned the funny incidents of the journey, a pleasant smile would spread over Mon’s face.(动作类)每次我们提起旅途中有趣的事情，莫儿的脸上就会绽开愉快的笑容。
2. It was the narrow escape that made them love each other deeper than before.(情感类）正是这次死里逃生让他们比以前更爱对方了。
3.That whole morning witnessed a happy time spent among them with everyone bathed in the warmth of a family. 整个上午，大家都沐浴在家庭的温暖中，度过了一段快乐的时光。
4. Many years have gone by, but when I looked back to that day, I still remember the lesson he taught me.(感悟类)许多年过去了，但当我回想起那天，我仍然记得他教给我的一课。
5. Only then did I realize that it was bravery that can conquer whatever difficulty came in the way.(哲理类)直到那时我才意识到，只有勇敢才能克服路上的任何困难。
6. That day was so unforgettable that it would stay in my memory forever. (情感类）那一天是如此难忘，它将永远留在我的记忆中。
7. What an unforgettable experience! It would surely be remembered in our whole life.(感悟类)多么难忘的经历啊!它肯定会在我们的一生中被记住。
8. Nothing is more precious than love.没有什么比爱更珍贵了。
9.The early sunlight streaming in, the whole family bathed in love in happiness. 清晨的阳光照进来，全家人沐浴在爱的幸福中。
10.A ripple of warmth welled up in my heart. The flowers swaying in the breeze blossomed, so did our friendship.一阵暖意涌上我的心头。花儿在微风中摇曳开了，我们的友谊也是。
【句式表达积累】
Only then did sb realize···/ Not until then did sb realize···直到那时，某人才意识到······
强调句 —— It is/was+A+that +其余成分
感叹句 —— What an/a +adj. +experience！
否定+比较级 ——Nothing is more +adj.+than+n./V-ing
倒装 否定词(in no case/never/seldom...) +v. + subject
【练习】 1.直到那时她才意识到，人不应该放弃希望！
2.正是心里的勇气帮助John战胜了恐惧。
3.正是这次特别的经历使我明白了家人才是世界上最重要的。
4.这是多么刺激却又难忘的回忆呀！
5.没有什么比拍北极熊更刺激的了！
6.我从未有过如此刺激的假期！(never句首倒装)
八、七种读后续写句型升级
(一)、倒装句 1.部分倒装表情绪 so..that
1) During the exam, so nervous was I that my mind went blank.
2) So excited was he that he couldn't go to sleep.
句子练习：1.我震惊得睁大眼睛， 目瞪口呆。
So shocked was I that I was dumbfounded with my eyes wide open.
So scared did he feel that he felt his legs trembling uncontrollably.
他感到如此害怕，以至于感觉自己的腿在不停颤抖。
2.部分倒装强调动作发生的时间Not until...+主句倒装
1) Not until the fire die out did he wake up.
2)Not until he climbed into bed was he free to think about it.
句子练习：直到那只免子完全消失在我们的视线中，我们才不追了。
Not until the rabbit got completely out of sight did we stop chasing after it.
直到那时Megan才说出了困扰她一整天的事。
Not until then did Megan poured out what had been disturbing her the whole day.
3.全部倒装
功能：为了强调时间、地点，将时间、地点状语放在句首，使用全倒装结构。
e.g.: 1)Now comes your turn to make a short speech.
2) On the top of the mountain sat a giant man.
4.Such+be动词+名词 so+adj. +be动词+名词 so+ adv. +助动词+sb.+动词
e.g.:1) Such is our home in the future.
2) Such was Albert Einstein, a simple man and the 20th century’s greatest scientist.
3)So cold was the weather that we had to stay at home.
4)So much did they eat that they could not move for the next hour
5)So loudly did he speak that even people in the next room could hear him.
句子练习：
这就是“有志者事竞成”这个真理。
Such is the truth that where there is a will, there is a way.
这就是成功的秘诀，多一点点努力，多一点点决心，你就能创造出多一点点的奇迹。
Such is the key to success---a little bit more efforts and a little bit more determination will create a little bit more miracle.
(二)、定语从句
结构1：格式：_______主句________, which 第二句话;
例句：玛丽打开门看到了小女孩，她有着令她熟悉的眼睛和黑色的头发。
Mary opened the door and saw the little girl，who had familiar eyes and black hair.
结构2：格式：_______主句________, which enable/ forced/ allowed sb to do;
_______主句________, which made/forced/allowed sb 感情词
Eg：就在这时，我们听到了Uncle Paul远处传来的微弱声音，这重新点燃了我们回家的希望。
Just at the moment, we heard the faint voice in the distance from Uncle Paul, which allowed us to light the hope returning home.
结构3：格式：________ 主句 ________, which ________
例句：兔子的意外出现使马受惊了，恐慌中，它发出了一声嘶鸣。（2018浙江）
This unexpected appearance frightened my horse, which howled out loud in panic.
(三)、非谓语动词
1.主语did sth., doing/done...或者 Doing/done..., 主语 did sth..
He roared repeatedly, shattering what was left of silence.（2020.7 浙江高考）
I ran back to the camp, stumbling a hundred time in my haste.（2020.7 浙江高考）
Criticized by my teacher, I lowered my head and flushed with guilty.被老师批评，惭愧低头。
句子练习：
她聚精会神地听着,咬着嘴唇,眼睛盯着地板。
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“当然有圣诞老人啊”,妈妈说道,一边用手指拨弄着我的头发。
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她感到累极了,坐在溪边,让疼痛的双脚放松一下。
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2.Having done sth., sb. did sth.
4. Having walked for quite a long time, she found herself lost.
5. Having experienced so many failures one after another, she finally picked herself up.
Having received the admission letter, Tom felt on top of the world, sighing that his years’ efforts finally paid off.
6. Having wondered aimlessly in the street for hours, she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat.
句子练习：4.说出真相后，他心里轻松了很多，心情放松地回家了。
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5.做好充分准备后，她站在窗边，期待着女儿的到来。
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3(独立主格)句式1：主1+谓...,主2+doing/done....
句式2：主2+doing/done, 主1+ 谓语动词
7.She closed her eyes tightly, her hands covering her face.
8.Paula’s face flushed, her voice quivering with excitement.
9.As they were still out of breath, their heart beating wildly, they were consequently convinced what happened just now was true.
Her legs trembling and his heart beating nearly out of her chest, Jenny walked slowly to the front. 杰妮慢慢走向前台，腿发抖，心都要跳出来了。
The night falling, they put up a tent and wolfed down a simplified dinner.
夜幕降临，他们支起帐篷，快速地吃了个便饭。
12. Laughter lingering in the room, their precious friendship blossomed in the summer like a flower that never fades.伴随着笑声回荡在房间里，他们珍贵的友谊之花盛开在这个夏季，永不凋败。
句子练习：6他愤怒得脸色阴沉，冲出阳台怒视我们，质问“我的花怎么了？”
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7汤姆眼里充满了泪水，声音里充满了绝望，他缓缓点头，加快了步伐。
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8她走到我身边，眼睛里的光线暗了下来，喃喃地说：“我失败了。”
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(四)、With的复合结构
With nobody noticing me, I put the money on the table.
没人注意我，我把钱放在桌子上。
With the pumpkin resting on the table, I bent over and pressed my head against the opening.
南瓜放在桌子上，我俯身过去，把头挤进开口处。
With every angle tried in vain for my nose prevention, I was overwhelmed by a feeling of extreme regret and annoyance.
因为我鼻子的阻挡，每个角度都尝试失败了，我满是悔恨和懊恼。
(五)、名词性从句 结构1：It is +adj for sb that…
结构2：what I could do/say/… is to
what (counts/matters/impress me) most is that … =it is important that…
What came into sight was...
例句1：我们能做的就是慢慢沿着原路回去。
What we could do was to go back along the previous track.
例句2：我所看到的与我过去所经历的任何事情完全不同。
What I saw was completely unlike anything I had experienced in the past.
六，无灵主语
A big smile of excitement lit up his face as he heard the good news.听到这个好消息，他脸上露出兴奋的笑容。
The harsh words sent him into the depths of guilt.刻薄的话把他推向内疚的深渊。
Fear slowly flooded over/welled up in her face. 恐惧慢慢涌上她的心头。
Previous fear and anxiety gradually gave way to joy and confidence.
强调句
It was exactly at that moment that I finally realized mother's love weighed more than anything in this world.或realized that nothing is more precious than mother's love.正是在那时，我才意识到，母爱是世界上最珍贵的东西。
答案：
1.Discouraged and hopeless 2. Relaxed and delighted
1.Scared and anxious as he was 2. Exhausted and hungry as he was
1. So exhausted was Jane 2. So anxious was I
3. So deeply moved was I 4. So terrified was I
1.Only then did she realize that one should never give up hope!
2.It was the special experience that made me realize family matters the most.
3.It was courage in his heart that helped John overcome the fear.
4.What a thrilling but memorable experience！
5.Nothing is more exciting than photographing polar bears.
6.Never had I had such a thrilling vacation before!
1.She listened with close attention, biting her lips and staring at the floor.
2."Of course, there is a Santa Clause." mom said, stroking her fingers through my hair.
3.She felt exhausted and sat by the stream, resting her aching feet.
4.Having told the truth, he felt easier in his mind and returned home with a lighter heart.
5.Having made full preparations, she stood by the window, expecting the arrival of her daughter.
6.His face clouded with anger, he stormed out of the balcony and glared at us, questioning “What happened to my flowers ”
7.Eyes full of tears, his voice full of despair, Tom nodded slowly and quickened his pace.
8.She walked to me, the light in her eyes darkened, and murmured, “I failed.”