Unit 1 Food matters 单元写作深度指导（译林版2020）
Introducing your favourite food（记叙文）
单元话题 真题展示 考情预测
记叙文 2023年温州一模 “中国饮食文化”是高中英语新课标主题语境内容要求之一，也是高考英语常考话题之一。它包括对中国美食的介绍和说明喜欢的原因，目的是帮助学生树立正确的人生观和价值观和培养民族文化自豪感。
Write an introduction： Choose the food you are going to write about. It should be the food you like most.It can include the introduction of the food, the reason why you like it and the process of making it. 假定你是李华，即将参加学校举行的英语演讲比赛。命题演讲环节要求你介绍一道中国美食。请你写一篇演讲稿。内容包括：1. 菜品介绍；2. 制作过程。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
段落 内容 句子设计
第一段 美食介绍 Dumplings are a beloved part of Chinese culture, and are enjoyed by people all over the world. They are a delicious and nutritious food, and are a great way to bring people together. Mooncake is a traditional Chinese food that has been around for centuries. It is a symbol of Chinese culture and is a reminder of the importance of family and friendship. It is a delicious treat that is enjoyed by people all over the world. Tangyuan is also a popular snack in China. It can be served with a variety of savory fillings such as pork, beef, mushrooms, and vegetables. It is also a popular street food, often served with a variety of sauces and condiments.
第二段 喜欢原因 Dumplings are a symbol of unity and togetherness. It is said that the shape of the dumpling resembles a Chinese ingot, which symbolizes wealth and prosperity. Eating dumplings together is a way for families to come together and celebrate. Mooncake has a special meaning in Chinese culture. It symbolizes reunion and harmony, and is a symbol of family unity. People usually give mooncakes to their family and friends as a sign of love and appreciation. It is also a way to express wishes for a better future. Tangyuan is a symbol of Chinese culture and tradition. It is a reminder of the importance of family and unity, and is a reminder of the importance of celebrating special occasions with loved ones.
第三段 制作过程 Dumplings are made with a variety of fillings, such as pork, beef, vegetables, and even sweet fillings like red bean paste. The dough is usually made from wheat flour, and the dumplings are boiled, steamed, or fried. Mooncake is a traditional Chinese food with a long history. It is usually round or rectangular in shape, and is made of flour, sugar, lard, and other ingredients. It is usually filled with sweet fillings such as lotus seed paste, red bean paste, jujube paste, and sesame paste. It is usually eaten during the Mid-Autumn Festival, which is a traditional Chinese festival. Tangyuan, also known as glutinous rice balls, is a traditional Chinese food with a long history. It is made of glutinous rice flour, which is kneaded into a dough and then rolled into small balls. It is usually served in a sweet soup or syrup, and is a popular food for festivals and special occasions.
【词汇积累】:积累单元话题词汇;
1．high/rich in fiber 高纤维
2．low in fat 低脂肪
3．be lacking in nutrition 缺乏营养
4．Be particular about food 挑食；对食物很讲究
5．be closely related to health 与健康息息相关
6．do harm/damage to physical health 有害身体健康
7．food poisoning 食物中毒
8．keep a balanced/healthy diet 保持均衡/健康饮食
9．go on a diet/be on a diet 节食
10．lose weight/take off weight 减肥
11．cut down body fat 削减脂肪
12．put on/gain weight 增加体重
13．aim at keeping slim 旨在保持身材苗条
14．skip breakfast 不吃早餐
15．eat excessively 过量地吃
16．take an order 点菜
17．take in/absorb nutrition 吸收营养
18．a variety of fast food 各种各样的快餐
19．attach importance to food quality 注重食品质量
20．pay more attention to your diet 更加注意你的饮食
21．develop/form healthy eating habits 养成健康的饮食习惯
22．guarantee the safety of food 保障食品安全
23．regard less of others’ health 不顾他人的健康
24．have a positive effect on 对……有积极的影响
25．be favored by 受到……的青睐
【句式积累】:
1．Breakfast is the most important meal of the day, and dinner the most enjoyable. 早餐是一天中最重要的一餐，而晚餐则是最愉快的一餐。
2．It’s high time that we stayed away from junk food and led a healthy life. 现在是我们远离垃圾食品、过上健康生活的时候了。
3．Only when we are particular about food can we prevent ourselves from falling ill. 讲究饮食，我们才能预防自己患病。
4．The issue of unsafe food has aroused public concern and caused a heated discussion. 食物不安全事件引发了公众的关注和激烈的讨论。
5．The local government needs to strengthen the management and raise the awareness of food safety among all the citizens. 当地政府需要加强管理并提高市民的食品安全意识。
6．As far as I’m concerned, we should develop healthy eating habits to build up a strong body.Only in this way can we have enough energy to study. 我认为，为了增强体质，我们应该养成健康的饮食习惯。只有这样我们才能有足够的精力学习。
中国饮食
常用词语：
中国菜 Chinese cuisine / food 调料 seasonings; flavorings 烹饪 cooking; culinary art 色、香、味 color, flavor and taste 中国八大某系 eight major cuisines in China 红烧 braise in soy sauce 煨 simmer 烤 roast 蒸 steam 爆炒 stir-fry
必备句式：
◇ Chinese cuisine is a general term for the various dishes from diverse regions and ethnic groups of China. 中国菜是中国各地区、各民族多种菜肴的统称。
◇ Chinese cuisine culture is extensive and profound. And as one of the Three World Cuisines, Chinese cuisine enjoys a reputation at home and abroad. 中国饮食文化博大精深，作为世界三大菜系之一的中国菜在海内外享有盛誉。
◇ Tastes of Chinese food are traditionally categorized into five flavors: sour, sweet, bitter, spicy, and salty.Chinese emphasize the harmony of the five flavors. 中国食物的味道习惯上分为五种：酸、甜、苦、 辣、咸。中国人强调五味调和。
◇ Sichuan cuisine is one of the eight major cuisines in China, and is famous all over the world for its richness, spiciness and variety. 川菜是中国的八大菜系之一，以其丰富的食材、辛辣的口 味及多变的菜式而闻名于世。
◇ As an old Chinese saying goes: food is the first necessity of people.正如一句中国古话说的那样：民以食为天。◇ One of the characteristics of Chinese cuisine is "sweet in the south, salty in the north, spicy in the east and sour in the west". 中国饮食有着“南甜北咸，东辣西酸”的特点。
◇ Chinese food has diversified color, aromatic flavor, and excellent taste as its main features. 中国菜色香味俱全。◇ The Eight Cuisines, the most influential and typical cuisines in China, are Guangdong cuisine, Shandong cuisine, Jiangsu cuisine, Sichuan cuisine, Fujian cuisine, Hunan cuisine, Anhui cuisine and Zhejiang cuisine. 在中国，“八大菜系"是最具影响力和风味最独特的菜系，分别是：粤菜、鲁菜、苏菜、川菜、闽菜、湘菜、徽菜和浙江菜。
茶
常用词语：饮茶 drink tea 品尝一杯茶 savor/ taste a cup of tea 茶香 the fragrance/ aroma of tea 领略饮茶乐趣 take delight in tea-drinking细啜慢饮 imbibe slowly in small sips 茶馆 tea house 中国茶文化 Chinese tea culture 茶道 tea ceremony 茶艺 the art of making tea 喝茶休息时间 tea break
必备句式：
◇ China is the hometown of tea. Before the Tang Dynasty, Chinese tea was exported by land and sea, first to Japan and Korea, then to India and Central Asia. 中国是茶的故乡。唐代以前，中国茶叶通过陆路和水路出口，先是 出口到日本和朝鲜，之后出口到印度和中亚。
◇ In the Tang Dynasty, a man named Lu Yu created the first book in the world on tea, The Classic of Tea. This work helped to popularize the art of tea drinking all across China. 唐朝时，一个名叫陆羽的人写了世界上第一部关 于茶的著作--《茶经》。这部作品促进了在中国各地 推广饮茶艺术。
◇ The medical properties and benefits of tea to the human body have actually been scientifically proven, and tea has come to be generally recognized as a natural health food. 茶叶的药用功能及其对人体的好处实际上已经得到了科学的证明，同时茶叶已经被公认为天然的健康食品。
◇ In Chinese society, the younger generation always show their respect to the older generation by offering a cup of tea. 在中国 社会,晚辈经常通过敬茶来表示对长辈的尊敬。
◇ Whenever guests visit, offering a cup of tea to them is a basic social custom. 每当有客人 到访，给他们沏杯茶是最基本的社交习俗。
火锅
常用词语：麻辣火锅 spicy hotpot 火锅食材 hotpot ingredients 大团圆 a happy reunion 温情而融洽的气氛 a warm and harmonious atmosphere
必备句式：
◇ Hotpot refers to several East Asian varieties of stew, consisting of a simmering metal pot of stock at the center of the dining table. While the hotpot is kept simmering, ingredients are placed into the pot and are cooked at the table. 火锅是指东亚国 家各种各样的炖煮美食，桌子中央放一个盛着高汤的金属炖 锅,在锅中汤水处于沸腾状态时，将食材放入锅中煮着吃。
◇ Chinese hotpot originated in the north where the main ingredient was beef, mutton or horse. It then spread to southern China during the Tang Dynasty and developed with different ingredients such as seafood. 中国火锅起源于北方游牧民族，他们的主要食材通常是牛肉、羊肉 或马肉。后来，在唐朝时期传到南方地区，并发展演变出不同食材的火锅，比如海鲜火锅。
馄饨
常用词语：馄饨/元宝汤 wonton / ingot soup 馄饨（皮/面） wonton / huntun (skin / noodles) 名号繁多 gain many names 制作各异 be made in various ways 鲜香味美 taste delicious
必备句式：
◇ The shape of wonton bears a resemblance to a shoe shaped gold ingot that Chinese people used in ancient times, so wonton soup is also called ingot soup. 馄饨与中国古人用的鞋形金元宝相似，因此馄饨汤也叫元宝汤。
◇ The second day of the first lunar month is the time to worship the God of Wealth, and people have wonton soup to wish for wealth in the New Year. 正月第二天是祭财神的日子, 在那天，人们会喝馄饨汤以祈愿新一年财运亨通。
饺子
常用词语：饺子 dumplings; jiaozi 包饺子 wrapping dumplings 饺子皮 dumpling skin / wrapper 饺子馅 the stuffing for dumplings 冬至日 the Winter Solstice(Festival)
必备句式：
◇ Dumplings, or jiaozi, is a Chinese staple dish with over 1,800 years of history. Traditionally they are eaten on Chinese New Year’s Eve, which symbolizes wealth. 饺子是中国的一种传统主食，有着1800多年的历史。按照习俗，往往在除夕夜吃饺子，象征着财富。
◇ In today’s China, many believe eating dumplings will bring fortune, because the food resembles "yuanbao”, a boat-shaped gold ingot that was used as currency in the past. 现在的中国，很多人相信吃饺子会带来好运，因为它的形状像“元宝” 种在过去用作流通货币的船形金锭。
筷子
常用词语：筷子（古称"箸"） chopsticks 传统餐具 traditional tableware 中华文明的一种象征 a symbol of Chinese civilization 餐桌礼仪 table manners 用筷的餐桌禁忌 table taboos while using chopsticks
必备句式：
◇ China is the hometown of chopsticks. The invention of chopsticks reflects the wisdom of Chinese ancient people. A pair of chopsticks, though they look simple, can nip, pick, rip and stir food. 中国是筷子之乡。筷子的发明反映了古代中国人的智慧。一双筷子，尽管看起来简单，但却可以夹，挑,扯和搅食物。
◇ The appearance of chopsticks said goodbye to those days when our Chinese ancestors had to use their hands to eat, so they featured the coming of civilization to food culture. 筷子的出现让中国人的祖先告别了用手进食的年代，标志着进入了饮食文化 文明时代。
◇ Chinese people are familiar with the use of chopsticks. Many foreigners are interested in but also puzzled about how to use them with facility. 中国人熟悉使用筷子。很多外国人对如何熟练使用筷子既感兴趣又感到不解。
【万能写作模板】
Among a diversity of delicate traditional Chinese food, 某种食物+ ranks top of my list, which has gained popularity throughout China (since...).
Consisting of A, B as well as C, 该食物+ is a perfect combination of color, aroma and taste. With differently flavored +该食物某个特色, from A to B, it is bound to meet everyone’s preference.
Deeply ingrained in Chinese culture, 该食物+ is not only a time-honored meal but also a social gathering activity symbolizing +象征意义. Thus,don’t miss the opportunity to taste authentic Chinese+该食物and experience +某种感觉(warmth and comfort)+ it brings.
(2023·江苏省·月考试卷)假定你是李华，你校英语报“Food and Culture”栏目正在征集有关中国传统美食的文章，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，推荐一道中国传统美食。内容包括：
1.美食介绍；
2.推荐理由。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My Favorite Traditional Chinese Food
【答案】
My Favorite Traditional Chinese Food
As a Chinese, I take pride in our rich and diverse food culture. Among the many delicious dishes, Jiaozi, also known as dumplings, is my favorite.
Jiaozi is made with dough skin and a variety of fillings, such as meat, vegetables, and seafood. Boiled, steamed, or fried, it is often served during festivals and family gatherings. With its shape resembling ancient Chinese currency, Jiaozi symbolizes wealth and good luck in Chinese culture.
Unique in taste and cultural significance, Jiaozi is a must-try that not only satisfies your stomach but also offers a glimpse into our profound and fascinating culture.
【解析】1.词汇积累
以……为荣：take pride in→ be proud of
各种各样的：a variety of → varieties of/various
重要性：significance→ importance
迷人的：fascinating→ charming/enchanting
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Among the many delicious dishes, Jiaozi, also known as dumplings, is my favorite.
拓展句：Among the many delicious dishes, Jiaozi, which is also known as dumplings, is my favorite.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】With its shape resembling ancient Chinese currency, Jiaozi symbolizes wealth and good luck in Chinese culture.（运用了with复合结构）
【高分句型2】Unique in taste and cultural significance, Jiaozi is a must-try that not only satisfies your stomach but also offers a glimpse into our profound and fascinating culture.（运用了that引导的定语从句）
(2023·江苏省·月考试卷)假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Chris对中国美食很感兴趣，来信询问你家乡的特色美食，请根据以下要点给他回一封邮件。
内容包括：
1. 推荐一种美食;
2. 简要介绍其特色;
3. 邀请他来华品尝。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Chris,
Hearing you are interested in Chinese food, I recommend a well-known dish—Gong Bao Chicken to you.
As one of the most popular dishes in my hometown, Gong Bao Chicken is made of chicken breast, roast peanuts, small pieces of toufu, dried chilies and onions. Cooked with sugar, salt and vinegar, it has a combination of sweet and sour taste, which is loved by both young and old.
I would like to extend my sincere welcome to you to pay a visit to China, during which I will show you around and you will try this delicious dish and other famous local cuisines.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】1. 推荐一种美食；
2. 简要介绍其特色；
3. 邀请他来华品尝。
【详解】1.词汇积累
对……感兴趣：be interested in→demonstrate an interest in
著名的：well-known → famous
表达：extend→convey
参观：pay a visit to→ visit
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Hearing you are interested in Chinese food, I recommend a well-known dish—Gong Bao Chicken to you.
拓展句：As I hear you are interested in Chinese food, I recommend a well-known dish—Gong Bao Chicken to you.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Cooked with sugar, salt and vinegar, it has a combination of sweet and sour taste, which is loved by both young and old.（运用了过去分词作状语以及which引导的非限定性定语从句）
【高分句型2】I would like to extend my sincere welcome to you to pay a visit to China, during which I will show you around and you will try this delicious dish and other famous local cuisines.（运用了“介词+which”引导的非限定性定语从句）
(2023·江苏省·月考试卷)民以食为天。有的食物也可以是坏情绪的疗愈。治愈系食物通常因人而异，这个取决于各自独特的经历。治愈系食物的力量主要在于它所唤起的联想。请你以“我的治愈系食物”为题，用英文写一篇短文。内容包括：
1. 你对治愈系食物的理解。
2. 你的治愈系食物以及原因。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为 80 左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My Comfort Food
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
My comfort food
Food is fundamental to people. Actually, some food can be a cure for bad fort food varies from person to person, depending on individual personal experiences and the associations it calls to mind. My comfort food is chocolate. The story started from the primary school. At that time I was so timid that I never dared to speak up in class. One day, I gathered all my courage to raise my hand and finally got a bar of chocolate as a reward. From then on, whenever eating chocolate, I can always recall the very moment and the comfort it brings. To conclude, comfort food really nourishes the soul.
【解析】1.词汇积累
基础的：fundamental→basic
开始：begin→ start
回想：recall→think of
总之：to conclude→ all in all
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Comfort food varies from person to person, depending on individual personal experiences and the associations it calls to mind.
拓展句：Comfort food varies from person to person, which depends on individual personal experiences and the associations it calls to mind.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】At that time I was so timid that I never dared to speak up in class.（运用了结果状语从句）
【高分句型2】From then on, whenever eating chocolate, I can always recall the very moment and the comfort it brings. （运用了whenever引导的时间状语从句）
(2023·四川省甘孜藏族自治州·月考试卷)假定你是高三学生李华。你的外国朋友Steve要给班级同学介绍中国美食，发来邮件询问有关信息。请给他写一封回信，内容包括：
(1)中国美食简介；
(2)推荐一道美食并说明理由。
注意：
(1)词数100左右；
(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Steve,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Steve,
I am glad that you are interested in Chinese food.①As is known to all, Chinese food focuses on diversified color, aromatic flavor, and excellent taste.
Since you want to introduce Chinese food to your classmates,I’d like to recommend noodles with tomato egg sauce to you.The reasons are as follows.
Firstly,it is a traditional Chinese dish,and especially popular with people who don’t have much time to cook.In addition,its cooking method is very easy.Finally and most importantly,just as its name implies,it only needs three ingredients:noodles,tomatoes and eggs,which are common and easy to come by in our daily life.
If you have any questions,do let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文。要求考生给国朋友Steve写封回信。向他简介中国美食并推荐一道美食。需要写的内容已经给出，需要适当添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实。写作时尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，使文章显得更有档次。
【亮点词汇】
①as follows如下
②in addition此外
③most importantly更重要的是
【高分句型】
①As is known to all, Chinese food focuses on diversified color, aromatic flavor, and excellent taste.（as引导非限制性定语从句）。
② Firstly,it is a traditional Chinese dish,and especially popular with people who don’t have much time to cook.(who引导定语从句）。Unit 1 Food matters 单元写作深度指导（译林版2020）
Introducing your favourite food（记叙文）
单元话题 真题展示 考情预测
记叙文 2023年温州一模 “中国饮食文化”是高中英语新课标主题语境内容要求之一，也是高考英语常考话题之一。它包括对中国美食的介绍和说明喜欢的原因，目的是帮助学生树立正确的人生观和价值观和培养民族文化自豪感。
Write an introduction： Choose the food you are going to write about. It should be the food you like most.It can include the introduction of the food, the reason why you like it and the process of making it. 假定你是李华，即将参加学校举行的英语演讲比赛。命题演讲环节要求你介绍一道中国美食。请你写一篇演讲稿。内容包括：1. 菜品介绍；2. 制作过程。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
段落 内容 句子设计
第一段 美食介绍 Dumplings are a beloved part of Chinese culture, and are enjoyed by people all over the world. They are a delicious and nutritious food, and are a great way to bring people together. Mooncake is a traditional Chinese food that has been around for centuries. It is a symbol of Chinese culture and is a reminder of the importance of family and friendship. It is a delicious treat that is enjoyed by people all over the world. Tangyuan is also a popular snack in China. It can be served with a variety of savory fillings such as pork, beef, mushrooms, and vegetables. It is also a popular street food, often served with a variety of sauces and condiments.
第二段 喜欢原因 Dumplings are a symbol of unity and togetherness. It is said that the shape of the dumpling resembles a Chinese ingot, which symbolizes wealth and prosperity. Eating dumplings together is a way for families to come together and celebrate. Mooncake has a special meaning in Chinese culture. It symbolizes reunion and harmony, and is a symbol of family unity. People usually give mooncakes to their family and friends as a sign of love and appreciation. It is also a way to express wishes for a better future. Tangyuan is a symbol of Chinese culture and tradition. It is a reminder of the importance of family and unity, and is a reminder of the importance of celebrating special occasions with loved ones.
第三段 制作过程 Dumplings are made with a variety of fillings, such as pork, beef, vegetables, and even sweet fillings like red bean paste. The dough is usually made from wheat flour, and the dumplings are boiled, steamed, or fried. Mooncake is a traditional Chinese food with a long history. It is usually round or rectangular in shape, and is made of flour, sugar, lard, and other ingredients. It is usually filled with sweet fillings such as lotus seed paste, red bean paste, jujube paste, and sesame paste. It is usually eaten during the Mid-Autumn Festival, which is a traditional Chinese festival. Tangyuan, also known as glutinous rice balls, is a traditional Chinese food with a long history. It is made of glutinous rice flour, which is kneaded into a dough and then rolled into small balls. It is usually served in a sweet soup or syrup, and is a popular food for festivals and special occasions.
【词汇积累】:积累单元话题词汇;
1．high/rich in fiber 高纤维
2．low in fat 低脂肪
3．be lacking in nutrition 缺乏营养
4．Be particular about food 挑食；对食物很讲究
5．be closely related to health 与健康息息相关
6．do harm/damage to physical health 有害身体健康
7．food poisoning 食物中毒
8．keep a balanced/healthy diet 保持均衡/健康饮食
9．go on a diet/be on a diet 节食
10．lose weight/take off weight 减肥
11．cut down body fat 削减脂肪
12．put on/gain weight 增加体重
13．aim at keeping slim 旨在保持身材苗条
14．skip breakfast 不吃早餐
15．eat excessively 过量地吃
16．take an order 点菜
17．take in/absorb nutrition 吸收营养
18．a variety of fast food 各种各样的快餐
19．attach importance to food quality 注重食品质量
20．pay more attention to your diet 更加注意你的饮食
21．develop/form healthy eating habits 养成健康的饮食习惯
22．guarantee the safety of food 保障食品安全
23．regard less of others’ health 不顾他人的健康
24．have a positive effect on 对……有积极的影响
25．be favored by 受到……的青睐
【句式积累】:
1．Breakfast is the most important meal of the day, and dinner the most enjoyable.早餐是一天中最重要的一餐，而晚餐则是最愉快的一餐。
2．It’s high time that we stayed away from junk food and led a healthy life.现在是我们远离垃圾食品、过上健康生活的时候了。
3．Only when we are particular about food can we prevent ourselves from falling ill.讲究饮食，我们才能预防自己患病。
4．The issue of unsafe food has aroused public concern and caused a heated discussion.食物不安全事件引发了公众的关注和激烈的讨论。
5．The local government needs to strengthen the management and raise the awareness of food safety among all the citizens.当地政府需要加强管理并提高市民的食品安全意识。
6．As far as I’m concerned, we should develop healthy eating habits to build up a strong body.Only in this way can we have enough energy to study.我认为，为了增强体质，我们应该养成健康的饮食习惯。只有这样我们才能有足够的精力学习。
中国饮食
常用词语：
中国菜 Chinese cuisine/ food 调料 seasonings;flavorings 烹饪 cooking;culinary art 色、香、味 color, flavor and taste 中国八大某系 eight major cuisines in China 红烧 braise in soy sauce 煨 simmer 烤 roast 蒸 steam 爆炒 stir-fry
必备句式：
◇ Chinese cuisine is a general term for the various dishes from diverse regions and ethnic groups of China. 中国菜是中国各地区、各民族多种菜肴的统称。
◇ Chinese cuisine culture is extensive and profound. And as one of the Three World Cuisines, Chinese cuisine enjoys a reputation at home and abroad. 中国饮食文化博大精深，作为世界三大菜系之一的中国菜在海内外享有盛誉。
◇ Tastes of Chinese food are traditionally categorized into five flavors: sour, sweet, bitter, spicy, and salty.Chinese emphasize the harmony of the five flavors. 中国食物的味道习惯上分为五种：酸、甜、苦、 辣、咸。中国人强调五味调和。
◇ Sichuan cuisine is one of the eight major cuisines in China, and is famous all over the world for its richness, spiciness and variety. 川菜是中国的八大菜系之一，以其丰富的食材、辛辣的口 味及多变的菜式而闻名于世。
◇ As an old Chinese saying goes: food is the first necessity of people. 正如一句中国古话说的那样：民以食为天。◇ One of the characteristics of Chinese cuisine is "sweet in the south, salty in the north, spicy in the east and sour in the west". 中国饮食有着“南甜北咸，东辣西酸”的特点。
◇ Chinese food has diversified color, aromatic flavor, and excellent taste as its main features. 中国菜色香味俱全。◇ The Eight Cuisines, the most influential and typical cuisines in China, are Guangdong cuisine, Shandong cuisine, Jiangsu cuisine, Sichuan cuisine, Fujian cuisine, Hunan cuisine, Anhui cuisine and Zhejiang cuisine. 在中国，“八大菜系"是最具影响力和风味最独特的菜系，分别是： 粤菜、鲁菜、苏菜、川菜、闽菜、湘菜、徽菜和浙江菜。
茶
常用词语：饮茶 drink tea 品尝一杯茶 savor/ taste a cup of tea 茶香 the fragrance/ aroma of tea 领略饮茶乐趣 take delight in tea-drinking 细啜慢饮 imbibe slowly in small sips 茶馆 tea house 中国茶文化 Chinese tea culture 茶道 tea ceremony 茶艺 the art of making tea 喝茶休息时间 tea break
必备句式：
◇ China is the hometown of tea. Before the Tang Dynasty, Chinese tea was exported by land and sea, first to Japan and Korea, then to India and Central Asia.中国是茶 的故乡。唐代以前，中国茶叶通过陆路和水路出口，先是 出口到日本和朝鲜，之后出口到印度和中亚。
◇ In the Tang Dynasty, a man named Lu Yu created the first book in the world on tea, The Classic of Tea. This work helped to popularize the art of tea drinking all across China.唐朝时，一个名叫陆羽的人写了世界上第一部关 于茶的著作---《茶经》。这部作品促进了在中国各地 推广饮茶艺术。
◇ The medical properties and benefits of tea to the human body have actually been scientifically proven, and tea has come to be generally recognized as a natural health food.茶叶的药用功能及其对人体的好处实际上已经得到了科学的证明，同时茶叶已经被公认为天然的健康食品。
◇ In Chinese society, the younger generation always show their respect to the older generation by offering a cup of tea.在中国 社会,晚辈经常通过敬茶来表示对长辈的尊敬。
◇ Whenever guests visit, offering a cup of tea to them is a basic social custom.每当有客人 到访，给他们沏杯茶是最基本的社交习俗。
火锅
常用词语：麻辣火锅 spicy hotpot 火锅食材 hotpot ingredients 大团圆 a happy reunion 温情而融洽的气氛 a warm and harmonious atmosphere
必备句式：
◇ Hotpot refers to several East Asian varieties of stew, consisting of a simmering metal pot of stock at the center of the dining table. While the hotpot is kept simmering, ingredients are placed into the pot and are cooked at the table.火锅是指东亚国 家各种各样的炖煮美食，桌子中央放一个盛着高汤的金属炖 锅,在锅中汤水处于沸腾状态时，将食材放入锅中煮着吃。
◇ Chinese hotpot originated in the north where the main ingredient was beef, mutton or horse. It then spread to southern China during the Tang Dynasty and developed with different ingredients such as seafood.中国火锅起源于北方游牧民族，他们的主要食材通常是牛肉、羊肉 或马肉。后来，在唐朝时期传到南方地区，并发展演变出不同食材的火锅，比如海鲜火锅。
馄饨
常用词语：馄饨/元宝汤 wonton / ingot soup 馄饨（皮/面） wonton / huntun (skin / noodles) 名号繁多 gain many names 制作各异 be made in various ways 鲜香味美 taste delicious
必备句式：
◇ The shape of wonton bears a resemblance to a shoe shaped gold ingot that Chinese people used in ancient times, so wonton soup is also called ingot soup.馄饨与中国古人用的鞋 形金元宝相似，因此馄饨汤也叫元宝汤。◇ The second day of the first lunar month is the time to worship the God of Wealth, and people have wonton soup to wish for wealth in the New Year.正月第二天是祭财神的日子, 在那天，人们会喝馄饨汤以祈愿新一年财运亨通。
饺子
常用词语：饺子 dumplings; jiaozi 包饺子 wrapping dumplings 饺子皮 dumpling skin / wrapper 饺子馅 the stuffing for dumplings 冬至日 the Winter Solstice(Festival)
必备句式：
◇ Dumplings, or jiaozi, is a Chinese staple dish with over 1,800 years of history. Traditionally they are eaten on Chinese New Year’s Eve, which symbolizes wealth. 饺子是中国的一种传统主食，有着1800多年的历史。按照习俗，往往在除夕夜吃饺子，象征着财富。
◇ In today’s China, many believe eating dumplings will bring fortune, because the food resembles "yuanbao”, a boat-shaped gold ingot that was used as currency in the past. 现在的中国，很多人相信吃饺子会带来好运，因为它的形状像“元宝” 种在过去用作流通货币的船形金锭。
筷子
常用词语：筷子（古称"箸"） chopsticks 传统餐具 traditional tableware 中华文明的一种象征 a symbol of Chinese civilization 餐桌礼仪 table manners 用筷的餐桌禁忌 table taboos while using chopsticks
必备句式：
◇ China is the hometown of chopsticks. The invention of chopsticks reflects the wisdom of Chinese ancient people. A pair of chopsticks, though they look simple, can nip, pick, rip and stir food. 中国是筷子之乡。筷子的发明反映了古代中国人的智慧。一双筷子，尽管看起来简单，但却可以夹，挑,扯和搅食物。
◇ The appearance of chopsticks said goodbye to those days when our Chinese ancestors had to use their hands to eat, so they featured the coming of civilization to food culture. 筷子的出现让中国人的祖先告别了用手进食的年代，标志着进入了饮食文化 文明时代。
◇ Chinese people are familiar with the use of chopsticks. Many foreigners are interested in but also puzzled about how to use them with facility. 中国人熟悉使用筷子。很多外国人对如何熟练使用筷子既感兴趣又感到不解。
【万能写作模板】
Among a diversity of delicate traditional Chinese food, 某种食物+ ranks top of my list, which has gained popularity throughout China (since...).
Consisting of A, B as well as C, 该食物+ is a perfect combination of color, aroma and taste. With differently flavored +该食物某个特色, from A to B, it is bound to meet everyone’s preference.
Deeply ingrained in Chinese culture, 该食物+ is not only a time-honored meal but also a social gathering activity symbolizing +象征意义. Thus,don’t miss the opportunity to taste authentic Chinese+该食物 and experience +某种感觉(warmth and comfort)+ it brings.
(2023·江苏省·月考试卷)假定你是李华，你校英语报“Food and Culture”栏目正在征集有关中国传统美食的文章，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，推荐一道中国传统美食。内容包括：
1.美食介绍；
2.推荐理由。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My Favorite Traditional Chinese Food
(2023·江苏省·月考试卷)假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Chris对中国美食很感兴趣，来信询问你家乡的特色美食，请根据以下要点给他回一封邮件。
内容包括：
1. 推荐一种美食;
2. 简要介绍其特色;
3. 邀请他来华品尝。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Li Hua
(2023·江苏省·月考试卷)民以食为天。有的食物也可以是坏情绪的疗愈。治愈系食物通常因人而异，这个取决于各自独特的经历。治愈系食物的力量主要在于它所唤起的联想。请你以“我的治愈系食物”为题，用英文写一篇短文。内容包括：
1. 你对治愈系食物的理解。
2. 你的治愈系食物以及原因。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为 80 左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My Comfort Food
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________、(2023·四川省甘孜藏族自治州·月考试卷)假定你是高三学生李华。你的外国朋友Steve要给班级同学介绍中国美食，发来邮件询问有关信息。请给他写一封回信，内容包括：
(1)中国美食简介；
(2)推荐一道美食并说明理由。
注意：
(1)词数100左右；
(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Steve,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Li HuaUnit 2 The Universal Language 单元写作深度指导（译林版2020）
Introducing your favourite singer or band（记叙文）
单元话题 真题展示 考情预测
记叙文 2023年全国高考英语甲卷 “人物介绍”是高中英语新课标主题语境内容要求之一，也是高考英语常考话题之一。它包括个人情况简介和名人事迹介绍两个方面,这类文章通常以人物传记和逸闻趣事为主，目的是培养学生高尚的道德情操和帮助学生树立正确的人生观和价值观。
Write an introduction： Choose the person you are going to write about. It should be your favourite singer or band. It can include the background of the person or the group and the reason why you like them. 你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1. 人物简介及事迹；2. 意义或启示。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
段落 内容 句子设计
第一段 引入话题 （介绍人物的基本情况，如外貌、年龄等） 1.Today I am glad to introduce a teenager. His name is Cheng Xin. 2. I’m Li Hua and I’m very happy to stand here to talk about myself. 3.There is always something unforgettable in my life, especially the story between my friend and me. 4. My friend Daniel encourages me a lot in many ways.Now let me tell you something about him. 5. I visited Hong Kong last summer holiday. It’s a beautiful city and I had a wonderful time there. 6. Liang Ling, a 15-year-old girl, is a student in Class 1, Grade 9. 7.How time flies! Three years has passed. I will graduate from junior high school. 8.I still remember what happened between my best friend Lin Tao and me. 9. This is a photo that is very special to me.
第二段 具体介绍 （包括人物的性格、事迹等） 1.He is a helpful boy who often helps people around him. 2.He is very popular in our school because he is polite to everyone. 3. As for my dream, I want to be a teacher, I’ll make friends with my kids. 4.Like many other boys, I enjoy doing sports, but maths and science are my favorite. 5.My favorite memory of my dad is that he always wants to keep me from making mistakes but he tries to let me find my own way, even though his heart breaks in silence when I get hurt. 6. Though she is busy, she studies hard and gets good grades. 7. I imagine that she/he is not only young but also beautiful/handsome. 8. Although I wasn’t willing to do it, I still lent it to him because he was my best friend. 9. The next morning, I found a piece of paper. It said, “Never give up, dear.I am proud of you!”
第三段 总结全文 （对所介绍的人物进行整体评价） 1. I would be very thankful if you could give me the chance. 2. I am sure that I can be a good volunteer at the International Dragon Competition. 3. After reading so many books, I get a lot of knowledge and also feel relaxed. 4.As a student, I think I should always try my best to study. 5. This is my best dad. I love him and I’m so proud of him. 6. I had great fun in my last summer vacation. 7. Although I am not the best now, I will make every effort to become a top student and I believe you will be proud of me. 8. She is great. Let’s wish her a better future. 9. I am looking forward to seeing her/him! 10. Because I thought nothing was important than friendship.What’s more, I became very happy after I forgave him. 11.How lucky I am to be his daughter!
角度一：介绍外貌特征
★He has straight brown hair and he doesn’t wear glasses.本句用 and 连接两个简单句，用简洁的语句描述了人物的外貌特点
★He used to be thin，but look how big and strong he is now！本句用 how 引导的感叹句引出人物外貌的变化
★My mother is of medium build with nice long hair.本句使用 with 伴随状语描述人物外貌特征
★My good friend Marry is a lovely girl who has beautiful big eyes.本句使用 who 引导的定语从句突出人物外貌特征
角度二介绍性格特点
★I’m shy so it’s not easy for me to make friends.本句使用“It’s +adj.+for sb. to do sth.”句型表示“做某事对某人来说怎么样”
★Jenny is an outgoing girl who is always full of energy.本句使用了who引导的定语从句
★Our English teacher is so humorous that he often makes us laugh when we are under stress.本句使用了so...that...引导结果状语从句
角度三介绍兴趣爱好
★She is interested in science and technology and loves to imagine what the world will be like in 50 years. 本句使用“be interested in”替换了常用的“like”，使表达更加新颖、高级
★I like watching the news because I hope to find out what’s going on around the world. 本句使用 because 引导的原因状语从句引出喜欢看新闻的原因
★My best friend Bob is crazy about playing football.He is now a member of our school football team.本使用“be crazy about”表达对事物的热爱程度，第二个简单句是第一句的具体表现和结果
角度四介绍个人优势或特殊之处
★My sister has the ability to play the violin well.本句中“have the ability to”为“be able to”的变式，使表达更丰富
★Without doubt，he is a successful man，but I treat him as my guiding star not because of his success in business，but his love for people around the world.本句使用短语“without doubt”“ treat...as...”“ because of”以及句型“not...but...”给句子增添了亮点
★Li Hua is the most excellent student in our school since he not only gets good grades，but also is a helpful person.本句使用“not only...but also...”句型，替换了普通的“and”并列句，使表达更加新颖高级
角度五被他人喜爱或喜爱他人的原因
★He always thinks carefully when he works and he plans everything well.本句使用 when 引导的时间状语从句，使句式更加多样
★My first teacher was Mrs Lane. She was strict but very nice.本句使用“adj. +but+adj.”结构，突出被描述者最显著的品质
★Lucy is welcomed by others as she is always ready to help others.本句使用短语“be welcomed by”和“be ready to”以及 as 引导的原因状语从句
★I like him because he is really cool and fun, and he is good at soccer.本句使用 because 引导的原因状语从句及“be good at”固定搭配，说明“我”喜欢他的具体原因
速记俗语谚语
★Friends are like books——you don’t need a lot of them as long as they’re good. 良友如书，贵在好而不在多。★A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart. 真正的朋友是一个可以给你帮助并感动你的人。★A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真情。
★A true friend shares not only your joy and happiness but also your trouble and worry. 真正的朋友不仅能分享你的欢乐与幸福，而且也会分担你的困难与忧愁。
★If you have got a true friendship，you should treasure it forever！如果你获得了一份真正的友谊，你应该永远珍惜它！
★Everyone has his price. 天生我材必有用。
(2023·江苏省·期中考试)上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“致敬屠呦呦”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括：1.活动的过程；2.收获与感想。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Students Show Respect for Tu Youyou
【答案】
Students Show Respect for Tu Youyou
Last weekend, I participated in the activity of “Salute Tu Youyou” organized by the student union of our school.On the morning of Saturday, students listened to a lecture introducing the achievements of Tu Youyou. We were impressed by the great contributions Tu Youyou made to the medical field. In the afternoon, the students watched a photo show which showcased how Tu Youyou found Artemisinin, which was effective to treat malaria.From the activity, the students realized that Rome is not built in a day, and we should stick to our dreams until they can be realized.
【解析】
1.词汇积累参加：
participate in→take part in组织：organize→conduct意识到：realize that→be aware that坚持：stick to→insist on
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Last weekend, I participated in the activity of “Salute Tu Youyou” organized by the student union of our school.
拓展句：Last weekend, I participated in the activity of “Salute Tu Youyou” which was organized by the student union of our school.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】In the afternoon, the students watched a photo show which showcased how Tu Youyou found Artemisinin, which was effective to treat malaria. (运用了which引导的限制性定语从句，how引导的宾语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】From the activity, the students realized that Rome is not built in a day, and we should stick to our dreams until they can be realized. (运用了that引导的宾语从句和until引导的时间状语从句)
(2023·江苏省·期末考试)你的英语老师要求同学们以“The Scientist I Admire Most”为题写一篇英文短文，内容包括：1. 人物简介；2. 陈述你的理由。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The Scientist I Admire Most
【答案】
The Scientist I admire most
Of all the scientists, I admire QianXuesen most. When Qian was young, he realized China needed its own powerful air force to defend the country, so he made the decision to major in aviation. He went to America in 1935 to pursue his graduate studies and returned to China in 1955. Under Qian’s leadership, China developed the Dongfeng missiles, followed by the first generation of Long March rockets.Qian devoted himself to the country and helped make China stronger. He is an example to me and his spirit will inspire me to keep moving forward.
【解析】
1.词汇积累强大的：powerful→strong意识到：realize→come to realize追求：pursue→go after致力于：devote oneself to→contribute oneself to
2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Under Qian’s leadership, China developed the Dongfeng missiles, followed by the first generation of Long March rockets.拓展句：Under Qian’s leadership, China developed the Dongfeng missiles, which was followed by the first generation of Long March rockets.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] When Qian was young, he realized China needed its own powerful air force to defend the country, so he made the decision to major in aviation. (运用了when引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] Under Qian’s leadership, China developed the Dongfeng missiles, followed by the first generation of Long March rockets. (运用了过去分词作状语)
(2023·北京市市辖区·期中考试)假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你校正在举办主题为The People I Admire的征文活动，请你写一篇征文投稿，内容包括：1.你敬佩的人是谁；2.该人物的主要事迹；3.该人物对你的影响。
注意：词数100左右。The People I Admire
【答案】
The People I Admire
One of the people I admire is Zhong Nanshan, who has become a household name for his great contributions to defeating virus. He is a leading figure in the battles against SARS in 2003 and COVID in 2019, winning him the worldwide respect. ①Every time I see the pictures, in which he is fighting to save people’s lives, I cannot help being moved by him. What impresses me most is that aged 84, he rushed to the front line of the epidemic area without hesitation at the beginning of the outbreak of COVID 19. ②Dangerous though it was, Zhong Nanshan and his workmates worked hard day and night to treat the patients infected with COVID 19. With their efforts, remarkable results were achieved and the COVID 19 was finally under control. Influenced by him, I have made up my mind to be a doctor in the future.
【解析】
【思路点拨】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一篇征文投稿，主题是The People I Admire，介绍一位对自己产生影响的人物。
【亮点词汇】
①影响：influence → impact/affect②人物：figure → person③显著的：remarkable → outstanding④决定：make up one’s mind to do→ be determined to do
【高分句型】
①Every time I see the pictures, in which he is fighting to save people’s lives, I cannot help being moved by him. (运用了every time引导的时间状语从句、介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句)
②Dangerous though it was, Zhong Nanshan and his workmates worked hard day and night to treat the patients infected with COVID -19. (运用了让步状语从句的倒装，过去分词短语作后置定语)
(2023·山东省临沂市·单元测试)假定你是李华，你校英文报将征集抗疫英雄事迹的稿件，请你写一篇关于武汉市金银潭医院院长—张定宇的短文，内容包括：(1)患有渐冻症；疫情期间，日夜坚守，果断决策；(2)2020年9月8日，被授予"人民英雄"国家荣誉称号；(3)体现了意志坚强，勇担重任的精神。注意：(1)写作词数应为80左右；(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。参考词汇：ALS渐冻症；COVID-19 pandemic新冠疫情；the national honorary title 国家荣誉称号
A Hero
Zhang Dingyu is president of the Jinyintan Hospital in Wuhan.
【答案】
A Hero
Zhang Dingyu is president of the Jinyintan Hospital in Wuhan. ①He suffers from ALS, but when COVID-19 pandemic broke out, Zhang Dingyu did not tell anyone about his illness. Regardless of his health, he stuck to his post day and night, made decisive decisions and handled the emergency properly, saving one life after another. Owing to his great contributions during the pandemic, Zhang Dingyu was awarded the nation honorary title of "People’s Hero" on September 8, 2020. ②His story shows the spirit of a man who shoulders heavy responsibilities with a strong mind and courage.
【解析】
【思路点拨】
本文是一篇命题作文，话题为介绍张定宇。人称主要为第三人称，时态主要以一般过去时为主，一般现在时为辅。写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节，以充实文章内容。
【亮点词汇】
①regardless of不管，不顾②stick to one’s post坚守岗位③owing to由于
【高分句型】
①He suffers from ALS, but when COVID-19 pandemic broke out, Zhang Dingyu did not tell anyone about his illness.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②His story shows the spirit of a man who shoulders heavy responsibilities with a strong mind and courage.（who引导的限制性定语从句）
【结构布局】引言：简要介绍人物中心：描述人物事迹结尾：总结人物精神
【拓展词汇】①be faced with...面对……②devote oneself to doing sth.致力于做某事
【拓展句型】
①What he did to his beloved country and people is really worth respecting by all of us Chinese.他对他深爱的国家和人民所做的一切真的值得我们所有中国人尊重。
②As an experienced doctor, he, together with other doctors, worked day and night to work out the available way to treat the disease.作为一名有经验的医生，他和其他医生夜以继日地工作，研究出治疗这种疾病的可行方法。Unit 2 The Universal Language 单元写作深度指导（译林版2020）
Introducing your favourite singer or band（记叙文）
单元话题 真题展示 考情预测
记叙文 2023年全国高考英语甲卷 “人物介绍”是高中英语新课标主题语境内容要求之一，也是高考英语常考话题之一。它包括个人情况简介和名人事迹介绍两个方面,这类文章通常以人物传记和逸闻趣事为主，目的是培养学生高尚的道德情操和帮助学生树立正确的人生观和价值观。
Write an introduction： Choose the person you are going to write about. It should be your favourite singer or band. It can include the background of the person or the group and the reason why you like them. 你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1. 人物简介及事迹；2. 意义或启示。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
段落 内容 句子设计
第一段 引入话题 （介绍人物的基本情况，如外貌、年龄等） 1.Today I am glad to introduce a teenager. His name is Cheng Xin. 2. I’m Li Hua and I’m very happy to stand here to talk about myself. 3.There is always something unforgettable in my life, especially the story between my friend and me. 4. My friend Daniel encourages me a lot in many ways.Now let me tell you something about him. 5. I visited Hong Kong last summer holiday. It’s a beautiful city and I had a wonderful time there. 6. Liang Ling, a 15-year-old girl, is a student in Class 1, Grade 9. 7.How time flies! Three years has passed. I will graduate from junior high school. 8.I still remember what happened between my best friend Lin Tao and me. 9. This is a photo that is very special to me.
第二段 具体介绍 （包括人物的性格、事迹等） 1.He is a helpful boy who often helps people around him. 2.He is very popular in our school because he is polite to everyone. 3. As for my dream, I want to be a teacher, I’ll make friends with my kids. 4.Like many other boys, I enjoy doing sports, but maths and science are my favorite. 5.My favorite memory of my dad is that he always wants to keep me from making mistakes but he tries to let me find my own way, even though his heart breaks in silence when I get hurt. 6. Though she is busy, she studies hard and gets good grades. 7. I imagine that she/he is not only young but also beautiful/handsome. 8. Although I wasn’t willing to do it, I still lent it to him because he was my best friend. 9. The next morning, I found a piece of paper. It said, “Never give up, dear.I am proud of you!”
第三段 总结全文 （对所介绍的人物进行整体评价） 1. I would be very thankful if you could give me the chance. 2. I am sure that I can be a good volunteer at the International Dragon Competition. 3. After reading so many books, I get a lot of knowledge and also feel relaxed. 4.As a student, I think I should always try my best to study. 5. This is my best dad. I love him and I’m so proud of him. 6. I had great fun in my last summer vacation. 7. Although I am not the best now, I will make every effort to become a top student and I believe you will be proud of me. 8. She is great. Let’s wish her a better future. 9. I am looking forward to seeing her/him! 10. Because I thought nothing was important than friendship.What’s more, I became very happy after I forgave him. 11.How lucky I am to be his daughter!
角度一：介绍外貌特征
★He has straight brown hair and he doesn’t wear glasses.本句用and连接两个简单句，用简洁的语句描述了人物的外貌特点
★He used to be thin，but look how big and strong he is now！本句用 how 引导的感叹句引出人物外貌的变化
★My mother is of medium build with nice long hair.本句使用 with 伴随状语描述人物外貌特征
★My good friend Marry is a lovely girl who has beautiful big eyes.本句使用 who 引导的定语从句突出人物外貌特征
角度二介绍性格特点
★I’m shy so it’s not easy for me to make friends.本句使用“It’s +adj.+for sb. to do sth.”句型表示“做某事对某人来说怎么样”
★Jenny is an outgoing girl who is always full of energy.本句使用了 who 引导的定语从句
★Our English teacher is so humorous that he often makes us laugh when we are under stress.本句使用了so...that...引导结果状语从句
角度三介绍兴趣爱好
★She is interested in science and technology and loves to imagine what the world will be like in 50 years. 本句使用“be interested in”替换了常用的“like”，使表达更加新颖、高级
★I like watching the news because I hope to find out what’s going on around the world. 本句使用 because 引导的原因状语从句引出喜欢看新闻的原因
★My best friend Bob is crazy about playing football.He is now a member of our school football team.本使用“be crazy about”表达对事物的热爱程度，第二个简单句是第一句的具体表现和结果
角度四介绍个人优势或特殊之处
★My sister has the ability to play the violin well.本句中“have the ability to”为“be able to”的变式，使表达更丰富
★Without doubt，he is a successful man，but I treat him as my guiding star not because of his success in business，but his love for people around the world.本句使用短语“without doubt”“ treat...as...”“ because of”以及句型“not...but...”给句子增添了亮点
★Li Hua is the most excellent student in our school since he not only gets good grades，but also is a helpful person.本句使用“not only...but also...”句型，替换了普通的“and”并列句，使表达更加新颖高级
角度五被他人喜爱或喜爱他人的原因
★He always thinks carefully when he works and he plans everything well. 本句使用 when 引导的时间状语从句，使句式更加多样
★My first teacher was Mrs Lane. She was strict but very nice. 本句使用“adj. +but+adj.”结构，突出被描述者最显著的品质
★Lucy is welcomed by others as she is always ready to help others. 本句使用短语“be welcomed by”和“be ready to”以及 as 引导的原因状语从句
★I like him because he is really cool and fun, and he is good at soccer. 本句使用because引导的原因状语从句及“be good at”固定搭配，说明“我”喜欢他的具体原因
速记俗语谚语
★Friends are like books——you don’t need a lot of them as long as they’re good. 良友如书，贵在好而不在多。★A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart. 真正的朋友是一个可以给你帮助并感动你的人。★A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真情。
★A true friend shares not only your joy and happiness but also your trouble and worry. 真正的朋友不仅能分享你的欢乐与幸福，而且也会分担你的困难与忧愁。
★If you have got a true friendship，you should treasure it forever！如果你获得了一份真正的友谊，你应该永远珍惜它！
★Everyone has his price. 天生我材必有用。
(2023·江苏省·期中考试)上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“致敬屠呦呦”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括：1.活动的过程；2.收获与感想。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Students Show Respect for Tu Youyou
(2023·江苏省·期末考试)你的英语老师要求同学们以“The Scientist I Admire Most”为题写一篇英文短文，内容包括：1. 人物简介；2. 陈述你的理由。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The Scientist I Admire Most
(2023·北京市市辖区·期中考试)假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你校正在举办主题为The People I Admire的征文活动，请你写一篇征文投稿，内容包括：1.你敬佩的人是谁；2.该人物的主要事迹；3.该人物对你的影响。
注意：词数100左右。The People I Admire
(2023·山东省临沂市·单元测试)假定你是李华，你校英文报将征集抗疫英雄事迹的稿件，请你写一篇关于武汉市金银潭医院院长—张定宇的短文，内容包括：(1)患有渐冻症；疫情期间，日夜坚守，果断决策；(2)2020年9月8日，被授予"人民英雄"国家荣誉称号；(3)体现了意志坚强，勇担重任的精神。注意：(1)写作词数应为80左右；(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。参考词汇：ALS渐冻症；COVID-19 pandemic新冠疫情；the national honorary title 国家荣誉称号
A Hero
Zhang Dingyu is president of the Jinyintan Hospital in Wuhan.Unit 3 The art of painting 单元写作深度指导（译林版2020）
Giving instructions for making an unusual picture（建议信）
单元话题 真题展示 考情预测
记叙文 2023年全国新高考I&II卷 建议信应用非常广泛，也是英语高考作文常考的体裁。 话题一般要求给对方的各种烦恼以建议，如压力、失败、人际关系紧张等。或给项目策划如栏目优化等提出内容建议。亦或给对方的计划或兴趣提出方法建议，等等。
A suggestion letter is an applied form of writing in which one gives advice or advice about something to an organization or an individual. Make a proposal first, then give a good reason to persuade the other person to accept your proposal, the reason should be reasonable, use appropriate words, be polite and persuasive. 假定你是李华，你校外教Ryan要举办口语培训班，将练习口语的所有学生随机挑选两个人分成一组练习，你对此有意见，向外教写一封邮件，内容如下：1. 说明问题，2. 提出建议。 注意：1. 词数80左右 2. 开头和结尾已经给出。不计入总词数。
段落 内容 句子设计
第一段 说明写信的目的套语 1. I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。 2. I have received your letter saying you plan to play a visit to China for ten days next month.Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.我已经收到了你的来信。信上说你打算下个月来参观中国十天。可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。 3. I’m writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to attract more clients（顾客）.我给你写信是想说明一下我对于进一步改善我们旅馆的一些想法，以吸引更多顾客。 4.You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to learn Chinese, and I will try to make some suggestions here.你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议，那么我就在这里给出一些建议。 5. I’m very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in the new school life. Here are a few suggestions.很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。下面是我的一些建议。 6. I’m very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I’m writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school.很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在，关于如何在高中学好英语，我写信给你一些建议。
第二段 介绍详情、说明原因套语 (1) 它将于下午两点钟开始，四点钟结束，在此期间将会有十五位准备充分的参赛者发表演讲。It will begin at 2:00 p.m. and last two hours, during which time 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver their speeches. (2) 我们将会在上午八点出发，九点到达那里。We will start at 8:00 am and arrive there at 9:00. (3) 下午，我们会一起……During the afternoon, we’ll together. (4) 记得带上水和午餐。Remember to take water and lunch with you. (5) 顺便说一下，你可以乘坐322路公交车，它会直接把你带到俱乐部。By the way, you may take Bus No. 322 and it will take you directly to the club. (6) 我知道你的母语是英语，还是一名英语老师。我代表我们学校真诚地邀请你来比赛现场。I know you are a native speaker of English and an English teacher, and I, on behalf of our school, sincerely invite you to be part of the contest. (7) 既然你如此渴望提高英语，这会是一个很好的机会。Since you are so eager to improve your English, it will prove to be a great chance. (8) 我保证你在那里会过得很愉快。I’m sure that you will enjoy yourself there.
第三段 提出建议套语 我建议…… 1．I’d like to suggest that… 2．May I suggest that… 3．In my opinion… 4．I would like to make a recommendation that… 5．I am writing to advise… 6．If I were you, I would…
第四段 希望采纳建议，并表示谢意，盼望回复套语 1. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: where there is a will, there is a way(有志者事竟成). 我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：有志者事竟成。 2. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember:The man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impossible”(一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”).我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”。 3. Best wishes!（给你）最美好的祝愿！ 4.I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see improvement.无论如何，我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。 5.I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account. Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your studies/work! 我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么，祝你学习/工作好运。 6. I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know. 我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我可以帮忙的，请告诉我。
一、必备话题词汇及表达
1. 想要做某事: would like to do sth.
2. 主动做某事: offer to do sth.
3. 值得做某事: be worth doing sth.
4. 建议做某事: be suggested to do sth.
5. 某事是个好选择: Sth. is a better choice
6. 某事将有用: Sth. will be helpful.
7. 做某事是个好主意: It would be a good idea to do sth.
8. 给某人提建议: give someone advice (on...)
9. 做某事有困难: have difficulty doing sth.
10. 如下: as follows
11. 利用: make use of
12. 认为......有用: find ... helpful / useful / beneficial
13. 把......考虑在内: take ... into account/ consideration
14. 得到改善: get improved
15. 依我看来: In my opinion/ As far as I’m concerned
16. 我建议: I suggest that... / My suggestion is that ...
17. 如果我是你，我会: If I were you, I would ...
18. 你最好/ 最好不: You had better (not) ...
二、必备话题句型及表达
1. 已收到你寻求......建议的来信。以下是我个人的建议，我希望它们对你有帮助。I have received your letter asking me some advice / suggestions ...The following are my personal suggestions, which I hope can be of great help to you.
2. 听到你在......上有困难很难过。但你如果采纳以下建议，情况很容易改善。I am sorry to hear that you have difficulty doing sth. However, the situation is easy to change if you take the following advice.
3. 对某人而言做......是重要的/必要的/有益的It’ s + 形容词/名词 （important / necessary / helpful） for sb to do sth.
4. 做某事是重要的/有益的/好主意。Doing sth. is +形容词/ 名词（important / necessary / helpful / a good idea / of great importance / of great help）
5. 在你亲自来之前读一些关于这些地方的书是必要的。Reading some books about these places before you come to see them with your own eyes is necessary for you.
6. 我建议你应该做...I suggest / recommend that you should ...
7. 我建议你就他的行为和你朋友I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behavior.
8. 在我看来，你最好停止玩电脑游戏，更多地专注于学校和家庭生活。From my point of view/ As far as I am concerned/ Personally speaking/ In my opinion，you had better quit playing computer game and concentrate more on school and family life.
9. 在我看来，我认为你应该和同学积极沟通。From my point of view，I think you’ re supposed to communicate with your classmate.
(2023北京高考)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：(1)活动形式；(2)活动内容。
注意：(1)词数100左右；(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jim,
Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions.I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding of “Green Beijing” through getting involved in different activities by themselves. You can showcase garbage classification on site, plant trees and publicize sharing economy, which will all fit into the theme of “Green Beijing”.Hopefully, you will get some inspiration from my suggestions. Wish you success.
Yours,
Li Hua
一、命题意图:要求考生根据邮件内容写一封建议信：向Jim提供关于以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动的建议，包括活动形式和活动内容。
二、理解“绿色北京”的内涵“绿色北京”是指建设环境友好、生态健康的北京城市，以促进可持续发展和保护生态环境为目标。绿色北京的概念涵盖了以下几个方面：“Green Beijing” refers to the construction of an environmentally friendly and ecologically healthy city in Beijing, with the goal of promoting sustainable development and protecting the ecological environment. The concept of Green Beijing encompasses the following aspects:
1、环境保护：绿色北京强调保护自然资源和生态环境，减少污染物排放和资源浪费，提高空气质量、水质、土地利用和垃圾处理等环境指标。Environmental protection: Green Beijing emphasizes the protection of natural resources and the environment, reducing pollutant emissions and resource wastage, and improving environmental indicators such as air quality, water quality, land use, and waste disposal.
2、生态建设：绿色北京注重保护和恢复生态系统，增加绿地面积，改善城市生态环境，提供良好的生态服务功能，如净化空气、调节气温、保水保育等。Ecological construction: Green Beijing focuses on the protection and restoration of ecosystems, increasing green space, improving the urban ecological environment, and providing good ecological services such as air purification, temperature regulation, and water conservation.
3、可持续发展：绿色北京倡导经济、社会和环境的协调发展，追求经济发展与资源利用的可持续性，推动绿色产业和低碳生活方式的发展。Sustainable development: Green Beijing advocates for the coordinated development of the economy, society, and environment, pursues the sustainability of economic development and resource utilization, and promotes the development of green industries and a low-carbon lifestyle.
4、环保意识：绿色北京鼓励公众养成环保意识和行为习惯，包括节约资源、垃圾分类、绿色出行、环保消费等，推动全社会参与环保行动。Environmental awareness: Green Beijing encourages the public to develop environmental awareness and habits, including resource conservation, waste sorting, green transportation, and eco-friendly consumption, to promote the participation of the whole society in environmental actions.
通过绿色北京的建设，可以提高居民的生活质量，减少对自然资源的消耗和环境的破坏，实现经济社会的可持续发展，为后代留下一个更美好的环境。Through the construction of Green Beijing, the quality of life of residents can be improved, the consumption of natural resources and environmental damage can be reduced, and sustainable development of the economy and society can be achieved, leaving a better environment for future generations.
写作思路：
1、首先，我们需要考虑活动形式。可以建议组织一次绿色环保主题的社区清洁活动，邀请志愿者一起清理公园、街道或者河流等公共场所。可以提供相关的清洁工具和垃圾袋，让参与者亲身体验环保的重要性。
2、其次，关于活动内容，可以提议进行一次绿色生活讲座或者展览，邀请专家学者或者环保组织代表来分享绿色生活的理念和实践。可以涵盖节能减排、垃圾分类、植树造林等方面的内容，让参与者了解和学习如何在日常生活中实践绿色环保。
3、此外，还可以建议组织一次绿色旅游活动，带领参与者去参观北京的自然景点或者生态农场，让他们亲身感受大自然的美丽与脆弱，增强环保意识。
以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动可以采取以下形式和对应的内容：Activities for a club with the theme “Green Beijing” can take the following forms:
1、植树活动：组织学生一起参与植树行动，可以选择在学校附近的绿化带或者公园进行植树，以增加绿色植被覆盖面积。Tree planting: Organize students to participate in tree planting activities. Choose areas near the school or parks to increase green vegetation coverage.
2、清洁行动：组织学生一起进行垃圾清理活动，可以选择在学校周边的公共区域或者街道上进行垃圾清理，以保持环境的整洁和美观。Clean-up actions: Organize students to clean up garbage. Choose public areas near the school or streets to maintain a clean and beautiful environment.
3、环保讲座：邀请环保专家或者学者进行讲座，介绍环保知识和绿色生活方式，激发学生的环保意识和行动。Environmental lectures: Invite environmental experts or scholars to give lectures on environmental knowledge and green lifestyles to inspire students’ environmental awareness and actions.
4、创意手工制作：组织学生使用废旧材料进行手工制作，例如利用废纸制作纸袋，利用废物制作艺术品等，既可以减少废弃物的产生，又可以培养学生的创造力和环保意识。Creative crafts: Organize students to use recycled materials for handicrafts, such as making paper bags from waste paper or creating artwork from waste. This not only reduces waste generation but also fosters creativity and environmental consciousness.
5、环保影视欣赏：举办环保主题的电影或纪录片放映活动，通过观影引发学生对环境问题的思考和关注。Environmental film screenings: Organize screenings of environmental-themed movies or documentaries to stimulate students’ thinking and concern about environmental issues.
6、环保义卖活动：组织学生筹备义卖活动，将所筹集的资金用于支持环保项目或者捐赠给环保组织，同时也可以售卖一些环保产品或手工制品。Eco-friendly fundraising: Organize students to prepare fundraising activities, using the funds raised to support environmental projects or donate to environmental organizations. Additionally, eco-friendly products or handicrafts can be sold.
7、环保宣传活动：组织绿色北京的宣传活动，如海报展览、宣传册发放等，向大众宣传绿色环保理念，提高环保意识。Environmental awareness campaigns: Organize promotional activities for “Green Beijing” such as poster exhibitions and distribution of brochures to raise public awareness of environmental protection.
8、环境保护行动：组织环境保护的实际行动，如清洁活动、垃圾分类活动等，通过实际行动改善环境质量。Environmental protection actions: Organize practical actions for environmental protection, such as clean-up activities and waste segregation, to improve the quality of the environment through tangible efforts.
9、绿色科普活动：组织绿色科普活动，如参观绿色科技企业、举办绿色科技展览等，向社团成员介绍绿色科技的应用和发展。Green science outreach activities: Organize visits to green technology companies and hold exhibitions on green technologies, introducing the application and development of green technologies to community members.
10、绿色创意竞赛：组织绿色创意竞赛，鼓励社团成员提出创意的环保方案，通过比赛评选出最佳创意，推动绿色创新。Green creative competitions: Organize green creative competitions to encourage community members to propose innovative environmental solutions. Select the best ideas through the competition to promote green innovation.
11、绿色旅行活动：组织绿色旅行活动，选择环保友好的旅游目的地，鼓励社团成员以绿色的方式进行旅行，提倡低碳出行。Green travel activities: Organize green travel activities, selecting eco-friendly tourist destinations and encouraging community members to travel in a sustainable manner, advocating for low-carbon travel.以上是一些可能的绿色北京为主题的社团活动内容，具体内容可以根据社团成员的兴趣和实际情况进行调整和组织。These are some possible contents for community activities with the theme of “Green Beijing.” The specific content can be adjusted and organized based on the interests and actual situations of community members.
（2024·广东深圳·三模）假定你是李华，你校交换生Mike准备参加“厉害了，中国”(Amazing China) 短视频大赛，特发邮件向你征询视频创意。请给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1．提出建议； 2．阐明理由。
注意：
1．写作词数应为 80 左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Dear Mike,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mike,
Learning you’re going to sign up for the short video competition on the theme of Amazing China, I’m writing to share my ideas with you.
If I were you, I would not hesitate to shoot a short video about China’s smart agriculture. Nowadays, you can see modern farmers using cutting-edge technologies and devices for agricultural production, monitoring and management. Thanks to this, the efficiency is greatly improved and the country’s grain security is guaranteed. Therefore, I’m convinced that showing the enormous changes in Chinese agriculture will hold much appeal for the viewers.
May your entry stand out in the competition!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给准备参加“厉害了，中国”(Amazing China) 短视频大赛的交换生Mike回一封邮件，就视频创意提出建议并阐明理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
想法：idea →opinion
安全：security →safety
因此：therefore →thus
确信：convinced →sure
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Learning you’re going to sign up for the short video competition on the theme of Amazing China, I’m writing to share my ideas with you.
拓展句：Because I learn you’re going to sign up for the short video competition on the theme of Amazing China, I’m writing to share my ideas with you.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】If I were you, I would not hesitate to shoot a short video about China’s smart agriculture.（运用了虚拟语气）
【高分句型2】Therefore, I’m convinced that showing the enormous changes in Chinese agriculture will hold much appeal for the viewers.（运用了that引导的宾语从句和动名词短语作主语）
（2024·安徽黄山·二模）假定你是李华，你校外教Christine正在筹办校英语书法大赛，要求学生线上提交作品，你认为该形式存在问题。请你给她写封邮件，内容包括：
（1）说明问题；
（2）提出建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Christine,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Christine,
I am writing to express my concern about the upcoming English handwriting competition.
As scheduled, our submissions are required to be handed in online. This, however, is very likely to cause problems such as cheating, which may reduce the effectiveness of the competition.
I consider it a better alternative for all participants to complete and submit their works at a given time and in a specific location, such as our library, in order to ensure fairness and transparency.
I’d appreciate it if you can take my suggestion into account.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Christine写封邮件，说明正在筹办校英语书法大赛，要求学生线上提交作品存在的问题。
【详解】1.词汇积累
要求：require→ request
可能：likely→ probably
减少：reduce→ decrease
考虑：take … into account→ take … into consideration
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I consider it a better alternative for all participants to complete and submit their works at a given time and in a specific location, such as our library, in order to ensure fairness and transparency.
拓展句：I consider it a better alternative that all participants should complete and submit their works at a given time and in a specific location, such as our library, in order to ensure fairness and transparency.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】 I consider it a better alternative for all participants to complete and submit their works at a given time and in a specific location, such as our library, in order to ensure fairness and transparency.（不定式作宾语）
【高分句型2】This, however, is very likely to cause problems such as cheating, which may reduce the effectiveness of the competition.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
（2024·江苏南京·二模）假定你是李华，英语教材出版社正面向学生征求使用意见。请给你所用教材的主编Professor Nunan写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.使用教材的收获；
2.改进教材的建议。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Professor Nunan,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best regards,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Professor Nunan,
Learning that you are gathering feedback on our English textbooks, I’m glad to share my thoughts.
I find the textbooks incredibly beneficial. The well-selected materials, filled with intriguing stories and fresh opinions, have aroused my interest in language learning and opened up a new world for me. My language skills have also been significantly enhanced with the help of the Workbook.
However, it would be better to include more interactive activities, such as role-plays or debates, to add more fun to our learning experience.
Thank you for considering my feedback.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。英语教材出版社正面向学生征求使用意见，要求考生按照要求给考生所用教材的主编Professor Nunan写一封电子邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
搜集：gather→ collect
高兴的：glad→ pleased
想法：thought→ idea
难以置信地：incredibly→ fabulously
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：My language skills have also been significantly enhanced with the help of the Workbook.
拓展句：It is with the help of the Workbook that my language skills have also been significantly enhanced.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Learning that you are gathering feedback on our English textbooks, I’m glad to share my thoughts.（运用了现在分词Learning作状语、that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】However, it would be better to include more interactive activities, such as role-plays or debates, to add more fun to our learning experience.（运用了it作形式主语、不定式作真正的主语）
（2024·安徽芜湖·模拟预测）假如你是一名高中生，名叫李华，你的美国同龄朋友Charles一家对中国文化很感兴趣，也与你家结成了友好家庭。最近，他们要搬入一个新房子，Charles也有了自己的房间。应他的请求，请你给他写一封信，给他一些关于房间设计的建议。
要点：1. 你的建议；2. 你的祝福。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按照如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Charles,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best regards,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Charles,
How delighted I am to hear about your new removal! Given your enthusiasm for Chinese culture, I suggest the design and decoration of your room embracing Chinese style with elegance.
From my perspective, not only can you hang a Chinese painting or calligraphy to add a cultural atmosphere, but also you may furnish the room with wooden pieces, their simplicity and dignity relieving the pressure of daily life. Additionally, use colors of red, gold and black, associated with Chinese culture, their richness enhancing the warmth of your space. There is no denying that a porcelain vase can add a unique and cultural touch to your space.
Were it possible, you could combine these elements to create a room reflecting your personal taste. I am sure your creation will be a masterpiece, a perfect blend of China and the foreign countries.
Eager to see the fruit of your endeavor!
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国同龄朋友Charles写一封信，给他一些关于房间设计的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：delighted→joyful
热情：enthusiasm→passion
优雅：elegance→grace
此外：additionally→what’s more
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：How delighted I am to hear about your new removal!
拓展句：How delighted I am when I hear about your new removal!
【点睛】
【高分句型1】From my perspective, not only can you hang a Chinese painting or calligraphy to add a cultural atmosphere, but also you may furnish the room with wooden pieces, their simplicity and dignity relieving the pressure of daily life. (运用了not only位于句首的倒装句式和独立主格结构)
【高分句型2】There is no denying that a porcelain vase can add a unique and cultural touch to your space. (运用了that引导的同位语从句)
（2024·山东·三模）假定你是李华。你校即将开设英语角，校英文报现面向全体学生征集建议。请你写一封信，内容包括：
1. 提供建议(如时间、地点、主题等)；
2. 表达期待。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Editor,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Editor,
Learning that an English corner will be open in our school, I’m writing to give some advice.
First of all, the English corner can be arranged every Friday in our language lab so that we will be offered a chance to practice our oral English using multimedia devices. What’s more, the theme of the English corner should be about improving our language competence, in particular, spoken English, various topics included.
I hope my advice is worth taking and the first session will arrive on time!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就学校即将要开设英语角这一事写一封建议信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：advice→suggestion
机会：chance→opportunity
提高，加强：improve→strengthen
各种的：various→ a variety of
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：What’s more, the theme of the English corner should be about improving our language competence, in particular, spoken English, various topics included.
拓展句：What’s more, the English corner should include various topics, the theme of which is about improving our language competence, in particular, spoken English.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】First of all, the English corner can be arranged every Friday in our language lab so that we will be offered a chance to practice our oral English using multimedia devices.（运用了so that引导的状语从句和现在分词作状语）
【高分句型2】What’s more, the theme of the English corner should be about improving our language competence, in particular, spoken English, various topics included.（运用了独立主格结构）Unit 3 The art of painting 单元写作深度指导（译林版2020）
Giving instructions for making an unusual picture（建议信）
单元话题 真题展示 考情预测
记叙文 2023年全国新高考I&II卷 建议信应用非常广泛，也是英语高考作文常考的体裁。 话题一般要求给对方的各种烦恼以建议，如压力、失败、人际关系紧张等。或给项目策划如栏目优化等提出内容建议。亦或给对方的计划或兴趣提出方法建议，等等。
A suggestion letter is an applied form of writing in which one gives advice or advice about something to an organization or an individual. Make a proposal first, then give a good reason to persuade the other person to accept your proposal, the reason should be reasonable, use appropriate words, be polite and persuasive. 假定你是李华，你校外教Ryan要举办口语培训班，将练习口语的所有学生随机挑选两个人分成一组练习，你对此有意见，向外教写一封邮件，内容如下： 1. 说明问题， 2. 提出建议。 注意： 1. 词数80左右 2. 开头和结尾已经给出。不计入总词数。
段落 内容 句子设计
第一段 说明写信的目的套语 1. I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。 2. I have received your letter saying you plan to play a visit to China for ten days next month.Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.我已经收到了你的来信。信上说你打算下个月来参观中国十天。可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。 3. I’m writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to attract more clients（顾客）.我给你写信是想说明一下我对于进一步改善我们旅馆的一些想法，以吸引更多顾客。 4.You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to learn Chinese , and I will try to make some suggestions here.你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议，那么我就在这里给出一些建议。 5. I’m very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in the new school life. Here are a few suggestions.很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。下面是我的一些建议。 6. I’m very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I’m writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school.很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在，关于如何在高中学好英语，我写信给你一些建议。
第二段 介绍详情、说明原因套语 (1) 它将于下午两点钟开始，四点钟结束，在此期间将会有十五位准备充分的参赛者发表演讲。It will begin at 2:00 pm and last two hours, during which time 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver their speeches. (2) 我们将会在上午八点出发，九点到达那里。We will start at 8:00 am and arrive there at 9:00. (3) 下午，我们会一起……During the afternoon, we’ll together. (4) 记得带上水和午餐。Remember to take water and lunch with you. (5) 顺便说一下，你可以乘坐322路公交车，它会直接把你带到俱乐部。By the way, you may take Bus No. 322 and it will take you directly to the club. (6) 我知道你的母语是英语，还是一名英语老师。我代表我们学校真诚地邀请你来比赛现场。I know you are a native speaker of English and an English teacher, and I, on behalf of our school, sincerely invite you to be part of the contest. (7) 既然你如此渴望提高英语，这会是一个很好的机会。Since you are so eager to improve your English, it will prove to be a great chance. (8) 我保证你在那里会过得很愉快。I’m sure that you will enjoy yourself there.
第三段 提出建议套语 我建议…… 1．I’d like to suggest that… 2．May I suggest that… 3．In my opinion… 4．I would like to make a recommendation that… 5．I am writing to advise… 6．If I were you, I would…
第四段 希望采纳建议，并表示谢意，盼望回复套语 1. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: where there is a will, there is a way(有志者事竟成).我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：有志者事竟成。 2. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember:The man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impossible”(一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”).我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”。 3. Best wishes!（给你）最美好的祝愿！ 4.I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see improvement.无论如何，我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。 5.I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account. Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your studies/work！我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么，祝你学习/工作好运。 6. I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know.我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我可以帮忙的，请告诉我。
一、必备话题词汇及表达
1. 想要做某事: would like to do sth.
2. 主动做某事: offer to do sth.
3. 值得做某事: be worth doing sth.
4. 建议做某事: be suggested to do sth.
5. 某事是个好选择: Sth. is a better choice
6. 某事将有用: Sth will be helpful.
7. 做某事是个好主意: It would be a good idea to do sth.
8. 给某人提建议: give someone advice (on...)
9. 做某事有困难: have difficulty doing sth.
10. 如下: as follows
11. 利用: make use of
12. 认为......有用: find ... helpful / useful / beneficial
13. 把......考虑在内: take ... into account/ consideration
14. 得到改善: get improved
15. 依我看来: In my opinion/ As far as I’m concerned
16. 我建议: I suggest that... / My suggestion is that ...
17. 如果我是你，我会: If I were you, I would ...
18. 你最好/ 最好不: You had better (not) ...
二、必备话题句型及表达
1. 已收到你寻求......建议的来信。以下是我个人的建议，我希望它们对你有帮助。I have received your letter asking me some advice / suggestions ...The following are my personal suggestions, which I hope can be of great help to you.
2. 听到你在......上有困难很难过。但你如果采纳以下建议，情况很容易改善。I am sorry to hear that you have difficulty doing sth. However, the situation is easy to change if you take the following advice.
3. 对某人而言做......是重要的/必要的/有益的It’ s + 形容词 / 名词 （important/ necessary / helpful） for sb to do sth.
4. 做某事是重要的/ 有益的/ 好主意。Doing sth. is +形容词/ 名词（important/ necessary/ helpful/ a good idea / of great importance / of great help）
5. 在你亲自来之前读一些关于这些地方的书是必要的。Reading some books about these places before you come to see them with your own eyes is necessary for you.
6. 我建议你应该做...I suggest / recommend that you should ...
7. 我建议你就他的行为和你朋友I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behavior.
8. 在我看来，你最好停止玩电脑游戏，更多地专注于学校和家庭生活。From my point of view/ As far as I am concerned/ Personally speaking/ In my opinion，you had better quit playing computer game and concentrate more on school and family life.
9. 在我看来，我认为你应该和同学积极沟通。From my point of view，I think you’ re supposed to communicate with your classmate.
(2023北京高考)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：(1)活动形式；(2)活动内容。
注意：(1)词数100左右；(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
（2024·广东深圳·三模）假定你是李华，你校交换生Mike准备参加“厉害了，中国”(Amazing China) 短视频大赛，特发邮件向你征询视频创意。请给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1．提出建议； 2．阐明理由。
注意：
1．写作词数应为 80 左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Dear Mike,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
（2024·安徽黄山·二模）假定你是李华，你校外教Christine正在筹办校英语书法大赛，要求学生线上提交作品，你认为该形式存在问题。请你给她写封邮件，内容包括：
（1）说明问题；
（2）提出建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Christine,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
（2024·江苏南京·二模）假定你是李华，英语教材出版社正面向学生征求使用意见。请给你所用教材的主编Professor Nunan写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.使用教材的收获；
2.改进教材的建议。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Professor Nunan,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best regards,
Li Hua
（2024·安徽芜湖·模拟预测）假如你是一名高中生，名叫李华，你的美国同龄朋友Charles一家对中国文化很感兴趣，也与你家结成了友好家庭。最近，他们要搬入一个新房子，Charles也有了自己的房间。应他的请求，请你给他写一封信，给他一些关于房间设计的建议。
要点：1. 你的建议；2. 你的祝福。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按照如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Charles,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best regards,
Li Hua
（2024·山东·三模）假定你是李华。你校即将开设英语角，校英文报现面向全体学生征集建议。请你写一封信，内容包括：
1. 提供建议(如时间、地点、主题等)；
2. 表达期待。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Editor,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li HuaUnit 4 Exploring poetry 单元写作深度指导（译林版2020）
Interpreting a poem（演讲稿）
单元话题 真题展示 考情预测
演讲稿 2024全国甲卷 演讲稿一般由称呼、正文和结束语组成。开头和结尾有固定格式，开头互动引入话题，正文阐述演讲的具体内容，结尾总结并致谢。
The speech text is prepared in advance by the participants in order to express their opinions, views or report the ideological work at the meeting or important activities. It saves time, focuses and speaks well around the topic, and doesn’t go off topic or make mistakes. 英语课要求做课堂展示, 请你根据所给图片, 以Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。 注意: 1. 词数 100 左右; 2. 题目和首句已为你写好。 Development of Transport in China From the vehicle of horses to today’s convenient transport, Chinese transport has an enormous development.
段落 内容 句子设计
第一段 问候+主题 ● Good morning, everybody/everyone/boys and girls/ladies and gentlemen/fellow students! ● The topic of my speech today is … ● It’s my honour/pleasure to speak here, and I am very glad to share my opinion on … with you. ● I feel really honoured to stand here and make a speech. ● I’m excited to have a chance to make a speech here on … ● It is a good chance/opportunity for us to gather together with/to see/to meet …
第二段 具体内容，措施建议 ● Many people believe/hold the view/think that … ● In my opinion/As far as I’m concerned/Personally speaking, it’s a good idea to … ● To begin with/First of all/First/Firstly… Second/Secondly/Besides/In addition … What’s more/Last but not least … ● What I want to stress is that … For one thing, … For another, … In addition, … In a word, …/On the one hand, … On the other hand, …
第三段 呼吁倡导+感谢聆听 ● I sincerely hope we can do our best to … ● I hope that you will have an enjoyable/a pleasant stay here. ● I wish you lots of fortune for the future. ● I wish the concert/contest/meeting/conference a great success! ● I hope what is mentioned above might be helpful/of great help to you! Thanks for your listening/attention! ● Many thanks for your attention! ● I hope that you will have fun/have a wonderful time/enjoy yourself here. ● It is time for us to take action/measures/steps to …
一、必备话题词汇及表达
1. 参加
2. 是做某事的一种有用方法
3. 做准备
4. 养成……的好习惯
5. 在……的过程中
6. 注意
7. 尽力做某事
8. 将……转换成……
9. 负责做某事
10. 保留
11. 带领到
12. 对……有帮助
13. 预订(房间)
14. 买单
15. 是该做某事的时候了
16. 欢迎来到这次英语演讲大赛/讲座/聚会。
17. 能在这里说关于……是我极大的荣幸。
18. 我很高兴在这里代表……发言。
19. 我们能做到的第一件事是……正如我们所知……我们要做的第二件事是……例如……而且……最后但同样重要的是……
20. 我希望我上面所讲的对你们有帮助！谢谢聆听！
【参考翻译】
1. attend/take part in/participate in
2.be a helpful way to do sth
3. prepare for/get ready for
4. develop/form a good habit of…
5. in the process/course of…
6. pay attention to
7. try/do one’s best to do sth. / make every effort to do sth.
8. turn…into…
9. take responsibility to do sth.
10. reserve for
11. guide to
12. be helpful to
13. reserve (a room)
14. pay the bill
15. it is high time sb. did sth.
16. Welcome to the English speech competition/ lecture/party.
17. It is my great honor to be here to say something about…
18. I am very happy to make a speech on behalf of…
19. The first thing we can do is to… As we all know… What we do next is to… For example … Besides …Last but not least …
20. I hope what is mentioned above might be helpful to you! Thank you for your listening!
二、演讲稿可用句式
1. Ladies and gentlemen/Boys and girls, I’m greatly honored to speak here to talk about ... on behalf of ...
2. Thank you for giving me the opportunity to make a speech about ...
3. It’s my honor to stand here and talk something about ...
4. It’s my great honor to have the opportunity to share with you my opinion on how to take online courses more effectively.
5. Ladies and gentlemen, today I’d like to deliver a lecture on the importance of having a positive attitude to study.
6. It’s my great honor to stand here on behalf of all the students, and I’d like to offer you my warmest welcome.
7. I think it important/difficult/necessary/possible ... to do sth.
8. Local transportation is easily accessible/of easy access/very convenient. = People can have easy access to local transportation.
9. Above all/Most important of all, you should have faith in yourself.
10. With the sharp growth of ..., ... have/has become increasingly important in our daily life.
11. When it comes to the most important family tradition, the first that comes to my mind is honesty.
12. In my view, important though it is for students to have better performance in exams, health is of equal significance.
13. No one can deny the fact that/It can be said with certainty that/There’s no denying that/There’s no doubt that/Undoubtedly, the environment pollution is getting increasingly serious.
14. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving me this chance to speak to you today.
15. I hope everyone finds your stay here an enjoyable experience and your visit will surely promote our friendship.
16. That’s all I want to say about this point. Thank you.
17. That’s all. Thank you for your listening/attention.
【万能写作模板】
Good morning, everyone, / Ladies and gentlemen,It’s my great honor to speak here as a student Now. I have much to share with you. / I feel greatly honored to share my topic “_______介绍演讲的主题_____” with you.Firstly,______有关演讲主题的内容之一______. What’ s more, _____有关演讲主题的内容之二____. Finally, I hope more students will ____提出希望大家一起做的事情___and everyone here will have a wonderful time today. (祝福在座的各位生活愉快）
That’s all. Thank you.
2024全国甲卷
英语课要求做课堂展示, 请你根据所给图片, 以Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。
注意:
1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 题目和首句已为你写好。
Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today’s convenient transport, Chinese transport has an enormous development.
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Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today’s convenient transport, Chinese transport has seen enormous development. Chinese transport has undergone remarkable transformations, giving the Chinese people access to different ways of travelling.
Firstly, shared bicycles have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility, offering an affordable and green alternative for short trips. Secondly, the introduction of high- speed trains has dramatically shortened travel times, making intercity travel faster and more comfortable. Lastly, the proliferation of new energy vehicles underscores China’s dedication to environmental sustainability, reducing reliance on fossil fuels. These developments illustrate China’s journey towards a modern and efficient transportation network that balances convenience with environmental responsibility.
In short, China’s transport system is embracing innovation and eco-friendliness.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据所给图片，以Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。
【详解】1.词汇激活
提供：offer→provide
极大地：dramatically→tremendously
减少：reduce→decrease
总之：in short→in a nutshell
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Firstly, shared bicycles have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility, offering an affordable and green alternative for short trips.
拓展句：Firstly, shared bicycles, which offer an affordable and green alternative for short trips have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Chinese transport has undergone remarkable transformations, giving the Chinese people access to different ways of travelling.(运用了现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】These developments illustrate China’s journey towards a modern and efficient transportation network that balances convenience with environmental responsibility.(运用了that引导的定语从句)
（2021全国乙卷真题）你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以“Be smart online learners”为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：1.分析优势与不足；2.提出学习建议。
注意：1.词数100左右；2.题目和首句以为你写好。
【答案】
Be smart online learners
Network learning has increasingly become an important means for people to acquire knowledge and solve problems.But being smart online learners has its advantages and disadvantages.
First of all, as smart online learners, we can make full use of the most extensive educational resources to broaden the horizon. Besides, We can take the initiative in our study by ourselves without time and space limit.
Of course, these disadvantages are as follows.Faced with all kinds of information on the internet, We can’t tell the difference between the true and the false, which may be harmful to our study and life. On the other hand, online learning itself has some imperfections, making it difficult for us not to be affected.
In conclusion, we should have a good understanding of its advantages and disadvantages and find a proper way to make our study more efficient.
【答案与解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以 Be smart online learners为题写一篇发言稿参赛。
1. 词汇积累
充分利用：make full use of→ make the most of
扩宽,丰富：broaden→ enrich
各种各样：all kinds of→ varieties of
不完美：imperfection→ defect
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句原句：In conclusion , we should have a good understanding of its advantages and disadvantages and find a proper way to make our study more efficient.
拓展句：In conclusion , we should have a good understanding of its advantages and disadvantages ， finding a proper way to make our study more efficient.
（23-24高二下·浙江金华·期末）假定你是李华，是校留学生文艺社（the International Student Arts Society）的负责人。你的任期即将结束，请在换届选举活动上发表离任演说，内容包括：
(1)回顾社团活动；
(2)发表感想；
(3)表达祝愿。
注意：
(1)写作词数应为80个左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Good morning, everyone!
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【答案】
Good morning, everyone! I am Li Hua. It has been my privilege to serve as the President of the International Student Arts Society for the past year and I would like to share a few thoughts with you.
I can still remember the diverse activities we organized together. Whether it was the vibrant cultural festivals, attractive art exhibitions, or thrilling performances, our team has consistently demonstrated exceptional talent and dedication. As the President, I have been deeply moved by our unity. We learned to appreciate others’ differences and worked together for shared goals.
As I step down from this role, I want to extend my heartfelt wishes to every member of you. May you carry forward our finest traditions while boldly innovating. Thank you!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生作为任期即将结束的校留学生文艺社负责人在换届选举活动上发表离任演说。
【详解】1.词汇积累
各种各样的：diverse→various
令人兴奋的：thrilling→exciting
杰出的：exceptional→outstanding
目标：goal→aim
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
合并简单句
原句：As the President, I have been deeply moved by our unity. We learned to appreciate others’ differences and worked together for shared goals.
拓展句：As the President, I have been deeply moved by our unity, where we learned to appreciate others’ differences and worked together for shared goals.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I can still remember the diverse activities we organized together. (运用了省略关系代词的定语从句)
[高分句型2] May you carry forward our finest traditions while boldly innovating. (运用了状语从句中的省略)
（23-24高二下·浙江温州·期末）假定你是李华，准备参加校英文报下周举行的“认识身边高尚的人（Getting to know the fine people around me）”的演讲比赛。请你准备一份演讲稿，内容包括：
1.人物简介：
2.高尚原因。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Good morning, my dear friends! I’m Li Hua.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you!
【答案】
Good morning, my dear friends! I’m Li Hua.
Today, I want to share with you a truly fine person I have the privilege to know—my neighbor, Mr. Zhang. He is a retired teacher, yet his dedication to community service makes him an inspiration to all.
What sets Mr. Zhang apart is his selflessness. Despite his age, he volunteers at the local library, helping children with their reading and homework. Moreover, Mr. Zhang actively participates in environmental protection initiatives. He organizes cleaning drives in our neighborhood, encouraging residents to maintain a clean and green environment.
In conclusion, Mr. Zhang’s unwavering commitment to serving others embody the spirit of a truly fine person.
Thank you!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一份演讲稿，参加“认识身边高尚的人”的演讲比赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
总之：in conclusion→in short
居民：resident→citizen
奉献：dedication→devotion
参加：participate in→take part in
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：He is a retired teacher, yet his dedication to community service makes him an inspiration to all.
拓展句：Although he is a retired teacher, his dedication to community service makes him an inspiration to all.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] What sets Mr. Zhang apart is his selflessness. (运用了what引导主语从句)
[高分句型2] He organizes cleaning drives in our neighborhood, encouraging residents to maintain a clean and green environment. (运用了现在分词作状语)Unit 4 Exploring poetry 单元写作深度指导（译林版2020）
Interpreting a poem（演讲稿）
单元话题 真题展示 考情预测
演讲稿 2024全国甲卷 演讲稿一般由称呼、正文和结束语组成。开头和结尾有固定格式，开头互动引入话题，正文阐述演讲的具体内容，结尾总结并致谢。
The speech text is prepared in advance by the participants in order to express their opinions, views or report the ideological work at the meeting or important activities. It saves time, focuses and speaks well around the topic, and doesn’t go off topic or make mistakes. 英语课要求做课堂展示, 请你根据所给图片, 以Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。 注意: 1. 词数 100 左右; 2. 题目和首句已为你写好。 Development of Transport in China From the vehicle of horses to today’s convenient transport, Chinese transport has an enormous development.
段落 内容 句子设计
第一段 问候+主题 ● Good morning, everybody / everyone / boys and girls / ladies and gentlemen / fellow students! ● The topic of my speech today is … ● It’s my honour/pleasure to speak here, and I am very glad to share my opinion on … with you. ● I feel really honored to stand here and make a speech. ● I’m excited to have a chance to make a speech here on … ● It is a good chance/opportunity for us to gather together with/to see/to meet …
第二段 具体内容，措施建议 ● Many people believe/hold the view/think that … ● In my opinion/As far as I’m concerned/Personally speaking, it’s a good idea to … ● To begin with/First of all/First/Firstly … Second/Secondly/Besides/In addition … What’s more/Last but not least … ● What I want to stress is that … For one thing, … For another, … In addition, … In a word, …/On the one hand, … On the other hand, …
第三段 呼吁倡导+感谢聆听 ● I sincerely hope we can do our best to … ● I hope that you will have an enjoyable/a pleasant stay here. ● I wish you lots of fortune for the future. ● I wish the concert/contest/meeting/conference a great success! ● I hope what is mentioned above might be helpful/of great help to you! Thanks for your listening/attention! ● Many thanks for your attention! ● I hope that you will have fun/have a wonderful time/enjoy yourself here. ● It is time for us to take action/measures/steps to …
一、必备话题词汇及表达
1. 参加
2. 是做某事的一种有用方法
3. 做准备
4. 养成……的好习惯
5. 在……的过程中
6. 注意
7. 尽力做某事
8. 将……转换成……
9. 负责做某事
10. 保留
11. 带领到
12. 对……有帮助
13. 预订(房间)
14. 买单
15. 是该做某事的时候了
16. 欢迎来到这次英语演讲大赛/讲座/聚会。
17. 能在这里说关于……是我极大的荣幸。
18. 我很高兴在这里代表……发言。
19. 我们能做到的第一件事是……正如我们所知……我们要做的第二件事是……例如……而且……最后但同样重要的是……
20. 我希望我上面所讲的对你们有帮助！谢谢聆听！
【参考翻译】
1. attend/take part in/participate in
2.be a helpful way to do sth
3. prepare for/get ready for
4. develop/form a good habit of…
5. in the process/course of…
6. pay attention to
7. try/do one’s best to do sth. / make every effort to do sth.
8. turn…into…
9. take responsibility to do sth.
10. reserve for
11.guide to
12. be helpful to
13. reserve (a room)
14. pay the bill
15.it is high time sb. did sth.
16. Welcome to the English speech competition/ lecture/party.
17. It is my great honor to be here to say something about…
18. I am very happy to make a speech on behalf of…
19. The first thing we can do is to… As we all know … What we do next is to … For example … Besides …Last but not least …
20. I hope what is mentioned above might be helpful to you! Thank you for your listening!
二、演讲稿可用句式
1. Ladies and gentlemen / Boys and girls, I’m greatly honored to speak here to talk about... on behalf of ...
2. Thank you for giving me the opportunity to make a speech about ...
3. It’s my honor to stand here and talk something about ...
4. It’s my great honor to have the opportunity to share with you my opinion on how to take online courses more effectively.
5. Ladies and gentlemen, today I’d like to deliver a lecture on the importance of having a positive attitude to study.
6. It’s my great honor to stand here on behalf of all the students, and I’d like to offer you my warmest welcome.
7. I think it important / difficult/necessary / possible ... to do sth.
8. Local transportation is easily accessible/of easy access/very convenient.= People can have easy access to local transportation.
9. Above all/Most important of all, you should have faith in yourself.
10. With the sharp growth of ..., ... have/has become increasingly important in our daily life.
11. When it comes to the most important family tradition, the first that comes to my mind is honesty.
12. In my view, important though it is for students to have better performance in exams, health is of equal significance.
13. No one can deny the fact that/It can be said with certainty that / There’s no denying that / There’s no doubt that / Undoubtedly, the environment pollution is getting increasingly serious.
14. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving me this chance to speak to you today.
15. I hope everyone finds your stay here an enjoyable experience and your visit will surely promote our friendship.
16. That’s all I want to say about this point. Thank you.
17. That’s all. Thank you for your listening / attention.
【万能写作模板】
Good morning, everyone, / Ladies and gentlemen,It’s my great honor to speak here as a student Now. I have much to share with you. / I feel greatly honored to share my topic “_______介绍演讲的主题_____” with you.Firstly,______有关演讲主题的内容之一______. What’ s more, _____有关演讲主题的内容之二____. Finally, I hope more students will ____提出希望大家一起做的事情___and everyone here will have a wonderful time today. (祝福在座的各位生活愉快）
That’s all. Thank you.
2024全国甲卷
英语课要求做课堂展示, 请你根据所给图片, 以Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。
注意:
1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 题目和首句已为你写好。
Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today’s convenient transport, Chinese transport has an enormous development.
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（2021全国乙卷真题）你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以“Be smart online learners”为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：1.分析优势与不足；2.提出学习建议。
注意：1.词数100左右；2.题目和首句以为你写好。
（23-24高二下·浙江金华·期末）假定你是李华，是校留学生文艺社（the International Student Arts Society）的负责人。你的任期即将结束，请在换届选举活动上发表离任演说，内容包括：
(1)回顾社团活动；
(2)发表感想；
(3)表达祝愿。
注意：
(1)写作词数应为80个左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Good morning, everyone!
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（23-24高二下·浙江温州·期末）假定你是李华，准备参加校英文报下周举行的“认识身边高尚的人（Getting to know the fine people around me）”的演讲比赛。请你准备一份演讲稿，内容包括：
1.人物简介：
2.高尚原因。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Good morning, my dear friends! I’m Li Hua.
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Thank you!
