读后续写--一枚硬币的考验:智慧女孩的破局之策 讲义-河北省沧州市海孟盐三县2024-2025学年高二上学期12月月考英语试题

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名称 读后续写--一枚硬币的考验:智慧女孩的破局之策 讲义-河北省沧州市海孟盐三县2024-2025学年高二上学期12月月考英语试题
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A very wealthy merchant(商人) had very little to worry about in his life. He had all the material comforts. But his biggest concern was his son. His son was very lazy and showed no intelligence or creativity, much less any willingness to work.
As the son was getting older and it was time for him to get married, the merchant was worried that his son was not ready for the family responsibility, “My lazy son doesn’t have the wisdom or will to work. How will he ever be able to make a living ”
But the mother couldn’t see the flaws(缺点) in her son and had set her heart on finding a wife for her son. So she urged the merchant to find a suitable girl from a good family for her son. She talked about how her son had improved and grown wiser with time and how he was ready for marriage.
The merchant finally gave up to the mother. “But I have a condition. The girl who is supposed to marry our son should buy one item with this small one coin, But that one item must he something to eat, something to drink, something to plant in the garden, and some food for the cow, ”Then the merchant handed over the small coin to his son and asked him to find a girl who could do that.
“But that is impossible; how can anyone get something that can do so many things with such a small amount of money ” said the mother. But the boy was optimistic(乐观) and went to the town to find the girl who could do that, In the town, he met many beautiful women, daughters of wealthy merchants, but no one could think of anything to buy with the coin.
But the young man did not lose hope and visited every household that had girls of marriageable age. The last house in the town was of an ironsmith(铁匠), The boy was tired and sad when he went to the house. A young girl looking at the sad boy asked him what the problem was. The boy explained to her the task he had. “Oh, that is easy, I can do that,” the girl claimed.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
“I know what you can do,” the young girl claimed.
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The boy went home happily with a watermelon.
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文章大意
一位富有的商人生活无忧,但他最大的担忧是自己懒惰、缺乏智慧和创造力且不愿工作的儿子。儿子到了适婚年龄,母亲一心想为儿子找媳妇,商人虽不情愿但提出条件:未来儿媳要用一枚小硬币买到既能吃、又能喝、还能在花园种植以及给牛吃的东西。儿子拿着硬币去镇上寻找,见过许多富家千金都无人能做到,最后在铁匠家,一位年轻女孩表示自己可以做到。
故事山分析
开端:商人富有却为懒惰的儿子担忧,儿子到了结婚年龄,母亲想为其找媳妇,商人提出苛刻条件。
发展:儿子带着硬币去镇上寻找能满足条件的女孩,见了众多富家女均无果。
高潮:儿子在疲惫与悲伤中来到铁匠家,女孩表示能完成任务。
结局(待续写):女孩如何完成任务,儿子和女孩后续的发展,以及儿子的改变。
伏笔及在续写中的回应
儿子的懒惰和缺乏能力:在续写中可回应为女孩完成任务的过程启发了儿子,让他意识到自己的不足,开始改变,变得勤劳且有想法。
商人提出的苛刻条件:是续写的关键,女孩会围绕这个条件展示智慧,如女孩可能会说买西瓜,西瓜瓤能吃、汁能喝、西瓜籽能种、西瓜皮能喂牛,以此解决难题。
母亲对儿子的偏爱:在后续故事中,母亲看到儿子因女孩的影响而改变,会对自己之前的看法有所反思。
儿子的乐观态度:使他坚持寻找,最终找到女孩,在续写中可延续这种乐观,面对未来生活的挑战,儿子和女孩一起积极应对。
女孩的自信回应:预示着她有解决问题的办法,续写中可详细描述她的解决方案,以及她的聪明才智对儿子和商人家庭的影响。
续写要点
第一段:详细描述女孩说出解决方案的过程,包括她的思考和解释,比如她如何想到用一枚硬币买西瓜来满足所有条件,儿子听到解决方案后的反应,是惊讶、佩服还是其他情绪。
第二段:儿子带着西瓜回家后,描述商人看到西瓜时的反应,母亲的态度,以及这个事件对儿子的深远影响,如儿子开始学习如何经营家庭,与女孩的关系进一步发展等。
情感线
起初商人对儿子充满担忧,母亲对儿子盲目偏爱,儿子在寻找过程中从满怀希望到疲惫悲伤,女孩的出现带来转机,她的自信让儿子重新燃起希望。后续儿子带着西瓜回家,商人从怀疑到认可,母亲从盲目到反思,儿子从依赖到想要改变,情感逐渐发生积极的转变,体现了成长和智慧带来的影响。
故事线
商人家庭线:商人担忧儿子,母亲想给儿子找媳妇,商人提出条件。
儿子寻找线:儿子拿着硬币去镇上寻找符合条件的女孩,历经挫折。
难题解决线:女孩出现并表示能解决难题,给出具体方案。
回家反馈线:儿子带着西瓜回家,家人的反应。
儿子成长线:儿子受到女孩启发,开始改变自己。
情感发展线:家人之间情感以及儿子与女孩之间情感的变化。
主旨升华句
True wisdom lies not in wealth or status, but in the ability to solve problems creatively, as the young girl demonstrated.(真正的智慧不在于财富或地位,而在于创造性解决问题的能力,就像那个年轻女孩所展示的那样。)
A simple act of intelligence can not only change one's perception but also inspire growth and transformation, as seen in the story of the lazy son.(一个简单的智慧之举不仅能改变一个人的看法,还能激发成长和转变,就像这个懒惰儿子的故事中所展现的那样。)
In life, unexpected encounters can bring about the most profound changes, just as the meeting between the boy and the girl changed the course of the boy's life.(在生活中,意想不到的相遇能带来最深刻的改变,就像男孩和女孩的相遇改变了男孩的人生轨迹。)
When faced with challenges, a positive attitude and a creative mind can lead to solutions beyond imagination, as the young girl's solution to the difficult task proved.(当面临挑战时,积极的态度和创造性思维能带来超乎想象的解决方案,就像年轻女孩解决难题的方案所证明的那样。)
The story reminds us that everyone has the potential for change, and sometimes all it takes is a spark of inspiration from an unexpected source.(这个故事提醒我们,每个人都有改变的潜力,有时只需要一个意想不到的灵感火花。)
写作示范
示范一
“I know what you can do,” the young girl claimed. She smiled and said, “With this one coin, we can buy a watermelon. The juicy flesh of the watermelon can be eaten, the sweet juice can be drunk. The watermelon seeds can be planted in the garden to grow new watermelons in the future, and the leftover watermelon rinds can be fed to the cow.” The boy was astonished by her clever idea. His eyes widened in surprise and then filled with admiration. “You are so smart! I never thought of that,” he exclaimed.
The boy went home happily with a watermelon. When he showed it to his parents, the merchant was initially skeptical. But after the boy explained the girl's solution, the merchant couldn't help but be impressed. “This girl is really intelligent,” he said. The mother, who had always been blind to her son's flaws, now realized that her son needed such a smart partner. The son, inspired by the girl's wisdom, decided to change. He started to learn various skills and took an interest in the family business. Eventually, he became a responsible and capable young man, and the girl became his wife, bringing new life and hope to the family.
示范二
“I know what you can do,” the young girl claimed. She pondered for a while and then said, “Buy a coconut. The coconut water can be drunk, the white flesh inside can be eaten. The coconut husk can be used to make fertilizer for planting in the garden, and the remaining parts can be used as feed for the cow.” The boy was amazed at her quick - witted response. “That's brilliant! You are the most amazing girl I've ever met,” he praised.
The boy went home happily with a coconut. As soon as he entered the house, his mother rushed to him, eager to know the result. When she saw the coconut, she was puzzled. But after the son told them everything, the merchant nodded in approval. “This girl is exactly the one we need for our son,” he said. The son, deeply influenced by the girl, no longer remained lazy. He began to work hard, learning from his father and gradually taking over the family business. And the girl, with her wisdom and kindness, became an important part of the family, bringing harmony and prosperity.
【答案】“I know what you can do,” the young girt claimed. Then the girl took him to the fruit market and bought him a watermelon with the coin. “It provides something to eat, something to drink, something to plant in your garden and some food for the cow. Give it to your father, and he will be pleased.”
The boy went home happily with a watermelon. The mother of the boy was happy that she would now get a daughter-in-law. The merchant was impressed with the cleverness of the girl. Such a wise girl would be able to look over and correctly guide his son. So, he went to the Ironsmith house and requested his daughter to marry his son. The merchant’s son married the wise daughter of the ironsmith. With such a wise wife, the boy became a hard-working young husband, and they lived happily ever after.