Unit 12
Life is full of the unexpected.
Writing Name
ⅠFill the blanks
I will always remember last Monday, which was the unluckiest day of my life.
__________, when I woke up in the morning,I found myself overslept. By the time I got up, my brother had already gotten in the shower. After my brother ___________ the bathroom,I took a quick shower and then _________ the bus station. Unfortunately, before I got to the bus station, the bus had already left. ___________________,I had to run all the way to school. __________, by the time I got to school,I realized that I had left my backpack at home. Therefore,I had to run back home to get it. But when I got home,I realized I had left my keys in the backpack. You can ________ how hopeless I was at that time! Then I ran back to school without any keys or backpack. ___________ ,I was late for class.
What a terrible day I had!
II. Analyze the topic
Writing Topic
Can you remember a lucky or an unlucky day What happened Write your story about your lucky or unlucky day to a partner or the class.
The following questions may help you.
1.What was the date
2.What happened first
3.Was this lucky or unlucky Why
4.What happened next
5.How did the day end
6.How did you feel about this day
写作要求：
2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息。
3.不少于100词。
Person：
Tense：
Text：
Details
Reader：
III. Make an outline
Structure：
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IV. Finish the first draft
V. Finish the second draftMarking ladders
Unit 12 Life is full of the unexpected.
For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure, content, grammar & language Self-check Peer check Teacher’s assessment
Structure and content I have organized my writing into paragraphs. (1 point)
Para : I have written the background of the story. (2 point)
Para_____: I have written what happened according to the time order (9points)
Para.____:I have showed my feelings (2 point)
My writing is tidy and clear. (2point)
Grammar and language My expressions are right. (3 points)
There are spelling mistakes. (1 point)
I have used some good sentences. (2 point)
I have used some conjunction words and transitional sentences.. (2 point)
I have checked my word count is around . (1 point)
Total Score
What can I do to improve my writing next time (共11张PPT)
Unit 12
Life is full of the unexpected.
Writing
Review
Review Mary’s dairy and fill the blanks
without doubt first of all with disappointment imagine
rush to what's worse get out of
I will always remember last Monday, which was the unluckiest day of myIife.
__________, when I woke up in the morning,I found myself overslept. By the time I got up, my brother had already gotten in the shower. After my brother ___________ the bathroom,I took a quick shower and then _________ the bus station. Unfortunately, beforeI got to the bus station, the bus had already left. ___________________,I had to run all the way to school. __________, by the time I got to school,I realized that I had left my backpack at home. Therefore,I had to run back home to get it. But when I got home,I realized I had left my keys in the backpack. You can ________ how hopelessI was at that time! Then I ran back to school without any keys or backpack. ___________ ,I was late for class.
What a terrible day I had!
First of all
got out of
With disappointment
What's worse
imagine
Without doubt
rushed to
Pre-writing
Analyze the passage
I will always remember last Monday, which was the unluckiest day of my life.
First of all, when I woke up in the morning,I found myself overslept. By the time I got up, my brother had already gotten in the shower. After my brother got out of the bathroom,I took a quick shower and then rushed to the bus station. Unfortunately, before l got to the bus station, the bus had already left.With disappointment ,I had to run all the way to school. What's worse , by the time I got to school,I realized that I had left my backpack at home. Therefore.I had to run back home to get it. But when I got home,I realized I had left my keys in the backpack. You can imagine how hopeless I was at that time! Then I ran back to school without any keys or backpack. Without doubt ,I was late for class.
What a terrible day I had!
What did Mary write in the dairy
when
who
what
feelings
Analyze the passage
Pre-writing
I will always remember last Monday, which was the unluckiest day of my life.
First of all, when I woke up in the morning,I found myself overslept. By the time I got up, my brother had already gotten in the shower. After my brother got out of the bathroom,I took a quick shower and then rushed to the bus station. Unfortunately, before l got to the bus station, the bus had already left.With disappointment ,I had to run all the way to school. What's worse , by the time I got to school,I realized that I had left my backpack at home. Therefore.I had to run back home to get it. But when I got home,I realized I had left my keys in the backpack. You can imagine how hopeless I was at that time! Then I ran back to school without any keys or backpack. Without doubt ,I was late for class.
What a terrible day I had!
What order did Mary use to write what happened in the dairy
Time order
Writing Topic
Can you remember a lucky or an unlucky day What happened Write your story about your lucky or unlucky day to a partner or the class.
The following questions may help you.
1.What was the date
2.What happened first
3.Was this lucky or unlucky Why
4.What happened next
5.How did the day end
6.How did you feel about this day
要求：
1.短文不得出现任何真实的人名、校名及其他相关信息；
2.书写规范，100词左右；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Pre-writing
Person
The first person
Tense
The simple past tense and the past perfect tense
Text
A passage
Reader
A partner or the class
Details
1. answer all the questions
2.80-100 words
Pre-writing
In my life, there were many things impressed me deeply.
In my life, there were many things impressed me deeply.
Beginning
movie/reasons/contents/feelings
Body
Ending
Structure
background of the story:who,when,where
what happened:unlucky/lucky;time order
how did you feel
What a ... day I had! How ... the day is!
Pre-writing
In my life, there were many things impressed me deeply. I will always remember ...Which was the luckiest / unluckiest day of my life.
1.When I woke up that morning,...2.With disappiontment / excitement ...3. You can imagine how ... l was.4.l could’t believe 5.I realized that ...6.Without doubt...7,I think...8.Finally...
Write a passage in 15 minutes
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While-writing
a clear structure:beginning,body,ending.
correct content: (when/who/what happened/How did it happen/feelings)
some conjunction words and transitional sentences
some good sentences
no spelling mistakes
a clear and tidy hand writing
no wrong sentences
enough words
Structure
and
content
Grammar andIanguage
Post-writing
Spelling mistakes
Wrong sentences &Punctuation mistakes
Good sentences
Conjunction words
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Check the composition
Post-writing
Work in groups,correct the mistakes and appreciate(欣赏) your group members’ compositions. Then show it to the class.
Focus on: 1. structure(结构)
2. handwriting(书写)
3. points(要点)
4. grammar(语法)
5. punctuation(标点)
6.Ianguage(语言)
7. fluency(流畅度)
Post-writing
