适用于新高考新教材天津专版2024届高考英语总复习写作专项提升Step1-5建模板 外研版 课件（共9份）

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写作专项提升
第一讲　写对8种基本句型
英 语
基本句型1　“主谓”结构
1.此句式常用来表示主语的动作或状态。其特点是句子的谓语动词能表达完整的意思,这类动词被称为不及物动词,后面可以接副词、介词短语、状语从句等。但不能直接跟宾语,也没有被动语态。常见的不及物动词有come、walk、live、arrive、rise、happen、ride、write、agree、occur、lie、shine、fall、exist等。它的基本结构是:主语+谓语(vi.)(+状语)。
①(2021·浙江卷,写作)The exhibition will last for two weeks.
展览将持续两周。
②(2020·新高考Ⅰ卷,写作)We trained for two hours after school every day.
我们每天放学后训练两个小时。
③(2020·新高考Ⅰ卷,写作)The race started from the school gate.
赛跑从学校门口开始。
④(2020·浙江卷,写作)At that very moment,the helicopter arrived.
就在那一刻,直升机到达了。
2.谓语动词也可以是不及物动词短语,如set off(出发;动身),take place(发生), break down(抛锚;出故障),break out(突然开始;爆发),come out(出版),come up(被提到),drop by(顺便拜访),run away(逃离),run out(用完),等等。
①(2020· 新高考Ⅰ卷,写作)Seeing nobody around,I ran away immediately.
我看见周围没有人,立刻溜走了。
②(2019· 全国Ⅲ卷,书面表达)The Music Festival will take place in our school.
音乐节将在我们学校举行。
③At about 6 pm on Saturday,a big fire broke out in a village.
在周六下午大约六点钟,村子发生了一场大火。
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用“主谓”结构翻译下列句子
1.(2020·天津卷,书面表达)6月8日上午,成人礼在我们学校的报告厅举行。
The coming-of-age ceremony took place in the lecture hall of our school on the morning of June 8th.
2.(2021·新高考Ⅰ卷,写作)Youth创刊十周年庆典就要来临。
The 10th anniversary ceremony of Youth is drawing near.
3.(2020·全国Ⅱ卷,书面表达)上周我在郊区的一个农场工作。
Last week I worked on a farm in the suburbs.
4.(2020·新高考Ⅰ卷,写作)这几天我们训练得很辛苦。
We are training very hard these days.
5.(2019·全国Ⅱ卷,书面表达)排球比赛将在下周五下午在我们学校新建的体育场举行。
The volleyball game will take place in the newly-built stadium of our school next Friday afternoon.
6.这部英文短片将于下午2点在学校大厅开始放映。
The English short film will be shown in the school hall at 2:00 pm.
基本句型2　“主谓宾”结构
此句式的句型特点为谓语动词均为及物动词,是主语发出的动作,但是不能表达完整的意思,其后必须接一个宾语(宾语可以是名词、代词、动词-ing形式或不定式),即动作的承受者,才能表达完整的意思。它的基本结构是:主语+谓语(vt.)+宾语(+状语)。该句型如果能够灵活使用其被动语态,便能为写作增色不少。
1.该句型中的谓语是及物动词,如respect、admire、ignore、provide、upset、appreciate 等。
①(2021·全国甲卷,书面表达)As is known to all,China has abundant and unique cultures with a long history.
众所周知,中国历史悠久,有丰富且独特的文化。
②(2020·全国Ⅰ卷,书面表达)I'll definitely remember his kindness and help forever.
我定会永远记住他的善良与帮助。
③(2020·全国Ⅰ卷,书面表达)Honestly speaking,his great patience and assistance have a great impact on me.
说实话,他极大的耐心和帮助对我影响很大。
④(2020·全国Ⅱ卷,书面表达)We first picked the peaches that were most beautiful in color.
我们首先摘颜色最好看的桃子。
⑤(2019·全国Ⅰ卷,书面表达)I have the following advantages.
我有以下优势。
⑥To my delight,I was chosen from hundreds of applicants to attend the opening ceremony.
令我高兴的是,我从数百名申请者中被选中参加开幕式。
2.谓语动词也可以是及物动词短语,如come across、communicate with、get on well with、look forward to、stand for等。
①(2020·全国Ⅲ卷,书面表达)I am looking forward to your specific guidance.
我盼望着得到您的具体指导。
②(2019·全国Ⅰ卷,书面表达)I can communicate with visitors without difficulty.
我可以毫无困难地与游客们交流。
③He has already got on well with his classmates.
他已经与他的同学们相处得很融洽了。
④Sometimes difficulties stand for a special chance for us to make progress.
有时候困难象征着一种能让我们进步的特殊机遇。
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用“主谓宾”结构翻译下列句子
1.(2021·天津3月卷,书面表达)四川省拥有许多世界闻名的名胜古迹,譬如九寨沟和都江堰灌溉系统。
Sichuan Province enjoys many world-famous places of interest,such as Jiuzhai Valley and Dujiangyan Irrigation System.
2.(2020·全国Ⅰ卷,书面表达)她为我们学生树立了一个很好的榜样。
She has set a great example to us students.
3.(2020·新高考Ⅰ卷,写作)我们队正在为比赛做准备。
Our team is preparing for the game.
4.(2019·全国Ⅰ卷,书面表达)我可以详细介绍中国画。
I can explain the Chinese paintings in detail.
5.(2019·全国Ⅱ卷,书面表达)充足的睡眠和健康的饮食毫无疑问地会让我们走向胜利。
Enough sleep and a healthy diet will unquestionably lead to our victory.
6.(2021·天津3月卷,书面表达)都江堰灌溉系统今天仍在灌溉中发挥着重要作用。
Dujiangyan Irrigation System is still playing an important part in irrigation today.
基本句型3　“主系表”结构
此句式就是我们常提到的主系表结构。该句式侧重说明主语是什么或怎么样,其中谓语动词需用系动词,表语多是形容词,也可以是名词、介词短语、不定式或动词-ing形式等。该句型无被动语态,也无进行时态。它的基本结构是:主语+系动词+表语。
常见的系动词有be,还有感官系动词(sound、look、smell、taste、feel)、变化系动词(become、get、grow、turn、go、fall、run)、持续系动词(remain、keep、hold、stay)、表象系动词(seem、appear、look)等。
①(2021·全国乙卷,书面表达)Thus,its popularity is easy to foresee and understand.
因此,它的流行很容易预见和理解。
②(2020·全国Ⅰ卷,书面表达)Mr Zhang,aged 50,is my favorite English teacher.
50岁的张先生是我最喜欢的英语老师。
③(2020·全国Ⅰ卷,书面表达)He is so knowledgeable,humorous and responsible that I respect and love him so much.
他是那么有学问、幽默并且负责任,我非常尊敬和爱戴他。
④(2019·江苏卷,书面表达)I would be happy to wear traditional Chinese clothes at the welcome ceremony.
我很高兴在欢迎仪式上穿中国传统服装。
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用“主系表”结构翻译下列句子
1.(2020·天津5月卷,书面表达)此外,因特网也是我练习英语听说能力的有效渠道。
Besides,the Internet is also an efficient channel for me to practice my listening and speaking abilities in English.
2.(2020·新高考Ⅰ卷,写作)每一支参赛队伍都非常出色。
Every participating team is great.
3.(2020·全国Ⅱ卷,书面表达)看到我们的劳动成果,我们都感到很满意。
Seeing our fruits of labor,we all felt very satisfied.
4.(2019·全国Ⅰ卷,书面表达)我的目标是让世界了解中国。
My aim is to let the world learn about China.
5.(2019·江苏卷,书面表达)中国传统服装看起来更漂亮,更时尚。
The traditional Chinese dress looks more beautiful and stylish.
6.收到你的来信得知你要来北京,我很高兴。
I'm happy to receive your letter and know you're coming to Beijing.
基本句型4　“主谓宾宾”结构
此句式中的谓语动词必须接两个宾语才能表达完整的意思,其中一个是表示人的间接宾语,另一个是表示物的直接宾语。一般情况下,间接宾语在前,直接宾语在后。它的基本结构是:主语+谓语(vt.)+间接宾语(人)+直接宾语(物)。
1.间接宾语一般位于直接宾语的前面,如果间接宾语在直接宾语的后面,那么中间需要加上一个介词。可用介词to来变换间接宾语的常用动词有give、offer、hand、show、throw、pass、pay、send、sell、tell、lend、write等。(如:give sb sth=give sth to sb)
①(2021·浙江卷,写作)This exhibition offers them a platform to explore the beauty of China.
这次展览为他们提供了一个探索中国之美的平台。
②(2020·新高考Ⅰ卷,写作)This race gives us a good opportunity to have a deeper understanding of patience.
这次比赛给了我们一个好机会,让我们对耐力有了更深刻的理解。
③(2019·北京卷,书面表达)Our teacher told us the importance of labour and the meaning of the social activity.
我们老师告诉我们劳动的重要性及社会活动的意义。
④I've decided to buy my mother a worthy gift.
我已决定给我妈妈买一件有价值的礼物。
⑤Mr.Smith gave me some advice and lent me an English dictionary.
=Mr.Smith gave some advice to me and lent an English dictionary to me.
史密斯先生给了我一些建议并且借给我一本英文词典。
2.可用介词for来变换间接宾语的常用动词有buy、cook、get、order、find、make、sing、save、fetch等。(如:buy sb sth=buy sth for sb)
①My father bought me a new car.
=My father bought a new car for me.
我爸爸给我买了一辆新汽车。
②Can you get me some apples
=Can you get some apples for me
你能帮我拿些苹果吗
③Please find me an apartment.
=Please find an apartment for me.
请给我找一套公寓。
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用“主谓宾宾”结构翻译下列句子
1.(2020·天津5月卷,书面表达)网络课程带给我很多方便和自信,也让我在学习各种知识方面受益匪浅。
Online classes bring me much convenience and confidence and benefit me a lot in learning various knowledge.
2.(2020·浙江卷,写作)我们都很想你,并且祝愿你早日完全康复。
We all miss you very much and wish you a quick and complete recovery.
3.(2019·全国Ⅲ卷,书面表达)在开幕式上,我们的校长将首先给我们发表讲话。
Our headmaster will give us a speech first at the opening ceremony.
4.我能提供给你一些有用的建议。
I can offer you some helpful suggestions.
5.我爸爸总是给我提供及时的、有价值的建议。
My father is always offering me timely and valuable advice.
6.我代表全校同学祝你们回国旅途愉快。
On behalf of the whole school students,I wish you a pleasant trip back to your country.
基本句型5　“主谓宾补”结构
此句式中的动词虽然是及物动词,但只接一个宾语还不能表达完整的意思,必须再加上一个成分对宾语进行补充说明,这样才能使句意完整。宾语补足语直接跟在宾语后面,补充说明宾语的情况。它们之间有逻辑上的主谓关系。宾语补足语可以由名词、非谓语动词、形容词、副词或介词短语等充当。写作时应熟练掌握“名词做宾语补足语”这种高级表达形式。它的基本结构是:主语+谓语(vt.)+宾语+宾语补足语。
①(2021·新高考Ⅰ卷,写作)I think it a good opportunity to extend my heartfelt congratulations.
我认为这是我表达衷心祝贺的好机会。
②With my deskmate's help,I at last found it easy to work out the problem.
在我同桌的帮助下,最后我发现很容易就解出那道题了。
③(2020·全国Ⅱ卷,书面表达)Meanwhile,several girls sang some sweet songs,which made us feel less exhausted.
同时,几个女孩唱起动听的歌曲,这让我们感觉不那么疲惫了。
1.常用名词充当宾语补足语的动词有call、name、elect、make、appoint、leave、consider、keep、wish等。
①Her parents died and left her an orphan.
她父母双亡,使她成了孤儿。
②All of us call him a living dictionary.
我们都叫他“活字典”。
2.常用形容词充当宾语补足语的动词有believe、think、get、keep、make、find、set、wish、consider、prove、leave、paint、drive等。
①John didn't consider himself (to be) important.
约翰并不认为自己重要。
②You had better keep the windows open,because it is too hot in the room.
你最好让窗户开着,因为屋里太热了。
3.常用现在分词和省略to的动词不定式等作宾语补足语的及物动词有see、notice、hear、watch、observe、leave 等。
①Simon left me waiting at the school gate.
西蒙让我在校门口等着。
②Did you see him come in
你看到他进来了吗
4.常用to do作宾语补足语的及物动词有advise、ask、command、encourage、forbid、permit、persuade、get等。
Our maths teacher always encourages us to work out the questions by ourselves.
我们的数学老师总是鼓励我们自己解决问题。
5.常用副词、介词短语等作宾语补足语的及物动词有leave、put等。
You can't leave your friend in trouble.
你不能把你的朋友置于困境而不顾。
6.有些动词后常用it作形式宾语,而将真正的宾语放到宾语补足语的后面,这是英语中常用的句型,即“主语+谓语+it+宾语补足语+真正的宾语”。常见的动词有think、find、consider、feel、make等。
The student has made it a rule to read English magazines every day.
这个学生已经养成了每天读英文杂志的习惯。
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用“主谓宾补”结构翻译下列句子
1.(2019·天津卷,书面表达)一方面,我认为这是一种帮助我们听着音乐接近彼此的简单直接的方式。
For one thing,I consider it an easy and direct way to help us get close to each other while appreciating music.
2.(2019·全国Ⅰ卷,书面表达)我写信邀请你和我一起参加这个节日。
I am writing to invite you to participate in the festival with me.
3.(2019·浙江卷,写作)父母认为这对于建立孩子的信心是很有用的。
Parents think it very useful to build their children's confidence.
4.你的参与定会使这次活动获得巨大成功。
Your participation will certainly make the event a huge success.
5.网络使得交流容易又方便。
The Internet makes communication easy and convenient.
6.我认为英语是一门非常重要的科目。
I consider English a very important subject.
基本句型6　“主谓状”结构
此结构为“主语+谓语+状语(副词、介词短语、不定式、分词、形容词、复合结构)”,其中谓语为不及物动词或不及物动词短语。
①(2021·浙江卷,写作)Most of the students think highly of this exhibition.
这次展览得到了广大学生的高度评价。
②The pen writes smoothly.
这支钢笔写起来很顺畅。
③This shirt washes easily.
这件衬衣很容易清洗。
④The next day,the children started early.
第二天,孩子们早早地出发了。
⑤We walked talking and laughing.
我们一边走路一边说笑。
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用“主谓状”结构翻译下列句子
1.(2020·天津卷,书面表达)整个典礼持续了大约三个小时。
The whole ceremony lasted for about three hours.
2.(2020·新高考Ⅰ卷,写作)你能等到他回来吗
Can you wait until he comes back
3.机会终于来了。
The chance came at last.
4.要求所有的参加者明天上午九点在体育馆集合。
All the participants are to gather in the gym at 9 o'clock tomorrow morning.
5.我被他的话深深地打动了。
I was moved by his words deeply.
基本句型7　“主谓宾状”结构
此结构为“主语+谓语+宾语+状语(副词、介词短语、不定式、分词、形容词、复合结构)”,其中谓语为及物动词或及物动词短语。
①(2021·全国甲卷,书面表达)To tell you the truth,I really appreciate your help.
跟你说实话,我非常感谢你的帮助。
②We can see many flowers through the window.
我们可以透过窗户看见许多花。
③Walking through the park,we can see lots of lovely animals.
从公园里穿行时,我们可以看见许多可爱的动物。
④He went into the museum, full of excitement.
他走进这座博物馆,内心充满激动。
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用“主谓宾状”结构翻译下列句子
1.(2019·天津卷,书面表达)另一方面,尽管我对音乐有热情,我对音乐的历史却了解不多。
For another thing,despite my passion for music,I have a poor understanding of the history of music.
2.(2021·天津卷,书面表达)旅游之后,我计划看一些英语电影,通过不断的重复和模仿学习英语。
After travelling,I plan to watch some English movies to learn English by constant repetition and imitation.
3.(2019· 全国Ⅰ卷,书面表达)暑假的时候,我在伦敦学习英语。
I am studying English in London during the summer holiday.
4.在那之后,我们参观了一家当地的博物馆。
After that,we visited a local museum.
5.英语俱乐部现在正在招收新成员。
The English club is looking for new members right now.
基本句型8　There be句型
There be句型用以表示在某处存在某人或某物,其基本结构是“There be+主语”,be的人称和数一般与后面的主语保持一致。
①(2021·全国甲卷,书面表达)As far as we know,there is a huge cultural difference between China and the western countries.
众所周知,中国和西方国家之间存在着巨大的文化差异。
②There are many foreign students studying Chinese now.
现在有许多外国学生在学汉语。
③There was nothing left in our sight but the trees.
我们看到除了树什么也没有留下。
④First and foremost,there will be a great many activities.
首先,也是最重要的,将会有大量的活动。
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用There be句型翻译下列句子
1.(2021·天津3月卷,书面表达)在四川保护区也有很多被保护的稀有植物物种。
There are also many species of rare plants protected in the nature reserve of Sichuan.
2.天空中没有星星。
There are no stars in the sky.
3.有500多人申请这份工作。
There were over 500 applicants for the job.
4.有各种各样的机会等着初学者利用,以提高他们的演讲能力。
There are varieties of opportunities waiting for the beginners to make use of to improve their speaking abilities.(共32张PPT)
写作专项提升
第二讲　写对3类复合句
英 语
增分句型1　定语从句
定语从句在高中阶段是一个较难的语法项目,因此,写作中使用一个恰到好处的定语从句,能够明显地反映出考生对于语言具有较高的掌握能力,以此来吸引阅卷老师的目光,同时提高作文的档次。
1.关系代词引导的定语从句
引导定语从句的关系代词有who、whom、whose、that、which、as。一个使用恰当的关系代词是写好定语从句的关键,尤其是which和as引导的非限制性定语从句。写定语从句时,找准先行词,然后选择正确的关系代词,并注意关系代词在句子中所作的成分。例如:
他有一所漂亮的房子。
①(2021·全国乙卷,书面表达)Online learning does harm to our eyesight, especially for those who lack self-control.
在线学习对我们的视力有害,特别是对于那些缺乏自我控制的人。
②(2020·全国Ⅰ卷,书面表达)The door opened,and in came the English teacher Ms Cai,who is not tall but pretty.
门开了,英语老师蔡老师进来了,她个子不高,但很漂亮。
③(2019·北京卷,书面表达)As you see,the students in our school are always hard-working.
如你所见,我们学校的学生总是很用功。
2.关系副词引导的定语从句
关系副词有when、where、why,它们引导定语从句分别修饰表示时间、地点、原因的先行词,并在从句中作时间状语、地点状语和原因状语,不能省略。写定语从句时,找准先行词,分析关系词在句子中所作的成分,如果作状语,就用关系副词,再判断表示地点、时间还是原因,最后决定要用的关系副词。例如:
我从不会忘记我们第一次见面的那天。
(2019·天津卷,书面表达)The reason why I love western music is that the piece of music named Fate Symphony by Beethoven has inspired me to move on when I am in trouble.
我之所以喜欢西方音乐,是因为当我身处困境时,贝多芬的《命运交响曲》激励了我不断前进。
3.“介词+关系代词”引导的定语从句
“介词+关系代词”既能引导限制性定语从句,又能引导非限制性定语从句。先行词指物时,关系代词用which;先行词指人时,关系代词用whom;关系代词whose与所修饰的名词也可一起位于介词之后。介词的选用应根据定语从句中动词的习惯搭配、先行词的习惯搭配或所表达的意思来确定。
①(2020·全国Ⅰ卷,书面表达)Every time I see the pictures,in which he is fighting to save people's lives,I cannot help being moved by him.
每当我看到他为救人而战斗的照片时,我都忍不住被他感动。
②Collecting materials took us a whole week,during which we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of every aspect of school life.
搜集材料花了我们整整一周的时间,在此期间,我们采访了我们的老师并拍摄了学校生活的各个方面。
4.定语从句的常用句型
(1)as you can see in...正如你在……中看到的那样
As you can see in the drawing,it is windy and rainy outside,and yet the flower in the greenhouse is at its best.
正如你在图画中所看到的那样,外面刮风下雨,而温室里的花却长势良好。
(2)as sb put(s) it...正如某人所说的那样……
As our coach often puts it,everything is possible if we stick to it.
正如我们教练常说的那样,只要我们坚持,一切皆有可能。
(3)as we all know.../as is known to all...众所周知……
(2021·浙江卷,写作)As we all know,this exhibition can enable you to have a better understanding of traditional Chinese painting.
众所周知,这次展览可以让你们更好地了解中国传统画。
(4)one of the+形容词最高级+名词复数+定语从句
最……中的一个
I suggest you apply for Tsinghua University,one of the best universities in China that have cultivated countless brilliant talents.
我建议你申请清华大学,这是培育出无数杰出人才的中国最好的大学之一。
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用定语从句补全句子
1.(2020·天津5月卷,书面表达)我定期参加专家老师的网课,通过这些网课,我不仅学到了基本知识,也可以跟老师互动。
I regularly attend online classes given by expert teachers,_________________
________________________________________________________ and discuss with my classmates.
2.(2020·新高考Ⅰ卷,写作)上星期天,我们学校举行了一场5千米的越野赛,比赛路线从学校大门出发,一直到南山。
Last Sunday,our school held a 5 km cross-country race,__________________
________________________________________________________.
through which I can
not only acquire basic knowledge,but also interact with the teachers
the route of which
started from our school gate to the South Mountain
3.(2020·浙江卷,写作)上个月,我们学校举行了一次英语节,我们班表演了一首你教我们的歌。
Last month,an English festival was held in our school,and our class performed a song__________________________.
4.(2019·天津卷,书面表达)众所周知,音乐可以影响我们的情感、思想和行为。
__________________________________,music can influence our emotions, thoughts and behaviors.
5.(2021·天津3月卷,书面表达)都江堰灌溉系统可以追溯到2000年以前,今天仍在灌溉中发挥着重要的作用。
Dujiangyan Irrigation System dates from over 2,000 years ago, ____________
______________________________________________.
which/that you taught us
As is known to all/As we all know
which is still
playing an important part in irrigation today
增分句型2　状语从句
状语从句主要包括时间、地点、原因、条件、目的、结果、让步、比较和方式九类从句。
1.时间状语从句
常用when(当……时),as(当……时;一边……一边……;随着……), while(在……期间),before(在……之前),after(在……之后),since(自从……以来),till/until(直到……),by the time (that)(到……时候),as soon as/the moment/the instant/immediately/directly/instantly/no sooner...than/hardly... when(一……就……),each/every time(每次,每当……),the first time(第一次),等等连词(短语)引导。
①(2020·全国Ⅰ卷,书面表达)When I failed the exam last month and was in low spirits,she gave me great encouragement.
上个月当我考试不及格而情绪低落时,她给了我很大的鼓励。
②(2019·北京卷,书面表达)While having dinner,I told my parents what we had done on the farm.
吃晚饭时,我告诉父母我们在农场所做的事。
③On New Year's Eve,we make dumplings as we talk.
在除夕夜,我们一边聊天,一边包饺子。
④We didn't realize it had been dark before we finished picking all the apples.
直到把所有苹果都摘完,我们才意识到天黑了。
⑤Every time I think about the sad experience,I feel very sorry for my mother.
每次想起那伤感的往事时,我就觉得非常对不起我的母亲。
⑥The first time I saw you,I realized I seemed to have met you somewhere before.
第一次看见你时,我就意识到好像以前在哪里见过你。
⑦(2019·北京卷,书面表达)The moment we arrived there,we started to help the farmers harvest watermelons,for which the farmers praised us.
我们一到那儿就开始帮助农民收获西瓜,农民因此表扬了我们。
2.地点状语从句
引导地点状语从句的连词有where(在……地方),wherever(无论何地),anywhere(在任何地方),everywhere(到处),等等。
(2019·全国Ⅱ卷,书面表达)Wherever our team are training,we will try our best and we all want to be the winner.
无论我们的团队在哪里训练,我们都会尽力而希望能成为赢家。
3.原因状语从句
引导原因状语从句的连词(短语)有because(因为),as(因为),since(既然),now that(既然),seeing (that)(由于),considering (that)(考虑到……),等等连词引导。如:
①(2021·全国甲卷,书面表达)Considering that you are interested in China,I want you to give me some advice.
考虑到你对中国感兴趣,我想让你给我提些建议。
②(2020·全国Ⅰ卷,书面表达)Mr Huang is born a good English teacher because he can always make his classes so interesting and attractive that we all enjoy having English classes.
黄老师天生是一位好的英语老师,因为他总是能使他的课变得有趣且有吸引力,我们都喜欢上英语课。
③Most of us know her as the woman who used to present the television news.
我们大多数人认识她,是因为她曾主持过电视新闻节目。
4.条件状语从句
引导条件状语从句的连词(短语)有if(假如),unless(除非),as/so long as(只要),on condition that(在……条件下),providing/provided/suppose/supposing(如果;假如),等等。
①(2020·全国Ⅲ卷,书面表达)If it is convenient,may I call you at your office next Tuesday to give you more details
如果方便的话,下星期二我可以去你的办公室给你更多的细节吗
②(2019·浙江卷,读后续写)In the afternoon,I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride,and he said yes,as long as my dad went with me.
下午,我问保罗叔叔我是否可以骑马,他说只要我父亲和我一起去,就可以。
③Supposing that there is no clean water,what shall we drink
假如没有干净的水,我们应该喝什么
④I'll lend this book to you on condition that you keep it clean.
我会把这本书借给你,前提是你让它保持干净。
5.目的状语从句
引导目的状语从句的连词(短语)有so that/in order that(以便),in case(以免),等等。
①(2021·全国甲卷,书面表达)You'd better tell me which Chinese culture you westerners prefer,so that my website can get more clicks.
为了我的网页能获得更多点击率,你最好告诉我你们西方人更喜欢哪些中国文化。
②(2019·全国Ⅱ卷,书面表达)Here I'd like to inform you of some detailed information so that you can make full preparations for it.
这里我想告诉你一些详细的信息,以便你能为它作好充分的准备。
③I learn science in order that I may work better for our country.
我学科学是为了能更好地为我们的祖国工作。
6.结果状语从句
引导结果状语从句的连词(短语)有so that(结果),so...that/such...that(如此……以至于),等等。
(2019·全国Ⅱ卷,书面表达)So significant is the game that it is required that all should present themselves punctually.
这场比赛意义如此重大,要求所有人都要准时到场。
7.让步状语从句
引导让步状语从句的连词(短语)有though/although(虽然),even if/though(即使),no matter what/who/how...(无论什么/无论谁/无论如何……),等等。
(2020·全国Ⅰ卷,书面表达)Whenever/No matter when I encounter difficulties,her heroic deeds will flash through my mind and motivate me to overcome them.
无论我什么时候遇到困难,她的英雄事迹都会在我脑海中闪现,激励我去克服它们。
8.比较状语从句
比较状语从句常用as...as...(和……一样……),not so/as...as...(不比……),more...than...(比……更……),等等连词(短语)引导。
The book wasn't anything like as good as her first one.
这本书远远不如她的处女作。
9.方式状语从句
方式状语从句常用as(如……,像……;依照……),as if/though(似乎,好像),等等连词(短语)引导。如:
①The house looked as if it was about to fall down.
房子看起来好像就要倒塌似的。
②In the following exams,we did as what we had promised.
在接下来的考试中,我们按照我们承诺的去做了。
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用状语从句补全句子
1.(2020·天津5月卷,书面表达)从我的立场来看,只要你充分利用,网课是很有价值的。
From where I stand,online learning is rewarding______________________.
2.(2020·全国Ⅰ卷,书面表达)不管他从事什么工作,都应该根据具体情况给予表扬。
________________________________________,praise should be given on a case-by-case basis.
as long as it is made full use of
Whatever/No matter what job he is up to
3.(2020·全国Ⅱ卷,书面表达)我们可以早点出发,这样我们将有更多的时间来采摘水果。
We can set out early ______________________________________.
4.(2021·天津卷,书面表达)感谢您的真诚祝福以及我在您家期间您给我的体贴照顾。
Thank you for your genuine congratulation as well as your considerate care ______________________________________.
5.(2019·全国Ⅰ卷,书面表达)最重要的是,作为一个中国人,我从小就接触过中国文化,尤其是中国画。
Most importantly,as a Chinese,I have been exposed to Chinese culture especially Chinese paintings______________________.
so that we will have more time to pick fruits
while I was living with you at your home
since I was a little child
增分句型3　名词性从句
名词性从句是高中阶段重要的语法项目之一,也是写作中常用的高级表达方式。它包括主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句和同位语从句。
1.名词性从句的连接词
从属连词引导的名词性从句
名词性从句的从属连词在从句中只起连接作用,不作句子成分,主要有that、whether、if。
①(2019·浙江卷,概要写作)One thing to remember is that it's the process not the end product that matters.
要记住的一件事是,重要的是过程而不是最终产品。
②Would you tell me if/whether I can get the job
你可以告诉我,我能否得到这个工作吗
2.连接代词引导的名词性从句
名词性从句的连接代词在从句中起连接作用,并在从句中充当主语、表语、宾语、同位语,主要包括what、which、who、whom、whose、whatever、whoever、whomever、whichever等。
(2019·天津卷,书面表达)As a teenager,I like dancing and have been taking dancing lessons in my spare time,so I want to learn what dance form is popular among students in England.
作为一名青少年,我喜欢跳舞而且业余时间一直参加舞蹈课,所以我想知道什么舞蹈形式受英国学生的欢迎。
3.连接副词引导的名词性从句
名词性从句的连接副词在从句中起连接作用,并在从句中充当状语,主要包括how、when、why、where、however、whenever、wherever等。
①(2021·全国甲卷,书面表达)That is also why this activity is presented on the English website.
这也是为什么这个活动会出现在英语网站上。
②(2020·全国Ⅱ卷,书面表达)Then the farmer showed us how we can pick apples.
然后那位农民向我们展示如何摘苹果。
4.名词性从句常用句型
(1)I wonder whether/if...我想知道是否……
(2019·全国Ⅲ卷,书面表达) I wonder whether you are available to come and share this joyful moment with me.
我想知道你是否有空来和我分享这一快乐的时刻。
(2)What impressed/surprised/shocked me most was that...最使我印象深刻/惊讶/震惊的是……
①(2021·新高考Ⅰ卷,写作)What I enjoy most is that its rich content can spark my burning passion for English.
我最喜欢的是它丰富的内容能激发我对英语的热情。
②What surprised us most was that the farmers praised us for what we had done.
最令我们感到惊喜的是那些农民们大为称赞我们所做的事。
(3)It is+important/necessary/strange that...重要的/必需的/奇怪的是……
It is necessary that we hold an objective attitude towards rankings.
我们对排名保持客观态度是很有必要的。
(4)That/This/It is why/because...那/这就是为什么/因为……
①I am particularly fond of basketball.It's because it has been giving me strength to confront the challenge in my life.
我特别喜欢篮球。这是因为它一直使我有能力面对生活中的挑战。
②That's why I think the trip along the Yangtze River will be a better choice.
那就是为什么我认为长江之行是一个更好的选择。
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用名词性从句补全句子
1.我们都不得不承认她的写作思路越来越清晰的这一事实。
We have to admit the fact_________________________________________.
2.(2020·浙江卷,写作)你要做的就是听从医生的建议,好好休息。
______________________ is follow the doctor's advice and have a good rest.
3.最使我印象深刻的是他们从不丧失信心。
_____________________________ they never lost heart.
that her writing thought is getting clearer and clearer
What you have to do
What impressed me most was that
4.高三学生务必确保晚上有足够的睡眠,以增强记忆力。
Senior three students should make sure ____________________________
______________________________.
5.(2019·天津卷,书面表达)我坚信这也给了我一些生活和学习的动力。
I firmly believe _______________________________________________.
they have enough sleep at
night to strengthen their memory
that it also has given me some motivation of life and study(共29张PPT)
写作专项提升
第一讲　词汇优美4角度
英 语
词汇1　名词(短语)
名词是表示人、事物、地点或抽象概念的名称,属于实词,名词分为专有名词和普通名词。名词用得好,能显示出深厚的语言功底,更能出众脱俗。
[示范1](2021·全国乙卷,书面表达)
(一般词)On the other hand,there also exist some advantages.
(高级词)On the other hand,there also exist some strong points.
另一方面,也有一些优点。
[示范2](2020·新高考Ⅰ卷,写作)
(一般词)The activity was highly spoken of,because not only did it provide a chance for us to exercise,but also made us more cohesive.
(高级词)The activity was highly spoken of,because not only did it provide an opportunity for us to exercise,but also made us more cohesive.
这项活动受到高度评价,因为它不仅为我们提供了锻炼的机会,而且使我们更有凝聚力。
高中阶段常见的名词及名词短语类写作高级词汇:
①方法way→approach/means
②困难difficulty→challenge/barrier
③问题problem→issue
④机会chance→opportunity
⑤选择choice→alternative
⑥责任 duty→responsibility
⑦影响effect→influence/impact
⑧后果result→consequence
⑨缺点shortcoming→drawback
⑩职业career→profession
优势 advantage→strength/strong point
老人old people→the elderly/the aged/the senior citizens
青少年young people→youngsters/youths/adolescents
一个表现好的孩子a child who behaves in a proper way→a well-behaved child
各种各样的图书 all kinds of books→varieties of books/a wide range of books
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用所给的词及其同义词补全句子
1.(2021·全国乙卷,书面表达)网络课程打破了时间和空间的限制。
______________________ break the limitation of time and space.(course)
→ ______________________ break the limitation of time and space.
2.传媒对于舆论有很大的影响。
The media______________________public opinion.(effect)
→The media________________________________public opinion.
The online courses
The online curriculums
has a powerful effect on
has a powerful impact/influence on
3.最重要的是,老人通常是最先品尝桌上食物的人,因为他们在中国备受尊重。
Most importantly, _________________________________ the food served on the table because they are well respected in China.(old people)
→Most importantly,____________________________________________ the food served on the table because they are well respected in China.
4.政府计划为年轻人创造更多的就业机会。
The government plans to________________________________________. (young people)
→The government plans to_______________________________________.
old people are usually the first to taste
the old senior citizens are usually the first to taste
create more jobs for young people
create more jobs for youths/adolescents
词汇2　动词(短语)
动词分为及物动词和不及物动词两类,在句子中作谓语和非谓语。及物动词后面接宾语;不及物动词后面不能接宾语。动词或者动词短语恰当灵活的运用,能生动形象地表达主语的动作或者状态,动词用得恰当高级,能为文章增色添彩。
[示范1](2021·全国甲卷,书面表达)
(一般词)Knowing you are interested in China,I believe you can help me solve these puzzles.
(高级词)Knowing you take a great interest in China,I'm firmly convinced that/I firmly hold the belief that you can lend a helping hand to solve these puzzles.
知道你对中国很感兴趣,我相信你能帮我解决这些难题。
[示范2](2020·全国Ⅲ卷,书面表达)
(一般词)We want to combine your culture with ours by adapting the classic novel.
(高级词)We'd like to combine your culture with ours by adapting the classic novel.
我们想通过改编经典小说把你们的文化与我们的文化联系在一起。
高中阶段常见的动词及动词短语类写作高级词汇:
①知道know→be aware of
②感谢thank→appreciate
③拥有have→possess
④看见see→catch sight of
⑤记住remember→keep in mind
⑥保持 keep→maintain
⑦提高improve→promote
⑧完成finish→accomplish
⑨应该should→be supposed to
⑩表达 express→convey
替代replace→substitute
激励 encourage→motivate
容忍bear→put up with
未能 can't do→fail to do
一定be sure to→be bound to
照看look after→attend to
表明show→indicate/demonstrate
站起来stand up→get to one's feet
发生happen→occur/come about
道歉apologize→make an apology
引起cause→contribute to/account for/result in/give rise to
决定decide→determine/make up one's mind
考虑consider→take...into account/consideration
理解understand→make sense of/figure out
使用use→employ/make use of/take advantage of
想起think of→occur to/come up with
告诉某人tell sb that→inform sb of/that
疲倦 be tired→be exhausted/be worn out
闻名be famous for→have a reputation for
感到舒服 feel comfortable→feel at ease
帮助 help→lend a helping hand to/do...a favor
参加 take part in→get involved in/participate in
成功做某事succeed in doing sth→make it
为……做准备prepare for→make preparations for/be prepared for
含有大量的 have a lot of→be abundant in/be rich in
想做某事want to do sth→seek/intend/desire to do sth
尽力做某事try one's best to do sth→spare no effort to do sth
对……感兴趣be interested in→appeal to sb/take a great interest in
擅长 be good at→have a good command of/have a good knowledge of
忙于be busy in (with)→be occupied in (with)/be buried in/be engaged in
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用所给的词的高级表达补全句子
1.更糟的是,食用过多的糖可能会引起健康问题。
What's worse,eating too much sugar________________________________. (cause)
2.她和丈夫一起买了一小块地,开始自己种植食物。
She_______________________________with her husband and began growing their own foods.(buy)
3.所有的游客都被要求不能在公园内乱扔垃圾。
All the visitors___________________________________in the park.(ask)
can lead to/give rise to health problems
purchased a small piece of land
were requested not to throw litter about
4.我们应不遗余力地美化我们的环境,因为它是全人类共有的。
____________________________________________________,because it is shared by all the human beings.(try one's best)
5.更重要的是,我们可以提出自己的想法,通过讨论进一步学习。
What's more,we______________________________and learn more through discussion.(think of)
We should spare no effort to beautify our environment
can come up with our own ideas
词汇3　形容词(短语)
形容词是描述人或事物的特征、性质、属性及状态的一种开放性词类。形容词或者形容词短语的恰当使用会渲染文章的色彩,为文章增加亮点。
[示范1](2020·全国Ⅱ卷,书面表达)
(一般词)This fruit-picking experience is helpful to us and teaches us the importance of working.
(高级词)This fruit-picking experience is beneficial to us and teaches us the importance of working.
这次采摘水果的经历对我们很有益,也教会了我们劳动的重要性。
[示范2](一般词)He is an excellent scientist,who has made a great contribution to our country.
(高级词)He is an outstanding scientist,who has made a great contribution to our country.
他是一位杰出的科学家,为我们国家做出了巨大贡献。
形容词及形容词短语类写作高级词汇:
①有益的 good→beneficial
②高兴的 glad→delighted
③激动的 excited→thrilled
④富裕的 rich→wealthy
⑤幸运的 lucky→fortunate
⑥常见的 common→universal
⑦充足的 enough→adequate
⑧可用的 usable→available
⑨困难的 difficult→challenging
⑩坚强的 strong→tough
丰富的 rich→abundant
古老的 old→ancient
唯一的 only→unique
巨大的 large→enormous
合适的 proper→appropriate
勤奋的 hard-working→diligent
有空的 free→available
贫穷的 poor→needy/poverty-stricken
明显的 obvious→apparent/evident
小心谨慎的 careful→cautious
有意义的 meaningful→rewarding
有益处的 be useful→be of benefit
许多的 many→a large quantity of
有吸引力的 attractive→appealing
不可能的 impossible→out of the question
优秀的 excellent→outstanding/extraordinary
令人担忧的 worrying→of great concern
令人惊奇的 surprising→amazing/astonishing/shocking
有趣的 interesting→absorbing/striking/appealing
重要的 important→vital/significant/fundamental
[对点过关训练]
用所给的词的高级表达补全句子
1.他的收入满足不了他的家庭需求。
His income________________________________________.(enough)
2.学好英语对你未来就业至关重要。
Learning English well_______________________________employment. (important)
3.清晨早起对这位病人的健康非常有益。
Getting up early in the morning ______________________to this patient's health.(useful)
is not adequate to his family's needs
is significant/vital to your future
is of great benefit
4.她是一位辛勤的老师,她工作非常勤奋。
She is __________________and she__________________.(hard-working)
5.每天下了班,我都筋疲力尽。
I always ______________________when I am off work every day.(tired)
a diligent teacher
is diligent in her work
feel exhausted
词汇4　副词及其他词
副词或者副词短语在句子中主要修饰动词或者形容词,往往作状语,写作时恰当得体地使用高中学过的、别人可能想不到的高级用法的副词或者副词短语,会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。
[示范1](2020·浙江1月卷,写作)
(一般词)In particular,you are qualified enough and experienced in presenting your ideas,because of your abundant skills.
(高级词)In particular,you are qualified enough and experienced in presenting your ideas,on account of/due to/owing to/thanks to your abundant skills.
尤其是,你有足够的资格和经验来表达你的想法,因为你有丰富的技能。
[示范2](2020·全国Ⅰ卷,书面表达)
(一般词)We sometimes meet for a drink after work.
(高级词)We occasionally meet for a drink after work.
我们下班后偶尔相聚小酌。
常见的副词及其他词类写作高级词汇:
①经常often→frequently
②很少seldom→rarely
③只有only→merely
④然后then→subsequently/afterwards
⑤仔细地carefully→attentively
⑥适当地properly→appropriately
⑦大约about→approximately/roughly
⑧立刻immediately→shortly/right now/right away
⑨当然certainly→definitely/undoubtedly
⑩但是however→nevertheless
突然suddenly→all of a sudden
立即immediately→in a flash
关于about→concerning/involving/regarding
因此so→therefore/consequently/as a result
起先firstly→originally/initially
非常very→extremely/highly
最终finally→eventually/at last
第一,首先first→to begin/start with
第二,其次second→in addition/what's more
和,也and→as well as
大多数most→the majority
否则or→otherwise/or else
事实上in fact→as a matter of fact
完全地 completely→absolutely/entirely/fully
有时sometimes→occasionally/once in a while/at times/now and then
即将到来coming soon→drawing near/round the corner
几天前a few days ago→the other day
故意on purpose→deliberately/by design
如果if→suppose/supposing/on condition that
因为because of→on account of/due to/owing to/thanks to
总之in a word→to sum up/in conclusion/in summary
越来越多more and more→increasingly/an increasing number of
提前ahead of time→ahead of schedule/in advance
例如for example→to name only a few
在某种程度上in a way→to some extent/to some degree/in a sense
[对点过关训练]
用所给的词的高级表达补全句子
1.人生在世总是有苦有甜。
You will always have the bad______________________in the world.(and)
2.第二,你们说如果我提前付费的话就可以给我打折。
Secondly,you say that there is a discount___________________________. (if)
3.下雨了,足球赛因此而延期了。
It rained and___________________________________________.(so)
4.抓住这个机会,否则你会后悔的。
Seize the chance, ________________________________________.(or)
as well as the good
supposing (that) I pay in advance
therefore the football match was postponed
otherwise/or else you'll regret it(共46张PPT)
写作专项提升
第二讲　句子优美7结构
英 语
句式1　省略结构
英语中为了避免重复,句子中的某些部分可以省略,从而让文章显得紧凑自然。省略句在写作中的巧妙运用是书面表达得高分的助力,应当得到重视。
写作中常见的省略情况:
在以while、when、once引导的时间状语从句,以if、unless引导的条件状语从句以及以although、though引导的让步状语从句中,如果从句中的主语与主句中的主语一致或从句的主语为it,且从句中含有be动词时,可以省略状语从句中的“主语+be动词”部分。
①(2021·全国甲卷,书面表达)If possible(it is),you can reply to me as soon as possible.
如果可能的话,你可以尽快回复我。
②(2020·全国Ⅰ卷,书面表达)When (he is) faced with the difficulties,he always sticks to his post and works hard to overcome them.
当面对困难时,他总是坚守岗位,并且努力工作来克服困难。
③When (they are) learning English,some students do not attach importance to spelling.
一些学生在英语学习时,并不重视拼写。
[对点过关训练]
用省略结构补全句子
1.(2020·浙江1月卷,写作)如果有时间,请通过电子邮件报名。
______________________,please sign up for it by email.
2.虽然工作了一天很累,妈妈回到家还是精心地为我们准备晚餐。
____________________________________________, Mother still prepares for our dinner carefully.
3.那天放学走回家时,我注意到三个男孩在和丹尼说话。
___________________________________________, I noticed three boys talking with Danny.
If available
Although tired from working a whole day
While walking home from school that day
4.一旦见过,就决不会忘记。
______________________,it can never be forgotten.
5.如果是这样的话,你可以来和我的家人一起庆祝。
______________________,you can come to celebrate it with my family.
Once seen
If so
句式2　强调结构
书面表达中,强调句型的灵活运用不仅有助于增强表达的效果,突出要强调的重点,更能彰显出考生对英语表达的把握能力。
1.强调句的基本结构为“It is/was+被强调部分+that/who+句子其他部分.”。这个句型可以强调除了谓语之外的其他任何部分。
①(2021·全国甲卷,书面表达)It is because this activity will be presented on the English website that I want you to give me some advice.
正是因为这次活动要在英文网站上进行,所以我想让你给我提些建议。
②(2020·全国Ⅰ卷,书面表达)It was Mr.Zhang who made me perceive the importance of learning English well.
正是张先生让我意识到学好英语的重要性。
2.强调句的一般疑问句形式:Is/Was it+被强调部分+that/who+句子其他部分
Was it in the supermarket that Tom lost his wallet
汤姆是在超市里丢的钱包吗
3.强调句的特殊疑问句形式:疑问词+is/was it+that+句子其他部分
When was it that you first went to the Great Wall
你第一次去长城究竟是什么时候
4.It is/was not until...that...“直到……才……”。
①It was not until 8 o'clock that he realized he had spent the whole day on the Internet.
直到八点钟,他才意识到自己一整天都在上网。
②People say,“Guilin's scenery is peerless in the world.”It was not until I visited the place that I found it really worthy of the reputation.
人们都说:“桂林山水甲天下。”直到去了桂林,我才发现它果然名不虚传。
5.强调谓语动词时,用助动词do/does/did,且只能对肯定句的一般现在时和一般过去时进行强调。
①(2021·全国甲卷,书面表达)I do believe you can help me solve these puzzles.
我真的相信你能帮我解决这些难题。
②(2020·全国Ⅱ卷,书面表达)We did hope there would be more meaningful activities in the coming future.
我们确实希望今后会有更多有意义的活动。
[对点过关训练]
用强调结构补全句子
1.(2020·新高考Ⅰ卷,写作)正是凭着真诚和诚信,我们才创造了一种和谐的气氛。
__________________________________________ we created a harmonious atmosphere.
2.是茶馆见证了我们所有人真正愉快的时光。
_______________________________ witnessed a really enjoyable time for all of us.
It was with sincerity and faithfulness that
It was the tea house that
3.(2019·浙江卷,写作)我真的希望你有一个光明的未来,我们的友谊将永远持续下去!
________________________________________ and that our friendship will last forever!
4.(2019·天津卷,书面表达)音乐形式的多样性和音乐的制作过程最吸引我。
_________________________________________________ will appeal to me most.
5.据我所知,赢得这次竞赛的人可能是你。
As far as I am concerned,________________________________________.
I do hope that you will have a bright future
It is the varieties of music forms and music production that
it is you who/that are likely to win the contest
6.他的确是三思后才开始实施这个计划的。
__________________________________ before he carried out this plan.
7.正是由于这样,环境保护才变得越来越重要。
__________________________________ the environmental protection is becoming more and more significant.
He did give it a second thought
It was because of this that
句式3　倒装结构
倒装结构分为部分倒装结构和全部倒装结构。在英语写作中,我们可以通过倒装结构强调我们要传达的信息,给文章增色。
1.当not、none、never、little、seldom、neither、nor、hardly等否定词,以及表示否定意义的介词短语(如at no time,by no means等)置于句首时,句子用部分倒装。当no sooner...than...、hardly...when...等句式中的no sooner、hardly位于句首时,主句要用部分倒装。
①In my opinion,at no time should we ignore the importance of unity.
在我看来,我们任何时候都不能忽视团结的重要性。
②Much to our disappointment,hardly had we got to the farm when it began to rain.
让我们非常失望的是,我们一到农场,天就开始下起雨来。
③No sooner had I got off the bus than I realized my wallet was stolen.
我刚下公共汽车就意识到我的钱包被偷了。
2.当“only+状语”置于句首时,主句要用部分倒装。
①Only when we think more for others can we create a harmonious environment.
只有当我们更多地为别人考虑时,我们才能创造一个和谐的环境。
②(2020·天津卷,书面表达)Only when the two aspects are connected can a man show his talent to great advantage.
只有把这两个方面联系起来,一个人才能最好地展示他的才能。
3.当not only...but also...结构中的not only位于句首时,not only后面的句子要用部分倒装。
Not only will the online courses break the limitation of time and space but they will also provide us with great convenience to study.
网络课程不仅打破了时间和空间的限制,还为我们的学习提供了极大的便利。
4.as/though引导的让步状语从句可以用部分倒装结构,即将从句中的表语或状语置于句首。
①Tired out as/though I was,I never felt so happy.
尽管我很累,但我从来没有这样开心过。
②(2019·北京卷,书面表达)Busy as/though we are,we benefit a lot mentally and physically.
尽管我们很忙,但我们在精神上和身体上都受益匪浅。
5.在so/such...that...结构中,当so/such连同它所修饰的成分共同位于句首时,主句要用部分倒装。
①So excited was I that I couldn't wait to try my hand at riding my new bicycle.
我是那样的兴奋,我迫不及待地要试骑我的新自行车。
②So hard does he work that he has no time to spare for travelling.
他那么努力工作,抽不出时间去旅行。
6.在含有had、should、were等的虚拟条件状语从句中,若省略连词if,则可将它们移到主语前构成部分倒装。
①Were I you,I wouldn't do that.
如果我是你,我就不会那样做。
②(2020·全国Ⅰ卷,书面表达)Had it not been for his guidance and encouragement,I couldn't have won first prize in the English Contest.
如果没有他的指导和鼓励,我不可能在英语竞赛中获得第一名。
③(2019·全国Ⅰ卷,书面表达)Should you consider my application,I would be more than grateful.
如果你能考虑我的申请,我将不胜感激。
7.当here、there、now、then、out、in、up、down、around、on the wall、in the room、in front of、at the foot of等表示地点、时间或方位的副词或介词短语置于句首,且主语是名词而不是代词时,句子用全部倒装。
①Next came the moment when I asked them to have a try themselves.
下一步到了我要求他们亲自尝试的时候了。
②Here are my tips for you.
这是我给你的建议。
③Then came the moment—the time to share the day's new learning.
然后到了分享一天新知识的时刻。
④At the foot of the mountain stands an old temple.
一座古老的寺庙屹立在山脚下。
[对点过关训练]
用倒装结构补全句子
1.(2020·江苏卷,书面表达)一方面,过去几十年的总体发展如此惊人,让他们渴望熟悉中国正在发生的情况。
For one thing,_______________________________________________ over the past decades that they feel eager to familiarize themselves with what is going on in China.
2.丽江的风景如此的美丽,我想再旅游一次。
_____________________________________________ I want to visit it a second time.
3.只有通过努力工作,我们才能在做任何事情时都获得成功。
_____________________________________ succeed in doing anything.
so striking has been the overall development
So beautiful is the scenery of the Li River that
Only by working hard can we
4.(2019·全国Ⅰ卷,书面表达)如果我被选中,我会致力于成为一名合格的志愿者。
______________________,I would devote myself to being a qualified volunteer.
5.无论如何,这种方法都不会令人满意的。
___________________________________ be satisfactory.
6.虽然他是个孩子,但他能做到很多大部分成年人都做不到的事。
____________________________,he can do many things most adults can't.
7.直到失去了健康,我们才明白它的价值。
_____________________________________________ its value.
Were I chosen
By no means will this method
Child as/though he is
Not until we lose our health do we realize
句式4　with/without复合结构
写作中,使用with/without复合结构会让句子结构紧凑,言简意赅。此结构由“with/without+宾语+宾语补足语” 构成,可在句中作定语和状语,表示原因、时间、条件、伴随、方式等。其结构如下:
(1)with/without+名词/代词+形容词
(2)with/without+名词/代词+副词
(3)with/without+名词/代词+介词短语
(4)with/without+名词/代词+动词不定式
(5)with/without+名词/代词+分词
①She walked out in the rain,with her clothes all wet.(with+名词+形容词)
她冒雨出去,衣服都湿透了。
②With the meal over,we all went home.(with+名词+副词)
吃完饭后,我们都回家了。
③The girl raised her head with tears in her eyes.(with+名词+介词短语)
那个女孩眼泪汪汪地抬起头。
④He could not finish the work without me to help him.(without+代词+动词不定式)
没有我帮助他,他不可能完成这项工作。
⑤(2021·新高考Ⅰ卷,写作)With the 10th anniversary ceremony drawing near,I am writing to extend my heartfelt congratulations.(with+名词+现在分词)
随着十周年庆典的临近,我写信(向你)表示衷心的祝贺。
⑥The house caught a fire last night,with nothing left in it.(with+名词+过去分词)
那栋房子昨晚发生了火灾,里面什么东西都没有了。
[对点过关训练]
用with/without复合结构补全句子
1.(2020·新高考Ⅰ卷,写作)所有的跑步者都尽力完成任务,一路上他们的同学给了他们必要的帮助和鼓励。
All runners tried their best to finish the task,___________________________
_____________________________________________________.
2.国庆节即将来临,我们正在忙着为各种庆典做准备。
______________________________________________________________, we are busy making preparations for varieties of celebrations.
3.(2019·全国Ⅱ卷,书面表达)因为我们的队伍每天放学后都在训练,所以我们一定能赢得比赛。
______________________________________,we are sure to win the game.
with their classmates along
the way giving them necessary help as well as encouragement
With our National Day just around the corner/approaching/drawing near
With our team training every day after school
4.汤姆急急忙忙地离开了他的办公室,一句话也没说。
Tom left his office in a hurry,____________________________________.
5.随着夏天的临近,天气越来越热。
______________________________,it is becoming hotter and hotter.
without saying a single word
With summer drawing near
句式5　非谓语动词
写作中,如果适当地使用非谓语动词对简单句和复合句进行转换,不但可以丰富句式,还能提升文章的档次。下面是非谓语动词的常见句型:
1.(使役动词)let/make/have/get/keep/leave...sb/sth do/doing/done...使/让……某人/某事做/正在做/被做……
①If you have further questions,please feel free to let me know.
如果你还有问题,请尽管让我了解。
②You shouldn't have gone home,leaving your deskmate cleaning the classroom alone.
你不该回家,而留下你的同桌独自打扫教室。
③We can't leave such an important matter unfinished.
我们不能让这样一件重要的事半途而废。
2.(感官动词)see/notice/watch/hear...sb/sth do/doing/done...看到/注意到/观察到/听到……某人/某物做/正在做/被做……
①Hearing them singing the song,I couldn't help thinking of my pleasant childhood.
听到他们唱这首歌,我情不自禁地想起了我愉快的童年。
②Seeing my mother preparing supper,I hurried to help her.
看到妈妈正在准备晚饭,我赶紧去帮她。
3.when/while/once/unless/although...doing/done...当/有一次/除非/虽然……正在做/被做……
①(2020·全国Ⅱ卷,书面表达)We couldn't help eating grapes while picking them.
我们在摘葡萄的时候忍不住吃了。
②When offered help,people often say “Thank you” or “It's kind of you”.
当被提供帮助的时候,人们常说“谢谢你”或“你真好”。
4.having done...已经做了……
①Having served as a volunteer in a summer camping,I feel I'm fit for the position.
我曾在一次夏令营中做过志愿者,所以我觉得自己适合这个职位。
②Having finished his English composition,he started to read China Daily of that day.
在完成了他的英语作文以后,他开始阅读当天的《中国日报》。
5.疑问词+to do...
①(2021·浙江卷,写作)I'm writing to tell you when and where to have our exhibition of students' traditional Chinese paintings.
我写信是为了告诉你什么时间以及在哪里参观我们的学生国画展。
②In addition,we should learn how to get along well with others.
另外,我们应该学会如何与他人和睦相处。
6.only to do/to be done 结果却……
Last Friday afternoon,I hurried to the airport to see you off,only to find your plane was taking off.
上周五下午,我赶往机场给你送行,结果却发现你乘坐的飞机正在起飞。
7.be easy/difficult to do...做……容易/困难
With so many variables,it is difficult to calculate the cost.
有这么多的可变因素,难以计算出成本。
8.be said/reported/considered to do...据说/报道/认为做……
(2020·天津卷,书面表达)Their class is said to have been chosen to take part in the coming ceremony.
据说,他们班已经被选中参加即将到来的典礼。
9.judging by/from...根据……判断
(2020·全国Ⅰ卷,书面表达)Judging from what he said,we could tell that he was a knowledgeable,humorous and responsible man.
根据他说的话我们可以判断,他是一个博学、幽默且负责任的人。
pared with/to...与……比较
Compared with modern communication,writing letters has more advantages.
与现代通信相比,写信有更多的优点。
11.prefer to do...rather than do.../would rather do...than do.../would do...rather than do...宁愿做……,而不愿做……
Many people prefer to telephone rather than write letters.
许多人宁愿打电话,而不愿写信。
12.remain to be done 有待于被做……
(2020·新高考Ⅰ卷,写作)It remains to be seen whether this plan will benefit the students or not.
这个计划是否会对学生有好处,还需要拭目以待。
[对点过关训练]
用非谓语动词补全句子
1.(2020·新高考Ⅰ卷,写作)真诚地希望你能代表我们队参加比赛。
You are sincerely expected to take part in the game ____________________.
2.吃饭时,你需要避免在咀嚼食物时发出声响。
___________________________,you need to avoid making noises while chewing food.
3.(2019·浙江卷,写作)得知你即将动身前往美国,我急切地写信对你的帮助表示衷心的感谢。
________________________________________________,I'm eagerly writing the letter to express my heartfelt gratitude for your help.
representing our team
When enjoying the meal
Learning that you're leaving for the United States soon
4.经历了一次又一次的失败后,她终于成功了。
_________________________________________, she finally made it.
5.如今,一些青少年宁愿在网上与陌生人闲谈,也不愿与父母面对面谈话。
Nowadays some teenagers________________________________________ talk with their parents face to face.
Having experienced failures one after another
prefer to chat with strangers online rather than
句式6　被动语态
当强调动作的承受者、不必说出动作的执行者或执行者不明确时,就需要用被动语态。被动语态的合理运用能给文章增色添彩,提升写作档次。下面是常用的被动语态:
1.be+过去分词
①(2021·浙江卷,写作)An exhibition of students' traditional Chinese paintings is being held by our school.
我们学校正在举办学生国画展。
②(2019·全国Ⅲ卷,书面表达)As scheduled,it will be held on the playground from 5 pm to 8 pm next Sunday.
按计划,它将于下周日下午5点至晚上8点在操场上举行。
2.get+过去分词
①The traffic was so thick that a whole row of cars got blocked in.
交通十分拥挤,一大排汽车都被堵住了。
②I'm feeling very sorry to tell you that I have to change our plan to visit Yunnan in July,because my left foot got injured.
我很抱歉地告诉你,我不得不改变我们7月份去云南旅游的计划,因为我的左脚受伤了。
3.情态动词+be+过去分词
(2021·全国乙卷,书面表达)Apart from that,the outcome of study can't be guaranteed.
除此之外,学习的结果不能得到保证。
[对点过关训练]
Ⅰ.用被动语态补全句子
1.据说,原定于这个月召开的会议将推迟到下个月召开。
It is said that the meeting,which______________________this month,will be put off till next month.
2.(2021·天津3月卷,书面表达)四川省位于中国的西南部。
Sichuan Province____________________________________________.
3.王教授将于本周三晚上在我校学术报告厅举行关于中国文化的讲座。
______________________________________________________________ at the academic hall of our school on the evening this Wednesday.
is scheduled to be held
is located in the southwest of China
The lecture about Chinese culture will be given by Professor Wang
4.这本书直到作者逝世后才出版。
The book________________________________the author died.
5.每年,那所学校都有几百名学生被重点大学录取。
Hundreds of students in that school______________________the key universities every year.
was not published until
are admitted into
Ⅱ.利用被动语态,结合汉语提示补全短文
A very terrible rainstorm hit our city last night and caused huge mudslide around that village.In this disaster,1.____________________________(许多房屋被毁) and 2.__________________________________(一幢办公楼被毁坏了).To make matters worse,it has already caused one death,leaving three persons missing.
When the trouble occurred,help came from all quarters.Soldiers 3.___________________(被派去帮忙).And a lot of villagers tried their best to help search for the missing persons.4.____________________(据说) the direct economic loss caused by this heavy rainstorm adds up to more than ten million yuan.Through everyone's efforts,everything went on smoothly.
many houses were destroyed
an office building was ruined
were sent to help out
It is said that
句式7　虚拟语气
写作中,虚拟语气的使用会让读者感觉表达自然,能起到强调的作用,为文章增加感情和色彩,提升写作档次。下面是常用的虚拟语气形式:
1.if虚拟条件句
(2019·全国Ⅰ卷,书面表达)I would be much obliged if you could reply to me at your earliest convenience.
如果您能在方便时尽早答复我,我将不胜感激。
2.隐含条件虚拟句
(2020·全国Ⅰ卷,书面表达)Without his aid,I wouldn't have boosted my integrated skills in English.
没有他的帮助,我不可能提高我的英语综合技能。
3.在wish宾语从句中使用虚拟语气
①(2021·新高考Ⅰ卷,写作)I have thousands of blessings and wish Youth could achieve greater success and gain more popularity.
我有千万个祝福,愿《青年》取得更大的成功,获得更多的人气。
②(2020·浙江卷,写作)We all miss you very much and wish you a quick and complete recovery.
我们都非常想念你,祝你早日完全康复。
4.在would rather后面的从句中使用虚拟语气
I would rather that I hadn't given up the opportunity.
我宁可不曾放弃这次机会。
5.在it's time that后面的从句中常用过去式
With your skills improving,it's time that you had competitions with your teammates,which excites you most.
随着你技能的提高,是时候与你的队友们进行比赛了,这最让你兴奋。
6.在有表示“建议、命令、要求、请求”等相关的词的名词性从句中用(should) do结构
Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture,I suggest you apply for Peking University.
了解到你对中国文化的浓厚兴趣,我建议你申请北京大学。
[对点过关训练]
用虚拟语气补全句子
1.如果不是我英语老师的鼓励,我那时就不可能取得那么大的进步。
___________________________________________________,I couldn't have made such great progress then.
2.如果我当时没有作这么仓促的决定,我或许就不会遭受这么大的损失了。
_______________________________________________________________, maybe I would not have suffered such great loss.
3.(2019·全国Ⅰ卷,书面表达)我衷心希望您能给我这个宝贵的机会。
I sincerely____________________________________________________.
Without/But for my English teacher's encouragement
If I had not made such a hasty decision/Had I not made such a hasty decision
wish that you could offer me this precious opportunity
4.她要求下次开会前不要向任何人透露她的决定。
She____________________________________________of her decision until the next meeting.
5.我希望我母亲不再干预,让我自己作决定。
I____________________________________________and let me make my own decisions.
requested that no one (should) be told
wish my mother would stop interfering(共16张PPT)
写作专项提升
第三讲　文章优美2维度
英 语
一、引人入胜的开头
应用文的词数要求是100词左右,因此要用最少的词数表达最丰富的内容。开头要开门见山,一句话让读者感兴趣,知道你要写什么。下面介绍几种开头的常见写法。
1.书信的开头:问候,说明写信的目的
①(2020·全国Ⅲ卷,书面表达)How is everything going I am writing in sincerity to ask you to give us some guidance on a play we adapted according to the textbook.
一切都好吗 我写这封信是真诚地想请你就我们根据教科书改编的一个剧本给予一些指导。
②I'm writing to apply for/invite/make an apology/offer some suggestions/express my thanks/inform you that...
我写信想申请/邀请/道歉/提些建议/表达我的谢意/通知你……
2.新闻报道的开头:一句话表达时间、地点、人物、事件及影响
(2020·新高考Ⅰ卷,写作)Last Sunday our school held an extraordinary cross-country running race,which nearly drew the attention of every student and teacher of our school.
上星期天,我们学校举行了一场非同寻常的越野赛跑,这几乎引起了全校师生的注意。
3.通知的开头:开门见山说明通知的内容
Our foreign teacher Eric will give a lecture on western culture and history at the school hall next Sunday.
我们的外籍教师埃里克将于下周日在学校大厅举行一场关于西方文化与历史的讲座。
4.演讲稿的开头:一句话说明演讲的心情和具体内容
It's a great honour for me to give a speech on traditional Chinese culture here.
我非常荣幸能在这里发表关于中国传统文化的演讲。
5.说明文的开头
(1)开门见山点明所要介绍的事物
The mouse is a quite effective device used by people to communicate with a computer.
鼠标是人们用电脑交流时使用的一种非常有效的设备。
(2)运用数据引出所要论证的主题
A recent study shows that more than 40% of the students don't have breakfast.
最近的一项研究表明,有超过40%的学生不吃早饭。
6.议论文的开头
(1)提出一个观点作为文章要论述的主题
(2019·江苏卷,书面表达)Li Jiang and Su Hua are discussing what to wear when receiving the British students next month.Li recommends the traditional Chinese dress while Su prefers the school uniform.
李江和苏华正在讨论下个月接待英国学生时穿什么。李推荐中国传统服装,而苏更喜欢校服。
(2)引用名人名言或习语谚语
When it comes to how to succeed,many people may think of the proverb “Where there is a will,there is a way.”
当谈及如何成功时,很多人或许会想起谚语“有志者,事竟成。”
(3)通过一个实例或现象引出话题
Three years ago,I failed an important exam in my life and became a student in an ordinary school.
三年前,我在人生的一次重要考试中失利,成为一所普通学校的一名学生。
二、回味无穷的结尾
短文的结尾起着总结全文、升华主题的作用,主要有以下写法。
1.书信的结尾:表达感谢和期盼
①Thanks again and wish you a pleasant journey home.
再次感谢,祝你回家旅途愉快。
②Looking forward to your early reply.
期待你早日回复。
2.新闻报道的结尾:收获和意义
①This activity provides an opportunity for us to get close to nature.
这次活动为我们提供了一次亲近大自然的机会。
②The competition aroused students' interest in Chinese ancient culture.
这次比赛激发了学生们对中国古代文化的兴趣。
3.通知的结尾:注意事项与期盼
Have an active part in it,and wish you good luck!
快来积极参加吧,祝你们好运!
4.演讲稿的结尾:感谢倾听
That's all I want to say about this point.Thanks for your listening.
关于这一点我就讲这么多。感谢您的倾听。
5.说明文的结尾:再次强调重点,回扣主题
In a word,changes in our life in the past twenty years have brought us convenience and comfort.
总之,在过去的20年里我们生活中的变化给我们带来了便利和舒适。
6.议论文的结尾
(1)提出建议或者应对措施
I think all of us should mind our behaviour in public places.Only in this way can we live in more comfortable and beautiful surroundings.
我认为,我们都应该注意自己在公共场合的行为。只有这样,我们才能生活在更加舒服和美丽的环境中。
(2)用名言总结全文
If you “do as the Romans do when in Rome”,you will enjoy more your stay here.
如果你“入乡随俗”,你就会更好地享受这里的生活。
(3)对开头进行照应
Different ways of traveling can make people happy,but I like traveling by train most.
不同的旅行方式都能让人愉快,但是我最喜欢乘火车旅行。
[对点过关训练]
Ⅰ.根据要求,为下面的话题写作设计一个开头段和结尾段
一、外教史密斯先生国庆节不打算回美国了。请你给他写一封100词左右的邀请信,邀请他和你一起过节,并告诉他你的安排,要点如下:
1.邀请他去你家做客,包饺子,品尝各种中国传统美食;
2.带他到公园赏花;
3.陪他去博物馆看看,了解一下我们的历史。
开头:开门见山
As the National Day is around the corner,I'm writing to invite you to stay with me for the holiday.
I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation.Looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
结尾:表达期盼
二、(2021·山东聊城二模)假设你校正在组织英语作文比赛,要求讲述你人生中的一次宝贵经历。请写一篇标题为“The experience I value”的短文参赛,内容包括:
1.简述经历;
2.经历的意义与启发。
开头:引出话题
结尾:阐明意义
There are many valuable experiences in our life.As for me,cooking for my mother on her birthday is an unforgettable incident.
I guess love is indeed a magical ingredient.Actually,we ended up laughing and ate them all.
Ⅱ.写作练习
(2021·天津3月卷)假设你是晨光中学的李津。我市为外国友人提供生活信息的某英文网站新增了《最美中华》栏目,请你给该栏目投稿,介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。内容包括:
(1)该地方的基本情况(如名称、地理位置等);
(2)该地方的特色(如文化、景点等);
(3)你对该地方的印象以及你在该地旅行时的感受。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
A Beautiful Place in China
March 19,2021
By Li Jin
_______________________________________________________________
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A Beautiful Place in China
March 19,2021
By Li Jin
Having visited Beijing,the capital city of our country,many times,I think it lives up to the reputation as one of the most beautiful cities in China.Now let me introduce this extraordinary city in detail.
As we all know,Beijing is located in the northern part of China.Possessing so many places of interest,it attracts thousands of tourists from all over the world at any time.Among them,the one impresses me most is the Great Wall, which is not only a magnificent place of Beijing,but also the precious treasure of the world.What's more,watching Beijing Opera is a good opportunity to get to know the traditional culture of China directly,and we can also eat some well-known food in Beijing.
Pleased by the trip to Beijing,I think Beijing is one of the most beautiful cities in China.I will never forget this experience.(共27张PPT)
写作专项提升
变魔句—— 提升描写逼真情境能力
英 语
情境1　感受与心情
【魔句1】 听到他竞赛获得一等奖的消息,我们既高兴又激动。
On hearing the news that he finished in first place in the competition,we all felt delighted and excited.
The news that he won first prize in the competition made us delighted and excited.
[语境]听说你要来参加我们为期一周的交流项目,并要发表关于西方艺术的演讲,我很高兴和你分享我的观点。
(1)On hearing that you are coming to join our one-week exchange program and deliver a speech about Western Art,I'm very glad to share my opinions with you.
(2)The news that you are coming to join our one-week exchange program and deliver a speech about Western Art makes me very glad to share my opinions with you.
【魔句2】 能代表我校学生在这里发言,我感到非常荣幸。
It is a great honour to give a speech here,as a representative of all the students of our school.
I feel greatly honoured to deliver a speech here on behalf of all the students of our school.
As a representative of all the students of our school,it is my honour to give a speech here.
[语境]能与来自国内外的朋友分享中国的传统文化,我感到很荣幸。
(1)It is a great honour for me to share traditional Chinese culture with friends at home and abroad.
(2)I feel greatly honoured to share traditional Chinese culture with friends at home and abroad.
【魔句3】 不知道该如何跟同学们相处,她感到有些困惑。
She felt somehow at a loss,wondering how to get on with her classmates.
Because she didn't know how to get along with her classmates,she felt sort of at a loss.
She didn't know how to get on with her classmates,feeling kind of confused.
[语境]对于如何能讲一口流利的普通话,你感到困惑。
(1)You feel somehow at a loss,wondering how to speak Mandarin fluently.
(2)Because you don't know how to speak Mandarin fluently,you feel sort of at a loss.
(3)You don't know how to speak Mandarin fluently,feeling kind of confused.
【魔句4】 这个小男孩懂得很多,我们对此感到惊讶。
The little boy knows so many things that we feel surprised.
It is that the little boy knows so many things that surprises us.
The little boy who knows so many things surprises us.
What surprises us is that the little boy knows so many things.
That the little boy knows so many things surprises us.
We are surprised that the little boy knows so many things.
Much to our surprise,the little boy knows so many things.
[语境]令我感到非常高兴的是,一座新体育场已建成,它成了我们学校的地标建筑。
(1)To my great joy,a new stadium has been put up,which has become the landmark in our school.
(2)What makes me joyful is that a new stadium has been put up,which has become the landmark in our school.
(3)It is that a new stadium which has become the landmark in our school has been put up that makes me joyful.
【魔句5】 老师的一席话深深地打动了我,我决心更加努力地学习英语。
Deeply moved by my teacher's words,I have made up my mind to study English harder.
Deeply touched by what the teacher said,I'm determined to learn English even harder.
What the teacher said left me affected,so I was determined to make more efforts to study English.
It was the teacher's moving words that made me determined to concentrate more on my English study.
[语境]他们娴熟的技艺令我惊讶,我决心像他们一样出色。
(1)Amazed at how skillful they were,I made up my mind to be just as good as them.
(2)Greatly amazed at their skills,I was determined to be just as good as them.
(3)It was their amazing skills that made me determined to be just as good as them.
情境2　时间与地点
【魔句6】 会议大约持续了三个小时。
The meeting took approximately/roughly three hours.
The meeting lasted three hours more or less.
The meeting ended/came to an end about three hours later.
It took three hours or so to cover the meeting.
[语境]美术展计划于5月9日上午8点至10点举行,我们学校所有的学生和老师都有望参与。
(1)The art exhibition is intended to take place lasting from 8:00 am to 10:00 am on May 9.All the students as well as the teachers of our school are expected to attend it.
(2)All the students and the teachers of our school are expected to attend the art exhibition which will take from 8:00 am to 10:00 am on May 9.
【魔句7】 公园是公众休闲娱乐的地方。
A park is a place for the public to rest and enjoy themselves.
A park is a place where people rest and relax.
A park is a place where people can have a rest and have fun.
A park is a public place for relaxation/amusement.
[语境]博物馆是一个可以使你了解历史的地方。
(1)The museum is a place where you can learn about history.
(2)The museum is a place for you to learn about history.
【魔句8】 他瞥了一眼地图,然后告诉我们,向前再走大约20英里就是一个村庄。
Glancing at the map,he informed us that the next village was merely twenty miles away.
He glanced at the map and told us that there would be a village less than twenty miles away.
He took a glance at the map and told us that no more than twenty miles ahead was a village.
Having glanced at the map,he informed us that the next village was within twenty miles.
He cast a look at the map,telling us that there would be less than twenty miles ahead of us before we got to a village.
[语境]向前走不到100米就是我们的图书馆。
(1)There is our library less than 100 metres away.
(2)Our library is no more than 100 metres ahead.
(3)Our library is within 100 metres.
【魔句9】 夜晚,学生们到达了这个小村庄。
In the evening,the students got to/reached/arrived at the small village.
It was in the evening that the students reached the small village.
The students did not get to the small village until (it was) evening.
Evening had already fallen when the students found their way to the small village.
[语境](2019·北京卷,书面表达)我们下午到了家,累并快乐着。
(1)We arrived home in the afternoon,tired but pleased.
(2)It was in the afternoon that we arrived home,tired but pleased.
(3)We didn't arrive home until the afternoon,tired but pleased.
【魔句10】 我们盼望的春节马上就要到了。
The Spring Festival that we look forward to is approaching.
The Spring Festival that we look forward to is drawing near.
Around the corner is the Spring Festival that we are longing for/dying for.
[语境]我们盼望的这个电视节目马上就要开始了。
(1)The TV program that we look forward to is approaching.
(2)The TV program that we look forward to is drawing near.
(3)Around the corner is the TV program that we are longing for/dying for.
【魔句11】 农历正月初一是春节。
The Spring Festival falls on the first day of the first month in the lunar calendar.
The Spring Festival occurs on the first day of the first month in the lunar calendar.
[语境]农历正月十五是元宵节。
(1)The Lantern Festival falls on the fifteenth day of the first month in the lunar calendar.
(2)The Lantern Festival occurs on the fifteenth day of the first month in the lunar calendar.
情境3　困难与帮助
【魔句12】 我的车坏了。
My car is out of order.
My car doesn't work.
There is something wrong with my car.
Something is wrong with my car.
Something has gone wrong with my car.
My car has broken down.
[语境]爸爸的摩托车出故障了,因此他不得不乘公交车去上班。
(1)Dad's motorbike broke down,so he had to go to work by bus.
(2)Because his motorbike didn't work,Dad had to take a bus to work.
(3)Something was wrong with his motorbike,so Dad could do nothing but go to work by bus.
【魔句13】 我们如何能用更多的方法处理这个问题呢
What can we do with the problem by using more methods
How can we deal with/cope with the problem with more methods
How can we handle the problem in more ways
How can we solve/resolve/settle the problem by more means
[语境]我以前当志愿者的经历可以帮助我解决这一过程中潜在的问题。
(1)My previous experience as a volunteer may help me settle the potential problems in the process.
(2)My previous experience as a volunteer may help me handle/solve/resolve the potential problems in the process.
(3)My previous experience as a volunteer may help me deal with/do with/cope with the potential problems in the process.
【魔句14】 我们最好利用这次机会来提高我们的英语口语水平。
We had better take (full) advantage of the opportunity to improve our spoken English.
We might as well make (full/good) use of the opportunity to improve our spoken English.
[语境] 我希望你最好利用这个机会进一步学习中国的传统文化。
(1)I wish you might as well take advantage of this opportunity to learn traditional Chinese culture further.
(2)I wish you had better make full use of the opportunity to learn traditional Chinese culture further.
【魔句15】 他现在正处于困境中,我们必须帮他渡过难关。
He is in trouble now,and we must help him out.
He is in difficulty now,and we must help him out.
We must help him out of the trouble he is suffering.
He is faced with difficulties.It is necessary/essential/a must that we (should) help him pull through.
[语境]它们现在处境危险,我们必须帮助它们。
(1)They are now in danger,and we must help them out.
(2)They are faced with danger.It is necessary/essential/a must that we (should) help them out.
【魔句16】 对很多人来说,掌握一门外语不是一件容易的事。
For many people,to master a foreign language is not an easy thing.
It is a difficult task for many people to master a foreign language well.
Many people find it a hard job to be fluent in a foreign language.
[语境]对很多人来说,养成一个好习惯不容易。
(1)For many people,to form a good habit is not an easy thing.
(2)Many people find it a hard job to develop a good habit.
【魔句17】 幸运的是,在当地群众的帮助下,他在这次交通事故中幸存了下来。
He was so lucky that he got the help of the local people and survived the traffic accident.
Luckily/Fortunately,the local people came to his aid and saved his life from the traffic accident.
With the help of the local people,he luckily survived the traffic accident.
[语境]幸运的是,他及时赶到,帮助我们摆脱了困境。
(1)Luckily/Fortunately,he arrived in time and helped us out of trouble.
(2)We were so lucky that his timely arrival got us out of trouble.
情境4　原因与结果
【魔句18】 由于没有公共汽车,我们只好步行回家。
There was no bus,so we had to walk home.
As there was no bus,we had no choice but to walk home.
There being no bus,we had to walk home.
There being no bus,what we had to do was to walk home.
[语境]没有足够的业余时间,他不得不放弃了写作的爱好。
(1)There being not enough spare time,he had to give up the hobby of writing.
(2)There was not enough spare time,he had no choice but to give up the hobby of writing.
【魔句19】 什么导致了火灾对警察来说是个谜。
What caused the fire is a puzzle to the police.
What resulted in the fire puzzles the police.
What puzzles the police is what contributed to the fire.
The police are puzzled about what led to the fire.
[语境]什么时候会发生地震对我们来说还是一个谜。
(1)When an earthquake will happen is a puzzle to us.
(2)When an earthquake will happen puzzles us.
(3)We are puzzled about when an earthquake will occur.
【魔句20】 他学习刻苦。因此,他轻松地通过了考试。
He worked hard at his study.As a result,he passed the exam easily.
He had been hard-working at his study.As a consequence,he passed the exam easily.
As a result of his hard work at his study,he passed the exam easily.
His passing the exam with ease resulted from his hard work at his study.
His hard work at his study resulted in/led to his passing the exam effortlessly.
[语境]我从小生活在北京,因此,我普通话讲得流利。
(1)I have been living in Beijing since I was born.As a consequence,I can speak Mandarin fluently.
(2)As a result of living in Beijing since I was born,I can speak Mandarin fluently.
【魔句21】 由于多种原因,很多野生生物都已经灭绝了。
For many different reasons,many species of wildlife have already died out.
For various reasons,a variety/diversity of wild species has become extinct.
Many of the wild species have disappeared for reasons of all kinds.
[语境]由于多种原因,我支持网络投票。
(1)For many different reasons,I hold a positive attitude towards online voting.
(2)For various reasons,I hold a positive attitude towards online voting.
(3)I hold a positive attitude towards online voting for reasons of all kinds.
【魔句22】 再给她一点时间,她会处理好这个问题的。
If she had been given more time,she would have settled the problem.
If given more time,she would have solved the problem.
Had she been given more time,she would have overcome the difficulty.
Given more time,she would have found the way out of difficulty.
More time,and she would have found the way out of difficulty.
[语境]再给我一次机会,我一定会成功的。
(1)If given/offered another opportunity,I would surely make it.
(2)Should I be given another chance,I would be sure to succeed.
(3)Another chance,and I am bound to achieve my goal.(共26张PPT)
写作专项提升
巧衔接——增强行文过渡流畅
英 语
衔接1　起始与顺序
1.起始关系:first/firstly(第一),in the first place/first of all(首先),to begin/start with(首先),as everyone knows(众所周知),as is known(正如了解到的那样),as is shown in...(如……所示),according to(根据),nowadays/now(现在),at present(目前),recently(最近),等等。
①(2021·全国乙卷,书面表达)As everyone knows,time is rather limited in today's society.
众所周知,在当今社会,时间是相当有限的。
②(2020·天津卷,书面表达)First of all,we were shown some photos and videos.
首先,我们看了一些照片和视频。
③To begin with,please make a workout schedule and stick to it so that you can keep healthy.
首先,请制订一个锻炼计划并坚持下去,以便你保持健康。
2.时间顺序:at the beginning(起初),then(然后),after a while(一会儿之后), after that (后来),afterwards/later on(后来),at the same time(与此同时),in the meantime(在此期间),before long(不久),shortly after(立即),eventually(终于), in the end/finally/lastly/at last(最后),等等。
①At the beginning,I wiped off the dust of all the furniture.Then I collected all the things scattered in the rooms and put them in place.After that,I mopped the floor.
首先,我擦去所有家具上的灰尘。接着,我把所有的散落在屋子里的东西收拾起来放好。然后,我拖了地。
②Shortly after moving into her apartment,she found a job.
搬进公寓后不久,她就找到了一份工作。
③Lastly,I would like to thank my parents for all their support.
最后,我想感谢父母对我的全力支持。
④(2020·浙江1月卷,写作)In the end,I am looking forward to your involvement and do wish you a success!
最后,我期待着你的参与,并祝你成功!
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1.(2020·上海卷,书面表达)首先,没有必要为不可控的事情烦恼,比如天气状况。
_____________________________________________________,such as the weather condition.
2.最后,我们应该经常参加体育运动和户外活动。
_______________________________________________________________
3.当今,越来越多的人选择在家上班。
_______________________________________________________________
Firstly,there is no need to bother with things uncontrollable
Finally,we should take part in sports and outdoor activities frequently.
Nowadays,increasing numbers of people elect to work from home.
衔接2　条件与因果
1.表示条件:if、unless、in case (of)、as/so long as、on condition that、provided (that)等。
(2021·全国甲卷,书面表达)If I want to decorate my website with some Chinese elements,what should I do
如果我想用一些中国元素装饰我的网站,我应该怎么做
2.表示原因:because、as、since、for、now that、considering (that)、thanks to、due to、as a result of、so、in consequence of、owing to、on account of、for the reason of等。
①Millions will face starvation next year as a result of the drought.
由于旱灾,明年将有数百万人面临饥饿的威胁。
②(2020·上海卷,书面表达)Since it happened,why not try hard to get it settled
既然事情已经发生,为什么不努力去解决它呢
③Considering that you just started studying English a month ago,you've made amazing progress.
考虑到你一个月前才开始学习英语,你的进步已经非常惊人了。
3.表示结果:so、thus、therefore、consequently、as a result、as a consequence等。
①(2019·全国Ⅰ卷,书面表达)Therefore,I am equipped with a wide range of knowledge in this aspect,which can help people in London have a deeper understanding of Chinese paintings.
因此,我在这方面拥有广泛的知识,这可以帮助在伦敦的人对中国画有更深的了解。
②I was badly treated in your store.Consequently,I am writing to you in the hope of getting things settled.
在你的店里,我受到了不好的对待。因此,我写信给你,希望事情能得到解决。
③(2020·全国Ⅲ卷,书面表达)Therefore,we are in urgent need of your help and guidance.
因此,我们迫切需要你的帮助和指导。
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1.(2020·全国Ⅰ卷,书面表达)我之所以尊敬她,是因为她从不发脾气,反而总是鼓励我。
__________________________________________ is that she never loses temper but instead always encourages me.
2.(2019·江苏卷,书面表达)如果我们的目的是分享中国文化,那么这些不便利就不是问题。
The inconvenience is not a problem_________________________________.
3.由于人类的活动,许多物种已经灭绝了。
Many species have died out_____________________________________.
The reason why I show respect for her
if our purpose is to share Chinese culture
in consequence of human activities
衔接3　并列与转折
1.并列关系:and、or、as well as、not only...but also...、either...or...、neither...nor...等。
①Not only does it supply me with a platform to broaden my horizon,but its rich content can also spark my burning passion for English.
它不仅为我提供了一个开阔视野的平台,而且它丰富的内容也可以点燃我对英语的热情。
②(2019·北京卷,书面表达)After packing my suitcase,I as well as my classmates set off for our destination—a farm in the morning.
收拾好行李箱后,我和我的同学们在早晨出发去了我们的目的地——一家农场。
2.转折关系:but,yet,however,while,otherwise,nevertheless,otherwise(否则,不然),despite/in spite of,regardless of(不管,不顾),rather than(而不是),instead (of)(相反,反而,却),on the other hand(另一方面),unfortunately(不幸地,令人遗憾地),or(不然),although/though/as/while(虽然),even if/though(尽管),no matter...(无论……),等等。
①(2021·全国乙卷,书面表达)However,there also exist some disadvantages.
然而,也存在一些缺点。
②(2020·全国Ⅰ卷,书面表达)She has her weakness,yet that does not mean she is not up to the job.
她有缺点,然而那并不意味着她不能胜任这项工作。
③Don't start giving me problems;otherwise,I'll have to be very unpleasant indeed.
不要开始给我找麻烦,否则我就真的不客气了。
[对点过关训练]
完成语段
正如你所知,我对美国文化很感兴趣。生活在美国对我来说会是一个了解更多美国文化以及提高英文水平的良机。然而,我刚得知寄宿家庭的主人生病了,住在他家会很不方便,所以我需要你的帮助。
As you know,①____________________________________________.②______________________________________ will be a great opportunity for me to learn more about American culture and improve my English. ③____________________________________________ and it will be inconvenient for me to stay in his house.④_____________________.
I have been interested in American culture
Living in America
However,I've just learned that my host falls ill
So I need your help
衔接4　列举与递进
1.列举事实:such as、for example/instance、take...for example、that is to say、as follows、in other words、on the one hand...on the other (hand)...、for one thing...for another...等。
(2019·北京卷,书面表达)It's very convenient for you to travel in the three cities because there are many means of transport for you to choose,such as buses,tubes,trains,taxies,and shared bikes.
你在这三个城市旅行非常方便,因为你可以选择多种交通方式,例如公共汽车、地铁、火车、出租车和共享单车。
2.递进关系:besides/moreover/furthermore(此外;而且),additionally(另外), also(还),still less(更不用说),in addition(而且),apart from(此外;除……之外), what's more(此外),equally important(同样重要的是),more importantly(更重要的是),last but not least(最后但同样重要的是),to make matters worse(使情况更糟糕的是),worse still/what's worse(更糟糕的是),等等。
①(2021·全国乙卷,书面表达)Moreover,the atmosphere of the class is not warm enough.
此外,课堂气氛不够热烈。
②As a result,I don't have enough time to take exercise.What's worse,I don't communicate a lot with my parents and my friends.
结果,我没有足够的时间锻炼身体。更糟糕的是,我与父母和朋友之间的交流也不多。
③Additionally,they should be allowed to teach,and be rewarded for doing it well.
此外,他们应该被允许去教书,并因做得好而得到奖励。
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1.小男孩把鲜花递给了那位保安,而且亲吻了他的脸颊。
The little boy passed the fresh flowers to the guard,_____________________
___________________________________________.
2.(2019·天津卷,书面表达)就个人而言,我不仅喜欢听音乐,还喜欢唱国内外的歌曲。
Personally,I love _________________________________________________
__________________________________________.
3.最后期限还有两天就要到了,更糟糕的是,我的电脑突然瘫痪了。
The deadline is two days away,and______________________,my computer broke down suddenly.
what's more she
kissed him on his cheeks.
not only listening to music,but also singing songs from
home and abroad
what's worse
衔接5　对比与对照
1.相似比较:similarly(相似地,类似地),equally(同样地),just as(正如),in the same way(以相同的方式,同样地),for one thing...for another...(一方面……另一方面……),等等。
For one thing,this race gives us a good opportunity to have a deeper understanding of patience.For another,it can build up our bodies in terms of long-distance race.
一方面,这次比赛给我们提供了一个很好的机会,让我们对耐心有了更深的理解。另一方面,它也能通过长跑锻炼我们的身体。
2.相反比较:instead(相反),while(而;然而),unlike(不像),however(然而;仍然), whereas(然而;反之),yet(然而),on the other hand(另一方面),compared with/to (与……比较),in comparison with(与……比较),in contrast (to)(和……对比), on the contrary(相反),等等。
①(2021·全国乙卷,书面表达)On the other hand,that will lead to a lack of communication between teachers and students.
另一方面,那样会导致师生之间缺乏沟通。
②(2020·上海卷,书面表达)Maybe it is the recent ghastly weather or the terrible traffic that hinders you from making up your mind.However,as far as I'm concerned,it's still worth our efforts.
也许是最近的恶劣天气或可怕的交通阻碍了你作决定。然而,就我而言,这仍然值得我们的努力。
③On the contrary,I like solving difficult problems because I always take them as exciting challenges.
相反,我喜欢解决难题,因为我通常会把这些难题看作令人激动的挑战。
[对点过关训练]
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1.首先,和传统的购物相比,网购很方便。
_____________________________________________,online shopping is very convenient.
2.恰恰相反,我对这个提议很感兴趣。
_______________________________________________________________
3.我们原以为这些数据正确。不过,我们现在发现了一些错误。
We thought the figures were correct.__________________________________
_________________.
To begin with,compared with traditional shopping
On the contrary,I am quite interested in/show great interest in the proposal.　
However,we have now discovered
some errors.
4.我们的生活也是如此,在不和他人合作的情况下,一个人仅靠自己是不可能轻易完成一项有挑战性的任务的。
_______________________________________________________________________ on his own without cooperating with others.
Similarly in our life,an individual person cannot easily carry out a challenging task
衔接6　观点与总结
1.表达观点:in my opinion、in my view、in my point of view、as far as I am concerned、as for me、personally等。
①(2020·天津卷,书面表达)As far as I am concerned,I will work hard for the peace and progress of the world.
就我而言,我会为世界的和平与进步而努力。
②Personally,I prefer the tour along the Yangtze River,the longest river in China and one of the birthplaces of Chinese civilization.
就个人而言,我更喜欢沿着长江游览,长江是中国最长的河流,也是中华文明的发源地之一。
2.归纳总结:in short、in brief、in conclusion、in a word、to sum up、to conclude、all in all、on the whole、in general、generally speaking等。
①On the whole,traveling is the best choice to enrich our lives and get ready for the new challenges.
总的来说,旅游是丰富我们的生活、为新的挑战做准备的最好选择。
②(2021·全国乙卷,书面表达)To conclude,I do hope all of us can be smart online learners.
综上所述,我真的希望我们所有人都能成为聪明的在线学习者。
③(2020·全国Ⅰ卷,书面表达)In general,Mr.Zhang is a very respectable teacher indeed!
总之,张老师确实是一位非常可敬的老师!
④(2019· 浙江卷,写作)All in all,words fail to express my thankfulness to you.
总之,言语无法表达我对你的感激之情。
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1.(2019·全国Ⅱ卷,书面表达)总之,我坚信努力工作会带来好的结果!
_____________________________________________________ hard work will bring good results!
2.(2019·江苏卷,书面表达)综上所述,在这种场合,校服是比中国传统服装更好的选择。
_________________________________________________ than the traditional Chinese dress on such occasions.
3.总而言之,良好和谐的家庭环境对孩子的健康成长至关重要。
____________________________________________________ is necessary for a child to grow up healthily.
To sum up/All in all/In short/In a word,I firmly believe
To conclude,the school uniforms are a better choice
In short,a good and harmonious environment at home(共122张PPT)
写作专项提升
第一讲　应用文
英 语
写作模板1　建议信
技法点拨
建议信是针对某事向收信人提出建议或者忠告的信件。建议信有可能写给个人,就遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点;也可能是写给某个组织或者机构,就改进其服务提出建议或者忠告。建议信通常简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服性。
典例示范
假设你是李华,你的美国朋友Mike就读的学校要举办一年一度的“中华文化节”,他来信向你征求活动意见,请你写封回信,内容包括:
1.写作目的;
2.活动建议;
3.表示祝愿。
注意:
1.词数不少于100;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
范文欣赏
Dear Mike,
So delighted to learn that your school is going to hold the annual “Chinese Culture Festival”,I'm only too willing to give you some suggestions.
Firstly,it would be a good idea to hold a competition about Chinese poetry recitation,which students can have a better understanding of the language.In addition,giving a speech concerning traditional Chinese festivals is also a better choice,as customs and traditions will undoubtedly attract many students.
I'm fully convinced that the festival will be a joyful and fruitful activity,which will spread brilliant Chinese culture to a larger extent.I would appreciate it if you could consider my suggestions.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
增分佳句
开头说明写作目的的常用语:
1.I know you have trouble in learning Chinese after reading your letter.
读了你的信后,我知道你在中文学习上有困难。
2.I'm sorry to know you have trouble in learning English after reading your letter.
读了你的信之后,得知你在英语学习方面遇到麻烦,我深感遗憾。
3.You've asked me for advice on how to get on well with others and I'll try to make some suggestions.
你向我征求关于如何与别人融洽相处的意见,我会尽量提出一些建议。
中间给出具体建议的常用语:
4.As for learning Chinese/When it comes to learning Chinese,I would like to recommend you to start with Pinyin.
关于学汉语,我想建议你从拼音开始。
5.You may/might as well have a try.你不妨试一试。
6.First of all,beginning with letters is a better choice.
首先,从字母开始是一个更好的选择。
7.It would be a good idea to listen to some Chinese radio programs because all the announcers speak standard Chinese.
听一些中文广播节目是一个好办法,因为所有的播音员都说标准的中文。
8.Finally,watching TV programs will help a lot.
最后,看电视节目也会有很大的帮助。
结尾常用语:
9.I hope my suggestions can make a difference to you.
我希望我的建议对你有用处。
10.I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.
我希望这些建议对你很实用/有用/有帮助。
模板结构
Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm glad to receive your letter for my advice on how to ______________ (事由).Here are a few suggestions.
Firstly,it is important to ______________________(第一条建议). ______________________(第一条建议的理由).Secondly,it also helps to ______________________(第二条建议).______________________(第二条建议的理由).Besides,it should be a good idea to ______________________ (第三条建议).______________________(第三条建议的理由).You can also ________________(用不同的句式提出其他建议).As to________________ (其他建议),I suggest ______________________(具体到某一方面).I'm sure,
in that way/by doing that,______________________(预测可能的结果,给对方以行动的信心和决心).
I hope you will find my suggestions useful and I'm looking forward to ______________________(表达愿望).
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
热点演练
假定你是新华中学高三(2)班的学生李华,你校的校园网英文版最近正在征求改进意见。请给你校网站负责人写一封信,提出你的建议。内容包括:
1.增加校园生活图片;
2.加快新闻更新频率;
3.增加读书沙龙栏目。
注意:
1.词数不少于100;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:读书沙龙Reading Salon
【参考范文】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm Li Hua,a student of Class Two,Senior Three.I'm writing to offer my suggestions on how to improve our English website.
As the website is basically intended for us students,I think it is advisable that more photos about campus life should be provided to make it more attractive.Besides,I hope the online news can be updated more often to keep us informed of what's going on in the world.Also,a new column called Reading Salon will be welcome because we all love reading but now we lack a platform where we can publish reviews of the books we've read.
I would appreciate it if you could consider my suggestions.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作模板2　申请信
技法点拨
申请信通常用于向某单位或组织提出请求或申请等。申请信有很多种,例如求职申请、加入某组织或者请求参加某活动的申请等,其目的是让对方了解自己的经验、能力、特长、特点、成就及愿望等。申请信的语气要诚挚、友好,对于申请的内容和原因要表达清楚,在表达自己的愿望时应礼貌而自信。
典例示范
第25届冬季奥林匹克运动会将于2026年在意大利举行,现面向社会招募志愿者。假如你是李华,请根据自己的情况写一封100词左右的英文申请信。内容包括:
1.热爱体育;
2.英语流利;
3.性格外向,有组织能力。
范文欣赏
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to apply for a valuable chance to be a volunteer for the Winter Olympic Games to be held in 2026.
I am Li Hua,an 18-year-old boy who loves sports so much that I can devote all my energies to serving the game.Besides,with a very good command of English,I can speak the language fluently,which makes me more qualified to help others.Meanwhile,not only do I have the ability to organize activities,but also I am outgoing,which benefits me in communicating with strangers.Everything taken into consideration,I think I am suitable for the position.
I would appreciate it if you could consider my application.Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
增分佳句
开头写明申请原因、信息来源以及自己的打算的常用语:
1.I learned on your website/on the Internet that a secretary is wanted in your company.
我从你们的网站上/网上得知你们公司要招聘一名秘书。
2.Having read your advertisement on the Internet looking for a secretary,I'm writing to apply for the position.
读了网上你招聘秘书的广告,我写信申请这一职务。
3.I am writing to tell you that I'm suitable for the job you are advertising.
我写信告诉你我符合你们广告中工作的条件。
4.I'm writing to apply for a valuable chance to be a volunteer.
我写信是为了申请成为一名志愿者的宝贵机会。
中间介绍自己的背景、优势、特长等的常用语:
5.The following are my advantages./My advantages are as follows.
以下是我的优势。
6.I am confident that I'm equal to the position/I'm suitable for the position.
我确信,我能胜任这个岗位。
7.I've done part-time jobs during holidays and had ability to take care of myself and help others.
假期里我做过兼职,有能力照顾好自己,也能帮助别人。
8.I'd like to accept more challenges and try to experience the real life.
我想接受更多的挑战,体验现实生活。
9.I want to make more friends and learn about different customs in our country as well.
我想多交朋友,也想了解全国各地的风土人情。
10.The position will be a fantastic platform where I could fulfill my dream.
这个职位会是一个非常好的平台,在这里我可以实现我的梦想。
结尾表达自己的愿望的常用语:
11.I really hope to obtain this precious opportunity.
我真心希望能得到这个宝贵的机会。
模板结构
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to apply for the position that you have advertised in ______________________(报纸名称) on ______________________(广告发布时间).
I am ____________________from ____________________(自我介绍). Not only do I have the qualifications for this job,but I have the right personality for ______________________(申请的职位).On the one hand,I won in ______________________(相关获奖经历).On the other hand, ___________________(另一个优势).I hope you can give me the opportunity of a personal interview,and I would be most grateful.If you consider me appropriate for the job,please call me at ___________________(联系方式).
I would really appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.I am looking forward to meeting you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
热点演练
(2022·河南高三上学期第五次联考)
假定你是李华,得知某著名大学正在你所在地区进行自主招生工作,你想报考该校的英语翻译专业。请你用英语给其负责人写一封申请信,内容包括:
1.简述你的学习情况;
2.介绍你的英语水平;
3.表达期望。
注意:
1.词数不少于100;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm Li Hua,a senior high school student.I've learned your university is carrying out the independent recruitment in my area.I want to apply for the major—English Translation in your university.
Firstly,not only do I perform well in all courses but also I'm enthusiastic about club activities.What's more,I'm a member of Volunteer Association,having joined in a great many volunteer activities.I'm good at English and won many prizes in many competitions.I hope my English level can meet the requirements.
I would appreciate it if I could be offered the opportunity.Looking forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
写作模板3　邀请信
技法点拨
邀请信是邀请被邀请人参加某项活动时所发出的邀约性书信。写作时,应简明扼要,语气要真诚热情,不强人所难。
典例示范
(2021·浙江名校新高考联盟第二次联考)
假定你是李华,你所在城市下个月1日将举行“The Color Run”活动,参加者每跑一千米会被抛洒上不同颜色,活动全程被称为“地球上最欢乐的五千米”。请给你的英国朋友Alex写封邮件邀请他参加,内容包括:
1.发出邀请;
2.介绍活动;
3.时间、地点、报名方式等。
注意:
1.词数不少于100;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
范文欣赏
Dear Alex,
I'm writing to invite you to participate in The Color Run scheduled to take place in the City Botanical Garden on the first day of next month.
Known as the happiest 5km on the planet,“The Colour Run” is a unique event that celebrates health and happiness.As scheduled,all participants are expected to be dressed in white and end up looking like a rainbow.The participants will be sprayed with different colors for every kilometre they run which features the most interesting part.I hope that you will accept my invitation if it is convenient for you.
Looking forward to your participation.
Yours,
Li Hua
增分佳句
开头表明写作意图,发出邀请的常用语:
1.We're holding a birthday party for Tom.I wonder if you would like to come to his birthday party.
我们将为汤姆举办生日晚会。我想知道你是否愿意来参加他的生日晚会。
2.We are planning a graduation celebration on June 6 and we feel it would be a great idea if you can join us.
我们将于6月6日举行毕业庆祝会,如果你能来参加就太好了。
中间说明邀请的原因及具体内容的常用语:
3.The following are some details about this activity./Here are some details about this activity./Some details about this activity are as follows.
活动细节如下。
4.Our music festival will cover a wide range of activities,including short musical performances,instrument performances,as well as a singing contest.
我们的音乐节将包括各种各样的活动,包括音乐短剧表演、乐器演奏以及一场歌唱比赛。
5.The football summer camp to be held by the Teenager Activity Centre will begin on July 1st and last for one month.
由青少年活动中心举办的足球夏令营将于7月1日开始,为期一个月。
6.As scheduled,the festival is to be held from 9:00 am to 4:00 pm in our school.
按照计划,这个节日将在我们学校举行,从上午9点到下午4点。
7.To begin with,we will have a big feast,after which,we are to hold a singing contest.
首先,我们要举办一个盛宴,然后,我们打算举行歌咏比赛。
结尾期待接受邀请,并表示感谢的常用语:
8.I would feel much honored if you could come.
如果你能来,我将倍感荣幸。
9.We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you.
如果你方便的话,我们希望你能接受我们的邀请。
模板结构
Dear ______________________(收信人),
How is everything going with you I am writing to tell you that there will be a(n) __________________(活动内容)at/in ___________________(地点) __________________(时间).We would be honoured to invite you to join us.
The occasion will start at ______________________(具体时间),and activities include ______________________,______________________ and ______________________(活动的具体内容).In addition,there will be ______________________(其他注意事项).Will you be available during that time Please contact me at your earliest convenience.
We will feel much honoured if you could come.Looking forward to meeting you there.
Yours,
Li Hua
热点演练
(2022·吉林实验中学高三上学期第一次诊断)
假如你是李华,班级本周要举行庆祝冬至活动。请你写信邀请你们的外教Brown 先生来参加活动。内容包括:
1.活动举行的时间和地点;
2.活动内容有包水饺、吟诵诗词等。
注意:
1.词数不少于100;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:冬至 winter solstice
【参考范文】
Dear Mr Brown,
How is it going recently I'm writing to invite you to attend the winter solstice party to be held in our classroom this Saturday.The winter solstice is one of the Twenty-four Solar Terms and it is called Dongzhi in Chinese.As one of the important Chinese traditional festivals,it dates back over 2,000 years.On that day in China,it is a tradition custom that people will celebrate this festival by eating dumplings.Therefore,at the party,we will make dumplings together and everyone will share some poems about winter.I believe you will have a good time with us.
I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
写作模板4　感谢信
技法点拨
感谢信是非常重要的礼仪书信,是向提供帮助、关心和支持的个人或者集体表示感谢的书信,有感谢和赞扬双重意思,因此,语言要真诚。
典例示范
(2021·北京东城第二学期高三综合练习)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校英语俱乐部的上一任外教Jim为你们推荐了一位新外教。作为俱乐部负责人,请你给Jim写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.表示感谢;
2.讲述新外教给予的帮助。
注意:词数不少于100。
范文欣赏
Dear Jim,
I'm writing to thank you for recommending Ms Smith.
She is such a wonderful teacher,a valuable addition to the club.She impresses us with her expertise and kindness.With her help,we have engaged in activities of all kinds and we are now our school's most popular club.
Ms Smith came up with the idea to donate English books to students in a rural area.These reading materials will surely help enrich their experiences. Most importantly,we feel the joy of being able to make a difference.But for your recommendation,we wouldn't have such a wonderful teacher.Please accept my sincere thanks for your help.
What's new in your life Do keep us updated.
Yours,
Li Hua
增分佳句
开头表达感谢之情并说明原因的常用语:
1.I am writing to express my sincere thanks/appreciation/gratitude to you for your kindness during my stay in London.
我写这封信是为了感谢我在伦敦逗留期间您的帮助。
2.I would like to express/convey my heartfelt thanks to you for your generous help.
我想要对你的慷慨帮助表达最诚挚的谢意。
3.On behalf of my whole family,I would like to express my sincere gratitude for your wonderful gift.
我谨代表我们全家,对你赠送的精美礼物表达我最真诚的谢意。
中间细述事件经过或者详细介绍对方的帮助、帮助所起的作用、对礼物的喜爱等的常用语:
4.Thanks to your care and company,I had a wonderful time during the two-week holiday.
感谢您的照顾和陪伴,我愉快地度过了两周的假期。
5.But for/Without your help/guidance/assistance,I wouldn't have made such rapid progress.
如果没有您的帮助/指导/协助,我就不可能进步这么快。
6.And much to my delight,my spoken English has greatly improved under your guidance.
而且令我非常高兴的是,我的英语口语水平在您的指导下大大提高了。
7.It was nice/kind/thoughtful of you to assist me in that snowstorm.
能在那场暴风雪中给予我帮助,您真好/善良/体贴。
8.If it had not been for your help,I wouldn't have won the prize.
如果没有你的帮助,我不可能得奖。
结尾再次表示感谢,欢迎来访等的常用语:
9.I will never forget the help you gave me and the time we spent together.
我永远也忘不了您对我的帮助,以及我们一起度过的时光。
10.Nothing could ever return the favour you gave me.
无法报答你给予我的帮助。
模板结构
Dear ______________________(收信人),
I am writing to express my sincere gratitude for ____________________ (感谢的原因一).I would also like to thank you for your __________________ (感谢的原因二).
During ____________________,I ____________________(接受帮助的经过).If it had not been for your assistance in ______________________(对方给予你的具体帮助),I fear that I would have been ____________________ (没有对方帮助会产生的后果).
Everyone agrees that it was you who ___________________(给出细节). Again,I would like to express my sincere thanks to you.Please accept my sincere gratitude.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
热点演练
假如你是李华,在美国做过一年交换生,现在刚刚回国。请你根据以下提示,给曾为你提供食宿的Garret夫妇写一封感谢信,内容主要包括:
1.表达感谢;
2.说明自己的英语已有很大提高;
3.代表父母表示谢意,并邀请对方有空来做客。
注意:词数不少于100。
【参考范文】
Dear Mr and Mrs Garret,
I am writing to appreciate everything you did for me when I was an exchange student in America.
I still remember the wonderful days that I spent with you clearly and what you did made me feel like I was part of the family.It was a fantastic experience which I will never forget.Moreover,my trip to America has certainly helped improve my English,too.What benefited me most was the opportunity to practise English with you every day.Finally,my parents send their regards to you and ask me to tell you that you will always be welcome if you have time to visit our country.
Again,I'd like to express my warm thanks to you for your help,which I will never forget.Please accept my gratitude.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
写作模板5　道歉信
技法点拨
道歉信是因为疏忽或者过失给别人带来了损失或者麻烦,为给对方赔礼道歉而写的书信。
典例示范
假定你是李华。你原定下个月去英国参加笔友Kevin的高中毕业典礼,现因故无法参加。请给他发一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.深表歉意;
2.解释原因;
3.衷心祝福。
注意:
1.词数不少于100;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
范文欣赏
Dear Kevin,
I'm writing to make an apology to you for not being able to attend your graduation ceremony as promised.
My classmate got hurt while helping some children,and we are going to visit him next week.That is why I cannot attend punctually.Although I can't come in person,I would like to send my best wishes to you.I also want to recommend you to make full of your vacation to enrich yourself.
I sincerely hope you will kindly accept my apologies and enjoy yourself at the ceremony.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
增分佳句
开头表明写作意图,对某事表达歉意的常用语:
1.I'm writing this letter to make an apology to you for not being able to attend the meeting.
我写这封信是为未能参加会议而向你道歉。
2.I would like to express my deepest apology for not being able to go to the bookstore with you.
没能和你一起去书店,我向你深表歉意。
3.I am more than sorry to tell you that I'm not available to the party.
非常抱歉地告诉你我没有时间参加聚会了。
4.I must apologize for any inconvenience it may/have caused for you.
为此事可能/已经给你带来的任何不便,我深表歉意。
中间说明道歉的具体原因,并提出补救措施的常用语:
5.Owing to the examination,I'm unable to spare time to pick you up at the airport.
由于要参加考试,我没能抽出时间去机场接你。
6.It's a pity that I can't keep my promise because my grandfather fell ill suddenly yesterday.
很遗憾我不能守约,因为我爷爷昨天突然病了。
7.If it's convenient for you,we can make an appointment to see a film.
如果你方便的话,我们可以约着看电影。
8.Maybe we can fix another time when you are available.
你有空的时候,或许我们可以另约时间。
结尾再次阐述歉意,请求原谅的常用语:
9.No words are strong enough to express my apologies to you.
没有什么语言能表达我对你的歉意。
10.I hope you'll forgive me for causing you so much trouble.
我希望你能原谅我给你添了这么多麻烦。
11.I sincerely hope you will kindly accept my apologies.
我衷心希望你能宽容地接受我的道歉。
12.With apologies once again./With many apologies.
再次表达歉意。/非常抱歉。
模板结构
Dear ______________________(收信人),
I am so sorry to tell you that ______________________(引出道歉的原因).Now,I am writing you this letter to express my deep regret.
I will be very grateful if you are kind to listen to my explanation.The reason for my _________________(结果)was/is that _________________ (介绍原因).Therefore,______________________(解释道歉的原因).I wonder if we can fix another time to ______________________(提出弥补措施).I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.
Once again,I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.
Li Hua
热点演练
假设你是李华,你和外国朋友Tom约好这个周五晚上去体育馆看足球赛,但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件:
1.表达歉意;
2.解释原因;
3.另约时间。
注意:
1.词数不少于100;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Dear Tom,
I'm so sorry to say that I can't go to watch the football match with you as scheduled this Friday night.This afternoon,I suddenly received the news that my grandfather fell and broke his left leg.With my father out on a business trip and my mother occupied to look after my little sister at home,I have to take the responsibility of taking care of my grandfather in the hospital these nights.
I've heard that there will be a match which is more exciting next Friday night.I wonder whether you are available then.If you are free,we can make an appointment to watch that football match.
I sincerely hope you will kindly accept my apologies.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作模板6　求助信
技法点拨
求助信是当遇到问题或者困难时,向别人寻求帮助的书信,希望收信人能对提出的问题提供帮助或者解决方案。求助信的语言要简明扼要,语气要真诚、委婉。
典例示范
(2021·浙江杭州第二学期高三质检)假如你是李华,你正在准备就某一话题做英文演讲。请给你的英语老师Mr Green写一封信,希望得到他的帮助。内容包括:
1.演讲的主题;
2.演讲的目的;
3.具体帮助(如推荐书籍等)。
注意:
1.词数不少于100;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
范文欣赏
Dear Mr Green,
I'm writing to ask you to do me a favor.
I'm preparing an English speech with the title “Cloning's Role in Life”.I hope I can get people to think more about the significance of cloning and the potential problems it may cause.However,when it comes to the moral risks cloning may bring us,I find it quite hard to make my viewpoint convincing enough,as I lack solid evidence and relevant knowledge.So I wonder if you could recommend some books sharing experts' arguments on this topic.
No words are strong enough to convey my appreciation if you could offer me a hand.Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
增分佳句
开头呈现问题,说明要寻求什么样的帮助的常用语:
1.My name is Li Hua,and I'm writing to you for your help.
我叫李华,写信向你寻求帮助。
2.I'm writing to ask you to do me a favor/give me a hand.
我写信请你帮我一个忙。
3.Faced with so much difficulty,I have to ask you for help.
面对这么多的困难,我不得不向你求助。
中间陈述困难或者求助的内容的常用语:
4.As you know,I am bad at English,so I hope you can offer me some advice on how to learn it well.
你知道,我英语不好,所以我希望你能就如何学好它给我提点建议。
5.I hope you could spare me some time to help me improve my oral English.And your guidance is badly needed.
我希望你能抽点时间帮我提升一下英语口语。我非常需要你的指导。
6.I hope you can give me some guidance about the interview so that I can behave myself better and leave a good impression on the judges.
我希望你能就这次面试给我一些指导,这样我就能表现得更好,给考官留下好的印象。
结尾诚恳提出希望,表达需要帮助的迫切心情,并表示感谢的常用语:
7.No words are strong enough to convey my appreciation.
没有语言能表达我的感激之情。
8.I'm sure with your help I can make great progress.
我相信在你的帮助下我会取得很大的进步。
9.I would appreciate it if you could do me a favour.
如果你能帮我的忙,我将非常感激。
10.Your timely help will be highly appreciated.
非常感谢您及时的帮忙。
模板结构
Dear ______________________(收信人),
I'm ______________________(自我介绍).I'm writing to you for some help.
Now I am faced with some problems.I have some trouble in ___________ (遇到的困难).I feel it difficult to ______________________(具体困难). Besides,I often feel nervous while ______________________(具体困难).All the problems bring me great pressure.I am unable to ____________________ and feel tired of ______________________(具体困难).
I really hope that you can give me some good advice on how to ______________________(请求帮助).I believe I can make great progress with your help.
I would be grateful/thankful if you could give me some advice/help.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
热点演练
假设你是李华,你最近在学习美国风俗,但国内有关这方面的原版书籍较少。你想麻烦你的美国笔友Mike帮你买一些这方面的书。现在请根据以下信息给Mike写一封信。
1.说明买书的理由;
2.对书的要求(如数量、寄送时间等);
3.会转账给他。
注意:
1.词数不少于100;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:转账transfer money
【参考范文】
Dear Mike,
How is everything going I am writing to see if it is possible for you to buy me some books.
Recently,I've fallen in love with American custom,for I find it helpful for me to learn more about America.However,it is a pity that there is not enough original books about it on the market.I wonder whether you could help me to buy five or seven relevant books written by famous writers.Just tell me how much you pay for them by email and I will transfer money to your account.I would appreciate it if you could send them to me before April 20th.No words are strong enough to convey my appreciation if you could offer me a hand.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作模板7　演讲稿
技法点拨
演讲稿包括发言稿、致辞、竞选稿等,主要用来交流思想、表达感情、发表看法;有时候也用来介绍自己的学习情况等。演讲稿的特点通常是语言简洁、条理清楚、观点鲜明。
典例示范
(2021·广东广州毕业班综合测试)假定你是李华,为迎接国外姐妹学校来访师生,你校准备选拔“文化交流小使者(Young Ambassador for Cultural Exchange)”,你打算参加。请写一份英语竞选演讲稿,内容包括:
1.自我介绍;
2.竞选理由。
注意:词数不少于100。
范文欣赏
Good morning,dear Judges.I'm Candidate No.1.It's my privilege to deliver a speech here and run for the opportunity to be the Young Ambassador for Cultural Exchange.
Now,please allow me to introduce myself briefly.I am Li Hua,the president of the Students' Union.Here are some of the reasons for my election.Firstly,I have always been desperate to contribute a bit to the promotion of Chinese culture since I started to learn English.Therefore,I spare no effort to learn it and have a good command of it.Besides,previous experiences as volunteers in various activities enable me to enhance my communicative skills.In a word,I'm convinced that I am qualified to be the ambassador.
Please vote for me.Thanks for your attention.
增分佳句
开头给出称呼的常用语:
ladies and gentlemen、my dear friends、hello、everyone等。
正文提出主题,对主题进行清楚、客观地论述,并做简明扼要的总结的常用语:
1.My name is Li Hua.Today I am very glad to have the opportunity to make this presentation.I shall be speaking about sea exploration.
我叫李华。今天有机会做这个演讲我感到很高兴。我要讲的是海洋探索。
2.Good morning,everyone!It is my great honour to share with you my opinions on working as volunteers.
大家上午好!很荣幸能和你们分享一下我对当志愿者的看法。
3.It's my great honour to give a speech here/to have the opportunity to say something about friendship.
很荣幸能在这里演讲/能有机会谈论一下关于友谊的话题。
4.I feel it a great honour to share my opinions about healthy lifestyle with you.
我非常荣幸能与你分享我对健康生活方式的看法。
5.I would like to concentrate on the problem of global warming.
我想把重点集中在全球变暖的问题上。
6.As far as I'm concerned,doing physical exercise regularly is a good solution.
我认为,定期进行体育锻炼是一个好的解决办法。
结尾表示感谢的常用语:
7.That's all I want to say about this point.
关于这一点,我就想讲这些。
8.Thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving me this chance to speak to you today.
我从心底感谢你们今天给了我这个机会与你们交流。
9.Thanks for your attention.
感谢你的关注。
10.That's all.Thank you for listening.
就说这么多。谢谢大家的聆听。
模板结构
Good morning,everyone!
It's so nice to see all of you here.I feel honoured to have the opportunity to deliver a speech on ______________________(演讲话题).The topic of my speech is______________________(演讲题目).
As is known to all,______________________(现象).However, ______________________(问题).How can we solve the problem In my point of view,__________________(方法).For one thing,____________________ (理由1). For another,______________________(理由2).What's more, ______________________(理由3).
Therefore,let's ______________________(号召).Thank you!
热点演练
(2022·天津南开区高三一模)
假设你是晨光中学的李津,下周你校将开展主题为“My favorite traditional festival”的英语演讲比赛,请根据以下提示写一篇演讲稿。内容包括:
1.你最喜欢的一个中国传统节日;
2.介绍节日的特色;
3.陈述你喜欢该节日的原因(如意义、感受等)。
注意:
1.词数不少于100;
2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯;
3.开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Hello,everyone!It's my honour to speak here.Today I want to talk about my favorite traditional festival.
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Hello,everyone!It's my honour to speak here.Today I want to talk about my favorite traditional festival.
The traditional festival that I like most is the Mid-Autumn Festival,which falls on the 15th day of August in the lunar calender.It is widely accepted as a union day for the Chinese,when people will come back home from different places of the country to get together with their family.On the evening of the festival the whole family will enjoy mooncakes as well as a big meal,admiring the shining moon in the yards or through windows.I really like such moments which make me feel both loved and relaxed.
The reason why I like the Mid-Autumn Festival is that it provides an opportunity for the whole family to get together,which helps the young generation to be connected with their elders,which may contribute to the union of our country.
写作模板8　通知
技法点拨
通知分为书面通知和口头通知,用于公布计划或者安排的事情,例如会议、比赛、讲座、画展、晚会等。写通知的关键是明确活动的必要信息,如时间、地点、活动内容、报名方式等。通知的语言通常简洁明确。
典例示范
(2021·山东新高考4月联考)下周日,你们学校学生会将组织一次关于垃圾分类的社区宣传活动。请你据此写一则英文通知,内容包括:
1.活动组织(时间、地点、意义);
2.活动过程;
3.欢迎大家积极参加。
注意:
1.词数不少于100;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:垃圾分类trash sorting
范文欣赏
Notice
To raise people's awareness of environmental protection,our school will organize a meaningful activity with the theme of Trash Sorting next Sunday in Guangming community.
As scheduled,we are expected to assemble at 8:00 am in the main hall before we head for the destination by bus.On our arrival,the president of the Students' Union will deliver a speech and guide citizens there to classify the waste.After that,some leaflets will be distributed to people there,which will help them cultivate a greener lifestyle habit.
With our joint efforts,our surroundings will take on a new look. Whoever wants to join us is warmly welcome!
Students' Union
增分佳句
开头点明通知的主题和目的的常用语:
1.May I have your attention,please I have an announcement to make.
请大家注意一下好吗 我要宣布一个通知。
2.Attention,please,everybody!I have something important to tell you.
请大家注意了!我有重要的事情要告诉你们。
3.An exciting event is around the corner.
最近要开展一项令人激动的活动。
中间告知必要信息,例如时间、地点、报名方式、截止日期等的常用语:
4.An English Drama Competition will be held in our school on the afternoon of August 10,Friday.
我校将于8月10日周五下午举办英语戏剧比赛。
5.It will begin at 8:00 am and last about three hours.
它将于早上8点开始,大约持续3个小时。
6.It is a great opportunity to put your talent to good use.
这是一个充分展示你才能的好机会。
7.Please sign up at Room 106 of Teaching Building by August 3.
请在教学楼106房间报名,截止日期是8月3号。
结尾提出要求,号召大家积极参加的常用语:
8.Anyone who is interested is welcome to participate.
欢迎任何感兴趣的人参加。
9.Everyone is expected to be part of the event.
期望每个人都能参加这个活动。
10.Whoever wants to join us is warmly welcome!
我们热烈欢迎任何想加入我们的人!
◆书面通知
Notice
April 1st
In order to___________________ (目的),_________________(发起者) has decided to __________________(举办活动).This __________________ (活动) is to be ______________________(地点、时间).Here are some details about it.______________________(内容介绍).Whoever is interested in it is welcome to attend it.Those who want to take part please sign up at the Students' Union.
Please remember______________________(提醒特别事项).
Students' Union
◆口头通知
Ladies and gentlemen,
Your attention,please.I have something to tell you.In order to ______________________(目的),______________________(活动) will be held ______________________(地点)______________________(时间). Those who are interested in ______________________(该活动) are welcome.
Please remember:
Time:__________
Place:__________
Please be on time and don't be late.Thank you for listening.
热点演练
你受学生会委托为校宣传栏 “英语天地”写一则通知,请大家观看一部英文短片 Growing Together,内容包括:
1.短片内容:学校的发展;
2.放映时间、地点;
3.欢迎对短片提出意见。
注意:
1.词数不少于100;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Notice
In order to have a better understanding of our school,an outstanding English short movie about our school will be shown in the library from 2:30 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th.Here are some relevant details about it.
To begin with,the name of the movie is Growing Together,which is about the development of our beloved school.As we all expect,it will be not only meaningful but also interesting.What's more,you can have a heated discussion about the movie afterwards and give your own comments.
Everyone will be welcome to take part in it.
Students' Union
写作模板9　咨询信
技法点拨
咨询信是向对方咨询自己在生活或者学习中感兴趣的问题,或者咨询自己不明白、有疑惑的问题或者情况,希望了解详细信息。写信时,要用准确的语言把问题表达清楚。
典例示范
(2021·山东潍坊联合质检)假定你是李华,你正在英国某市做交换生,你想到该市的一家图书馆办理一张借书卡(library card)。请用英语给该图书馆的工作人员写一封电子邮件,询问相关信息。内容包括:
1.可借阅图书范围;
2.借阅制度;
3.办卡时间及地点。
注意:
1.词数不少于100;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
范文欣赏
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm Li Hua,a Chinese exchange student here.Having learned your library provides service for foreigners,I'm writing to ask for some information about borrowing books.
Firstly,could you tell me what kinds of books can be borrowed or what kinds of books can only be read in the library Are there any books that I have no access to Secondly,I want to know the specific rules related to borrowing books and keeping them.Additionally,I wonder when and where I can apply for a library card.Should I reserve in advance
I'd be grateful to receive a reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours,
Li Hua
增分佳句
开头表明写作目的,说明咨询信息的原因的常用语:
1.I have seen your advertisement and I'd like to ask you several relevant questions.
我看了你们的广告,想向你询问一些相关问题。
2.I wonder if you could provide some information about your company.
我想知道你能否提供一些贵公司的资料。
3.I'm writing to you for further information about the course.
我写信是为了进一步了解这个课程的信息。
4.I'm writing to make an inquiry about the meeting.
我写信是想咨询关于会议的情况。
中间咨询具体信息的常用语:
5.First of all,I want to know how much I have to pay for the course.
首先,我想知道这个课程的费用情况。
6.Besides,I'm wondering whether accommodation is included.
此外,我想知道是否包含食宿。
7.As for the money you charge,does it cover the entrance fees for visiting the places listed
至于你收取的费用,包括参观所列出的地方的门票吗
结尾表示感谢,期待回复的常用语:
8.Thank you for your kindness,and your timely attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.
感谢你的好意,对于你对这封信的及时关注我们将非常感激。
9.I would appreciate it if you could give me an early reply.
如果你能尽快给我回复,我将不胜感激。
10.I shall feel obliged if you can do me a favour and give me a call at your earliest convenience.
如果您能在方便的时候帮忙,并给我打个电话,我将不胜感激。
模板结构
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am ______________________(自我介绍).I saw your advertisement for ______________________(要询问的内容).I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with more information about it.
First of all,would you mind telling me ___________________(第一个问题) As for ___________________,I'd like to know ___________________ (第二个问题).Besides,could you send me more details about _____________ (第三个问题) I would also like to inquire ______________________(最重要的问题).Could you be so kind as to send me some relevant information on the mentioned aspects above
Thank you for your kindness,and your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
热点演练
假定你是李华,你将作为一名交换生到伦敦某高中进行为期一个月的学习,请你给该校宿舍管理办公室的负责人写一封电子邮件,内容要点包括:
1.询问有关学校住宿的情况;
2.提出自己的住宿要求;
3.如果条件不能满足,询问学校能够提供什么样的住宿条件。
注意:
1.词数不少于100;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm Li Hua,an exchange student who will go to your school to study for a month.I am writing to inquire about the accommodation your school provides.
I prefer a dorm room with a bathroom on campus.A room on the ground floor would be better.And I don't mind sharing it with other students as it will provide me with a good chance to make new friends and learn more about the local culture.What kind of accommodation could you offer if these requirements should not be satisfied
I would appreciate it very much if you could provide me with the relevant information.Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作模板10　告知信
技法点拨
告知信一般是向个人告知计划安排、广告信息、个人情况、旅游介绍、课外活动等方面的内容。告知的内容通常是积极的信息。告知信的语言要简明扼要。
典例示范
假定你是李华,你正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括:
1.时间和地点;
2.内容为学习唐诗;
3.课前准备包括简要了解唐朝的历史。
注意:
1.词数不少于100;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
范文欣赏
Dear Leslie,
I'm glad that you have made great progress in Chinese learning.You know it isn't easy to learn a foreign language.But you are so confident and never give up whenever you meet with difficulties.I'm sure you will succeed through your hard work.
I am writing to tell you that our next Chinese class is scheduled for next Saturday.You are supposed to arrive at Room 301 before 2 pm.You are to learn about Tang Poetry,which is a very important part of Chinese culture and history.You will read some famous poems and learn about some well-known poets,like Li Bai,Du Fu and so on.
By the way,you'd better get a brief idea of the history of the Tang Dynasty beforehand so that you can have a better understanding of the poems that we will learn.
Best,
Li Hua
增分佳句
开头明确写信目的,简单介绍要告知的内容的常用语:
1.Now,I am writing to inform you of some relevant details about this activity.
现在,我写信告诉你有关这次活动的一些细节。
2.A volleyball match is going to be held in a few weeks and our team will participate.
几周后将举行一场排球比赛,我们队将参加。
3.I am more than glad to receive your email asking for my plan of the match.
我很高兴收到你的邮件,询问我关于比赛的计划。
中间告知有关时间、地点、活动等的具体内容的常用语:
4.I have worked out my schedule.My plans/arrangements are as follows.
我已经制订好了我的计划。我的安排如下。
5.We can set off at 8 am from our school.
我们可以在上午8点从学校出发。
6.Mr Smith will give us a lecture on western culture at the school hall at 3 pm on Wednesday.
周三下午3点在学校礼堂,史密斯先生将给我们做一场关于西方文化的讲座。
7.The lecture will begin at 8:00 am and end at 11:00 am.
讲座将于上午8:00开始,上午11:00结束。
结尾询问对方看法,表达期待和愿望的常用语:
8.If there is anything I can do for you,I would be more than glad to help.
如果有什么我能为你做的,我非常乐意帮助。
9.If you have any other questions,please let me know.
如果你有任何其他问题,请让我知道。
10.If you have any other questions,please don't hesitate to turn to me for help.
如果你有任何其他问题,请不要犹豫找我帮忙。
模板结构
Dear ______________________(收信人),
I am more than glad to receive your email asking for my plan of the coming summer holiday.My arrangements are as follows.
First of all,I am going to ______________________(计划做的第一件事). Then,I have intended to ______________________(计划做的第二件事).At last,my biggest dream is to ______________________(计划做的第三件事). What do you think of my plan
Do you have better advice for my plan I'd appreciate it if you could reply earlier.
Yours sincerely,
____________(写信人)
热点演练
(2022·广西玉林高三上学期12月联考)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Tom得知你校将举办“中国传统文化日”活动,他对此很感兴趣,想了解活动具体信息。请你给他回复一封电子邮件,介绍相关情况,内容包括:
1.时间和地点;
2.活动安排;
3.期待对方参加。
注意:
1.词数不少于100;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Tom,
Knowing you're interested in the Traditional Chinese Culture Day in our school,I would like to tell you some details about it.
This event is to be held in the stadium next Friday.Various activities will be arranged.First of all,we'll have an amazing Hanfu Show,where students can play some classical characters.In addition,there will be an exhibition on painting and calligraphy,which can definitely help us better understand traditional Chinese culture.Lastly,our school will offer different kinds of Chinese local special foods.Without doubt,the Culture Day will give us a good chance to expand our horizon.
I hope you can join us and have fun.Looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作模板11　倡议书
技法点拨
倡议书是为号召大家参加某项活动而发起的提议信。一般由标题、正文、结尾等部分组成。
典例示范
(2021·湖北武汉3月质检)假定你是李华,请你代表学生会,为学校“英语天地”宣传栏写一份题为“Health Matters Most”的倡议书,呼吁高三学生养成健康的生活方式。内容包括:
1.倡议的原因;
2.倡议的目的;
3.倡议的具体内容。
注意:词数不少于100。
范文欣赏
Health Matters Most
With the College Entrance Examination approaching,many of us are under much pressure from study and therefore have developed an unhealthy lifestyle,studying deep into night,rushing through meals and taking little physical exercise,which is extremely harmful to our health.
To meet the challenges of the senior year,we are supposed to say no to the unhealthy lifestyle.Therefore,it's strongly advocated that we should go to bed early,get up early and have meals regularly and slowly.
It is high time that we started to take effective action at once.
增分佳句
开头呈现问题,表明倡议的目的和背景的常用语:
1.Nowadays,people in many big cities are always complaining about the heavy traffic.As high school students,what should we do
现在,在许多大城市的人们总在抱怨拥挤的交通。作为高中生,我们应该做些什么呢
2.Keeping healthy is very important to us.Therefore,it's strongly advocated that we should do more exercise every day.
保持健康对我们来说很重要。因此,我强烈倡议我们应该每天多做运动。
3.It's a common sight that people drop litter everywhere,which has become a wide concern.So I strongly advocate that we attach importance to this phenomenon.
经常看到人们随地扔垃圾的场景,这已经受到了广泛关注。因此,我强烈倡议我们应该重视这个现象。
中间详细说明倡议的内容、理由和意义的常用语:
4.We are supposed/expected to choose a healthy and environmentally-friendly way of traveling,that is,bicycle riding.
我们应该选择一种健康又环保的出行方式,那就是骑自行车。
5.If everyone does one thing for our school,I believe we will turn our school into a better place to study and live in.
如果每个人都为我们学校做一件事情,我相信我们会把学校变成一个更好的学习和生活的地方。
6.If you are willing to do something to save our earth,please start from the little thing right around you.
如果你愿意做一些事来拯救我们的地球,请从你身边的小事做起。
结尾再次发出呼吁,表明倡议的决心和希望的常用语:
7.It is high time that we started from ourselves and reduced transportation pressure by riding bikes.
是时候我们从自己做起,通过骑自行车来减少交通压力了。
8.I'm calling for your active participation in it,which will be of great benefit to our hometown.
我呼吁你们积极参加,这对我们家乡会有很大的益处。
9.Let's join our hands and take action immediately.
让我们携起手来,立刻采取行动。
10.Let's participate actively in it.Your small acts of kindness can make a difference.
让我们积极参加吧。你小小的善举会有巨大的影响。
模板结构
Dear ______________________,
On behalf of ______________________(所代表的组织),I am earnestly calling for your active participation in ______________________(要参加的活动).______________________(阐述活动原因).Do you cherish precious opportunities to volunteer in our joint efforts in ______________________(活动名称) Here is a great one not to be missed by any enthusiastic youth. ______________________(陈述活动时间和地点等).Let's join our hands and take action immediately.
Li Hua
热点演练
假如你是班长李华,你发现部分同学因忙于学习而影响了健康。为此,你决定向全班同学发出以“管理自己的健康”为主题的倡议书,内容要点包括:
1.提出存在的问题;
2.“管理自己的健康”的意义及倡议。
注意:
1.词数不少于100;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Manage Our Own Health
Dear fellow students,
It worries me a lot to notice that lack of self-care brought by academic pressure has had a great influence on the health of some students.
Good health is known as the best wealth.It is the basis of efficient study and other activities.Therefore,I strongly advocate the idea of “Manage our own health”.To achieve the goal,let's learn to strike a balance between study and rest by means of healthy eating,adequate rest and regular physical activities.
Every small step counts!However busy we are,remember to care for ourselves.
Li Hua(共22张PPT)
写作专项提升
第二讲　记叙文
英 语
记叙文主要用于记叙过去发生的事件或经历,以写人、叙事为主要内容,应用广泛,写作形式灵活多样。活动报道和人物介绍是高考书面表达的主要考查方式。
写作模板1　活动报道
活动报道是对举行的活动进行报道。第一句话通常为全文的主旨句,包括时间、地点、人物、事件等几个方面。后文对整个事件的过程和细节进行详细的叙述。活动报道的语言平实客观,不追求过于复杂的句式。
典例示范
(2020·新高考Ⅰ卷)假定你是李华,上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:
1.参加人员;
2.跑步路线为从校门口到南山脚下;
3.活动反响。
注意:
1.写作词数应为100左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Cross-Country Running Race
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范文欣赏
A Cross-Country Running Race
Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running race,which nearly drew the attention of every student and teacher of our school.
The students selected from every class took part in the competition.The route measured five kilometers,from our school gate to the foot of Nanshan Mountain.Every runner tried their best to finish the task,with their classmates along the way giving them necessary help as well as encouragement.At last,all the runners managed to arrive at the finish line,receiving cheers from all directions.
The activity was highly spoken of,because not only did it provide a chance for us to exercise,but also made us more united.
增分佳句
开头简要说明活动的来龙去脉的常用语:
1.In order to raise awareness about environment protection,the English Club of our school organized a voluntary activity this Sunday morning.
为了提高环境保护的意识,本周日上午我校英语俱乐部组织了一次志愿者活动。
2.During the May Day holiday,my parents and I climbed Mount Tai.We were lucky,because the weather was fine that day and we were able to see the sunrise.
五一假期期间,我和父母一起去爬了泰山。我们很幸运,因为那天的天气很好,我们看到了日出。
3.The Chinese Poetry Competition was held in our school concert hall on Friday afternoon,from 2 pm to 5 pm.
周五下午2点到5点,中国诗歌大赛在我校音乐厅举行。
4.Last week,when I was on my way home something terrible happened.
上周,当我走在回家的路上时,可怕的事情发生了。
中间详细叙述活动过程和细节的常用语:
5.We're scheduled to gather at the school gate at 9:00 am,and take a bus to the West Lake,which will take about half an hour.
我们计划上午9点在学校门口集合,乘坐公交车去西湖,这大约需要半小时。
6.While walking on the country road,we enjoyed the warm sunshine and the beautiful view.
走在乡间的小路上,我们享受着温暖的阳光和美丽的风景。
7.At the end of the activity,we took a picture to memorize the unforgettable day.
活动结束时,我们拍照纪念这个难忘的日子。
结尾对活动进行总结或者评价的常用语:
8.It was the most exciting moment that I have ever experienced.
这是我所经历过的最激动人心的时刻。
9.The competition will provide an opportunity for us to have a better understanding of traditional culture.
这次比赛将给我们提供一个更好地理解传统文化的机会。
10.The competition broadened my knowledge on the Silk Road and encouraged me to learn more about our culture in the future.
这次比赛拓宽了我关于丝绸之路的知识面,激励我以后学习更多关于我们文化的知识。
热点演练
(2020·天津卷)假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你校于6月8日举办了成人礼活动,你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris回一封电子邮件,介绍相关情况,内容包括:
1.成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾);
2.对活动的感受;
3.对自己未来的展望。
注意:
1.词数不少于100;
2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
3.开头已给出,不计入总数。
参考词汇:
成人礼 the coming-of-age ceremony
Dear Chris,
I'm so glad to hear from you. _____________________________
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【参考范文】
Dear Chris,
I'm so glad to hear from you.I'm wring to tell you something about the coming-of-age ceremony in our school,which took place in the lecture hall on June 8th.The whole ceremony lasted about three hours,during which we recalled the growing experiences of our generation,watched the videos about the good deeds that our schoolmates did and participated in other activities.
I feel I benefit a lot from this activity,and I have made up my mind to follow the examples of their heroic behavior to become a person of responsibility and make great contributions to our motherland.
Yours,
Li Jin
写作模板2　人物介绍
人物介绍的内容通常包括人物生平、性格特点、业余爱好以及取得的成就。高考对人物介绍的考查通常与书信、电子邮件等结合起来,是书信或者电子邮件中的一部分内容。
典例示范
(2020·全国Ⅰ卷)你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:
1.人物简介;
2.人物受到尊敬和爱戴的原因。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.短文题目和首句已为你写好。
The person I respect
There are many respectable people around us. ______________________
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范文欣赏
The person I respect
There are many respectable people around us.Mr.Zhang,aged 50,is my favorite English teacher.He is so knowledgeable,humorous and responsible that I respect and love him so much.
Honestly speaking,his great patience and assistance have a great impact on me.It was Mr.Zhang who made me perceive the importance of learning English well.Had it not been for his guidance and encouragement,I couldn't have won first prize in the English contest.Without his aid,I wouldn't have boosted my integrated skills in English.I'll definitely remember his kindness and help forever.
Mr.Zhang is a very respectable teacher indeed!I do thank him for what he did for me.
增分佳句
开头介绍人物基本信息的常用语:
1.My friend Li Hua,aged 27,graduated from Peking University five years ago,and has just received his doctor's degree.
我的朋友李华,今年27岁,5年前从北京大学毕业,又刚刚拿到了他的博士学位。
2.Li Ming is my best friend.He is tall and strong.
李明是我最好的朋友。他又高又壮。
中间介绍具体人物事迹的常用语:
3.He is good at sports such as running,football,basketball and table tennis.
他擅长运动,例如跑步、足球、篮球和乒乓球。
4.Being kind-hearted and easy-going,he fits in well with others easily wherever he goes.
由于心地善良、性情随和,他无论去哪里,总会很容易地与他人相处融洽。
5.We have much in common regarding our study,interests and hobbies.
我们在学习和兴趣爱好方面有许多共同之处。
6.With their help,I regained my confidence and began to make steady progress.
在他们的帮助下,我重获信心,并且开始取得稳定进步。
结尾对该人物进行评价的常用语:
7.True friendship lasts a long time.I believe the friendship between Li Ming and I will last forever.
真正的友情是持久的。我相信我和李明之间的友谊会永存。
8.In my opinion,distance can't cut off the friendship.Only if we miss each other,our friendship will last forever.
在我看来,距离不能阻断友谊。只要我们彼此想念,我们的友谊就会永存。
9.He devoted himself to scientific research and made great contributions to the country.
他致力于科研工作,为国家做出了巨大贡献。
10.Considered to be one of the greatest writers in the world,he was awarded the Nobel Prize in Literature.
他被认为是世界最伟大的作家之一,被授予了诺贝尔文学奖。
热点演练
假定你是李华,你校英文报正在征稿,题目是“The Most Impressive Woman in My Life”,请你写一篇文章,投给校英文报。内容包括:
1.这位女士的特点;
2.这位女士对你的影响。
注意:
1.词数不少于100;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
The Most Impressive Woman in My Life
During my life there are many people who impressed me deeply.But my English teacher Miss Zhao is the most impressive woman in my eyes.
Miss Zhao is a warm-hearted lady with a charming smile on her face.As a teacher,she is ready to help those students in need.Besides,she is strict with us and responsible for her work.There was story after story of how Miss Zhao,tired after a day's work,went late at night to grade our papers.Under her guidance,I became interested in English.Without her help,I couldn't have made rapid progress.
Such is Miss Zhao,an excellent teacher who makes a deep impression on me and wins my respect.