读后续写《纽约马拉松目标》讲义-辽宁省大连市2024-2025学年高一上学期期末考试英语试题
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读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The New York Marathon (马拉松) is my goal for this year. I know I am never going to win a race but now, when I get anything negative, I will think of the kind gentleman who really believed, “You very good… you very fast.”
At the time, I was living in the Bay Area, and my mother had come to visit for a few days. On the last day of her stay, I was preparing to go out for a run. I picked up a T-shirt I just bought the other day from a Chinese clothing shop — it had some Chinese characters on the front, and a scene of Honolulu Chinatown on the back. I didn’t speak Chinese, but somehow this special T-shirt was quite soft and good for exercise.Working in a very negative environment, I found morning runs very beneficial — body tired but mind awake.
And I had always met an elderly Chinese gentleman walking on the opposite side of the trail (道路) when I was running on other mornings. I had always said, “Good morning,” and he had always smiled warmly and nodded his head slightly.
As I was going out the door, my mother suddenly said, “I don’t think running is so hot — that famous runner died.” I started to recount what I had read about Jim Fixx, and how running had probably been the contributing factor to his living far longer than most of the other members of his family, but I knew there was absolutely no point.
As I started running on my favorite trail, I found I couldn’t shake my mother’s statement. I was so discouraged that I could hardly run. I began thinking, “Why do I run at all Serious runners probably think I look silly! I might have a heart attack on the trail — my dad had a fatal (致命的) heart attack at 50 years old, and he was seemingly in better shape than I am.”
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My mother’s statement remained in my mind like a giant blanket.
_____________________________________________________________________________________
Upon hearing the man’s words, I felt more unexplained strength in my step.
_____________________________________________________________________________________
《纽约马拉松目标》续写
续写要点
第一段：详细描述作者在听到母亲消极言论后，跑步时的低落状态，如步伐沉重、内心纠结等。同时，着重刻画与老人相遇的场景，老人的举动和言语，以及作者的惊讶反应。
第二段：重点描绘老人的话对作者产生的积极影响，如信心的恢复、决心的增强等。接着阐述作者从那之后的改变，包括面对挫折时的心态转变，以及为实现纽约马拉松目标所付出的努力。
情感线
起初，作者因母亲的消极言论而陷入自我怀疑和沮丧，跑步时充满负面情绪。
遇到老人并听到鼓励话语后，作者感到惊讶，同时内心的阴霾开始消散。
之后，作者被老人的话激励，重拾信心和决心，变得积极向上，对未来充满希望。
故事线
作者准备去跑步，母亲提及著名跑步者的死亡，让作者心情低落。
作者在跑步途中，脑海中不断回响母亲的话，脚步沉重，状态不佳。
作者遇到常碰面的老人，老人这次不仅打招呼，还仔细看了作者的 T 恤并给予鼓励。
作者被老人的话触动，开始反思，内心的消极情绪逐渐被驱散。
从那以后，作者每次遇到挫折，都会想起老人的话，从而振作起来。
作者将纽约马拉松设为目标，努力训练，想要证明自己，也不辜负老人的鼓励。
主旨升华句
A simple word of encouragement can turn a person's life around and light up the path to their dreams.
Sometimes, the kindness of a stranger has the power to overcome the darkest doubts and inspire us to reach for the stars.
Encouragement, no matter how small, can be the spark that ignites our inner strength and propels us forward on the journey of life.
The right words at the right time can transform our perspective, filling our hearts with hope and determination to pursue our goals.
A kind gesture from a passer - by can become the driving force that helps us break through self - doubt and achieve what we once thought impossible.
写作示范一
My mother’s statement remained in my mind like a giant blanket. I trudged along the trail, each step feeling like a burden. The chirping of the birds, which usually brought me joy, now seemed like a mocking sound. As I was wallowing in self - pity, the elderly Chinese gentleman appeared. He halted, his eyes fixed on my T - shirt. Then, with a warm smile and a thick accent, he said, “You very good… you very fast.” I was taken aback, my gloomy face suddenly showing a glimmer of surprise.
Upon hearing the man’s words, I felt a rush of energy coursing through my veins. His simple yet powerful words shattered the self - doubt that had been weighing me down. I stood up straight, my shoulders squared, and started running with a new - found purpose. From that moment on, whenever life threw challenges at me, I would remember his kind words. I trained harder for the New York Marathon, determined to prove that his encouragement was well - placed. In the end, it wasn't just about winning a race; it was about overcoming my own fears and embracing the strength that came from a stranger's kindness.
写作示范二
My mother’s statement remained in my mind like a giant blanket. I shuffled along the trail, my head hanging low. The once - vibrant colors of the flowers beside the path now seemed faded. I was on the verge of giving up when I saw the elderly Chinese gentleman approaching. He stopped in front of me, his gaze lingering on my T - shirt. “You very good… you very fast,” he said, his voice soft but full of conviction. I stared at him in disbelief, not expecting such a heartening comment.
Upon hearing the man’s words, I felt an unexplainable sense of courage welling up inside me. His words were like a ray of sunshine piercing through the dark clouds of doubt. I took a deep breath, lifted my head, and broke into a brisk run. Every time I faced difficulties during my training for the New York Marathon, I would recall his encouragement. It became my source of strength, pushing me to go the extra mile. This experience taught me that a single act of kindness can have a profound impact, turning our self - doubts into determination and helping us chase our dreams fearlessly.
【答案】
My mother’s statement remained in my mind like a giant blanket. Gradually, my jog slowed to a walk. My body drained of energy and my mind felt extremely defeated. Just as I was going to turn around and head for home — feeling more discouraged than I could recall in years — I saw that elderly Chinese gentleman again. Seeing my shirt in the distance had prompted him to march towards me. With limited English he pointed to the letters and enthusiastically said, “You very good… you very fast.”
Upon hearing the man’s words, I felt more unexplained strength in my step. He cast his usual warm smile at me and gave me a thumb up as we passed each other. A surge of warmth across my whole body, I didn’t turn from the trail where my previous dark mood had intended. Thanks to that little boost, I continued for six more miles that day instead. I was not that fast, but was very good in my spirit and my heart. Luckily, the elderly gentleman saved me from the shadow of negative feedback.
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The New York Marathon (马拉松) is my goal for this year. I know I am never going to win a race but now, when I get anything negative, I will think of the kind gentleman who really believed, “You very good… you very fast.”
At the time, I was living in the Bay Area, and my mother had come to visit for a few days. On the last day of her stay, I was preparing to go out for a run. I picked up a T-shirt I just bought the other day from a Chinese clothing shop — it had some Chinese characters on the front, and a scene of Honolulu Chinatown on the back. I didn’t speak Chinese, but somehow this special T-shirt was quite soft and good for exercise.Working in a very negative environment, I found morning runs very beneficial — body tired but mind awake.
And I had always met an elderly Chinese gentleman walking on the opposite side of the trail (道路) when I was running on other mornings. I had always said, “Good morning,” and he had always smiled warmly and nodded his head slightly.
As I was going out the door, my mother suddenly said, “I don’t think running is so hot — that famous runner died.” I started to recount what I had read about Jim Fixx, and how running had probably been the contributing factor to his living far longer than most of the other members of his family, but I knew there was absolutely no point.
As I started running on my favorite trail, I found I couldn’t shake my mother’s statement. I was so discouraged that I could hardly run. I began thinking, “Why do I run at all Serious runners probably think I look silly! I might have a heart attack on the trail — my dad had a fatal (致命的) heart attack at 50 years old, and he was seemingly in better shape than I am.”
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My mother’s statement remained in my mind like a giant blanket.
_____________________________________________________________________________________
Upon hearing the man’s words, I felt more unexplained strength in my step.
_____________________________________________________________________________________
《纽约马拉松目标》续写
续写要点
第一段：详细描述作者在听到母亲消极言论后，跑步时的低落状态，如步伐沉重、内心纠结等。同时，着重刻画与老人相遇的场景，老人的举动和言语，以及作者的惊讶反应。
第二段：重点描绘老人的话对作者产生的积极影响，如信心的恢复、决心的增强等。接着阐述作者从那之后的改变，包括面对挫折时的心态转变，以及为实现纽约马拉松目标所付出的努力。
情感线
起初，作者因母亲的消极言论而陷入自我怀疑和沮丧，跑步时充满负面情绪。
遇到老人并听到鼓励话语后，作者感到惊讶，同时内心的阴霾开始消散。
之后，作者被老人的话激励，重拾信心和决心，变得积极向上，对未来充满希望。
故事线
作者准备去跑步，母亲提及著名跑步者的死亡，让作者心情低落。
作者在跑步途中，脑海中不断回响母亲的话，脚步沉重，状态不佳。
作者遇到常碰面的老人，老人这次不仅打招呼，还仔细看了作者的 T 恤并给予鼓励。
作者被老人的话触动，开始反思，内心的消极情绪逐渐被驱散。
从那以后，作者每次遇到挫折，都会想起老人的话，从而振作起来。
作者将纽约马拉松设为目标，努力训练，想要证明自己，也不辜负老人的鼓励。
主旨升华句
A simple word of encouragement can turn a person's life around and light up the path to their dreams.
Sometimes, the kindness of a stranger has the power to overcome the darkest doubts and inspire us to reach for the stars.
Encouragement, no matter how small, can be the spark that ignites our inner strength and propels us forward on the journey of life.
The right words at the right time can transform our perspective, filling our hearts with hope and determination to pursue our goals.
A kind gesture from a passer - by can become the driving force that helps us break through self - doubt and achieve what we once thought impossible.
写作示范一
My mother’s statement remained in my mind like a giant blanket. I trudged along the trail, each step feeling like a burden. The chirping of the birds, which usually brought me joy, now seemed like a mocking sound. As I was wallowing in self - pity, the elderly Chinese gentleman appeared. He halted, his eyes fixed on my T - shirt. Then, with a warm smile and a thick accent, he said, “You very good… you very fast.” I was taken aback, my gloomy face suddenly showing a glimmer of surprise.
Upon hearing the man’s words, I felt a rush of energy coursing through my veins. His simple yet powerful words shattered the self - doubt that had been weighing me down. I stood up straight, my shoulders squared, and started running with a new - found purpose. From that moment on, whenever life threw challenges at me, I would remember his kind words. I trained harder for the New York Marathon, determined to prove that his encouragement was well - placed. In the end, it wasn't just about winning a race; it was about overcoming my own fears and embracing the strength that came from a stranger's kindness.
写作示范二
My mother’s statement remained in my mind like a giant blanket. I shuffled along the trail, my head hanging low. The once - vibrant colors of the flowers beside the path now seemed faded. I was on the verge of giving up when I saw the elderly Chinese gentleman approaching. He stopped in front of me, his gaze lingering on my T - shirt. “You very good… you very fast,” he said, his voice soft but full of conviction. I stared at him in disbelief, not expecting such a heartening comment.
Upon hearing the man’s words, I felt an unexplainable sense of courage welling up inside me. His words were like a ray of sunshine piercing through the dark clouds of doubt. I took a deep breath, lifted my head, and broke into a brisk run. Every time I faced difficulties during my training for the New York Marathon, I would recall his encouragement. It became my source of strength, pushing me to go the extra mile. This experience taught me that a single act of kindness can have a profound impact, turning our self - doubts into determination and helping us chase our dreams fearlessly.
【答案】
My mother’s statement remained in my mind like a giant blanket. Gradually, my jog slowed to a walk. My body drained of energy and my mind felt extremely defeated. Just as I was going to turn around and head for home — feeling more discouraged than I could recall in years — I saw that elderly Chinese gentleman again. Seeing my shirt in the distance had prompted him to march towards me. With limited English he pointed to the letters and enthusiastically said, “You very good… you very fast.”
Upon hearing the man’s words, I felt more unexplained strength in my step. He cast his usual warm smile at me and gave me a thumb up as we passed each other. A surge of warmth across my whole body, I didn’t turn from the trail where my previous dark mood had intended. Thanks to that little boost, I continued for six more miles that day instead. I was not that fast, but was very good in my spirit and my heart. Luckily, the elderly gentleman saved me from the shadow of negative feedback.