Unit 13 We're trying to save the earth!单元话题书面表达（含答案+解析） -2024-2025学年九年级英语下册单元重难点高频易错题专练（人教版）

Unit 13 We're trying to save the earth!
单元话题书面表达
一、书面表达
1．你听说过某些濒临灭绝的动物吗？请以Why should we protect wildlife animals 为题,用英语写一篇短文,说明为什么要保护野生动物。词数为80 词左右。
写作提示: 1）为什么有些野生动物处于危险之中;
2）为什么保护野生动物很重要;
3）我们应该采取什么措施来保护野生动物。
提示词语: wildlife(野生的) ,endangered, tiger, panda, destroy(破坏),fur, take measures (采取措施), plant, tree, build a birdhouse
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2．假如你是李华,你们学校在开展"世界与环境"的主题活动。学校校刊英文版征集有关环境保护的文章。请你用英语写一篇短文,谈谈现在的环境问题,作为学生的我们应该如何保护环境以及保护环境的重要性。
提示词语:factory, river, reuse, turn off, try one's best
提示问题: What are the pollution problems
What should we do as students
Why is it important to protect the environment
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3．你听说过某些濒临灭绝的动物吗？请以“Why Should We Protect Wild Animals？”为题，用英语写一篇短文，说明为什么要保护野生动物。词数80词左右。
提示：⑴为什么有些野生动物处于危险之中；
⑵为什么保护野生动物很重要；
⑶我们应该采取什么措施来保护野生动物。
提示词语：wild野生的；endangered，tiger，panda，destroy破坏；fur，take measures采取措施；plant，tree，build a birdhouse
Why Should We Protect Wild Animals
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4．(B)书面表达
假设你是李华，针对多个城市频繁出现的雾霾天气(haze)，请你给某英文报社的热点话题专栏写一篇短文，分析造成雾霾的原因，并号召人们采取行动来保护环境。
造成雾霾的原因要点提示：
1）汽车排放的有毒气体(poisonous gas)；
2）不遵守规则燃烧的垃圾；
3）来自化工厂(chemical plants)的烟和飞尘(flying dust)。
要求: 1）人们保护环境采取的行动至少列两条；
2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3）词数90左右，文章首尾已给出，不计入总词数。
There has been frequent haze in the last few years in many cities. It's time for people to start paying attention to air pollution.
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Let's take action now!
5．阅读理解
人类只有一个地球。根据提示，以"Saving the Earth"为题，写一篇80词左右的短文。
提示：①如何保护环境已成为世界最大难题之一；
②各种污染破坏环境，损害健康；
③不要乱倒垃圾，乱排废水；
④我们应该保护环境，使我们的家园更加美丽。
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6．习主席在十九大报告中提出要建设美丽中国、推进绿色发展、解决环境问题，足见习主席对环保的重视! 作为新时代的中学生，我们要响应习主席的号召，从"我"做起，保护环境！请用英语写一篇短文，表达你的想法。
要求：1）词数：80~100；
2）字迹工整，语言流畅，表达准确，逻辑清楚；
3）要有复合句表达。
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答案解析部分
1．Why should we protect wildlife animals
Do you know any endangered animals Why are they in danger I think there are many endangered animals in the world, such as tigers and pandas. When farmers cut down trees, tigers can no longer hide and hunt. Many tigers are killed by people who want to sell their fur for money. And there are few places where
pandas can live.
We are not alone in the world. We human beings could not live without all the plants and animals around us. So protecting wildlife animals are very important. We must take measures to keep plants from being destroyed and stop animals from being killed. If each of us can plant a tree and build a birdhouse, the world will be more beautiful. It is very easy but useful.
这是一篇命题性英文写作，在写作时要根据题目要求，根据题目所给的提示和提示语进行书写。文章的内容要围绕题目，不要跑题。文章的时态用一般现在时。语言要流畅，语句要通顺，要有一定的条理性，不要出现语法和拼写错误。
这篇短文围绕了我们为什么要保护野生动物，给出了几点原因。文章条理清楚，上下文的逻辑关系合理，文章还使用了常用的句式结构和短语，例如endangered animal；in danger; in the world; such as; cut down; no longer; take measures to do sth. keep...from...; stop...from...等。文章语句简单，容易理解。
2． As we know, the environment around us is getting worse and worse. Some factories produce terrible gas. Rivers are heavily polluted.
As students, we should do something for the environment. First, we'd better reuse the old textbooks. Second, we should remember to turn off the lights when we leave the classroom. Finally, it's a good idea to use china cups instead of paper cups.
It is important to protect the environment because we have only one earth. If we try our best, we can make the world a better place to live in.
先确定文章的主题，然后根据题目所给所给的词，和语句围绕主题书写短文。文章的语言要流畅，语句要通顺。在书写时要注意文章要有条理性，上下文的逻辑关系要合理，不要出现语法和拼写错误。
这篇短文作者写了环境变得越来越糟糕，我们要采取哪些行为和方法可知减少环境污染。文章使用了常用的句式他和短语，例如as we know, more and more; had better; remember to do sth. ; turn off; It is+名词+to do sth.; instead of；It is +形容词+to do sth.; try one's best; live in等。文章容易理解，是一篇不错的文章。
3．Why Should We Protect Wild Animals
Do you know any endangered animals Why are they in danger I think there are many endangered animals in the world, such as tigers and pandas. When farmers cut down trees, tigers can no longer hide and
hunt. Many tigers are killed by people who want to sell their fur for money. And there are few places where pandas can live.
We are not alone in the world. We human beings could not live without all the plants and animals around us. So protecting wild animals are very important. We must take measures to keep plants from being destroyed and stop animals from being killed. If each of us can plant a tree or build a birdhouse, the world will be more beautiful. It is very easy but useful.
这是一篇命题式的提纲式作文，我们应根据提示中的三条来写为什么要保护野生动物，首先要写明野生动物的现状及其原因，然后接着写保护野生动物的重要性，这部分要言之有物，不能简单地说说，最好写具体的保护措施。
文章开头很好，用两个问句引出了文章的主题，然后举例说明了野生动物的现状，有理有据。文章中一些短语使用较好，比如举例子的such as，还有cut down砍伐，以及no long不再……。除了这些短语的应用外一些复合句使用的也很合理比如 And there are few places where pandas can live. 这是一个关系副词where连接的定语从句，还有 If each of us can plant a tree or build a birdhouse, the world will be more beautiful. 这是一个if引导的条件状语从句，号召我们只有这样做，我们的世界才会更美好。总的来说本文语句通顺，条理清晰，论据充分，不是为一片优秀的作文。
4．There has been frequent haze in the last few years in many cities. It's time for people to start paying attention to air pollution.
What are the reasons behind the terrible weather First, the number of cars has been increasing in the last few years, and they produce too much poisonous gas. Second, a lot of rubbish is burnt without following the rules. Besides, smoke and flying dust from chemical plants add to the problem.
It is time for us to stop air pollution. We should use buses more often instead of driving cars. Planting more trees can also help to improve the air quality.
Let's take action now!
这篇作文要求以李华的身份针对多个城市频繁出现的雾霾天气(haze)，请你给某英文报社的热点话题专栏写一篇短文，分析造成雾霾的原因，并号召人们采取行动来保护环境。通过分析可知，这篇短文应使用一般现在时态，人称应该用第三人称。文章的开头和结尾已给出。作者在第二段中给我们介绍了造成这种恶劣天气的原因。然后在第三段中告诉我们要采取一些行动来阻止空气的污染。作者使用了first，second，besides等过度性的词汇和it's time for sb to do sth ,instead of 等固定搭配形式，文章语句通顺，意思连贯，表达流畅。
提纲作文。题目中给出了具体的写作提纲，我们可以根据这一提纲，组织语言，并且丰富一些内容，串联成完整的短文。写作时，应注意英语表达和汉语的不同，使用正确的词汇和句型，还需要注意语法规范。
5．Saving the Earth
How to protect the environment has become one of the biggest problems in the world. There are many kinds of pollutions around us, such as air pollution, noise pollution, water pollution and light pollution. We can find that rubbish not only pollutes our environment but also harms people's health. So we should not throw rubbish everywhere. Some factories pour waste water into the rivers and the lakes. The behavior of these factories will pollute the water, and sometimes it can kill the fish living in them.
We have only one Earth. We must keep our environment clean and tidy. We must try our best to protect her, and make our home more beautiful.
这是一篇命题作文，要求以 "Saving the Earth"为题。写作内容包括保护环境的迫切性、各种环境污染问题，以及呼吁保护环境。 根据内容要求可知本文的主要时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意并列连词的使用和主谓一致问题，写作中要注意上下文的过渡和逻辑，要符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇短文对保护环境的迫切性、各种环境污染问题，以及呼吁保护环境进行了详细论述。内容全面、详尽，意思连贯，表达清楚，时态和人称的运用灵活准确。其中使用的there be句式和so等连词使得文章的逻辑性大大增强；使用的many kinds of各种，not only，but also不仅而且，try one's best to do sth.尽力做某事等短语增加了文章的可读性。日常进行写作训练注意多运用常见句式和短语，使表达更为流畅。
6． The environmental problems are very serious
these days. In order to make our country more beautiful, we students should do something to protect the environment.
I think we should turn off the lights to save electricity when we leave the room. And when we brush our teeth, we'd better turn off the taps. Also, we should advise our parents to take the bus to work instead of driving and use reusable bags when shopping. Only if we know what to do in our daily life can we make a difference.
How important for us to protect the environment!
这是一篇提示性的文章，本文要求以有关保护环境为题，点明写作的题材，适当运用比较级，表明自己的观点，不少于80词，短文应该运用复合句表达，写作中注意过渡句的使用要符合逻辑。
根据题目要求的提示要建设美丽新中国，推进绿色发展，解决环境问题，从“我”做起，保护环境，内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚，完整。一些复合句的句型，例如“ And when we brush our teeth, we'd better turn off the taps. ”运用得体，准确，使文章更加流畅，自然。