读后续写+：Hillary与Dawn姐妹相认故事+讲义-湖南省常德市武陵区常德市2024-2025学年高三下学期开学英语试题
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阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Hillary Harris lived with her husband and daughter in Eau Claire, Wisconsin. However, she was thinking of moving. Not because she didn’t like the house or the neighborhood, but because of the house next door. First of all, she hated that her family had to share the driveway with the neighbors, while she also disliked the fact that tenants(租户) came and went to that house all the time. And when a couple in their 50s moved next door, it wasn’t any different. Hillary felt that she had had enough, so she didn’t even try to be warm towards them.
“Here we go again,”she thought. “Now what ” As she admitted, she was “turned off” by the woman next door and that they were cold to each other.
“She would not accept me anyhow, ”Dawn Johnson, the new neighbor recalled. “I would come to get my mail, shut it and watch her walk into the house. ” But everything was about to change in an unbelievable way.
Hillary knew she had been adopted(收养)when she was a baby, as well as she knew she had several halfsiblings (兄弟姐妹). In fact, she had already managed to reunite with three of them through the Internet. But there was still one half-sibling that she couldn’t track down. All she knew was that her name was Dawn Johnson. She had found three other half- siblings on the Internet, but she was having no luck with Dawn. She was beginning to think that she’d never find her.
When she realized her new neighbor’s name was Dawn she kind of had a feeling that she just might be her sister. She learned that the woman’s first name was Dawn and that she was from Greenwood-the same town where Dawn Johnson had lived according to what she had learned from her father, Wayne Clouse. She told her husband, “Her name is Dawn-what if she’s my sister ” They both laughed and said, “No way! No way could that be. ”
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
However, she couldn’t help thinking about it.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________So, when Johnson went out of town, Hillary texted her, asking about her father’s name.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hillary与Dawn姐妹相认故事续写
续写要点
第一段续写：着重刻画 Hillary 的内心活动。她对 Dawn 身份的怀疑持续加深，尽管觉得难以置信，但种种巧合让她难以释怀。于是，她开始不动声色地收集更多线索，比如通过闲聊打听 Dawn 的家庭细节、成长经历等。在这个过程中，她的心情十分复杂，既期待 Dawn 就是自己的妹妹，又害怕希望落空。她不断在脑海中对比已知的关于 Dawn Johnson 的信息和眼前邻居 Dawn 的情况，内心充满纠结与挣扎。
第二段续写：当 Hillary 终于鼓起勇气向 Dawn 询问其父亲名字时，Dawn 的回复成为关键转折点。详细描述 Hillary 得知答案后激动的反应，她可能会瞬间热泪盈眶，双手颤抖。接着，她迫不及待地向 Dawn 解释事情的缘由，Dawn 从最初的震惊到逐渐接受这个意外的事实。两人可能会有一段感人至深的对话，回忆过去生活中的点滴，感慨命运的奇妙安排，最终紧紧相拥，开启新的姐妹情谊篇章。
情感线
第一段：Hillary 从最初对 Dawn 的冷漠，因怀疑其身份而逐渐转变为好奇和期待。随着收集的线索增多，她的内心愈发纠结，既渴望证实自己的猜想，又担心失望。这种情感的起伏体现出她对亲情的渴望，以及面对未知时的忐忑。
第二段：Hillary 在得到关键信息后，激动的情绪达到顶点，她的喜悦和兴奋感染着 Dawn。Dawn 从惊讶到感动，两人的情感在交流中迅速升温，从陌生的邻居变成亲密的姐妹。这种情感的巨大转变展现出亲情的强大力量，能跨越之前的隔阂与冷漠。
故事线
Hillary 对 Dawn 的身份产生怀疑，开始有意无意地与她交流，试图从中获取更多关于她身世的信息。
Hillary 在与 Dawn 的交流中，发现更多与 Dawn Johnson 相符的细节，内心的期待愈发强烈。
Hillary 在 Dawn 外出时，通过短信询问她父亲的名字，紧张地等待回复。
Dawn 回复父亲名字为 Wayne Clouse，Hillary 确认她就是自己失散多年的妹妹，情绪激动不已。
Hillary 向 Dawn 说明情况，Dawn 起初震惊，但很快接受了这个事实，两人开始分享彼此的生活经历。
Hillary 和 Dawn 成为亲密的姐妹，她们的关系也改变了邻里间原本冷漠的氛围，给彼此的生活带来了温暖与幸福。
主旨升华句
This unexpected encounter taught Hillary and Dawn that family bonds can be found in the most unlikely places, and that kindness and curiosity can bridge the gap between strangers.（这次意外的相遇让 Hillary 和 Dawn 明白，家庭纽带可以在最意想不到的地方找到，善良和好奇能够跨越陌生人之间的鸿沟。）
Their story shows that sometimes, fate has a unique way of bringing long - lost family members together, and that it's never too late to build a meaningful relationship.（她们的故事表明，有时候，命运会以独特的方式让失散已久的家庭成员团聚，建立有意义的关系永远都不晚。）
Through their journey of discovery, Hillary and Dawn learned that true family is not just about blood, but also about the love and connection that forms over time.（通过她们的探索之旅，Hillary 和 Dawn 了解到，真正的家庭不仅仅关乎血缘，还在于随着时间推移而形成的爱与联系。）
The reunion of Hillary and Dawn serves as a reminder that even the coldest of relationships can be transformed into something beautiful when we open our hearts to the possibility of kinship.（Hillary 和 Dawn 的团聚提醒着我们，当我们敞开心扉接受亲情的可能性时，即使是最冷漠的关系也能转变成美好的东西。）
This heartwarming tale of sisterly connection proves that the power of family can overcome any initial indifference and create a lasting bond that enriches lives.（这个关于姐妹情谊的温馨故事证明，家庭的力量可以克服任何最初的冷漠，创造出一种丰富生活的持久纽带。）
写作示范一
However, she couldn’t help thinking about it. The more Hillary observed Dawn, the more similarities she noticed. She remembered her father once mentioned that Dawn Johnson had a small scar on her left hand from a childhood accident. One day, while they were chatting in the driveway, Hillary stole a glance at Dawn’s hands. To her excitement, there it was, a faint scar on Dawn’s left hand. Her heart raced. She knew she had to be certain. She started to ask Dawn more detailed questions about her childhood, trying to piece together the puzzle. Dawn, though a bit puzzled by the sudden interest, answered all the questions patiently.
So, when Johnson went out of town, Hillary texted her, asking about her father’s name. Her hands were shaking as she typed the message. After what seemed like an eternity, Dawn replied: “Wayne Clouse”. Hillary let out a scream of joy. She immediately called Dawn, her voice choked with emotion. “Dawn, you’re my sister! I’ve been looking for you for so long.” There was a stunned silence on the other end. Then, Dawn’s voice, filled with tears, said, “I can’t believe it.” When Dawn returned, they spent hours talking, sharing their lives, and laughing through their tears. Their once - cold relationship blossomed into a beautiful sisterly bond.
写作示范二
However, she couldn’t help thinking about it. Hillary became obsessed with the idea that Dawn might be her sister. She dug out the old letters and documents she had collected during her search for Dawn Johnson. She compared every detail she knew about her long - lost sister with what she had learned about Dawn. She even started to dream about their possible reunion. One day, she mustered up the courage to ask Dawn about her mother’s maiden name. Dawn told her, and it matched the information she had about her sister. Hillary was on the verge of believing it, but she needed one more piece of evidence.
So, when Johnson went out of town, Hillary texted her, asking about her father’s name. As she waited for the reply, she paced back and forth in her living room. Finally, the message came. “Wayne Clouse”. Hillary felt a rush of emotions. She called her husband, almost hyperventilating. “It’s her! She’s my sister!” When Dawn came back, Hillary was waiting for her with open arms. She told Dawn the whole story. Dawn was shocked at first, but as Hillary showed her all the evidence, she started to believe. They hugged each other tightly, and a new chapter in their lives began, filled with love and sisterly affection.
参考答案
However, she couldn’t help thinking about it. But she couldn’t find the courage to go over to the neighbor’s house and ask what her last name was or who her birth father was. Until one day, Hillary ended up seeing the woman’s last name on one of their deliveries. Amazingly, it was Johnson! Hillary got excited, and she immediately called her husband to let him know she had just found her sister. Harris knew she had to ask the woman directly, but she was worried about being refused.
So, when Johnson went out of town, Hillary texted her, asking about her father’s name. Indeed, it was Wayne Clouse. The two women spent that night talking on the phone and crying. Neither of them could believe that after so many years they found each other just by chance. The two women have been inseparable since they found out they are sisters. They advise anyone who is looking for their birth family to just knock on the neighbors’ door-you never know. It goes to show that you should always be kind and respectful to your neighbors. Who knows, they could end up being a long-lost relative.
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Hillary Harris lived with her husband and daughter in Eau Claire, Wisconsin. However, she was thinking of moving. Not because she didn’t like the house or the neighborhood, but because of the house next door. First of all, she hated that her family had to share the driveway with the neighbors, while she also disliked the fact that tenants(租户) came and went to that house all the time. And when a couple in their 50s moved next door, it wasn’t any different. Hillary felt that she had had enough, so she didn’t even try to be warm towards them.
“Here we go again,”she thought. “Now what ” As she admitted, she was “turned off” by the woman next door and that they were cold to each other.
“She would not accept me anyhow, ”Dawn Johnson, the new neighbor recalled. “I would come to get my mail, shut it and watch her walk into the house. ” But everything was about to change in an unbelievable way.
Hillary knew she had been adopted(收养)when she was a baby, as well as she knew she had several halfsiblings (兄弟姐妹). In fact, she had already managed to reunite with three of them through the Internet. But there was still one half-sibling that she couldn’t track down. All she knew was that her name was Dawn Johnson. She had found three other half- siblings on the Internet, but she was having no luck with Dawn. She was beginning to think that she’d never find her.
When she realized her new neighbor’s name was Dawn she kind of had a feeling that she just might be her sister. She learned that the woman’s first name was Dawn and that she was from Greenwood-the same town where Dawn Johnson had lived according to what she had learned from her father, Wayne Clouse. She told her husband, “Her name is Dawn-what if she’s my sister ” They both laughed and said, “No way! No way could that be. ”
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
However, she couldn’t help thinking about it.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________So, when Johnson went out of town, Hillary texted her, asking about her father’s name.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hillary与Dawn姐妹相认故事续写
续写要点
第一段续写：着重刻画 Hillary 的内心活动。她对 Dawn 身份的怀疑持续加深，尽管觉得难以置信，但种种巧合让她难以释怀。于是，她开始不动声色地收集更多线索，比如通过闲聊打听 Dawn 的家庭细节、成长经历等。在这个过程中，她的心情十分复杂，既期待 Dawn 就是自己的妹妹，又害怕希望落空。她不断在脑海中对比已知的关于 Dawn Johnson 的信息和眼前邻居 Dawn 的情况，内心充满纠结与挣扎。
第二段续写：当 Hillary 终于鼓起勇气向 Dawn 询问其父亲名字时，Dawn 的回复成为关键转折点。详细描述 Hillary 得知答案后激动的反应，她可能会瞬间热泪盈眶，双手颤抖。接着，她迫不及待地向 Dawn 解释事情的缘由，Dawn 从最初的震惊到逐渐接受这个意外的事实。两人可能会有一段感人至深的对话，回忆过去生活中的点滴，感慨命运的奇妙安排，最终紧紧相拥，开启新的姐妹情谊篇章。
情感线
第一段：Hillary 从最初对 Dawn 的冷漠，因怀疑其身份而逐渐转变为好奇和期待。随着收集的线索增多，她的内心愈发纠结，既渴望证实自己的猜想，又担心失望。这种情感的起伏体现出她对亲情的渴望，以及面对未知时的忐忑。
第二段：Hillary 在得到关键信息后，激动的情绪达到顶点，她的喜悦和兴奋感染着 Dawn。Dawn 从惊讶到感动，两人的情感在交流中迅速升温，从陌生的邻居变成亲密的姐妹。这种情感的巨大转变展现出亲情的强大力量，能跨越之前的隔阂与冷漠。
故事线
Hillary 对 Dawn 的身份产生怀疑，开始有意无意地与她交流，试图从中获取更多关于她身世的信息。
Hillary 在与 Dawn 的交流中，发现更多与 Dawn Johnson 相符的细节，内心的期待愈发强烈。
Hillary 在 Dawn 外出时，通过短信询问她父亲的名字，紧张地等待回复。
Dawn 回复父亲名字为 Wayne Clouse，Hillary 确认她就是自己失散多年的妹妹，情绪激动不已。
Hillary 向 Dawn 说明情况，Dawn 起初震惊，但很快接受了这个事实，两人开始分享彼此的生活经历。
Hillary 和 Dawn 成为亲密的姐妹，她们的关系也改变了邻里间原本冷漠的氛围，给彼此的生活带来了温暖与幸福。
主旨升华句
This unexpected encounter taught Hillary and Dawn that family bonds can be found in the most unlikely places, and that kindness and curiosity can bridge the gap between strangers.（这次意外的相遇让 Hillary 和 Dawn 明白，家庭纽带可以在最意想不到的地方找到，善良和好奇能够跨越陌生人之间的鸿沟。）
Their story shows that sometimes, fate has a unique way of bringing long - lost family members together, and that it's never too late to build a meaningful relationship.（她们的故事表明，有时候，命运会以独特的方式让失散已久的家庭成员团聚，建立有意义的关系永远都不晚。）
Through their journey of discovery, Hillary and Dawn learned that true family is not just about blood, but also about the love and connection that forms over time.（通过她们的探索之旅，Hillary 和 Dawn 了解到，真正的家庭不仅仅关乎血缘，还在于随着时间推移而形成的爱与联系。）
The reunion of Hillary and Dawn serves as a reminder that even the coldest of relationships can be transformed into something beautiful when we open our hearts to the possibility of kinship.（Hillary 和 Dawn 的团聚提醒着我们，当我们敞开心扉接受亲情的可能性时，即使是最冷漠的关系也能转变成美好的东西。）
This heartwarming tale of sisterly connection proves that the power of family can overcome any initial indifference and create a lasting bond that enriches lives.（这个关于姐妹情谊的温馨故事证明，家庭的力量可以克服任何最初的冷漠，创造出一种丰富生活的持久纽带。）
写作示范一
However, she couldn’t help thinking about it. The more Hillary observed Dawn, the more similarities she noticed. She remembered her father once mentioned that Dawn Johnson had a small scar on her left hand from a childhood accident. One day, while they were chatting in the driveway, Hillary stole a glance at Dawn’s hands. To her excitement, there it was, a faint scar on Dawn’s left hand. Her heart raced. She knew she had to be certain. She started to ask Dawn more detailed questions about her childhood, trying to piece together the puzzle. Dawn, though a bit puzzled by the sudden interest, answered all the questions patiently.
So, when Johnson went out of town, Hillary texted her, asking about her father’s name. Her hands were shaking as she typed the message. After what seemed like an eternity, Dawn replied: “Wayne Clouse”. Hillary let out a scream of joy. She immediately called Dawn, her voice choked with emotion. “Dawn, you’re my sister! I’ve been looking for you for so long.” There was a stunned silence on the other end. Then, Dawn’s voice, filled with tears, said, “I can’t believe it.” When Dawn returned, they spent hours talking, sharing their lives, and laughing through their tears. Their once - cold relationship blossomed into a beautiful sisterly bond.
写作示范二
However, she couldn’t help thinking about it. Hillary became obsessed with the idea that Dawn might be her sister. She dug out the old letters and documents she had collected during her search for Dawn Johnson. She compared every detail she knew about her long - lost sister with what she had learned about Dawn. She even started to dream about their possible reunion. One day, she mustered up the courage to ask Dawn about her mother’s maiden name. Dawn told her, and it matched the information she had about her sister. Hillary was on the verge of believing it, but she needed one more piece of evidence.
So, when Johnson went out of town, Hillary texted her, asking about her father’s name. As she waited for the reply, she paced back and forth in her living room. Finally, the message came. “Wayne Clouse”. Hillary felt a rush of emotions. She called her husband, almost hyperventilating. “It’s her! She’s my sister!” When Dawn came back, Hillary was waiting for her with open arms. She told Dawn the whole story. Dawn was shocked at first, but as Hillary showed her all the evidence, she started to believe. They hugged each other tightly, and a new chapter in their lives began, filled with love and sisterly affection.
参考答案
However, she couldn’t help thinking about it. But she couldn’t find the courage to go over to the neighbor’s house and ask what her last name was or who her birth father was. Until one day, Hillary ended up seeing the woman’s last name on one of their deliveries. Amazingly, it was Johnson! Hillary got excited, and she immediately called her husband to let him know she had just found her sister. Harris knew she had to ask the woman directly, but she was worried about being refused.
So, when Johnson went out of town, Hillary texted her, asking about her father’s name. Indeed, it was Wayne Clouse. The two women spent that night talking on the phone and crying. Neither of them could believe that after so many years they found each other just by chance. The two women have been inseparable since they found out they are sisters. They advise anyone who is looking for their birth family to just knock on the neighbors’ door-you never know. It goes to show that you should always be kind and respectful to your neighbors. Who knows, they could end up being a long-lost relative.