读后续写:帮助莱利夫人的故事+讲义-山东省枣庄市薛城区、山亭区2024-2025学年高一上学期期末考试英语试题

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名称 读后续写:帮助莱利夫人的故事+讲义-山东省枣庄市薛城区、山亭区2024-2025学年高一上学期期末考试英语试题
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读后续写
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Mrs. Riley and I always shout at each other. I shout because she can’t hear me, and she shouts because she can’t hear herself.
“What do you need from the store ” I’ll cry out.
“Bananas,” she’ll cry out back.
You don’t realize what a funny word bananas is until you hear it shouted by an eighty-year-old woman.
I work for Mrs. Riley. I buy groceries for her at the supermarket on Nostrand Avenue, and sometimes I dust and sweep her apartment. The best part, though, is taking care of Sam.
Sam is Mrs. Riley’s canary(金丝雀). He’s bright yellow, and he sings all the time. That’s one thing about canaries. They’re always cheerful.
That’s what I’m saving my money for. I’m going to buy a canary. And besides the canary, I have to get a cage and swings (秋千) and toys and food.
“Do you have enough money yet, girl ” Mrs. Riley always shouts at me.
“Not yet,” I shout back. “Soon.”
And she always calls me girl, not Carla. Sometimes I think she doesn’t remember my name.
Last Thursday I ran upstairs to Mrs. Riley’s. She wasn’t in her usual place by the window. She was in bed. She was sick.
“You can’t work for me anymore,” Mrs. Riley said. She coughed. “I have to take medicine, and it costs a lot. I can’t pay you.”
I felt sick to my stomach. How would I find another job I went over and stuck my finger in Sam’s cage. He hopped on his swing and sang hello.
“I’m sorry that you’re sick,” I shouted to Mrs. Riley.
Then I turned and left.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为100个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
But that night I couldn’t sleep. The next day I ran upstairs.
续写帮助莱利夫人的故事
续写要点
第一段续写:以 “But that night I couldn’t sleep.” 为开头,着重描写 “我” 内心的挣扎与牵挂。可以回忆与 Mrs. Riley 相处的点滴,比如一起为买香蕉大声呼喊的场景,照顾 Sam 时的快乐。内心纠结于自己失去工作的困境以及 Mrs. Riley 生病无人照顾的艰难处境,最终决定放下找新工作的急切,先去关心 Mrs. Riley。
第二段续写:“The next day I ran upstairs.” 作为起始,描绘 “我” 再次见到 Mrs. Riley 时的场景。可以带上一些自己力所能及的物品,如一小袋水果。Mrs. Riley 看到 “我” 时的惊讶与感动,“我” 向她表明自己不是为了工作,而是真心关心她。之后两人一起照顾 Sam,在互动中体现彼此情感的升温。
情感线
第一段:从最初因失去工作而产生的焦虑,到对 Mrs. Riley 的担忧,内心在自我利益与他人困境之间徘徊。随着回忆的深入,对 Mrs. Riley 的牵挂逐渐占据上风,展现出 “我” 善良且重情的一面,情感从迷茫不安转向坚定关心。
第二段:“我” 带着关心与温暖上楼,Mrs. Riley 从惊讶到感动,两人之间的情感超越了雇佣关系,上升为相互关怀的情谊。在照顾 Sam 的过程中,情感进一步深化,充满温馨与和谐,体现出人与人之间真挚的情感在困境中得以升华。
故事线
“我” 当晚辗转反侧,回忆起与 Mrs. Riley 相处的日常琐事,决定暂时放下找新工作的想法,先去关心生病的她。
第二天,“我” 跑到 Mrs. Riley 家,发现她的状况比想象中更糟糕,于是主动承担起一些家务,如打扫房间、整理物品。
在照顾 Mrs. Riley 的过程中,“我” 意外发现自己在照顾病人方面的能力,这让 “我” 萌生了一个新的职业想法。
随着时间推移,Mrs. Riley 的病情逐渐好转,她对 “我” 的帮助充满感激,提出以某种方式回报 “我”。
“我” 拒绝了 Mrs. Riley 的物质回报,而是希望她能将 Sam 的照顾经验传授给 “我”,为自己未来养金丝雀做准备。
最终,“我” 不仅收获了与 Mrs. Riley 深厚的情谊,还找到了新的职业方向,同时离拥有自己的金丝雀梦想也更近了一步。
主旨升华句
In the face of difficulties, the bond of care and kindness between people can shine brightly, lighting up the path ahead.(在困难面前,人与人之间关怀与善良的纽带能够闪耀光芒,照亮前方的道路。)
True friendship and compassion emerge when we put aside our own concerns and reach out to those in need, enriching our lives in unexpected ways.(当我们放下自身的忧虑,向有需要的人伸出援手时,真正的友谊和同情便会浮现,以意想不到的方式丰富我们的生活。)
The experience of helping Mrs. Riley taught me that the value of human connection lies not in material gain but in the warmth and support we offer each other.(帮助莱利夫人的经历让我明白,人与人之间联系的价值不在于物质收获,而在于我们彼此给予的温暖与支持。)
Through this journey, I realized that even a small act of kindness can bring about a significant change, both in the life of others and in our own hearts.(通过这段经历,我意识到,即使是一个小小的善举也能带来重大的改变,无论是在他人的生活中,还是在我们自己的心中。)
Our relationship, born out of a simple job, blossomed into a deep friendship, proving that kindness has the power to transform ordinary connections into extraordinary bonds.(我们的关系,从一份简单的工作开始,发展成为深厚的友谊,证明了善良有力量将普通的联系转化为非凡的纽带。)
写作示范一
But that night I couldn’t sleep. Mrs. Riley’s sickly face kept flashing in my mind. I tossed and turned, thinking about how lonely she must be. Despite losing my job, I decided she needed me more. Memories of our loud conversations about bananas and the joy of taking care of Sam filled my heart. I couldn't just abandon her.
The next day I ran upstairs. I brought a few fresh bananas with me. When I knocked on the door, Mrs. Riley opened it with a weak smile. “I came to check on you,” I shouted. Her eyes welled up with tears. We sat together, and I told her not to worry. I helped her feed Sam, and his cheerful chirping filled the room, making the atmosphere much warmer. From then on, I visited her regularly, and our bond grew stronger, turning a job into a beautiful friendship.
写作示范二
But that night I couldn’t sleep. Thoughts of Mrs. Riley’s illness and my uncertain future swirled in my head. I remembered how she always called me “girl” and our shared love for Sam. I knew I had to do something. Instead of focusing on my job loss, I thought about how I could help her.
The next day I ran upstairs. I had some homemade soup in my bag. Mrs. Riley was surprised to see me. “I made this for you,” I shouted. She was touched. As I served her the soup, we talked about Sam. I offered to clean the apartment a bit. While working, I realized that helping her made me feel better too. Our shouts became more like friendly conversations, and I knew that this was the start of a new chapter in our relationship, one based on care rather than payment.
参考答案
But that night I couldn’t sleep. It wasn’t fair that Mrs. Riley had to get sick. How would I buy a canary of my own Then I thought that Mrs. Riley was more alone than I was. At least I had Mom. Mrs. Riley only had Sam. How would she get things from the store without me
The next day I ran upstairs. Mrs. Riley was still in bed. “What do you want from the store ” I shouted.
“I told you I can’t pay you,” she said.
“I’ll go anyway,” I said.
Mrs. Riley looked at me for a minute, then told me what she needed.
When I got back, she spoke. “Since I can’t pay you for doing things for me, I’ll-I’ll give you Sam.”
“I can’t take Sam,” I said. “He belongs to you. And I’ll keep working for you. You don’t have to pay me.”
“You’re a good friend, Carla,” Mrs. Riley said.
Who says friends have to be your own age