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2024一2025学年八年级下学期第一次月考（深圳专用）
英语
本试卷共75 分，考试时间70 分钟：
注意事项：
1.答卷前，考生务必在答题卡上用黑色字迹的钢笔或签字笔填与自己的考生号、姓名、试室号、座位号，再用2B 铅笔把对应这两个号码的标号涂黑：
2.选择题每小题选出答案后， 用2B 铅笔把答题卡上对应题目的答案标号涂黑。如需要改动， 用橡皮擦十净后， 再选涂其他答案。不能答在试卷上。
3.非选择题必须用黑色字迹的钢笔或签字笔作答， 答案必须与在答题卡各题目指定区域的相应位置上，如需要改动，先划掉原来的答案，然后再与上新的答案，改动的答案也不能超出指定的区域；不准使用铅笔、圆珠笔和涂改液。不按以上要求作答的答案无效。
4.考生必须保持答题卡的整洁，考试结束，将本试卷和答题卡一并交回。
第一部分 选择题（50分）
一、完形填空（10分）
阅读下面短文，掌握其大意，然后从16~25各题所给的A、B、C和D项中选出最佳选项。
Last summer I did some voluntary work at a shelter which is a living place for homeless people to eat and sleep. I wasn't working that summer and was taking only two classes in summer school, so I had some 1． time.
Three nights a week, I 2． in the kitchen of the shelter along with four other volunteers. We planned and cooked for 45 people hot meals with vegetables, chicken, fish and fruit. The homeless people 3． this good food because many of them usually didn't eat well.
I really enjoyed this work, making friends with the four 4． in the kitchen. One was a very nice elderly housewife, one a movie actor, another a young teacher, and the other a college student, like me.
I talked to a lot of the homeless people at the shelter. Their life stories 5． me with sympathy. Some of them had problems with alcohol (酒) or drugs while others only had bad 6． . One woman worked for almost 30 years for a small company, and then she lost her job. She looked for a new job, but couldn't find one, for she was too 7． . She could do nothing but sell her furniture - sofas, chairs, and tables so that she could pay for her food. The woman 8． job hunting, but it didn't work the way she wanted it to. She had no money for her 9． and had to sleep in her car. Then she had to sell her car. Alone, afraid, and homeless, she 10． came to the shelter.
1．A． full B． free C． extra D． long
2．A． helped B． waited C． appeared D． washed
3．A． demand B． needed C． collected D． request
4．A． workmates B． strangers C． elders D． volunteers
5．A． struck B． filled C． strikes D． provided
6．A． luck B． pain C． experiment D． loss
7．A． sick B． poor C． old D． dull
8．A． went on B． moved on C． came on D． worked on
9．A． car B． school C． flat D． company
10．A． thankfully B． unluckily C． suddenly D． finally
二、阅读理解（40分）
11．阅读下面的语言材料，从下面每小题的A、B、C、D四个选项中选出最佳选项。
My name is Jenny. I have been volunteering for about 16 years. I got a serious illness so I had to stop working. My sister suggested that I should do voluntary work which I had never thought of before.
I then decided to start volunteering in a hospital. The volunteers were making a team and chatting and I thought I'd like to help patients in that way too. In the Chapel (小礼拜堂), we take it in turns to do prayers (祈祷) for patients and we each have a room where we go and talk to patients. In the hospital, I often make tea and speak to patients especially if I see the patients who are sitting there on their own or don't have visitors. I go to the Chapel every Wednesday afternoon and go to work in the hospital on the second Monday in a month.
There are so many good things about volunteering — meeting a lot of new people and building a friendship with them. I get as much as the patients do. I feel useful now and it's terrific to think I am making a difference to somebody. Some people are looking forward to seeing you the next week. Volunteering is the best thing I've ever done.
（1）Why did Jenny decide to be a volunteer
A．She felt lonely.
B．She liked to do voluntary work.
C．She couldn't work because of her illness.
D．She thought voluntary walk was good for her.
（2）Which of the following is TRUE about Jenny
A．She doesn't have a sister.
B．She never makes tea for the patients.
C．She goes to the Chapel every Wednesday.
D．She doesn't like to speak to patients.
（3）How many times does Jenny go to work in the hospital every month
A．Once. B．Twice. C．Three times. D．Four times.
（4）What does the underlined word "terrific" mean
A．Terrible. B．Great. C．Common. D．Sad.
（5）We can infer(推断) from the passage that________.
A．Jenny did voluntary work when she had a job
B．Jenny makes many new friends when doing voluntary work
C．Jenny feels bored when she does voluntary work
D．Jenny is not satisfied with her life
12．阅读短文，下列问题
B
When my son, Mark, was in the third grade, he saved all his pocket money for over three months to buy holiday presents. On the third Saturday in December Mark said he had made his list and had twenty dollars in his pocket.
I drove him to a nearby supermarket. Mark picked up a hand basket and went in while I waited and watched in the car. It took Mark over 45 minutes to choose his presents. Finally he came to the checkout counter(交款处) and reached into his pocket for his money. It was not there! There was a hole in his pocket, but no money. Mark stood there holding his basket, tears falling down his face.
Then a surprising thing happened. A woman came up to Mark and took him in her arms. “You would help me a lot if you let me pay for you,” said the woman. “It would be the most wonderful gift you could give me. I only ask that one day you will pass it on. When you grow up, I would like you to find someone you can help. When you help others, I know you will feel as good about it as I do now.”
Mark took the money, dried his tears and ran back to the checkout counter as fast as he could. That year we all enjoyed our gifts almost as much as Mark enjoyed giving them to us.
I would like to say “thank you” to that very kind woman, and tell her that four years later, Mark went house to house collecting blankets(毯子) and clothes for the homeless people in the fire. And I want to promise her that Mark will never forget to keep passing it on.
（1）When did the story probably happen
A．On Christmas Day.
B．Before Christmas Day.
C．On New Year's Day.
（2）When they got to the supermarket, Mark went in _______.
A．with the writer B．by himself C．with the woman
（3）What happened to Mark in the supermarket
A．His gifts were stolen.
B．He broke his basket.
C．He lost his money.
（4）Why did the writer want to say “thank you” to the woman
A．Because she bought Mark a nice present.
B．Because she always paid money for others.
C．Because she taught Mark to help people in need.
（5）What's the best title for this passage
A．A big supermarket B．A kind woman C．A wonderful gift
13．阅读理解
If you enjoy reading, don't miss Shakespeare and Company when you visit Paris. It's a famous English-language bookstore. An American, Sylvia Beach, opened the first Shakespeare and Company in history in 1919. She did more than selling books. Her bookstore was also a library, and she even had beds for writers visiting there. Ms Beach was not only kind to people but also good at choosing books, so her bookstore was often visited by writers like Ernest Hemingway and James Joyce. But in 1941, after the Germans took power in Paris, Ms Beach had to close her bookstore.
In 1951, another American, George Whitman, opened another English-language bookstore, Le Mistral, in Paris. Since then, just as Ms Beach did, Mr Whitman had also made his bookstore a library for people to borrow books, and a free hotel for writers to stay in. To remember Ms Beach, Mr Whitman changed the name of his bookstore to Shakespeare and Company in 1964, two years after Ms Beach died.
Next time when you are in Paris, don't forget to visit this nice bookstore and see if you can spend a night there.
（1）When did Ms Beach open the first Shakespeare and Company
A．In 1919. B．In 1941. C．In 1951. D．In 1964.
（2）Which is NOT mentioned in the passage about Shakespeare and Company
A．It sells books.
B．There are beds for writers.
C．People can borrow books there.
D．Someone reads books to children there.
（3）What does the underlined phrase "took power" mean in Chinese
A．摧毁 B．当权 C．离开 D．服务
（4）Why was Ms Beach's bookstore closed
A．Because she wanted to travel around the world.
B．Because the Germans took power in Paris.
C．Because her bookstore was not popular.
D．Because she didn't like her bookstore.
（5）What do we know about Mr Whitman according to the passage
A．He was Ms Beach's friend.
B．He ever worked at Ms Beach's bookstore.
C．He followed Ms Beach's ways of doing business.
D．He opened a bookstore in 1951 to remember Ms Beach.
第二节（每小题1分，共 5分 ）
根据短文内容，从短文后选出能填入空白处的最佳选项，使短文通顺、意思完整。
How to build self-confidence（自信）
These tips could help anyone who is trying to build self-confidence. Remember to always love yourself and love others as you love yourself. Try not to be so hard on yourself or others.
Choose friends who can lift you up.Talk to and hang out with friends and family. Make new friends with those who love you and really care about you. 　14． 　 Choose your friends carefully. Be careful of people who may make you feel bad or unhappy about yourself.
Get to know yourself. What are your values, your beliefs, your morals（道德观）, your wants, your needs and your tastes 　15． 　
　16． 　 You can't be perfect; you can only be the best you can be. No one in this world is perfect, so don't blame（责备）yourself for making a mistake or not being perfect. Also, stop comparing yourself to others.　17． 　
Be kind to others and do nice things for them. This will help you to build your self-confidence. 　18． 　You will realize that by making other people happy, you will also become happy with your life and yourself.
A．Stop trying to be perfect.
B．The better you know yourself, the easier it will be to love yourself.
C．You will never be them and they will never be you.
D．This is what you can truly do to make people happy.
E．They can accept you for who you are and only want the best for you.
第三节（每小题1分，共 5分 ）
阅读下面短文，根据短文内容，在下面的表格中填入与文章意思最符合的单词，每空填一词。
In May, China's Ministry of Education (教育部) suggested 100 books for middle school students to read. Most of these books are great Chinese works. Not only Chinese students but also many Western readers show great interest in reading these books. In the following, we picked eight books from the list and asked how do Western readers think of them. From their opinions, you can learn the importance of such writings and learn about them from a new point of view.
A Recorder of History—Simaqian changed how we write history with this important book.
Essays and Criticism—The many small stories come together to tell one amazing tale.
All Men are Brothers—There are 108 "bad guys" in this book, who still do the right thing.
Journey to the West—This amazing story made the Monkey King one of China's most popular cultural people.
Liaozhaizhiyi—The writer used ghosts to criticize (批判) real-world problems.
Life is a moment—Lu Xun modernized Chinese writing and introduced it to more Western readers.
Maozedong's Poetry—You may know that Mao Zedong was not only a leader but also a great poet.
Fu Lei's Family Letter—These letters between a father and his son were about more than everyday life.
Western Readers' 　19． 　 on Chinese Works
CME suggested 100 books for middle school students, and most of them are great Chinese works. Many Western readers are also 　20． 　 in reading them. From their opinions, you can learn more about these books.
●A Recorder of History—an important 　21． 　 book by Simaqian. ●Essays and Criticism—Many small stories tell one amazing tale. ●All Men are Brothers—108 "bad guys" do the right thing. ●Journey to the West—The amazing story made the Monkey King popular. ●Liaozhaizhiyi—Use ghosts to criticize (批判) real-world problems. ●Life is a moment—A 　22． 　 Chinese writing by Lu Xun. ●Maozedong's Poetry—Mao Zedong was a great leader and 　23． 　. ●Fu Lei's Family Letter—Letters between a father and his son were about more than everyday life.
第二部分 选择题（25分）
三、语法填空（每小题1分，共 10分 ）
Helping others is 　 　 (easy) than you think. You don't need to wait to become 　 　 rich man like Bill Gates to help the poor. You can become a volunteer, donate(捐献) your time, donate your old clothes and so on. And by 　 　 (do) so, you can become a better and happier person.
　 　 (choice) some people to support, for example, homeless people, poor children 　 　 so on. All of these 　 　 (be) suitable(合适的).
Decide what you are able 　 　(give). Sometimes it isn't only money--you can donate your time as a 　 　(voluntary), you can donate your knowledge to teach poor children, you can donate your old clothes, you can donate food or you can share a meal 　 　 a hungry child.
Tell people about 　 　 , including your friends and your children. Put it in your blog or on your website. In this way, the good work you do will multiply(成倍增加)!
四、书面表达（15分）
25．假设你的印度笔友Mary下个月要到你们学校交流学习。请根据下面的内容提示，用英语鸟一篇短文告诉她关于肢体语言的注意事项。词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
【内容提示】
⑴在中国，点头表示同意，摇头表示不同意；
⑵眼神交流很重要；
⑶与长辈交流时，不要长时间看着对方的眼睛；
⑷你的其他建议。
Body language in China is quite different from that in your Country.
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答案解析部分
1．B；2．A；3．B；4．D；5．B；6．A；7．C；8．A；9．C；10．D
文章大意：讲述作者去年夏天在一个避难所做志愿者工作时的所见所闻。
考查完形填空，注意考虑句型、时态、语法搭配、语境等因素，最后通读一遍，检查验证。
1．那个夏天我没有工作，而且只在暑期学校上两门课，所以我有一些空闲时间。A： full，满的；B： free，空闲的；C： extra额外的；D： long长的。根据" I wasn't working that summer and was taking only two classes in summer school，"可知我有很多空闲时间，所以选free time。故选B。
2．每周有三个晚上，我和其他四名志愿者一起在收容所的厨房帮忙。A： helped帮助B： waited，钱包；C： appeared，出现；D： washed，洗。根据上文"Last summer I did some voluntary work at a shelter"可知我是在收容所里面做志愿者，帮助做一些工作，所以用helped。故选A。
3．无家可归的人需要这种好食物，因为他们中的许多人通常吃得不好。A： demand，要求；B： needed，需要；C： collected，收集；D： request，要求。根据下文"because many of them usually didn't eat well."可知因为他们中的很多人平时吃得不好"，所以他们需要解决温饱问题，用need。故选B。
4．我很享受这份工作，我和厨房里的四个志愿者交朋友。A： workmates，同事；B： strangers，陌生人；C： elders，老年人；D： volunteers，志愿者。根据原文"I___in the kitchen of the shelter along with four other volunteers."可知和我一起共事的也是志愿者，因此用volunteers。可故选D。
5．他们的人生故事让我充满同情。A： struck受到打击；B： filled填充；C： strikes罢工；D： provide提供。固定短语，fill sb. with sth.，某人内心充满……；去年发生的事情用一般过去时，用filled。故选 B。
6．他们中的一些人有酗酒或吸毒的问题，而其他人只是运气不好。A： luck运气；B： pain疼痛；C： experiment实验；D： loss，开源。根据上文"……because many of them usually didn't eat well."可知这些人因为吃不好而来到收容所，更多的是因为运气不好，所以选bad luck。故选A。
7．她想找一份新工作，但找不到，因为她太老了。A： sick，生病的；B： poor，贫穷的；C： old，老的；D： dull，乏味的。根据上文"One woman worked for almost 30 years…"可知她前一份工作已工作30年，因此现在年纪已经很大了，所以用形容词old。故选C。
8．这位女士继续找工作，但结果并不如她所愿.A： went on，继续；B： moved on，继续前进；C： came on，加油，来了；D： worked on，从事。根据原文"…but couldn't find one"，可知她没找到工作，才继续找，所以答案是went on。故选A。
9．她没有钱租房，所以只好睡在车里。A： car，汽车；B： school，学校；C： flat，公寓；D： company，公司。根据下文"…had to sleep in her car."，可知她在汽车里睡觉，是因为付不起房租没有房子住，因此用flat。故选C。
10．孤独、恐惧、无家可归的她最终来到了避难所。A： thankfully，幸亏；B： unluckily，不幸的是；C： suddenly，突然；D： finally，最终。根据原文"…then she lost her job.""…but couldn't find one,"，"She could do nothing but sell her furniture…""…it didn't work the way she wanted it to. She had no money for her…"可知这个老人原本也不想来收容所，所以用fially。故选D。
11．（1）C
（2）C
（3）A
（4）A
（5）B
本文介绍一位志愿者所做的工作以及她的感受。
（1）细节理解。根据第一段 I got a serious illness so I had to stop working.My sister suggested that I should do voluntary work which I had never thoughtof before. 可知作者患了重病，不能工作了，她的姐妹建议她做志愿者工作，故选C。
（2）细节理解。根据第二段I go to the Chapel every Wednesday afternoon可知她每周三去Chapel。故选C。
（3）细节理解。根据第二段 go to work in the hospital on the second Monday in a month可知每个月第二个星期一去医院工作，因此选A。
（4）词义猜测。根据我现在感到自己有用了，想到我能够对别人有用很棒。本句找与useful感彩相近的词。terrible糟糕的；great棒的；common共同的；普通的；sad伤心的。故选B。
（5）推理判断。根据最后一段meeting a lot of new people and building a friendship with them可知作者在做志愿者工作的时候交了很多朋友。故选B。
阅读理解考查对篇章的把握和对细节的识别能力，答题时注意紧扣问题中的关键词，在文章中寻找答案。
12．（1）B
（2）B
（3）C
（4）C
（5）C
(1) 根据文章中On the third Saturday in December可知，应该是在圣诞节前。 (2) 根据文章中while I waited and watched in the car可知，是Mark自己进去的。 (3) 根据文章中reached into his pocket for his money. It was not there! There was a hole in his pocket, but no money.可知Mark把钱给丢了。 (4) 从文章中的最后一段可知，Mark在接受了那位妇女的帮助之后，努力地帮助那些需要帮助的人。 (5) 从文章中的第三段可知，整篇文章都是围绕礼物来写的。
13．（1）A
（2）D
（3）B
（4）B
（5）C
主要讲了莎士比亚书店。
（1）细节题。根据An American, Sylvia Beach, opened the first Shakespeare and Company in history in 1919.可知在1919年开了第一个莎士比亚书店，故选A。
（2）细节题。根据She did more than selling books. Her bookstore was also a library, and she even had beds for writers visiting there.可知莎士比亚书店卖书、有床、也是一个图书馆，即人们可以借书，没有D，故选D。
（3）细节题。根据power可知是权力，take power掌权，故选B。
（4）细节题。根据But in 1941, after the Germans took power in Paris, Ms Beach had to close her bookstore.可知德国人在巴黎掌权，所以Ms Beach关了书店，故选B。
（5）细节题。根据Since then, just as Ms Beach did, Mr Whitman had also made his bookstore a library for people to borrow books, and a free hotel for writers to stay in.可知Mr Whitman效仿Ms Beach做的，让书店成为人们可以借书的图书馆、作家可以待在里面的免费旅馆，故选C。
考查阅读理解，主要考查细节题，注意从文中仔细寻找答案。
14．E；15．B；16．A；17．C；18．D
本文介绍了建立自信心的方法。
A．Stop trying to be perfect.A．不要试图完美。
B．The better you know yourself, the easier it will be to love yourself.B．你越了解自己，就越容易爱自己。
C．You will never be them and they will never be you.C．你永远不会成为他们，他们也永远不会成为你。
D．This is what you can truly do to make people happy.D．这才是你真正能做的，让别人快乐。
E．They can accept you for who you are and only want the best for you.E．他们可以接受你本来的样子，只希望你过得最好。
考查任务型阅读。首先了解所给选项的含义、段落大意以及所填句子在文中的作用，综合以上音素进行选择。
14．根据"Choose friends who can lift you up"可知此段讲述结交的朋友要能够增强自信心，所填句子与朋友有关，结合选项，选项E"他们能接受真实的你，只希望给你最好的"符合要求，故选E。
15．根据"Get to know yourself"可知此段讲述了了解自己，所填句子与了解自己有关，结合选项，选项B"越了解自己越容易爱自己"符合要求，故选B。
16．根据"You can't be perfect"可知谈论不要太完美，所填句子与完美有关，结合选项，选项A"不追求完美"符合语境，故选A。
17．根据"Also，stop comparing yourself to others"可知本段的主要内容是不要和别人比较，选项C"你永远不会成为他们，他们也永远不会成为你"符合要求，故选C。
18．根据"You will realize that by making other people happy，you will also become happy with your life and yourself"可知对别人友好能使他人开心，选项D"这才是你真正让别人开心的事"符合语境，故选D。
19．Opinions；20．interested；21．history；22．modern；23．poet
本文是一篇说明文。本文介绍了八本中文著作以及西方读者对这些作品的看法。
考查阅读填表。 仔细阅读题目要求和表格内容，明确需要填写的信息类型（如人名、地点、时间、原因、结果等）以及表格的框架结构。 首先快速浏览全文，了解文章的大致内容和组织结构，如总分总、时间顺序、因果关系等， 注意段落间的逻辑关系，有助于更准确地定位所需信息。 在阅读过程中，用铅笔轻轻标记出与表格问题相关的关键词或短语，如人名、数字、时间等，不仅要识别关键词，还要理解其在文中的具体语境，避免误读。 针对每个空格，回到文章中精准定位相关信息，确保信息的准确性，对照题目要求，逐一检查已找到的信息是否与表格要求相匹配。
19．根据"In the following, we picked eight books from the list and asked how do Western readers think of them. From their opinions, you can learn the importance of such writings and learn about them from a new point of view."可知，主要介绍的是西方读者对这八本中文著作的看法，此处应用名词复数opinions，首字母大写。故填Opinions。
20．根据"Not only Chinese students but also many Western readers show great interest in reading these books."可知，不仅中国学生，许多西方读者也对阅读这些书表现出极大的兴趣。结合"Many Western readers are also...in reading them."，此处可用be interested in"对……感兴趣"。故填interested。
21．根据"A Recorder of History—Simaqian changed how we write history with this important book."可知，司马迁用《史记》这本重要的书改变了我们书写历史的方式。即《史记》是司马迁撰写的一本重要的历史书，history book"历史书"。故填history。
22．根据"Life is a moment—Lu Xun modernized Chinese writing and introduced it to more Western readers."可知，《朝花夕拾》是鲁迅所写的一本现代汉语著作，结合"A...Chinese writing"，可知空处应填入形容词modern"现代的"，作定语。故填modern。
23．根据"You may know that Mao Zedong was not only a leader but also a great poet."可知，毛泽东不仅是一位领导者，也是一位伟大的诗人。故填poet。
24．easier；a；doing；Choose；and；are；to give；volunteer；with；it
文章大意：告诉我们帮助别人比你想象的容易。你可以成为一名志愿者，捐献你的时间，捐献你的旧衣服等等。这样，你就能成为一个更好更快乐的人。
（1）考查形容词比较级。帮助别人比你想象的容易。空格后有than，要用比较级。easy的比较级easier。故答案为easier。
（2）考查不定冠词。你不需要等待成为像比尔·盖茨那样的富人来帮助穷人。man男人，可数名词单数。rich是辅音开头的词，其前要用不定冠词a，故答案为a。
（3）考查动名词。通过这样做，你可以成为一个更好更快乐的人。by通过，介词，接动词要用动名词，要用doing。故答案为doing。
（4）考查祈使句。选择一些人来支持，例如，无家可归的人、贫困儿童。没有主语，缺少动词，是祈使句。要以动词原形开头。名词choice的动词，choose，要大写。答案为Choose。
（5）考查连词。选择一些人来支持，例如无家可归的人、贫困儿童等。so on列举事物时用，与前面是并列，要用连词and。故答案为and。
（6）考查连系动词be。所有这些都是合适的。主语all of these，复数。相当于they，be要用are。故答案为are。
（7）考查不定式。决定你能给予什么。be able to do sth.能够做某事。固定搭配。故答案为to give。
（8）考查名词单数。你可以把你的时间作为一个志愿者。空格前有不定冠词a，要用可数名词单数。voluntary的名词，volunteer。故答案为volunteer。
（9）考查固定短语。或者你可以和一个饥饿的孩子一起吃饭。share...with...，与......一起分享......，故答案为with
（10）考查人称代词。把它告诉别人，包括你的朋友和孩子。tell sb. about sth.告诉某人关于某事。固定短语。是指上文提到的帮助人的事情。故答案为it。
考查语法填空。主要涉及的形容词的比较级、动名词、连词、固定搭配、固定短语、名词、连系动词等。
25．One possible version:
Body language in China is quite different from that in your country. In China, when people agree with each other, they will nod their heads. However, when they have different opinions, they will shake their heads instead.
Eye contact is an important part of body language. But to be polite, you'd better not look the older people in the eyes for a long time. It is rude to do so in China. To make a good impression on others. I suggest you Smile at others when you are talking with them. I hope my advice will help you and you can have a good time in China.
本文是一篇说明文，全文要用一般现在时进行描述，重点突出肢体语言的注意事项 。文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点，行文间要注意简化描述，用简短的语句代替冗长的语句，在作文完成的时候，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节，写作时，要注意谓语动词形式的变化，写作要点已给出，不可以逐词翻译。
开篇即点明主题，Body language in China is quite different from that in your country. 文中运用it is+形容词+to do句型， It is rude to do so in China和 when people agree with each other, they will nod their heads. when引导的时间状语从句 ，使得语言灵活，并且语法规则正确，短文意思连贯，表达流畅。