Unit 1 Back to school
单元写作深度指导Write a proposal（写提案）（解析版）
单元话题 考题展示
写提案（倡议/提议） 2024·四川成都·高三模拟预测
本单元的写作主题是提案。提案(proposal)是一种正式的建议或计划,它的目的是让更多的读者同意并参与计划。一份好的提案,应该把握三点: 1.明确提案的类型、目的、活动计划、注意事项、宣传方式等; 2.为了使提案易于阅读,需要对不同类型的信息进行分类; 3.提案的语言表达要简短、真诚、正式;表达多使用祈使句和动词不定式等。 假如你是李华，你校学生会拟成立一个中国文化相关社团，请你写一篇短文，提出你的看法和建议。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
考向分析
1.贴近学生生活与社会热点： 近年来， 英语应用文倡议（提议）的命题趋势越来越贴近学生的学习生活和社会热点。 这类命题要求学生结合自身生活经验， 创造性地解决情境设置中的问题， 同时强调“五育并举， 立德树人”的方向， 弘扬中华优秀传统文化， 增强文化自信。 2.体裁形式灵活多变： 应用文的体裁形式在考试中呈现灵活多变的特点。 除了传统的倡议书外， 还可能涉及通知、 演讲稿、 报道等其他应用文类型。 这种多样性要求学生在备考过程中， 不仅要熟悉各种应用文的写作格式和技巧， 还要具备灵活运用这些技巧的能力。 3.强调逻辑思维和语言运用能力： 英语应用文倡议的命题往往要求学生具备良好的逻辑思维和语言运用能力。 在撰写倡议书时， 学生需要清晰地陈述倡议的背景、 原因、 具体内容和呼吁行动， 同时要注意语言的准确性和流畅性2。 4.注重文化意识和跨文化交流： 随着全球化的不断深入， 英语应用文倡议的命题也越来越注重文化意识和跨文化交流能力的培养。 学生需要在写作过程中， 对比中西方文化差异， 展现出对不同文化的理解和尊重。 5.开放性和创新性增强： 命题的开放性和创新性在逐年增强。 这意味着学生在写作过程中将有更多的发挥空间， 但同时也要求他们具备更强的创新能力和独立思考能力。 6.结合时事热点： 高考英语作文的话题通常与社会热点紧密相关。 因此， 英语应用文倡议的命题也可能围绕当前的社会热点进行， 如环境保护、 科技发展、 文化传承等。
应对策略
广泛阅读， 积累素材： 通过阅读各类文章， 积累丰富的素材和语言表达， 为写作打下基础。 熟悉各类应用文写作格式和技巧： 通过反复练习， 掌握不同类型应用文的写作格式和技巧。 加强逻辑思维训练： 通过解题、 讨论等方式， 提高自己的逻辑思维能力。 关注社会热点和文化差异： 了解当前的社会热点和文化差异， 以便在写作中能够灵活运用。 多写多练， 注重反馈： 通过多写多练， 发现自己的不足之处， 并及时寻求反馈和改进。
提案是劝说读者接受建议的行动计划的书面文件。提案具有说服力, 它试图说服读者相信某一行动的适宜性。提案的长短因事而异。一般包括: 目的, 背景, 需求, 详细计划, 资质问题, 请求批准, 以及相关附件等。
例如：成立俱乐部的提案要点包括如下几个方面：
(1)Purpose of starting a new club
(2)Type of the club
(3)The name of the club
(4)The time the club will meet every week
(5)The organization of the club
(6)Materials needed
(7)What help from the school or teachers
(8)The future development of the club
【模板构建1】
【模板构建2】
假定你是校学生会主席李华,为了引导学生帮助他人,服务社会,弘扬助人的精神,你打算成立一个青年志愿者俱乐部,安排学生每周六上午到市人民公园打扫卫生、给游客指路等。现请你写一份关于成立青年志愿者俱乐部的提案,上报给学校。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.提案格式已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:弘扬 carry forward; 扫帚 broom
[要点结构]
Proposal for a Youth Volunteer Club
Club name:_____________________________________________________________________
Club leader:_____________________________________________________________________
Meeting time:___________________________________________________________________
Club aims:_____________________________________________________________________
Club activities:__________________________________________________________________
Materials needed:________________________________________________________________
Plan for finding new members:_____________________________________________________
Signed:________________________________________________________________________
[写作示例]
Proposal for a Youth Volunteer Club
Club name:Youth Volunteer Club
Club leader:Li Hua
Meeting time:Saturday morning
Club aims:
●To lead the students to help others;
●To serve the society;
●To carry forward the spirit of helping others.
Club activities:Arrange for students to go to the People's Park in the city to do some voluntary work, such as helping clean up parks or giving directions to visitors.
Materials needed: A broom and a cup for each student
Plan for finding new members:
●Make posters and put them up around the school;
●Put a notice in the school newspaper and on the school website;
●Call on club members to persuade their friends around to join our Youth Volunteer Club.
Signed:Li Hua
[要点分析]
审题 人称:第一人称、第二人称
时态:以一般现在时为主
谋篇 提案类型(Type):Proposal for a Youth Volunteer Club; 提案目的(Aim):多使用动词不定式来表达; 活动计划(Plan):常使用祈使句来表达; 事项提醒(Reminder):使用名词或名词性短语A broom for each student ...; 招募方式(Measures):常使用祈使句Make posters...; Put up a notice ...
【素材积累】
Ⅰ.常用词汇
1.club n.俱乐部
2.set up 创立;建立;设立
3.Basketball Club 篮球俱乐部
4.put up 张贴
5.discuss vt.讨论
6.make friends 交友
7.programme n.节目
8.improve v.提高;改善
9.exchange vt.交流;交换
10.gather v.聚集;集合
11.communicate vi.交流
12.attend vt.参加;出席
13.inform v.告知
14.satisfy/meet one's needs 满足某人的需要
15.on the website 在网站上
Ⅱ.话题句式
1.To help the students to know about more plants, we decide to set up a Nature Club.
为了帮助学生了解更多的植物,我们决定成立一个自然俱乐部。
2.To provide a good opportunity to make friends, we decide to set up a Football Club.
为了提供一个交友的好机会,我们决定成立一个足球俱乐部。
3.To improve reading and writing skills, a Book Lover Club is set up by our teacher.
为了提高阅读和写作技能,我们的老师成立了一个爱书人俱乐部。
4.Read a short story that we like each Saturday afternoon.
每周六下午读一篇我们喜欢的短篇小说。
5.In the club gatherings, we'll have a football match and exchange our opinions together.
在俱乐部聚会时,我们将举行一场足球比赛,并一起交换意见。
6.There are many literary clubs started by the students in our campus.
我们校园里有许多由学生创办的文学俱乐部。
7.Meet on weekends to communicate with each other in English.
周末见面,互相用英语交流。
8.In the club meetings, learn football playing skills from each other.
在俱乐部聚会时,互相学习踢足球的技巧。
【写作指导】
为了丰富同学们的课外活动, 校学生会决定成立一个自行车俱乐部(Cycling Club), 现向全体学生征求建议。假如你是李华, 请根据以下提示, 用英语写一份关于自行车俱乐部的建议。
1. 自行车俱乐部的目的;
2. 俱乐部的主要活动内容: 每周一次的基础训练, 有教师辅导, 安排在课外体育活动时间;
3. 其他事项: 器材自备, 俱乐部的宣传等。
注意: 1. 建议应包括以上所有信息, 可适当发挥;
词数80个左右。
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【语篇布局】
【句式建构】
I.完成句子
1. 很高兴得知学生会已经决定建立自行车俱乐部。
I know with delight that the Students’ Union has decided to set up a Cycling Club.
2. 我写信提出我的建议。
I am writing to offer my proposals.
3. 它应该每周提供一次基础培训。
It should offer basic training once a week.
4. 基础培训将由老师指导。
The basic training will be guided by teachers.
5. 我们应该充分利用各种方式使所有学生了解我们的俱乐部。
We should make the most of various ways to make our club known by all students.
II.句式升级
6. 用非谓语动词升级句1和句2
Having known/Knowing with delight that the Students’ Union has decided to set up a Cycling Club, I am writing to offer my proposals.
7. 用定语从句升级句3和句4
It should offer basic training once a week which will be guided by teachers.
8. 用被动语态升级句5
Various ways should be made the most of to make our club known by all students.
【连句成篇】
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【参考范文】
Dear President,
I am Li Hua. Having known with delight that the Students’ Union has decided to set up a Cycling Club, I am writing to offer my proposals.
First of all, I think the purpose of the club is to help us students keep fit and relax ourselves. Besides, as for its activities, I think it should contain the following parts. It should offer basic training once a week which will be guided by teachers. It can be arranged during the time of after-class physical activities. There should be an outdoor cycling trip if possible. By the way, club members should get the equipment ready by the students themselves. Last but not least, various ways should be made the most of to make our club known by all students.
At last, I hope my proposals can be of some help for you.
Yours,
Li Hua
一、单句翻译
1.为引导学生帮助他人,服务社会,弘扬助人的精神, 我们打算成立一个青年志愿者俱乐部。
lead the students to help others, serve the society, the spirit of helping others,we are going to set up a Youth Volunteer Club.
2.安排学生到市人民公园做一些志愿工作。
to go to the People's Park in the city .
3.我们将帮助打扫公园或给游客指路等。
We'll or give directions to visitors.
4.每个学生带一把扫帚和一个水杯。
Each student will .
5.我们将制作海报,张贴在学校周围。
around the school.
6.在校报和学校网站上张贴通知。
in the school newspaper and .
7.呼吁俱乐部成员说服他们身边的朋友加入我们的青年志愿者俱乐部。
persuade their friends around to join our Youth Volunteer Club.
参考答案： 1.In order to;and carry forward 2.Arrange for students;to do some voluntary work 3.help clean up parks 4.take a broom and a cup 5.We'll make posters and put them up 6.Put a notice;on the school website 7.Call on club members to
二、语篇翻译
（24-25高一上·全国·单元测试）高中生活对很多人都不容易。许多挑战会使我们倍感压力，但是一切取决于我们自己。我们要保持冷静，全力以赴并且永不放弃。敞开心扉并尽可能参与到活动中。当别人遇到麻烦事，帮他们一把。这样我们会交到朋友，而且充分利用高中的时光。现在，做好准备迎接我们的最后考验吧。
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【参考范文】
High school life is not easy for many people. Many challenges can be stressful, but it’s up to us. We need to stay calm, give it our all and never give up. Open your mind and get involved as much as possible. When someone is in trouble, help them out. We’ll make friends and make the most of high school. Now, get ready for our final test.
【要点解析】考查句子翻译。根据句意可知，本句时态可用一般现在时来表示经常性动作。“高中生活对很多人都不容易。”中可用短语be not easy for表示“对……不容易”，本句英文表达为High school life is not easy for many people；“许多挑战会使我们倍感压力，但是一切取决于我们自己。”中可用情态动词can表示“会”，即客观上的可能性，用短语be up to sb.表示“取决于某人”，本句英文表达为Many challenges can be stressful, but it’s up to us；“我们要保持冷静，全力以赴并且永不放弃。”中用固定短语stay calm表示“保持冷静”，用固定短语never give up表示“永不放弃”，本句英文表达为We need to stay calm, give it our all and never give up；“敞开心扉并尽可能参与到活动中。”是祈使句，可用动词open开头表示“敞开”，用短语get involved表示“参与”，本句英文表达为Open your mind and get involved as much as possible；“当别人遇到麻烦事，帮他们一把。”可用when引导的时间状语从句来表示，in trouble (处于困境)，help sb. out (帮助某人摆脱困境)，英文表达为When someone is in trouble, help them out；“这样我们会交到朋友，而且充分利用高中的时光。”中可用固定短语make friends表示“交朋友”，make the most of (充分利用)，且用一般将来时表将来动作，本句英文表达为We’ll make friends and make the most of high school；“现在，做好准备迎接我们的最后考验吧。”也是祈使句，同短语get ready for表示“为……做好准备”，本句英文表达为Now, get ready for our final test。故答案为High school life is not easy for many people. Many challenges can be stressful, but it’s up to us. We need to stay calm, give it our all and never give up. Open your mind and get involved as much as possible. When someone is in trouble, help them out. We’ll make friends and make the most of high school. Now, get ready for our final test.
三．书面表达
（20-21高一上·江苏镇江·阶段练习）假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你校将举行以“创办京剧俱乐部”为主题的倡议活动。请你代表学生会给全体同学写一封倡议书，内容要点如下：
1.该活动的意义；
2.具体措施:组织丰富的活动；购买相关书籍；观看京剧录像。
注意：1.词数80左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：Peking opera京剧 video录像
Proposal for Peking Opera Club
Good news! Our school is going to set up a new club named Peking Opera Club.
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Everyone is welcome to sign up for the club and join in our activities.
【参考范文】
Proposal for Peking Opera Club
Good news! Our school is going to set up a new club named Peking Opera Club.
The club aims to increase the popularity of Peking Opera among students and make them learn more about it . There are a wide variety of activities. For example, we will listen to a speech on the history of Beijing Opera delivered by a famous artist and there will be a live performance of Beijing Opera. What’s more, We will buy books and watch videos about Beijing Opera.
Everyone is welcome to sign up for the club and join in our activities.
【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封倡议书。
【要点解析】第一步：审题。
体裁：倡议书
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时为主
要点：1.该活动的意义;
2.具体措施：组织丰富的活动；购买相关书籍；观看京剧录像。
第二步：列重点词语，词组（注意好词的使用）
如：aim to do sth.，popularity，a variety of，a live performance，be welcome to等.
第三步：连词成句（注意好句型的使用，如非谓语动词，复合句，注意拼写和时态问题）
第四步：连句成篇（注意衔接词的使用）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second…, Finally, In the end, At last;
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also);
3.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result;
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡。
第五步：润色修改。
【核心提示】本文内容完整，要点齐全，语言规范，词数适当，段落分布合理。作者在文中使用了许多高级句型和用法，如There are a wide variety of activities.使用了there be句型；For example, we will listen to a speech on the history of Beijing Opera delivered by a famous artist and there will be a live performance of Beijing Opera.使用了非谓语动词，高级句型和用法的使用，使得文章的句式灵活多变，为文章增加了色彩。
（2024·河北张家口·高三模拟预测）假定你是李华，为配合学校将于下月举办的科技节，你校英语报设置了“科技节献策”栏目。请你以“My Proposal for the Science and Technology Festival”为题写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：
1．你的献策；
2．献策理由。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80个左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My Proposal for the Science and Technology Festival
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【参考范文】
My Proposal for the Science and Technology Festival
As a great fan of science and technology, I am excited about the festival approaching next month. At the festival, I expect to attend lectures from one or two scientists from top universities. I believe the students will get inspirations from their brilliant insights into fields like AI and biological engineering. Besides, I believe it will be a great idea to hold an exhibition of the students’ projects and a speech contest, which can give the students opportunities to share their points of view on the development and social value of science and technology.
I am anticipating this meaningful festival and will be delighted to be part of it.
【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。为配合学校将于下月举办的科技节，学校英语报设置了“科技节献策”栏目。要求考生以“My Proposal for the Science and Technology Festival”为题写一篇短文投稿。
【要点解析】1. 词汇积累
激动的：excited→thrilled
接近：approach→draw near
期望：expect→anticipate
获得：get→gain
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：At the festival, I expect to attend lectures from one or two scientists from top universities.
拓展句：At the festival, what I expect is to attend lectures from one or two scientists from top universities.
【高分句型1】Besides, I believe it will be a great idea to hold an exhibition of the students' projects and a speech contest, which can give the students opportunities to share their points of view on the development and social value of science and technology. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句和省略that的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】I believe the students will get inspirations from their brilliant insights into fields like Al and biological engineering. (运用了省略that的宾语从句)Unit 1 Back to school
单元写作深度指导Write a proposal（写提案）（原卷版）
单元话题 考题展示
写提案（倡议/提议） 2024·四川成都·高三模拟预测
本单元的写作主题是提案。提案(proposal)是一种正式的建议或计划,它的目的是让更多的读者同意并参与计划。一份好的提案,应该把握三点: 1.明确提案的类型、目的、活动计划、注意事项、宣传方式等; 2.为了使提案易于阅读,需要对不同类型的信息进行分类; 3.提案的语言表达要简短、真诚、正式;表达多使用祈使句和动词不定式等。 假如你是李华，你校学生会拟成立一个中国文化相关社团，请你写一篇短文，提出你的看法和建议。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
考向分析
1.贴近学生生活与社会热点： 近年来， 英语应用文倡议（提议）的命题趋势越来越贴近学生的学习生活和社会热点。 这类命题要求学生结合自身生活经验， 创造性地解决情境设置中的问题， 同时强调“五育并举， 立德树人”的方向， 弘扬中华优秀传统文化， 增强文化自信。 2.体裁形式灵活多变： 应用文的体裁形式在考试中呈现灵活多变的特点。 除了传统的倡议书外， 还可能涉及通知、 演讲稿、 报道等其他应用文类型。 这种多样性要求学生在备考过程中， 不仅要熟悉各种应用文的写作格式和技巧， 还要具备灵活运用这些技巧的能力。 3.强调逻辑思维和语言运用能力： 英语应用文倡议的命题往往要求学生具备良好的逻辑思维和语言运用能力。 在撰写倡议书时， 学生需要清晰地陈述倡议的背景、 原因、 具体内容和呼吁行动， 同时要注意语言的准确性和流畅性2。 4.注重文化意识和跨文化交流： 随着全球化的不断深入， 英语应用文倡议的命题也越来越注重文化意识和跨文化交流能力的培养。 学生需要在写作过程中， 对比中西方文化差异， 展现出对不同文化的理解和尊重。 5.开放性和创新性增强： 命题的开放性和创新性在逐年增强。 这意味着学生在写作过程中将有更多的发挥空间， 但同时也要求他们具备更强的创新能力和独立思考能力。 6.结合时事热点： 高考英语作文的话题通常与社会热点紧密相关。 因此， 英语应用文倡议的命题也可能围绕当前的社会热点进行， 如环境保护、 科技发展、 文化传承等。
应对策略
广泛阅读， 积累素材： 通过阅读各类文章， 积累丰富的素材和语言表达， 为写作打下基础。 熟悉各类应用文写作格式和技巧： 通过反复练习， 掌握不同类型应用文的写作格式和技巧。 加强逻辑思维训练： 通过解题、 讨论等方式， 提高自己的逻辑思维能力。 关注社会热点和文化差异： 了解当前的社会热点和文化差异， 以便在写作中能够灵活运用。 多写多练， 注重反馈： 通过多写多练， 发现自己的不足之处， 并及时寻求反馈和改进。
提案是劝说读者接受建议的行动计划的书面文件。提案具有说服力, 它试图说服读者相信某一行动的适宜性。提案的长短因事而异。一般包括: 目的, 背景, 需求, 详细计划, 资质问题, 请求批准, 以及相关附件等。
例如：成立俱乐部的提案要点包括如下几个方面：
(1)Purpose of starting a new club
(2)Type of the club
(3)The name of the club
(4)The time the club will meet every week
(5)The organization of the club
(6)Materials needed
(7)What help from the school or teachers
(8)The future development of the club
【模板构建1】
【模板构建2】
假定你是校学生会主席李华,为了引导学生帮助他人,服务社会,弘扬助人的精神,你打算成立一个青年志愿者俱乐部,安排学生每周六上午到市人民公园打扫卫生、给游客指路等。现请你写一份关于成立青年志愿者俱乐部的提案,上报给学校。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.提案格式已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:弘扬 carry forward; 扫帚 broom
[要点结构]
Proposal for a Youth Volunteer Club
Club name:_____________________________________________________________________
Club leader:_____________________________________________________________________
Meeting time:___________________________________________________________________
Club aims:_____________________________________________________________________
Club activities:__________________________________________________________________
Materials needed:________________________________________________________________
Plan for finding new members:_____________________________________________________
Signed:________________________________________________________________________
[写作示例]
Proposal for a Youth Volunteer Club
Club name:Youth Volunteer Club
Club leader:Li Hua
Meeting time:Saturday morning
Club aims:
●To lead the students to help others;
●To serve the society;
●To carry forward the spirit of helping others.
Club activities:Arrange for students to go to the People's Park in the city to do some voluntary work, such as helping clean up parks or giving directions to visitors.
Materials needed: A broom and a cup for each student
Plan for finding new members:
●Make posters and put them up around the school;
●Put a notice in the school newspaper and on the school website;
●Call on club members to persuade their friends around to join our Youth Volunteer Club.
Signed:Li Hua
[要点分析]
审题 人称:第一人称、第二人称
时态:以一般现在时为主
谋篇 提案类型(Type):Proposal for a Youth Volunteer Club; 提案目的(Aim):多使用动词不定式来表达; 活动计划(Plan):常使用祈使句来表达; 事项提醒(Reminder):使用名词或名词性短语A broom for each student ...; 招募方式(Measures):常使用祈使句Make posters...; Put up a notice ...
【素材积累】
Ⅰ.常用词汇
1.club n.俱乐部
2.set up 创立;建立;设立
3.Basketball Club 篮球俱乐部
4.put up 张贴
5.discuss vt.讨论
6.make friends 交友
7.programme n.节目
8.improve v.提高;改善
9.exchange vt.交流;交换
10.gather v.聚集;集合
11.communicate vi.交流
12.attend vt.参加;出席
13.inform v.告知
14.satisfy/meet one's needs 满足某人的需要
15.on the website 在网站上
Ⅱ.话题句式
1.To help the students to know about more plants, we decide to set up a Nature Club.
为了帮助学生了解更多的植物,我们决定成立一个自然俱乐部。
2.To provide a good opportunity to make friends, we decide to set up a Football Club.
为了提供一个交友的好机会,我们决定成立一个足球俱乐部。
3.To improve reading and writing skills, a Book Lover Club is set up by our teacher.
为了提高阅读和写作技能,我们的老师成立了一个爱书人俱乐部。
4.Read a short story that we like each Saturday afternoon.
每周六下午读一篇我们喜欢的短篇小说。
5.In the club gatherings, we'll have a football match and exchange our opinions together.
在俱乐部聚会时,我们将举行一场足球比赛,并一起交换意见。
6.There are many literary clubs started by the students in our campus.
我们校园里有许多由学生创办的文学俱乐部。
7.Meet on weekends to communicate with each other in English.
周末见面,互相用英语交流。
8.In the club meetings, learn football playing skills from each other.
在俱乐部聚会时,互相学习踢足球的技巧。
【写作指导】
为了丰富同学们的课外活动, 校学生会决定成立一个自行车俱乐部(Cycling Club), 现向全体学生征求建议。假如你是李华, 请根据以下提示, 用英语写一份关于自行车俱乐部的建议。
1. 自行车俱乐部的目的;
2. 俱乐部的主要活动内容: 每周一次的基础训练, 有教师辅导, 安排在课外体育活动时间;
3. 其他事项: 器材自备, 俱乐部的宣传等。
注意: 1. 建议应包括以上所有信息, 可适当发挥;
词数80个左右。
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【语篇布局】
【句式建构】
I.完成句子
1. 很高兴得知学生会已经决定建立自行车俱乐部。
______________ has decided to set up ______________.
2. 我写信提出我的建议。
______________
3. 它应该每周提供一次基础培训。
It should ______________.
4. 基础培训将由老师指导。
______________
5. 我们应该充分利用各种方式使所有学生了解我们的俱乐部。
We should ______________ to make our club known by all students.
II.句式升级
6. 用非谓语动词升级句1和句2
______________
7. 用定语从句升级句3和句4
______________
8. 用被动语态升级句5
______________
【连句成篇】
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
一、单句翻译
1.为引导学生帮助他人,服务社会,弘扬助人的精神, 我们打算成立一个青年志愿者俱乐部。
lead the students to help others, serve the society, the spirit of helping others,we are going to set up a Youth Volunteer Club.
2.安排学生到市人民公园做一些志愿工作。
to go to the People's Park in the city .
3.我们将帮助打扫公园或给游客指路等。
We'll or give directions to visitors.
4.每个学生带一把扫帚和一个水杯。
Each student will .
5.我们将制作海报,张贴在学校周围。
around the school.
6.在校报和学校网站上张贴通知。
in the school newspaper and .
7.呼吁俱乐部成员说服他们身边的朋友加入我们的青年志愿者俱乐部。
persuade their friends around to join our Youth Volunteer Club.
二、语篇翻译
（24-25高一上·全国·单元测试）高中生活对很多人都不容易。许多挑战会使我们倍感压力，但是一切取决于我们自己。我们要保持冷静，全力以赴并且永不放弃。敞开心扉并尽可能参与到活动中。当别人遇到麻烦事，帮他们一把。这样我们会交到朋友，而且充分利用高中的时光。现在，做好准备迎接我们的最后考验吧。
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三．书面表达
（20-21高一上·江苏镇江·阶段练习）假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你校将举行以“创办京剧俱乐部”为主题的倡议活动。请你代表学生会给全体同学写一封倡议书，内容要点如下：
1.该活动的意义；
2.具体措施:组织丰富的活动；购买相关书籍；观看京剧录像。
注意：1.词数80左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：Peking opera京剧 video录像
Proposal for Peking Opera Club
Good news! Our school is going to set up a new club named Peking Opera Club.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Everyone is welcome to sign up for the club and join in our activities.
（2024·河北张家口·高三模拟预测）假定你是李华，为配合学校将于下月举办的科技节，你校英语报设置了“科技节献策”栏目。请你以“My Proposal for the Science and Technology Festival”为题写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：
1．你的献策；
2．献策理由。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80个左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My Proposal for the Science and Technology Festival
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单元写作深度指导-建议信（解析版）
单元话题 考题展示
提建议 2024·北京·高考真题
建议信是写信人对某事提出自己的建议和忠告, 可能是写给个人, 就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点; 也可能是写给某个组织或机构, 就改进服务提出建议或忠告。 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： (1)建议投稿内容； (2)就以上建议简要说明理由。 注意：(1)词数100左右； (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
考向分析与应对策略
高考英语建议信的考查趋势显示出其作为高频作文话题的重要性。 近十年来， 尽管高考英语作文涵盖了多种类型， 如邀请信、 告知信、 求助信等， 但建议信也占据了一定的考查比例 。 这表明建议信在高考英语作文中具有不可忽视的地位。 在准备建议信时， 考生应注意其固定的结构和常用句式。 建议信通常包括开头陈述问题、 中间提出建议及理由， 以及结尾表达期望和鼓励 。 此外， 使用一般现在时或一般将来时是建议信时态的常见选择。 建议信的内容既实用又全面， 可以遵循以下几个步骤： 1.明确目的 在开始撰写之前， 明确建议信的目的和受众。 了解受众的需求和背景， 以便更好地提供有针对性的建议。 2.结构清晰 使用标准的书信格式， 包括开头、 正文和结尾。 开头部分简要介绍自己， 并说明写信的目的。 正文部分详细阐述建议， 每个建议作为一个独立的段落。 结尾部分总结建议， 并表达希望对方采纳的意愿。 3.具体详细 提供具体的建议， 而不是泛泛而谈。 用具体的例子简要支持你的建议， 增加说服力。 4.全面考虑 在提出建议时， 考虑问题的多个方面， 包括可能的影响等。 确保建议既符合实际又可行， 避免提出不切实际或难以实施的建议。 5.语言得体 使用礼貌、 专业的语言， 避免使用过于口语化或情绪化的表达。 检查语法和拼写错误， 确保信件的准确性和专业性。 6.鼓励反馈 在结尾部分， 鼓励对方提供反馈或进一步讨论你的建议。 这可以建立一种开放的沟通氛围， 并有助于你了解对方对建议的看法。
I.话题词汇
(1)give you some advice on. . . 给你一些关于……的建议
(2)spare no effort to do sth. 不遗余力去做某事
(3)as we all know 众所周知
(4)as far as I am concerned 据我所知
(5)be of great importance to 对……极其重要
(6)communicate with sb. 与某人交流
(7)had better do 最好做……
(8)take/follow my advice 采纳我的建议
(9)get along with 相处, 进展
(10)feel stressed 感到有压力的
II. 话题句式
(1) 建议信开头常用句式
①I am sorry to know that you are worried about the coming exam.
了解到你对即将到来的考试很担心我很难过。
②I’m glad that you are getting along well with your study.
我很高兴你的学业进展顺利。
③You asked me in your letter how to get on with your deskmate.
你在信中问及如何与你的同桌相处。
(2)表达建议常用句式
①You don’t have to worry about it.
你不必为此事担心。
②First of all, try to invite some of your good friends to take part in after-class activities.
首先, 尽量邀请你的一些好朋友参加课外活动。
③What’s more, help others when they’re in trouble.
更重要的是, 当别人有困难时帮助他们。
④In my opinion, you should find a chance to talk with her.
依我看来, 你应该找机会与她谈谈。
(3)建议信结尾常用句式
①I hope these suggestions will help you.
我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。
②I’m sure you’ll make it. 我确信你能行。
③I hope everything goes well with you. 我希望你万事如意。
III.模版建构
英语建议信的写法通常遵循一定的格式和要点， 以下是写作指南：
▲ 开头
1.明确写信目的： 在第一段中， 开门见山地表明写信的原因和目的。 例如， 可以提到了解对方的情况或问题， 因此写信提供建议。
常用句式： Learning/Knowing/Hearing that..., I'm writing to give you some suggestions.
2.表达关切或赞赏： 可以适当表达对收信人情况或问题的关切， 或对其请求的赞赏。
▲ 正文
1.具体说明问题： 简要回顾或说明对方遇到的问题或需要改进的地方。
2.给出具体建议：
详实充分： 建议内容要具体、 可行， 避免泛泛而谈。
诚恳礼貌： 语气要诚恳、 有礼貌， 尊重对方的意见和感受。
逻辑清晰： 使用过渡词使建议之间的逻辑清晰， 如First/Firstly, Second/Secondly, Last but not least等。
常用句式：
You should do...
You’d better do sth...
I would like to suggest that ...
3.解释建议理由： 对于每个建议， 可以简要解释其理由或好处， 增强说服力。
▲ 结尾
1.表达心愿： 简洁明了地表达希望对方能采纳建议的心愿。
常用句式： I hope you will find my suggestions/advice/tips useful/helpful.
2.结束语： 使用礼貌的结束语， 如Yours sincerely, Respectfully yours等。
【写作模版】
一、写作积累
1. Trying to be perfect is nothing too bad.（动名词短 语 Trying to be perfect 作主语）
2. Instead, it's a valuable virtue you should stick to. （you should stick to为省略了that的定语从句）
3. What you should do is just try your best. （What you should do为what引导的主语从句）
4. Please keep in mind that process is far more important than outcome. （that process is far more important than outcome为that引导的宾语从句）
二、典例分析
假定你是Teens杂志社“悄悄话（Secret Words）”的栏目编辑David，刚收到李华的一封求助信（信件内容附后）。请阅信后给他回一封信。内容包括：
1. 感谢对方信任，并表明写信目的；
2. 肯定对方的优点，并回应他的困惑；
3. 表达希望。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear David,
I’m Li Hua, a faithful reader of Teens. I’m writing to ask you for help.
I’m under psychological pressure now. To be honest, I’m a motivated boy, so I always expect myself to be perfect in every aspect. But the truth is that I can’t always satisfy myself or meet others’ expectations. I feel so tired and helpless. What should I do next Can you help me
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Dear Li Hua,
I’m glad to hear that you are a faithful reader of Teens.
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Yours sincerely,
David
第一步：审题谋篇
审题：1、审人称：第一、二人称；2、审时态：一般现在时；
谋篇布局：
第一段感谢对方信任，并表明写信目的；
第二段为主体段，肯定对方的优点并回应他的困惑；
第三段表达希望。
第二步：核心词汇
1. ask for 请求 2. pressure n. 压力
3. editor n.编辑 4. take place 发生
第三步：连词成句
1. 完成句子
（1） 追求完美没什么不好。
__________ __________ __________ __________ is nothing too bad.
（2） 相反，这是一种宝贵的美德。你应该坚持美德。
Instead, it’s a __________ virtue. You should __________ __________ the virture.
（3） 事情并不总是按计划进行。
Things do not always take place __________ __________.
（4） 你应该做的就是尽你最大的努力。
__________ __________ __________ __________ is just try your best.
（5） 过程远比结果重要。请记住这一点。
Process is __________ __________ important __________ outcome. Please keep it in mind.
2. 句式升级
（6） 将句（2）改写成含定语从句的主从复合句。
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（7） 将句（5）改写成含宾语从句的主从复合句。
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答案：（1） Trying to be perfect （2） valuable; stick to （3） as planned
（4） What you should do （5） far more; than
（6）Instead, it’s a valuable virtue you should stick to.
（7）Please keep in mind that process is far more important than outcome.
第四步：连句成篇
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【参考范文】
Dear Li Hua,
I’m glad to hear that you are a faithful reader of Teens. As an editor in the column of Secret Words, I’m thankful for your trust. I’m writing to give you my humble opinions.
Trying to be perfect is nothing too bad. Instead, it’s a valuable virtue you should stick to. However, don’t be too hard on yourself or too critical of yourself. Things do not always take place as planned. What you should do is just try your best. Enjoy the process of achieving goals. Please keep in mind that process is far more important than outcome.
I wish my opinions above will be helpful to you.
Keep in touch!
Yours sincerely,
David
一、单句翻译
1. 在成长的过程中, 我们经历一些身体的变化是正常的。
During the process of growing up, it is normal that we experience some body changes.
2. 真正重要的是, 我们应该保持均衡的饮食。
It really matters that we should keep a balanced diet.
3. 除此之外, 我们经常与我们的父母或朋友发生争论。其原因是我们越来越成熟, 逐渐倾向于相信自己。
Besides, we often have arguments with our parents or friends. Because we are becoming more and more mature and gradually tend to believe in ourselves.
4. 为了解决这个问题, 我认为我们应该更多地和家人、朋友及老师交流。
To solve this problem, I think we should talk to our family, friends and teachers more.
5. 沟通是一个你向别人表达感情的重要方式, 然后他们能更好地理解你并帮助你。
Communication is an important way to express your feelings to others, and then they can understand you better and help you.
·句式升级
6. 用it is+adj. +for sb. to do. . . 升级句1
During the process of growing up, it is normal for us to experience some body changes.
7. 用what引导的名词性从句作主语升级句2
What really matters is that we should keep a balanced diet.
8. 用the reason why. . . is that. . . 升级句3
Besides, the reason why we often have arguments with our parents or friends is that we are becoming more and more mature and gradually tend to believe in ourselves.
二、语篇翻译
Dear Li Hua,
How is everything going I hope you are very well(你很好). I’m fine, but tired. Right now it is the summer vacation and I’m helping my dad on the farm(我正在农场帮助我父亲). It is the time of year for the rice harvest, so every day I work from dawn until dark( 所以我每天从黎明工作到天黑). Sometimes we go on working after dark by the lights of our tractors. We grow rice in the south of the States, but in the north where it is colder they grow wheat(在比较冷的北方, 他们种小麦). Although the farm is large(尽管农场很大), my dad has only two men working for him.
Most Saturday evenings there is a party, even at harvest time. These parties often make us very happy(使我们非常高兴). Some of my friends drink beer. I don’t, because I have to drive home after the party(因为聚会后我得开车回家). Hope you can join us when you pay a visit to our country.
Give my best regards to your parents.
Yours,
Tom
三．书面表达
假设你是李华,你的好朋友Jim最近经常因周末时间安排和父母争吵,请你就此情况给他写一封信,就如何与父母更好地交流提出你的建议。内容包括:
1.表示理解;2.提出建议。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
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【根据上述要求及提示补全语篇】
Dear Jim,
I understand quite well what you’re 1.going through(经历,经受).It’s not unusual for us teenagers to have difficulty 2.getting along well with(和……友好相处) parents.
Take it easy! But remember 3.it’s significant to(……很重要) learn to control your anger.After all, those who easily get irritated are less likely to become a good listener and communicator.Thus, when your parents 4.criticize your weekend arrangements(指责你的周末安排), don’t explode but explain tenderly and patiently.Besides, don’t forget to tell them how much you love them.
Hope you’ll find these suggestions helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
（2019·天津·高考真题）假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师Chris 将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件:
⑴你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）；
⑵选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；
⑶希望从中有何收获。
注意：
⑴词数不少于100；
⑵可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
⑶开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
I'm Li Jim, a student at Chenguang High School.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for your time.
Yours,
Li Jin
【参考范文】
Dear Chris,
I'm Li Jim, a student at Chenguang High School.It’s our great pleasure to have you visit our school and give a lecture on western art during the coming summer vacation.
When it comes to my suggestions, I am quite interested in western music, and expect that you could deliver the lecture on this topic. Served as a bridge, western music provides us teenagers with the opportunity to broaden our horizons and have a better understanding on culture diversities. It also gives us strength and hope when we are overcoming difficulties.
I would appreciate it if you could take my advice, and I hope that I can gain more knowledge through the lecture. Looking forward to your early reply.
Thank you for your time.
Yours,
Li Jin
【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英方教师Chris写信，就一个有关西方艺术的讲座内容给出意见。
【要点详解】
1.词汇积累
做演讲：give a lecture→make a speech
提供：provide sb. with sth.→refer sb. sth.
机会：opportunity→chance
采纳建议：take one’s advice→follow one’s advice
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Served as a bridge, western music provides us teenagers with the opportunity to broaden our horizons and have a better understanding on culture diversities.
拓展句：Western music，which is served as a bridge ，provides us teenagers with the opportunity to broaden our horizons and have a better understanding on culture diversities.
【高分句型1】When it comes to my suggestions, I am quite interested in western music, and expect that you could deliver the lecture on this topic.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】It also gives us strength and hope when we are overcoming difficulties.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句）Unit 2 Let’s talk teens
单元写作深度指导-建议信（原卷版）
单元话题 考题展示
提建议 2024·北京·高考真题
建议信是写信人对某事提出自己的建议和忠告, 可能是写给个人, 就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点; 也可能是写给某个组织或机构, 就改进服务提出建议或忠告。 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： (1)建议投稿内容； (2)就以上建议简要说明理由。 注意：(1)词数100左右； (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
考向分析与应对策略
高考英语建议信的考查趋势显示出其作为高频作文话题的重要性。 近十年来， 尽管高考英语作文涵盖了多种类型， 如邀请信、 告知信、 求助信等， 但建议信也占据了一定的考查比例 。 这表明建议信在高考英语作文中具有不可忽视的地位。 在准备建议信时， 考生应注意其固定的结构和常用句式。 建议信通常包括开头陈述问题、 中间提出建议及理由， 以及结尾表达期望和鼓励 。 此外， 使用一般现在时或一般将来时是建议信时态的常见选择。 建议信的内容既实用又全面， 可以遵循以下几个步骤： 1.明确目的 在开始撰写之前， 明确建议信的目的和受众。 了解受众的需求和背景， 以便更好地提供有针对性的建议。 2.结构清晰 使用标准的书信格式， 包括开头、 正文和结尾。 开头部分简要介绍自己， 并说明写信的目的。 正文部分详细阐述建议， 每个建议作为一个独立的段落。 结尾部分总结建议， 并表达希望对方采纳的意愿。 3.具体详细 提供具体的建议， 而不是泛泛而谈。 用具体的例子简要支持你的建议， 增加说服力。 4.全面考虑 在提出建议时， 考虑问题的多个方面， 包括可能的影响等。 确保建议既符合实际又可行， 避免提出不切实际或难以实施的建议。 5.语言得体 使用礼貌、 专业的语言， 避免使用过于口语化或情绪化的表达。 检查语法和拼写错误， 确保信件的准确性和专业性。 6.鼓励反馈 在结尾部分， 鼓励对方提供反馈或进一步讨论你的建议。 这可以建立一种开放的沟通氛围， 并有助于你了解对方对建议的看法。
I.话题词汇
(1)give you some advice on. . . 给你一些关于……的建议
(2)spare no effort to do sth. 不遗余力去做某事
(3)as we all know 众所周知
(4)as far as I am concerned 据我所知
(5)be of great importance to 对……极其重要
(6)communicate with sb. 与某人交流
(7)had better do 最好做……
(8)take/follow my advice 采纳我的建议
(9)get along with 相处, 进展
(10)feel stressed 感到有压力的
II. 话题句式
(1) 建议信开头常用句式
①I am sorry to know that you are worried about the coming exam.
了解到你对即将到来的考试很担心我很难过。
②I’m glad that you are getting along well with your study.
我很高兴你的学业进展顺利。
③You asked me in your letter how to get on with your deskmate.
你在信中问及如何与你的同桌相处。
(2)表达建议常用句式
①You don’t have to worry about it.
你不必为此事担心。
②First of all, try to invite some of your good friends to take part in after-class activities.
首先, 尽量邀请你的一些好朋友参加课外活动。
③What’s more, help others when they’re in trouble.
更重要的是, 当别人有困难时帮助他们。
④In my opinion, you should find a chance to talk with her.
依我看来, 你应该找机会与她谈谈。
(3)建议信结尾常用句式
①I hope these suggestions will help you.
我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。
②I’m sure you’ll make it. 我确信你能行。
③I hope everything goes well with you. 我希望你万事如意。
III.模版建构
英语建议信的写法通常遵循一定的格式和要点， 以下是写作指南：
▲ 开头
1.明确写信目的： 在第一段中， 开门见山地表明写信的原因和目的。 例如， 可以提到了解对方的情况或问题， 因此写信提供建议。
常用句式： Learning/Knowing/Hearing that..., I'm writing to give you some suggestions.
2.表达关切或赞赏： 可以适当表达对收信人情况或问题的关切， 或对其请求的赞赏。
▲ 正文
1.具体说明问题： 简要回顾或说明对方遇到的问题或需要改进的地方。
2.给出具体建议：
详实充分： 建议内容要具体、 可行， 避免泛泛而谈。
诚恳礼貌： 语气要诚恳、 有礼貌， 尊重对方的意见和感受。
逻辑清晰： 使用过渡词使建议之间的逻辑清晰， 如First/Firstly, Second/Secondly, Last but not least等。
常用句式：
You should do...
You’d better do sth...
I would like to suggest that ...
3.解释建议理由： 对于每个建议， 可以简要解释其理由或好处， 增强说服力。
▲ 结尾
1.表达心愿： 简洁明了地表达希望对方能采纳建议的心愿。
常用句式： I hope you will find my suggestions/advice/tips useful/helpful.
2.结束语： 使用礼貌的结束语， 如Yours sincerely, Respectfully yours等。
【写作模版】
一、写作积累
1. Trying to be perfect is nothing too bad.（动名词短 语 Trying to be perfect 作主语）
2. Instead, it's a valuable virtue you should stick to. （you should stick to为省略了that的定语从句）
3. What you should do is just try your best. （What you should do为what引导的主语从句）
4. Please keep in mind that process is far more important than outcome. （that process is far more important than outcome为that引导的宾语从句）
二、典例分析
假定你是Teens杂志社“悄悄话（Secret Words）”的栏目编辑David，刚收到李华的一封求助信（信件内容附后）。请阅信后给他回一封信。内容包括：
1. 感谢对方信任，并表明写信目的；
2. 肯定对方的优点，并回应他的困惑；
3. 表达希望。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear David,
I’m Li Hua, a faithful reader of Teens. I’m writing to ask you for help.
I’m under psychological pressure now. To be honest, I’m a motivated boy, so I always expect myself to be perfect in every aspect. But the truth is that I can’t always satisfy myself or meet others’ expectations. I feel so tired and helpless. What should I do next Can you help me
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Dear Li Hua,
I’m glad to hear that you are a faithful reader of Teens.
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Yours sincerely,
David
第一步：审题谋篇
审题：1、审人称：第一、二人称；2、审时态：一般现在时；
谋篇布局：
第一段感谢对方信任，并表明写信目的；
第二段为主体段，肯定对方的优点并回应他的困惑；
第三段表达希望。
第二步：核心词汇
1. ask for 请求 2. pressure n. 压力
3. editor n.编辑 4. take place 发生
第三步：连词成句
1. 完成句子
（1） 追求完美没什么不好。
__________ __________ __________ __________ is nothing too bad.
（2） 相反，这是一种宝贵的美德。你应该坚持美德。
Instead, it’s a __________ virtue. You should __________ __________ the virture.
（3） 事情并不总是按计划进行。
Things do not always take place __________ __________.
（4） 你应该做的就是尽你最大的努力。
__________ __________ __________ __________ is just try your best.
（5） 过程远比结果重要。请记住这一点。
Process is __________ __________ important __________ outcome. Please keep it in mind.
2. 句式升级
（6） 将句（2）改写成含定语从句的主从复合句。
__________________________________________________________________________
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（7） 将句（5）改写成含宾语从句的主从复合句。
__________________________________________________________________________
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第四步：连句成篇
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一、单句翻译
1. 在成长的过程中, 我们经历一些身体的变化是正常的。
During the process of growing up, ___________ we experience some body changes.
2. 真正重要的是, 我们应该保持均衡的饮食。
It really matters that ___________________.
3. 除此之外, 我们经常与我们的父母或朋友发生争论。其原因是我们越来越成熟, 逐渐倾向于相信自己。
Besides, we often ___________________ our parents or friends. Because we are becoming more and more mature and gradually ___________________ ourselves.
4. 为了解决这个问题, 我认为我们应该更多地和家人、朋友及老师交流。
___________________, I think we should talk to our family, friends and teachers more.
5. 沟通是一个你向别人表达感情的重要方式, 然后他们能更好地理解你并帮助你。
Communication is an important way ___________________, and then they can understand you better and help you.
·句式升级
6. 用it is+adj. +for sb. to do. . . 升级句1
During the process of growing up, _________________________________________
7. 用what引导的名词性从句作主语升级句2
_________________________________________
8. 用the reason why. . . is that. . . 升级句3
_________________________________________
二、语篇翻译
Dear Li Hua,
How is everything going I hope _____________________(你很好). I’m fine, but tired. Right now it is the summer vacation and _____________________(我正在农场帮助我父亲). It is the time of year for the rice harvest, _____________________( 所以我每天从黎明工作到天黑). Sometimes we go on working after dark by the lights of our tractors. We grow rice in the south of the States, but in the north _____________________(在比较冷的北方, 他们种小麦). _____________________(尽管农场很大), my dad has only two men working for him.
Most Saturday evenings there is a party, even at harvest time. These parties often _____________________(使我们非常高兴). Some of my friends drink beer. I don’t, _____________________(因为聚会后我得开车回家). Hope you can join us when you pay a visit to our country.
Give my best regards to your parents.
Yours,
Tom
三．书面表达
假设你是李华,你的好朋友Jim最近经常因周末时间安排和父母争吵,请你就此情况给他写一封信,就如何与父母更好地交流提出你的建议。内容包括:
1.表示理解;2.提出建议。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【根据上述要求及提示补全语篇】
Dear Jim,
I understand quite well what you’re 1._____________________(经历,经受).It’s not unusual for us teenagers to have difficulty 2._____________________(和……友好相处) parents.
Take it easy! But remember 3._____________________(……很重要) learn to control your anger.After all, those who easily get irritated are less likely to become a good listener and communicator.Thus, when your parents 4._____________________(指责你的周末安排), don’t explode but explain tenderly and patiently.Besides, don’t forget to tell them how much you love them.
Hope you’ll find these suggestions helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
（2019·天津·高考真题）假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师Chris 将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件:
⑴你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）；
⑵选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；
⑶希望从中有何收获。
注意：
⑴词数不少于100；
⑵可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
⑶开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
I'm Li Jim, a student at Chenguang High School.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for your time.
Yours,
Li JinUnit 3 Getting along with others
单元写作深度指导-生活日记（解析版）
单元话题 考题展示
日记 （2023·陕西西安·二模）假设你是光明中学高三（1）班的学生李华，今天学校组织了消防演习。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英语日记，叙述整个演习过程，并谈谈自己的感想。 注意：（1）日记的开头已为你写好； （2）词数100词左右； （3）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 This morning, our school held a fire drill. ___________________________________________________
日记类作文在高考英语写作中是一个常见题型，主要考察学生的日常表达能力及语言组织能力。日记是十分自由的文体，无需正式的主题，主要记录个人的思想、感情及日常生活细节。内容通常包括日期、天气、活动组织（如参加人员、时间、地点）、个人经历及感受等。日记写作需要使用第一人称，以“I”为主语进行叙述；描述具体事件时，注意使用过去时态；注重细节描写，使内容更加生动、真实；表达个人感受时，要真实、自然，避免过度夸张。
考向分析与应对策略
高考英语写作日记类主题的考查特点主要体现在真实性、细节性、第一人称叙述、时态运用、语言风格以及情感表达等方面。这些特点要求学生在写作时能够真实反映生活、注重细节描写、自然运用第一人称和过去时态、运用贴近生活的语言以及表达个人情感和思考。考查特点简要分析如下： 1. 真实性 ：日记作为记录个人日常生活的文体，强调真实性。在高考英语写作中，考查学生能否真实地反映生活，表达个人情感和经历。 2. 细节性 ：日记注重细节描写，通过具体的事件、动作、感受等展现个人的日常生活。高考英语写作中，要求学生能够捕捉并描述生活中的具体细节，使文章更加生动、具体。 3. 第一人称叙述 ：日记是以第一人称“I”为主语进行叙述的，这要求学生在写作时能够自然地运用第一人称，表达个人的观点和感受。 4. 时态运用 ：日记记录的是已发生的事情，因此主要使用一般过去时。高考英语写作中，考查学生能否正确运用过去时态来描述过去的事件和经历。 5. 语言风格 ：日记的语言风格较为口语化、自然流畅。高考英语写作中，要求学生能够运用贴近生活的语言，使文章更加贴近实际、易于理解。 6. 情感表达 ：日记中应包含个人感受和反思，使内容更加丰富和有深度。在高考英语写作中，考查学生能否在描述事件的同时，表达个人的情感和思考。 英语日记写作需要关注以下几个方面： 1. 格式规范 ：日记开头需包含日期、星期及天气情况，为读者提供背景信息。 2. 时态运用 ：日记记录的是已发生的事情，因此主要使用一般过去时。 3. 人称选择 ：日记是记录个人经历和感受，因此使用第一人称。 4. 语言风格 ：日记是私人化的写作，语言应口语化、自然流畅。 5. 内容组织 ：内容通常按时间顺序组织，使用衔接词（如in the morning, at noon, in the afternoon）来连接各个时间段的活动。 6. 情感表达 ：日记中应包含个人感受和反思，使内容更加丰富和有深度。
昨天, 你与朋友因琐事发生争吵, 为此你感到很后悔。请根据下列内容提示, 以第一人称用英语写一篇日记, 表达你对朋友的歉意。
【写作示例】
[读题审题]
[激活表达]
1. 我想为昨天和朋友争吵向她道歉。
I want to apologize to my friend for quarreling with her yesterday.
2. 我对我粗鲁的话语感到惭愧, 我的话让她很心碎。
I am ashamed of my rude words and my words really broke her heart.
3. 如果不是我的粗鲁, 她就不会勃然大怒。
If it had not been for my rudeness, she would not have exploded with anger.
4. 我们已经交往八年了, 几乎形影不离, 我不想放弃我们的友谊。
We have been close for eight years and almost inseparable, and I don’t want to let go of our friendship.
5. 她总是对我很宽容, 而且我们能彼此信任和依赖。
She is always so generous to me that we can trust and count on each other.
6. 我想发自内心地向她道歉。无论如何, 有错的是我。
I want to say sorry to her from the bottom of my heart. In any case, I’m in the wrong.
7. 我真的希望她能原谅我并与我和好。
I do hope she can forgive me and make up with me.
8. 将句2改为定语从句
I am ashamed of my rude words which really broke her heart.
9. 用but for引导的虚拟语气改写句3
But for my rudeness, she would not have exploded with anger.
10. 用分词的完成时作状语改写句4
Having been close for eight years and almost inseparable, I don’t want to let go of our friendship.
[衔接成篇]
[参考范文]
March 12th, Tuesday Sunny
I want to apologize to my friend for quarreling with her yesterday. I am ashamed of my rude words which really broke her heart. But for my rudeness, she would not have exploded with anger. As far as I’m concerned, having been close for eight years and almost inseparable, I don’t want to let go of our friendship. She is always so generous to me that we can trust and count on each other. Again, I want to say sorry to her from the bottom of my heart. In any case, I’m in the wrong. I do hope she can forgive me and make up with me.
1. 话题特点
生活日记用来记述自己在日常生活中做过的、看到的或听到的有意义的事情或用来抒发自己当天对某些事情的感受以及自己将来的打算。体裁可以是记叙文、应用文、说明文、议论文等各种形式。
2. 话题词汇
(1)intend v. 打算
(2)pack vt. 包装
(3)be proud of 骄傲
(4)the importance of ……的重要性
(5)take part in 参加
(6)make up one’s mind 下定决心
(7)go in for 参加; 从事
(8)spare no effort to do sth. 不遗余力去做某事
(9)be absorbed in 专心致志于
(10)have difficulty (in) doing sth. 做某事有困难
3. 话题句式
(1) 表达感情
①I had an unforgettable trip to Cambridge today.
今天我到剑桥的旅行很难忘。
②Today is an unforgettable and significant day.
今天是难忘且意义重大的一天。
(2) 叙述经过
①Today I took part in a farm work programme in the suburbs.
今天我参加了郊区的一个农活项目。
②At the class meeting, our teacher told us about the programme with the theme “Labour is the most beautiful thing”.
在班会上, 我们的老师告诉我们节目的主题是“劳动是最美好的事情”。
③And he stressed the importance of working with our own hands.
他还强调了亲自动手的重要性。
④When I got home, I packed up my luggage for the trip.
当我回家时, 我收拾好行李准备旅行。
⑤On the farm, we helped pick watermelons. While working, I realized how hard it was to work in the fields under a hot sun.
在农场里, 我们帮忙摘西瓜。工作的时候, 我意识到在炎热的阳光下在田野里工作是多么辛苦。
(3)表达观点
①Kate is a girl who is easy to get along/on with and we all like her.
凯特是一个容易相处的女孩, 我们都喜欢她。
②As a result, from this experience I have learned it was important to work together with others.
结果, 从这次经历中我认识到与他人合作是很重要的。
(4)总结概括
If you miss this chance, I don’t think you will have a second chance to play with outstanding players.
如果你错过了这个机会, 我想你再也没有机会和优秀的球员比赛了。
4.写作模版
一、单句翻译
1．汤姆认为自信很重要，因为这一点他的同学们很崇拜他。
(attach…to, 介词+which定语从句)
2．我为自己未被允许而进入会议室向您道歉。(apologize)
3．那儿的湿度很大，所以树都长得特别高，一些高达90多米。
4．他坚持认为我犯了错误，坚持要我向他的母亲道歉．
5．没有人能确保整形手术的结果是病人确实想要的。
6．最后，需要指出的是，谨慎择友，用心经营友谊。
7．然而，我不同意他们的看法。我觉得我已经做好准备，可以肩负更多责任。
8．要想发挥自己的潜能，充分利用我们学校的资源很重要。
9．可能性无穷无尽， 而且我相信你们有能力改变你们的家庭，改变你们的社区，改变我们的国家。
10．只要你有梦想，坚持努力就一定能成功。
11．失败是成功之母。
12．我真佩服你的勇气。
13．外出吃饭是一种很好的选择，并且这和丢掉传统没有什么关系。
14．在线交流时，你永远无法百分百确定跟你聊天的人是否坦诚地表明了身份。
15．有的人在喂马，有的在练习射箭，其他人则在聊天或者拍照。
【答案与解析】
1．Tom attaches great importance to confidence, for which his classmates admire him very much.
【解析】attach importance to为固定词组，意为“认为……很重要”，本句用for which引导定语从句，for表原因，which代指前句整句内容，故可译为：Tom attaches great importance to confidence, for which his classmates admire him very much.
2．I apologize to you for entering the meeting room without (your) permission/without being permitted.
【解析】考查apologize的用法。“因做了某事而向某人道歉”应表达为apologize to somebody for doing something；“未经允许”应表达为without your permission /without being permitted。故译为： I apologize to you for entering the meeting room without your permission/ without being permitted。
3．It is so wet there that the trees are extremely tall, some measuring over 90 metres."
【解析】考查 so …that引导的结果状语从句和独立主格结构。“如此潮湿以至于树长得特别高”应表达为so wet there that the trees are extremely tall；“一些树高达90多米”可以使用独立主格作作状语成分，可表达为some trees measuring over ninety meters。故译为： It is so wet there that the trees are extremely tall, some measuring over 90 meters。
4．He insisted that I had made a serious mistake and I（should）apologize to/make an apology to his mother．
【解析】考查宾语从句和insist的用法。分析句子可知， 因事情已发生，要用一般过去时态； insist意为"坚持说"时，后接宾语从句用陈述语气，即I had made a serious mistake是陈述证据；意为"坚决要求"时，用虚拟证据，即I （should） apologize to/make an apology to his mother；make a mistake意为"犯错误"；apologize to/make an apology to意为"向……道歉"．再根据其它汉语提示。故翻译为：He insisted that I had made a serious mistake and I（should）apologize to/make an apology to his mother。
5．No one can make sure that the result of plastic surgery will be exactly what the patient has expected.
【解析】考查情态动词，宾语从句，名词，代词，一般将来时，现在完成时，表语从句。“没有人”为no one；表示“能，能够”用can；“确保”为make sure；所以主句部分为No one can make sure。根据汉语意思可知，此处为宾语从句，make sure后面用that引导的宾语从句。“结果”为result；“整形手术”为plastic surgery；“结果s病人确实想要的”描述的是将来的情况，所以用一般将来时；“确实”为exactly；从句中含有表语从句，从句部分为“病人确实想要的”，所以用what引导，“病人”为patient；“期待”为expect，此处描述的动作发生在“是”之前，表示已经发生过，所以用现在完成时，主语为the patient，所以助动词用has。故答案为No one can make sure that the result of plastic surgery will be exactly what the patient has expected.
6．Eventually, it should be pointed out that we should cautiously choose friends and develop relationships with them carefully.
【解析】考查固定句型和动词。句子开头表示“最后”应用副词eventually，作状语修饰整个句子；表示“需要指出的是……”可知句型为it should be pointed out that…；that从句中，主语为we，谓语为should choose，谨慎地为 cautiously，作状语修饰动词短语choose friends，所以“谨慎择友”翻译为：we should cautiously choose friends。“用心经营友谊”翻译成动宾结构，翻译为“develop relationships with them carefully”。“谨慎择友”与“用心经营友谊”为并列关系，用and连接。故翻译为：Eventually, it should be pointed out that we should cautiously choose friends and develop relationships with them carefully.
7．However, I disagree with them, because I feel ready to be more responsible.
【解析】考查状语从句和动词短语。句子表达个人的观点以及对现状的看法，应用一般现在时，句子为主从复合句，主句中“然而”however，位于句首，首字母大写，主句主语“我”I，句中应用动词短语disagree with sb.“不同意某人的看法”，谓语动词“不同意”disagree with，宾语“他们的看法”them，从句用because引导原因状语从句，从句主语“我”I，句中应用动词短语be ready to do sth.“做好准备作某事”，谓语动词应用感官动词feel“觉得”，表语“已经做好准备” ready，“可以肩负更多责任”应用不定式短语to be more responsible。故翻译为However, I disagree with them, because I feel ready to be more responsible.
8．To fully realize your potential, it is important for you to make the most of our school resources.
【解析】考查固定短语，不定式，时态和主谓一致。句子描述客观事实，时态用一般现在时，“要想发挥自己的潜能”用不定式表目的，“发挥自己的潜能”是fully realize your potential，“做某事很重要”是固定句型it is important for sb. to do sth.，其中it是形式主语，真正的主语是不定式，“充分利用”是固定短语make the most of，“我们学校的资源”是our school resources，因此整句话翻译为“To fully realize your potential, it is important for you to make the most of our school resources”。故答案为To fully realize your potential, it is important for you to make the most of our school resources.
9．The possibilities are endless, and I have confidence in your ability to make a difference to your family, to your community and to our country.
【解析】考查形容词，固定短语，时态和主谓一致。根据句意可知，句子描述客观事实，时态用一般现在时，“可能性”是possibility，不止一个，因此用复数，“无穷无尽”用endless作表语，主语possibilities是复数，其后be动词用are，“而且”是and，“相信”是have confidence in，“你们有能力做某事”是your ability to do sth.，“改变”是make a difference to，“你们的家庭”是your family，“你们的社区”是your community，“我们的国家”是our country，因此整句话翻译为“The possibilities are endless, and I have confidence in your ability to make a difference to your family, to your community and to our country”。故答案为The possibilities are endless, and I have confidence in your ability to make a difference to your family, to your community and to our country.
10．As long as you have a dream, keep trying and you’ll make it.
【解析】考查时态、非谓语动词、条件状语从句、固定搭配、祈使句的肯定形式。表示“只要”用as long as引导条件状语从句。条件状语从句中：表示“你”用you，作主语；表示“有梦想”用have a dream；本句描述一般事实，句子用一般现在时，主语为you，谓语用动词原形。表示“坚持努力”为主句，用祈使句的肯定形式。主句中：表示“坚持努力”用keep trying。用and连接两个句子。and后的句子中：表示“你”用you，作主语；表示“成功”用固定搭配make it，描述将来发生的事情，句子时态用一般将来时。故翻译为As long as you have a dream, keep trying and you’ll make it.
11．Failure is the mother of success.
【解析】考查名词和时态。根据句意以及句子结构可知，表示“失败”为名词Failure；表示“成功之母”为名词短语the mother of success；结合该句为陈述客观事实，所以为一般现在时。故翻译为：Failure is the mother of success.
12．I admire your courage indeed.
【解析】考查时态、名词、副词。表示“我”用I，作主语。表示“佩服”用admire，本句描述一般事实。时态用一般现在时，且主语为I，故谓语用动词原形。表示“勇气”用名词courage，表示“你的勇气”用your courage，作admire的宾语。表示“确实”用副词indeed，作状语，修饰动词admire。故翻译为I admire your courage indeed.
13．Eating out is a good choice and it has nothing to do with loss of traditions.
【解析】考查动词短语、名词、非谓语动词以及时态。句子在介绍一般性的事实，时态宜用一般现在时；“外出吃饭”可用动词短语eat out，且作主语，表示抽象概念，因此eat用动名词形式，动名词作主语，谓语动词用单数；“是”用be动词is，“一种很好的选择”可用名词短语a good choice，作表语；“并且”用连词and，“这”用代词it，作主语，“和……没有什么关系”可用动词短语have nothing to do with，have需用第三人称单数形式，“丢掉传统”可用名词短语loss of traditions，作with的宾语。故可译为：Eating out is a good choice and it has nothing to do with loss of traditions.
14．With online communication you can never be 100 percent sure that the people (that/who) you are chatting to are being honest about who they are.
【解析】考查情态动词、宾语从句、时态、形容词和名词。表示“用”用介词with。表示“在线”用形容词online，作前置定语，修饰名词“交流”。表示“交流”用名词communication，作with的宾语。表示“你”用you，作主语。表示“能够”用情态动词can 。表示“确定做某事”用be sure that...，位于情态动词can后，用动词原形。表示“从不”用副词never，作状语，修饰be sure。表示“百分百”用100 percent。从句中：表示“人们”用介词people，此处为特指，people前加the，the people作从句主语；表示“坦诚的”用形容词honest，从句表正在发生的动作，故时态用现在进行时，且主语为the people，故be动词用are；故用are being honest，形容词honest作表语；表示“关于”用介词about；about后为宾语从句；宾语从句中：表示“谁”用who，作从句主语，且引导从句；表示“他们”用代词they；表示“是”用be动词are。表示“跟你聊天的”用定语从句，定语从句中：表示“你”用有，作从句主语；表示“与某人聊天”用动词chat to sb.，表示“正在聊天”用现在进行时，主语是you，be动词用are，谓语用are chatting；先行词是people，指人，关系词代替先行词在从句中作are chatting的宾语，应用关系代词who或that引导，也可以省略引导词。故翻译为With online communication you can never be 100 percent sure that the people (that/who) you are chatting to are being honest about who they are.
15．Some were feeding their horses, some were practising archery, and others were chatting or taking photos.
【解析】考查时态和代词的用法。句子描述过去正在进行的动作，应用过去进行时，“有的……有的……其他人……”使用some..., some..., and others...，“喂马”feed their horses，其中horse是可数名词，使用复数形式表示泛指，作feed的宾语，“练习射箭”practise archery，主语是some，be动词使用were，“聊天或者拍照”chat or take photos，主语是others，be动词使用were。故翻译为Some were feeding their horses, some were practising archery, and others were chatting or taking photos.
二、语篇翻译
将语篇中的中文句子翻译成英文
One day a man was asked to paint a boat by the owner of the boat. He brought with him paint and brushes and began to paint the boat bright red, as the owner asked him. While painting the boat, he saw a hole in the boat. He repaired it at once. 16 (完成刷漆后，他拿了钱便离开了。)
The next day, the owner of the boat came to the painter’s house and presented him with a nice check, much higher than the payment of painting. 17 (油漆匠感到非常惊讶。) “You’ve already paid me for painting the boat!” he said.
“But this is not for the paint job. It’s for having repaired the hole in the boat,” the owner said.
“But it was such a small service. Certainly it is not worth paying me such a high amount for something so unimportant!”
“My dear friend, you do not understand. 18 (现在让我告诉你发生了什么。) When I asked you to paint the boat, I forgot to mention the hole. When the boat dried, my kids took the boat and went on a fishing trip. They did not know that there was a hole in the boat. I was not at home at that time. When I returned and noticed they had taken the boat, I was hopeless because I remembered that the boat had a hole. 19 (然而，让我欣喜的是，他们竟然安全回家了!) It was really unbelievable!
“ 20 (我立刻检查了这艘船，发现你已经修补了那个洞!) You see, now, what you did You saved my children! I do not have enough money to pay your ‘small’ good deed.”
So, no matter where, when or how, just carefully repair all the ‘holes’ you find.
参考词汇：finish doing; be surprised; let sb do sth; to one’s joy; immediately
【答案与解析】
16．After/When he finished painting, he took his money and left. 17．The painter was/felt very surprised. 18．Now let me tell you what happened/has happened. 19．However, to my great joy, they did return/returned home safely! 20．Immediately, I examined the boat and found that you had repaired the hole.
【解析】16．考查时间状语从句。“完成刷漆后”用after/when引导时间状语从句，时态用一般过去时，表示过去的事情，“完成刷漆”是finish painting，“他拿了钱便离开了”时态用一般过去时，翻译为he took his money and left，其中and连接并列的谓语动词，因此整句话翻译为“After/When he finished painting, he took his money and left”。故答案为After/When he finished painting, he took his money and left.
17．考查时态，形容词和主谓一致。“油漆匠感到非常惊讶”描述过去的事情，时态用一般过去时，“油漆匠”是the painter，“感到”是be动词或feel，用过去式，主语painter是单数，be动词用was，“非常惊讶”用very surprised作表语，因此整句话翻译为“The painter was/felt very surprised”。故答案为The painter was/felt very surprised.
18．考查宾语从句，时态和主谓一致。“现在”是now，“让我做某事”是let me do sth.，“告诉你”是tell you，“发生了什么”用what引导的宾语从句，时态用一般过去时或现在完成时，翻译为what happened/has happened，因此整句话翻译为“Now let me tell you what happened/has happened”。故答案为Now let me tell you what happened/has happened.
19．考查时态，介词短语和动词短语。“然而”是however，“让我欣喜的是”用固定短语to my great joy，“他们竟然安全回家了”描述过去的事情，时态用一般过去时，“安全回家”是return home safely，return用过去式，也可用“did+动词原形”表强调，因此整句话翻译为“However, to my great joy, they did return/returned home safely”。故答案为However, to my great joy, they did return/returned home safely!
20．考查时态和宾语从句。“立刻”是immediately，“检查了这艘船，发现你已经修补了那个洞”描述过去的事情，时态用一般过去时，“检查”是examine，用过去式，“这艘船”是the boat，“发现你已经修补了那个洞”用一般过去时，“发现”是find，用过去式，and连接并列谓语动词，其后用that引导的宾语从句，“你已经修补了那个洞”用过去完成时表示先于found之前发生的事情，“修补”是repair，“那个洞”是the hole，因此整句话翻译为“Immediately, I examined the boat and found that you had repaired the hole”。故答案为Immediately, I examined the boat and found that you had repaired the hole.
三．书面表达
（22-23高一下·黑龙江哈尔滨·期末）假定你是李华。上个周六你跟你的交换生朋友Mike一起去当地的养老院当志愿者。请写一篇日记，记录此次活动，内容包括：
1.活动的过程;
2.你的感受。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Saturday 27 May
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【参考范文】
Saturday 27May
Last Saturday, my friend Mike and I paid a visit to the Happiness Nursing House as volunteers to help the old there.
Excited and thrilled, we brought flowers and fruits along with our best wishes. As soon as we arrived there, we did cleaning carefully to make the houses clean and tidy. Then, we chatted with them, which made them happy and relaxed. Before we left, we took a picture with them. Tired as we felt, we thought it was worthwhile.
From this meaningful activity, I found that we should care for the old and respect them. It is also necessary to treat our own grandparents more kindly.
【写作分析】本篇书面表达是一篇开放性作文，要求考生写一篇日记，记录去当地的养老院当志愿者的经历和感受。
【要点详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：happy→delighted
应该：should→be supposed to
劳累的：tired→exhausted
值得的：worthwhile→rewarding
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Last Saturday, my friend Mike and I paid a visit to the Happiness Nursing House as volunteers to help the old there.
拓展句：Last Saturday, my friend Mike and I paid a visit to the Happiness Nursing House as volunteers so that we can help the old there.
[高分句型1]
As soon as we arrived there, we did cleaning carefully to make the houses clean and tidy.（运用了as soon as引导时间状语从句）
[高分句型2]
From this meaningful activity, I found that we should care for the old and respect them.（运用了that引导宾语从句）
观察下面四幅图片，根据图片内容，用英语写一篇日记。
注意：
1.可以适当增加细节，以使情节连贯；
2.词数100左右；
3.首句已经给出，不计入词数。
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Monday 1 January
Today was a heartwarming start to the new year as my family gathered for a special hotpot dinner.
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【参考范文】
Monday 1 January
Today was a heartwarming start to the new year as my family gathered for a special hotpot dinner. In the morning, my family of three went shopping in a nearby supermarket for groceries. We carefully selected fresh vegetables, meats, and other ingredients for the hotpot. Backing home, my dad started mopping the floor while my mom and I washed the vegetables. Everyone worked together to prepare the meal, filled with laughter and joy. Soon, the delicious hotpot was ready, and we gathered around the table with grandparents. After the meal, we took a family photo together, capturing this memorable moment.
Today’s family day was truly special. I really enjoyed the moment when all of us were together. It reminded me of the importance of spending quality time with loved ones and creating memories that will last a lifetime.
Monday 1 January
Today was a heartwarming start to the new year as my family gathered for a special hotpot dinner. Taking hot pot as our new year dinner is a crucial tradition long shared by my family. On hearing the first beep of my alarm, I fitted into my new-bought clothes and followed my parents to the supermarket for some “hotpot food.” Carrying all the dishes we love back home, we started to prepare for the big night. My mother and I were cutting the vegetable while my father had the floor mopped into a shiny mirror. At night, alongside my parents came my grandparents. We surrounded a round table where the hot pot saw us talked and laughed in high spirits. We took a photo together afterwards when we went for a joyful walk. With a first day like this, I am sure this year will be a wonderful year!
Monday 1 January
Today was a heartwarming start to the new year as my family gathered for a special hotpot dinner. The day began with a shopping for hot pot ingredients, a cherished activity that I eagerly await each year because my parents grant me the liberty to fill our cart with whatever I like in the supermarket. After our satisfying purchases, we returned home and began preparing individually. My mother and I handled the raw ingredients for the hotpot while my father was tidying up the room. The final special hotpot dinner in which all five family members participated became a celebration of the new year and love. It has not only brought happiness to me and my parents, but also touched my grandparents deeply. As we enjoyed our time together, the best thing we could do was to leave an unforgettable impression in our hearts, so we captured the moment in a photograph. What a wonderful day!
【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据图片内容，用英语写一篇日记。
【要点详解】1.词汇积累
附近的：nearby→neighbouring
挑选：select→choose
开始：start→begin
充满：filled with→full of
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句：Backing home, my dad started mopping the floor while my mom and I washed the vegetables.
拓展句：When we were back home, my dad started mopping the floor while my mom and I washed the vegetables.
【高分句型1】After the meal, we took a family photo together, capturing this memorable moment.(运用了非谓语动词作状语)
【高分句型2】I really enjoyed the moment when all of us were together.(运用了when引导的限制性定语从句)Unit 3 Getting along with others
单元写作深度指导-生活日记（原卷版）
单元话题 考题展示
日记 （2023·陕西西安·二模）假设你是光明中学高三（1）班的学生李华，今天学校组织了消防演习。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英语日记，叙述整个演习过程，并谈谈自己的感想。 注意：（1）日记的开头已为你写好； （2）词数100词左右； （3）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 This morning, our school held a fire drill. ___________________________________________________
日记类作文在高考英语写作中是一个常见题型，主要考察学生的日常表达能力及语言组织能力。日记是十分自由的文体，无需正式的主题，主要记录个人的思想、感情及日常生活细节。内容通常包括日期、天气、活动组织（如参加人员、时间、地点）、个人经历及感受等。日记写作需要使用第一人称，以“I”为主语进行叙述；描述具体事件时，注意使用过去时态；注重细节描写，使内容更加生动、真实；表达个人感受时，要真实、自然，避免过度夸张。
考向分析与应对策略
高考英语写作日记类主题的考查特点主要体现在真实性、细节性、第一人称叙述、时态运用、语言风格以及情感表达等方面。这些特点要求学生在写作时能够真实反映生活、注重细节描写、自然运用第一人称和过去时态、运用贴近生活的语言以及表达个人情感和思考。考查特点简要分析如下： 1. 真实性 ：日记作为记录个人日常生活的文体，强调真实性。在高考英语写作中，考查学生能否真实地反映生活，表达个人情感和经历。 2. 细节性 ：日记注重细节描写，通过具体的事件、动作、感受等展现个人的日常生活。高考英语写作中，要求学生能够捕捉并描述生活中的具体细节，使文章更加生动、具体。 3. 第一人称叙述 ：日记是以第一人称“I”为主语进行叙述的，这要求学生在写作时能够自然地运用第一人称，表达个人的观点和感受。 4. 时态运用 ：日记记录的是已发生的事情，因此主要使用一般过去时。高考英语写作中，考查学生能否正确运用过去时态来描述过去的事件和经历。 5. 语言风格 ：日记的语言风格较为口语化、自然流畅。高考英语写作中，要求学生能够运用贴近生活的语言，使文章更加贴近实际、易于理解。 6. 情感表达 ：日记中应包含个人感受和反思，使内容更加丰富和有深度。在高考英语写作中，考查学生能否在描述事件的同时，表达个人的情感和思考。 英语日记写作需要关注以下几个方面： 1. 格式规范 ：日记开头需包含日期、星期及天气情况，为读者提供背景信息。 2. 时态运用 ：日记记录的是已发生的事情，因此主要使用一般过去时。 3. 人称选择 ：日记是记录个人经历和感受，因此使用第一人称。 4. 语言风格 ：日记是私人化的写作，语言应口语化、自然流畅。 5. 内容组织 ：内容通常按时间顺序组织，使用衔接词（如in the morning, at noon, in the afternoon）来连接各个时间段的活动。 6. 情感表达 ：日记中应包含个人感受和反思，使内容更加丰富和有深度。
昨天, 你与朋友因琐事发生争吵, 为此你感到很后悔。请根据下列内容提示, 以第一人称用英语写一篇日记, 表达你对朋友的歉意。
【写作示例】
[读题审题]
[激活表达]
1. 我想为昨天和朋友争吵向她道歉。
I want to apologize to my friend for quarreling with her yesterday.
2. 我对我粗鲁的话语感到惭愧, 我的话让她很心碎。
I am ashamed of my rude words and my words really broke her heart.
3. 如果不是我的粗鲁, 她就不会勃然大怒。
If it had not been for my rudeness, she would not have exploded with anger.
4. 我们已经交往八年了, 几乎形影不离, 我不想放弃我们的友谊。
We have been close for eight years and almost inseparable, and I don’t want to let go of our friendship.
5. 她总是对我很宽容, 而且我们能彼此信任和依赖。
She is always so generous to me that we can trust and count on each other.
6. 我想发自内心地向她道歉。无论如何, 有错的是我。
I want to say sorry to her from the bottom of my heart. In any case, I’m in the wrong.
7. 我真的希望她能原谅我并与我和好。
I do hope she can forgive me and make up with me.
8. 将句2改为定语从句
I am ashamed of my rude words which really broke her heart.
9. 用but for引导的虚拟语气改写句3
But for my rudeness, she would not have exploded with anger.
10. 用分词的完成时作状语改写句4
Having been close for eight years and almost inseparable, I don’t want to let go of our friendship.
[衔接成篇]
[参考范文]
March 12th, Tuesday Sunny
I want to apologize to my friend for quarreling with her yesterday. I am ashamed of my rude words which really broke her heart. But for my rudeness, she would not have exploded with anger. As far as I’m concerned, having been close for eight years and almost inseparable, I don’t want to let go of our friendship. She is always so generous to me that we can trust and count on each other. Again, I want to say sorry to her from the bottom of my heart. In any case, I’m in the wrong. I do hope she can forgive me and make up with me.
1. 话题特点
生活日记用来记述自己在日常生活中做过的、看到的或听到的有意义的事情或用来抒发自己当天对某些事情的感受以及自己将来的打算。体裁可以是记叙文、应用文、说明文、议论文等各种形式。
2. 话题词汇
(1)intend v. 打算
(2)pack vt. 包装
(3)be proud of 骄傲
(4)the importance of ……的重要性
(5)take part in 参加
(6)make up one’s mind 下定决心
(7)go in for 参加; 从事
(8)spare no effort to do sth. 不遗余力去做某事
(9)be absorbed in 专心致志于
(10)have difficulty (in) doing sth. 做某事有困难
3. 话题句式
(1) 表达感情
①I had an unforgettable trip to Cambridge today.
今天我到剑桥的旅行很难忘。
②Today is an unforgettable and significant day.
今天是难忘且意义重大的一天。
(2) 叙述经过
①Today I took part in a farm work programme in the suburbs.
今天我参加了郊区的一个农活项目。
②At the class meeting, our teacher told us about the programme with the theme “Labour is the most beautiful thing”.
在班会上, 我们的老师告诉我们节目的主题是“劳动是最美好的事情”。
③And he stressed the importance of working with our own hands.
他还强调了亲自动手的重要性。
④When I got home, I packed up my luggage for the trip.
当我回家时, 我收拾好行李准备旅行。
⑤On the farm, we helped pick watermelons. While working, I realized how hard it was to work in the fields under a hot sun.
在农场里, 我们帮忙摘西瓜。工作的时候, 我意识到在炎热的阳光下在田野里工作是多么辛苦。
(3)表达观点
①Kate is a girl who is easy to get along/on with and we all like her.
凯特是一个容易相处的女孩, 我们都喜欢她。
②As a result, from this experience I have learned it was important to work together with others.
结果, 从这次经历中我认识到与他人合作是很重要的。
(4)总结概括
If you miss this chance, I don’t think you will have a second chance to play with outstanding players.
如果你错过了这个机会, 我想你再也没有机会和优秀的球员比赛了。
4.写作模版
一、单句翻译
1．汤姆认为自信很重要，因为这一点他的同学们很崇拜他。
(attach…to, 介词+which定语从句)
2．我为自己未被允许而进入会议室向您道歉。(apologize)
3．那儿的湿度很大，所以树都长得特别高，一些高达90多米。
4．他坚持认为我犯了错误，坚持要我向他的母亲道歉．
5．没有人能确保整形手术的结果是病人确实想要的。
6．最后，需要指出的是，谨慎择友，用心经营友谊。
7．然而，我不同意他们的看法。我觉得我已经做好准备，可以肩负更多责任。
8．要想发挥自己的潜能，充分利用我们学校的资源很重要。
9．可能性无穷无尽， 而且我相信你们有能力改变你们的家庭，改变你们的社区，改变我们的国家。
10．只要你有梦想，坚持努力就一定能成功。
11．失败是成功之母。
12．我真佩服你的勇气。
13．外出吃饭是一种很好的选择，并且这和丢掉传统没有什么关系。
14．在线交流时，你永远无法百分百确定跟你聊天的人是否坦诚地表明了身份。
15．有的人在喂马，有的在练习射箭，其他人则在聊天或者拍照。
二、语篇翻译
将语篇中的中文句子翻译成英文
One day a man was asked to paint a boat by the owner of the boat. He brought with him paint and brushes and began to paint the boat bright red, as the owner asked him. While painting the boat, he saw a hole in the boat. He repaired it at once. 16 (完成刷漆后，他拿了钱便离开了。)
The next day, the owner of the boat came to the painter’s house and presented him with a nice check, much higher than the payment of painting. 17 (油漆匠感到非常惊讶。) “You’ve already paid me for painting the boat!” he said.
“But this is not for the paint job. It’s for having repaired the hole in the boat,” the owner said.
“But it was such a small service. Certainly it is not worth paying me such a high amount for something so unimportant!”
“My dear friend, you do not understand. 18 (现在让我告诉你发生了什么。) When I asked you to paint the boat, I forgot to mention the hole. When the boat dried, my kids took the boat and went on a fishing trip. They did not know that there was a hole in the boat. I was not at home at that time. When I returned and noticed they had taken the boat, I was hopeless because I remembered that the boat had a hole. 19 (然而，让我欣喜的是，他们竟然安全回家了!) It was really unbelievable!
“ 20 (我立刻检查了这艘船，发现你已经修补了那个洞!) You see, now, what you did You saved my children! I do not have enough money to pay your ‘small’ good deed.”
So, no matter where, when or how, just carefully repair all the ‘holes’ you find.
参考词汇：finish doing; be surprised; let sb do sth; to one’s joy; immediately
三．书面表达
（22-23高一下·黑龙江哈尔滨·期末）假定你是李华。上个周六你跟你的交换生朋友Mike一起去当地的养老院当志愿者。请写一篇日记，记录此次活动，内容包括：
1.活动的过程;
2.你的感受。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Saturday 27 May
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观察下面四幅图片，根据图片内容，用英语写一篇日记。
注意：
1.可以适当增加细节，以使情节连贯；
2.词数100左右；
3.首句已经给出，不计入词数。
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Monday 1 January
Today was a heartwarming start to the new year as my family gathered for a special hotpot dinner.
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单元写作深度指导-发表观点（解析版）
单元话题 考题展示
发表观点 （2024·四川成都·模拟预测）目前越来越多的人使用移动支付(mobile payment)，移动支付改变了人们的生活。请根据以下要点写一篇短文： 1. 移动支付的优缺点； 2. 你的看法。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：微信 WeChat 支付宝 Alipay 二维码 QR code
发表观点类写作要求学生就某一话题或现象发表自己的看法和观点，并进行合理的论述。以下是此类写作的须注意的要点：（1） 明确观点 ：文章开头应明确提出自己的观点或看法，使读者一目了然。（2） 合理论述 ：通过举例、对比、分析等方法，对自己的观点进行合理、充分的论述，使观点更具说服力。（3） 逻辑清晰 ：文章结构应清晰明了，段落之间应有明确的逻辑关系，使读者能够轻松理解作者的思路。（4） 语言准确 ：用词应准确、恰当，符合英语表达习惯，避免使用模糊、不准确的词汇。
考向分析与应对策略
▲ 写作步骤 审题 ：仔细阅读题目，明确写作要求和话题范围。 构思 ：根据话题范围，思考自己的观点和看法，并确定论述的角度和方法。 列提纲 ：将构思的内容以提纲的形式列出，包括观点、论述点、例证等。 写作 ：根据提纲进行写作，注意段落之间的过渡和衔接，保持文章连贯性。 修改 ：写作完成后，对文章进行修改和润色，检查语法、拼写等错误，并优化语言表达。 ▲ 写作技巧 使用高级词汇和句型 ：适当使用高级词汇和复杂句型，可以提升文章的档次和表达力。 举例论证 ：通过举例来论证自己的观点，可以使文章更具说服力和生动性。 对比分析 ：通过对比分析不同观点或现象，可以突出自己观点的合理性和独特性。 引用名言或数据 ：适当引用名言或数据来支持自己的观点，可以增强文章的说服力和权威性。 ▲ 注意事项 避免跑题 ：紧扣话题范围进行写作，避免偏离主题或跑题。 注意时态和语态 ：根据文章内容需要，正确使用时态和语态，保持文章时态一致。 避免重复和冗余 ：避免使用重复或冗余的词汇和句子，保持文章简洁明了。 注意文化差异 ：在写作时，要注意中英语言和文化的差异，避免使用不恰当的词汇或表达方式。
现在越来越多的人做整形手术, 希望自己的容貌能变得更加漂亮。请对此谈谈你的看法及理由。
注意: 词数80左右。
【写作示例】
[读题审题]
[激活表达]
1. 整形手术在全世界变得如此流行。
Plastic surgery has become so popular in the world.
2. 它能把一张普通的脸变成一张非常可爱的脸。
It can turn an ordinary face to a very lovely one.
3. 我们对整形手术赞不绝口。
We sing high praises for plastic surgery.
4. 我们不应该忽视其负面影响。
We should not ignore its bad effects.
5. 最近几年有很多悲剧的事件被报道。
Many tragic incidents have been reported in recent years.
6. 有些人受伤、变瞎甚至死亡。
Some people get hurt or blind or even dead.
7. 用因果关系结构连接句1和句2。
Plastic surgery has become so popular in the world because it can turn an ordinary face to a very lovely one.
8. 用状语从句连接句3和句4。
When we sing high praises for plastic surgery, we should not ignore its bad effects.
9. 用同位语从句连接句5和句6。
Many tragic incidents have been reported in recent years that some people get hurt or blind or even dead.
[衔接成篇]
[参考范文]
Plastic surgery has become so popular in the world because it can turn an ordinary face to a very lovely one.
However, when we sing high praises for plastic surgery, we should not ignore its bad effects. The biggest one is its insecurity. Many tragic incidents have been reported in recent years that some people get hurt or blind or even dead. Another disadvantage is its untruthfulness. Many girls pay too much more attention to their face than their heart. One’s inner world is much more important than her face.
So, personally, I will not attempt it. I think it is not necessary. I love my face, my legs and any part in my body.
1. 话题特点
发表观点类文章是对某一事件或社会现象发表个人观点和看法的文章。这类文章通常分成三个部分来写: 提出问题, 分析问题, 得出结论。
2. 话题词汇
(1)increasingly popular 越来越流行
(2)bear the risk of 承担……的风险
(3)in my view 依我看
(4)benefit from 从……中受益
(5)improve one’s appearance 改善某人的形象
(6)argue 辩论
(7)hold the idea that. . . 持有……观点
(8)various senses of beauty 不同的美感
(9)a lifelong pain 终生的疼痛
(10)satisfy one’s appetite for 满足某人对……的欲望
3. 话题句式
(1)描述现象
More and more people choose to take the plastic surgery to make themselves look more perfect.
越来越多的人选择接受整形手术, 让他们自己看起来更完美。
(2)表达观点
①Every coin has two sides. 事物都有两面性。
②Plastic surgery has stepped into our life. Like a magician, it turns an ugly duckling into a beautiful swan.
整形手术已进入我们的生活。它像一位魔术师, 把丑小鸭变成了美丽的天鹅。
③Though people can make themselves look more beautiful, I don’t support the plastic surgery.
虽然人们能让自己看起来更加漂亮, 但是我不支持整形手术。
④After the surgery, there are always side effects, which haunt people all the time.
手术过后, 总会有副作用, 它们会伴随人的一生。
(3)得出结论
①Beauty is only skin-deep, as the saying goes.
就像俗语所说的那样, 外在美不过是肤浅的。
②The real beauty is from the soul.
真正的美丽是从心灵散发出来的。
4.写作模版
一、单句翻译
1．老师应该及时指出学生的错误，学生应该感谢老师并努力改正错误。
2．我们为祖国的巨大成就而自豪。
3．我们必须努力学习以不辜负老师和家长的期望。
4．不吃早饭会使你发胖，课堂上难以集中注意力。
5．青少年正值生长旺盛期，必须摄入足够的营养并保持规律的作息，包括足够的睡眠与锻炼。只有这样，才能保持健康与精力充沛。
6．让教练倍感欣慰的是，队员们并没有因为球迷的吹毛求疵而垂头丧气，而是取长补短，更加努力地训练。(make up for)
7．我母亲饮食非常均衡，这对她的健康非常有好处。(diet/benefit/which)
8．你被闪电击中的几率要比被鲨鱼攻击的可能性大30倍．
9．他的行程太紧凑，所以他的重中之重是劳逸结合。（such…that）
10．除了为知识而阅读，我们还为乐趣和灵感而阅读。(in addition to; inspiration)
11．规律地锻炼也是健康生活方式的一个重要方面。
12．她发现在国外找一份好工作极其困难。
13．通常你就是这样对待自己的。
14．消极的态度永远不会给你积极的生活。(汉译英)
15．中国交通运输的发展不仅极大地提高了公民的生活质量，而且为更可持续的未来做出了贡献。
【答案与解析】
1．Teachers should point out students’ mistakes in time while students should thank their teachers and try to correct the mistakes.
【解析】考查情态动词、名词、动词短语和时间状语从句。表示“老师”应用名词teachers；表示“应该”应用情态动词should；表示“指出”应用短语point out，位于情态动词should后面，使用动词原形；表示“学生的”应用名词students’；表示“错误”应用名词mistakes，作point out的宾语；表示“及时”用介词短语in time；表示“感激”应用动词thank；表示“努力做某事”用短语try to do sth；表示“纠正”应用动词correct。根据其他汉语提示可知，这里使用while引导时间状语从句表示同时性。故翻译为Teachers should point out students’ mistakes in time while students should thank their teachers and try to correct the mistakes。
2．We take pride in\are proud of our country’s great achievements.
【解析】考查动词时态和固定搭配。此处描述客观事实，所以应用一般现在时。表示“我们”应用we；表示“为……感到自豪”应用形容词短语be proud of或动词短语take pride in，主语为we，谓语动词用原形，表示“祖国的巨大成就”应用our country’s great achievements。再结合其它汉语意思，故翻译为We take pride in\are proud of our country’s great achievements。
3．We must work hard to live up to our teachers and parents’ expectations.
【解析】考查情态动词和动词短语。表示“我们”应用代词we；表示“必须”应用情态动词must；表示“学习”应用动词study；表示“努力”应用副词hard；表示“以不辜负”应用不定式短语to live up to；表示“老师和家长的期望”应用名词短语the expectations of our teachers and parents。根据其他汉语提示可知，这句话描述的是一般事实，因此使用一般现在时。故翻译为We must study hard to live up to the expectations of our teachers and parents。
4．Skipping breakfast can make you put on weight and have trouble concentrating in class.
【解析】考查动名词、情态动词、动词短语和并列连词。表示“不吃早饭”应用skip breakfast；表示“会”应用情态动词can；表示“使”应用动词原形make；表示“发胖”应用动词短语put on weight；表示“难以做某事”应用动词短语have trouble doing sth；表示“集中注意力”应用动词concentrate；表示“在课堂上”应用介词短语in class；两个动作之间用and连接，保持句子结构的并列性。根据其他汉语提示可知，这里使用动名词作主语。故翻译为Skipping breakfast can make you put on weight and have trouble concentrating in class。
5．Teenagers are in a period of vigorous growth. They must take in enough nutrition and keep regular hours, including enough sleep and exercise. Only in this way can they keep healthy and energetic.
【解析】考查名词、形容词、情态动词、非谓语动词和倒装句。表示“青少年”使用名词teenager；表示“处于……时期”应用短语in a period of；表示“旺盛生长”应用词组vigorous growth；表示“摄入”应用动词短语take in；表示“足够的营养”应用词组enough nutrition；表示“保持”应用动词keep；表示“规律的作息”应用词组regular hours；表示“足够的睡眠与锻炼”应用词组enough sleep and exercise；表示“保持健康和精力充沛”应用动词词组keep healthy and energetic。根据汉语提示可知，“包括”用介词including。表示“只有这样”应用Only in this way位于句首，句子使用部分倒装形式，将情态动词can置于主语they之前。句子陈述客观事实用一般现在时。故翻译为Teenagers are in a period of vigorous growth. They must take in enough nutrition and keep regular hours, including enough sleep and exercise. Only in this way can they keep healthy and energetic。
6．To the coach’s/trainer’s great relief, the team members/players did not lose heart/were not discouraged/frustrated because the fans were critical of/were particular about/found fault with them, but learned from others’ strengths to make up for their own weaknesses and trained harder. (用instead of结构亦可)
【解析】考查固定短语、状语从句和非谓语动词。根据句意，该句描述的为过去发生的事情，所以此处使用一般过去时，表示“让教练倍感欣慰的是”应为To the coach’s / trainer’s great relief，表示“队员们”应为the team members/players作主语，表示“垂头丧气”应为lose heart或者be discouraged/frustrated，表示否定意义，且为一般过去时，所以谓语动词使用否定形式，即did not lose heart/were not discouraged / frustrated；表示“因为”应为because引导的原因状语从句，表示“吹毛求疵”应为be critical of/ be particular about/find fault with them，主语为复数意义，所以be动词应为were，find使用过去式found作谓语；表示“而是取长补短，更加努力地训练”与上文为转折关系，所以使用but连接，表示“取长补短，更加努力地训练”可以译为learn from others’ strengths to make up for their own weaknesses and train harder，用于一般过去时，所以谓语动词应为过去式。故翻译为To the coach’s/trainer’s great relief, the team members/players did not lose heart/were not discouraged/frustrated because the fans were critical of/were particular about/found fault with them, but learned from others’ strengths to make up for their own weaknesses and trained harder.
7．My mother has/eats/keeps a balanced diet, which is of great benefit to her health/which benefits her health.
【解析】考查 diet; benefit 和 定语从句。“饮食均衡”应表达为have/eat/keep a balanced diet；“对……有好处”应表达为be of great benefit to…/benefit something。本句应使用非限制性定语从句来表达。故译为 ：My mother has /eats/keeps a balanced diet , which is of great benefit to her health/which benefits her health。
8．You are 30 times more likely to be hit by lightning than be attacked by a shark．
【解析】考查短语和时态。主语为you；表示“30倍”为30 times；表示“比……更有可能”短语为be likely to…than…；表示“击中”应用动词hit，与you构成被动关系，应用to be done形式；表示“闪电”为名词lightning；表示“被鲨鱼攻击”为be attacked by a shark。讲述的是一般事实，要用一般现在时态。故翻译为You are 30 times more likely to be hit by lightning than be attacked by a shark．
9．He has such a tight schedule that his top priority is to balance work and rest.
【解析】考查固定短语、状语从句、时态。表示“行程”应用schedule；表示“如此……以至于”应用连词短语such...that...；“紧凑”可翻译为tight；“他的重中之重”可翻译为his top priority；“劳逸结合”可翻译为balance work and rest，在句中作表语，使用动词不定式形式。因句子表示的是一个客观情况，谓语动词使用一般现在时。故翻译为His schedule is so tight that his top priority is to balance work and rest。
10．In addition to reading for knowledge, we read for fun and inspiration.
【解析】考查介词短语、动名词短语作宾语和时态。表示“除了……之外”应用介词短语in addition to，表示“为知识而读”应用动词短语read for knowledge，此处应用动名词形式作宾语，表示“为乐趣和灵感而读”应用动词短语read for fun and inspiration，作谓语动词，由句意此处应用一般现在时，故翻译为In addition to reading for knowledge, we read for fun and inspiration。
11．Exercising regularly is also an important aspect of a healthy lifestyle.
【解析】考查动名词短语作主语、动词时态、主谓一致和名词。表示“有规律地锻炼”应用动词短语exercise regularly，作主语用动名词形式，“是”为be动词，动名词短语作主语谓语动词应用单数，此处表示客观陈述，应用一般现在时的第三人称单数形式，表示“……的一个重要的方面”应用名词短语an important aspect of，作表语，表示“健康生活方式”应用名词短语a healthy lifestyle。故翻译为Exercising regularly is also an important aspect of a healthy lifestyle。
12．She found it extremely hard to find a good job in a foreign country.
【解析】考查动词时态、副词、形式宾语it、不定式作真正的宾语以及介词短语。表示“发现”应用动词find，作谓语动词，动作发生在过去，应用一般过去时，表示“极其”应用副词extremely，作状语，修饰形容词hard，表示“找到一份好工作”应用动词短语find a good job，此处应用不定式形式作真正的宾语，it作形式宾语，表示“在国外”应用介词短语in a foreign country，作地点状语。故翻译为She found it extremely hard to find a good job in a foreign country。
13．That is often exactly what you do to yourself.
【解析】考查what引导的表语从句和动词时态。表示“通常；经常”应用副词often，表示“就是；恰好”应用副词exactly，表示“对自己做得事情”应用what引导表语从句what you do to yourself，what在从句中作宾语，由句意谓语动词应用一般现在时，主语为that，故翻译为That is often exactly what you do to yourself。
14．A negative attitude will never give you a positive life.
【解析】考查动词时态。表示“消极的态度”应用a negative attitude；表示“从不”应用never；表示“ 给某人某物”应用give sb. sth.，此处表示将要发生的事情，使用一般将来时；表示“你”应用you；表示“积极的生活”应用a positive life。故翻译成：A negative attitude will never give you a positive life.
15．Not only has the development of transport in China greatly improved the quality of life for its citizens but also it contributed to a more sustainable future.
【解析】考查部分倒装、名词短语、副词、动词短语和时态及形容词。表示“不仅……而且……”应用not only... but also...，位于句首，not only部分使用部分倒装，表示“交通运输的发展”应用名词短语the development of transport，作主语；表示“提高”应用动词improve，作谓语动词，由句意此处应用现在完成时，表示对现在造成的影响；表示“极大地”应用副词greatly，作状语，修饰谓语动词improve；表示“生活质量”应用名词短语the quality of life ，作宾语；表示“公民”应用名词citizen，此处应用复数形式；表示“为……做出贡献”应用动词短语contribute to，作谓语动词，由句意此处应用一般过去时；表示“可持续的”应用形容词sustainable ，此处应用比较级形式more sustainable作定语，修饰名词future。故翻译为Not only has the development of transport in China greatly improved the quality of life for its citizens but also it contributed to a more sustainable future。
二、语篇翻译
关于成功学的书在中国一直很流行，原因就是人们想当然的认为成功等同于发财。但是他们忽视了一个事实：成功人士的奋斗史（striving）其实只不过是被美化的回忆而已。实际上，只有当你足够了解他们，你才知道他们获得成功有多么困难。
【答案与解析】
Books about how to be successful have gained great popularity in China, because people take it for granted that success equals getting rich. However, they ignore one fact:the striving of successful people is just beautified memory. Actually, only when you know them well enough will you know the difficulty they had achieving success.
【解析】段落翻译时，首先要注意不能有语义上的变化，其次，在保证句子没有语法错误的时候，要尽量使用更英式的翻译。 考查名词、不定式、时态和固定句式。
关于成功学的书表达为：Books about how to be successful，其中疑问词how+不定式作介词宾语；
在中国很流行表达为：gain great popularity in China，“一直”表明用现在完成时；
原因就是人们想当然的认为成功等同于发财表达为：because people take it for granted that success equals getting rich，剧中涉及固定句型：take it for granted that...认为……理所当然，其中it作形式宾语，that从句是真正的主语；
但是他们忽视了一个事实：成功人士的奋斗史（striving）其实只不过是被美化的回忆而已表达为：However, they ignore one fact:the striving of successful people is just beautified memory；
实际上，只有当你足够了解他们，你才知道他们获得成功有多么困难表达为：Actually, only when you know them well enough will you know the difficulty they had achieving success，only+状语（从句）位于句首，要采用部分倒装。
三．书面表达
你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Grow Up Healthy为题,写一篇发言稿参赛,内容包括:
1.简述现状:吃垃圾食品;缺乏锻炼;游戏上瘾……
2.提出建议:健康饮食;锻炼;少玩游戏;心态……
3.发起倡议。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
【写作示例】
[激活表达]
根据汉语提示补全句子。
①随着我们长大,我们被期望过上健康的生活。
As we grow up, we are expected to lead a healthy life.
②人们越来越担心,像吃垃圾食品、缺乏锻炼和沉迷于网络游戏等问题仍然存在于我们青少年中。
There is a growing concern that problems like eating junk food, lacking exercise and being addicted to online games still exist among us teenagers.
③为了改善目前的状况,我建议我们坚持健康的饮食和经常锻炼。健康的饮食和规律的锻炼可以为我们创造奇迹。
To improve the present situation, I suggest that we stick to a healthy diet and regular exercise. A healthy diet and regular exercise can work wonders for us.
④少接触电子设备对我们的身心健康都有好处。
Less exposure to electronic devices will do good to both our mental and physical health.
⑤更重要的是,当我们面临挑战时,我们应该学会看到光明的一面,保持积极的态度。
More importantly, we should learn to look at the bright side and stay positive when we are facing challenges.
To improve the present situation, I suggest that we stick to a healthy diet and regular exercise, which can work wonders for us.
⑦用省略句改写⑤中的句子。
More importantly, we should learn to look at the bright side and stay positive when facing challenges.
[衔接成篇]
Grow Up Healthy
Good morning, everyone!
As we grow up, we are expected to lead a healthy life.However, there is a growing concern that problems like eating junk food, lacking exercise and being addicted to online games still exist among us teenagers.
To improve the present situation, I suggest that we stick to a healthy diet and regular exercise, which can work wonders for us.Besides, less exposure to electronic devices will do good to both our mental and physical health.More importantly, we should learn to look at the bright side and stay positive when facing challenges.
In conclusion, let’s take action from this very moment to grow up healthy and sound.
That’s all.Thank you.
（2024·陕西西安·模拟预测）孩子的成长和教育是社会热议的话题，现今父母包揽一切、孩子过度依赖等现象十分严重。请阅读下面这幅漫画，按要求用英文写一篇短文。
要求：1.描述漫画内容；2.分析漫画所揭示的问题；3.提出你的看法。
注意：1.考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯;
2.词数100左右;
参考词汇： pave vt. 铺设；为…铺平道路;
Pave the way
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【参考范文】
Pave the way
From the picture we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet. The son, well dressed, waves proudly in the middle while the father behind bends forward to hold the jacket and the mother in front rolls out the carpet, sweating.
It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that children are the focus of families, shouldering the hope of their parents. Parents arrange everything for their children and spare no effort to pave the way for their success. As a consequence, children become so reliant on their parents that they have no independent thought or creative ideas.
Such a situation is of great concern. In my opinion, over protection and too much care are extremely bad for children’s development. Instead of doing everything for them, parents should encourage their children to overcome difficulties and inspire them to develop by themselves. Only in this way can they grow up to be independent and become truly successful. (157 words)
【写作分析】本篇书面表达图画作文。要求考生就漫画中描述的父母包揽一切、孩子过度依赖等现象进行描述，分析漫画所揭示的问题并阐述自己的观点。
【要点详解】1.词汇积累
安排：arrange→schedule
后果：consequence→result
独立：independent→individual
克服：overcome→conquer
2.句式拓展
同义句替换
原句：Parents arrange everything for their children and spare no effort to pave the way for their success.
同义句：Parents go to great lengths to organize everything for their children and leave no stone unturned in facilitating their success.
【高分句型1】As a consequence, children become so reliant on their parents that they have no independent thought or creative ideas. (运用了so…that引导的结果状语从句)
【高分句型2】Only in this way can they grow up to be independent and become truly successful. (运用了Only+状语引导的部分倒装)Unit 4 Looking good, feeling good
单元写作深度指导-发表观点（原卷版）
单元话题 考题展示
发表观点 （2024·四川成都·模拟预测）目前越来越多的人使用移动支付(mobile payment)，移动支付改变了人们的生活。请根据以下要点写一篇短文： 1. 移动支付的优缺点； 2. 你的看法。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：微信 WeChat 支付宝 Alipay 二维码 QR code
发表观点类写作要求学生就某一话题或现象发表自己的看法和观点，并进行合理的论述。以下是此类写作的须注意的要点：（1） 明确观点 ：文章开头应明确提出自己的观点或看法，使读者一目了然。（2） 合理论述 ：通过举例、对比、分析等方法，对自己的观点进行合理、充分的论述，使观点更具说服力。（3） 逻辑清晰 ：文章结构应清晰明了，段落之间应有明确的逻辑关系，使读者能够轻松理解作者的思路。（4） 语言准确 ：用词应准确、恰当，符合英语表达习惯，避免使用模糊、不准确的词汇。
考向分析与应对策略
▲ 写作步骤 审题 ：仔细阅读题目，明确写作要求和话题范围。 构思 ：根据话题范围，思考自己的观点和看法，并确定论述的角度和方法。 列提纲 ：将构思的内容以提纲的形式列出，包括观点、论述点、例证等。 写作 ：根据提纲进行写作，注意段落之间的过渡和衔接，保持文章连贯性。 修改 ：写作完成后，对文章进行修改和润色，检查语法、拼写等错误，并优化语言表达。 ▲ 写作技巧 使用高级词汇和句型 ：适当使用高级词汇和复杂句型，可以提升文章的档次和表达力。 举例论证 ：通过举例来论证自己的观点，可以使文章更具说服力和生动性。 对比分析 ：通过对比分析不同观点或现象，可以突出自己观点的合理性和独特性。 引用名言或数据 ：适当引用名言或数据来支持自己的观点，可以增强文章的说服力和权威性。 ▲ 注意事项 避免跑题 ：紧扣话题范围进行写作，避免偏离主题或跑题。 注意时态和语态 ：根据文章内容需要，正确使用时态和语态，保持文章时态一致。 避免重复和冗余 ：避免使用重复或冗余的词汇和句子，保持文章简洁明了。 注意文化差异 ：在写作时，要注意中英语言和文化的差异，避免使用不恰当的词汇或表达方式。
现在越来越多的人做整形手术, 希望自己的容貌能变得更加漂亮。请对此谈谈你的看法及理由。
注意: 词数80左右。
【写作示例】
[读题审题]
[激活表达]
1. 整形手术在全世界变得如此流行。
Plastic surgery has become so popular in the world.
2. 它能把一张普通的脸变成一张非常可爱的脸。
It can turn an ordinary face to a very lovely one.
3. 我们对整形手术赞不绝口。
We sing high praises for plastic surgery.
4. 我们不应该忽视其负面影响。
We should not ignore its bad effects.
5. 最近几年有很多悲剧的事件被报道。
Many tragic incidents have been reported in recent years.
6. 有些人受伤、变瞎甚至死亡。
Some people get hurt or blind or even dead.
7. 用因果关系结构连接句1和句2。
Plastic surgery has become so popular in the world because it can turn an ordinary face to a very lovely one.
8. 用状语从句连接句3和句4。
When we sing high praises for plastic surgery, we should not ignore its bad effects.
9. 用同位语从句连接句5和句6。
Many tragic incidents have been reported in recent years that some people get hurt or blind or even dead.
[衔接成篇]
[参考范文]
Plastic surgery has become so popular in the world because it can turn an ordinary face to a very lovely one.
However, when we sing high praises for plastic surgery, we should not ignore its bad effects. The biggest one is its insecurity. Many tragic incidents have been reported in recent years that some people get hurt or blind or even dead. Another disadvantage is its untruthfulness. Many girls pay too much more attention to their face than their heart. One’s inner world is much more important than her face.
So, personally, I will not attempt it. I think it is not necessary. I love my face, my legs and any part in my body.
1. 话题特点
发表观点类文章是对某一事件或社会现象发表个人观点和看法的文章。这类文章通常分成三个部分来写: 提出问题, 分析问题, 得出结论。
2. 话题词汇
(1)increasingly popular 越来越流行
(2)bear the risk of 承担……的风险
(3)in my view 依我看
(4)benefit from 从……中受益
(5)improve one’s appearance 改善某人的形象
(6)argue 辩论
(7)hold the idea that. . . 持有……观点
(8)various senses of beauty 不同的美感
(9)a lifelong pain 终生的疼痛
(10)satisfy one’s appetite for 满足某人对……的欲望
3. 话题句式
(1)描述现象
More and more people choose to take the plastic surgery to make themselves look more perfect.
越来越多的人选择接受整形手术, 让他们自己看起来更完美。
(2)表达观点
①Every coin has two sides. 事物都有两面性。
②Plastic surgery has stepped into our life. Like a magician, it turns an ugly duckling into a beautiful swan.
整形手术已进入我们的生活。它像一位魔术师, 把丑小鸭变成了美丽的天鹅。
③Though people can make themselves look more beautiful, I don’t support the plastic surgery.
虽然人们能让自己看起来更加漂亮, 但是我不支持整形手术。
④After the surgery, there are always side effects, which haunt people all the time.
手术过后, 总会有副作用, 它们会伴随人的一生。
(3)得出结论
①Beauty is only skin-deep, as the saying goes.
就像俗语所说的那样, 外在美不过是肤浅的。
②The real beauty is from the soul.
真正的美丽是从心灵散发出来的。
4.写作模版
一、单句翻译
1．老师应该及时指出学生的错误，学生应该感谢老师并努力改正错误。
2．我们为祖国的巨大成就而自豪。
3．我们必须努力学习以不辜负老师和家长的期望。
4．不吃早饭会使你发胖，课堂上难以集中注意力。
5．青少年正值生长旺盛期，必须摄入足够的营养并保持规律的作息，包括足够的睡眠与锻炼。只有这样，才能保持健康与精力充沛。
6．让教练倍感欣慰的是，队员们并没有因为球迷的吹毛求疵而垂头丧气，而是取长补短，更加努力地训练。(make up for)
7．我母亲饮食非常均衡，这对她的健康非常有好处。(diet/benefit/which)
8．你被闪电击中的几率要比被鲨鱼攻击的可能性大30倍．
9．他的行程太紧凑，所以他的重中之重是劳逸结合。（such…that）
10．除了为知识而阅读，我们还为乐趣和灵感而阅读。(in addition to; inspiration)
11．规律地锻炼也是健康生活方式的一个重要方面。
12．她发现在国外找一份好工作极其困难。
13．通常你就是这样对待自己的。
14．消极的态度永远不会给你积极的生活。(汉译英)
15．中国交通运输的发展不仅极大地提高了公民的生活质量，而且为更可持续的未来做出了贡献。
二、语篇翻译
关于成功学的书在中国一直很流行，原因就是人们想当然的认为成功等同于发财。但是他们忽视了一个事实：成功人士的奋斗史（striving）其实只不过是被美化的回忆而已。实际上，只有当你足够了解他们，你才知道他们获得成功有多么困难。
三．书面表达
你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Grow Up Healthy为题,写一篇发言稿参赛,内容包括:
1.简述现状:吃垃圾食品;缺乏锻炼;游戏上瘾……
2.提出建议:健康饮食;锻炼;少玩游戏;心态……
3.发起倡议。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
（2024·陕西西安·模拟预测）孩子的成长和教育是社会热议的话题，现今父母包揽一切、孩子过度依赖等现象十分严重。请阅读下面这幅漫画，按要求用英文写一篇短文。
要求：1.描述漫画内容；2.分析漫画所揭示的问题；3.提出你的看法。
注意：1.考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯;
2.词数100左右;
参考词汇： pave vt. 铺设；为…铺平道路;
Pave the way
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