Unit 1 The mass media 单元写作深度指导（译林版2020）
Reporting on a recent event（新闻报道）
单元话题 真题展示 考情预测
新闻报道 2023年浙江卷1月 新闻是新近发生的事实的报道，是一种客观存在的事实。在时间上是新近发生的，在内容上是新鲜的，在价值上是大家关心的和需要的。
Write a news report : choose a resent event you are going to write about. It should include Headline: It tells what the story is about. Byline: It tells about the writer of the story. Lead: Covers the most important facts. Body: Includes more information and details. Ending: Talks about the solution or something to think about. 上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括：1. 活动的过程；2. 收获与感想。注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
段落 内容 句子设计
开头段 活动介绍 ●A … was held in our school successfully on … ●Last Friday, 100 students from our school visited … ●The autumn sports meet took place … ●On January 13, a … struck …, causing …
主体段 具体说明 ●The activity/event/lecture/competition attracted all the students and teachers. ●It was held to encourage students to learn more about … ●The performance deeply impressed the audience present. ●This is the worst … since … ●While listening to …, the students took notes.
结尾段 意义影响 ●Through the activity, students can learn from each other better. ●This visit/event/activity improved their knowledge and broadened their horizons. ●The event was a complete success. ●By taking part in the activity, students have learned a lot about …
【明确新闻报道六要素】
Six elements of news reports：包括：“五个W”:who, what, when, where, why, “一个H”：How，即：时间、地点、人物、事件的起因、经过、结果。
【新闻报道的分类】
World News/International News
Home News/National News/Domestic news
Political News
Economic News
Science and education News
Military News
City News
Literature and Art News
【新闻报道的内容】
● 开头：Last week witnessed …held by our school，which was arouse the awareness of doing.
● 主体：
活动内容：It mainly included two activities：the class song competition and the art works exhibition.
参加人员：150 competitors participated in the race，the majority of whom were students and teaching staff.
辩论赛：Many students expressed their ideas bravely and actively，showing the audiences their talent and confidence.
参观：After arriving there, we paid a visit to…, which made us…
做好事：On arrival, our head teacher assigned different tasks and under his instructions, we cleaned the windows, swept the ground and even shared stories with some elderly people.
● 结尾
（反响）：Widely praised by all walks of life, the race turned out to be a great success.
结尾展望/启发类：Only through internet voting can everyone express his opinion properly and acquire the real fairness. Only if we take effective steps to deal with this problem now can…
【万能写作模板】
______ (标题)
______(时间或地点) saw/witnessed ______(活动). Aimed at ______(活动目的), this activity was well received in the whole school.
______(参与者) took an active part in the activity. The ______(活动) provided a platform for all the students to ______(活动内容一). Most impressively, ______(活动内容二).
With the students’ active participation and teachers’ enthusiastic support, the ______(活动) was undoubtedly a success.（This activity was highly spoken of by students, for it motivated them to______(影响).
（2023年浙江卷1月）上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括：1. 活动的过程；2. 收获与感想。注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
（2020年全国新高考Ⅰ卷）上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:1.参加人员；2. 跑步路线:从校门口到南山脚下；3. 活动反响。注意: 1.写作词数应为100词左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Cross-Country Running Race
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(2024年石家庄二模) 假定你是李华，劳动节到来之际，你做了关于“The Benefits of Doing Housework”的的校园采访。请你就 此次采访写一篇报道，向校英文报投稿。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡上的相应位置作答。
The Benefits of Doing Housework
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(2024年重庆巴蜀中学高考适应性月考卷)假定你是李华，上周六你校举办了一场以 “变废为宝”为主题的环保时装秀。请你为英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：1. 参加人员；2. 活动情况；3. 活动反响。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Unit 1 The mass media 单元写作深度指导（译林版2020）
Reporting on a recent event（新闻报道）
单元话题 真题展示 考情预测
新闻报道 2023年浙江卷1月 新闻是新近发生的事实的报道，是一种客观存在的事实。在时间上是新近发生的，在内容上是新鲜的，在价值上是大家关心的和需要的。
Write a news report : choose a resent event you are going to write about. It should include Headline: It tells what the story is about. Byline: It tells about the writer of the story. Lead: Covers the most important facts. Body: Includes more information and details. Ending: Talks about the solution or something to think about. 上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括：1. 活动的过程；2. 收获与感想。注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
段落 内容 句子设计
开头段 活动介绍 ●A … was held in our school successfully on … ●Last Friday, 100 students from our school visited … ●The autumn sports meet took place … ●On January 13, a … struck …, causing …
主体段 具体说明 ●The activity/event/lecture/competition attracted all the students and teachers. ●It was held to encourage students to learn more about … ●The performance deeply impressed the audience present. ●This is the worst … since … ●While listening to …, the students took notes.
结尾段 意义影响 ●Through the activity, students can learn from each other better. ●This visit/event/activity improved their knowledge and broadened their horizons. ●The event was a complete success. ●By taking part in the activity, students have learned a lot about …
【明确新闻报道六要素】
Six elements of news reports：包括：“五个W”:who, what, when, where, why, “一个H”：How，即：时间、地点、人物、事件的起因、经过、结果。
【新闻报道的分类】
World News/International News
Home News/National News/Domestic news
Political News
Economic News
Science and education News
Military News
City News
Literature and Art News
【新闻报道的内容】
● 开头：Last week witnessed …held by our school，which was arouse the awareness of doing.
● 主体：
活动内容：It mainly included two activities：the class song competition and the art works exhibition.
参加人员：150 competitors participated in the race，the majority of whom were students and teaching staff.
辩论赛：Many students expressed their ideas bravely and actively，showing the audiences their talent and confidence.
参观：After arriving there，we paid a visit to…，which made us …
做好事：On arrival，our head teacher assigned different tasks and under his instructions，we cleaned the windows，swept the ground and even shared stories with some elderly people.
● 结尾
（反响）：Widely praised by all walks of life，the race turned out to be a great success.
结尾展望/启发类： Only through internet voting can everyone express his opinion properly and acquire the real fairness. Only if we take effective steps to deal with this problem now can …
【万能写作模板】
______ (标题)
______(时间或地点) saw/witnessed ______(活动). Aimed at ______(活动目的), this activity was well received in the whole school.
______(参与者) took an active part in the activity. The ______(活动) provided a platform for all the students to ______(活动内容一). Most impressively, ______(活动内容二).
With the students’ active participation and teachers’ enthusiastic support, the ______(活动) was undoubtedly a success.（This activity was highly spoken of by students, for it motivated them to______(影响).
（2023年浙江卷1月）上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括：1. 活动的过程；2. 收获与感想。注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
【答案】
Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’ Union. The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist, who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plant species. We then went on a natural walk to observe and collect samples of different plants. Throughout the event, I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes, as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals. I also gained a greater appreciation for the role that plants play in maintaining the balance of our ecosystem.Overall, it was a valuable and enriching experience.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为校英文报写篇报道，介绍上周末校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累参与：participate in → attend开始：begin → start观察，调查：observe → survey震惊：strike → astonish/surprise
2.句式拓展简单句变复合句
原句：Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’ Union.
拓展句：Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’ Union, which benefited me a lot.
【高分句型1】The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist, who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plant species.（运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Throughout the event, I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes, as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals.（运用了一般过去时的被动语态和定语从句）
（2020年全国新高考Ⅰ卷）上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:1.参加人员； 2. 跑步路线:从校门口到南山脚下； 3. 活动反响。注意:1.写作词数应为100词左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Cross-Country Running Race
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【答案】
A Cross-Country Running Race
Last Sunday witnessed (目睹) an extraordinary (非凡的) cross-country running race, which nearly drew the attention of (吸引) every student and teacher of our school. (总述活动时间、地点、人物事件)
The students (selected from every class) took part in the competition. The route measured five kilometers, from our school gate to the foot of South Hill. Every runner tried their best to finish the task, with their classmates along the way giving them necessary help as well as encouragement. At last, all the runners managed to (设法成功) arrive the finish line, receiving cheers from all the directions (来自四面八方的). (参加人员、比赛线路及比赛过程)
The activity was spoken highly of (被高度评价) and turned out to be (结果是) a great success. Not only does it build up our body, but it also enriches our school life. (活动反响及意义)
(2024年石家庄二模) 假定你是李华，劳动节到来之际，你做了关于“The Benefits of Doing Housework”的的校园采访。请你就 此次采访写一篇报道，向校英文报投稿。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡上的相应位置作答。
The Benefits of Doing Housework
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The Benefits of Doing Housework
In a campus interview conducted recently,students have shared how they benefit from doing housework.The findings suggest that students participating in housework are more likely to improve time management,relieve stress,and build a sense of responsibility.The interviews reveal that doing housework not only promotes family bonding but fosters personal growth.Some students believe that it even plays a significant role in academic success,for it helps strengthen self-reliance and confidence.All in all,the benefits extend beyond home as long as they embrace the role of contributing to housework.
(2024年重庆巴蜀中学高考适应性月考卷)假定你是李华，上周六你校举办了一场以 “变废为宝”为主题的环保时装秀。请你为英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：1. 参加人员；2. 活动情况；3. 活动反响。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
A Trashion Show
Last Saturday, our school auditorium witnessed a hot "Trashion" show, a fashion show featuring outfits made of trash.The event was aimed at promoting awareness about the huge amount of waste that we produce in our day-to-day lives, much of which sadly goes unrecycled. Numerous students volunteered to model for the show. They walked the runway in costumes cleverly put together with discarded items, ranging from plastic bottles to newspapers.The response from the audience was incredibly positive. Not only did the event showcase the remarkable Creativity of our peers, but it also served as powerful reminder for all of us to reconsider our daily consumption habits. After all, a sustainable future is shaped by the daily choices we make.Unit 2 Sports culture 单元写作深度指导（译林版2020）
Making a fact file about a sportsperson（人物描写）
单元话题 真题展示 考情预测
人物描写 2023全国甲卷 “对社会有突出贡献的人物”是高中英语新课标主题语境内容要求之一，也是高考英语常考话题之一。它包括个人情况简介和名人事迹介绍两个方面,这类文章通常以人物传记和逸闻趣事为主，目的是培养学生高尚的道德情操和帮助学生树立正确的人生观和价值观。
The article of character introduction generally adopts the three-paragraph mode of "total one point one total". The first paragraph is brief and to the point. Get straight to the point, go straight to the theme, briefly introduce the identity of the characters and their achievements; The second paragraph introduces the main experiences of the characters: The third paragraph summarizes the full text with one or two sentences to achieve the beginning and end of the echo, finishing the effect. 你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.人物简介及事迹； 2. 意义或启示。
段落 内容 句子设计
开头段 引入话题（介绍人物的基本情况，如外貌、年龄等） ① As for my favorite figure, it must be ... 至于我最喜欢的人物，那一定是 ...... ② Among the outstanding figures in Chinese history, ... the person I respect most is ... 在中国历史上的杰出人物中，我最尊敬的人是 ...... 。
主体段 具体介绍（包括人物的性格、事迹等） ① I admire him because of his contributions to the world. 因为他对世界的贡献我很钦佩他。 ② In fact, he was a man full of imagination, creation and wisdom. 事实上，他是一个富有想象力、创造力和智慧的人。 ③ She is of medium height, with long and blonde hair. 她中等身材，披着金色的长发。
结尾段 总结全文（对所介绍的人物进行整体评价） ① From him, I realize the secret of success is... , I do thank him for what he did for me. 从他身上，我意识到成功的秘密是......，我确实感谢他为我所做的一切。 ② Setting a great example to us, she fully deserves our admiration and respect. 她为我们树立了好榜样，完全值得我们的钦佩和尊敬。
人物描写句式
●Born in …, he was a great …, who …
●…, (who is) an outstanding scientist, was born …
●When he was a boy, he showed great interest in …
●Being poor, he had to leave school at the age of ...
●As a teacher, she is kind, patient and helpful, so all of us like her.
●He is considered to be one of the great scientists.
●He was confident enough to solve different problems by himself.
●With his hard work, he once won …
●As a warm-hearted person, he always does everything in his power to help those who are in need.
●He devoted himself to scientific research and made great contributions to his country.
●He will be remembered for his contributions to …
人物描写词句模板
1.背景:
....was born in/into a poor/rich family in ..;. when .. was young;at the age of..; ... spent one’s childhood in..; his parents are both famous musicians...
2.外貌:
beautiful, pretty, good-looking ，ordinary-looking, odd-looking, handsome, strong, fat, thin ..
3.品质或个性:
committed, kind, determined，gentle,considerate，optimistic,easy- going, warm-hearted, hard-working ，responsible, patient, helpful, friendly, generous...
4.爱好:
be good at; have a great gift for; be keen on; be interested in; be fond of; be crazy about...
5.教育背景:
graduated from; got/earned a(n)... degree; majored in;went abroad to further one’s study...
6.经历和成就:
devote oneself to; do sth with great determination; fight for; make up one’s mind to do sth; be determined to do sth; overcome many difficulties; try one’s best to do sth;enjoy widespread popularity; win fame as; make great contributions to...
7.评价:
one of the best; the most important; one of the heroes of the 20th century; set a good example to;is the pride of; be regarded as...; be recognized as..; be respected/honored as--.; sb still lives in one’s heart...
话题词块
1．be born into a wealthy family 出生于富裕人家
2．at the age of 在……岁时
3．in one’s teens/twenties 在某人十多岁/二十多岁时
4．a16-year-old girl 一个16岁的女孩
5．a boy with great ability 一个能干的男孩
6．a promising writer 一位有前途的作家
7．spare no effort to do sth. 不遗余力地去做某事
8．have a wide range of interests 兴趣广泛
9．get on well with 与……相处融洽
10．a considerate person 体贴别人的人
11．be willing to help others 乐于助人
12．be expert in/at 善于……
13．be in good health/shape/condition 身体健康
14．depend/rely on 依靠；依赖
15．gain scholarship 获得奖学金
16．gain/win the first prize/place 获得一等奖/第一名
17．be awarded with the title of 获得……的称号/头衔
18．make great contributions to 对……做出巨大贡献
19．set a good example to sb. 为某人树立好榜样
20．to one’s credit 值得赞扬的是
话题佳句
1．His great personality has gained their respect.
他伟大的品质赢得了他们的尊重。
2．She makes a promise that she will behave herself and set a good example to schoolmates.
她承诺，她会表现好的，并为同学们树立好榜样。
3．My mother, a housewife of 45 years old, is my favorite person.She is always dressed very elegantly and neatly with a smile of contentment on her face.
我最喜爱的人是我的妈妈，一个45岁的家庭主妇。她总是穿着整齐优雅，脸上带着满足的微笑。
4．After reading the passage, I was lost in thought.From my own perspective，however busy parents are，they should make time to accompany their children.
读完这篇文章，我陷入了沉思。从我个人的角度看，不管父母有多忙，他们都应该挤出时间陪伴他们的孩子。
5．It reminds me of my mother who has been doing whatever she could to let me have the best.
这使我想起了我的妈妈，她总是尽她所能给予我最好的。
人物描写微语境
(微语境1：历史人物—孔子）
Confucius is a well-known figure in Chinese history. His teachings emphasized the importance of moral values, respect for elders,and social harmony. Confucius traveled throughout the country, imparting his wisdom to countless disciples and leaving a profound impact on Chinese society.
孔子是中国历史上著名的人物。他的教诲强调道德价值、尊重长辈和社会和谐的重要性。孔子周游全国，将他的智慧传授给了无数的弟子，对中国社会产生了深远的影响。
The significance of Confucius cannot be overstated. His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture, fostering respect for authority, harmonious relationships, and the pursuit of knowledge. Even today, his ideas continue to guide individuals and communities in China and beyond.
孔子的意义非常重大。他的教诲塑造了中国文化的道德和伦理基础，培养了对权威的尊重、和谐的关系和对知识的追求。即使在今天，他的思想仍然指导着中国和世界各地的个人和社区。
Confucius’s life offers valuable lessons. His emphasis on self-cultivation, respect for elders.and the pursuit of knowledge serves as a guiding light in our fast-paced and interconnected world. His teachings remind us of the importance of integrity, compassion and social responsibility.
孔子的一生提供了宝贵的教训。他对自我修养、尊重长辈和追求知识的强调，在我们快节奏和相互联系的世界中起着指路明灯的作用。他的教诲提醒我们正直、同情和社会责任的重要性。
（微语境2：推荐科学家）
Tu Youyou devoted most of her time to finding the cure for malaria. In 2015. she was awarded the Nobel Prize for discovering artemisinin, which is the key to the treatment of malaria. So great is her contribution to the world that she has become an idol of many people, including me. Inspired by her devotion and persistence, I decided to study harder to realize my dream.
屠呦呦将大部分时间都投入到了寻找疟疾的治疗方法中。2015年，她因发现青蒿素而获得了诺贝尔奖，这是治疗疟疾的关键。她对世界的贡献如此巨大，以至于她成为了很多人的偶像，包括我。受到她的奉献和坚持的激励，我决定更加努力地学习来实现我的梦想。
Born in a poor family in Guangxi, Yuan had a strong will to tackle the hunger crisis when he was young. After graduation, he devoted all his life in the laboratory and farm until he developed the hybrid rice successfully, His modesty and diligence. which I admire most, have a deep impact on me.It is from him that I realize what I am struggling is not just for myself, but the happiness/welfare of the whole world.
袁隆平出生在广西的一个贫困家庭，年轻时就有着解决饥饿危机的强烈愿望。毕业后，他将自己的一生都投入到了实验室和农场中，直到他成功地开发出了杂交水稻。他的谦虚和勤奋是我最欣赏的品质，对我产生了深刻的影响。正是从他身上，我意识到我所奋斗的不仅仅是为了自己，而是整个世界的幸福。
（微语境3：发言稿—艺术家）
It is my pleasure to share with you today about my favorite artist, Vincent van Gogh. Van Gogh was a Dutch post-impressionist painter, best known for his vivid and expressive use of color. One of his most famous works is “Starry Night" which depicts the night sky over a village in France.The swirling stars and bold brushstrokes make the painting come to life, conveying a sense of dynamic movement and profound emotion.
今天我很高兴与大家分享我最喜欢的艺术家文森特·梵高。梵高是一位荷兰后印象派画家，以其生动而富有表现力的色彩运用而闻名。他最著名的作品之一是《星夜》，描绘了法国村庄的夜空。旋转的星星和大胆的笔触使这幅画栩栩如生，传达了一种动态运动和深厚情感。
I admire van Gogh because of his ability to convey intense emotions through his art. He had a tough life, struggling with mental illness and poverty, but he found comfort and meaning in his painting, His dedication and passion for art are truly inspiring to me.
我钦佩梵高，因为他能够通过他的艺术传达强烈的情感。他生活艰难，与精神疾病和贫困作斗争，但他在他的绘画中找到了安慰和意义。他对艺术的奉献和激情真正鼓舞了我。
（2023年全国甲卷）你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.人物简介及事迹； 2. 意义或启示。
【答案】
Confucius was a Chinese philosopher and educator during the Spring and Autumn period. He was the founder of Confucianism, a system of ethical, social, and political ideas that has deeply influenced Chinese culture.
Confucius emphasized moral cultivation, family values, and the importance of benevolent governance. His teachings, collected in The Analects, have shaped China’s ethical and social norms for over two millennia.
The significance of Confucius stems from his profound impact on Chinese society and the world. His wisdom and teachings on virtue, respect, and integrity continue to inspire people in their personal and professional lives.
In contemporary times, Confucius’ teachings encourage us to uphold strong moral values and strive for harmony in our relationships. His emphasis on education and self-improvement serves as a reminder of the importance of lifelong learning and personal growth.
1. 应用文写作前三步骤：
（1）审题判定文体为投稿；
（2）因文体是投稿，故作者身份在正文中不必交代；
（3）因文本主体部分为介绍人物生平事迹，故本文总体时态定调为一般过去时，首尾两段采用一般现在时。
2. 本文的亮点：
（1）to name just a few仅列举几例；
（2）renowned = celebrated = famous著名的；
（3）Especially admirable are ...形容词置于句首产生完全倒装结构；
（4）as well as=not only ... but also ...；
（5）stick to it for life坚守终生。
（2023上·安徽·高三校联考期末）假定你是李华，你们班本周将举行一次英文主题班会，介绍为人类做出突出贡献的人物。请你写一篇短文，内容包括：
1.人物简介；
2.做出的贡献；
3.你的感想。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】
Tu Youyou
Tu Youyou is a great Chinese medical scientist.
Determined to help those suffering from malaria, TuYouyou devoted most of her time to finding the cure. Luckily, her efforts paid off. In 2015, she was awarded the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine for discovering artemisinin, which is the key to the treatment of malaria. Behind her success were numerous failures and setbacks, but never did she give up.
So great is her contribution to the world that she has become an idol of many people, including me. Inspired by her story, I decide to study harder so as to realize my dream.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于说明文，介绍一位为人类做出突出贡献的人物，包括人物简介及其所做贡献并分享自己的感想。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
下定决心的：determined→resolved
幸运地：luckily→fortunately
努力：effort→endeavor
无数的：numerous→countless
实现：realize→achieve
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Determined to help those suffering from malaria, TuYouyou devoted most of her time to finding the cure.
拓展句：As she was determined to help those suffering from malaria, TuYouyou devoted most of her time to finding the cure.
【点睛】【高分句型1】In 2015, she was awarded the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine for discovering artemisinin, which is the key to the treatment of malaria.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Behind her success were numerous failures and setbacks, but never did she give up.（运用了介词短语置于句首的全部倒装及否定词位于句首的部分倒装）
【高分句型3】So great is her contribution to the world that she has become an idol of many people, including me.（运用了so+形容词前置的倒装及so... that...引导的结果状语从句）
(2023·浙江丽水·统考期末) 假定你是李华，将参加学校举行的以“The Person I am Especially Moved by”为主题的英文演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：
1. 人物介绍；
2. 感动原因；
3. 对你的影响。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear fellow students,
It’s my privilege to deliver a speech here. Of all the most respectable people, I am especially moved by Zhong Nanshan.
This 85-year-old man with gray hair works really hard, for the people, for the motherland, for his responsibility. He is one of Chinese heroes volunteering many times to fight against pandemics. The picture of him resting on the high-speed rail seat made us touched and tearful. Such great contribution did he make that he was awarded the Medal of the Republic. His deeds and spirit do make a great difference to me.
Thank you.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生为即将参加学校举行的英文演讲比赛写一篇英文演讲稿，主题为“The Person I am Especially Moved by”，内容包括：人物介绍；感动原因；对你的影响。
【详解】1.词汇积累
荣耀：privilege→honor
发表演讲：deliver a speech→make a speech
祖国：motherland→homeland
责任：responsibility→duty
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：This 85-year-old man with gray hair works really hard, for the people, for the motherland, for his responsibility.
拓展句：This 85-year-old man whose hair is gray works really hard, for the people, for the motherland, for his responsibility.
【点睛】[高分句型1] He is one of Chinese heroes volunteering many times to fight against pandemics. (运用了非谓语动词做后置定语)
[高分句型2] Such great contribution did he make that he was awarded the Medal of the Republic. (运用了倒装句，即在“such…that+句子”句型中，such位于句首，该部分用部分倒装)
（2023·湖南邵阳·统考二模）在2022年8月发生的重庆山火和2023年1月发生的泸定地震中涌现出了很多青年逆行者榜样人物：00后消防员，00后志愿者等。你校正在组织“We Should Shoulder the Responsibility”英语征文活动，请你投稿。
内容包括：1．青年榜样的突出品质；
2．他们对你的影响；
3．呼吁年轻人向他们学习。
注意：1．词数80左右；
2．参考词汇：00后：post-2000s generation/post-00s；
3．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
We Should Shoulder the Responsibility
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【答案】
We Should Shoulder the Responsibility
Recently many young role models emerged in the mountain fire in Chongqing and the Luding earthquake, in which post-00s firefighters, post-00s volunteers showed their bravery and ambition, especially, their sense of responsibility.
What they did made me think about our responsibility. As young people, we have to work hard to serve the country. As a student, we have a responsibility to complete our studies seriously and steadfastly, enduring all kinds of hardship. We should not escape any responsibility of love and care.
In a word, all of us young people should learn from them and shoulder our responsibility.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给学校组织的以“We Should Shoulder the Responsibility”为题的英语征文活动投稿，内容包括青年榜样的品质、影响并呼吁学生向他们学习。
【详解】1.词汇积累
承担，肩负：shoulder →undertake
完成：complete →finish
忍受：endure →bear
总之：in a word →in short
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：As young people, we have to work hard to serve the country.
拓展句：As young people, we have to work hard to serve the country, which can show our love for our country.
【点睛】【高分句型1】What they did made me think about our responsibility.(运用了what引导主语从句)
【高分句型2】As a student, we have a responsibility to complete our studies seriously and steadfastly, enduring all kinds of hardship.(运用了现在分词短语作伴随状语)Unit 2 Sports culture 单元写作深度指导（译林版2020）
Making a fact file about a sportsperson（人物描写）
单元话题 真题展示 考情预测
人物描写 2023全国甲卷 “对社会有突出贡献的人物”是高中英语新课标主题语境内容要求之一，也是高考英语常考话题之一。它包括个人情况简介和名人事迹介绍两个方面,这类文章通常以人物传记和逸闻趣事为主，目的是培养学生高尚的道德情操和帮助学生树立正确的人生观和价值观。
The article of character introduction generally adopts the three-paragraph mode of "total one point one total". The first paragraph is brief and to the point. Get straight to the point, go straight to the theme, briefly introduce the identity of the characters and their achievements; The second paragraph introduces the main experiences of the characters: The third paragraph summarizes the full text with one or two sentences to achieve the beginning and end of the echo, finishing the effect. 你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.人物简介及事迹； 2. 意义或启示。
段落 内容 句子设计
开头段 引入话题（介绍人物的基本情况，如外貌、年龄等） ① As for my favorite figure, it must be ... 至于我最喜欢的人物，那一定是 ...... ② Among the outstanding figures in Chinese history, ... the person I respect most is ... 在中国历史上的杰出人物中，我最尊敬的人是 ...... 。
主体段 具体介绍（包括人物的性格、事迹等） ① I admire him because of his contributions to the world. 因为他对世界的贡献我很钦佩他。 ② In fact, he was a man full of imagination, creation and wisdom. 事实上，他是一个富有想象力、创造力和智慧的人。 ③ She is of medium height, with long and blonde hair. 她中等身材，披着金色的长发。
结尾段 总结全文（对所介绍的人物进行整体评价） ① From him, I realize the secret of success is..., I do thank him for what he did for me. 从他身上，我意识到成功的秘密是... ...，我确实感谢他为我所做的一切。 ② Setting a great example to us , she fully deserves our admiration and respect. 她为我们树立了好榜样，完全值得我们的钦佩和尊敬。
人物描写句式
●Born in…, he was a great …, who …
●…, (who is) an outstanding scientist, was born …
●When he was a boy, he showed great interest in …
●Being poor, he had to leave school at the age of ...
●As a teacher, she is kind, patient and helpful, so all of us like her.
●He is considered to be one of the great scientists.
●He was confident enough to solve different problems by himself.
●With his hard work, he once won…
●As a warm-hearted person, he always does everything in his power to help those who are in need.
●He devoted himself to scientific research and made great contributions to his country.
●He will be remembered for his contributions to…
人物描写词句模板
....was born in/into a poor/rich family in ..;. when .. was young;at the age of...; ... spent one’s childhood in..; his parents are both famous musicians...
beautiful, pretty, good-looking, ordinary-looking, odd-looking, handsome, strong, fat, thin ..
committed, kind, determined, gentle,considerate, optimistic,easy- going, warm-hearted, hard-working, responsible, patient, helpful, friendly, generous...
be good at; have a great gift for; be keen on; be interested in; be fond of; be crazy about...
graduated from; got/earned a(n)... degree; majored in;went abroad to further one’s study...
devote oneself to; do sth. with great determination; fight for; make up one’s mind to do sth.; be determined to do sth.; overcome many difficulties; try one’s best to do sth.;enjoy widespread popularity; win fame as; make great contributions to...
one of the best; the most important; one of the heroes of the 20th century; set a good example to;is the pride of; be regarded as...; be recognized as..; be respected/honored as--.; sb still lives in one’s heart...
话题词块
1．be born into a wealthy family 出生于富裕人家
2．at the age of 在……岁时
3．in one’s teens/twenties 在某人十多岁/二十多岁时
4．a16-year-old girl 一个16岁的女孩
5．a boy with great ability 一个能干的男孩
6．a promising writer 一位有前途的作家
7．spare no effort to do sth. 不遗余力地去做某事
8．have a wide range of interests 兴趣广泛
9．get on well with 与……相处融洽
10．a considerate person 体贴别人的人
11．be willing to help others 乐于助人
12．be expert in/at 善于……
13．be in good health/shape/condition 身体健康
14．depend/rely on 依靠；依赖
15．gain scholarship 获得奖学金
16．gain/win the first prize/place 获得一等奖/第一名
17．be awarded with the title of 获得……的称号/头衔
18．make great contributions to 对……做出巨大贡献
19．set a good example to sb. 为某人树立好榜样
20．to one’s credit 值得赞扬的是
话题佳句
1．His great personality has gained their respect.
他伟大的品质赢得了他们的尊重。
2．She makes a promise that she will behave herself and set a good example to schoolmates.
她承诺，她会表现好的，并为同学们树立好榜样。
3．My mother, a housewife of 45 years old, is my favorite person.She is always dressed very elegantly and neatly with a smile of contentment on her face.
我最喜爱的人是我的妈妈，一个45岁的家庭主妇。她总是穿着整齐优雅，脸上带着满足的微笑。
4．After reading the passage, I was lost in thought.From my own perspective，however busy parents are，they should make time to accompany their children.
读完这篇文章，我陷入了沉思。从我个人的角度看，不管父母有多忙，他们都应该挤出时间陪伴他们的孩子。
5．It reminds me of my mother who has been doing whatever she could to let me have the best.
这使我想起了我的妈妈，她总是尽她所能给予我最好的。
人物描写微语境
Confucius is a well-known figure in Chinese history. His teachings emphasized the importance of moral values, respect for elders,and social harmony. Confucius traveled throughout the country, imparting his wisdom to countless disciples and leaving a profound impact on Chinese society.
孔子是中国历史上著名的人物。他的教诲强调道德价值、尊重长辈和社会和谐的重要性。孔子周游全国，将他的智慧传授给了无数的弟子，对中国社会产生了深远的影响。
The significance of Confucius cannot be overstated. His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture, fostering respect for authority, harmonious relationships, and the pursuit of knowledge. Even today, his ideas continue to guide individuals and communities in China and beyond.
孔子的意义非常重大。他的教诲塑造了中国文化的道德和伦理基础，培养了对权威的尊重、和谐的关系和对知识的追求。即使在今天，他的思想仍然指导着中国和世界各地的个人和社区。
Confucius’s life offers valuable lessons. His emphasis on self-cultivation, respect for elders.and the pursuit of knowledge serves as a guiding light in our fast-paced and interconnected world. His teachings remind us of the importance of integrity, compassion and social responsibility.
孔子的一生提供了宝贵的教训。他对自我修养、尊重长辈和追求知识的强调，在我们快节奏和相互联系的世界中起着指路明灯的作用。他的教诲提醒我们正直、同情和社会责任的重要性。
Tu Youyou devoted most of her time to finding the cure for malaria. In 2015. she was awarded the Nobel Prize for discovering artemisinin, which is the key to the treatment of malaria. So great is her contribution to the world that she has become an idol of many people, including me. Inspired by her devotion and persistence, I decided to study harder to realize my dream.
屠呦呦将大部分时间都投入到了寻找疟疾的治疗方法中。2015年，她因发现青蒿素而获得了诺贝尔奖，这是治疗疟疾的关键。她对世界的贡献如此巨大，以至于她成为了很多人的偶像，包括我。受到她的奉献和坚持的激励，我决定更加努力地学习来实现我的梦想。
Born in a poor family in Guangxi, Yuan had a strong will to tackle the hunger crisis when he was young. After graduation, he devoted all his life in the laboratory and farm until he developed the hybrid rice successfully, His modesty and diligence. which I admire most, have a deep impact on me.It is from him that I realize what I am struggling is not just for myself, but the happiness/welfare of the whole world.
袁隆平出生在广西的一个贫困家庭，年轻时就有着解决饥饿危机的强烈愿望。毕业后，他将自己的一生都投入到了实验室和农场中，直到他成功地开发出了杂交水稻。他的谦虚和勤奋是我最欣赏的品质，对我产生了深刻的影响。正是从他身上，我意识到我所奋斗的不仅仅是为了自己，而是整个世界的幸福。
It is my pleasure to share with you today about my favorite artist, Vincent van Gogh. Van Gogh was a Dutch post-impressionist painter, best known for his vivid and expressive use of color. One of his most famous works is “Starry Night" which depicts the night sky over a village in France.The swirling stars and bold brushstrokes make the painting come to life, conveying a sense of dynamic movement and profound emotion.
今天我很高兴与大家分享我最喜欢的艺术家文森特·梵高。梵高是一位荷兰后印象派画家，以其生动而富有表现力的色彩运用而闻名。他最著名的作品之一是《星夜》，描绘了法国村庄的夜空。旋转的星星和大胆的笔触使这幅画栩栩如生，传达了一种动态运动和深厚情感。
I admire van Gogh because of his ability to convey intense emotions through his art. He had a tough life, struggling with mental illness and poverty, but he found comfort and meaning in his painting, His dedication and passion for art are truly inspiring to me.
我钦佩梵高，因为他能够通过他的艺术传达强烈的情感。他生活艰难，与精神疾病和贫困作斗争，但他在他的绘画中找到了安慰和意义。他对艺术的奉献和激情真正鼓舞了我。
（2023年全国甲卷）你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.人物简介及事迹； 2. 意义或启示。
（2023上·安徽·高三校联考期末）假定你是李华，你们班本周将举行一次英文主题班会，介绍为人类做出突出贡献的人物。请你写一篇短文，内容包括：
1.人物简介；
2.做出的贡献；
3.你的感想。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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(2023·浙江丽水·统考期末) 假定你是李华，将参加学校举行的以“The Person I am Especially Moved by”为主题的英文演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：
1. 人物介绍；
2. 感动原因；
3. 对你的影响。
注意：1. 词数 80 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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（2023·湖南邵阳·统考二模）在2022年8月发生的重庆山火和2023年1月发生的泸定地震中涌现出了很多青年逆行者榜样人物：00后消防员，00后志愿者等。你校正在组织“We Should Shoulder the Responsibility”英语征文活动，请你投稿。
内容包括：1．青年榜样的突出品质；
2．他们对你的影响；
3．呼吁年轻人向他们学习。
注意：1．词数80左右；
2．参考词汇：00后：post-2000s generation/post-00s；
3．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
We Should Shoulder the Responsibility
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Unit 3 Fit for life单元写作深度指导（译林版2020）
Making a booklet about first-aid skills（倡议书）
单元话题 真题展示 考情预测
宣传稿 2022全国甲卷 倡议书属于应用文的一种，是为倡议或是发起某项活动而写的号召性的、公开提议性的专用文体。倡议书一般由标题、称呼、正文、结尾、落款五部分组成。 倡议书的写作通常也使用经典的三段式结构，首段点明背景、目的，主体段需要写出具体的倡议内容，尾段进行呼吁。
A proposal is a public letter of proposal written to advocate or launch an activity. The content of the proposal should include the background and purpose of the initiative, the specific content and requirements of the initiative, and the determination and desired outcome of the proponent. 你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。 内容包括： 1. 海洋的重要性; 2. 保护海洋的倡议。
段落 内容 句子设计
开头段 活动目的+发出倡议 介绍现状+发出倡议 1.To spread joy and kindness, we plan to launch an initiative-(倡议；方案)-A Flower for You. 2.Aiming to make our living environment more beautiful, on behalf of the Students’ Union, I’m writing to call on everyone to lead an eco-friendly life. 1.These days have witnessed 问题 (the shocking food waste on campus), which really makes me heartbroken. So it’s high time that we should do our part to reduce food waste and practise drift. 2.it’s quite common that+从句（描述现状、问题）
主体段 倡议具体内容 (做法+好处） 1.Firstly, it’s necessary to do.../we are supposed to.../It’s a good choice to.../ I would like to appeal to... 2.Why not make it a good habit/routine to do sth. 3.By doing so, not only can it do sth, but it also contribute to.../Only by doing this can we do sth.
结尾段 号召大家行动 1.Let’s act together now to build up our body and create a better life./join us now and take action right now! 2.Don’t hesitate to participate in the event as it will definitely add charm to your school life. 3.Never deprive yourself of such a chance. Looking forward to your participation. 4.We advocate that you join in this activity, which is a chance you can’t afford to miss. 5.Finally, I propose that we all take action to participate in the activity of recycling textbooks and contribute our own strength to save resources.
好词好句积累
一、首段（表明背景和目的）
Water pollution is worsening dramatically, which needs to be curbed immediately. (背景) I think it is every citizen’s duty to work hard to achieve this goal（目的）.
Nowadays, people in many big cities are always complaining about the heavy traffic. （背景）
At present, most students in our school read little English literature, not because they consider it too difficult, but because they don’t think it necessity.（背景）
With the College Entrance Examination around the corner,（背景）I, on behalf of the English club, appeal to us Senior Three students to take an active part in physical activity.（目的）
Spring is coming! It brings us hope as well as a lot of infectious disease.（背景）Some measures are supposed to be taken to protect us from the virus. （目的）
二、主体段（倡议的内容、理由、意义）
We are supposed/required/expected to choose a healthy and environmentally friendly way of travelling, that is, bicycle riding. （内容）
In my opinion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up a strong body. （内容）Only in this way can we have enough energy to study. （意义）
I appeal to every one of you to read more English literature. （内容）
Regular exercise is also one of the most important ways to help you stay away from catching any disease. （理由）
Occupied as we are every day, we can spread bursts of activity throughout our day. （内容）
三、尾段（倡议的决心和希望）
If everyone does one thing for our school, I believe we will turn our school into a better place to study and live in.
As long as we work together, we can make the impossible possible.
It is high time that we started/should start from ourselves and reduced/should reduce traffic pressure by riding a bike.
As an old saying goes, "Together, individuals can make a difference."
A healthy body results from a good healthy habits, so let’s act together to fight against diseases and create a better life!
倡议书可用句型
1.I’m appealing to you to spend more time on reading.
2.In recent years, with the popularity of digital devices, students pay little attention to their handwriting.
3.Our handwriting is not as good as it was in the past. To solve the problem, we should do as follows.
4.In order to ease the present serious situation, all students had better do as follows.
5.It develops rapidly and now has become one of the hottest topics. But still, problems can’t be overlooked.
6.No one can deny the fact that/It can be said with certainty that/There’s no denying that/There’s no doubt that/Undoubtedly,/Without doubt, the environment is getting polluted more and more seriously.
7.It is suggested/advised that we should take regular physical exercise.
8.From my point of view/From my perspective, it is up to us to make a reasonable plan for our future.
9.It’s everyone’s responsibility to protect the environment. If we can change our way of life, we can make a big difference to the earth.
10.Everyone ought to have a positive attitude toward/to the campaign against the disease.
11.Such measures/action can surely improve air quality, so let’s start from now on.
12.Hopefully, you can join in the action and offer help to those in need.
13.It’s high time that we took measures to change the situation.
14.Every effort counts/matters/makes a difference. Let’s work together to make the world a better place.
15.Please keep in mind that a small action can make a huge difference.
16.Let’s take action right now! I’m convinced our efforts will eventually pay off.
17.Hoping to see you participate in the activity! Take action now and you won’t regret it!
18.Let’s make joint efforts to create a green and harmonious environment.
（2022全国甲卷）你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括：
1. 海洋的重要性;
2. 保护海洋的倡议。
【答案】
When it comes to ocean, its pollution is becoming more and more serious. World Ocean Day, falling on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation.
Ocean plays a key role in our world. Not only does ocean offer us sufficient food, but also it maintains the balance of nature. Thus, it is imperative to protect ocean. First of all, what we can do is to place importance on our daily actions. For example, garbage can’t be thrown into ocean. What’s more, we can also hand out leaflets to call on more people to protect the ocean. The more people are involved, the better the ocean environment is.
All in all, it is high time that we devoted ourselves to protecting ocean. To protect ocean is to protect ourselves.
【写作思路解析】
1. 审题材：征文比赛 2. 审时态：一般现在时为主 3. 审人称：第一人称为主
4. 审要点：构思文章是否符合题目要求，主旨突出，内容要点齐全，写作对象明确，语言的选用得当，符合要求等。
【分段落，列提纲】
第一段：作用：开篇。
要求：开门见山，点名主题。
篇幅：2-3行：2句-3句。
Do you have idea about June 8 It is not only the college entrance examination to Chinese senior school students, but also World Oceans Day, designated by the UN to arouse people’s awareness to protect the oceans.
第二段：作用：文章主体内容。
要求：层次分明，逻辑清晰，要点齐全。
篇幅：4-5行，4-5个句子。
The ocean is the cradle of all life on earth, rich in natural resources, and also our blue home for a happy life and happy growth. To care for the ocean is to care for our future. To begin with, protect the Marine ecological environment and advocate green environmental protection actions. What’s more, to strengthen the consciousness of the sea in accordance with the law, consciously protect the blue land and resources environment, start from me, start from now, start from around things, take an active part in green volunteer activities, and advocate green environmental protection. Finally, green initiative, green life, not to the ocean, sewage, hand in hand to protect the Marine environment, be a small guard to protect the blue land.
第三段：
作用：收尾，点题，补充其他细节等。
要求：概括，得体。
篇幅：2行左右，1-2个句子。
The theme of Ocean Day 2022 is "Protecting the harmonious coexistence between man and nature in the Marine Ecosystem". Hand in hand to protect the Marine environment, and inherit the Marine civilization from heart to heart.
作文答题纸一共13行，字数分布要均匀。
【列好提纲后三审】
1. 检查时态、语态、单词拼写、标点符号是否有错误。
2. 句子的时态，主谓，代词要做到一致；
句子谓语要完整；习惯用法，固定搭配要正确；冠词，形容词，副词及连词要得当；有没有合适的被动语态；有没有双谓语或者没有谓语的情况等。
根据内容要点改写句子、合并句子、用非谓语动词改写句子、用高级替代词、用高级句式润色文章、运用适当的过渡词加强逻辑等。
（2024·广东茂名·二模）假定你是学校英语阅读俱乐部的主席李华。你注意到学校同学们很少进行英语文学阅读。请用英语给全校同学写一份倡议书，倡导大家多阅读英语文学作品。内容包括：
1. 介绍现状；
2. 你对英语文学阅读的看法；
3. 发出倡议。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按以下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear schoolmates,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
English Reading Club
【答案】
Dear schoolmates,
As the president of our English Reading Club, I feel it regretful that English literature is always gathering dust on the shelf, left unexplored.
English literature is a gateway to different cultures, histories, and perspectives. Reading it can not only improve our language skills but also broaden our horizons. It introduces us to diverse cultures and ideas, thus stimulating creativity and empathy. However, seldom do we dip into these works.
We all should explore English literature, through which we will find ourselves entranced by the beauty of words and the power of literature can also enrich and transform our lives.
English Reading Club
【导语】这是一封倡议信。要求考生以学校英语阅读俱乐部主席的身份，向全校同学发出倡议，鼓励大家多阅读英语文学作品，并表达自己对英语文学阅读的看法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
遗憾的：regretful→ sorry
拓宽：broaden→ widen
视野：horizons→ views
沉浸：entranced→ lost
丰富：enrich→ colorful
2.句式拓展
同义句改写
原句：I feel it regretful that English literature is always gathering dust on the shelf, left unexplored.
拓展句：I deeply regret observing that English literature persistently relegated to the shelves, remaining unexplored.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Reading it can not only improve our language skills but also broaden our horizons.（使用了动名词短语做主语）
【高分句型2】We all should explore English literature, through which we will find ourselves entranced by the beauty of words and the power of literature can also enrich and transform our lives.（使用了以English literature为先行词、以“介词+关系代词”结构即“through which”引导的定语从句）
(2024·安徽安庆·三模) 假定你是某国际中学的学生李华，你校正在开展“保护非物质文化遗产，弘扬优秀传统文化”的活动。请你用英语给全校学生写一封倡议书，要点包括：
1.保护非物质文化遗产的重要性；
2.提出倡议。
注意：
1.写作词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。参考词汇：非物质文化遗传：intangible cultural heritage
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Dear fellow students,
I’m writing to call on everyone to take an active part in preserving the intangible cultural heritage.
As we all know, intangible culture heritage reflects our unique identity and contributes to the rich types of human civilization. So its protection has become an urgent task at present.
First of all, we should enhance our awareness of the protection of intangible cultural heritage. In addition, I urge each one of us to actively engage in learning, documenting, and respecting our traditions.
Please don’t hesitate to join us to protect the intangible cultural heritage. It is our small action that counts.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生所在校正在开展“保护非物质文化遗产，弘扬优秀传统文化”的活动。请你用英语给全校学生写一封倡议书。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加：take part in→participate in
提高：enhance→promote
起作用：count→matter
积极地：actively→positively
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句：As we all know, intangible culture heritage reflects our unique identity and contributes to the rich types of human civilization.
拓展句：It is known that intangible culture heritage reflects our unique identity and contributes to the rich types of human civilization.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It is our small action that counts.（运用了强调句）
【高分句型2】As we all know, intangible culture heritage reflects our unique identity and contributes to the rich types of human civilization.（运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句）
（2024·江苏宿迁·三模）假如你是你校学生会主席李华, 请你以学生会的名义写一封英文倡议书，号召同学们参加主题为“高效利用周末双休”的活动，内容包括：
1. 倡议目的；
2. 活动内容；
3. 发出倡议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear schoolmates,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Students’ Union
【答案】
Dear schoolmates,
In order for the 2-day weekends to be taken full advantage of, the Students Union appeals to students to participate in the campaign themed “Employ the 2-day Weekends Efficiently”.
Various activities are organized, ranging from reading societies, where you can immerse yourselves in books you favour, to different kinds of sports clubs, which you can join to build up your strength. What’s more, we’ll set aside some time to do some voluntary work, such as visiting the local nursing homes.
Now let’s band together to make our 2-day weekends more efficient and meaningful.
Students’ Union
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以学生会的名义写一封英文倡议书，号召同学们参加主题为“高效利用周末双休”的活动。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
充分利用：take full advantage of→make the most of
各种各样的：various→a variety of
呼吁：appeal to→call on
此外：what’s more→besides
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In order for the 2-day weekends to be taken full advantage of, the Students Union appeals to students to participate in the campaign themed “Employ the 2-day Weekends Efficiently”.
拓展句：In order for the 2-day weekends to be taken full advantage of, the Students Union appeals to students to participate in the campaign, which is themed “Employ the 2-day Weekends Efficiently”.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] In order for the 2-day weekends to be taken full advantage of, the Students Union appeals to students to participate in the campaign themed “Employ the 2-day Weekends Efficiently”. (运用了过去分词作定语)
[高分句型2] Various activities are organized, ranging from reading societies, where you can immerse yourselves in books you favour, to different kinds of sports clubs, which you can join to build up your strength. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)Unit 3 Fit for life单元写作深度指导（译林版2020）
Making a booklet about first-aid skills（倡议书）
单元话题 真题展示 考情预测
宣传稿 2022全国甲卷 倡议书属于应用文的一种，是为倡议或是发起某项活动而写的号召性的、公开提议性的专用文体。倡议书一般由标题、称呼、正文、结尾、落款五部分组成。 倡议书的写作通常也使用经典的三段式结构，首段点明背景、目的，主体段需要写出具体的倡议内容，尾段进行呼吁。
A proposal is a public letter of proposal written to advocate or launch an activity. The content of the proposal should include the background and purpose of the initiative, the specific content and requirements of the initiative, and the determination and desired outcome of the proponent. 你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。 内容包括： 1. 海洋的重要性; 2. 保护海洋的倡议。
段落 内容 句子设计
开头段 活动目的+发出倡议 介绍现状+发出倡议 1.To spread joy and kindness, we plan to launch an initiative-(倡议；方案)-A Flower for You. 2.Aiming to make our living environment more beautiful, on behalf of the Students’ Union, I’m writing to call on everyone to lead an eco-friendly life. 1.These days have witnessed问题（the shocking food waste on campus）,which really makes me heartbroken. So it’s high time that we should do our part to reduce food waste and practise drift. 2.it’s quite common that+从句（描述现状、问题）
主体段 倡议具体内容 (做法+好处） 1.Firstly, it’s necessary to do.../we are supposed to.../It’s a good choice to.../ I would like to appeal to... 2.Why not make it a good habit/routine to do sth. 3.By doing so, not only can it do sth, but it also contribute to.../Only by doing this can we do sth.
结尾段 号召大家行动 1.Let’s act together now to build up our body and create a better life./join us now and take action right now! 2.Don’t hesitate to participate in the event as it will definitely add charm to your school life. 3.Never deprive yourself of such a chance. Looking forward to your participation. 4.We advocate that you join in this activity, which is a chance you can’t afford to miss. 5.Finally, I propose that we all take action to participate in the activity of recycling textbooks and contribute our own strength to save resources.
好词好句积累
Water pollution is worsening dramatically, which needs to be curbed immediately.（背景）I think it is every citizen’s duty to work hard to achieve this goal（目的）.
Nowadays, people in many big cities are always complaining about the heavy traffic.（背景）
At present, most students in our school read little English literature, not because they consider it too difficult, but because they don’t think it necessity.（背景）
With the College Entrance Examination around the corner,（背景） I, on behalf of the English club, appeal to us Senior Three students to take an active part in physical activity.（目的）
Spring is coming! It brings us hope as well as a lot of infectious disease.（背景）Some measures are supposed to be taken to protect us from the virus.（目的）
We are supposed/required/expected to choose a healthy and environmentally friendly way of travelling, that is, bicycle riding.（内容）
In my opinion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up a strong body. （内容）Only in this way can we have enough energy to study.（意义）
I appeal to every one of you to read more English literature.（内容）
Regular exercise is also one of the most important ways to help you stay away from catching any disease.（理由）
Occupied as we are every day, we can spread bursts of activity throughout our day.（内容）
If everyone does one thing for our school, I believe we will turn our school into a better place to study and live in.
As long as we work together, we can make the impossible possible.
It is high time that we started/should start from ourselves and reduced/should reduce traffic pressure by riding a bike.
As an old saying goes, "Together, individuals can make a difference."
A healthy body results from a good healthy habits, so let’s act together to fight against diseases and create a better life!
倡议书可用句型
1.I’m appealing to you to spend more time on reading.
2.In recent years, with the popularity of digital devices, students pay little attention to their handwriting.
3.Our handwriting is not as good as it was in the past. To solve the problem, we should do as follows.
4.In order to ease the present serious situation, all students had better do as follows.
5.It develops rapidly and now has become one of the hottest topics. But still, problems can’t be overlooked.
6.No one can deny the fact that/It can be said with certainty that/There’s no denying that/There’s no doubt that/Undoubtedly,/Without doubt, the environment is getting polluted more and more seriously.
7.It is suggested/advised that we should take regular physical exercise.
8.From my point of view/From my perspective, it is up to us to make a reasonable plan for our future.
9.It’s everyone’s responsibility to protect the environment. If we can change our way of life, we can make a big difference to the earth.
10.Everyone ought to have a positive attitude toward/to the campaign against the disease.
11.Such measures/action can surely improve air quality, so let’s start from now on.
12.Hopefully, you can join in the action and offer help to those in need.
13.It’s high time that we took measures to change the situation.
14.Every effort counts/matters/makes a difference. Let’s work together to make the world a better place.
15.Please keep in mind that a small action can make a huge difference.
16.Let’s take action right now! I’m convinced our efforts will eventually pay off.
17.Hoping to see you participate in the activity! Take action now and you won’t regret it!
18.Let’s make joint efforts to create a green and harmonious environment.
（2022全国甲卷）你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括：
1. 海洋的重要性;
2. 保护海洋的倡议。
（2024·广东茂名·二模）假定你是学校英语阅读俱乐部的主席李华。你注意到学校同学们很少进行英语文学阅读。请用英语给全校同学写一份倡议书，倡导大家多阅读英语文学作品。内容包括：
1. 介绍现状；
2. 你对英语文学阅读的看法；
3. 发出倡议。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按以下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear schoolmates,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
English Reading Club
(2024·安徽安庆·三模) 假定你是某国际中学的学生李华，你校正在开展“保护非物质文化遗产，弘扬优秀传统文化”的活动。请你用英语给全校学生写一封倡议书，要点包括：
1.保护非物质文化遗产的重要性；
2.提出倡议。
注意：
1.写作词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。参考词汇：非物质文化遗传：intangible cultural heritage
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（2024·江苏宿迁·三模）假如你是你校学生会主席李华, 请你以学生会的名义写一封英文倡议书，号召同学们参加主题为“高效利用周末双休”的活动，内容包括：
1. 倡议目的；
2. 活动内容；
3. 发出倡议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear schoolmates,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Students’ UnionUnit 4 Living with technology单元写作深度指导（译林版2020）
Designing a product of the future（说明文）
单元话题 真题展示 考情预测
说明文 2023全国乙卷 说明文是以说明为主要表达方式, 用简洁明了的语言来解释说明事物, 阐明事理, 从而给读者提供知识的一种文体。在高考书面表达中, 其主要命题形式为图表式作文, 有时也以图画式和提纲式作文来呈现写作材料。从内容上大致可分为三个类型：事物介绍、问题方法介绍、路线、方位介绍、数据分析等。
Steps for writing an introductory essay: Paragraph 1: Start with a brief introduction of the thing or thing to be explained (question) The second paragraph: According to the information provided by the topic, the main question explains in a certain order, paying attention to the objective and concise language. Paragraph 3: The end should correspond to the beginning (the title does not require, do not express an opinion on this matter) 请以向学校英文报投稿的方式, 用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历, 及从中获得的体验和感受。 简要概述 2. 体验和感受
内容 句子设计
说明方位句 1. . .. is located at the foot of/by the side of/to the east of/to the north of ...... ......位于…的底部, 北面的北面。 2. In front of it is ..., with ... on its left and ... on its right. 在它的前面是……, 与…在它的左边和…在它的右边。 3. Turning to the left, you will see ..., behind which is ... 转到左边, 你会看到……, 后面是。 4. Walking past ..., you will see the building that appears in front of you is ... 走过……, 你会看到出现在你面前的建筑是。。 5. Along the road are lines of trees, casting dense shade on the sidewalk. 沿路是一排排的树木, 在人行道上投下了茂密的阴影。
说明现象句 1. Nowadays more and more people are suffering... 如今,越来越多的人正遭受着… 2. With the development of..., there is an increasing need for...people to know how to... 随着……的发展,越来越多的人需要知道如何…… 3. As far as I’m concerned, there are several reasons for... 在我看来, ……的原因有几个。 4. Owing to air pollution, many people have health problems. 由于空气污染,很多人有健康问题。 5.Everything has both advantages and disadvantages. The negative aspects are also apparent. 一切都有利有弊。负面的因素也很明显。 6. On the whole, its advantages can be seen as follows. 总的来说, 其优点如下。
问题方法句 1. The answer to the problem involves many factors. 这个问题的答案涉及很多方面。 2. To ensure success, there is one more thing that you must bear in mind, which is... 为了确保成功,你心中还需记住一点,那就是…… 3. Then, by what means shall we solve the problem 那么我们应该采取什么措施来解决这个问题 4. In this way, you’ll feel relaxed and refreshed. 通过这种方式,你将会感觉到放松和振作。 5. Therefore, find an effective way that is suitable for you, and you will have a wonderful life. 所以,找到一种适合你的有效的方法,那么你的生活也会多姿多彩的。 6. It is high time that something should be done... 是我们做些什么来……的时候了。 7.The change in… largely results from the fact that… 8. There are several causes for this significant growth in … 这种显著的增长有几个原因。 9. With the functions of ...,it enables us to... 具有……的功能, 它使我们能够。
数据分析句 1.The bar chart describes significant changes in the... 该柱形图描述了……的显著变化。 2. According to the result of the survey, more than half. About60% of the students like.... while only 30% say they are interested in... 根据调查结果可知,有超过半数即大约60%的学生喜欢……,而只有30%的学生说他们对…感兴趣。 3. Judging from these figures. we can draw the conclusion that... 根据这些数字判断,我们可以得出结论 4.More students, around 58%, however, insist that... 然而更多的学生,约58%,坚持认为...... 4. The table/chart shows that … 表格/图表显示 5. As can be seen from the chart… 从图表中可以看出。 6. From the table/chart/forms, we can see… 从表格/图表/表格中我们可以看到......。
【万能模板】
模板01（主题型）
①________ is a most effective _______to _______. ②For most people, it’s almost impossible to ______. ③________is really _________.④With the functions of _______,it enables us to _______.⑤It can even ______. ⑥Just imagine, all this can be done with _______. ⑦A convenient tool can certainly make _______, but it doesn’t always help _______.⑧Too much _________.⑨Too many ________.⑩Relying too much on _______ makes ________.
①点明要介绍的事物的必要性 ②介绍该事物对多数人的重要意义 ③该事物优势或显著特点 ④该事物的作用 ⑤进一步说明该事物的作用 ⑥说明该事物的重要性 ⑦承上启下, 介绍事物的另一方面 ⑧该事物的负面影响一 ⑨该事物的负面影响二 ⑩总结说明过分使用该物品给我们带来的负面影响。
模板02（说明原因型）
Nowadays, there are more and more in some big cities. It is estimated that ____________________.（用具体数据说明某现象）
Why have there been so many Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows. The first reason is that __________________.（原因一）Besides, __________________.（原因二）The third reason is __________________.（原因三）To sum up, the main cause of is due to__________________ .（指出主要原因）
It is high time that something should be done. For one thing, __________________.（解决建议一）
For another thing, . All these measures will certainly __________________.（解决建议二）
模板03（描述事物型）
What I have known about is that _________________.（具体描述某事物）
Firstly, __________________.（描述要点一）__________________.（具体阐述要点一）Secondly, __________________.（描述要点二）（具体阐述要点二）__________________. As a college student, __________________.（结合自身描述要点三）
All in all, __________________.（做出总结）Therefore, we should __________________.（提出建议）
模板04（问题解决型）
In recent days, there has been a problem , which is becoming more and more serious.（说明问题及其现状）First, __________________. Second, __________________.（进一步阐释现状）
We should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, ________. For another thing, ________. Finally, ________.（列举解决该问题的方法）
Personally, I believe that ________/Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because ________.（结尾段, 指出＂我＂的信心及理由）
模板05（说明利弊题型）
Nowadays, many people prefer A because it is playing a more and more important role in our daily life. Generally/Generally speaking/On the whole, its advantages can be seen as follows./it has the following advantages. First of all, _________________ (A的优点之一). Besides,/What’s more, _________________A的优点之二）.
However, every coin has two sides./Everything has both advantages and disadvantages. The negative aspects are also apparent./Its disadvantages are also obvious. One of the important disadvantages is that _________________ (A的第一个缺点)．To make matters worse,/To make the matter worse,/To make things worse/What’s worse, _________________(A的第二个缺点)．
Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones./The above analysis shows us that it has more advantages than disadvantages. Therefore, I would like to _________________ (我的看法)．
(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only in this way can we_________________(对前景的预测).
【高频词句】
1简要说明图表内容的句型：从图表可以看出
The table/chart shows that …
As can be seen from the chart…
From the table/chart/forms we can see…
The table tells us that…
2表示变化/比较的句型：
There was a great / slight increase/rise in …
There has been a sudden /slow/rapid fall/ drop in… It is 20% lower /higher than…
The number/rate has nearly doubled, as against that of last year.
The number is … times as much as that of…
It increases/rises/decreases/reduces by … times/ … percent/ 2/3.
3说明原因的句型：
The reason for …is that…
One may think of the change as a result of…
The change in… largely results from the fact that…
There are several causes for this significant growth in … First…This brings out the important fact that…
4 结尾句型：
In summary, it is important….
From what has been discussed above, we may draw the conclusion that…
Obviously, if we want to…, it is necessary ….
There is no doubt that attention must be paid…
【常用词句】
1. 表达时间
1)a long time ago
2) at six o’clock in the morning
3) at the end of...
4) at the weekend
5) before he came here
6) by the end of last term
7) during the summer holidays
8) in a few years’ time
9) in the past
10) in the old days
11) in the past ten years
12) in August 2021
13) in winter vacation
14) in weekdays
15) last month
16) next week
17) on Sunday morning
18) on October 1st
19) since early in the 20th century
20) so far
21) up to now
22) not…until
23) while
24) in the 1930’s (in the thirties of the twentieth century)
25) January, February, March, April, May, June, July, August, September, October, November, December
2. 表达地点
1)at the crossing
2) at the end of the street
3)at the airport, at the village
4)at the foot of the mountain
5)at the bottom
6)at the top of
7) be located in
8) behind the park
9)be situated in...
10)five kilometers to the north of Beijing
11)in the south of Tianjin
12)in the middle of the park
13)in Class 3 Grade 2
14)in front of the bus
15) in the tree
16)in Guangdong
17) in China
18)lies to the west of Sichuan
19)on the other side of the street
20)on both sides of the road
21) on the east coast of the Pacific Ocean
22)on the right
3. 表达因果
as, as a result, because, because of, for, in the end, cause, result in, consequently, originate from, since, so, therefore, It is clear that… , It turns out to be… , The primary reason is … , etc.
4. 常用指路句子
1)Go along the street and take the second turning on the left/turn left at the second crossing沿着这条街往前走, 在第二个十字路口向左拐。
2)Cross the bridge/Go across the bridge.过桥
3)Go on until you reach the end. 一直往前走, 直到尽头。
4)It’s about 100 meters along on the right. 它就在前面靠右大约100米处。
5)Go along the street until you come to the traffic lights. 沿这条路一直走到红绿灯那儿。
6)Turn right / left at the second crossing. (Take the second turning on the right / left.) 在第二个十字路口向右 / 左转弯。
7)Take a number 46 bus, and get off at the square. 坐46路公共汽车, 在广场下车。
8)It’s on the corner of Huaihai Street and Xizang Road. 在淮海路和西藏路的路口。
9)Go straight ahead along the bund and then turn left. 沿着外滩往前走, 然后往走转弯。
10)It’s only about ten minutes’ walk. 那儿离这儿只有走大约10分钟的路。
11) My home is not far from here. It’s only five minutes’ walk. 我家离这儿不远, 走5分钟就到。
12) It is one hour’ ride from Shanghai to Suzhou. 从上海坐车到苏州有1小时的路程。
13) As the saying goes, when in Rome, do as the Romans do. 俗话有说, 入乡随俗。
14) It takes over ten experts and professors four years to finish this dictionary. 这本词典由十多位专家、教授花费四年时间编纂而成。
（2023全国乙卷）请以向学校英文报投稿的方式, 用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历, 及从中获得的体验和感受。
1.简要概述 2. 体验和感受
【答案】
Learning A New Skill
As we all know the deadly COVID-19 made us increasingly bored with the indoor life and stressful study. Fortunately, under the guidance of videos, I began to learn to cook at home during the summer vacation. I watched, memorized the steps of cooking, and practiced it by myself.
Though faced with the stressful college entrance exam, I am extremely cheerful every day, for cooking adds color to our family life. Learning to cook for middle school students can prepare us for an independent life in society after graduation. Cooking at home is not only healthier but also cheaper than eating out or ordering take-out.
All in all,I benefit a lot from learning the new skills.
（2024·浙江温州·三模）你校英文报就最近举办的“当英语遇上艺术”(When English Meets The Arts)系列活动开展征文, 请你写一篇短文, 分享其中让你印象深刻的一项活动, 内容包括：
1.活动介绍;2.你的感想
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
When English Meets The Arts
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【答案】
When English Meets The Arts
Recently, our school organized a series of activities titled “When English Meets The Arts”. Among them, the activity that left a deep impression on me was the English drama performance.
During the activity, students from different grades cooperated to produce and perform short English dramas. Each drama showcased a unique storyline and creative dialogue, providing a platform for students to showcase their English proficiency and acting skills. Personally, I was deeply impressed by the dedication and teamwork displayed by the students. Despite the challenges of language learning and stage fright, they demonstrated confidence and enthusiasm on stage. Moreover, the dramas not only entertained the audience but also encouraged language learning in a fun and interactive way.
Overall, the English drama performance was a memorable and inspiring experience, highlighting the synergy between language learning and artistic expression. It reinforced the importance of creative approaches in language education and provided valuable opportunities for students to shine on stage.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇征文, 分享学校英文报最近举办的“当英语遇上艺术”系列活动中让你印象深刻的一项活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
一系列：a series of →a suite of
合作：cooperate→collaborate
展示：showcase→display
提供：provide→offer
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Each drama showcased a unique storyline and creative dialogue, providing a platform for students to showcase their English proficiency and acting skills.
拓展句：Each drama showcased a unique storyline and creative dialogue, which provided a platform for students to showcase their English proficiency and acting skills.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Among them, the activity that left a deep impression on me was the English drama performance.(运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Overall, the English drama performance was a memorable and inspiring experience, highlighting the synergy between language learning and artistic expression.(运用了现在分词作状语)
(河北省唐山市2024-2025学年高三上学期1月期末) 假定你是李华。为了体验生活, 你参加了社区举办的“最美劳动者”摄影大赛。请给你的英国笔友 John写封邮件, 分享此次经历。
内容包括：
1.参赛作品介绍；
2.参加活动感受。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好；
3.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear John,
How are you Recently, I participated in a photography competition organized by my community, called “The Most Beautiful Workers”.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’d love to hear your thoughts on this topic. Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear John,
How are you Recently, I participated in a photography competition organized by my community, called “The Most Beautiful Workers”.
My photo was about a street cleaner. It showed him sweeping the streets early in the morning. The sun was coming up, and the light made everything look warm. The cleaner was very focused on his work, cleaning every part of the street. You could see the dirt and leaves he had swept up beside him.
Taking part in this activity made me deeply appreciate the hard work of all laborers. I realized how much they contribute to our daily lives. It was a meaningful experience that inspired me to see beauty in everyday work.
I’d love to hear your thoughts on this topic. Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友John写一封邮件, 分享自己参加社区举办的“最美劳动者”摄影大赛的经历, 包括参赛作品介绍和参加活动感受。
【详解】1.词汇积累
升起：come up → rise
在……旁边：beside → next to
意识到：realize → be aware of
有意义的：meaningful → significant
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The cleaner was very focused on his work, cleaning every part of the street.
拓展句：The cleaner, who was very focused on his work, made sure every part of the street was cleaned thoroughly.
【点睛】[高分句型1] You could see the dirt and leaves he had swept up beside him. (运用了省略关系代词的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Taking part in this activity made me deeply appreciate the hard work of all laborers. (运用了动名词短语作主语)
[高分句型3] It was a meaningful experience that inspired me to see beauty in everyday work. (运用了that引导的定语从句)
（河北省保定市2024-2025学年高三上学期1月期末）假定你是李华, 你校将举办以“我最喜爱的英语学习网站”为主题的英语征文活动, 你打算投稿。请你给外教 Henry写封邮件, 内容包括：
（1）介绍你最喜爱的英语学习网站；
（2）请他对你的投稿作品进行指导。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Henry,
I hope this email finds you well.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Henry,
I hope this email finds you well. I’m writing to seek your guidance on my entry themed “My Favorite English Learning Website”.
The English learning website I like most is “BBC Learning English”, which boasts a wide range of content, catering to various learning levels and interests. Additionally, it integrates cultural insights and global perspectives, providing learners with a deeper understanding of English-speaking cultures. However, I have no idea if my entry is well-structured. Given your rich experience, could you kindly review my draft in the attachment and provide your insights into how I can polish it I am eagerly waiting for your valuable feedback.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校将举办以“我最喜爱的英语学习网站”为主题的英语征文活动。请考生给外教 Henry写封邮件请求指导。
【详解】1.词汇积累
喜欢：like→be fond of
提供：provide→offer
各种各样的：various→varieties of
此外：additionally→ besides
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m writing to seek your guidance on my entry themed “My Favorite English Learning Website”.
拓展句：I’m writing to seek your guidance on my entry whose theme is “My Favorite English Learning Website”.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] The English learning website I like most is “BBC Learning English”, which boasts a wide range of content, catering to various learning levels and interests. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Additionally, it integrates cultural insights and global perspectives, providing learners with a deeper understanding of English-speaking cultures. (运用了现在分词作状语)Unit 4 Living with technology单元写作深度指导（译林版2020）
Designing a product of the future（说明文）
单元话题 真题展示 考情预测
说明文 2023全国乙卷 说明文是以说明为主要表达方式, 用简洁明了的语言来解释说明事物, 阐明事理, 从而给读者提供知识的一种文体。在高考书面表达中, 其主要命题形式为图表式作文, 有时也以图画式和提纲式作文来呈现写作材料。从内容上大致可分为三个类型：事物介绍、问题方法介绍、路线、方位介绍、数据分析等。
Steps for writing an introductory essay: Paragraph 1: Start with a brief introduction of the thing or thing to be explained (question) The second paragraph: According to the information provided by the topic, the main question explains in a certain order, paying attention to the objective and concise language. Paragraph 3: The end should correspond to the beginning (the title does not require, do not express an opinion on this matter) 请以向学校英文报投稿的方式, 用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历, 及从中获得的体验和感受。 简要概述 2. 体验和感受
内容 句子设计
说明方位句 1. . .. is located at the foot of/by the side of/to the east of/to the north of ...... ......位于…的底部, 北面的北面。 2. In front of it is ..., with ... on its left and ... on its right. 在它的前面是……, 与…在它的左边和…在它的右边。 3. Turning to the left, you will see ..., behind which is ... 转到左边, 你会看到……, 后面是。 4. Walking past ..., you will see the building that appears in front of you is ... 走过……, 你会看到出现在你面前的建筑是。。 5. Along the road are lines of trees, casting dense shade on the sidewalk. 沿路是一排排的树木, 在人行道上投下了茂密的阴影。
说明现象句 1. Nowadays more and more people are suffering... 如今,越来越多的人正遭受着… 2. With the development of..., there is an increasing need for...people to know how to... 随着……的发展,越来越多的人需要知道如何…… 3. As far as I’m concerned, there are several reasons for... 在我看来, ……的原因有几个。 4. Owing to air pollution, many people have health problems. 由于空气污染,很多人有健康问题。 5.Everything has both advantages and disadvantages. The negative aspects are also apparent. 一切都有利有弊。负面的因素也很明显。 6. On the whole, its advantages can be seen as follows. 总的来说, 其优点如下。
问题方法句 1. The answer to the problem involves many factors. 这个问题的答案涉及很多方面。 2. To ensure success, there is one more thing that you must bear in mind, which is... 为了确保成功,你心中还需记住一点,那就是…… 3. Then, by what means shall we solve the problem 那么我们应该采取什么措施来解决这个问题 4. In this way, you’ll feel relaxed and refreshed. 通过这种方式,你将会感觉到放松和振作。 5. Therefore, find an effective way that is suitable for you, and you will have a wonderful life. 所以,找到一种适合你的有效的方法,那么你的生活也会多姿多彩的。 6. It is high time that something should be done... 是我们做些什么来……的时候了。 7.The change in… largely results from the fact that… 8. There are several causes for this significant growth in … 这种显著的增长有几个原因。 9. With the functions of ...,it enables us to... 具有……的功能, 它使我们能够。
数据分析句 1.The bar chart describes significant changes in the... 该柱形图描述了……的显著变化。 2. According to the result of the survey, more than half. About60% of the students like.... while only 30% say they are inr terested in... 根据调查结果可知,有超过半数即大约60%的学生喜欢……,而只有30%的学生说他们对…感兴趣。 3. Judging from these figures. we can draw the conclusion that... 根据这些数字判断,我们可以得出结论 4.More students, around 58%, however, insist that... 然而更多的学生,约58%,坚持认为...... 4. The table/chart shows that … 表格/图表显示 5. As can be seen from the chart… 从图表中可以看出。 6. From the table/chart/forms, we can see… 从表格/图表/表格中我们可以看到......。
【万能模板】
①________ is a most effective _______to _______. ②For most people, it’s almost impossible to ______. ③________is really _________.④With the functions of _______,it enables us to _______.⑤It can even ______. ⑥Just imagine, all this can be done with _______. ⑦A convenient tool can certainly make _______, but it doesn’t always help _______.⑧Too much _________.⑨Too many ________.⑩Relying too much on _______ makes ________.
①点明要介绍的事物的必要性 ②介绍该事物对多数人的重要意义 ③该事物优势或显著特点 ④该事物的作用 ⑤进一步说明该事物的作用 ⑥说明该事物的重要性 ⑦承上启下, 介绍事物的另一方面 ⑧该事物的负面影响一 ⑨该事物的负面影响二 ⑩总结说明过分使用该物品给我们带来的负面影响。
Nowadays, there are more and more in some big cities. It is estimated that ____________________.（用具体数据说明某现象）
Why have there been so many Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows. The first reason is that __________________.（原因一）Besides, __________________.（原因二）The third reason is __________________.（原因三）To sum up, the main cause of is due to__________________ .（指出主要原因）
It is high time that something should be done. For one thing, __________________.（解决建议一）
For another thing, . All these measures will certainly __________________.（解决建议二）
What I have known about is that _________________.（具体描述某事物）
Firstly, __________________.（描述要点一）__________________.（具体阐述要点一）Secondly, __________________.（描述要点二）（具体阐述要点二）__________________. As a college student, __________________.（结合自身描述要点三）
All in all, __________________.（做出总结）Therefore, we should __________________.（提出建议）
In recent days, there has been a problem , which is becoming more and more serious.（说明问题及其现状）First, __________________. Second, __________________.（进一步阐释现状）
We should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, ________. For another thing, ________. Finally, ________.（列举解决该问题的方法）
Personally, I believe that ________/Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because ________.（结尾段, 指出＂我＂的信心及理由）
Nowadays, many people prefer A because it is playing a more and more important role in our daily life. Generally/Generally speaking/On the whole, its advantages can be seen as follows./it has the following advantages. First of all, _________________ (A的优点之一). Besides,/What’s more, _________________A的优点之二）.
However, every coin has two sides./Everything has both advantages and disadvantages. The negative aspects are also apparent./Its disadvantages are also obvious. One of the important disadvantages is that _________________ (A的第一个缺点)．To make matters worse,/To make the matter worse,/To make things worse/What’s worse, _________________(A的第二个缺点)．
Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones./The above analysis shows us that it has more advantages than disadvantages. Therefore, I would like to _________________ (我的看法)．
(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only in this way can we_________________(对前景的预测)．
【高频词句】
The table/chart shows that …
As can be seen from the chart…
From the table/chart/forms we can see…
The table tells us that…
There was a great / slight increase/rise in …
There has been a sudden /slow/rapid fall/ drop in… It is 20% lower /higher than…
The number/rate has nearly doubled, as against that of last year.
The number is… times as much as that of…
It increases/rises/decreases/reduces by … times/ … percent/ 2/3.
The reason for …is that…
One may think of the change as a result of…
The change in… largely results from the fact that…
There are several causes for this significant growth in … First…This brings out the important fact that…
In summary, it is important….
From what has been discussed above, we may draw the conclusion that…
Obviously, if we want to…, it is necessary ….
There is no doubt that attention must be paid…
【常用词句】
a long time ago
2) at six o’clock in the morning
3) at the end of...
4) at the weekend
5) before he came here
6) by the end of last term
7) during the summer holidays
8) in a few years’ time
9) in the past
10) in the old days
11) in the past ten years
12) in August 2021
13) in winter vacation
14) in weekdays
15) last month
16) next week
17) on Sunday morning
18) on October 1st
19) since early in the 20th century
20) so far
21) up to now
22) not…until
23) while
24) in the 1930’s (in the thirties of the twentieth century)
25) January, February, March , April, May, June, July, August, September, October, November, December
1) at the crossing
2) at the end of the street
3) at the airport, at the village
4) at the foot of the mountain
5) at the bottom
6) at the top of
7) be located in
8) behind the park
9) be situated in...
10) five kilometers to the north of Beijing
11) in the south of Tianjin
12) in the middle of the park
13) in Class 3 Grade 2
14) in front of the bus
15) in the tree
16) in Guangdong
17) in China
18) lies to the west of Sichuan
19) on the other side of the street
20) on both sides of the road
21) on the east coast of the Pacific Ocean
22) on the right
as, as a result, because, because of, for, in the end, cause, result in, consequently, originate from, since, so, therefore, It is clear that…, It turns out to be… , The primary reason is …, etc.
1)Go along the street and take the second turning on the left/turn left at the second crossing沿着这条街往前走, 在第二个十字路口向左拐。
2)Cross the bridge/Go across the bridge.过桥
3)Go on until you reach the end. 一直往前走, 直到尽头。
4)It’s about 100 meters along on the right. 它就在前面靠右大约100米处。
5)Go along the street until you come to the traffic lights. 沿这条路一直走到红绿灯那儿。
6)Turn right / left at the second crossing. (Take the second turning on the right / left.) 在第二个十字路口向右 / 左转弯。
7)Take a number 46 bus, and get off at the square. 坐46路公共汽车, 在广场下车。
8)It’s on the corner of Huaihai Street and Xizang Road. 在淮海路和西藏路的路口。
9)Go straight ahead along the bund and then turn left. 沿着外滩往前走, 然后往走转弯。
10)It’s only about ten minutes’ walk. 那儿离这儿只有走大约10分钟的路。
11) My home is not far from here. It’s only five minutes’ walk. 我家离这儿不远, 走5分钟就到。
12) It is one hour’ ride from Shanghai to Suzhou. 从上海坐车到苏州有1小时的路程。
13) As the saying goes, when in Rome, do as the Romans do. 俗话有说, 入乡随俗。
14) It takes over ten experts and professors four years to finish this dictionary. 这本词典由十多位专家、教授花费四年时间编纂而成。
（2023全国乙卷）请以向学校英文报投稿的方式, 用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历, 及从中获得的体验和感受。
1.简要概述 2. 体验和感受
（2024·浙江温州·三模）你校英文报就最近举办的“当英语遇上艺术”(When English Meets The Arts)系列活动开展征文, 请你写一篇短文, 分享其中让你印象深刻的一项活动, 内容包括：
1.活动介绍;2.你的感想
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
When English Meets The Arts
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(河北省唐山市2024-2025学年高三上学期1月期末) 假定你是李华。为了体验生活, 你参加了社区举办的“最美劳动者”摄影大赛。请给你的英国笔友 John写封邮件, 分享此次经历。
内容包括：
1.参赛作品介绍；
2.参加活动感受。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好；
3.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear John,
How are you Recently, I participated in a photography competition organized by my community, called “The Most Beautiful Workers”.
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I’d love to hear your thoughts on this topic. Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
（河北省保定市2024-2025学年高三上学期1月期末）假定你是李华, 你校将举办以“我最喜爱的英语学习网站”为主题的英语征文活动, 你打算投稿。请你给外教 Henry写封邮件, 内容包括：
（1）介绍你最喜爱的英语学习网站；
（2）请他对你的投稿作品进行指导。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Henry,
I hope this email finds you well.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
