读后续写：麦克与冰淇淋的故事+讲义-江苏省扬州市高邮市2024-2025学年高三下学期开学英语试题
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读后续写
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Mike loved mint chocolate chip ice cream. Before every swim meet, he would have a bowl, believing it was his lucky charm. At first, it seemed to work. He won race after race, feeling on top of the world. His confidence soared, and he thought the ice cream was the secret to his success. His parents, though concerned about the unhealthy habit, let it slide as long as he was winning.
However, as time passed, Mike started to gain weight, and his performance in the pool suffered. He went from first place to last, and his once-unbeatable feeling was gone. He was confused and disappointed, not understanding why his "lucky charm" had failed. His parents decided it was time for a change. They sat him down and explained the importance of a balanced diet and regular exercise. Reluctantly, Mike agreed to give up the ice cream and start training harder.
His father offered to run with him, and they began a strict workout routine. At first, it was tough. Mike missed the comfort of his favorite ice cream, and practices were harder without the extra energy boost. But slowly, he started to feel healthier and stronger. His breathing improved, and he could swim faster and longer.
The day of the final swim meet of the season arrived. Mike stood at the edge of the pool, feeling nervous but determined. He took a deep breath, remembering all the hard work he and his dad had put in. With a powerful dive, he entered the water and began to swim. Stroke by stroke, he pushed himself, ignoring the burning in his muscles. As he swam, he could hear the cheers of the audience faintly in the background. With every lap, he gained more confidence. When he made the final turn, he saw the finish line ahead. He gathered all his strength for one last burst and touched the wall.
注意: 1. 续写词数应为 150 左右;
2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
As he lifted his head out of the water, Mike glanced up at the scoreboard. _______________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Shortly after coming out of the pool, Mike rushed to his parents excitedly. _______________________ ___
________________________________________________________________ _
麦克与冰淇淋的故事续写
续写要点（两段）
第一段：着重描写 Mike 看到成绩后的反应，他的震惊、喜悦、激动等情绪交织。可以描述他的表情、动作，如张大嘴巴、挥舞手臂等，同时回忆起训练的艰辛，感慨自己的蜕变。
第二段：聚焦 Mike 与父母相聚后的互动。他兴奋地与父母分享胜利的感受，父母对他表达赞美与自豪，一家人温馨交流。Mike 从中领悟到成功源于努力和家人支持，最后点明他未来将继续保持健康生活方式。
情感线（150 字）
起初，Mike 因比赛失利陷入失落与迷茫，对放弃钟爱的冰淇淋充满不舍。训练过程中，他虽艰苦却因能看到进步而燃起希望。比赛时，他紧张又坚定。当得知胜利，他的喜悦瞬间爆发，这是努力后的成果带来的极度兴奋。与父母相聚，亲情的温暖和家人的肯定让他感动，最终领悟到成功真谛，内心从失落走向满足与自信，对未来充满期待。
故事线（6 条）
Mike 看到成绩后，先是愣了几秒，随后不敢置信地揉了揉眼睛，确认自己真的赢了，随即激动地在泳池里蹦跳起来。
他一边大喊着，一边回忆起训练时的无数个清晨，自己早起跑步的疲惫，在泳池里一次次重复动作的枯燥，此刻都化作了喜悦。
从泳池出来后，Mike 飞奔到父母身边，紧紧抱住他们，声音带着颤抖诉说着自己的激动。
父母不停地夸赞他，父亲再次强调他的努力和坚持才有了今天的成果，母亲则眼含热泪抚摸着他的头。
Mike 认真地和父母分享比赛中的每一个细节，从入水时的紧张到比赛中的咬牙坚持，再到最后冲刺的决心。
最后，Mike 告诉父母，他以后会一直坚持健康的生活方式，努力在未来取得更好的成绩，一家人相视而笑，满是幸福。
主旨升华句 5 句英文
Mike's victory proved that hard work and perseverance can overcome any obstacle, turning dreams into reality.（Mike 的胜利证明了努力和坚持能够克服任何障碍，将梦想变为现实。）
This experience taught Mike that true success doesn't rely on shortcuts but on the continuous efforts and sacrifices made along the way.（这次经历让 Mike 明白，真正的成功并非依赖捷径，而是源于一路上持续的努力和付出。）
Mike realized that the support of his family was like a lighthouse in the dark, guiding him through the tough times and leading him to victory.（Mike 意识到家人的支持就像黑暗中的灯塔，在艰难时刻指引他走向胜利。）
The journey from failure to success showed Mike that setbacks are but stepping - stones to greater achievements if one is willing to persevere.（从失败到成功的历程让 Mike 明白，如果一个人愿意坚持，挫折只是通往更大成就的垫脚石。）
Mike's story serves as an inspiration, reminding us all that with determination and a healthy lifestyle, we can achieve our goals and embrace a brighter future.（Mike 的故事激励着我们，让我们铭记，凭借决心和健康的生活方式，我们能够实现目标，拥抱更光明的未来。）
写作示范一
As he lifted his head out of the water, Mike glanced up at the scoreboard. His eyes bulged with shock and then sparkled with elation. He had not only won the race but also shattered his own record. He let out a wild whoop, his voice echoing in the pool area. Memories of his arduous training flashed through his mind - the early - morning runs with his father, the countless laps in the pool, and the days he resisted the temptation of mint chocolate chip ice cream. All those efforts had finally paid off.
Shortly after coming out of the pool, Mike rushed to his parents excitedly. "I did it! I really did it!" he exclaimed, his face beaming with pride. His parents hugged him tightly, their eyes filled with tears of joy. "We are so proud of you, son," his father said, patting him on the back. His mother added, "This is all because of your hard work." Mike then understood that success was not handed to him on a plate. It was the result of his determination and the unwavering support of his family. From then on, he was determined to maintain a healthy lifestyle and keep striving for greater heights.
写作示范二
As he lifted his head out of the water, Mike glanced up at the scoreboard. A huge smile spread across his face when he saw his name at the top with the best time. He punched the air in excitement and let out a loud cheer. He felt a sense of accomplishment like never before. The months of strict training, the pain in his muscles during workouts, and the self - discipline he had developed all seemed worth it at that moment.
Shortly after coming out of the pool, Mike rushed to his parents excitedly. "Mom! Dad! I won!" he shouted, jumping up and down. His parents embraced him warmly. "You've grown so much, son," his mother said, her voice choked with emotion. His father nodded in agreement, saying, "Your hard work has paid off big time." Mike shared his feelings of the race with them, from the moment he dived in to the final push at the end. This victory made him realize that with a healthy lifestyle and the support of his loved ones, he could achieve anything he set his mind to.
参考答案
As he lifted his head out of the water, Mike glanced up at the scoreboard. His name was at the top, displaying a personal best. Pride and relief surged through him as he realized his hard work had paid off. The early morning runs, disciplined diet, and relentless training had brought him back to victory. The crowd’s cheers echoed, but what truly mattered was the quiet satisfaction of overcoming his struggles. This win was different—it was about perseverance and growth, not just luck.
Shortly after coming out of the pool, Mike rushed to his parents excitedly. His face was glowing with excitement as he hugged them tightly.They hugged back, their eyes filled with tears of joy. Mike felt grateful for their unwavering support. He understood that the real key to his success was discipline and resilience, not the ice cream he once relied on. This victory wasn’t just about swimming; it was about proving to himself that he could rise up to challenges and achieve his goals through hard work and determination.
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Mike loved mint chocolate chip ice cream. Before every swim meet, he would have a bowl, believing it was his lucky charm. At first, it seemed to work. He won race after race, feeling on top of the world. His confidence soared, and he thought the ice cream was the secret to his success. His parents, though concerned about the unhealthy habit, let it slide as long as he was winning.
However, as time passed, Mike started to gain weight, and his performance in the pool suffered. He went from first place to last, and his once-unbeatable feeling was gone. He was confused and disappointed, not understanding why his "lucky charm" had failed. His parents decided it was time for a change. They sat him down and explained the importance of a balanced diet and regular exercise. Reluctantly, Mike agreed to give up the ice cream and start training harder.
His father offered to run with him, and they began a strict workout routine. At first, it was tough. Mike missed the comfort of his favorite ice cream, and practices were harder without the extra energy boost. But slowly, he started to feel healthier and stronger. His breathing improved, and he could swim faster and longer.
The day of the final swim meet of the season arrived. Mike stood at the edge of the pool, feeling nervous but determined. He took a deep breath, remembering all the hard work he and his dad had put in. With a powerful dive, he entered the water and began to swim. Stroke by stroke, he pushed himself, ignoring the burning in his muscles. As he swam, he could hear the cheers of the audience faintly in the background. With every lap, he gained more confidence. When he made the final turn, he saw the finish line ahead. He gathered all his strength for one last burst and touched the wall.
注意: 1. 续写词数应为 150 左右;
2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
As he lifted his head out of the water, Mike glanced up at the scoreboard. _______________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Shortly after coming out of the pool, Mike rushed to his parents excitedly. _______________________ ___
________________________________________________________________ _
麦克与冰淇淋的故事续写
续写要点（两段）
第一段：着重描写 Mike 看到成绩后的反应，他的震惊、喜悦、激动等情绪交织。可以描述他的表情、动作，如张大嘴巴、挥舞手臂等，同时回忆起训练的艰辛，感慨自己的蜕变。
第二段：聚焦 Mike 与父母相聚后的互动。他兴奋地与父母分享胜利的感受，父母对他表达赞美与自豪，一家人温馨交流。Mike 从中领悟到成功源于努力和家人支持，最后点明他未来将继续保持健康生活方式。
情感线（150 字）
起初，Mike 因比赛失利陷入失落与迷茫，对放弃钟爱的冰淇淋充满不舍。训练过程中，他虽艰苦却因能看到进步而燃起希望。比赛时，他紧张又坚定。当得知胜利，他的喜悦瞬间爆发，这是努力后的成果带来的极度兴奋。与父母相聚，亲情的温暖和家人的肯定让他感动，最终领悟到成功真谛，内心从失落走向满足与自信，对未来充满期待。
故事线（6 条）
Mike 看到成绩后，先是愣了几秒，随后不敢置信地揉了揉眼睛，确认自己真的赢了，随即激动地在泳池里蹦跳起来。
他一边大喊着，一边回忆起训练时的无数个清晨，自己早起跑步的疲惫，在泳池里一次次重复动作的枯燥，此刻都化作了喜悦。
从泳池出来后，Mike 飞奔到父母身边，紧紧抱住他们，声音带着颤抖诉说着自己的激动。
父母不停地夸赞他，父亲再次强调他的努力和坚持才有了今天的成果，母亲则眼含热泪抚摸着他的头。
Mike 认真地和父母分享比赛中的每一个细节，从入水时的紧张到比赛中的咬牙坚持，再到最后冲刺的决心。
最后，Mike 告诉父母，他以后会一直坚持健康的生活方式，努力在未来取得更好的成绩，一家人相视而笑，满是幸福。
主旨升华句 5 句英文
Mike's victory proved that hard work and perseverance can overcome any obstacle, turning dreams into reality.（Mike 的胜利证明了努力和坚持能够克服任何障碍，将梦想变为现实。）
This experience taught Mike that true success doesn't rely on shortcuts but on the continuous efforts and sacrifices made along the way.（这次经历让 Mike 明白，真正的成功并非依赖捷径，而是源于一路上持续的努力和付出。）
Mike realized that the support of his family was like a lighthouse in the dark, guiding him through the tough times and leading him to victory.（Mike 意识到家人的支持就像黑暗中的灯塔，在艰难时刻指引他走向胜利。）
The journey from failure to success showed Mike that setbacks are but stepping - stones to greater achievements if one is willing to persevere.（从失败到成功的历程让 Mike 明白，如果一个人愿意坚持，挫折只是通往更大成就的垫脚石。）
Mike's story serves as an inspiration, reminding us all that with determination and a healthy lifestyle, we can achieve our goals and embrace a brighter future.（Mike 的故事激励着我们，让我们铭记，凭借决心和健康的生活方式，我们能够实现目标，拥抱更光明的未来。）
写作示范一
As he lifted his head out of the water, Mike glanced up at the scoreboard. His eyes bulged with shock and then sparkled with elation. He had not only won the race but also shattered his own record. He let out a wild whoop, his voice echoing in the pool area. Memories of his arduous training flashed through his mind - the early - morning runs with his father, the countless laps in the pool, and the days he resisted the temptation of mint chocolate chip ice cream. All those efforts had finally paid off.
Shortly after coming out of the pool, Mike rushed to his parents excitedly. "I did it! I really did it!" he exclaimed, his face beaming with pride. His parents hugged him tightly, their eyes filled with tears of joy. "We are so proud of you, son," his father said, patting him on the back. His mother added, "This is all because of your hard work." Mike then understood that success was not handed to him on a plate. It was the result of his determination and the unwavering support of his family. From then on, he was determined to maintain a healthy lifestyle and keep striving for greater heights.
写作示范二
As he lifted his head out of the water, Mike glanced up at the scoreboard. A huge smile spread across his face when he saw his name at the top with the best time. He punched the air in excitement and let out a loud cheer. He felt a sense of accomplishment like never before. The months of strict training, the pain in his muscles during workouts, and the self - discipline he had developed all seemed worth it at that moment.
Shortly after coming out of the pool, Mike rushed to his parents excitedly. "Mom! Dad! I won!" he shouted, jumping up and down. His parents embraced him warmly. "You've grown so much, son," his mother said, her voice choked with emotion. His father nodded in agreement, saying, "Your hard work has paid off big time." Mike shared his feelings of the race with them, from the moment he dived in to the final push at the end. This victory made him realize that with a healthy lifestyle and the support of his loved ones, he could achieve anything he set his mind to.
参考答案
As he lifted his head out of the water, Mike glanced up at the scoreboard. His name was at the top, displaying a personal best. Pride and relief surged through him as he realized his hard work had paid off. The early morning runs, disciplined diet, and relentless training had brought him back to victory. The crowd’s cheers echoed, but what truly mattered was the quiet satisfaction of overcoming his struggles. This win was different—it was about perseverance and growth, not just luck.
Shortly after coming out of the pool, Mike rushed to his parents excitedly. His face was glowing with excitement as he hugged them tightly.They hugged back, their eyes filled with tears of joy. Mike felt grateful for their unwavering support. He understood that the real key to his success was discipline and resilience, not the ice cream he once relied on. This victory wasn’t just about swimming; it was about proving to himself that he could rise up to challenges and achieve his goals through hard work and determination.