山东枣庄市2016高考英语(二轮)书面表达选编（5）及参考范文
【2016高考训练题】书面表达(满分25分)
假定你是李华。为了加强大 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )家的消防安全童识，你校邀请消防员在学校大厅举行了 安全知识讲座。请给美国朋友彼得写一封信，简述活动情况以及你的感受。要点如下：
1.活动时间：上周三下午3点；
2.讲座内容（典型火灾案例，如何火灾自救，提问互动等）；
3.你的感受。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3.开头语已为你写好。
Dear Peter,
I’m writing to tel ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )l you something about the lecture held in our school.
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作文参考范文
Dear Peter,
I’m writing to tell y ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ou something about the lecture held in our school.
In order to arous ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e our safety awareness, our school invited a fireman to give us a lecture on fire safety. It was held at our lecture hall at 3 p.m. last Wednesday.
First of all, some ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )videos about fire accidents were shown to tell the necessity and importance of fire prevention. Then, the fireman told us how to react in case a fire should occur. Finally, a Q&A session was arranged to answer the related questions and help us get a better understanding of fire safety.
Thanks to the ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )lecture, I’ve learned how fast a fire can grow and what little time we may have to react. So destructive is a fire that each of us should be cautious in our daily life to prevent it from happening. （127 words）
yours,
【湖南省怀化市2014高考英语一模试题】
书面表达 (25 marks)
Directions: Wr ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ite an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你的笔友Tony因上期高三期末数学考试未及格而倍受打击，情绪低落。请你 (王华)写一封信给他，鼓励他重拾自信，实现梦想。
注意：
1、词数不少于120个；
2、不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
—————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————— ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )for you because it can give you some time to be refreshed in both body and mind so that we can go on with our ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )
【江西省上饶市2014高考英语二模试题】
书面表达（满分25分）
请你以一则公益广告——D ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )on，t let the keyboard separate you and your loved ones为题写一篇发言稿，谈谈网络给我们带来的好处，并呼吁人们放下手中的鼠标与家人多多沟通，享受与家人在一起的美好时光。
参考词汇：网民—netizen
注意：1．词数：120左右；
2．题目与开头已给出，不计入总词数
3．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
4．短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息。
Don9t let the keyboard separate you and your loved ones
Hello , everyone !
【参考范文】
书面表达：（满分25分）
Hello, everyo ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ne! Today the number of the netizens in our country has increased rapidly, yet many of them do not pay enough attention to the family. There’s no doubt that we benefit much from the Internet. For example, it’s convenient for us to get the information we need and communicate with our friends and relatives. Meanwhile, it can help us learn what is happening both at home and abroad. However, no matter how attractive the Internet is, we shouldn’t be separated from our loved ones. Therefore, just for a moment, we should stop surfing the Internet and spend time with our families, enjoying the time when we are together. So just remember this: don’t let the keyboard separate you and your loved ones.
Please take action! That’s all. Thank you!山东枣庄市2016高考英语(二轮)书面表达选编（3）及参考范文
【2016高考训练题】书面表达（满分25分）
假设你是李华， 你的加拿大朋友Bob 给 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )你发了一封电子邮件，想了解一下中国高中生对于大学的选择意向，于是你在班里进行了一次调查。请根据下表的信息，给Bob 回复一封电子邮件，告诉他调查结果，并说明原因。
选择意向和比例 原因
省内大学25﹪ 录取机会大；生活习惯相似
省外大学70﹪ 培养独立性；可选学校多
国外大学5﹪ 了解外国文化；有助于学外语
注意: 1.词数100左右；
2.电子邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Bob,
Last week I did ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) a survey among the students in my class on what university they want to choose.
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】书面表达
Dear Bob,
Last week ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) I did a survey among the students in my class on what university they want to choose. Now I’m writing to tell you the results.
Twenty-five ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )percent of my classmates want to choose universities in our province. They say they are more likely to be admitted if they apply to these universities. And they needn’t change their lifestyle too much. Seventy percent of them would like to choose universities in other provinces. Being away from home, they can become more independent and there are more universities for them to choose from. The rest five percent of my classmates plan to choose foreign universities. One reason why they want to go abroad is that they can learn more about different cultures. Besides, it will be a great help to their foreign language study.
Yours,
Li Hua
【河北省邯郸市2014一模试题】书面表达(满分25分)
假如你是李华，英国交换生An ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )na将来你校学习中文并住在你家（幸福路58号）, 请你应她的要求，根据下图介绍你家周边的情况，以便她初步了解在中国的生活。
注意;
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已经给出，不计
入总词数。
Dear Anna,
I am so happy to ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )learn you are coming to study in our school and stay at my home.
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I can’t wait to see you in China.
Yours
Li Hua
【参考范文】One possible version:
Dear Anna,
I am so happy t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )o learn you are coming to study in our school and stay at my home.
My home is at No.58 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ), Xingfu Road, just opposite a bank. A five-minute walk from my home along Xingfu Road westward will bring you to a crossroads, where Xingfu Road meets Youyi Street. On the southeast corner of the crossroads lies a shopping mall, where you can get everything you need. Walk north for about 300 meters, along Youyi Street, and you’ll see our school on the right. There we will spend most of the daytime. At the east end of Xingfu road stands the new railway station and it’s easy to reach, as a bus stop is just next to my home and No.26 or No.46 bus will directly take you there.
I can’t wait to see you in China.
Yours
Li Hua
【吉林省吉林市2014质量检测】
书面表达（满分25分）
假如你是荣光中学的学生李华，你 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )偶然看到在你市求学的美国学生Tom在网上发帖，要大家给他推荐一本学习汉语的书。你手头正好有一本合适的书可以借给他。请你给他发一封电子邮件，要点如下：
1.说明写信原因；
2.描述书的情况；
3.约定见面时间和地点。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I’m Li Hua, ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) a student of Rongguang Middle School.
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】书面表达：（满分25分）One possible version
Dear Tom,
I’m Li Hua, a stude ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )nt of Rongguang Middle School. I learned quite by chance that you needed a book to improve your Chinese. I happen to have one, which I think might help you.
The book, entitled ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) New Practical Chinese, is intended for beginners at your level. Not only does it include the basic conversations in our daily life, it is also a window through which you can get to know Chinese culture and customs. Edited by three language experts, it is widely used by many foreign learners.
If it is convenien ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )t to you, let’s meet at the entrance to Jiangnan Park at 3 p.m. this Sunday. If not, try to find another time that is suitable for both of us.
Yours,
Li Hua山东枣庄市2016高考英语(二轮)书面表达选编（2）及参考范文
【2016高考训练题】书面表达 (满分25分)
假设你是王林，寒假期间你要到伦敦旅游，请你根据以下提示给你的英国好友Alex写一封信，请他推荐一个旅馆，要点如下：
1 介绍你伦敦之行的目的；
2 停留时间：5个晚上，从2月8日到12日；
3 房间要求：预定一个房间，房间不一定很大，但要有浴室；可以上网；
注意：词数100左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Alex,
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【参考范文】
Dear Alex,
How is everyth ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ing going recently I am writing to you in the hope that you can recommend a hotel to me.
To experience d ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ifferent cultures and broaden my horizons, I will visit London during the winter holiday. When I am staying there, I want a single room with a private bathroom for five nights, from Feb 8 to Feb 12. I hope that the hotel you recommend to me should be located near the bus station so that I can take a bus conveniently. In addition, to keep in touch with my family and friends, I hope I can gain access to the internet in the room.
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【广东省东莞市2014模拟试题】
读写任务（共1小题；满分25分）
阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
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One day whil ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e walking through the woods the nice old man found a cocoon（茧）of a butterfly. He took it home. A few days later, a small opening appeared; he sat and watched the butterfly for several hours as it struggled to force its body through that little hole. Then it seemed to stop making any progress. It appeared as if it had gotten as far as it could and it could go no farther.
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The butterfly then came out with ease.
But it had a swo ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )llen body and small, shriveled（萎缩的）wings. The man continued to watch the butterfly because he expected that, at any moment, the wings would enlarge and expand to be able to support the body. Neither happened! In fact, the butterfly spent the rest of its life crawling around with a swollen body and shriveled wings. It never was able to fly.
What the kind-hea ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )rted man did not understand was that the restricting cocoon and the struggle required for the butterfly to get through the tiny opening were Nature's way of forcing fluid（液体）from the body of the butterfly into its wings so that it would be ready for flight once it achieved its freedom from the cocoon.
Sometimes st ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ruggles are exactly what we need in our life. If we were allowed to go through our life without any hardships, it would fail us. We would not be as strong as what we could have been. And we could never fly.
【写作内容】
1.以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。
2.以约120个词就“个人成长需要艰难生活的磨砺”的主题发表看法，至少包含以下内容要点：
（1）你读了这个故事的感受；
（2）叙述当前父母溺爱子女的现象和由此造成的后果；
（3）假如你是父母的一方，你会如何磨砺自己的孩子？
【写作要求】
1.你可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的观点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。
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【参考范文】读写任务：One possible version:
A kind man cut a c ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ocoon open in order to lessen/ ease/ relieve the pain of a butterfly when he saw it struggling out of the coccon, only to find that it could never fly because of his help.
The story se ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ts me thinking a lot. Our life is more or less like this. Sometimes, struggles or obstacles in our life are a must for our growth. It is these struggles or hardships that increase our willpower and contribute to our success. Without these trials, we could never achieve our life goal just as the butterfly did in the story.
Nowadays, wi ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )th only one child in most families, parents do whatever they can to satisfy the child’s needs and even do for him what should be done on his own. Consequently, the child is unable to look after himself without his parents’ presence. Too much care from parents rids children of their chances to grow strong by conquering obstacles. Just as a saying goes, “Flowers from a greenhouse can never withstand a storm”,
If I were a parent ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ), I would first keep him well informed that life is never easy and that he should be ready to face any challenges. Besides, I would expose him to the hardships in life instead of protecting him from difficulties, providing them with chances to fight for his own bright future by overcoming difficulties.
【深圳市2014高考英语综合能力测试题（8）】
基础写作（共1小题；满分15分）
以下是关于“丝绸之路”旅游景点的基本信息。
【写作内容】
请根据以下信息，给学校英语墙报写一篇短文来介绍它。
景点名称：闻名世界的中国“丝绸之路”。所在区域：从今天的西安开始，延伸至中、西亚，最后到地中海东岸；横跨亚欧大陆，成为亚欧人民的友谊之桥。推荐理由：1. 现为世界最重要的主题旅游路线之一；2. 沿路历史文化景点近百个，如大雁塔、青海湖、莫高窟和天山天池等；3. 每年吸引的国内外游客多达50万人；4. 见证了2000多年中西文化交流的进步。
参考词汇：the Mediterranean地中海，Greater Wild Goose Pagoda大雁塔，
the Mogao Grottoes莫高窟
【写作要求】
只能用5个句子表达全部内容。
【参考范文】基础写作 (One possible version)
The Chinese Silk Ro ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ad, well-known to the world, starts from today’s Xi’an towards Central and West Asia, and finally finishes at the east bank of the Mediterranean. It is not only a physical bridge across Asia and Europe but also a bridge of friendship between European and Asian people. Now the Silk Road is recommended as one of the most important theme tour routes in the world. That’s because there are about 100 historical and cultural attractions along the Silk Road such as Greater Wild Goose Pagoda, Qinghai Lake, the Mogao Grottoes and Lake Tianchi (Tianshan), which have attracted half a million tourists from home and abroad every year. Moreover, it has witnessed the 2,000-year progress of cultural exchanges between China and the West.山东枣庄市2016高考英语(二轮)书面表达选编（8）及参考范文
2016高考训练题。书面表达（满分25分）
假如你是李华，新当选的学校英语学习社团（English Club）团长。现在，请你写一篇介绍这个社团的广播稿，欢迎同学们参加。
1．成立时间：2015年5月1日；
2．社团目的：开阔学生视野，激发英语学习兴趣；
3．具体内容：话题讨论（同学们感兴趣的或热点话题）；
常识积累（中西方文化等）；
比赛类（英语演讲、辩论等）
注意：1．词数不少于100；
2．请勿提及学校真实名称；
3．可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；
4．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Boys and girls, attention, please]
Good news for you!
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That’s all. Thank you.
( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )
参考范文：
Boys and girls, attention, please!
Good news for ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) you! An English club will be opened on May 1, 2015. It aims to broaden the students’ horizons and arouse your interest in English.
The Club is a platform ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) where we can do many things. Firstly, we can discuss lots of things on our interest or the hot topic around us. What’s more, we can develop our understanding of the differences between the eastern and western cultures. In addition, kinds of English activities will be held regularly, such as English Speech Competition, English Debate Contest and so on.
I’m sure the club will ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) be of great benefit to our English study. And every one of us is welcomed to join in it.
That’ s all. Thank you.
【天津市蓟县邦均中学2014高考英语模拟试题】
写作（满分25分）
61.请结合下列图画，用英语写一篇120—150词左右的短文，内容包括：（1）图画所体现的变化；（2）你的感受。
参考词汇：改革开放the reform and opening – up
【参考范文】写作
One possible version:
It is 30 years since ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) China carried out the reform and opening up. Great changes have taken place and each part of China can give a clear sign of the rapid development and advance in today’s China.
Take people’s ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )communication for example. In the past, our grandpas had to ask someone who could write for help when they wanted to contact their relatives or friends. As for our fathers, they kept in touch with each other by writing letters by themselves. With the development of science and technology, we can communicate with each other anytime and anywhere by mobile phone.
As a new generation, ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) we are so lucky living in the new century. We’re proud of our country and its achievements. So we should cherish the happiness of today’s life. Meanwhile, we should put more effort and make more contributions to our beloved motherland. We believe she will become stronger and stronger.
【深圳市2014高考英语综合能力测试题（10）】
基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）
请根据提示内容，写一篇短文，介绍下面的内容。
[写作内容]
请根据以下信息，写一份有关“英语角”的活动通知。
活动时间与地点 本周五下午四点学校礼堂
参加人员 全校所有学生和英语教师
活动内容 1．邀请五名哥伦比亚大学学生参加，其中Lucy将发表演讲——美国生活方式及美国教育；2．我校学生表演自编自导节目，包括英文歌曲演唱和英语戏剧表演；3．中美学生自由讨论感兴趣话题， 如：语言学习和各自不同的学校生活等。
注意事项 提前了解美国文化，为自由讨论做准备2. 务必准时参加
[写作要求]
1．只能使用五个句子表达全部内容；
2．英语通知的格式已给出。
Notice
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English Club
Tuesday, May 13th, 2014
【参考范文】基础写作 (One possible version)
Notice
There will be an E ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )nglish Corner activity in the school hall at 4:00 this Friday afternoon and all our students and English teachers are required to attend it. For this English Corner activity, we have invited five American students from Columbia University, among whom Lucy will give us a speech on the American lifestyle and education in America. Meanwhile, some of our students will give wonderful performances composed and directed by themselves, including English songs and plays. Moreover, we will hold a free discussion, in which Chinese and American students can talk about what they are interested in, such as language learning and their own lives in different schools.
Please prepare yours ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )elf to make notes about American culture in advance for the free discussion and be sure to arrive on time.
English Club
Tuesday, May 13th, 2014
【深圳市2014高考英语综合能力测试题（10）】
读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）
阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Last year, researche ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )rs in Taiwan found that playing outdoors reduces progression of short-sightedness of school children. Around the same time, Global Times published a report, explaining that staring at the screen of an iPad closely tightens the muscles of the eyes and will lead children to suffer from headaches. If the muscles remain tightened for a long time, they will change the shape of the eyeballs, which will lend to short-sightedness.
Hu Li, an e ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ye doctor at Guang7hou No. 3 Hospital, said that in recent weeks, 70~0% of his patients were children and the biggest cause of their eyesight problems was iPads and smart phones. Hu said he was working overtime all summer and he was not alone. Eye doctors at Sun Yat-sen University Hospital said they were seeing over 300 children a day.
In 2012, the N ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ational Bureau of Statistics revealed that China has the second highest rate of short-sightedness in the world. Up to 61% of primary school students are short-sighted, 68% of middle- school students are short-sighted, and 90% of university students are short-sighted: the paper reports.
【写作内容】
1．以约30个词概括本文内容；
2．以约120个词就“学生近视严重”这一话题发表自己的看法，并包括如下要点：
(1)分析学生近视的原因；
(2)简述你或他人一次因近视而产生不便的经历；
(3)对于保护视力，你的建议是什么。
【写作要求】
1．作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。
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【参考范文】读写任务 (One possible version)
The cause of short-sig ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )htedness is explained with two examples of doctors’ findings and figures from the National Bureau of Statistics. They showed that short-sighted students are increasing due to the use of iPads and smart phones.
Why are short-si ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ghted students increasing That’s because many students often spend too much time surfing the Internet: playing games and watching videos. On the other hand, most of them usually overwork their eyes since they have to do a lot of reading and endless homework every day.
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2016高考书面表达。
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现在，故宫免费向中国中学生于每周星期二开放。
故宫有着中国历史上五千多年的珍宝（precious treasure)。请他亲自来看一看。
注意：
词数120左右；
信的开头已经为你写好：
Dear Tom ,
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【参考范文】书面表达：
The Palace M ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )useum is also called the Forbidden City. It took 200,000 workers more than 13 years to build the Forbidden City. The Forbidden City was finished being built in 1420. The largest museum in the world ,the Palace Museum, holds cultural treasures from the past 5,000 years of Chinese history . The city’s palaces have 9,999 rooms altogether. Chinese people traditionally have thought of nine as a lucky number . Students from all over China now visit in groups at no charge every Tuesday .
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【天津市蓟县二中2014高考英语模拟试题】写作（满分30分）
Michael是一名美国 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )中学生，在学校里选修汉语。他利用暑假到中国进修，希望进一步了解中国文化。有一天，他看到下面有关成语的漫画，不大明白其中的意思。请你用英语把漫画所表达的故事和寓意写成一篇短文，向他解释。
注意：
1、词数：80—120
2、参考词汇：撞上bump into;锄头 hoe
【参考范文】写作（满分30分）
One possible version:
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一、评分原则
1．本题总分为30分，按5个档次给分。
2．评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。
3．词数少于120和多于150的，从总分中减去2分。
4．评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性。
5．拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
6．如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。
二、内容要点
观点正确，态度积极向上，文体不限。
三、各档次的给分范围和要求
第一档：（21—25分）
很好地完成了试题规定的任务。
——对题中所提供的信息进行了恰当的描述，清楚地表达了自己的观点并进行了充分合理的论证。
——语法结构和词汇选用恰当、丰富。
——语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。
——有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
第二档：（16—20分）
较好地完成了试题规定的任务。
——对题中所提供的信息进行了描述，表达了自己的观点并进行了论证。
——应用的语法结构和词汇能基本满足任务的要求。
——语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。
——应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
第三档：（11—15分）
基本完成了试题规定的任务。
——能描述题目中的信息，表达了自己的观点并尝试进行论证。
——应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
——有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。
——应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。
第四档；（6—10分）
未恰当完成试题规定的任务。
——能涉及到题目所提供的信息，体现了对问题的看法及其原因。
——语法结构单调，词汇知识有限。
——有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。
——较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
第五档：（1—5分）
未完成试题规定的任务
——很少涉及题目中所提供的信息，个人观点表达不清，而且没有阐述原因。
——语法结构单调，词汇项目有限。
——较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。
——缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。
0分
信息未能传达给读者。
未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判；所写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法辨认。
【深圳市2014高考英语综合能力测试题（9）】
读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）．
阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
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[写作内容]
1．以约30个词概括本文内容：
2．以约120个词就“电子书能否取代传统纸质书”这一话题发表自己的看法，并包括如下要点：
(1)阐述电子书的优势；
(2)说明纸质书的优势；
(3)你的观点及理由。
[写作要求]
1．作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
[评分标准]
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。
【参考范文】读写任务 (One possible version)
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【2016高考训练题】写作 (满分25分)
距离高考剩下不到一年的时间了， ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )紧张的高考备考已经拉开序幕，但是很多同学还不知如何处理学习、健身和休息与高考备考之间的关系。请根据图中的内容写一篇英语短文，谈一谈你对这一问题的建议。
注意：
1．词数100字左右，开头语已为你写好，
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
How to Get Prepared for the College Entrance Exams
We are going to a ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ttend the College Entrance Exams in less than one year. ___________________
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【参考范文】One Possible Version:
How to Get Prepared for the College Entrance Exams
We are going ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )to attend the College Entrance Exams in less than one year. However, many students still don’t know how to coordinate their study, rest and physical exercise when preparing for the Exams. They usually devote too much time to their study, which results in poor health and low efficiency of learning.
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【山东省潍坊市2014高考英语3月模拟试题】
写作(满分30分)
假设你是新华中学的学生李 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )华，你周末滑冰时不慎将胳膊摔折，因而未能参加英语考试。请根据以下要点给你的外籍教师Mrs．Clemens写一封电子邮件：
1．表达歉意并解释缺考原因；
2．询问补考时间及课外作业(如阅读书目、作业要求等)。
注意：
1．词数：l20—150；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mrs．Clemens，
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【山东省烟台市2014高考英语3月模拟试题】
写作(30分)
假如你是高三学生李华，今年高考英语学 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )科阅读量加大，而你的阅读能力较差，因此学习压力越来越大。请根据以下提示写信向你的前外教Mr．Johnson求助：
1．英语学习的困难以及增加阅读量给自己带来的困扰；
2．希望得到他的指导和帮助。
注意：1．词数：l20—l50，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr．Johnson，
Yours，
Li Hua
【参考范文】写作（One possible version）
Dear Mr. Johnson,
How are things going with you
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【陕西省西安市第一中学2014高考英语二模试题】
书面表达 （满分30分）
假定你是西安某一中学高三学生 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )李华。在一个英文网络论坛上,你看到如下的一个帖子:
With the college entrance examination approaching, quite a few students are suffering mental problems. It does great harm to their study and health. What can we do to help those students
请你回帖，要点如下：
1. 同意并表示担忧，实际上，学生心理压力不可避免。
2. 列出某些学生心理焦虑的现象（如： ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )担心考不好；缺乏自信心；容易发脾气等）；
3. 提出应该采取的对策（如积极态度和应对方法）。
注意：1. 可适当发挥；
2. 词数：不少于100字。
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【参考范文】
I can’t agree more ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) with what you said. That many students are suffering mental problems also worries me. It’s a fact that we face more and more mental pressure in our life, which, in my opinion, everyone will meet in their life.
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