2025高考英语 应用文写作
文体 求助信
求助信是当个人遇到问题而无法解决时请求收信人提供帮助的信件,因此应用一般现在时表达自己的困境,当描述自己得到帮助后的进步时应用一般将来时。具体写作结构如下:
吸睛开头套语(写信目的)
1.Having signed up for an English singing competition,I’m writing to consult you for some suggestions on issues concerned over which I am totally at a loss.
我报名参加了一场英语歌唱比赛,写信向你咨询一些涉及的问题,这些问题令我完全摸不着头脑。
2.Owing to lack of communication with others,I failed to get on well with my classmates,so I’m writing to seek some effective approaches to address the problem.
由于与他人缺乏沟通,我和我的同学们相处得不太好,所以我写信是为了寻求一些有效的方法来解决这个问题。
3.I’m sorry to bother you,but now I find it rather difficult to adapt to the new environment.I wonder if you could take the trouble to give me some advice/tips on it.
很抱歉打扰你,但我现在觉得很难适应新的环境,不知道能不能麻烦你就此给我一些建议。
4.Faced with such a tricky situation,I’m wondering if it is possible for you to kindly do me a favor.
面对如此棘手的情况,我不知道能不能请您帮我一个忙。
5.Recently,I have trouble/difficulty/a hard time with/doing....Therefore,I have no choice but to turn to you for advice.最近,我在……方面有困难,所以不得不向你寻求建议。
完美结尾套语(表达感谢,希望得到帮助)
1.Thank you for your kind consideration and I look forward to receiving your earliest reply.
谢谢你的关照,期待早日收到你的回复。
2.I would appreciate it very much if you can offer me some necessary/timely help.如果你能给我一些必要的/及时的帮助,我将不胜感激。
3.Thus,I would be grateful if you could be so kind as to give/lend me some practical/valuable advice on the two points I mentioned above.因此,如果您能就我提到的以上两点给我一些实用的/有价值的建议,我会非常感激。
典例剖析
假定你是李华,你和同学根据英语课文改编了一部短剧。请你给外教 Miss Evans写封邮件,请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:1.剧情简介;2.指导内容;3.商定时间、地点。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.请按如下格式作答。
佳作赏析 亮句解读
Dear Miss Evans, I hope this email finds you well.I’m Li Hua,[1]one of the students from your writing class.I’m writing to request your invaluable assistance with a short play adaptation [2]my classmates and I have been working on.【问候并表明求助意图】 Our play,[3]titled “The Time Machine Adventure”,is centered around a young inventor who constructs a time machine and embarks on a journey through history,learning significant life lessons along the way.Could you kindly give us guidance on the following items Firstly,we hope that you can check the use of the language for us.In addition,would it be possible for you to offer us some suggestions on acting and tones We believe your expertise in acting and theater could greatly enhance our project.【需要指导的具体内容】 Could we arrange a meeting at your convenience to discuss these matters further Please suggest a suitable time and location.Your support is invaluable to us,and we eagerly anticipate your response.【协商时间、地点,表达期望】 Yours, Li Hua [1]同位语,进行自我介绍。 [2]限制性定语从句,表明写信目的。 [3]过去分词短语作后置定语+定语从句,介绍短剧。
亮句集锦
1.学习方面
(1)I have difficulty in remembering English words,which accounts for my limited vocabulary.
我记英语单词有困难,这就是我词汇量有限的原因。
(2)What troubles me most is that I often perform poorly in English exams,however hard I work.最让我烦恼的是,无论我多么努力,我在英语考试中总是表现很差。
(3)In addition,I am at a loss how to apply proper expressions to my writing,which makes me frustrated.
此外,我不知道如何将正确的表达应用到我的写作中,这让我很沮丧。
(4)I find myself making progress not as fast as before,which has been annoying me for a long time.
我发现自己进步得不像以前那么快了,这已经困扰我很长时间了。
2.人际交往
(1)I have some difficulties in getting along well with my classmates/the new teacher/my parents,which have caused me a great deal of distress.我与我的同学/新老师/父母相处有困难,这给我带来了很大的困扰。
(2)What bothers me most is that it’s difficult for me to communicate with my classmates.
最让我困扰的是,我很难和我的同学们交流。
(3)I seem not be able to fit in well with others here.在这儿我似乎不能与他人融洽相处。
3.心理压力
(1)First of all,what frustrates/discourages me/casts me down is my inability/failure to pass the exam,dealing a blow to my confidence and dampening my passion.
首先,让我沮丧/泄气/气馁的是我没有能力/未能通过考试,这打击了我的信心,也抑制了我的热情。
(2)In addition,it is a headache/struggle for me to focus my mind on what the teachers say,serving as a stumbling block to my progress.此外,专心听讲对我来说是一件头疼的事/难事,这是我进步的绊脚石。
(3)Faced with/Confronted with/In the face of such tricky and challenging problems,I am eager for your timely assistance and proposals.
面对如此棘手而有挑战性的问题,我急需你及时的帮助和建议。
4.改简历
(1)I have just completed my application letter and résumé,which are attached to this letter.
我已经写好了申请书和个人简历,它们就在附件里。
(2)I am wondering if you could kindly spare some time to check my application materials before next Friday,offering valuable advice on my use of words and format.
我想知道你可不可以在下周五前腾出一点时间帮我检查一下我的求职材料,对我的措辞和格式提一些宝贵的建议。
5.准备比赛
(1)With the July around the corner,I intend to attend an English speech contest in Beijing,which I believe will be a golden opportunity for my personal growth.
随着七月的临近,我打算参加一场在北京举行的英语演讲比赛,我相信这将是我个人成长的黄金机会。
(2)Yet finding the solid information is difficult for me considering that we are living in the Information Age.
然而,考虑到我们正生活在信息时代,找到可靠的信息对我来说是很困难的。
(3)Furthermore,I am afraid that the words and expressions I used in my speech would sound unnatural as a result of mother tongue interference.此外,我担心因为母语的干扰,我在演讲中使用的单词和表达方式会听起来不自然。
(4)Faced with the above problems,I am anxious to get your help.Would you please offer me some suggestions
面对上述问题,我渴望得到你的帮助。你可以给我一些建议吗?
即时演练 (2024·湖北三模)
假定你是李华,是一名高三学生,进入高三之后你遇到了一些问题导致无法集中精力学习。于是你给学校的外籍心理老师Kate写一封求助信寻求帮助。要点如下:
1.作业多,没有时间运动;
2.压力大,难以入睡;
3.希望得到Kate的帮助。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Kate,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Kate,
I am Li Hua,a senior in our school.Recently I find it quite hard for me to concentrate on my study.So I’m writing to turn to you for help.
I’m encountering some problems which trouble me a lot.To begin with,I have to spend so much time on my homework that I hardly have time to do exercise.Moreover,the high expectations from the teachers and my parents make me extremely stressed because I don’t want to let them down.What troubles me most is that it’s difficult for me to fall asleep every night.
Faced with the above problems,I’m anxious to get your help.Could you please offer me some advice on how to solve these problems
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
文体 咨询信
咨询信是写信人就自己不太熟悉、不理解或想要进一步了解的事情及问题,向有关部门或个人请求解答时所使用的信件。写作时应注意分条陈述咨询的具体内容,且语气要委婉。具体写作结构如下:
吸睛开头套语(说明写信目的)
1.I’m writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information on/regarding/concerning...我写信是看您有没有可能给我提供关于……的信息。
2.I’d like to acquire all the detailed information relative to...我想获得与……有关的所有详细信息。
3.I have seen...posted on your website and a point I am not certain about is...
我看过你们网站上发布的……,我无法确定的一点是……。
完美结尾套语(表示感谢/期待回复)
1.I would be much obliged to you if you could let me know the procedures I have to go through.
如果您能让我知道我必须通过的程序,我会非常感谢您。
2.Your early reply would be highly appreciated.Thank you in advance!
如能尽早回复,我将不胜感激。在此先表示感谢!
3.I would be very grateful if you could send me a reply as soon as possible.Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
如果你能尽快回复我,我将不胜感激。期待着很快收到你的来信。
4.Looking forward to a prompt reply at your earliest convenience.
期待在您方便时尽早给我一个及时的答复。
典例剖析 (2021·全国甲卷改编)
假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会,并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友 Chris,向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括:
1.阐明写信事由;2.征求建议;3.表示感谢。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.请按如下格式作答。
佳作赏析 亮句解读
Dear Chris, Our school is planning to hold a series of class meetings [1]focused on Chinese traditional culture,which are to be presented on an English website.[2]Knowing your interest in China,I’m writing to seek your advice.【说明写信事由】 [3]It is universally acknowledged that there lie significant cultural differences between China and the Western countries.Therefore,your advice on [4]which aspects of Chinese culture appeal to Westerners would be invaluable.Would it be wise to include topics such as Confucianism,local customs or traditional forms of art like Peking Opera In addition,would you prefer short videos or browsing through illustrated photos?【阐明咨询的具体信息】 I’m sure that your insight would make a huge difference.Your timely reply would be greatly appreciated.【表示感谢,盼望回复】 Yours, Li Hua [1]过去分词短语作后置定语+非限制性定语从句,介绍背景信息; [2]现在分词短语作状语,说明写信的事由。 [3]it作形式主语+there引起的全部倒装,拓展背景。 [4]which引导宾语从句,阐明咨询的具体信息。
亮句集锦
1.传统文化班会
(1)I’m writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information concerning the class meeting about the traditional Chinese culture.
我写信是看您能否给我提供有关这次关于中国传统文化的班会的信息。
(2)I wonder if you could provide some specific information about the class meeting.
我想知道您能否提供一些关于班会的具体信息。
2.夏令营
(1)Many thanks for inviting me to your school’s Summer Science Camp.I am looking forward to it and would like to enquire about further details.
非常感谢你邀请我参加你们学校的暑期科学营。我很期待,并想询问更多的细节。
(2)I am delighted to have been selected to participate in the summer camp.So I’m writing to consult about the details of it.我很高兴被选中参加本次夏令营。因此,我写信来咨询有关细节。
(3)First of all,could you keep me informed of the specific schedule of the summer camp so that I can make preparations in advance 首先,你能不能告诉我夏令营的具体时间表,以便我提前准备?
(4)Secondly,I wonder if there is a student dormitory available.
其次,我想知道是否有可用的学生宿舍。
(5)And would you be kind enough to tell me about the costs associated with the summer camp activities as well as the accommodation fees
你能告诉我有关夏令营的活动费用和住宿费吗?
3.比赛
(1)Concerning the contest,I would like to know details such as the exact dates and the schedule to help me plan my trip accordingly.
关于比赛,我想知道诸如具体的日期和日程安排等细节,以帮助我相应地计划我的行程。
(2)In addition,I would like to know more about the contest format and procedures.
另外,我想对比赛的形式和程序了解得更多一些。
(3)If there is anything else that needs special attention,please inform me at your convenience.
如果还有其他需要特别注意的地方,请你在方便的时候告诉我。
4.课程
(1)Above all,my keen interest and wide range of hobbies drive me to be curious about the courses offered.
最重要的是,我浓厚的兴趣和广泛的爱好使我对所提供的课程感到好奇。
(2)Another two points I am not certain about are where I could accommodate myself and how much I need to pay in total.
我不确定的另外两点是我能住在哪里以及我总共需要支付多少费用。
(3)What’s more,for the better preparation,would you be so kind as to inform me of requirements of application
此外,为了准备得更好,你能告诉我申请的要求吗?
即时演练 (2024·浙江宁波十校联考)
假定你是李华,暑假在伦敦学习。你对当地一个社区在网上发布的志愿者招募信息十分感兴趣,于是给该社区写信进行咨询。内容包括:1.说明报名原因;2.询问相关情况;3.表达你的期待。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Sir/Madam,
Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua,an international student from China pursuing my studies in London during the summer break.Fascinated by your volunteer recruitment advertisement online,I’m writing to extend my anticipation to participate and enquire about some relevant information.
I take a great interest in the community culture and public service operations in the UK,and hope to seize this opportunity to gain a deeper insight into them and acquire more hands-on experience.Additionally,I’d like to establish new friendships through voluntary work and broaden my international perspective.Meanwhile,I’m wondering if you could keep me informed of the detailed information as well as the relevant schedules of the volunteering service so as to balance my academic commitments and the volunteer work.
Looking forward to your favorable reply.I can’t wait to join you.
Yours,
Li Hua