读后续写Lucy徒步遇蛇的故事续写+讲义-甘肃省靖远县2024-2025学年高三下学期开学英语试题
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读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was a bright Saturday morning. Lucy awoke with the sun, her heart pounding with anticipation. Today was the day her father, Jack, was taking her on a hiking adventure in the mountain. Lucy had always been captivated by the great outdoors, and hiking with her father was one of her favorite pastimes.
She dressed quickly in her favorite hiking gear, picked up the backpack she had packed the night before, and stepped out to wait on the porch. The sight of her father’s old blue truck coming up the driveway filled her with joy and excitement.
Father Jack stepped out, his eyes twinkling as he greeted Lucy. “All set for an adventure ” he asked. “Absolutely!” Lucy replied, her face beaming with joy. Just then, he added, “But be warned, there’s been talk of a bear in the area we’re hiking today.” Lucy’s eyes widened in surprise, but then Jack’s laughter broke the tension. “You should have seen your face,” he chuckled, and Lucy joined in, knowing her father’s playful nature.
“Let’s grab some breakfast first,” Jack suggested, and they headed to a cafe known for its pancakes. After a hearty breakfast, they arrived at the trailhead (小道的起点) of Blue Ridge Mountain. “Lace up those boots tight,” Jack instructed, and Lucy followed suit, her hands skillfully securing each knot. They set off, the crisp mountain air fueling their spirits.
As they walked along the winding path, Lucy’s excitement got the better of her, and she hurried ahead, eager to reach the summit. Her father called out words of caution, but Lucy was caught up in the thrill of the climb. Suddenly, her foot slipped on a loose rock, and she tumbled down a small incline (斜坡). Bruised but determined, she dusted herself off and continued, more carefully.
The father and daughter reached a scenic viewpoint, and Jack pointed out various landmarks, sharing stories of the area’s history. They took a moment to rest, drinking water and enjoying the panoramic view. Half an hour later, they started to walk down the mountain. As they were going downhill, Lucy heard something unusual.
注意：
(1)续写词数应为150个左右；
(2)请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
She stopped, heart pounding, and looked down to see a snake moving away from her path.
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Arriving at the trailhead again, Lucy felt both relieved and proud.
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Lucy徒步遇蛇的故事续写
续写要点
第一段续写要点：细致描绘 Lucy 看到蛇时的惊恐表现，如脸色瞬间变白、身体微微颤抖、呼吸急促等，通过这些细节强化紧张氛围。详细叙述父亲 Jack 的反应，他迅速而镇定地赶到 Lucy 身边，眼神专注地观察蛇的动向，同时用温和且坚定的语气安慰 Lucy，展现父亲的沉稳。补充蛇的行为细节，如它的爬行姿态、移动方向等，以及周围环境的描写，如茂密的草丛、寂静的山林，进一步烘托气氛。描述 Lucy 在父亲引导下的行动，她听从父亲的指示，小心翼翼地后退，努力控制自己的恐惧，为后续继续下山做铺垫。
第二段续写要点：具体描述 Lucy 到达起点时的复杂情感，她的脸上既有放松的神情，又洋溢着自豪的光彩，通过表情和肢体动作展现出来。深入阐述 Lucy 在这次徒步中获得的成长感悟，她不仅意识到自己身体上的坚韧，更体会到内心的强大，可通过她的内心独白或与父亲的对话来体现。刻画父亲与 Lucy 之间的互动，父亲对她的肯定，如拍拍她的肩膀、给予鼓励的话语，以及 Lucy 对父亲的感激与亲近，凸显父女关系的深化。最后，展望未来的冒险，想象 Lucy 期待下一次与父亲出行的心理活动，以及她对未来挑战的积极态度。
情感线
第一段中，Lucy 从满心期待的徒步热情，因看到蛇瞬间转为极度恐惧，在父亲的安抚下，恐惧逐渐缓解，但仍保持警惕。父亲则始终保持冷静，用关爱和镇定的态度帮助 Lucy 应对危机。第二段中，Lucy 到达起点时，恐惧完全消散，取而代之的是经历挑战后的自豪与自信，同时对父亲的依赖和感激之情也愈发深厚。父亲为 Lucy 的成长感到欣慰，两人之间的情感连接更加紧密，为未来的冒险之旅增添了更多期待。
故事线
准备出发：Lucy 期待与父亲的徒步之旅，早早准备好装备，看到父亲的车到来满心欢喜，两人前往咖啡馆吃早餐后到达山脚下。
途中遇险：Lucy 在徒步中因兴奋而不小心滑倒，之后又遇到蛇，她陷入恐惧，父亲及时赶到并安抚她。
应对蛇险：父亲引导 Lucy 冷静应对蛇，两人小心地看着蛇离开，随后继续下山，Lucy 变得更加谨慎。
到达起点：Lucy 和父亲成功到达起点，Lucy 感到既放松又自豪。
成长感悟：Lucy 回顾这次经历，意识到自己在面对困难时变得更强大，也更加珍惜与父亲的关系。
展望未来：Lucy 期待未来与父亲进行更多冒险，相信自己能克服更多挑战，对未来充满信心。
主旨升华句
Lucy's hiking adventure vividly demonstrates that in the face of unexpected challenges in nature, courage and the support of loved ones can help us overcome fears and emerge stronger, while also deepening the bonds of family.（Lucy 的徒步冒险生动地表明，在面对大自然中意想不到的挑战时，勇气和亲人的支持能帮助我们克服恐惧，变得更强大，同时也能加深家庭的纽带。）
Through Lucy's experience of falling and encountering a snake, we learn that every trial in life is an opportunity for growth, and with the guidance of those we trust, we can turn adversity into a stepping - stone towards self - discovery and resilience.（通过 Lucy 摔倒和遇到蛇的经历，我们了解到生活中的每一次考验都是成长的机会，在我们信任的人的引导下，我们可以将逆境转化为自我发现和坚韧的垫脚石。）
This tale of Lucy and her father's hiking journey serves as a powerful reminder that nature, with its beauty and unpredictability, offers not only thrilling adventures but also valuable life lessons, teaching us the importance of caution, courage, and family connection.（这个关于 Lucy 和她父亲徒步旅行的故事有力地提醒我们，大自然既美丽又不可预测，它不仅提供了激动人心的冒险，还传授了宝贵的人生经验，教导我们谨慎、勇敢和家庭联系的重要性。）
In the end, Lucy's adventure teaches us that true strength lies not in the absence of fear but in the ability to face it head - on, and that the love and support of family are the most reliable sources of courage in our journey through life.（最终，Lucy 的冒险告诉我们，真正的力量不在于没有恐惧，而在于有勇气直面恐惧，并且家庭的爱与支持是我们人生旅途中最可靠的勇气源泉。）
Lucy's story shows that even in the wild, where danger lurks around every corner, the connection between a father and daughter can provide a safe haven, fostering a sense of security and enabling her to embrace challenges and grow both physically and mentally.（Lucy 的故事表明，即使在危险四伏的野外，父女之间的联系也能提供一个安全的港湾，营造出一种安全感，使她能够迎接挑战，在身体和心理上都得到成长。）
写作示范一（细腻情感风）
第一段续写
She stopped, heart pounding, and looked down to see a snake moving away from her path. Lucy's face paled instantly, and her hands began to tremble. “Dad, a snake!” she cried out, her voice high - pitched with fear. Jack, ever the composed one, rushed to her side in an instant. His eyes were fixed intently on the snake, assessing the situation. “Stay completely still, Lucy,” he said, his voice calm and reassuring. The snake, a sleek, brown - colored creature, slithered slowly, its body moving in a sinuous motion. The surrounding forest seemed to hold its breath, with only the soft rustling of leaves in the gentle breeze. Jack carefully guided Lucy to take a step back, his hand firmly on her shoulder. “It's okay, it's just going about its business. We don't want to startle it,” he whispered. Lucy, her heart still racing, followed her father's instructions, her eyes never leaving the snake. After what felt like an eternity, the snake disappeared into the thick underbrush. Lucy let out a long, shaky breath, and Jack gave her a gentle pat on the back. “Let's keep going, but be extra careful now,” he said, and Lucy nodded, her nerves still on edge.
第二段续写
Arriving at the trailhead again, Lucy felt both relieved and proud. Her shoulders slumped slightly in relaxation, and a wide, self - satisfied smile spread across her face. “Today was quite an adventure, wasn't it ” Jack said, his eyes twinkling with pride as he looked at his daughter. Lucy nodded, her eyes shining with new - found confidence. “I learned so much, Dad. I thought I would be too scared to keep going after I saw the snake, but I did it,” she said, her voice filled with a sense of accomplishment. Jack put his arm around her shoulders. “You were incredibly brave, Lucy. I'm so proud of you.” As they walked towards the car, Lucy couldn't help but reflect on the day. She had faced her fears, both with the fall and the snake encounter, and had come out stronger. The bond between her and her father had grown even deeper. She looked forward to their next adventure, knowing that with her father by her side, she could handle anything that came her way.
写作示范二（简洁明快风）
第一段续写
She stopped, heart pounding, and looked down to see a snake moving away from her path. “Dad, there's a snake!” Lucy shouted, her voice full of fear. Jack quickly came over. “Don't move, Lucy. It's just passing by,” he said calmly. The snake was small and brown, slithering fast. Jack led Lucy to step back slowly. After a moment, the snake disappeared into the grass. Lucy took a deep breath. “Let's go on, but be careful,” Jack said, and Lucy nodded. They continued down the mountain, with Lucy watching her steps closely.
第二段续写
Arriving at the trailhead again, Lucy felt both relieved and proud. “Today was really something,” Jack said, smiling at her. Lucy beamed. “I faced the snake and didn't give up. I'm stronger now,” she said. Jack patted her back. “You sure are. I'm proud of you.” On the way home, Lucy thought about the day. She had learned a lot and was excited for their next adventure. She knew she could handle more challenges with her dad.
参考答案
She stopped, heart pounding, and looked down to see a snake moving away from her path. She froze, fear gripping her immediately. “Dad!” she whispered, her voice shaky. Jack rushed to her side, his eyes scanning the area for any threat. He at once spotted that snake. “Stay still, Lucy,” he advised, his voice calm but firm. He helped her move away from the snake’s path and reassured her that it was just a harmless species common to the area. With her father’s guidance, they navigated the rest of the trail safely.
Arriving at the trailhead again, Lucy felt both relieved and proud. She had learned to respect nature’s surprises or unpredictability and the importance of remaining calm in challenging or potentially dangerous situations. Her father’s hand on her shoulder was comforting as they made their way back to the truck. They thought about their exciting day, feeling happy about what they had done together. The setting sun made the day even more special.
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was a bright Saturday morning. Lucy awoke with the sun, her heart pounding with anticipation. Today was the day her father, Jack, was taking her on a hiking adventure in the mountain. Lucy had always been captivated by the great outdoors, and hiking with her father was one of her favorite pastimes.
She dressed quickly in her favorite hiking gear, picked up the backpack she had packed the night before, and stepped out to wait on the porch. The sight of her father’s old blue truck coming up the driveway filled her with joy and excitement.
Father Jack stepped out, his eyes twinkling as he greeted Lucy. “All set for an adventure ” he asked. “Absolutely!” Lucy replied, her face beaming with joy. Just then, he added, “But be warned, there’s been talk of a bear in the area we’re hiking today.” Lucy’s eyes widened in surprise, but then Jack’s laughter broke the tension. “You should have seen your face,” he chuckled, and Lucy joined in, knowing her father’s playful nature.
“Let’s grab some breakfast first,” Jack suggested, and they headed to a cafe known for its pancakes. After a hearty breakfast, they arrived at the trailhead (小道的起点) of Blue Ridge Mountain. “Lace up those boots tight,” Jack instructed, and Lucy followed suit, her hands skillfully securing each knot. They set off, the crisp mountain air fueling their spirits.
As they walked along the winding path, Lucy’s excitement got the better of her, and she hurried ahead, eager to reach the summit. Her father called out words of caution, but Lucy was caught up in the thrill of the climb. Suddenly, her foot slipped on a loose rock, and she tumbled down a small incline (斜坡). Bruised but determined, she dusted herself off and continued, more carefully.
The father and daughter reached a scenic viewpoint, and Jack pointed out various landmarks, sharing stories of the area’s history. They took a moment to rest, drinking water and enjoying the panoramic view. Half an hour later, they started to walk down the mountain. As they were going downhill, Lucy heard something unusual.
注意：
(1)续写词数应为150个左右；
(2)请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
She stopped, heart pounding, and looked down to see a snake moving away from her path.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Arriving at the trailhead again, Lucy felt both relieved and proud.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Lucy徒步遇蛇的故事续写
续写要点
第一段续写要点：细致描绘 Lucy 看到蛇时的惊恐表现，如脸色瞬间变白、身体微微颤抖、呼吸急促等，通过这些细节强化紧张氛围。详细叙述父亲 Jack 的反应，他迅速而镇定地赶到 Lucy 身边，眼神专注地观察蛇的动向，同时用温和且坚定的语气安慰 Lucy，展现父亲的沉稳。补充蛇的行为细节，如它的爬行姿态、移动方向等，以及周围环境的描写，如茂密的草丛、寂静的山林，进一步烘托气氛。描述 Lucy 在父亲引导下的行动，她听从父亲的指示，小心翼翼地后退，努力控制自己的恐惧，为后续继续下山做铺垫。
第二段续写要点：具体描述 Lucy 到达起点时的复杂情感，她的脸上既有放松的神情，又洋溢着自豪的光彩，通过表情和肢体动作展现出来。深入阐述 Lucy 在这次徒步中获得的成长感悟，她不仅意识到自己身体上的坚韧，更体会到内心的强大，可通过她的内心独白或与父亲的对话来体现。刻画父亲与 Lucy 之间的互动，父亲对她的肯定，如拍拍她的肩膀、给予鼓励的话语，以及 Lucy 对父亲的感激与亲近，凸显父女关系的深化。最后，展望未来的冒险，想象 Lucy 期待下一次与父亲出行的心理活动，以及她对未来挑战的积极态度。
情感线
第一段中，Lucy 从满心期待的徒步热情，因看到蛇瞬间转为极度恐惧，在父亲的安抚下，恐惧逐渐缓解，但仍保持警惕。父亲则始终保持冷静，用关爱和镇定的态度帮助 Lucy 应对危机。第二段中，Lucy 到达起点时，恐惧完全消散，取而代之的是经历挑战后的自豪与自信，同时对父亲的依赖和感激之情也愈发深厚。父亲为 Lucy 的成长感到欣慰，两人之间的情感连接更加紧密，为未来的冒险之旅增添了更多期待。
故事线
准备出发：Lucy 期待与父亲的徒步之旅，早早准备好装备，看到父亲的车到来满心欢喜，两人前往咖啡馆吃早餐后到达山脚下。
途中遇险：Lucy 在徒步中因兴奋而不小心滑倒，之后又遇到蛇，她陷入恐惧，父亲及时赶到并安抚她。
应对蛇险：父亲引导 Lucy 冷静应对蛇，两人小心地看着蛇离开，随后继续下山，Lucy 变得更加谨慎。
到达起点：Lucy 和父亲成功到达起点，Lucy 感到既放松又自豪。
成长感悟：Lucy 回顾这次经历，意识到自己在面对困难时变得更强大，也更加珍惜与父亲的关系。
展望未来：Lucy 期待未来与父亲进行更多冒险，相信自己能克服更多挑战，对未来充满信心。
主旨升华句
Lucy's hiking adventure vividly demonstrates that in the face of unexpected challenges in nature, courage and the support of loved ones can help us overcome fears and emerge stronger, while also deepening the bonds of family.（Lucy 的徒步冒险生动地表明，在面对大自然中意想不到的挑战时，勇气和亲人的支持能帮助我们克服恐惧，变得更强大，同时也能加深家庭的纽带。）
Through Lucy's experience of falling and encountering a snake, we learn that every trial in life is an opportunity for growth, and with the guidance of those we trust, we can turn adversity into a stepping - stone towards self - discovery and resilience.（通过 Lucy 摔倒和遇到蛇的经历，我们了解到生活中的每一次考验都是成长的机会，在我们信任的人的引导下，我们可以将逆境转化为自我发现和坚韧的垫脚石。）
This tale of Lucy and her father's hiking journey serves as a powerful reminder that nature, with its beauty and unpredictability, offers not only thrilling adventures but also valuable life lessons, teaching us the importance of caution, courage, and family connection.（这个关于 Lucy 和她父亲徒步旅行的故事有力地提醒我们，大自然既美丽又不可预测，它不仅提供了激动人心的冒险，还传授了宝贵的人生经验，教导我们谨慎、勇敢和家庭联系的重要性。）
In the end, Lucy's adventure teaches us that true strength lies not in the absence of fear but in the ability to face it head - on, and that the love and support of family are the most reliable sources of courage in our journey through life.（最终，Lucy 的冒险告诉我们，真正的力量不在于没有恐惧，而在于有勇气直面恐惧，并且家庭的爱与支持是我们人生旅途中最可靠的勇气源泉。）
Lucy's story shows that even in the wild, where danger lurks around every corner, the connection between a father and daughter can provide a safe haven, fostering a sense of security and enabling her to embrace challenges and grow both physically and mentally.（Lucy 的故事表明，即使在危险四伏的野外，父女之间的联系也能提供一个安全的港湾，营造出一种安全感，使她能够迎接挑战，在身体和心理上都得到成长。）
写作示范一（细腻情感风）
第一段续写
She stopped, heart pounding, and looked down to see a snake moving away from her path. Lucy's face paled instantly, and her hands began to tremble. “Dad, a snake!” she cried out, her voice high - pitched with fear. Jack, ever the composed one, rushed to her side in an instant. His eyes were fixed intently on the snake, assessing the situation. “Stay completely still, Lucy,” he said, his voice calm and reassuring. The snake, a sleek, brown - colored creature, slithered slowly, its body moving in a sinuous motion. The surrounding forest seemed to hold its breath, with only the soft rustling of leaves in the gentle breeze. Jack carefully guided Lucy to take a step back, his hand firmly on her shoulder. “It's okay, it's just going about its business. We don't want to startle it,” he whispered. Lucy, her heart still racing, followed her father's instructions, her eyes never leaving the snake. After what felt like an eternity, the snake disappeared into the thick underbrush. Lucy let out a long, shaky breath, and Jack gave her a gentle pat on the back. “Let's keep going, but be extra careful now,” he said, and Lucy nodded, her nerves still on edge.
第二段续写
Arriving at the trailhead again, Lucy felt both relieved and proud. Her shoulders slumped slightly in relaxation, and a wide, self - satisfied smile spread across her face. “Today was quite an adventure, wasn't it ” Jack said, his eyes twinkling with pride as he looked at his daughter. Lucy nodded, her eyes shining with new - found confidence. “I learned so much, Dad. I thought I would be too scared to keep going after I saw the snake, but I did it,” she said, her voice filled with a sense of accomplishment. Jack put his arm around her shoulders. “You were incredibly brave, Lucy. I'm so proud of you.” As they walked towards the car, Lucy couldn't help but reflect on the day. She had faced her fears, both with the fall and the snake encounter, and had come out stronger. The bond between her and her father had grown even deeper. She looked forward to their next adventure, knowing that with her father by her side, she could handle anything that came her way.
写作示范二（简洁明快风）
第一段续写
She stopped, heart pounding, and looked down to see a snake moving away from her path. “Dad, there's a snake!” Lucy shouted, her voice full of fear. Jack quickly came over. “Don't move, Lucy. It's just passing by,” he said calmly. The snake was small and brown, slithering fast. Jack led Lucy to step back slowly. After a moment, the snake disappeared into the grass. Lucy took a deep breath. “Let's go on, but be careful,” Jack said, and Lucy nodded. They continued down the mountain, with Lucy watching her steps closely.
第二段续写
Arriving at the trailhead again, Lucy felt both relieved and proud. “Today was really something,” Jack said, smiling at her. Lucy beamed. “I faced the snake and didn't give up. I'm stronger now,” she said. Jack patted her back. “You sure are. I'm proud of you.” On the way home, Lucy thought about the day. She had learned a lot and was excited for their next adventure. She knew she could handle more challenges with her dad.
参考答案
She stopped, heart pounding, and looked down to see a snake moving away from her path. She froze, fear gripping her immediately. “Dad!” she whispered, her voice shaky. Jack rushed to her side, his eyes scanning the area for any threat. He at once spotted that snake. “Stay still, Lucy,” he advised, his voice calm but firm. He helped her move away from the snake’s path and reassured her that it was just a harmless species common to the area. With her father’s guidance, they navigated the rest of the trail safely.
Arriving at the trailhead again, Lucy felt both relieved and proud. She had learned to respect nature’s surprises or unpredictability and the importance of remaining calm in challenging or potentially dangerous situations. Her father’s hand on her shoulder was comforting as they made their way back to the truck. They thought about their exciting day, feeling happy about what they had done together. The setting sun made the day even more special.