读后续写：艾米丽与詹姆斯的故事+讲义-2025届广东省高考二月第一次模拟考(一模)英语试题
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读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
On the eve of Thanksgiving Day, Emily, the proprietress of an inviting cafe, was in the process of concluding her business operations subsequent to an eventful day. Since the demise of her spouse a few years prior, she had consistently spent each Thanksgiving as a solitary individual, her progeny residing at a distance for college-level education and merely making sporadic telephone calls.
As she rotated the signboard to display “Closed”, preparing to confront yet another desolate holiday celebration, she observed a male individual seated on the frigid steps outside. He appeared to be in the latter part of his fourth decade, attired in garments that had seen better days, his countenance etched with the marks of arduous experiences. He raised his gaze, his eyes mirroring a blend of fatigue and unvoiced adversities. “Pardon me, Madam,” he uttered in a low voice, “I have been deprived of a proper and satisfying meal for several days. Would it be possible for you to spare a small portion ” Emily paused momentarily but promptly unlocked the door, gesturing warmly to invite him in. “It is Thanksgiving Eve,” she declared with an amiable smile, “No individual ought to experience hunger on this particular day.”
The male, who identified himself as James, expressed his gratitude and took a seat near the corner window. Emily proceeded to prepare a substantial and nourishing repast: steaming hot pumpkin pie, freshly-baked bread, and a roasted turkey. As James partook of the meal, he shared fragments of his life story — he had previously been a truck driver, but had unfortunately lost his occupation, which subsequently led to the loss of his dwelling place and compelled him to wander from one location to another. Emily listened with rapt attention, experiencing an unforeseen surge of empathetic sentiment as she established a connection with this unfamiliar person.
Upon the conclusion of the meal, James delved into his worn-out outer garment and produced a diminutive, meticulously folded paper crane. “I crafted this an extended period ago,” he mentioned in a gentle tone. “It is the final one in my possession. I desire for you to accept it, as a symbol of the benevolence you have demonstrated today.” Moved by this gesture, Emily expressed her appreciation and, on a sudden impulse, proposed a part-time employment opportunity at the cafe to James. James’s eyes filled with tears of thankfulness. “I would be honored to accept,” he responded.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
From that day forward, James worked at the cafe.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
One evening, as Emily and James were enjoying their dinner, Emily’s son unexpectedly called.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
艾米丽与詹姆斯的故事续写
续写要点（两段）
第一段：着重描写 James 在咖啡馆工作的日常表现，如他如何积极投入工作，与 Emily 的互动细节，以及他的存在对咖啡馆氛围和 Emily 生活的改变。可以描述他学会新技能、与顾客友好交流，和 Emily 在工作间隙的温馨对话等。
第二段：围绕 Emily 儿子的来电展开。讲述儿子到来后家庭氛围的变化，如孩子们与 James 的初次见面，大家一起准备感恩节的欢乐场景，以及这一系列事件对 Emily 内心的触动，突出家庭团聚和新友谊带来的温暖。
情感线（150 字）
故事伊始，Emily 因丈夫离世、孩子不在身边，在感恩节前夕满心孤独。James 的出现，让她心生怜悯，这是善良引发的情感触动。James 对 Emily 的感激，使两人关系初步建立。随着 James 在咖啡馆工作，他们的友谊逐渐加深，彼此陪伴带来温暖。儿子来电说要回家，Emily 从孤独中走出，满心欢喜，家庭的亲情与新建立的友情交织，让她感受到前所未有的幸福，情感从孤寂走向温暖与满足。
故事线（6 条）
James 在咖啡馆认真学习制作咖啡和糕点，从最初的生疏到逐渐熟练，他制作的点心深受顾客喜爱，吸引了更多人光顾咖啡馆。
Emily 与 James 在工作之余，常常分享生活中的趣事，James 会讲述自己过去当卡车司机时的见闻，Emily 则分享育儿经验，两人关系愈发亲密。
Emily 儿子来电告知要回家过感恩节，Emily 兴奋地将这个消息告诉 James，James 也为她感到高兴，并主动提出帮忙准备感恩节的盛宴。
感恩节当天，Emily 的孩子们到家，看到 James 在咖啡馆忙碌，孩子们好奇地与 James 交流，James 热情地向他们介绍咖啡馆的新变化。
一家人围坐在一起准备感恩节晚餐，大家分工合作，有的摆放餐具，有的端菜上桌，充满欢声笑语，氛围温馨融洽。
晚餐时，大家分享着彼此的生活，Emily 感慨这个感恩节的不同，有家人的陪伴，还有 James 这个新朋友，她感受到了久违的完整与幸福。
主旨升华句 5 句英文
This Thanksgiving, Emily realized that kindness could not only warm a stranger's heart but also bring new light and happiness to her own life.（这个感恩节，Emily 意识到善良不仅能温暖一个陌生人的心，还能为她自己的生活带来新的光明与幸福。）
The unexpected friendship between Emily and James proved that in the coldest of times, a simple act of kindness could kindle a long - lasting connection.（Emily 和 James 之间意外的友谊证明了，在最寒冷的时刻，一个简单的善举能点燃一段长久的情谊。）
As they sat around the table on Thanksgiving Day, the gathering was not just about a meal but a celebration of new beginnings and the power of human connection.（当他们在感恩节围坐在餐桌旁时，这次相聚不仅仅是一顿饭，更是对新开始和人与人之间联系力量的庆祝。）
This Thanksgiving, Emily learned that family was not just about blood relations but also about the people who walked into her life and became an important part of it, like James.（这个感恩节，Emily 明白了家庭不仅仅是血缘关系，还包括那些走进她生活并成为重要部分的人，比如 James。）
The story of Emily and James on that Thanksgiving Eve showed that even in the face of loneliness, a single act of compassion could create a beautiful story of friendship and togetherness.（Emily 和 James 在那个感恩节前夕的故事表明，即使面对孤独，一个同情的举动也能创造出一个关于友谊和团聚的美好故事。）
两篇写作示范
示范一
From that day forward, James worked at the cafe. He was eager to learn and always wore a smile. Every morning, he would be the first one there, sweeping the floor and setting up the tables. He quickly mastered the art of making the perfect latte, and customers often praised his skills. Emily was impressed by his dedication. After a busy day, they would sit outside the cafe, watching the sunset and chatting. Their conversations ranged from their dreams to the little joys of daily life. James' presence filled the once - quiet cafe with warmth, and Emily felt less alone.
One evening, as Emily and James were enjoying their dinner, Emily's son unexpectedly called. He said he and his sister were coming home for Thanksgiving. Emily was overjoyed. She immediately told James the good news. James was happy for her and offered to help prepare for the big day. On Thanksgiving, when Emily's children arrived, they were greeted with a table full of delicious food prepared by James. The four of them spent the day together, sharing stories and laughter. For the first time in years, Emily felt truly happy, surrounded by family and a new friend.
示范二
From that day forward, James worked at the cafe. He took on every task with enthusiasm. He learned to bake the most amazing muffins, and the smell of freshly - baked goods filled the cafe every morning. He also became a favorite among the customers, always chatting with them and making them feel welcome. Emily watched with delight as the cafe became more lively. After work, they would play board games in the corner of the cafe, laughing and teasing each other. James' friendship had become a precious part of Emily's life.
One evening, as Emily and James were enjoying their dinner, Emily's son unexpectedly called. He informed her that they were coming home for Thanksgiving. Emily's eyes sparkled with excitement. She and James started planning the Thanksgiving feast right away. When her children arrived, they were charmed by James. They all worked together in the kitchen, making the turkey and decorating the table. The house was filled with the sounds of joy and the spirit of Thanksgiving. Emily was deeply touched, realizing that this Thanksgiving was special because of the new bonds she had formed.
【参考答案】
From that day forward, James worked at the cafe. He was a hardworking and reliable employee, always arriving early and staying late to help with any tasks that needed to be done. Emily was grateful for his help, and the cafe began to thrive under their joint efforts. James also became a beloved member of the community, known for his kindness and willingness to help others.
One evening, as Emily and James were enjoying their dinner, Emily’s son unexpectedly called. Emily was overjoyed to hear this news. She told her son about James and how he had become an important part of her life. When her son arrived, he was surprised but happy to see James. The three of them spent a wonderful Thanksgiving together, sharing a big meal and lots of laughter. James felt a sense of belonging for the first time in a long while, and Emily was grateful that this Thanksgiving was filled with love and warmth.
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
On the eve of Thanksgiving Day, Emily, the proprietress of an inviting cafe, was in the process of concluding her business operations subsequent to an eventful day. Since the demise of her spouse a few years prior, she had consistently spent each Thanksgiving as a solitary individual, her progeny residing at a distance for college-level education and merely making sporadic telephone calls.
As she rotated the signboard to display “Closed”, preparing to confront yet another desolate holiday celebration, she observed a male individual seated on the frigid steps outside. He appeared to be in the latter part of his fourth decade, attired in garments that had seen better days, his countenance etched with the marks of arduous experiences. He raised his gaze, his eyes mirroring a blend of fatigue and unvoiced adversities. “Pardon me, Madam,” he uttered in a low voice, “I have been deprived of a proper and satisfying meal for several days. Would it be possible for you to spare a small portion ” Emily paused momentarily but promptly unlocked the door, gesturing warmly to invite him in. “It is Thanksgiving Eve,” she declared with an amiable smile, “No individual ought to experience hunger on this particular day.”
The male, who identified himself as James, expressed his gratitude and took a seat near the corner window. Emily proceeded to prepare a substantial and nourishing repast: steaming hot pumpkin pie, freshly-baked bread, and a roasted turkey. As James partook of the meal, he shared fragments of his life story — he had previously been a truck driver, but had unfortunately lost his occupation, which subsequently led to the loss of his dwelling place and compelled him to wander from one location to another. Emily listened with rapt attention, experiencing an unforeseen surge of empathetic sentiment as she established a connection with this unfamiliar person.
Upon the conclusion of the meal, James delved into his worn-out outer garment and produced a diminutive, meticulously folded paper crane. “I crafted this an extended period ago,” he mentioned in a gentle tone. “It is the final one in my possession. I desire for you to accept it, as a symbol of the benevolence you have demonstrated today.” Moved by this gesture, Emily expressed her appreciation and, on a sudden impulse, proposed a part-time employment opportunity at the cafe to James. James’s eyes filled with tears of thankfulness. “I would be honored to accept,” he responded.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
From that day forward, James worked at the cafe.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
One evening, as Emily and James were enjoying their dinner, Emily’s son unexpectedly called.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
艾米丽与詹姆斯的故事续写
续写要点（两段）
第一段：着重描写 James 在咖啡馆工作的日常表现，如他如何积极投入工作，与 Emily 的互动细节，以及他的存在对咖啡馆氛围和 Emily 生活的改变。可以描述他学会新技能、与顾客友好交流，和 Emily 在工作间隙的温馨对话等。
第二段：围绕 Emily 儿子的来电展开。讲述儿子到来后家庭氛围的变化，如孩子们与 James 的初次见面，大家一起准备感恩节的欢乐场景，以及这一系列事件对 Emily 内心的触动，突出家庭团聚和新友谊带来的温暖。
情感线（150 字）
故事伊始，Emily 因丈夫离世、孩子不在身边，在感恩节前夕满心孤独。James 的出现，让她心生怜悯，这是善良引发的情感触动。James 对 Emily 的感激，使两人关系初步建立。随着 James 在咖啡馆工作，他们的友谊逐渐加深，彼此陪伴带来温暖。儿子来电说要回家，Emily 从孤独中走出，满心欢喜，家庭的亲情与新建立的友情交织，让她感受到前所未有的幸福，情感从孤寂走向温暖与满足。
故事线（6 条）
James 在咖啡馆认真学习制作咖啡和糕点，从最初的生疏到逐渐熟练，他制作的点心深受顾客喜爱，吸引了更多人光顾咖啡馆。
Emily 与 James 在工作之余，常常分享生活中的趣事，James 会讲述自己过去当卡车司机时的见闻，Emily 则分享育儿经验，两人关系愈发亲密。
Emily 儿子来电告知要回家过感恩节，Emily 兴奋地将这个消息告诉 James，James 也为她感到高兴，并主动提出帮忙准备感恩节的盛宴。
感恩节当天，Emily 的孩子们到家，看到 James 在咖啡馆忙碌，孩子们好奇地与 James 交流，James 热情地向他们介绍咖啡馆的新变化。
一家人围坐在一起准备感恩节晚餐，大家分工合作，有的摆放餐具，有的端菜上桌，充满欢声笑语，氛围温馨融洽。
晚餐时，大家分享着彼此的生活，Emily 感慨这个感恩节的不同，有家人的陪伴，还有 James 这个新朋友，她感受到了久违的完整与幸福。
主旨升华句 5 句英文
This Thanksgiving, Emily realized that kindness could not only warm a stranger's heart but also bring new light and happiness to her own life.（这个感恩节，Emily 意识到善良不仅能温暖一个陌生人的心，还能为她自己的生活带来新的光明与幸福。）
The unexpected friendship between Emily and James proved that in the coldest of times, a simple act of kindness could kindle a long - lasting connection.（Emily 和 James 之间意外的友谊证明了，在最寒冷的时刻，一个简单的善举能点燃一段长久的情谊。）
As they sat around the table on Thanksgiving Day, the gathering was not just about a meal but a celebration of new beginnings and the power of human connection.（当他们在感恩节围坐在餐桌旁时，这次相聚不仅仅是一顿饭，更是对新开始和人与人之间联系力量的庆祝。）
This Thanksgiving, Emily learned that family was not just about blood relations but also about the people who walked into her life and became an important part of it, like James.（这个感恩节，Emily 明白了家庭不仅仅是血缘关系，还包括那些走进她生活并成为重要部分的人，比如 James。）
The story of Emily and James on that Thanksgiving Eve showed that even in the face of loneliness, a single act of compassion could create a beautiful story of friendship and togetherness.（Emily 和 James 在那个感恩节前夕的故事表明，即使面对孤独，一个同情的举动也能创造出一个关于友谊和团聚的美好故事。）
两篇写作示范
示范一
From that day forward, James worked at the cafe. He was eager to learn and always wore a smile. Every morning, he would be the first one there, sweeping the floor and setting up the tables. He quickly mastered the art of making the perfect latte, and customers often praised his skills. Emily was impressed by his dedication. After a busy day, they would sit outside the cafe, watching the sunset and chatting. Their conversations ranged from their dreams to the little joys of daily life. James' presence filled the once - quiet cafe with warmth, and Emily felt less alone.
One evening, as Emily and James were enjoying their dinner, Emily's son unexpectedly called. He said he and his sister were coming home for Thanksgiving. Emily was overjoyed. She immediately told James the good news. James was happy for her and offered to help prepare for the big day. On Thanksgiving, when Emily's children arrived, they were greeted with a table full of delicious food prepared by James. The four of them spent the day together, sharing stories and laughter. For the first time in years, Emily felt truly happy, surrounded by family and a new friend.
示范二
From that day forward, James worked at the cafe. He took on every task with enthusiasm. He learned to bake the most amazing muffins, and the smell of freshly - baked goods filled the cafe every morning. He also became a favorite among the customers, always chatting with them and making them feel welcome. Emily watched with delight as the cafe became more lively. After work, they would play board games in the corner of the cafe, laughing and teasing each other. James' friendship had become a precious part of Emily's life.
One evening, as Emily and James were enjoying their dinner, Emily's son unexpectedly called. He informed her that they were coming home for Thanksgiving. Emily's eyes sparkled with excitement. She and James started planning the Thanksgiving feast right away. When her children arrived, they were charmed by James. They all worked together in the kitchen, making the turkey and decorating the table. The house was filled with the sounds of joy and the spirit of Thanksgiving. Emily was deeply touched, realizing that this Thanksgiving was special because of the new bonds she had formed.
【参考答案】
From that day forward, James worked at the cafe. He was a hardworking and reliable employee, always arriving early and staying late to help with any tasks that needed to be done. Emily was grateful for his help, and the cafe began to thrive under their joint efforts. James also became a beloved member of the community, known for his kindness and willingness to help others.
One evening, as Emily and James were enjoying their dinner, Emily’s son unexpectedly called. Emily was overjoyed to hear this news. She told her son about James and how he had become an important part of her life. When her son arrived, he was surprised but happy to see James. The three of them spent a wonderful Thanksgiving together, sharing a big meal and lots of laughter. James felt a sense of belonging for the first time in a long while, and Emily was grateful that this Thanksgiving was filled with love and warmth.