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Section B What did you learn on that special day
教学 课题 第5课时 单元写作指导
课时 教学 目标 1.能用过去时谈论过去发生的事情; 2.能够谈论学校郊游以及个人的收获; 3.学习写日记; 4.探索生活中的经历给自己带来的影响。
核心 语言 知识 核心句式: (1)I had an amazing day today. (2)Last summer,we had a very memorable day! (3)At first it was a nice day,but then the weather changed. (4)We heard thunder and saw lightning flash across the sky.
课堂 导学 ◆Step 1 写作积累 1.话题词汇 (1)碰头;相聚 (2)过去常常(做) (3)试穿 (4)写下;记下 (5)从……到…… (6)考虑;想起 (7)赞成;同意 (8)参加学校旅行 (9)摘草莓 (10)打羽毛球 (11)参观科学博物馆 Keys:(1)meet up (2)used to (3)try on (4)write down (5)from…to… (6)think of (7)agree with (8)go on a school trip (9)pick strawberries (10)play badminton (11)visit a science museum 2.佳句积累 (1)我今天过得棒极了。 (2)去年夏天,我们度过了非常难以忘记的一天! (3)起初天气很不错,但后来天气变了。 (4)我们听到了雷声,看到闪电划过天空。 (5)今天我们去农场进行学校郊游! (6)这很累人,但非常有趣! (7)今天确实是值得铭记的一天。 Keys:(1)I had an amazing day today. (2)Last summer,we had a very memorable day! (3)At first it was a nice day,but then the weather changed. (4)We heard thunder and saw lightning flash across the sky. (5)Today we went on a school trip to a farm! (6)It was tiring but great fun! (7)Today was really a day to remember. ◆Step 2 例文研析 1.写作任务 今天是6月15日,星期天,你们学校组织去博物馆,请你写一篇日记,记录今天发生的事情。 要求:70词左右,语句通顺,条理清晰。 2.思路点拨
课堂 导学 3.范文借鉴 Sunday,15 June Today I went on a school trip.We visited the science museum and it was really interesting. We got there so fast by train.We saw some farms and villages along the way.At the museum,I learnt a lot about robots.I didn't know they could play chess with us.It was so cool! Then the guide taught us how to make a model robot.I took a lot of great photos too. After that,We went to the gift shop and I bought some lovely gifts for my parents.They weren't expensive.All in all,it was an exciting day. ◆Step 3 类文训练 今天是5月18日,星期三,珍妮(Jenny)和同学们进行了一次学校旅行,参观了植物园(the botanic garden)。假如你是珍妮,请你根据以下提示,写一篇英文日记。 时间5月18日,星期三交通方式校车(一个小时)活动◆参观蝴蝶馆并学习关于蝴蝶的知识; ◆参观树木和鲜花; ◆学习种花感受自行发挥
One possible version: Wednesday,18 May Today I went on a school trip.It took us an hour to get to the botanic garden by school bus. At the botanic garden,we did many interesting activities.First,the guide showed us around the butterfly house and we learnt a lot about butterflies.Then,we saw some trees and flowers.They were very beautiful.After that,the guide taught us how to grow flowers.I heard a lot,because I'm interested in that. I felt tired but happy.All in all,I had a really wonderful school trip.
课堂 小结 (板书) Unit 7 单元写作指导 Sentences: (1)I had an amazing day today. (2)Last summer,we had a very memorable day! (3)At first it was a nice day,but then the weather changed. (4)We heard thunder and saw lightning flash across the sky.
作业 布置 1.In groups,think of a place or situation where the story took place.Write a chain story together.Take turns to add one or two sentences each. 2.Remember the sentence: If you try to learn something new each day,you'll make each day special.
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Unit 7 A Day to Remember
第5课时 单元写作指导
写作积累
一、话题词汇
used to
碰头;相聚
过去;常常(做)
meet up
去旅行
写下;记下
从……到……
试穿
try on
write down
go on a trip
from…to…
考虑;想起
去学校郊游
think of
写作积累
赞成;同意
摘草莓
agree with
go on a school trip
pick strawberries
打羽毛球
visit a science museum.
参观科学博物馆
play badminton
二、佳句积累
1.我今天过得棒极了。_________________________________________________
2.去年夏天,我度过了难以忘记的一天。
_________________________________________________
3.起初天气很不错,但后来天气变了。 __________________________________________________
4.我们听到了雷声,看到闪电划过天空。
__________________________________________________
I had an amazing day today.
Last summer,we had a memorable day!
At first it was a nice day,but then the weather changed.
We heard thunder and saw lightning flash across the sky.
写作积累
5.今天我们去农场进行学校郊游。______________________________________________
6.这很累人,但非常有趣。
______________________________________________
7.今天确实是值得铭记的一天。______________________________________________
Today we went on a school trip to a farm!
写作积累
It was tiring but great fun.
Today was really a day to remember.
今天是6月15号,你们学校组织郊游去博物馆,请你写一篇日记,记录今天发生的事情。
要求:(1)短文必须包含提示内容,可适当发挥;(2)70词左右,语句通顺,条理清晰。
例文研析
一、写作任务
二、思路点拨
例文研析
三、范文借鉴
Sunday 15th June
Today I went on a school trip.We visited the science museum and it was really interesting.
We got there so fast by train.We saw some farms and villages along the way.At the museum,I learned a lot about robots.I didn't know they could play chess with us.It was so cool! Then the guide taught us how to make a model robot.I took a lot of great photos too.
例文研析
三、范文借鉴
After that,I went to the gift shop and bought some lovely gifts for my parents.They weren't expensive.All in all,it was an exciting day.
例文研析
今天是5月18号,星期三,珍妮(Jenny)和同学们进行了一次学校旅行,参观了植物园(the botanic garden),假如你是珍妮(Jenny),请你根据以下提示,写一篇英文日记。
类文训练
类文训练
时间 5月18号星期三
交通方式 校车(一个小时)
活动 ◆参观蝴蝶馆并学习关于蝴蝶的知识;
◆参观树木和鲜花;
◆学习种花
感受 自行发挥
One possible version:
Wednesday,18th May
Today I went on a school trip.It took us an hour to get to the botanic garden by school bus.
At the botanic garden,we did many interesting activities.First,the guide showed us around the butterfly house and we learned a lot about butterflies.Then,we saw some trees and flowers.They were very beautiful.After that,The guide taught us how to grow flowers.I heard a lot,because I'm interested in that.
I felt tired but happy.All in all,I had a really wonderful school trip.
类文训练
Homework
1.In groups,think of a place or situation where the story took place.Write chain a story together.Take turns to add one or two sentences each.
2.Remember the sentence:
If you try to learn something new each day,you'll make each day special.(共15张PPT)
第6课时 话题写作指导
写作指导
类文训练
话题分析
本单元的话题为“值得纪念的一天”。该话题通常以旅游日记的形式介绍这一天的特殊经历。内容包括活动的时间、地点、具体活动以及个人感受等。
话题分析
【写作任务】
我们都有一些难忘的学校旅行,学校英语俱乐部将组织以“Our School Trip” 为题的征文比赛,请根据以下提示,用英文写一篇短文与同学们分享你的旅行经历。
写作指导
注意事项:(1)词数不少于60;
(2)文章必须包括所提供的主要信息,并作适当发挥。
Our School Trip
【思路点拨】
第一步:审题 体裁: 人称:
时态:
第二步:列提纲
记叙文
第一人称
一般过去时
1.I to the modern farm
with my classmates and teachers last Saturday.上周六,我和
我的同学们和老师们一起去学校参观了这个现代农场。
2.Last weekend,we with Miss Liu
.
上周末,我们和刘女士乘火车去了北京。
3.The weather was .天气晴朗而凉爽。
went
第三步:句子积累
开头句:
on
a
school
trip
went
to
Beijing
by
train
sunny
and
cool
中间句:
1.Then we apples and vegetables.然后我们
帮忙摘苹果和蔬菜。
2.In the afternoon,the farmer us farm.
下午,农夫教我们如何耕种。
helped
pick
taught
how
to
3.We there.我们在那里拍了很
多照片。
4.Before we went back,we some gifts and
delicious food at Wangfujing Street.在我们回去之前,我们买
了一些礼物,并在王府井大街享用了美味的食物。
took
lots
of
photos
bought
enjoyed
结尾句:
1.We had there.我们在那里
玩得很开心。
2.It was .这很累,但也很有趣。
3.Today was really .今天真的
是一个值得纪念的日子。
a
really
good
time
tiring
but
fun
a
day
to
remember
名言名句:
1.Travel broadens the mind.旅游开阔眼界。
2.Life is a journey to experience to learn and to enjoy.
生活是一段经历、学习和享受的旅程。
【范文品鉴】
Our School Trip
I went on a school trip to the modern farm with my classmates and teachers last Saturday.It was sunny and cool.We went there by bus.(引入话题)
First,we explored the farm.It was large.There were a lot of apple trees and vegetable tents.Then we helped pick apples and vegetables.In the afternoon,the farmer taught us how to farm.It was tiring but I enjoyed working with my hands.(具体活动)
From the trip I learnt that farming isn’ t easy. The farmer let us take some apples and vegetables home.They were fresh and delicious.They certainly taste better when you work for them. We had a really good time there.It was tiring but fun.Today was really a day to remember.(表达感受)
类文训练
假如上周末你们班进行了一次学校旅行,你们和刘老师一起乘火车去了首都北京。请你根据提示,用英语写一篇短文。不少于60词。
Places of interest Tian’ anmen Square,the Great Wall,the Palace Museum,Wangfujing Street
Activities take photos,enjoy delicious food,buy gifts…
Feelings …
One possible version:
Last weekend,we went to Beijing with Miss Liu by train.We visited many places of interest there.
On the first day,we went to Tian’ anmen Square.It is very big.We took lots of photos there.Then we saw many wonderful works of art at the Palace Museum.On the second day,we climbed the Great Wall.After that we were very tired but happy.Before we went back,we bought some gifts and enjoyed delicious food at Wangfujing Street.
Beijing is a wonderful place to visit.I hope I can visit it again.
