应用文写作
你是李华,你的好朋友 Peter最近身体很弱,想参加一些运动,但是不知道去做什么运动好,于是写信来征求你的建议。请你根据下面的提示给他写一封信,建议他去打乒乓球。
1.乒乓球不仅是一种运动而且还是一项艺术;
2.有人认为打乒乓球不用花力气,我却不这么认为;
3.打乒乓球时,我们需要判断球的方向,并用力把它打回去;
4. 打乒乓球时,你还会发现球快速运动,运动员的动作也很美;
5.我认为打乒乓球能使我们强身健体。
注意:
(1)词数100左右;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
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Best Wishes!
Yours Truly,
建议Peter打乒乓球的写作
一、写作提纲
第一段:开篇点明收到 Peter 来信,知悉其身体状况及想运动的想法,引出要推荐乒乓球运动。
第二段:详细阐述推荐乒乓球的原因,如它是运动也是艺术;纠正认为打乒乓球不费力的错误观点,说明打球时需判断球向并用力回击;强调能看到球的快速运动和运动员优美动作;指出打乒乓球可强身健体。
第三段:再次鼓励 Peter 尝试打乒乓球,表达对他身体好转的期待。
二、语言积累
短语
in poor health(身体欠佳)
highly recommend(强烈推荐)
disagree with(不同意)
judge the direction(判断方向)
hit...back(把…… 打回去)
at high speed(高速地)
appreciate the movements(欣赏动作)
build up one's strength(增强某人的力量)
pick up(拿起)
start a journey(开启一段旅程)
佳句
I was sorry to hear that you have been feeling weak recently and are eager to take up some sports.(听说你最近身体虚弱且渴望参加一些运动,我很遗憾。)
Table tennis, which is widely loved around the world, is not only a physical activity but also a form of art.(乒乓球在全球广受喜爱,它不仅是一项体育活动,也是一种艺术形式。)
Contrary to what some people think, playing table tennis demands both physical strength and mental concentration.(与一些人所想的相反,打乒乓球既需要体力,也需要精神集中。)
While playing, you will be amazed by the fast - paced movement of the ball and the elegant postures of the players.(打球时,你会对球的快速运动和运动员优雅的姿势感到惊叹。)
I sincerely hope that you will give table tennis a try and soon regain your vitality.(我真诚地希望你能尝试一下乒乓球,早日恢复活力。)
三、写作示范
示范一
Dear Peter,
I have received your letter and am really concerned about your current health condition. Since you are looking for suitable sports, I would like to suggest table tennis.
Table tennis is more than just a simple sport. It combines physical skills with an artistic touch. Some may wrongly assume that it doesn't need much effort. However, during the game, we have to precisely judge the direction of the incoming ball and then use proper strength to hit it back. The ball moves extremely fast, and the players' movements are full of grace. Moreover, playing table tennis regularly can effectively build up our body and improve our immunity.
I believe table tennis will bring you a lot of fun and help you get back in shape. Looking forward to hearing your good news.
Best Wishes!
Yours Truly,
Li Hua
示范二
Dear Peter,
Learning that you are not feeling well and intend to engage in sports, I am writing to recommend table tennis to you.
People often view table tennis as a sport that doesn't require great exertion, but this is a misunderstanding. In fact, when playing, we need to quickly determine the ball's flight path and forcefully return it. As we watch the ball shuttle back and forth at high speed, we can also enjoy the beautiful movements of the athletes. Besides, table tennis is an excellent way to exercise our body. It can enhance our physical strength and flexibility.
Come on! Let's start playing table tennis and welcome a healthier self.
Best Wishes!
Yours Truly,
Li Hua
示范三
Dear Peter,
I'm sorry to know that you are in a weak physical state and want to start some sports. Among various sports, table tennis is my top recommendation.
Table tennis is a unique sport that has the charm of an art. Although some might think it's an easy - going sport, in reality, it requires us to make rapid judgments about the ball's direction and respond with enough power. The dynamic movement of the ball and the stylish actions of the players are really appealing. Most importantly, playing table tennis is beneficial for our health, helping us build a strong body.
I hope you will take up table tennis and gradually become stronger.
Best Wishes!
Yours Truly,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Peter,
I'm sorry to hear that you are weak because of lack of exercise. I recommend you table tennis.
Table tennis is not only a sport but also an art, because it is a game that needs strength and skill. Some people think that playing table tennis needs little strength, but I don't think so. When playing table tennis, we should judge the direction of the ball, and hit it back with great strength. So after one game you will be very tired if you have tried your best. In the game, you can often find the ball moving quickly, and the players' movements are very beautiful.
I think playing table tennis can build up our bodies. Hope you will join me in playing table tennis.
Yours Truly,
Li Hua