读后续写：感恩节故事+讲义-2025届广东省高考二月第一次模拟考(一模)英语试题
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读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
On the eve of Thanksgiving Day, Emily, the proprietress of an inviting cafe, was in the process of concluding her business operations subsequent to an eventful day. Since the demise of her spouse a few years prior, she had consistently spent each Thanksgiving as a solitary individual, her progeny residing at a distance for college-level education and merely making sporadic telephone calls.
As she rotated the signboard to display “Closed”, preparing to confront yet another desolate holiday celebration, she observed a male individual seated on the frigid steps outside. He appeared to be in the latter part of his fourth decade, attired in garments that had seen better days, his countenance etched with the marks of arduous experiences. He raised his gaze, his eyes mirroring a blend of fatigue and unvoiced adversities. “Pardon me, Madam,” he uttered in a low voice, “I have been deprived of a proper and satisfying meal for several days. Would it be possible for you to spare a small portion ” Emily paused momentarily but promptly unlocked the door, gesturing warmly to invite him in. “It is Thanksgiving Eve,” she declared with an amiable smile, “No individual ought to experience hunger on this particular day.”
The male, who identified himself as James, expressed his gratitude and took a seat near the corner window. Emily proceeded to prepare a substantial and nourishing repast: steaming hot pumpkin pie, freshly-baked bread, and a roasted turkey. As James partook of the meal, he shared fragments of his life story — he had previously been a truck driver, but had unfortunately lost his occupation, which subsequently led to the loss of his dwelling place and compelled him to wander from one location to another. Emily listened with rapt attention, experiencing an unforeseen surge of empathetic sentiment as she established a connection with this unfamiliar person.
Upon the conclusion of the meal, James delved into his worn-out outer garment and produced a diminutive, meticulously folded paper crane. “I crafted this an extended period ago,” he mentioned in a gentle tone. “It is the final one in my possession. I desire for you to accept it, as a symbol of the benevolence you have demonstrated today.” Moved by this gesture, Emily expressed her appreciation and, on a sudden impulse, proposed a part-time employment opportunity at the cafe to James. James’s eyes filled with tears of thankfulness. “I would be honored to accept,” he responded.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
From that day forward, James worked at the cafe.
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One evening, as Emily and James were enjoying their dinner, Emily’s son unexpectedly called.
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感恩节故事续写
续写要点（两段）
第一段：
详细描绘 James 在咖啡馆工作的日常状态。描述他对工作的认真负责，比如每天早早到店准备食材，仔细擦拭每一张桌子，用心为顾客推荐饮品和点心。通过与顾客的互动展现他的热情，顾客们因为他的服务而常来光顾，让咖啡馆的生意愈发红火。同时，深入刻画他与 Emily 之间的互动，他们在忙碌的工作中相互配合，休息时分享生活中的趣事，情感逐渐深厚，让原本孤独的 Emily 感受到了温暖与陪伴。
运用细节描写，如 “James would arrive at the cafe before dawn, his eyes lighting up as he started to arrange the fresh flowers on each table, creating a cozy atmosphere for the coming customers.” 来展现他的用心。
第二段：
以 Emily 儿子的电话为切入点，细致描述儿子在电话中的话语，表达他对母亲的思念以及对 James 帮助母亲的感激之情，强调他决定回家过感恩节的决心。接着描述 Emily 接到电话时的惊喜反应，她可能会激动得热泪盈眶，手微微颤抖。然后揭示 James 在背后联系她儿子的举动，Emily 得知真相后，内心充满了对 James 的感激与感动。最后描绘感恩节当天三人相聚的温馨场景，他们一起准备丰盛的晚餐，分享彼此的故事，笑声回荡在房间里，展现出家庭团聚和新友谊带来的美好。
例如 “Emily's hands trembled as she held the phone, her eyes widening in disbelief at the news of her son's return. Tears welled up in her eyes, blurring her vision as she looked at James, who was standing beside her with a gentle smile.” 来体现 Emily 的激动。
情感线（150 字）
起初，Emily 因丈夫离世、孩子不在身边，内心孤独且失落，在感恩节前夕更是感到凄凉。遇到 James 并给予帮助后，她在助人过程中收获了快乐，与 James 之间也渐渐产生了同病相怜的情感。随着 James 在咖啡馆工作，他们的交流日益频繁，情谊愈发深厚，Emily 不再感到孤单。当儿子来电表示要回家过感恩节时，Emily 从惊喜到感动，而这一切都源于 James 的善意之举，使得三人之间的情感紧密相连，从孤独走向温暖，从陌生走向亲密，完美诠释了爱与关怀能驱散孤独的力量。
故事线（6 条）
James 在咖啡馆全身心投入工作，认真学习各项技能，从最初的生疏到后来熟练地制作各种饮品和点心，他的工作能力不断提升，得到了顾客的一致好评。
Emily 与 James 在工作中配合默契，日常交流时分享彼此的过往经历、梦想和担忧，他们逐渐成为彼此生活中重要的人，关系超越了普通的雇主与员工。
咖啡馆因为 James 热情周到的服务，吸引了越来越多的新顾客，老顾客也更加频繁地光顾，店铺的生意日益兴隆，在社区中的知名度不断提高。
James 看到 Emily 对家庭的思念，主动联系了她的儿子，告知了咖啡馆的情况以及 Emily 的现状，促使 Emily 的儿子决定回家过感恩节，给 Emily 一个惊喜。
Emily 接到儿子的电话，得知 James 的用心后，对 James 充满了感激，她意识到 James 不仅是工作上的好帮手，更是生活中的挚友。
感恩节当天，Emily、James 和她的儿子相聚在一起，共同度过了一个温馨、欢乐的节日，他们一起准备美食，分享生活中的点滴，开启了新的美好篇章。
主旨升华句 5 句英文
This story shows that even in the coldest of times, a small act of kindness can plant the seeds of warmth, which will eventually blossom into a beautiful friendship and a sense of family.（这个故事表明，即使在最寒冷的时刻，一个小小的善举也能播下温暖的种子，最终绽放成美好的友谊和家的感觉。）
From this experience, we learn that the bonds formed through compassion and mutual help can bridge the gaps of loneliness and transform lives in unexpected ways.（从这次经历中，我们学到，通过同情和互助形成的纽带可以跨越孤独的鸿沟，以意想不到的方式改变生活。）
The tale of Emily and James teaches us that true happiness lies not only in receiving but also in giving, and that a caring heart can turn strangers into family.（Emily 和 James 的故事告诉我们，真正的幸福不仅在于接受，还在于给予，一颗关爱的心能把陌生人变成家人。）
This heart - warming story reminds us that in the journey of life, the kindness we offer to others can come back to us in the most wonderful forms, like a boomerang of love.（这个温馨的故事提醒我们，在人生的旅途中，我们给予他人的善意会以最美妙的形式回馈给我们，就像爱的回旋镖。）
As we see in Emily's and James's story, the power of kindness and the spirit of Thanksgiving can bring people together, creating a community filled with love and hope.（正如我们在 Emily 和 James 的故事中看到的，善良的力量和感恩的精神能将人们聚集在一起，创造一个充满爱与希望的社群。）
写作示范一
From that day forward, James worked at the cafe. He was always brimming with enthusiasm. Every morning, he would whistle while he cleaned the windows, making them shine brightly. He quickly mastered the art of making coffee, creating latte art that attracted customers. Emily watched him with a smile, and they often chatted about their pasts. James's stories of his travels as a truck driver fascinated Emily. The cafe became a lively place, filled with the laughter of customers and the friendly banter between James and Emily.
One evening, as Emily and James were enjoying their dinner, Emily’s son unexpectedly called. “Mom, James told me how much you've been through and how happy you seem now. I miss you so much. I'm coming home for Thanksgiving.” Emily was stunned, her eyes welling up with tears. She looked at James, who just smiled. “I thought you deserved a proper family Thanksgiving.” On Thanksgiving Day, they all gathered around the table, sharing stories and creating new memories. The once - lonely cafe was now filled with the warmth of family and friendship.
写作示范二
From that day forward, James worked at the cafe. He took his responsibilities seriously, always making sure the cafe was spotless. He would remember the regular customers' preferences and greet them by name. His friendly attitude made the customers feel at home. Emily and James became inseparable. They would brainstorm new menu items together, and their ideas made the cafe more popular.
One evening, as Emily and James were enjoying their dinner, Emily’s son called. “Mom, I heard from James that you've found a new lease on life. I'm coming home. I want to meet this amazing person who has changed your life.” Emily was overjoyed. She realized that James had not only brought life to the cafe but also brought her family closer. On Thanksgiving, they cooked together, their laughter filling the air. It was a day filled with gratitude, for the new friendship and the return of family.
参考范文：
From that day forward, James worked at the cafe. He was a hardworking and reliable employee, always arriving early and staying late to help with any tasks that needed to be done. Emily was grateful for his help, and the cafe began to thrive under their joint efforts. James also became a beloved member of the community, known for his kindness and willingness to help others.
One evening, as Emily and James were enjoying their dinner, Emily’s son unexpectedly called. Emily was overjoyed to hear this news. She told her son about James and how he had become an important part of her life. When her son arrived, he was surprised but happy to see James. The three of them spent a wonderful Thanksgiving together, sharing a big meal and lots of laughter. James felt a sense of belonging for the first time in a long while, and Emily was grateful that this Thanksgiving was filled with love and warmth.
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
On the eve of Thanksgiving Day, Emily, the proprietress of an inviting cafe, was in the process of concluding her business operations subsequent to an eventful day. Since the demise of her spouse a few years prior, she had consistently spent each Thanksgiving as a solitary individual, her progeny residing at a distance for college-level education and merely making sporadic telephone calls.
As she rotated the signboard to display “Closed”, preparing to confront yet another desolate holiday celebration, she observed a male individual seated on the frigid steps outside. He appeared to be in the latter part of his fourth decade, attired in garments that had seen better days, his countenance etched with the marks of arduous experiences. He raised his gaze, his eyes mirroring a blend of fatigue and unvoiced adversities. “Pardon me, Madam,” he uttered in a low voice, “I have been deprived of a proper and satisfying meal for several days. Would it be possible for you to spare a small portion ” Emily paused momentarily but promptly unlocked the door, gesturing warmly to invite him in. “It is Thanksgiving Eve,” she declared with an amiable smile, “No individual ought to experience hunger on this particular day.”
The male, who identified himself as James, expressed his gratitude and took a seat near the corner window. Emily proceeded to prepare a substantial and nourishing repast: steaming hot pumpkin pie, freshly-baked bread, and a roasted turkey. As James partook of the meal, he shared fragments of his life story — he had previously been a truck driver, but had unfortunately lost his occupation, which subsequently led to the loss of his dwelling place and compelled him to wander from one location to another. Emily listened with rapt attention, experiencing an unforeseen surge of empathetic sentiment as she established a connection with this unfamiliar person.
Upon the conclusion of the meal, James delved into his worn-out outer garment and produced a diminutive, meticulously folded paper crane. “I crafted this an extended period ago,” he mentioned in a gentle tone. “It is the final one in my possession. I desire for you to accept it, as a symbol of the benevolence you have demonstrated today.” Moved by this gesture, Emily expressed her appreciation and, on a sudden impulse, proposed a part-time employment opportunity at the cafe to James. James’s eyes filled with tears of thankfulness. “I would be honored to accept,” he responded.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
From that day forward, James worked at the cafe.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
One evening, as Emily and James were enjoying their dinner, Emily’s son unexpectedly called.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
感恩节故事续写
续写要点（两段）
第一段：
详细描绘 James 在咖啡馆工作的日常状态。描述他对工作的认真负责，比如每天早早到店准备食材，仔细擦拭每一张桌子，用心为顾客推荐饮品和点心。通过与顾客的互动展现他的热情，顾客们因为他的服务而常来光顾，让咖啡馆的生意愈发红火。同时，深入刻画他与 Emily 之间的互动，他们在忙碌的工作中相互配合，休息时分享生活中的趣事，情感逐渐深厚，让原本孤独的 Emily 感受到了温暖与陪伴。
运用细节描写，如 “James would arrive at the cafe before dawn, his eyes lighting up as he started to arrange the fresh flowers on each table, creating a cozy atmosphere for the coming customers.” 来展现他的用心。
第二段：
以 Emily 儿子的电话为切入点，细致描述儿子在电话中的话语，表达他对母亲的思念以及对 James 帮助母亲的感激之情，强调他决定回家过感恩节的决心。接着描述 Emily 接到电话时的惊喜反应，她可能会激动得热泪盈眶，手微微颤抖。然后揭示 James 在背后联系她儿子的举动，Emily 得知真相后，内心充满了对 James 的感激与感动。最后描绘感恩节当天三人相聚的温馨场景，他们一起准备丰盛的晚餐，分享彼此的故事，笑声回荡在房间里，展现出家庭团聚和新友谊带来的美好。
例如 “Emily's hands trembled as she held the phone, her eyes widening in disbelief at the news of her son's return. Tears welled up in her eyes, blurring her vision as she looked at James, who was standing beside her with a gentle smile.” 来体现 Emily 的激动。
情感线（150 字）
起初，Emily 因丈夫离世、孩子不在身边，内心孤独且失落，在感恩节前夕更是感到凄凉。遇到 James 并给予帮助后，她在助人过程中收获了快乐，与 James 之间也渐渐产生了同病相怜的情感。随着 James 在咖啡馆工作，他们的交流日益频繁，情谊愈发深厚，Emily 不再感到孤单。当儿子来电表示要回家过感恩节时，Emily 从惊喜到感动，而这一切都源于 James 的善意之举，使得三人之间的情感紧密相连，从孤独走向温暖，从陌生走向亲密，完美诠释了爱与关怀能驱散孤独的力量。
故事线（6 条）
James 在咖啡馆全身心投入工作，认真学习各项技能，从最初的生疏到后来熟练地制作各种饮品和点心，他的工作能力不断提升，得到了顾客的一致好评。
Emily 与 James 在工作中配合默契，日常交流时分享彼此的过往经历、梦想和担忧，他们逐渐成为彼此生活中重要的人，关系超越了普通的雇主与员工。
咖啡馆因为 James 热情周到的服务，吸引了越来越多的新顾客，老顾客也更加频繁地光顾，店铺的生意日益兴隆，在社区中的知名度不断提高。
James 看到 Emily 对家庭的思念，主动联系了她的儿子，告知了咖啡馆的情况以及 Emily 的现状，促使 Emily 的儿子决定回家过感恩节，给 Emily 一个惊喜。
Emily 接到儿子的电话，得知 James 的用心后，对 James 充满了感激，她意识到 James 不仅是工作上的好帮手，更是生活中的挚友。
感恩节当天，Emily、James 和她的儿子相聚在一起，共同度过了一个温馨、欢乐的节日，他们一起准备美食，分享生活中的点滴，开启了新的美好篇章。
主旨升华句 5 句英文
This story shows that even in the coldest of times, a small act of kindness can plant the seeds of warmth, which will eventually blossom into a beautiful friendship and a sense of family.（这个故事表明，即使在最寒冷的时刻，一个小小的善举也能播下温暖的种子，最终绽放成美好的友谊和家的感觉。）
From this experience, we learn that the bonds formed through compassion and mutual help can bridge the gaps of loneliness and transform lives in unexpected ways.（从这次经历中，我们学到，通过同情和互助形成的纽带可以跨越孤独的鸿沟，以意想不到的方式改变生活。）
The tale of Emily and James teaches us that true happiness lies not only in receiving but also in giving, and that a caring heart can turn strangers into family.（Emily 和 James 的故事告诉我们，真正的幸福不仅在于接受，还在于给予，一颗关爱的心能把陌生人变成家人。）
This heart - warming story reminds us that in the journey of life, the kindness we offer to others can come back to us in the most wonderful forms, like a boomerang of love.（这个温馨的故事提醒我们，在人生的旅途中，我们给予他人的善意会以最美妙的形式回馈给我们，就像爱的回旋镖。）
As we see in Emily's and James's story, the power of kindness and the spirit of Thanksgiving can bring people together, creating a community filled with love and hope.（正如我们在 Emily 和 James 的故事中看到的，善良的力量和感恩的精神能将人们聚集在一起，创造一个充满爱与希望的社群。）
写作示范一
From that day forward, James worked at the cafe. He was always brimming with enthusiasm. Every morning, he would whistle while he cleaned the windows, making them shine brightly. He quickly mastered the art of making coffee, creating latte art that attracted customers. Emily watched him with a smile, and they often chatted about their pasts. James's stories of his travels as a truck driver fascinated Emily. The cafe became a lively place, filled with the laughter of customers and the friendly banter between James and Emily.
One evening, as Emily and James were enjoying their dinner, Emily’s son unexpectedly called. “Mom, James told me how much you've been through and how happy you seem now. I miss you so much. I'm coming home for Thanksgiving.” Emily was stunned, her eyes welling up with tears. She looked at James, who just smiled. “I thought you deserved a proper family Thanksgiving.” On Thanksgiving Day, they all gathered around the table, sharing stories and creating new memories. The once - lonely cafe was now filled with the warmth of family and friendship.
写作示范二
From that day forward, James worked at the cafe. He took his responsibilities seriously, always making sure the cafe was spotless. He would remember the regular customers' preferences and greet them by name. His friendly attitude made the customers feel at home. Emily and James became inseparable. They would brainstorm new menu items together, and their ideas made the cafe more popular.
One evening, as Emily and James were enjoying their dinner, Emily’s son called. “Mom, I heard from James that you've found a new lease on life. I'm coming home. I want to meet this amazing person who has changed your life.” Emily was overjoyed. She realized that James had not only brought life to the cafe but also brought her family closer. On Thanksgiving, they cooked together, their laughter filling the air. It was a day filled with gratitude, for the new friendship and the return of family.
参考范文：
From that day forward, James worked at the cafe. He was a hardworking and reliable employee, always arriving early and staying late to help with any tasks that needed to be done. Emily was grateful for his help, and the cafe began to thrive under their joint efforts. James also became a beloved member of the community, known for his kindness and willingness to help others.
One evening, as Emily and James were enjoying their dinner, Emily’s son unexpectedly called. Emily was overjoyed to hear this news. She told her son about James and how he had become an important part of her life. When her son arrived, he was surprised but happy to see James. The three of them spent a wonderful Thanksgiving together, sharing a big meal and lots of laughter. James felt a sense of belonging for the first time in a long while, and Emily was grateful that this Thanksgiving was filled with love and warmth.