读后续写--夏日追冰，祖孙情在坚持中升温+讲义-河北省保定市2024-2025学年高二上学期期末联考英语试题
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阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The Ice Cream Truck
“Never give up! Never give up!” chanted two young children, Max and Lily, as they marched barefoot behind their grandmother Mimi who was leading them on a great adventure, straight off the beach where they had spent the day building sand castles and swimming in the sea. They were seeking the mysterious ice-cream truck!
Over the years, Mimi had become an example of positivity for her family. It was not a title she earned without effort, however. Her husband died early and at only forty years old she was left to raise her daughter alone. She faced the heart-breaking disaster powerful enough. She could have lived under a black cloud. But she challenged herself to find joy every day instead. She was always up for a new challenge, whether that was hiking across the rocky mountain in Austria to get a better view of the breathtaking scenery, or signing up for tap-dancing classes at fifty. Leading by example, Mimi taught her daughter just how much one could achieve with a positive attitude.
And obviously she had taken the same approach in her relationship with her grandchildren as well. Before starting her adventure with Max and Lily on that hot July afternoon, Mimi heard the ice-cream man’s bell from her beach chair. She turned and saw him briefly, spotting his green shirt and catching the sight of his waving bell before he turned and disappeared. The ice-cream man visited the beach on a daily basis, although the delay between the sound of his bell and the disappearance of his truck was not long. One must be quick to catch him.
Max and Lily were disappointed when they didn’t catch him in time that day. That was until Mimi’s eyes shone and she said, “Never give up!” She explained that the truck might be gone, but they could hurry up to find it at its next stop.
They walked block after block. Not knowing which direction the truck had taken, they had to make their best guess about where to search. The kids’ tiny legs were tired, but they went on, continuing the chant, “Never give up! Never give up!”
注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.续写部分分为两段, 每段的开头语已为你写好。
After about twenty minutes of walking, Max’s faith started to get shaken in the burning sun.
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Just two blocks later, they found it.
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文章大意
在一个炎热的七月午后，Max 和 Lily 在沙滩玩耍时，没能及时赶上卖冰淇淋的卡车，感到很失望。他们的奶奶 Mimi 是个积极乐观的人，她以自身经历为榜样，教育家人积极面对生活。看到孩子们失落，Mimi 鼓励他们 “永不放弃”，并带着他们去寻找冰淇淋卡车。他们沿着街道一路寻找，孩子们虽腿酸疲惫，但仍在 Mimi 的带领下，喊着口号坚持前行。
故事山分析
开端：Max 和 Lily 在沙滩没赶上冰淇淋卡车，Mimi 决定带他们去寻找。
发展：三人在烈日下走了很久，方向不明，孩子们开始疲惫。
高潮：Max 信念动摇，此时他们发现了冰淇淋卡车。
结局：找到卡车，满足心愿，同时也领悟到坚持的意义。
伏笔以及在续写中的回应
伏笔：Mimi 是积极乐观的榜样。回应：在 Max 信念动摇时，Mimi 用积极的话语鼓励他，体现其榜样作用。
伏笔：孩子们疲惫但仍坚持喊口号。回应：在寻找过程中，口号成为他们坚持的动力，最终找到卡车，凸显坚持的力量。
伏笔：冰淇淋卡车每日来沙滩，行驶路线有规律。回应：根据这个规律，他们推测出卡车下一个可能出现的地点，最终成功找到。
伏笔：Mimi 听到冰淇淋车的铃声并看到其短暂身影。回应：凭借 Mimi 对冰淇淋车的记忆，他们在寻找过程中更有方向。
伏笔：孩子们渴望吃到冰淇淋。回应：找到卡车后，孩子们满心欢喜地挑选冰淇淋，实现愿望。
续写要点（两段）
第一段：着重描写 Max 信念动摇时的心理，以及 Mimi 如何鼓励他，可加入周围环境描写，如炎热的太阳、干燥的街道等，衬托寻找的艰难。
第二段：描述找到冰淇淋卡车时大家的反应，如兴奋的呼喊、激动的表情，以及购买冰淇淋后的满足感，还可升华主题，谈谈这次经历对孩子们的影响。
情感线
起初孩子们因没赶上冰淇淋车而失望，在寻找过程中，疲惫让 Max 信念动摇，产生放弃的念头，此时情感跌入低谷。而 Mimi 的鼓励让他们重新振作，继续坚持。当找到卡车时，孩子们的兴奋和满足达到顶点，这次经历让他们深刻体会到坚持带来的喜悦，也让他们更加信任和依赖 Mimi，情感从失落转变为充满成就感和幸福感。
故事线
Max 和 Lily 没赶上冰淇淋车，Mimi 决定带他们寻找。
三人在烈日下沿着街道寻找，方向不明。
孩子们疲惫，Max 信念动摇。
Mimi 鼓励 Max，大家继续前行。
找到冰淇淋卡车。
孩子们买到冰淇淋，领悟坚持的意义。
主旨升华句
This experience taught the children that as long as we hold on to our goals with unwavering determination, the sweet rewards of success will surely come our way.
Through the journey of chasing the ice - cream truck, they learned that perseverance in the face of difficulties is the key to achieving our dreams, no matter how small they may seem.
What seemed like a simple pursuit of ice cream turned into a valuable lesson about never giving up, showing that every effort counts in the pursuit of happiness.
This adventure not only satisfied their craving for ice cream but also planted the seed of perseverance in their hearts, which will surely grow and influence their future.
The story of their search for the ice - cream truck serves as a reminder that even in the most challenging moments, a positive attitude and perseverance can lead us to the sweetest of outcomes.
写作示范
示范一
After about twenty minutes of walking, Max’s faith started to get shaken in the burning sun. His little face was flushed, and his steps became heavier and heavier. “Grandma, I’m so tired. Do you think we can really find it ” he asked, his voice filled with doubt. Mimi smiled gently and wiped the sweat off his forehead. “Of course, my dear. Remember, never give up. The sweeter the treat, the more effort it takes to get it.” Encouraged by Mimi, Max took a deep breath and nodded.
Just two blocks later, they found it. The familiar ice - cream truck was parked by the side of the road. “There it is!” Lily shouted excitedly, jumping up and down. Max’s eyes sparkled with joy. They rushed towards the truck, and soon, each held a delicious ice - cream cone in their hands. Licking the ice cream, they realized that the long walk was all worth it. This experience taught them the power of perseverance.
示范二
After about twenty minutes of walking, Max’s faith started to get shaken in the burning sun. He dragged his feet, looking longingly at the shade under the trees. “I don't think we can make it, Grandma,” he mumbled. Mimi squatted down and looked into his eyes. “Max, every great adventure has its tough parts. But giving up means we'll never get what we want. Let's take a short break and then keep going, okay ” Max thought for a while and then agreed.
Just two blocks later, they found it. The sound of the ice - cream truck's bell filled the air. Max and Lily's faces lit up. They ran towards the truck, their tiredness forgotten. As they savored their ice - creams, they knew that this wasn't just about the delicious treat. It was about the valuable lesson of never giving up, a lesson they would carry with them forever.
【答案】
After about twenty minutes of walking, Max’s faith started to get shaken in the burning sun. He wondered out loud, “Maybe we should quit. We have been walking pretty far and haven’t seen the truck yet.” With that, he collapsed, resting his aching legs and rubbing his sore feet. Mimi bent over and patted him gently on the shoulder. Smiling, she comforted the boy, “Max, remember: winners never quit, and quitters never win”. “Yeah! Never give up!” Lily agreed. Max looked up, thought for a while and jumped to his feet. “You are right. Let’s hurry!” And so they marched on.
Just two blocks later, they found it. The ice-cream truck was parked just around the corner, shining brilliantly in the sunlight, as if waiting to reward the three adventurers with a most generous treat for their patience and determination. “Finally!” Max cried at this sight, throwing a fist in the air, while Lily screamed with excitement. They laughed, cheered, and chanted in chorus, “Never give up!” In that magical moment, Mimi turned that phrase into a battle cry for the children. They would be ready for any challenges upon hearing these words. So never give up; your ice cream truck may be just a block away.
The Ice Cream Truck
“Never give up! Never give up!” chanted two young children, Max and Lily, as they marched barefoot behind their grandmother Mimi who was leading them on a great adventure, straight off the beach where they had spent the day building sand castles and swimming in the sea. They were seeking the mysterious ice-cream truck!
Over the years, Mimi had become an example of positivity for her family. It was not a title she earned without effort, however. Her husband died early and at only forty years old she was left to raise her daughter alone. She faced the heart-breaking disaster powerful enough. She could have lived under a black cloud. But she challenged herself to find joy every day instead. She was always up for a new challenge, whether that was hiking across the rocky mountain in Austria to get a better view of the breathtaking scenery, or signing up for tap-dancing classes at fifty. Leading by example, Mimi taught her daughter just how much one could achieve with a positive attitude.
And obviously she had taken the same approach in her relationship with her grandchildren as well. Before starting her adventure with Max and Lily on that hot July afternoon, Mimi heard the ice-cream man’s bell from her beach chair. She turned and saw him briefly, spotting his green shirt and catching the sight of his waving bell before he turned and disappeared. The ice-cream man visited the beach on a daily basis, although the delay between the sound of his bell and the disappearance of his truck was not long. One must be quick to catch him.
Max and Lily were disappointed when they didn’t catch him in time that day. That was until Mimi’s eyes shone and she said, “Never give up!” She explained that the truck might be gone, but they could hurry up to find it at its next stop.
They walked block after block. Not knowing which direction the truck had taken, they had to make their best guess about where to search. The kids’ tiny legs were tired, but they went on, continuing the chant, “Never give up! Never give up!”
注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.续写部分分为两段, 每段的开头语已为你写好。
After about twenty minutes of walking, Max’s faith started to get shaken in the burning sun.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Just two blocks later, they found it.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
文章大意
在一个炎热的七月午后，Max 和 Lily 在沙滩玩耍时，没能及时赶上卖冰淇淋的卡车，感到很失望。他们的奶奶 Mimi 是个积极乐观的人，她以自身经历为榜样，教育家人积极面对生活。看到孩子们失落，Mimi 鼓励他们 “永不放弃”，并带着他们去寻找冰淇淋卡车。他们沿着街道一路寻找，孩子们虽腿酸疲惫，但仍在 Mimi 的带领下，喊着口号坚持前行。
故事山分析
开端：Max 和 Lily 在沙滩没赶上冰淇淋卡车，Mimi 决定带他们去寻找。
发展：三人在烈日下走了很久，方向不明，孩子们开始疲惫。
高潮：Max 信念动摇，此时他们发现了冰淇淋卡车。
结局：找到卡车，满足心愿，同时也领悟到坚持的意义。
伏笔以及在续写中的回应
伏笔：Mimi 是积极乐观的榜样。回应：在 Max 信念动摇时，Mimi 用积极的话语鼓励他，体现其榜样作用。
伏笔：孩子们疲惫但仍坚持喊口号。回应：在寻找过程中，口号成为他们坚持的动力，最终找到卡车，凸显坚持的力量。
伏笔：冰淇淋卡车每日来沙滩，行驶路线有规律。回应：根据这个规律，他们推测出卡车下一个可能出现的地点，最终成功找到。
伏笔：Mimi 听到冰淇淋车的铃声并看到其短暂身影。回应：凭借 Mimi 对冰淇淋车的记忆，他们在寻找过程中更有方向。
伏笔：孩子们渴望吃到冰淇淋。回应：找到卡车后，孩子们满心欢喜地挑选冰淇淋，实现愿望。
续写要点（两段）
第一段：着重描写 Max 信念动摇时的心理，以及 Mimi 如何鼓励他，可加入周围环境描写，如炎热的太阳、干燥的街道等，衬托寻找的艰难。
第二段：描述找到冰淇淋卡车时大家的反应，如兴奋的呼喊、激动的表情，以及购买冰淇淋后的满足感，还可升华主题，谈谈这次经历对孩子们的影响。
情感线
起初孩子们因没赶上冰淇淋车而失望，在寻找过程中，疲惫让 Max 信念动摇，产生放弃的念头，此时情感跌入低谷。而 Mimi 的鼓励让他们重新振作，继续坚持。当找到卡车时，孩子们的兴奋和满足达到顶点，这次经历让他们深刻体会到坚持带来的喜悦，也让他们更加信任和依赖 Mimi，情感从失落转变为充满成就感和幸福感。
故事线
Max 和 Lily 没赶上冰淇淋车，Mimi 决定带他们寻找。
三人在烈日下沿着街道寻找，方向不明。
孩子们疲惫，Max 信念动摇。
Mimi 鼓励 Max，大家继续前行。
找到冰淇淋卡车。
孩子们买到冰淇淋，领悟坚持的意义。
主旨升华句
This experience taught the children that as long as we hold on to our goals with unwavering determination, the sweet rewards of success will surely come our way.
Through the journey of chasing the ice - cream truck, they learned that perseverance in the face of difficulties is the key to achieving our dreams, no matter how small they may seem.
What seemed like a simple pursuit of ice cream turned into a valuable lesson about never giving up, showing that every effort counts in the pursuit of happiness.
This adventure not only satisfied their craving for ice cream but also planted the seed of perseverance in their hearts, which will surely grow and influence their future.
The story of their search for the ice - cream truck serves as a reminder that even in the most challenging moments, a positive attitude and perseverance can lead us to the sweetest of outcomes.
写作示范
示范一
After about twenty minutes of walking, Max’s faith started to get shaken in the burning sun. His little face was flushed, and his steps became heavier and heavier. “Grandma, I’m so tired. Do you think we can really find it ” he asked, his voice filled with doubt. Mimi smiled gently and wiped the sweat off his forehead. “Of course, my dear. Remember, never give up. The sweeter the treat, the more effort it takes to get it.” Encouraged by Mimi, Max took a deep breath and nodded.
Just two blocks later, they found it. The familiar ice - cream truck was parked by the side of the road. “There it is!” Lily shouted excitedly, jumping up and down. Max’s eyes sparkled with joy. They rushed towards the truck, and soon, each held a delicious ice - cream cone in their hands. Licking the ice cream, they realized that the long walk was all worth it. This experience taught them the power of perseverance.
示范二
After about twenty minutes of walking, Max’s faith started to get shaken in the burning sun. He dragged his feet, looking longingly at the shade under the trees. “I don't think we can make it, Grandma,” he mumbled. Mimi squatted down and looked into his eyes. “Max, every great adventure has its tough parts. But giving up means we'll never get what we want. Let's take a short break and then keep going, okay ” Max thought for a while and then agreed.
Just two blocks later, they found it. The sound of the ice - cream truck's bell filled the air. Max and Lily's faces lit up. They ran towards the truck, their tiredness forgotten. As they savored their ice - creams, they knew that this wasn't just about the delicious treat. It was about the valuable lesson of never giving up, a lesson they would carry with them forever.
【答案】
After about twenty minutes of walking, Max’s faith started to get shaken in the burning sun. He wondered out loud, “Maybe we should quit. We have been walking pretty far and haven’t seen the truck yet.” With that, he collapsed, resting his aching legs and rubbing his sore feet. Mimi bent over and patted him gently on the shoulder. Smiling, she comforted the boy, “Max, remember: winners never quit, and quitters never win”. “Yeah! Never give up!” Lily agreed. Max looked up, thought for a while and jumped to his feet. “You are right. Let’s hurry!” And so they marched on.
Just two blocks later, they found it. The ice-cream truck was parked just around the corner, shining brilliantly in the sunlight, as if waiting to reward the three adventurers with a most generous treat for their patience and determination. “Finally!” Max cried at this sight, throwing a fist in the air, while Lily screamed with excitement. They laughed, cheered, and chanted in chorus, “Never give up!” In that magical moment, Mimi turned that phrase into a battle cry for the children. They would be ready for any challenges upon hearing these words. So never give up; your ice cream truck may be just a block away.