Unit 1 Lights, camera, action!
单元写作深度指导-写影评（解析版）
1.(教材原句)The Prince has given up hope of a cure but his wife, Elizabeth, takes him to see Lionel Logue, an Australian speech doctor living in London.亲王已经放弃了治疗的希望,但他的妻子伊丽莎白带他去见了莱昂内尔·洛格,这是一位澳大利亚语言治疗师,当时住在伦敦。
【写作借鉴】
a cure for sth. 医治某种病的疗法
cure sb.of sth. 治愈某人的病;改掉某人的坏习惯
▲ 常见的“动词+sb.+of+sth.”的结构还有:
①remind sb.of sth. 提醒某人某事
②warn sb.of sth. 警告某人某事
③rob sb.of sth. 抢劫某人某物
④inform sb.of sth. 通知某人某事
⑤cheat sb.of sth. 欺骗某人某事
⑥suspect sb.of sth. 怀疑某人某事
2.(教材原句) The film looks like a fairly typical historical film without fancy special effects, and it is made enjoyable by the performances of the main actors.这部电影看上去像一部颇为典型的历史剧,没有复杂的特效,而几位主演的出色演技令这部电影十分精彩。
【写作借鉴】
(1)be typical of sb./sth. 是……的特点
It is typical of sb.to do sth. 某人一向……
(2)typically adv.典型地;有代表性地;一向如此
▲句型It is typical of sb.to do sth.可以转换为“Typically,+句子”的形式。
①(应用文之建议信)学生在期末考试前看书熬到深夜是很典型的。
→It is typical of students to stay up reading till late night before the final exam.
→Typically, students stay up reading till late night before the final exam.
②Typically, he always plays jokes on others.
→It is typical of him to play jokes on others.(用It作形式主语改写)
3.(教材原句)All in all, I highly recommend this film.总之,我强烈推荐这部电影。
(应用文之建议信)I strongly recommend developing a good habit of going for a walk after supper for the sake of your health.为了你的健康,我强烈建议养成晚饭后散步的好习惯。
【写作借鉴】
(1)recommend sth.to sb. 向某人推荐某物
recommend sb.as... 推荐某人担任……
recommend doing sth. 建议做某事
recommend sb.to do sth. 推荐某人做某事
recommend sb.for the job 推荐某人担任此职
recommend that...=It is recommended that... 建议……
(2)recommendation n.推荐,建议
▲recommend后接从句时,从句谓语动词要用(should)do结构。recommend作“推荐,举荐”讲时,不能说recommend sb.sth.
(应用文之建议信)我建议把机器尽快检修一下。
→I recommend the machines to be checked as soon as possible.
→I recommend that the machines (should) be checked as soon as possible.
4.(教材原句)In the meantime, Hooper skilfully creates uncertainty and tension with narrow indoor sets and dark lighting.与此同时,胡珀巧妙地利用狭窄的室内布景和昏暗的灯光来营造不确定性和紧张感。
【写作借鉴】
(1)have a narrow escape 死里逃生,险些遇险
a narrow victory/defeat 险胜/惜败
(2)narrow the gap 缩小差距
(3)narrowly adv.勉强地;狭隘地
▲(应用文之建议信)父母和孩子应该多交流,缩小他们之间的差距,这样他们才能更好地理解彼此。
Parents and children should communicate more to narrow the gap between them so that they can understand each other better.
【题型技巧】
1.题型特点
一般来说,影评属于议论文的一种。影视评论就是观看者在看完电影后,将其感想以文字的形式呈现出来,来发表自己的观点和看法。
2.结构安排
影评适宜用“三段式”写法:
第一段:背景(setting)简介,即对电影的名称、导演、特点等做简单介绍。
第二段:情节概述(main plot of the film),包括主要演员及故事梗概。电影的情节概述不宜太长,只需把自己要评论的内容突出即可。
第三段:观后感及评论(comment/review),可以选择性地从不同角度,如电影的主题、情节、人物形象的塑造、语言风格、演员的演技、画面特点、场景的设置、颜色的搭配或拍摄的理念等方面有针对性地发表个人看法,但不要面面俱到。最后对电影进行总体评价。如果认为有必要,也可推荐其他人观看。
3.突破策略
写影评时要注意紧扣“电影”与“评论”两点,评论可以从多方面进行,但一篇评论的中心观点只能有一个。在写作手法上要注意两点:一是点面结合;二是观点和材料的统一。
“点面结合”就是要对你所评论的电影先做一个总体介绍,如电影的导演、主要演员、主要情节等,这是“面”的介绍;然后结合某一情节或某一段对话、某一个场面、某一细节、某一事物进行具体分析,这是“点”的评论。
观点和材料的统一就是要树立明确的观点,然后引用电影中的具体情节加以分析。
【语料积累】
1.教材词汇
(1)comedy n. 喜剧片,喜剧
(2)fantasy n. 幻想作品;幻想,想象
(3)horror n. 恐怖电影(或故事等);震惊,恐惧
(4)actually adv. 实际上,事实上
(5)familiar adj. 熟悉的,常见的
(6)factor n. 因素,要素
(7)visual adj.视力的,视觉的
(8)studio n. 电影摄影棚;录音室
(9)enable vt. 使能够,使可行
(10)prefer vt. 较喜欢,更喜欢
(11)creative adj.创造性的,创作的;有创造力的
(12)angle n. 角度;立场,观点
(13)ensure vt.保证,确保
(14)award n. 奖,奖品,奖金vt. 授予,给予
(15)adapt vt.改编,改写;使适应 vi.适应
(16)recommend vt.推荐,举荐
2.常用词块
(1)be based on 以……为基础
(2)be directed by 由……导演
(3)learn from... 从……中学习
(4)be popular with... 受……欢迎
(5)be set in 以……为背景
(6)the martial arts 武术
(7)romantic scenes 浪漫的场景
(8)play the part of 扮演
(9)the most exciting moments 最激动人心的时刻
(10)behind the scenes 在后台,在幕后
(11)not to mention 更不用说,且不说
(12)do justice to 恰当处理(某人或某事);公平对待(某人或某事),给予公正的评价
(13)in addition to 除……以外(还)
(14)pull up 停车,停止
3.常用句式
(1)开篇常用句型:
The new Chinese TV series is making waves in China and abroad.There must be more stories behind the scenes.这部新的中国电视剧在国内外掀起了波澜,其幕后一定有更多故事。
(2)主体部分常用句型:
①He has great chemistry with Rush and Bonham Carter,whose characters are both very believable.
他与拉什和博纳姆·卡特之间关系很好,他们的角色都非常可信。
②Based on a true story, the film is set in London in the 1930s.影片根据真实故事改编,背景设定在20世纪30年代的伦敦。
③The film was adapted from a novel,which told that a couple adopted a flexible way to bring up their adopted son,who gradually adapted to his new family.这部电影是由一部小说改编来的,它讲述了一对夫妇采用一种灵活的方法来抚养他们收养的儿子,使他逐渐适应了他的新家庭的故事。
④This film tells us a story about how a common panda becomes a real dragon warrior.
这部电影为我们讲述了一个平凡的熊猫是怎样成为一个真正的龙武士的。
⑤What I have to admit is that this movie is wonderful,such as its advanced digital video effect and the worry about the future of human beings.
我不得不承认的是这部电影很不错,比如它先进的数字视频特效和对于人类未来的担忧。
(3)结尾常用句型:
The film is well worth seeing,as it carried the main idea that justice can always beat evil.
这部电影很值得观看,因为它主要告诉我们正义一定会战胜邪恶。
(2024·南通高一检测)假如你最近看了电影《泰坦尼克号》(Titanic),请根据以下内容写一篇评论。
影片 信息 影片于1997年在美国上映,由詹姆斯·卡梅隆(James Cameron)执导,莱昂纳多·迪卡普里奥(Leonardo DiCaprio)和凯特·温斯莱特(Kate Winslet)领衔主演杰克和露丝。
影片 主要 内容 影片讲述了一个感人的故事,杰克与露丝在巨轮上坠入爱河,但泰坦尼克号却撞上了冰山。在泰坦尼克号即将沉没的时候,杰克把生的机会留给了露丝。
你的 评价 ……
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【写作示例】
Step 1:读题布局
Step 2:词句激活
1.最近,我看了电影《泰坦尼克号》,这是一部根据真实事件改编的电影。
Recently,I watched the movie Titanic, which is a film adapted from a true event.
2.这部电影由詹姆斯·卡梅隆执导,莱昂纳多·迪卡普里奥和凯特·温斯莱特主演。
The film is directed by James Cameron and starring Leonardo DiCaprio and Kate Winslet.
3.当泰坦尼克号即将沉没时,杰克放弃了生存的机会,把它留给了露丝。
As the Titanic was about to sink, Jack gave up his chance to survive and left it to Rose.
4.在我看来,《泰坦尼克号》是一部集浪漫、悲剧和史诗于一体的杰作。
In my opinion, Titanic is a masterpiece that combines romance, tragedy, and epic proportions.
5.这是一部值得观看和记住的电影,它将永远是电影史上的经典之一。
It is a film that is worth watching and remembering, and it will always be one of the classics in the history of cinema.
Step 3:衔接成篇
Recently, I watched the movie Titanic, which is a film adapted from a true event, directed by James Cameron and starring Leonardo DiCaprio and Kate Winslet.The film was released in the United States in 1997 and is still loved by many people.
The film tells a deeply touching story.Jack and Rose met and fell in love on the Titanic, but the ship unfortunately collided with an iceberg.As the Titanic was about to sink, Jack gave up his chance to survive and left it to Rose.
In my opinion, Titanic is a masterpiece that combines romance, tragedy, and epic proportions.It is a film that is worth watching and remembering, and it will always be one of the classics in the history of cinema.
1．请根据下面的提示写一篇电影《功夫熊猫》(Kung Fu Panda)的影评。
1.动画电影《功夫熊猫》取材于中国文化。
2.情景:一个平凡的熊猫成为一个龙武士的故事。师傅起初不认为熊猫能成为龙武士,但是通过不断的努力,他最后得到了师傅的认可,并打败了他们的敌人——老虎。
3.主题:只要努力,每个人都能成功。
注意:词数80左右。
提示词:师傅master;龙武士 dragon warrior
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2．根据电影《哈利·波特》的简介，写一篇英语短文。
1．根据英国作家J.K. Rowling的小说改编，由Chris Columbus执导。
2．哈利失去双亲，在姨母家受虐待，11岁生日时被邀请到Hogwarts魔法学校上学，这是一个神奇莫测的魔幻世界。
3．在Hogwarts，哈利学习了魔法，经历了许多冒险和神奇的事，并交了一些好朋友，同时学会了怎样获得真正的友谊，学会了勇敢。
4．这是一部非常成功的电影，风靡全世界。通过这部电影，我们学会了相信自己和帮助别人。
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3．当前不少文学作品被改编成电影。有人选择看电影，有人选择读原著。请你以“Film or Book，Which Do You Prefer？”为题，按照下列要点写一篇英语短文：
1．看电影：省时、有趣、易懂
2．读原著：细节更多、语言优美
3．你的看法及理由：……
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．文章题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：原著original work/book in the original
Film or Book, Which Do You Prefer
Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original.
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4．请根据下面的材料，写一篇80词左右的短文，介绍电影《夜宴》。
Night Banquet《夜宴》
Stars(Cast)：Zhang Ziyi(章子怡)，Daniel Wu(吴彦祖)，Zhou Xun(周迅)，Ge You(葛优)
Director：Feng Xiaogang(冯小刚)
Plot：这部电影取材于莎士比亚(Shakespeare)的《哈姆雷特》(Hamlet)。故事以五代十国为背景，通过争斗、舞蹈和讲故事的方式，讲述了宫廷中人与人之间争权夺利的故事，最后在一次夜宴上他们一个一个地死去。
Review & comments：这是一部历史武打题材的电影。冯小刚用激动人心的故事向我们诠释了正义和勇气的含义。这部电影堪称精品，百看不厌。
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5．你班上周末观看了科幻电影《流浪地球》。请你根据以下要点，写一篇80词左右的电影介绍。
1.根据中国当代科幻作家刘慈欣的小说改编。
2.即将消亡的太阳成为地球的主要威胁，人类拯救地球。
3.人们建造了一个巨大的引擎系统，把地球从即将消亡的太阳那里推开。
4.《流浪地球》被认为是一部表现中国人与家园紧密联系的电影。
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6．请根据以下关于电影《ET外星人》的简介，用英语写一篇电影评论。
A Film Review
片名（Name）：《ET外星人》(ET)
导演（Director）：史蒂文·斯皮尔伯格(Steven Spielberg)
剧情梗概：外星人(ET)误留在地球上，Elliott (Henry Thomas饰)把他秘密留在家里躲避成年人。ET和Elliott成为好朋友，分享痛苦与快乐，最后几个孩子准备冒险送ET返回自己的星球。
评价(Comment)：本片美丽而感人；告诫人们友谊和爱是人生最重要的。
注意：词数80个左右。
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7．假设你是李华，你校英文报正在举办以“我说电影”为主题的征文活动，请你针对自己喜欢的电影写一篇影评并投稿。内容包括：
1.电影的简单介绍；
2.你的评价。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
8．前段时间的热映电影《热辣滚烫》揭示出当代社会中的一种“喜闻乐见”的讨好型人格，请写一篇文章包括以下要点：
1. 讨好型人格的定义和特点。
2. 形成这种人格的可能原因。
3. 它可能带来的负面影响。
4. 如何克服这种人格并变得更加自信和独立。
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参考答案
1．
Kung Fu Panda,a famous cartoon film with many Chinese elements, was released in June,2008.
This film tells us a story about how an ordinary panda becomes a real dragon warrior. At the beginning, the master did not believe the panda can be a dragon warrior. But with the panda’s hard work, he wins the master’s acceptance. The master tries his best to train the panda into a real warrior. Finally, the panda defeated their biggest enemy, the tiger.
This film shows that as long as we work hard, everyone can succeed.
【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生根据下面的提示写一篇电影《功夫熊猫》(KungFuPanda)的影评。
【要点详解】1.词汇积累
上映：released→ showed
尽他最大的努力做某事：tries his best to do→ makes his effort to do
最终：Finally→ In the end
打败：defeated→ beated
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Kung Fu Panda, a famous cartoon film with many Chinese elements, was released in June, 2008.
拓展句：Kung Fu Panda, which is a famous cartoon film with many Chinese elements, was released in June, 2008.
【高分句型1】This film tells us a story about how an ordinary panda becomes a real dragon warrior.（运用了连接副词how引导的宾语从句。）
【高分句型2】This film shows that as long as we work hard, everyone can succeed.（运用了连接词that引导的宾语从句以及as long as引导的条件状语从句。）
2．Harry Potter is a fairy tale which is based on the novel of the English writer J.K. Rowling and directed by Chris Columbus.
In the movie, Harry, whose parents are dead, is badly treated at his aunt’s home.But fortunately, on his birthday of eleven, he is invited to go to Hogwarts, a magic school.
It is a world full of magic and wonders, where Harry learns magic, has many adventurous and wonderful experiences and makes several good friends.He also learns how to get true friendship and how to be brave.
The movie Harry Potter is a great success and it is popular with people all over the world.It’s well worth seeing.Through it, we learn to believe in ourselves and help others.
【写作分析】本篇书面表达是一篇说明文，要求考生根据电影《哈利·波特》的简介，写一篇英语短文。
【要点详解】1.词汇积累
以……为基础：be based on→be on the basis of
值得做某事：be worth doing sth.→deserve to do sth.
充满：be full of→be filled with
帮助：help→assist
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句：The movie Harry Potter is a great success and it is popular with people all over the world. It’s well worth seeing.
拓展句：The movie Harry Potter, which is well worth seeing, is a great success and it is popular with people all over the world.
[高分句型1]
In the movie, Harry, whose parents are dead, is badly treated at his aunt’s home.（运用了whose引导非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]
Harry Potter is a fairy tale which is based on the novel of the English writer J.K. Rowling and directed by Chris Columbus.（运用了which引导限制性定语从句）
3．Film or Book, Which Do You Prefer
Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story. Besides, the film is usually more interesting，and it is easier to follow.
However, some others have just the opposite opinion. They think that they can get more detailed information from the original. Meanwhile, the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful.
Personally，I agree with the second view. Actually I have more reasons for it.I think I can stay at home, reading quietly in a situation of my own，and what's more，I am able to better understand the author's ideas. In a word，to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it.
【要点详解】本文书面表达属于应用文，根据要求写一篇英语短文。
第1步：根据提示可知，本篇是一篇英语短文：当前不少文学作品被改编成电影。有人选择看电影，有人选择读原著。请你以“Film or Book，Which Do You Prefer？”为题，按照下列要点写一篇英语短文：看电影：省时、有趣、易懂；读原著：细节更多、语言优美；你的看法及理由：……。
第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如：the opposite opinion（反对意见）；detailed information（详细信息）；in a situation of my own（在我自己的境况）；等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。文中使用高级词汇、短语和句子。The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story.固定句式，that引导表语从句；They think that they can get more detailed information from the original.文中使用宾语从句；另外，Besides, However, Meanwhile, Personally，what's more，In a word，等的运用为文章增色添彩。
4．Night Banquet is a history and martial arts film. It is another masterpiece directed by Feng Xiaogang. Zhang Ziyi, Zhou Xun,Ge You, and Daniel Wu star in the film.
The plot of Night Banquet, which is based on Shakespeare’s Hamlet, is set in ancient China during the Period of Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms. Through fighting, dancing and storytelling, it tells of a fight for rights and interests in the court between different people. Finally they died off at a night banquet.
Feng Xiaogang has used an exciting story to examine the ideas of courage and justice. It is a masterpiece and worth seeing again and again, so I’d like to recommend it to you all.
【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生根据下面的材料，写一篇80词左右的短文，介绍电影《夜宴》。
【要点详解】1.词汇积累
最终：Finally→ At last
审视，检查：examine → inspect
令人兴奋的：exciting→ thrilling
杰作：masterpiece→ masterwork
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：It is another masterpiece directed by Feng Xiaogang. Zhang Ziyi, Zhou Xun,Ge You, and Daniel Wu star in the film.
拓展句：It is another masterpiece, which is directed by Feng Xiaogang. Zhang Ziyi, Zhou Xun,Ge You, and Daniel Wu star in the film.
【高分句型1】The plot of Night Banquet, which is based on Shakespeare’s Hamlet, is set in ancient China during the Period of Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Through fighting, dancing and storytelling, it tells of a fight for rights and interests in the court between different people.（运用了介词Through后接动名词作句子的状语）
5．The film The Wandering Earth is adapted from a novel by Liu Cixin, China’s contemporary science fiction author. It tells a story in which the dying Sun becomes a major threat to the Earth, but the humans save the Earth without leaving it. People around the world who have a strong urge to survive build a huge engine system to push the Earth away from the dying Sun. The Wandering Earth is regarded as a film showing tight links between Chinese people and their homeland.
【写作分析】本篇书面表达为一篇说明文。要求学生根据提示写一篇关于《流浪地球》的介绍。
【要点详解】1.词汇积累：
主要的：major→main/prime
渴望：urge→desire/eagerness
被视为：be regarded as→be deemed as/be considered as
联系：link→relation/contact/connection
2.句式拓展：
原句：People around the world who have a strong urge to survive build a huge engine system to push the Earth away from the dying Sun.
拓展句：People having a strong urge to survive around the world build a huge engine system to push the Earth away from the dying Sun.
【高分句型1】
The Wandering Earth is regarded as a film showing tight links between Chinese people and their homeland.（运用了现在分词作定语。）
【高分句型2】
It tells a story in which the dying Sun becomes a major threat to the Earth, but the humans save the Earth without leaving it.（运用了介词+which引导定语从句。）
6．A Film Review
ET is a film directed by Steven Spielberg. It is about a story that a creature, ET, is mistakenly left behind on the earth. A boy called Elliott, acted by Henry Thomas, hides ET in his house to protect ET from the cold world of grown-ups. They become good friends, sharing sorrow and happiness and at last some children decide to take the risk of sending ET back to his planet.
The film is moving and beautiful, which shows us that friendship and love are the most important things in life.
【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据所给关于电影《ET外星人》的简介，用英语写一篇电影评论。
【要点详解】1.词汇积累
给……命名：call→name
决定做某事：decide to do sth.→determine to do sth.
感人的：moving→touching
重要的：important→significant
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：ET is a film directed by Steven Spielberg.
拓展句：ET is a film which is directed by Steven Spielberg.
【高分句型1】It is about a story that a creature, ET, is mistakenly left behind on the earth. (运用了that引导的同位语从句)
【高分句型2】The film is moving and beautiful, which shows us that friendship and love are the most important things in life. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句和that引导的宾语从句)
7．Operation Red Sea is a thrilling Chinese war film directed by Dante Lam, a famous director from Hong Kong. Inspired by the evacuation of nearly 600 Chinese citizens from Yemen’s southern port of Aden during the Yemeni Civil War in late March of 2015, the director intends to show the bravery of the Chinese Navy.
It tells the story of the Chinese Navy’s Jiaolong Assault Team, which is sent on a mission to rescue Chinese citizens and foreigners that eventually takes them to stop terrorists from gaining possession of nuclear materials to make dirty bombs.
The characters’ bravery and kindness touched my heart deeply, making it appeal to people of all ages.
【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是李华，你校英文报正在举办以“我说电影”为主题的征文活动，请你针对自己喜欢的电影写一篇影评并投稿。
【要点详解】1.词汇积累
著名的：famous→celebrated
最终：eventually→finally
感到：touch→move
吸引：appeal to→attract
2.句式拓展
原句：Operation Red Sea is a thrilling Chinese war film directed by Dante Lam, a famous director from Hong Kong.
拓展句：Operation Red Sea is a thrilling Chinese war film directed by Dante Lam, who is a famous director from Hong Kong.
【高分句型1】Inspired by the evacuation of nearly 600 Chinese citizens from Yemen’s southern port of Aden during the Yemeni Civil War in late March of 2015, the director intends to show the bravery of the Chinese Navy.(运用了过去分词作状语)
【高分句型2】It tells the story of the Chinese Navy’s Jiaolong Assault Team, which is sent on a mission to rescue Chinese citizens and foreigners that eventually takes them to stop terrorists from gaining possession of nuclear materials to make dirty bombs.(运用了which引导定语从句，that引导定语从句，动名词作宾语和不定式作目的状语)
8．参考范文：
The People-Pleasing Personality
The people-pleasing personality means always pleasing others. Its characteristics include being overly compliant and avoiding conflicts.
Possible causes are childhood experiences and low self-esteem. Negative effects involve losing self-identity and causing stress.
To overcome it, accept yourself, build self-esteem, learn to say no, and surround yourself with supportive people.
【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文，要求考生围绕讨好型人格写一篇文章。
【要点详解】1. 词汇积累
特点：characteristic→feature
避免：avoid→escape
影响：effect→influence/impact
压力：stress→pressure
2. 句式拓展
单句改为复合句
原句：The people-pleasing personality means always pleasing others. Its characteristics include being overly compliant and avoiding conflicts.
拓展句：The people-pleasing personality means always pleasing others, whose characteristics include being overly compliant and avoiding conflicts.
【高分句型1】The people-pleasing personality means always pleasing others.(使用了动名词作宾语)
【高分句型2】To overcome it, accept yourself, build self-esteem, learn to say no, and surround yourself with supportive people. (使用了不定式作目的状语和宾语、祈使句)Unit 1 Lights, camera, action!
单元写作深度指导-写影评（原卷版）
1.(教材原句)The Prince has given up hope of a cure but his wife, Elizabeth, takes him to see Lionel Logue, an Australian speech doctor living in London.亲王已经放弃了治疗的希望,但他的妻子伊丽莎白带他去见了莱昂内尔·洛格,这是一位澳大利亚语言治疗师,当时住在伦敦。
【写作借鉴】
a cure for sth. 医治某种病的疗法
cure sb.of sth. 治愈某人的病;改掉某人的坏习惯
▲ 常见的“动词+sb.+of+sth.”的结构还有:
①remind sb.of sth. 提醒某人某事
②warn sb.of sth. 警告某人某事
③rob sb.of sth. 抢劫某人某物
④inform sb.of sth. 通知某人某事
⑤cheat sb.of sth. 欺骗某人某事
⑥suspect sb.of sth. 怀疑某人某事
2.(教材原句) The film looks like a fairly typical historical film without fancy special effects, and it is made enjoyable by the performances of the main actors.这部电影看上去像一部颇为典型的历史剧,没有复杂的特效,而几位主演的出色演技令这部电影十分精彩。
【写作借鉴】
(1)be typical of sb./sth. 是……的特点
It is typical of sb.to do sth. 某人一向……
(2)typically adv.典型地;有代表性地;一向如此
▲句型It is typical of sb.to do sth.可以转换为“Typically,+句子”的形式。
①(应用文之建议信)学生在期末考试前看书熬到深夜是很典型的。
→It is typical of students to stay up reading till late night before the final exam.
→Typically, students stay up reading till late night before the final exam.
②Typically, he always plays jokes on others.
→It is typical of him to play jokes on others.(用It作形式主语改写)
3.(教材原句)All in all, I highly recommend this film.总之,我强烈推荐这部电影。
(应用文之建议信)I strongly recommend developing a good habit of going for a walk after supper for the sake of your health.为了你的健康,我强烈建议养成晚饭后散步的好习惯。
【写作借鉴】
(1)recommend sth.to sb. 向某人推荐某物
recommend sb.as... 推荐某人担任……
recommend doing sth. 建议做某事
recommend sb.to do sth. 推荐某人做某事
recommend sb.for the job 推荐某人担任此职
recommend that...=It is recommended that... 建议……
(2)recommendation n.推荐,建议
▲recommend后接从句时,从句谓语动词要用(should)do结构。recommend作“推荐,举荐”讲时,不能说recommend sb.sth.
(应用文之建议信)我建议把机器尽快检修一下。
→I recommend the machines to be checked as soon as possible.
→I recommend that the machines (should) be checked as soon as possible.
4.(教材原句)In the meantime, Hooper skilfully creates uncertainty and tension with narrow indoor sets and dark lighting.与此同时,胡珀巧妙地利用狭窄的室内布景和昏暗的灯光来营造不确定性和紧张感。
【写作借鉴】
(1)have a narrow escape 死里逃生,险些遇险
a narrow victory/defeat 险胜/惜败
(2)narrow the gap 缩小差距
(3)narrowly adv.勉强地;狭隘地
▲(应用文之建议信)父母和孩子应该多交流,缩小他们之间的差距,这样他们才能更好地理解彼此。
Parents and children should communicate more to narrow the gap between them so that they can understand each other better.
【题型技巧】
1.题型特点
一般来说,影评属于议论文的一种。影视评论就是观看者在看完电影后,将其感想以文字的形式呈现出来,来发表自己的观点和看法。
2.结构安排
影评适宜用“三段式”写法:
第一段:背景(setting)简介,即对电影的名称、导演、特点等做简单介绍。
第二段:情节概述(main plot of the film),包括主要演员及故事梗概。电影的情节概述不宜太长,只需把自己要评论的内容突出即可。
第三段:观后感及评论(comment/review),可以选择性地从不同角度,如电影的主题、情节、人物形象的塑造、语言风格、演员的演技、画面特点、场景的设置、颜色的搭配或拍摄的理念等方面有针对性地发表个人看法,但不要面面俱到。最后对电影进行总体评价。如果认为有必要,也可推荐其他人观看。
3.突破策略
写影评时要注意紧扣“电影”与“评论”两点,评论可以从多方面进行,但一篇评论的中心观点只能有一个。在写作手法上要注意两点:一是点面结合;二是观点和材料的统一。
“点面结合”就是要对你所评论的电影先做一个总体介绍,如电影的导演、主要演员、主要情节等,这是“面”的介绍;然后结合某一情节或某一段对话、某一个场面、某一细节、某一事物进行具体分析,这是“点”的评论。
观点和材料的统一就是要树立明确的观点,然后引用电影中的具体情节加以分析。
【语料积累】
1.教材词汇
(1)comedy n. 喜剧片,喜剧
(2)fantasy n. 幻想作品;幻想,想象
(3)horror n. 恐怖电影(或故事等);震惊,恐惧
(4)actually adv. 实际上,事实上
(5)familiar adj. 熟悉的,常见的
(6)factor n. 因素,要素
(7)visual adj.视力的,视觉的
(8)studio n. 电影摄影棚;录音室
(9)enable vt. 使能够,使可行
(10)prefer vt. 较喜欢,更喜欢
(11)creative adj.创造性的,创作的;有创造力的
(12)angle n. 角度;立场,观点
(13)ensure vt.保证,确保
(14)award n. 奖,奖品,奖金vt. 授予,给予
(15)adapt vt.改编,改写;使适应 vi.适应
(16)recommend vt.推荐,举荐
2.常用词块
(1)be based on 以……为基础
(2)be directed by 由……导演
(3)learn from... 从……中学习
(4)be popular with... 受……欢迎
(5)be set in 以……为背景
(6)the martial arts 武术
(7)romantic scenes 浪漫的场景
(8)play the part of 扮演
(9)the most exciting moments 最激动人心的时刻
(10)behind the scenes 在后台,在幕后
(11)not to mention 更不用说,且不说
(12)do justice to 恰当处理(某人或某事);公平对待(某人或某事),给予公正的评价
(13)in addition to 除……以外(还)
(14)pull up 停车,停止
3.常用句式
(1)开篇常用句型:
The new Chinese TV series is making waves in China and abroad.There must be more stories behind the scenes.这部新的中国电视剧在国内外掀起了波澜,其幕后一定有更多故事。
(2)主体部分常用句型:
①He has great chemistry with Rush and Bonham Carter,whose characters are both very believable.
他与拉什和博纳姆·卡特之间关系很好,他们的角色都非常可信。
②Based on a true story, the film is set in London in the 1930s.影片根据真实故事改编,背景设定在20世纪30年代的伦敦。
③The film was adapted from a novel,which told that a couple adopted a flexible way to bring up their adopted son,who gradually adapted to his new family.这部电影是由一部小说改编来的,它讲述了一对夫妇采用一种灵活的方法来抚养他们收养的儿子,使他逐渐适应了他的新家庭的故事。
④This film tells us a story about how a common panda becomes a real dragon warrior.
这部电影为我们讲述了一个平凡的熊猫是怎样成为一个真正的龙武士的。
⑤What I have to admit is that this movie is wonderful,such as its advanced digital video effect and the worry about the future of human beings.
我不得不承认的是这部电影很不错,比如它先进的数字视频特效和对于人类未来的担忧。
(3)结尾常用句型:
The film is well worth seeing,as it carried the main idea that justice can always beat evil.
这部电影很值得观看,因为它主要告诉我们正义一定会战胜邪恶。
(2024·南通高一检测)假如你最近看了电影《泰坦尼克号》(Titanic),请根据以下内容写一篇评论。
影片 信息 影片于1997年在美国上映,由詹姆斯·卡梅隆(James Cameron)执导,莱昂纳多·迪卡普里奥(Leonardo DiCaprio)和凯特·温斯莱特(Kate Winslet)领衔主演杰克和露丝。
影片 主要 内容 影片讲述了一个感人的故事,杰克与露丝在巨轮上坠入爱河,但泰坦尼克号却撞上了冰山。在泰坦尼克号即将沉没的时候,杰克把生的机会留给了露丝。
你的 评价 ……
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【写作示例】
Step 1:读题布局
Step 2:词句激活
1.最近,我看了电影《泰坦尼克号》,这是一部根据真实事件改编的电影。
Recently,I watched the movie Titanic, which is a film adapted from a true event.
2.这部电影由詹姆斯·卡梅隆执导,莱昂纳多·迪卡普里奥和凯特·温斯莱特主演。
The film is directed by James Cameron and starring Leonardo DiCaprio and Kate Winslet.
3.当泰坦尼克号即将沉没时,杰克放弃了生存的机会,把它留给了露丝。
As the Titanic was about to sink, Jack gave up his chance to survive and left it to Rose.
4.在我看来,《泰坦尼克号》是一部集浪漫、悲剧和史诗于一体的杰作。
In my opinion, Titanic is a masterpiece that combines romance, tragedy, and epic proportions.
5.这是一部值得观看和记住的电影,它将永远是电影史上的经典之一。
It is a film that is worth watching and remembering, and it will always be one of the classics in the history of cinema.
Step 3:衔接成篇
Recently, I watched the movie Titanic, which is a film adapted from a true event, directed by James Cameron and starring Leonardo DiCaprio and Kate Winslet.The film was released in the United States in 1997 and is still loved by many people.
The film tells a deeply touching story.Jack and Rose met and fell in love on the Titanic, but the ship unfortunately collided with an iceberg.As the Titanic was about to sink, Jack gave up his chance to survive and left it to Rose.
In my opinion, Titanic is a masterpiece that combines romance, tragedy, and epic proportions.It is a film that is worth watching and remembering, and it will always be one of the classics in the history of cinema.
1．请根据下面的提示写一篇电影《功夫熊猫》(KungFuPanda)的影评。
1.动画电影《功夫熊猫》取材于中国文化。
2.情景:一个平凡的熊猫成为一个龙武士的故事。师傅起初不认为熊猫能成为龙武士,但是通过不断的努力,他最后得到了师傅的认可,并打败了他们的敌人——老虎。
3.主题:只要努力,每个人都能成功。
注意:词数80左右。
提示词:师傅master;龙武士 dragon warrior
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2．根据电影《哈利·波特》的简介，写一篇英语短文。
1．根据英国作家J.K. Rowling的小说改编，由Chris Columbus执导。
2．哈利失去双亲，在姨母家受虐待，11岁生日时被邀请到Hogwarts魔法学校上学，这是一个神奇莫测的魔幻世界。
3．在Hogwarts，哈利学习了魔法，经历了许多冒险和神奇的事，并交了一些好朋友，同时学会了怎样获得真正的友谊，学会了勇敢。
4．这是一部非常成功的电影，风靡全世界。通过这部电影，我们学会了相信自己和帮助别人。
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3．当前不少文学作品被改编成电影。有人选择看电影，有人选择读原著。请你以“Film or Book，Which Do You Prefer？”为题，按照下列要点写一篇英语短文：
1．看电影：省时、有趣、易懂
2．读原著：细节更多、语言优美
3．你的看法及理由：……
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．文章题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：原著original work/book in the original
Film or Book, Which Do You Prefer
Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original.
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4．请根据下面的材料，写一篇80词左右的短文，介绍电影《夜宴》。
Night Banquet《夜宴》
Stars(Cast)：Zhang Ziyi(章子怡)，Daniel Wu(吴彦祖)，Zhou Xun(周迅)，Ge You(葛优)
Director：Feng Xiaogang(冯小刚)
Plot：这部电影取材于莎士比亚(Shakespeare)的《哈姆雷特》(Hamlet)。故事以五代十国为背景，通过争斗、舞蹈和讲故事的方式，讲述了宫廷中人与人之间争权夺利的故事，最后在一次夜宴上他们一个一个地死去。
Review & comments：这是一部历史武打题材的电影。冯小刚用激动人心的故事向我们诠释了正义和勇气的含义。这部电影堪称精品，百看不厌。
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5．你班上周末观看了科幻电影《流浪地球》。请你根据以下要点，写一篇80词左右的电影介绍。
1.根据中国当代科幻作家刘慈欣的小说改编。
2.即将消亡的太阳成为地球的主要威胁，人类拯救地球。
3.人们建造了一个巨大的引擎系统，把地球从即将消亡的太阳那里推开。
4.《流浪地球》被认为是一部表现中国人与家园紧密联系的电影。
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6．请根据以下关于电影《ET外星人》的简介，用英语写一篇电影评论。
A Film Review
片名（Name）：《ET外星人》(ET)
导演（Director）：史蒂文·斯皮尔伯格(Steven Spielberg)
剧情梗概：外星人(ET)误留在地球上，Elliott (Henry Thomas饰)把他秘密留在家里躲避成年人。ET和Elliott成为好朋友，分享痛苦与快乐，最后几个孩子准备冒险送ET返回自己的星球。
评价(Comment)：本片美丽而感人；告诫人们友谊和爱是人生最重要的。
注意：词数80个左右。
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7．假设你是李华，你校英文报正在举办以“我说电影”为主题的征文活动，请你针对自己喜欢的电影写一篇影评并投稿。内容包括：
1.电影的简单介绍；
2.你的评价。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
8．前段时间的热映电影《热辣滚烫》揭示出当代社会中的一种“喜闻乐见”的讨好型人格，请写一篇文章包括以下要点：
1. 讨好型人格的定义和特点。
2. 形成这种人格的可能原因。
3. 它可能带来的负面影响。
4. 如何克服这种人格并变得更加自信和独立。
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单元写作深度指导-写关于锻炼身体的建议信（解析版）
1.(教材原句)What would you do in my position
你处在我的位置会怎么做
The principal took the position that the students should have enough exercise.
那位校长认为学生应该进行足够的锻炼。
【写作借鉴】
be in position 就位;在适当的位置
out of position 在不适当的位置,不合适的
take up a position 担任工作
take the position that... 认为……,主张……
2.(教材原句)Read the email below and make a list of the reasons why Leo is unwilling to begin working out regularly.阅读下面的电子邮件,并列出Leo不愿意开始定期进行锻炼的原因。
(1)若关系词在从句中作状语,要用why或for which引导定语从句。
(2)若关系词在从句中作主语、宾语,要用which或that引导定语从句,其中作宾语时关系词常可省略。
(3)reason构成的常见搭配:
a/the reason for (doing) sth. (做)某事的原因
a/the reason to do sth. 做某事的原因
a/the reason why/for which...is that...……的原因是……
▲(1)That/This/It is why...“那/这就是……的原因”,why从句表示结果;That/This/It is because...“那/这是因为……”,because从句表示原因。
(2)主语为名词reason时,表语从句中的连接词要用that,而不用why或because。
▲(应用文之申请信)我之所以是志愿者的最佳人选是因为我英语说得很流利。
The reason why I’m the best person to be a volunteer is that I speak English fluently.
1.题型特点
提供身体锻炼方面的建议是英语书面表达中的常见话题,主要涉及锻炼身体的益处、 方法和注意事项。体裁可以是应用文、议论文等。
2.结构安排
建议信常用“三段式”写法:
第一段:根据对方遇到的难题,写明写信目的;
第二段:主体段,详细分析对方遇到的问题,提出合理的建议;
第三段:总结全文,提出希望,即希望对方能采纳自己的建议。
3.突破策略
(1)在写这类书面表达时,应注意以下几个方面:
①指出目前存在的不利于健康的问题;
②这些问题会导致的后果;
③在今后的生活中如何改善生活方式,进行规律锻炼,提升健康水平。
(2)注意正确使用时态。通常在提到对方遇到的问题时用一般过去时;在分析对方问题和提出建议时用一般现在时;在表达祝愿、希望对方接受建议时用一般将来时。
(3)此外,还应注意语气特点。建议信要给出写信的原因、 建议的内容、 提出建议的理由,而且提出的理由要合情合理,所以语气一定要得当,既要委婉礼貌,又要有说服力。
【语料积累】
1.教材词汇
(1)tend vi.往往会;趋向vt.照看
(2)disease n.病,疾病
(3)moreover adv.此外,而且
(4)reduce vt. 减少,缩小
(5)routine n. 常规,惯例adj. 常规的,例行的;乏味的
(6)muscle n. 肌肉,肌
(7)jogging n. 慢跑锻炼
(8)stretch vt. & vi. 伸展,舒展;拉长;伸出;(使) 延伸
(9)movement n. 活动,转动;移动;运动
(10)energy n. 能,能量;精力;能源
(11)injury n. 伤害,损伤
(12)prevent vt. 阻止,阻碍
(13)equipment n. 设备;配备,装备
(14)champion n. 冠军,第一名
(15)satisfaction n.满意;满足,达到
(16)inspiration n.灵感;鼓舞人心的人(或事物)
2.常用词块
(1)work out/take exercise regularly 定期锻炼
(2)as a matter of routine 例行公事
(3)physical exercise 身体锻炼
(4)full of energy 精力充沛
(5)build up one’s body 强身健体
(6)develop a habit of 养成……的习惯
(7)in good health 身体状况良好
(8)contribute to 促进,有利于
(9)improve one’s health 增进某人的健康
(10)stay in shape 保持体形
(11)outdoor activities 户外活动
(12)keep healthy/fit 保持健康
(13)do wonders 创造奇迹,产生神奇作用
(14)over the long term 长期
(15)stick with 持续,坚持
(16)make up for 弥补,补偿
3.话题句式
(1)开篇常用句型:
①I’m sorry to hear that you are suffering from bad health.听说你身体不好,我很难过。
②I’m writing to offer you my advice/tips/suggestions on how to keep healthy.
我写信是想给你提供关于如何保持健康的建议。
③Would you be kind enough to give me some advice/tips/suggestions on how to build up my body
你能给我一些关于如何强身健体的建议吗
(2)主体部分常用句型:
①I suggest that you should choose an activity that you like.我建议你选择一个你喜欢的活动。
②If I were you, I would try tai chi.
如果我是你,我会尝试一下太极。
③It might be a good idea to find a partner with whom you can exercise.
找一个可以和你一块锻炼的搭档或许是个好主意。
④How about playing basketball in your free time
在你空闲的时候打篮球怎么样
(3)结尾常用句型:
①I hope my suggestion can be of help to you.
希望我的建议对你有帮助。
②I think you can make it if you follow the above advice.
如果你听从以上建议,我认为你会成功的。
(2024·东莞高一检测)假定你是李华,请你给正在生病的朋友交换生Tom写一封建议信,说明锻炼的重要性和好处,鼓励他积极锻炼身体,从而为更好地学习打下基础。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
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【写作示例】
Step 1:读题布局
Step 2:词句激活
1.你一直专心致志地学习,连运动的时间都没有。
You have been so absorbed in study that you have had no time for exercise.
2.在我看来,缺乏锻炼确实对你的健康有害。
From my perspective, lacking exercises is really harmful to your health.
3.我觉得如果你能经常锻炼,对你的健康是有好处的。
I feel it would be beneficial to your health if you could work out on a regular basis.
4.运动既有助于你的身体健康,又能使你精神焕发。
Exercise can both contribute to your physical health and refresh your mind.
5.如果你有一个强壮的身体,你可以继续学习而不会感觉不好或生病。
If you have a strong body, you can keep on studying without feeling bad or falling ill.
Step 3:衔接成篇
Dear Tom,
I am sorry to hear that you have been ill for days and hope you have got better now.
Recently you have been so absorbed in study that you have had no time for exercise, which from my perspective is really harmful to your health.Thus, I feel it would be beneficial to your health if you could work out on a regular basis.In fact, exercise can both contribute to your physical health and refresh your mind.Only when you have a strong body can you keep on studying without feeling bad or falling ill.
In a word, exercise is as useful and important as your study.Hope my suggestions will be of some help to you.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
1．随着生活水平的提高，人们越来越关注健康问题。健康专家提出了保持健康的几点建议：
建议 注意事项
饮食 多吃水果和蔬菜，因为其中富含维生素，脂肪含量低； 不要吃脂肪含量高的食物；吃甜点要适量；不多喝咖啡。
锻炼 经常性的锻炼保持身材；每天跑步强壮心脏；饭后不宜立即运动；运动完不能马上吃饭，也不能大量饮水。
生活习惯 ……
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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2．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter向你咨询，作为学业繁忙的高中生应该如何保持健康的体质。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括以下几个方面：
(1)健康饮食 (2)规律的体育锻炼 (3)充足的睡眠 (4)适当的课外活动
注意：1.书数100左右。2. 可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。
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3．假定你是李华，目前冬天到来，流感肆虐，你的朋友Lily写信向你询问如何防流感、保持健康。请你给她发一封邮件提些建议。
内容要点如下：
1. 保证充足睡眠，至少八小时。
2. 注意合理饮食，多吃水果蔬菜。
3. 坚持体育锻炼，多参加体育活动。
注意：词数80左右;可适当增添细节，以使行文连贯，开头、结尾已写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Lily,
Glad to hear from you! In your letter you asked me how to prevent flu and keep healthy. I am happy to give you some suggestions.
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Your,
Li Hua
4．假定你是李华，英国笔友David写邮件给你说他想锻炼强身，但又因为种种原因无法坚持。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
(1)分析可能的原因；
(2)提出相应的建议。
注意：①写作词数应为80个左右；
②请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
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Yours,
Lihua
5．假定你是李华，你的美国网友David打算在周末进行身体锻炼，但是不知道去哪里锻炼更好，是公园还是健身房。请你针对他的咨询、回复一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.发邮件的目的；
2.明确你的观点和理由。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
Glad to receive your email.
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Yours,
Li Hua
6．假定你是李华，你班交换生Felix因进行体育锻炼时扭伤左脚而无法走路。请你就此事给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.表示安慰；
2.主动提供帮助；
3.提出关于锻炼的建议。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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参考答案
1．
With the improvement of people’s living standards, people are paying more attention to health problems.
Firstly, we should eat lots of fruit and vegetables, because they are rich in vitamins and low in fat. As a proverb says, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.” Don’t have a lot of food that contains too much fat. Secondly, exercise is important. Regular exercise can help us keep our figures. People who do running every day usually have stronger hearts than those who don’t.
Finally, we should sleep about eight hours every day, and never work too hard. Overwork and little sleep will cause us to fall ill. What’s more, keep happy every day.
【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于图表作文。要求考生介绍健康专家提出的保持健康的几点建议。
【要点详解】1.词汇积累
提高：improvement→enhancement
关注：pay attention to→focus on
重要的：important→significant
导致：cause→lead to
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Overwork and little sleep will cause us to fall ill.
拓展句：It is overwork and little sleep that will cause us to fall ill.
【高分句型1】Firstly, we should eat lots of fruit and vegetables, because they are rich in vitamins and low in fat.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】People who do running every day usually have stronger hearts than those who don’t.(运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)
2．Dear Peter,
Hearing from you, I am writing to give you some tips on how to keep healthy.
In my opinion, we should have a balanced diet to build up our strength. Only in this way can we have enough energy. We had better take physical exercise regularly because not only does exercise improve our health but also ensures our satisfying learning efficiency. Besides, we should have enough sleep, which is a healthy lifestyle. In addition, participating in all sorts of after-class activities will benefit us a lot.
Hope the suggestions above can be helpful to you.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【写作分析】本篇书面表达为一篇应用文。要求学生就“学业繁忙的高中生应该如何保持健康体质”给Peter写一封建议信。
【要点详解】1.词汇积累：
建议：tip→suggestion/proposal/recommendation
在我看来：in my opinion→as far as I am concerned/as far as I can see
定期地：regularly→on a regular basis
此外，而且：in addition→additionally/what’s more/furthermore
2.句式拓展：
简单句变复合句
原句：In my opinion, we should have a balanced diet to build up our strength.
拓展句：In my opinion, we should have a diet which is balanced to build up our strength.
【高分句型1】Besides, we should have enough sleep, which is a healthy lifestyle. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】We had better take physical exercise regularly because not only does exercise improve our health but also ensures our satisfying learning efficiency. (运用了because引导原因状语从句和部分倒装)
3．Dear Lily,
Glad to hear from you! In your letter you asked me how to prevent flu and keep healthy. I am happy to give you some suggestions. As we know, food is of great importance to us teenagers. Since we grow very fast, we are in need of nutritious food, such as fresh vegetables, fruit, fish, meat and so on. However, I think you’d better not eat food with much sugar and fat. It is necessary for you to have at least eight hours of sleep every day. In addition, you should take physical exercise regularly and it will be helpful to your health. Only in this way can you keep fit.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作分析】本书面表达属于应用文写作。要求针对朋友提出的如何预防流感的问题写封建议信。
【要点详解】1.词汇积累
重要性：importance→significance
需要：be in need of→require
此外：in addition → what’s more
有益的：helpful→beneficial
2.句式拓展
并列句变复合句
原句：In addition, you should take physical exercise regularly and it will be helpful to your health.
拓展句：In addition, you should take physical exercise regularly,which will be helpful to your health.
【高分句型1】As we know, food is of great importance to us teenagers. （运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Since we grow very fast, we are in need of nutritious food, such as fresh vegetables, fruit, fish, meat and so on.（运用了since引导的原因状语从句）
4．Dear David,
Glad you want to exercise. I also believe it will benefit our health.
You said you can’t afford to sign up for classes in the gym. Also, you can’t fit exercise into your busy schedule. My advice is that you try some aerobic activities, like jogging and cycling, which are economical in cost. If possible, you might just as well try to take stairs up to your flat every day. This doesn’t involve extra time and plans. All in all, you’d better find some easy and enjoyable ways to exercise. I am sure you will stick with them.
Yours,
Lihua
【写作分析】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给想锻炼强身但又因为种种原因无法坚持的笔友David写信，分析出现这种情况的原因，并提出相应的建议。
【要点详解】1.词汇积累
对……有好处：benefit→be beneficial to
建议：advice→suggestion
总之：all in all→in a word
省钱的：economical in cost→money-saving
2.句型拓展
同义句转换
原句：You said you can’t afford to sign up for classes in the gym.
拓展句：What you said in your last e-mail is that you can’t afford to sign up for classes in the gym.
【高分句型1】You said you can’t afford to sign up for classes in the gym.（运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】My advice is that you try some aerobic activities, like jogging and cycling, which are economical in cost. （运用了that引导的表语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句）
5．Dear David,
Glad to receive your email. From your letter I have learned your confusion about where to exercise. I am writing to give you my advice.
The first choice is the park.The park is a perfect place to exercise. Firstly,parks provide a natural and open environment for exercise. You can do many outdoor activities,such as jogging, cycling or some simple stretches. Besides, the fresh air and beautiful scenery can help to clear your mind and improve your mood. However,if you enjoy indoor activities,a gym may be a better choice. A gym can provide a more structured environment with machines,weights,and classes for a more targeted workout. In conclusion,no matter where you decide to exercise, remember to find a workout you enjoy and stick with it.
Looking forward to hearing about how your weekend workout goes!
【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给David回复一封电子邮件，给他一些关于周末去哪里健身更好的建议。
【要点详解】1.词汇积累
困惑：confusion→puzzle
建议：advice→suggestion
此外：besides → what’s more
总之：in conclusion→ in short/in all/finally
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The first choice is the park.The park is a perfect place to exercise.
拓展句：The first choice is the park which is a perfect place to exercise.
【高分句型1】However,if you enjoy indoor activities,a gym may be a better choice.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句）
【高分句型2】In conclusion,no matter where you decide to exercise, remember to find a workout you enjoy and stick with it.（运用了no matter where引导的让步状语从句和省略了关系代词which/that的定语从句）
6．Dear Felix,
I’m terribly sorry to hear that your left ankle was so badly twisted during your workout yesterday that you couldn’t even walk. But don’t worry about missing classes during the next few days. Every morning I’ll go and pick you up at about 7:00. Then I’ll take you to school by e-bike. When school is over, I’ll send you back again.
To prevent such accidents from happening again, you can never be too careful when you’re working out. Additionally, do keep in mind that you must always do warm-up exercises before workout. That way you can greatly reduce the possibilities of getting hurt.
I hope that you’ll soon get well again!
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给交换生Felix写一封邮件，对于他在体育锻炼时扭伤左脚而无法走路表示安慰，并提供帮助和关于锻炼的建议。
【要点详解】1.词汇积累
阻止：prevent→stop
锻炼：work out→exercise
此外：additionally→in addition
记住：keep in mind→remember
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To prevent such accidents from happening again, you can never be too careful when you're working out.
拓展句： You can never be too careful when you’re working out so that such accidents won’t happen again.
【高分句型1】I’m terribly sorry to hear that your left ankle was so badly twisted during your workout yesterday that you couldn’t even walk.（运用了that引导的宾语从句和so…that引导的结果状语从句）
【高分句型2】Additionally, do keep in mind that you must always do warm-up exercises before workout.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）Unit 2 Be sporty, be healthy
单元写作深度指导-写关于锻炼身体的建议信（原卷版）
1.(教材原句)What would you do in my position
你处在我的位置会怎么做
The principal took the position that the students should have enough exercise.
那位校长认为学生应该进行足够的锻炼。
【写作借鉴】
be in position 就位;在适当的位置
out of position 在不适当的位置,不合适的
take up a position 担任工作
take the position that... 认为……,主张……
2.(教材原句)Read the email below and make a list of the reasons why Leo is unwilling to begin working out regularly.阅读下面的电子邮件,并列出Leo不愿意开始定期进行锻炼的原因。
(1)若关系词在从句中作状语,要用why或for which引导定语从句。
(2)若关系词在从句中作主语、宾语,要用which或that引导定语从句,其中作宾语时关系词常可省略。
(3)reason构成的常见搭配:
a/the reason for (doing) sth. (做)某事的原因
a/the reason to do sth. 做某事的原因
a/the reason why/for which...is that...……的原因是……
▲(1)That/This/It is why...“那/这就是……的原因”,why从句表示结果;That/This/It is because...“那/这是因为……”,because从句表示原因。
(2)主语为名词reason时,表语从句中的连接词要用that,而不用why或because。
▲(应用文之申请信)我之所以是志愿者的最佳人选是因为我英语说得很流利。
The reason why I’m the best person to be a volunteer is that I speak English fluently.
1.题型特点
提供身体锻炼方面的建议是英语书面表达中的常见话题,主要涉及锻炼身体的益处、 方法和注意事项。体裁可以是应用文、议论文等。
2.结构安排
建议信常用“三段式”写法:
第一段:根据对方遇到的难题,写明写信目的;
第二段:主体段,详细分析对方遇到的问题,提出合理的建议;
第三段:总结全文,提出希望,即希望对方能采纳自己的建议。
3.突破策略
(1)在写这类书面表达时,应注意以下几个方面:
①指出目前存在的不利于健康的问题;
②这些问题会导致的后果;
③在今后的生活中如何改善生活方式,进行规律锻炼,提升健康水平。
(2)注意正确使用时态。通常在提到对方遇到的问题时用一般过去时;在分析对方问题和提出建议时用一般现在时;在表达祝愿、希望对方接受建议时用一般将来时。
(3)此外,还应注意语气特点。建议信要给出写信的原因、 建议的内容、 提出建议的理由,而且提出的理由要合情合理,所以语气一定要得当,既要委婉礼貌,又要有说服力。
【语料积累】
1.教材词汇
(1)tend vi.往往会;趋向vt.照看
(2)disease n.病,疾病
(3)moreover adv.此外,而且
(4)reduce vt. 减少,缩小
(5)routine n. 常规,惯例adj. 常规的,例行的;乏味的
(6)muscle n. 肌肉,肌
(7)jogging n. 慢跑锻炼
(8)stretch vt. & vi. 伸展,舒展;拉长;伸出;(使) 延伸
(9)movement n. 活动,转动;移动;运动
(10)energy n. 能,能量;精力;能源
(11)injury n. 伤害,损伤
(12)prevent vt. 阻止,阻碍
(13)equipment n. 设备;配备,装备
(14)champion n. 冠军,第一名
(15)satisfaction n.满意;满足,达到
(16)inspiration n.灵感;鼓舞人心的人(或事物)
2.常用词块
(1)work out/take exercise regularly 定期锻炼
(2)as a matter of routine 例行公事
(3)physical exercise 身体锻炼
(4)full of energy 精力充沛
(5)build up one’s body 强身健体
(6)develop a habit of 养成……的习惯
(7)in good health 身体状况良好
(8)contribute to 促进,有利于
(9)improve one’s health 增进某人的健康
(10)stay in shape 保持体形
(11)outdoor activities 户外活动
(12)keep healthy/fit 保持健康
(13)do wonders 创造奇迹,产生神奇作用
(14)over the long term 长期
(15)stick with 持续,坚持
(16)make up for 弥补,补偿
3.话题句式
(1)开篇常用句型:
①I’m sorry to hear that you are suffering from bad health.听说你身体不好,我很难过。
②I’m writing to offer you my advice/tips/suggestions on how to keep healthy.
我写信是想给你提供关于如何保持健康的建议。
③Would you be kind enough to give me some advice/tips/suggestions on how to build up my body
你能给我一些关于如何强身健体的建议吗
(2)主体部分常用句型:
①I suggest that you should choose an activity that you like.我建议你选择一个你喜欢的活动。
②If I were you, I would try tai chi.
如果我是你,我会尝试一下太极。
③It might be a good idea to find a partner with whom you can exercise.
找一个可以和你一块锻炼的搭档或许是个好主意。
④How about playing basketball in your free time
在你空闲的时候打篮球怎么样
(3)结尾常用句型:
①I hope my suggestion can be of help to you.
希望我的建议对你有帮助。
②I think you can make it if you follow the above advice.
如果你听从以上建议,我认为你会成功的。
(2024·东莞高一检测)假定你是李华,请你给正在生病的朋友交换生Tom写一封建议信,说明锻炼的重要性和好处,鼓励他积极锻炼身体,从而为更好地学习打下基础。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
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【写作示例】
Step 1:读题布局
Step 2:词句激活
1.你一直专心致志地学习,连运动的时间都没有。
You have been so absorbed in study that you have had no time for exercise.
2.在我看来,缺乏锻炼确实对你的健康有害。
From my perspective, lacking exercises is really harmful to your health.
3.我觉得如果你能经常锻炼,对你的健康是有好处的。
I feel it would be beneficial to your health if you could work out on a regular basis.
4.运动既有助于你的身体健康,又能使你精神焕发。
Exercise can both contribute to your physical health and refresh your mind.
5.如果你有一个强壮的身体,你可以继续学习而不会感觉不好或生病。
If you have a strong body, you can keep on studying without feeling bad or falling ill.
Step 3:衔接成篇
Dear Tom,
I am sorry to hear that you have been ill for days and hope you have got better now.
Recently you have been so absorbed in study that you have had no time for exercise, which from my perspective is really harmful to your health.Thus, I feel it would be beneficial to your health if you could work out on a regular basis.In fact, exercise can both contribute to your physical health and refresh your mind.Only when you have a strong body can you keep on studying without feeling bad or falling ill.
In a word, exercise is as useful and important as your study.Hope my suggestions will be of some help to you.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
1．随着生活水平的提高，人们越来越关注健康问题。健康专家提出了保持健康的几点建议：
建议 注意事项
饮食 多吃水果和蔬菜，因为其中富含维生素，脂肪含量低； 不要吃脂肪含量高的食物；吃甜点要适量；不多喝咖啡。
锻炼 经常性的锻炼保持身材；每天跑步强壮心脏；饭后不宜立即运动；运动完不能马上吃饭，也不能大量饮水。
生活习惯 ……
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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2．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter向你咨询，作为学业繁忙的高中生应该如何保持健康的体质。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括以下几个方面：
(1)健康饮食 (2)规律的体育锻炼 (3)充足的睡眠 (4)适当的课外活动
注意：1.书数100左右。2. 可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。
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3．假定你是李华，目前冬天到来，流感肆虐，你的朋友Lily写信向你询问如何防流感、保持健康。请你给她发一封邮件提些建议。
内容要点如下：
1. 保证充足睡眠，至少八小时。
2. 注意合理饮食，多吃水果蔬菜。
3. 坚持体育锻炼，多参加体育活动。
注意：词数80左右;可适当增添细节，以使行文连贯，开头、结尾已写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Lily,
Glad to hear from you! In your letter you asked me how to prevent flu and keep healthy. I am happy to give you some suggestions.
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Your,
Li Hua
4．假定你是李华，英国笔友David写邮件给你说他想锻炼强身，但又因为种种原因无法坚持。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
(1)分析可能的原因；
(2)提出相应的建议。
注意：①写作词数应为80个左右；
②请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
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Yours,
Lihua
5．假定你是李华，你的美国网友David打算在周末进行身体锻炼，但是不知道去哪里锻炼更好，是公园还是健身房。请你针对他的咨询、回复一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.发邮件的目的；
2.明确你的观点和理由。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
Glad to receive your email.
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Yours,
Li Hua
6．假定你是李华，你班交换生Felix因进行体育锻炼时扭伤左脚而无法走路。请你就此事给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.表示安慰；
2.主动提供帮助；
3.提出关于锻炼的建议。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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单元写作深度指导-推广中国传统节日（解析版）
1.(教材原句)According to tradition, we should celebrate the festival by going mountain climbing, but how many people today still observe this tradition 依照传统,我们应该爬山来庆祝这个节日,但是如今还有多少人仍然遵循这个传统呢
(应用文之介绍活动)When we take part in the parade to observe the National Day, we must observe the traffic rules.If we observe someone run the red light, we should stop him.当我们参加游行来庆祝国庆节的时候,我们必须遵守交通规则。如果我们看到有人闯红灯,我们应该阻止他。
【写作借鉴】
(1)observe sb. do sth.观察/看到某人做某事(全过程)
observe sb. doing sth. 观察/看到某人正在做某事
observe the traffic rules 遵守交通规则
observe that... 发现……
(2)observer n.观察者;观察员
(3)observation n.观察;观测;监视
▲(应用文之介绍春节)我正写信告诉你我们是怎样庆祝春节的。
I’m writing to tell you how we observe the Spring Festival.
2.(教材原句) The Dragon Boat Festival,for example,is celebrated in honour of Qu Yuan.
例如,庆祝端午节是为了纪念屈原。
【写作借鉴】
(1)in honour of 为了纪念,为了庆祝
in one’s honour 为了纪念某人
have the honour of doing/to do sth. 有幸做某事
It is sb.’s/an honour to do sth.做某事是某人的荣幸/一件荣幸的事
(2)honoured adj.受尊敬的,感到荣幸的
be/feel honoured to do sth.很荣幸做某事
be honoured with... 被授予……
be honoured as... 被授予……的称号
3.(教材原句)Finally, traditional festivals are a source of national pride and help shape our national identity.
最后,传统节日是民族自豪感的源泉,有助于形成我们的民族认同。
(应用文之演讲稿)Our strong sense of national identity has been shaped by our history.
我们强烈的民族认同感是由我们的历史塑造的。
【写作借鉴】
(1)identity card 身份证
a sense of identity 认同感
(2)identification n.辨认,识别
(3)identify v.识别,认出
identify sb./sth.as 认出某人/物是……
4.(教材原句)It is the duty of every one of us to protect them for generations to come.
保护它们让它们传承下来是我们每一个人的责任。
(应用文之回复咨询)As your penfriend, I think it is my duty to offer my help whenever you meet with difficulties while learning Chinese.作为你的笔友, 我认为在你学中文遇到困难时, 为你提供帮助是我的责任。
【写作借鉴】
on duty 值班,上班
off duty 下班
a sense of duty 责任感
It’s one’s duty to do sth. 做某事是某人的职责
5.(教材原句)The Double Ninth Festival(the Chongyang Festival),which has a history of over 2,000 years, falls on the ninth day of the ninth month in the Chinese lunar calendar.九月九(重阳节)有2 000多年的历史,是在中国农历九月的第九天。
【写作借鉴】
fall behind 落后
fall down 跌倒; 倒塌; 落下
fall off (从……)落下
fall in love with 喜欢, 爱上
▲我们在功课上可能会落后于他人, 这让我们很有压力。
We may fall behind others in our lessons, which makes us stressed.
6.(教材原句) It is the duty of every one of us to protect them for generations to come.
我们每个人都有责任为我们的后代保护它们。
(应用文之传统文化)My generation have grown up without the experience of a world war.
我这一代人在成长过程中没有经历过世界大战。
【写作借鉴】
from generation to generation 世世代代,代代相传
generation gap 代沟
build up/lead/improve a generation 培养/引导/提高一代人
1.题型解读
介绍中国的传统节日,属于“人与社会”主题语境中“不同民族文化习俗与传统节日”的范畴。主要从传统节日的名称、庆祝时间、节日由来、风俗习惯或庆祝活动、节日的重要性及其意义等方面来写。
2.突破策略
①首先审题,介绍传统节日的相关信息。
②选用正确的人称和时态,主要使用第一人称和一般现在时来写。然后写出单个句子,再使用正确的连词,连句成段。
③文章可以分为三段:
【语料积累】
1.教材词汇
(1)promote vt.促进,推动;促销;提升,晋升
(2)lunar adj.月亮的,月球的
(3)observe vt.遵守;注意到;观察;庆祝
(4)generation n.一代人;代,一代;产生
(5)source n.来源;起源;源头
(6)identity n.特性;身份
(7)duty n.责任,义务;上班,值班;职责;税
(8)precious adj.宝贵的,珍贵的;珍奇的,珍稀的
2.常用词块
(1)节日介绍
①date back to/date from 追溯到
②originate from/in 起源于
③be popular with 受……的欢迎
④be rooted in 根植于
(2)措施
①take measures 采取措施
②call on sb.to do sth. 号召某人做某事
③raise the awareness of 提高……的意识
④educate sb.to do sth. 教育某人做某事
(3)意义
①hold on to traditional festivals 保留传统节日
②promote the development of traditional festivals 促进传统节日的发展
③inherit cultural heritages 继承文化遗产
④fall on 适逢;正当
⑤in honor of 为向……表示敬意
3.话题句式
(1)段首句
①The Spring Festival, also known as the Chinese New Year, is a very important festival in China.
春节,也被称为中国新年,在中国是一个非常重要的节日。
②As is well known to us all, the Spring Festival/the Mid-Autumn Festival is a festival for reunion.
众所周知,春节/中秋节是一个团圆的节日。
(2)主体段落句
①It’s obvious that there are many ways to promote the development of traditional festivals.
很明显,有很多方式可以促进传统节日的发展。
②It is surely a good way to promote the development of traditional festivals through the media.
通过媒体促进传统节日的发展无疑是个好办法。
③It is important for schools to teach students the traditional culture.
对学校来说,教授学生传统文化是很重要的。
(3)段尾句
①It’s our duty to promote the development of traditional culture.
促进传统文化的发展是我们的责任。
②Only in this way can we promote the development of traditional festivals.
只有这样,我们才能促进传统节日的发展。
假如你是李华,你校校刊Sunflower本期征文的话题是 “How to promote our traditional festivals”,请你据此写一篇文章向校刊投稿,谈谈怎样才能号召人们传承中国传统节日和风俗,使中国传统文化发扬光大。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
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【写作示例】
Step 1:读题布局
Step 2:词句激活
1.西方节日正变得越来越流行。
The western festivals are becoming more and more popular.
2.我们的传统节日正被忽视。
Our traditional festivals are being ignored.
3.我们应该号召政府把更多的传统节日列为法定节日。
We should call on our government to list more traditional festivals as national festivals.
4.(一句多译) 这个方法有助于促进传统节日的发展。
(1)This method is of help to promote the development of traditional festivals.
(2)This method is helpful to promote the development of traditional festivals.
Step 3:衔接成篇
How to promote our traditional festivals
With the western festivals becoming more and more popular,our traditional festivals are being ignored.We should try our best to promote traditional festivals.
There are many ways to promote traditional festivals.First of all, we should call on our government to list more traditional festivals as national festivals, which is of help to promote the development of traditional festivals.What’s more, it is important for schools to teach students the traditional culture.Only in this way can the younger generation have a better understanding of traditional festivals and customs.
At last,if we work together,we will successfully inherit and promote our traditional festivals.
1．春节是我国重要的传统节日。请根据下列所给的提示内容，写一篇介绍春节的短文。
我国的春节是阴历的正月初一，一般在阳历的一月或者二月。
春节有很多习俗，比如放烟花，收红包，拜访亲戚朋友，等等。
春节是全家团圆的日子。
除夕晚上人们包水饺，看春晚。
世界各地的中国人也庆祝春节。
要求：1. 文章必须包括以上五条中的至少四条，可展开思路，适当发挥；
2. 词数80词左右。
提示词：中国阴历 Chinese lunar calendar；阳历 solar calendar
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2．某英文网站面向中学生征稿。请你写一篇英语稿件，介绍“中秋节”及这个节日里的主要活动。写作要点：
1.它是中国的传统节日之一；
2.家人团聚；
3.赏月、吃月饼；
4.还有旅游、访友等其他活动。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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3．假定你是李华，你校英文报“英语园地”栏目拟刊登介绍中国节日风俗的短文。请写一篇短文介绍端午节向该栏目投稿。要点如下：
1.端午节的起源;
2.端午节的庆祝活动;
3.你的看法。
注意：1.词数80左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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4．假设你是李华，你校英语广播站正在举行主题为“我最喜欢的传统节日”征文活动，请根据以下要点写一篇 100 字左右的短文投稿。
1. 节日的名称；
2. 节日期间人们的主要活动。
注意：
1. 词数 100 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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5．传统节日是人们文化生活中的重要组成部分，它们代表着不同历史时期的文化遗产和民族精神。这些节日的庆祝活动，不仅丰富了人们的业余生活，还加强了人与人之间的情感纽带。请你就此话题写一篇关于你最喜爱的节日，内容包括：
1.你最喜爱的节日简介;
2.过节的风俗习惯;
3.结合你的经历分享你的感受, 你的节日安排。
注意：1.写作词数应为80——100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连。
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6．假定你是李华，你校即将举办校园文化节。你准备参加“用英语讲好中国故事之中华传统节日”版块活动，你选择给校刊投稿介绍端午节。内容包括：
1.庆祝时间；
2.庆祝活动；
3.节日意义。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：粽子rice dumplings； zongzi
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参考答案
1．
Spring Festival
Spring Festival is very important in China, which we celebrate in January and February. A few days before Spring Festival, we clean our homes and sweep all the bad luck away.There are many customs in the Spring Festival, such as setting off fireworks, receiving red envelopes, visiting relatives and friends, and so on.On New Year's Eve, people make dumplings and watch the Spring Festival Gala,having a big family dinner.
When people meet, they usually say best wishes to each other. Chinese people all over the world also observe the Spring Festival.
【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求考生介绍中国的传统节日春节。
【要点详解】1.词汇积累
重要的：important→essential
传统的：traditional→conventional
全世界：all over the world→worldwide
清洁：clean→tidy
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：here are many customs in the Spring Festival, such as setting off fireworks, receiving red envelopes, visiting relatives and friends, and so on.
拓展句：here are many customs in the Spring Festival, such as setting off fireworks, receiving red envelopes, which means luck money, visiting relatives and friends, and so on.
[高分句型1] Spring Festival is very important in China, which we celebrate in January and February. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] When people meet, they usually say best wishes to each other. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
2． The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15 th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar. As one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it has been enjoying great popularity in our country. Usually, no matter how far away or how busy we are, we will try to come home for celebration. The moon that night looks the brightest in the whole lunar month. What we love most is the time when we enjoy the full moon together. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruit, sharing our stories. In addition to these traditional activities, we have a wider range of choices such as traveling and visiting our relatives or friends.
【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文，要求考生写一篇英语稿件，介绍“中秋节”及这个节日里的主要活动，内容包括它是中国传统节日之一、家人团聚、赏月吃月饼及旅游、访友等其他活动。
【要点详解】1. 词汇积累：
传统的、惯例的：traditional→conventional
赏月：enjoy the moon→admire the moon
除了……以外：in addtion to→apart from
选择：choice→option
2. 句式拓展：
同义句转换：
原句： With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruit, sharing our stories.
拓展句： As the beautiful moon is up in the sky, we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruit, sharing our stories.
【高分句型1】 Usually, no matter how far away or how busy we are, we will try to come home for celebration.（运用了以连词no matter how引导的让步状语从句。）
【高分句型2】What we love most is the time when we enjoy the full moon together.（运用了以连接代词what引导的主语从句和关系副词when引导的定语从句。）
3．The Dragon Boat Festival, one of the Chinese traditional festivals, dates back to over 2,000 years. It is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese calendar, and it will fall on June 9 next year.
The festival is best-known for its dragon-boat races, especially in the southern places where there are many rivers and lakes. Besides, people always cook and eat rice dumplings made of glutinous rice and wrapped by bamboo leaves to celebrate it. People celebrate the Dragon Boat Festival in honor of Qu Yuan, a great poet of ancient China.
In my opinion, it is of great necessity to attach importance to our traditional festivals, for they’re part of our culture.
【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求考生写一篇短文介绍端午节向学校英文报“英语园地”栏目投稿。
【要点详解】1.词汇积累
传统的：traditional→conventional
为纪念：in honor of→in memory of
重要性：importance→significance
尤其是：especially→particularly
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Besides, people always cook and eat rice dumplings made of glutinous rice and wrapped by bamboo leaves to celebrate it.
拓展句：Besides, people always cook and eat rice dumplings which are made of glutinous rice and wrapped by bamboo leaves to celebrate it.
[高分句型1] The festival is best-known for its dragon-boat races, especially in the southern places where there are many rivers and lakes. (运用了where引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] Besides, people always cook and eat rice dumplings made of glutinous rice and wrapped by bamboo leaves to celebrate it. (运用了过去分词作后置定语)
4． My favorite festival is Mid-Autumn Festival, which is one of the most important traditional festivals in China. All Chinese people usually celebrate it at home. It falls in September or October every year. On this day, people usually get together with their families and have a nice meal. The most popular food are mooncakes. After that, people always enjoy the moon while listening to the story about Chang’e. All of the children love this moment.
In short, the Mid-Autumn Festival is a special day for families to get together and share the happiness and love. Everyone always enjoys themselves on that day.
【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生以“我最喜欢的传统节日”写一篇短文投稿。
【要点详解】1.词汇积累
重要的：important→vital
欣赏：enjoy→appreciate
总之：in short→in a word
过得愉快：enjoy oneself→have fun
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In short, the Mid-Autumn Festival is a special day for families to get together and share the happiness and love.
拓展句：In short, the Mid-Autumn Festival is a special day when families get together and share the happiness and love.
【高分句型1】My favorite festival is Mid-Autumn Festival, which is one of the most important traditional festivals in China.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】After that, people always enjoy the moon while listening to the story about Chang’e.（运用了while引导的时间状语从句的省略）
5．Spring Festival is also called Chinese New Year. It’s my favorite Chinese festival. The festival is always in February, so I have enough time to celebrate it.
On this day, I will visit my relatives and play with my cousins. If I wish my elders congratulations or health, people always wish each other good luck. At noon, they will give me red envelopes.
In the evening, my parents and grandparents usually make spring rolls. All my relatives will have a special dinner together at o’clock. At that time, almost every family would watch the festival together.
People usually set off firecrackers at 12 o’clock. It’s very interesting for Chinese people to hear about the new year in the Spring Festival. I’m always happy with the bell. Many people think it’s a wonderful day.
【写作分析】这篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生介绍自己最喜欢的节日。
【要点详解】1.词汇积累
庆祝：celebrate → observe
拜访：visit→ call on→ pay a visit to
祝彼此好运：wish each other good luck→ may each other be lucky
给：give → offer
红包：red envelopes → lucky money
吃团圆饭：have a special dinner together → unit at the table
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句1：Spring Festival is also called Chinese New Year. It’s my favorite Chinese festival.
拓展句1：Spring Festival, which is also called Chinese New Year, is my favorite Chinese festival.
【高分句型1】The festival is always in February, so I have enough time to celebrate it.（运用了so连接的并列句，表因果关系。）
【高分句型2】If I wish my elders congratulations or health, people always wish each other good luck. （运用了条件状语从句。）
【高分句型3】It’s very interesting for Chinese people to hear about the new year in the Spring Festival.（运用了it作形式主语，真正的主语为动词不定式短语这一结构。）
6．One possible version：
Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese lunar calendar.
For thousands of years, the festival has been marked by eating rice dumplings and racing dragon boats. The rice dumpling is made of rice, meat and so on. You can eat different kinds of rice dumplings. Besides, the festival is best known for its dragon-boat races, especially in the southern places where there are many rivers and lakes. Dragon Boat Festival is in memory of the death of the famous ancient poet Qu Yuan, who is a devoted government official and poet.
Overall, the Dragon Boat Festival enjoys great popularity among people in China.
【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生在即将举办校园文化节中，给校刊投稿介绍端午节，内容包括庆祝时间、庆祝活动以及节日的意义。
【要点详解】1.词汇积累
庆祝：celebrate →observe
此外：besides → what’s more
著名的：famous →well-known
忠诚的：devoted →committed
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese lunar calendar.
拓展句：Dragon Boat Festival, which is also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese lunar calendar.
【高分句型1】Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese lunar calendar.（运用了过去分词短语作定语）
【高分句型2】Dragon Boat Festival is in memory of the death of the famous ancient poet Qu Yuan, who is a devoted government official and poet.（运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句）Unit 3 Festivals and customs
单元写作深度指导-推广中国传统节日（原卷版）
1.(教材原句)According to tradition, we should celebrate the festival by going mountain climbing, but how many people today still observe this tradition 依照传统,我们应该爬山来庆祝这个节日,但是如今还有多少人仍然遵循这个传统呢
(应用文之介绍活动)When we take part in the parade to observe the National Day, we must observe the traffic rules.If we observe someone run the red light, we should stop him.当我们参加游行来庆祝国庆节的时候,我们必须遵守交通规则。如果我们看到有人闯红灯,我们应该阻止他。
【写作借鉴】
(1)observe sb. do sth.观察/看到某人做某事(全过程)
observe sb. doing sth. 观察/看到某人正在做某事
observe the traffic rules 遵守交通规则
observe that... 发现……
(2)observer n.观察者;观察员
(3)observation n.观察;观测;监视
▲(应用文之介绍春节)我正写信告诉你我们是怎样庆祝春节的。
I’m writing to tell you how we observe the Spring Festival.
2.(教材原句) The Dragon Boat Festival,for example,is celebrated in honour of Qu Yuan.
例如,庆祝端午节是为了纪念屈原。
【写作借鉴】
(1)in honour of 为了纪念,为了庆祝
in one’s honour 为了纪念某人
have the honour of doing/to do sth. 有幸做某事
It is sb.’s/an honour to do sth.做某事是某人的荣幸/一件荣幸的事
(2)honoured adj.受尊敬的,感到荣幸的
be/feel honoured to do sth.很荣幸做某事
be honoured with... 被授予……
be honoured as... 被授予……的称号
3.(教材原句)Finally, traditional festivals are a source of national pride and help shape our national identity.
最后,传统节日是民族自豪感的源泉,有助于形成我们的民族认同。
(应用文之演讲稿)Our strong sense of national identity has been shaped by our history.
我们强烈的民族认同感是由我们的历史塑造的。
【写作借鉴】
(1)identity card 身份证
a sense of identity 认同感
(2)identification n.辨认,识别
(3)identify v.识别,认出
identify sb./sth.as 认出某人/物是……
4.(教材原句)It is the duty of every one of us to protect them for generations to come.
保护它们让它们传承下来是我们每一个人的责任。
(应用文之回复咨询)As your penfriend, I think it is my duty to offer my help whenever you meet with difficulties while learning Chinese.作为你的笔友, 我认为在你学中文遇到困难时, 为你提供帮助是我的责任。
【写作借鉴】
on duty 值班,上班
off duty 下班
a sense of duty 责任感
It’s one’s duty to do sth. 做某事是某人的职责
5.(教材原句)The Double Ninth Festival(the Chongyang Festival),which has a history of over 2,000 years, falls on the ninth day of the ninth month in the Chinese lunar calendar.九月九(重阳节)有2 000多年的历史,是在中国农历九月的第九天。
【写作借鉴】
fall behind 落后
fall down 跌倒; 倒塌; 落下
fall off (从……)落下
fall in love with 喜欢, 爱上
▲我们在功课上可能会落后于他人, 这让我们很有压力。
We may fall behind others in our lessons, which makes us stressed.
6.(教材原句) It is the duty of every one of us to protect them for generations to come.
我们每个人都有责任为我们的后代保护它们。
(应用文之传统文化)My generation have grown up without the experience of a world war.
我这一代人在成长过程中没有经历过世界大战。
【写作借鉴】
from generation to generation 世世代代,代代相传
generation gap 代沟
build up/lead/improve a generation 培养/引导/提高一代人
1.题型解读
介绍中国的传统节日,属于“人与社会”主题语境中“不同民族文化习俗与传统节日”的范畴。主要从传统节日的名称、庆祝时间、节日由来、风俗习惯或庆祝活动、节日的重要性及其意义等方面来写。
2.突破策略
①首先审题,介绍传统节日的相关信息。
②选用正确的人称和时态,主要使用第一人称和一般现在时来写。然后写出单个句子,再使用正确的连词,连句成段。
③文章可以分为三段:
【语料积累】
1.教材词汇
(1)promote vt.促进,推动;促销;提升,晋升
(2)lunar adj.月亮的,月球的
(3)observe vt.遵守;注意到;观察;庆祝
(4)generation n.一代人;代,一代;产生
(5)source n.来源;起源;源头
(6)identity n.特性;身份
(7)duty n.责任,义务;上班,值班;职责;税
(8)precious adj.宝贵的,珍贵的;珍奇的,珍稀的
2.常用词块
(1)节日介绍
①date back to/date from 追溯到
②originate from/in 起源于
③be popular with 受……的欢迎
④be rooted in 根植于
(2)措施
①take measures 采取措施
②call on sb.to do sth. 号召某人做某事
③raise the awareness of 提高……的意识
④educate sb.to do sth. 教育某人做某事
(3)意义
①hold on to traditional festivals 保留传统节日
②promote the development of traditional festivals 促进传统节日的发展
③inherit cultural heritages 继承文化遗产
④fall on 适逢;正当
⑤in honor of 为向……表示敬意
3.话题句式
(1)段首句
①The Spring Festival, also known as the Chinese New Year, is a very important festival in China.
春节,也被称为中国新年,在中国是一个非常重要的节日。
②As is well known to us all, the Spring Festival/the Mid-Autumn Festival is a festival for reunion.
众所周知,春节/中秋节是一个团圆的节日。
(2)主体段落句
①It’s obvious that there are many ways to promote the development of traditional festivals.
很明显,有很多方式可以促进传统节日的发展。
②It is surely a good way to promote the development of traditional festivals through the media.
通过媒体促进传统节日的发展无疑是个好办法。
③It is important for schools to teach students the traditional culture.
对学校来说,教授学生传统文化是很重要的。
(3)段尾句
①It’s our duty to promote the development of traditional culture.
促进传统文化的发展是我们的责任。
②Only in this way can we promote the development of traditional festivals.
只有这样,我们才能促进传统节日的发展。
假如你是李华,你校校刊Sunflower本期征文的话题是 “How to promote our traditional festivals”,请你据此写一篇文章向校刊投稿,谈谈怎样才能号召人们传承中国传统节日和风俗,使中国传统文化发扬光大。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
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【写作示例】
Step 1:读题布局
Step 2:词句激活
1.西方节日正变得越来越流行。
The western festivals are becoming more and more popular.
2.我们的传统节日正被忽视。
Our traditional festivals are being ignored.
3.我们应该号召政府把更多的传统节日列为法定节日。
We should call on our government to list more traditional festivals as national festivals.
4.(一句多译) 这个方法有助于促进传统节日的发展。
(1)This method is of help to promote the development of traditional festivals.
(2)This method is helpful to promote the development of traditional festivals.
Step 3:衔接成篇
How to promote our traditional festivals
With the western festivals becoming more and more popular,our traditional festivals are being ignored.We should try our best to promote traditional festivals.
There are many ways to promote traditional festivals.First of all, we should call on our government to list more traditional festivals as national festivals, which is of help to promote the development of traditional festivals.What’s more, it is important for schools to teach students the traditional culture.Only in this way can the younger generation have a better understanding of traditional festivals and customs.
At last,if we work together,we will successfully inherit and promote our traditional festivals.
1．春节是我国重要的传统节日。请根据下列所给的提示内容，写一篇介绍春节的短文。
我国的春节是阴历的正月初一，一般在阳历的一月或者二月。
春节有很多习俗，比如放烟花，收红包，拜访亲戚朋友，等等。
春节是全家团圆的日子。
除夕晚上人们包水饺，看春晚。
世界各地的中国人也庆祝春节。
要求：1. 文章必须包括以上五条中的至少四条，可展开思路，适当发挥；
2. 词数80词左右。
提示词：中国阴历 Chinese lunar calendar；阳历 solar calendar
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2．某英文网站面向中学生征稿。请你写一篇英语稿件，介绍“中秋节”及这个节日里的主要活动。写作要点：
1.它是中国的传统节日之一；
2.家人团聚；
3.赏月、吃月饼；
4.还有旅游、访友等其他活动。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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3．假定你是李华，你校英文报“英语园地”栏目拟刊登介绍中国节日风俗的短文。请写一篇短文介绍端午节向该栏目投稿。要点如下：
1.端午节的起源;
2.端午节的庆祝活动;
3.你的看法。
注意：1.词数80左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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4．假设你是李华，你校英语广播站正在举行主题为“我最喜欢的传统节日”征文活动，请根据以下要点写一篇 100 字左右的短文投稿。
1. 节日的名称；
2. 节日期间人们的主要活动。
注意：
1. 词数 100 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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5．传统节日是人们文化生活中的重要组成部分，它们代表着不同历史时期的文化遗产和民族精神。这些节日的庆祝活动，不仅丰富了人们的业余生活，还加强了人与人之间的情感纽带。请你就此话题写一篇关于你最喜爱的节日，内容包括：
1.你最喜爱的节日简介;
2.过节的风俗习惯;
3.结合你的经历分享你的感受, 你的节日安排。
注意：1.写作词数应为80——100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连。
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6．假定你是李华，你校即将举办校园文化节。你准备参加“用英语讲好中国故事之中华传统节日”版块活动，你选择给校刊投稿介绍端午节。内容包括：
1.庆祝时间；
2.庆祝活动；
3.节日意义。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：粽子rice dumplings； zongzi
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Unit 4 Exploring literature
单元写作深度指导-向学校图书馆推荐书籍（解析版）
(教材原句)(A play is )usually made up of dialogues between characters and stage directions.
(戏剧)通常由角色之间的对话和舞台指示组成。
【写作借鉴】
at this stage 目前,现阶段
be/go on the stage 当/成为演员;登台演出
at...stage 处于……阶段
leave the stage 退出舞台
set the stage for sth. 使某事成为可能;为某事铺平了道路
stage by stage 逐步地
▲当先行词stage表示事物的发展阶段或所处的状态时,定语从句的关系词用where表示抽象的地点。类似的词还有situation,point,case,position等。
▲(应用文之演讲稿)我们必须努力学习为未来找工作打好基础。
We must study hard to set the stage for our future job hunting.
1.题型解读
推荐信是常用的一种书信文体,它可以向某人或某个组织推荐某物或某人。一般来说,作者推荐的物或者人都具有鲜明突出的特征和优秀品质。推荐信的用语要简洁,具有说服力且内容要真实可信。
自我推荐或向学生推荐某人、某事、某物时,语气要肯定,并对所推荐的人、事、物给予正面评价。
2.突破策略
【语料积累】
1.教材词汇
(1)chapter n.章节;篇章
(2)poetry n.诗集,诗歌
(3)stage n.舞台;阶段;步骤 vt. 上演,举办
(4)autobiography n.自传
(5)biography n.传记,传记作品
2.常用词块
(1)推荐对象
①science books 科学书籍
②literary books 文学书籍
③classic works 经典作品
④science fiction 科幻小说
(2)推荐理由
①arouse our curiosity 激发我们的好奇心
②broaden our horizons 开阔我们的视野
③promote traditional culture 弘扬传统文化
④enjoy the beauty of the language 欣赏语言之美
⑤have a better understanding of 更好理解……
3.话题句式
(1)段首句
①I feel greatly honored to recommend to you a book about the history of China.
我很荣幸向你推荐一本关于中国历史的书。
②Learning that our school library is going to buy books, I’d like to give some suggestions.
得知我们学校图书馆要买书,我想给出一些建议。
(2)主体段落句
①It is universally acknowledged that this is one of the best novels about contemporary rural life.
人们公认,这是一部反映当代农村生活的最好的小说之一。
②The book is of great help for us to learn about the history of Tang Dynasty.
这本书对我们了解唐朝历史很有帮助。
(3)段尾句
①In a word, I would appreciate it if you could consider my recommendation.
总之,如果你能考虑我的推荐,我将不胜感激。
②Based on the above facts, I strongly recommend the book to you.
基于以上事实,我向你强烈推荐这本书。
假如你是晨光中学的李津,你的英国外教Alex打算在寒假里发起“英语经典诵读(English Classics for Recitation)”活动,现就诵读书目征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Alex写一封电子邮件:
1.你打算推荐的一本书;
2.推荐的原因;
3.希望从活动中有何收获。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
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【写作示例】
Step 1:读题布局
Step 2:词句激活
1.我听说你打算开展一项名为“英语经典诵读”的活动。
I heard that you intend to launch an activity called English Classics for Recitation.
2.能有机会发表我的意见,我感到非常荣幸。
I feel much honored to have the chance to make my voice heard.
3.我想推荐的书是《简·爱》。
The book I’d like to recommend is Jane Eyre.
4.作为19世纪出版的经典小说之一,《简·爱》的语言和简的性格都很美。
As one of the classic novels published in the 19th century, its beauty not only lies in the language, but also exists in the characteristics of Jane.
5.我坚信,女主人公简勤奋、善良和追求独立自由的品质一定会深深地打动读者。
I firmly believe that the heroine Jane’s diligence, kindness and pursuit of independence and freedom will surely touch the readers deeply.
Step 衔接成篇
Dear Alex,
I’m Li Jin, a student at Chenguang High School.Hearing that you intend to launch an activity called English Classics for Recitation, I feel much honored to have the chance to make my voice heard.
The book I’d like to recommend is Jane Eyre.As one of the classic novels published in the 19th century, its beauty not only lies in the language, but also exists in the characteristics of Jane.I firmly believe that the heroine Jane’s diligence, kindness and pursuit of independence and freedom will surely touch the readers deeply.
I hope the activity will be of great benefit to our growth.We will not only learn much knowledge but also broaden our horizons.
Yours sincerely,
Li Jin
1．假设你是来自光明中学的李华，你最近读了一本非常吸引人的书，并认为它应该被添加到学校图书馆的藏书中。请你写一封信给学校图书馆管理员推荐这本书。
内容包括：
（1）书籍的基本信息；
（2）推荐原因。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80词左右，已给出的部分不计入总词数；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear librarian,
I am Li Hua, a student at Guangming Middle School. I’m writing this letter to recommend a book to you.
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Yours sincerely,
Li hua
2．学校图书馆最近举办阅读分享活动，假如你是李华，请你用英语写一封信，推荐你最近在读的《红楼梦》(A Dream of Red Mansions)，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
注意：1．词数80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear librarian,
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Yours,
Li Hua
3．假定你是李华。你校外文阅览室准备购置一批英文图书，现征集学生意见。请用英文写一封邮件至校长信箱，推荐一些英文书籍，内容包括：
1.推荐的类型；
2.推荐的理由。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sir,
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Yours,
Li Hua
4．学校图书馆需要购置一批新书，现向学生征求意见。假定你是李华，请你用英语给图书馆Thomas老师写一封邮件，推荐科普类图书(popular science books)和文学类图书(literary books)，并分别说明推荐理由。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Thomas，
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Yours，
Li Hua
5．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom对中国书籍非常感兴趣，想让你推荐一类有趣又能提升思维品质的中国图书。请你给他写一封信，内容包括：
1. 推荐的图书类别；
2. 推荐理由。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
6．学校图书馆需要购置一批新书，现向学生征求意见。假如你是李华，请你用英语给图书馆Ryan老师写一封信，推荐图书。主要内容有：
1. 推荐书目：科普类(popular science books)和文学类(literary books)等；
2. 简单介绍图书；
3. 说明推荐理由。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Ryan,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
7．假如你是你校英文报记者李华，校图书馆新开设了英语原著（English original books）阅览室，请你写一篇公开信向同学们推荐这个阅览室，内容包括：
1. 览室的具体位置和开放时间；
2. 推荐的理由；
3. 表达期待。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear students,
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Yours,
Li Hua
8．假设你是启明中学的学生李华，你校图书馆打算开展一次主题为“阅读的力量”的读书活动，现向全校学生征集活动方案，写一封信给图书馆，推荐活动方案，内容须包括：
1. 具体的活动安排；
2. 活动的意义。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir or Madam,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
参考答案
1．Dear librarian,
I am Li Hua, a student at Guangming Middle School. I’m writing this letter to recommend a book to you.
The book is titled “The Alchemist” by Paulo Coelho, which is a heartfelt tale of a shepherd boy’s journey of self-discovery. I find it particularly compelling due to its profound messages about following people’s dreams and embracing life’s challenges. The book’s universal themes and engaging narrative make it a must-read for our school library.
I sincerely hope that you’ll consider adding “The Alchemist” to our collection. Thank you for your attention.
Yours sincerely,
Li hua
【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给学校图书管理员写一份推荐信，推荐一本非常吸引人的、认为应该被添加到学校图书馆的藏书中的书。
【要点详解】1. 词汇积累
真诚的：heartfelt→sincere
吸引人的：compelling→fascinating
由于：due to→because of
意义深远的：profound→significant
2. 句式拓展
简单句变符合句
原句：The book’s universal themes and engaging narrative make it a must-read for our school library.
拓展句：The book, which possesses universal themes and an engaging narrative, is a must-read for our school library.
【高分句型1】The book is titled “The Alchemist” by Paulo Coelho, which is a heartfelt tale of a shepherd boy’s journey of self-discovery. (运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I sincerely hope that you’ll consider adding “The Alchemist” to our collection. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
2．Dear librarian,
I am writing to recommend a book that has greatly impacted me. The book is A Dream of Red Mansions, written by Cao Xueqin.
A Dream of Red Mansions tells the story of the rise and fall of the Jia family. Through its intricate plot and vivid characters, the novel explores themes such as love, loss, and the passing of time. Cao Xueqin’s use of language is truly masterful, and it has inspired me to explore the beauty and power of the Chinese language.
I highly recommend A Dream of Red Mansions to anyone who is interested in Chinese literature, culture, or language.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校图书馆最近举办阅读分享活动，要求考生按照要求用英语写一封信，推荐最近在读的《红楼梦》。
【要点详解】1.词汇积累
推荐：recommend→ nominate
影响：impact→ influence
错综复杂的：intricate→ complex
生动的：vivid→ graphic
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Cao Xueqin’s use of language is truly masterful, and it has inspired me to explore the beauty and power of the Chinese language.
拓展句：Cao Xueqin’s use of language is truly masterful, which has inspired me to explore the beauty and power of the Chinese language.
【高分句型1】I am writing to recommend a book that has greatly impacted me.（运用了that引导的限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】I highly recommend A Dream of Red Mansions to anyone who is interested in Chinese literature, culture, or language.（运用了who引导的限制性定语从句）
3．A.（原创作文）
Dear Sir
I’m Li Hua，a senior 2 student. Learning that our school library is seeking advice on types of English books from students, I’m writing to recommend some.
With reference to English novels, Harry Potter series outshines others in literature, thus ranking top in my recommendation list. Lying behind its popularity are many reasons. First, it is its juicy storyline as well as creative tone that appeals to people of all ages. Moreover, not only can it immerse us in the authentic English, but also it arms our imagination with wings.
I do hope you can take my recommendation into account.
Looking forward to seeing that Harry Potter series will be listed in your favorable consideration and enrich more students’ life.
Yours,
Li Hua
B.（官方范文）
Dear Sir,
I am writing to recommend two types of books. The first type is fantasy novels, which are very popular with students. Some examples of good fantasy novels would be The Lord of the Rings series and the Harry Potter series.
The second type of book I would like to recommend is biographies. Good biographies such as Marie Curie: A Life will inspire students to study harder and reach their goals. In addition to biographies of historical figures, biographies of contemporary figures can be considered.
I look forward to reading more fantasy novels and biographies in the reading room soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给校长信箱写一封信，推荐一些英文书籍以配备外文阅览室。
【要点详解】A.（原创作文）
1.词汇积累
寻求建议：ask for advice→ seek advice
超越，胜过：exceed→outshine
有趣的故事情节：interesting story→juicy storyline
吸引：attract→appeal to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：With reference to English novels, Harry Potter series outshines others in literature, thus ranking top in my recommendation list.
拓展句：Among English fictions, Harry Potter series has the upper hand in literature, so it's at the top of my list of recommendations.
[高分句型1] Lying behind its popularity are many reasons. (运用了完全倒装句)
[高分句型2] First, it is its juicy storyline as well as creative tone that appeal to people of all ages. (运用了强调句型)
4．Dear Thomas，
Knowing that our library is going to buy books, I'd like to give some suggestions.
What we need most are popular science books.Usually popular science books explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way. They help us understand science better and arouse our curiosity about scientific discoveries.In addition to reading for knowledge, we read for fun and inspiration.That is why I recommend another category of books: literary books. Classic works, written by masters, present great thoughts through fascinating stories and language. They not only offer us joy and excitement, but also encourage us to think critically.
I'll be glad if you can consider my recommendation.
【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向图书馆Thomas老师写一封邮件，推荐科普类图书和文学类图书，并分别说明推荐理由。
【要点详解】1.词汇积累
购买：buy→purchase
建议：suggestion→tip
提供：offer →provide
鼓励某人做某事：encourage sb. to do sth. →inspire sb. to do sth.
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： Classic works, written by masters, present great thoughts a through fascinating stories and language.
拓展句： Classic works, which were written by masters, present great thoughts a through fascinating stories and language.
[高分句型1]What we need most are popular science books.（运用了what引导的主语从句）
[高分句型2]That is why I recommend another category of books: literary books.（运用了why引导的表语从句）
5．Dear Tom,
Thrilled to learn that you are fascinated by Chinese books, I would heartily recommend fantasy novels as a great choice.
Filled with thrilling adventures and memorable characters, fantasy novels can transport you into magical and imaginative worlds. Moreover, they encourage us to think outside the box and develop a deeper understanding of human nature and ethical dilemmas. Most importantly, not only can it broaden our perspectives, but it will also enhance our critical thinking skills.
If you have further questions, please keep me informed at your earliest convenience.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。英国笔友Tom对中国书籍非常感兴趣，想让考生推荐一类有趣又能提升思维品质的中国图书，要求考生按照要求给他写一封信。
【要点详解】1.词汇积累
兴奋的：thrilled→ excited
令人兴奋的：thrilling→ exciting
鼓励：encourage→ inspire
理解：understanding→ comprehension
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Filled with thrilling adventures and memorable characters, fantasy novels can transport you into magical and imaginative worlds.
拓展句：Fantasy novels, which are filled with thrilling adventures and memorable characters, can transport you into magical and imaginative worlds.
【高分句型1】Thrilled to learn that you are fascinated by Chinese books, I would heartily recommend fantasy novels as a great choice.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】If you have further questions, please keep me informed at your earliest convenience.（运用了If引导的条件状语从句）
6．Dear Ryan,
Knowing that our library is going to buy books, I’d like to give some suggestions.
Popular science books, our favourite, explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way. They not only help us understand science subjects better and arouse our curiosity about scientific discoveries, but also teach us to distinguish and cultivate our scientific thinking. Besides, we read for fun and inspiration. That is why I recommend another category of books: literary books. Classic works, written by masters, present great thoughts through fascinating stories and language. They offer us joy and excitement as well as encourage us to think critically. Reading these books, we can make our learning and life more wonderful!
I’ll be glad if you can consider my recommendation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给图书馆管理员Ryan老师写一封信，推荐一些书籍类别。
【要点详解】1.词汇积累
基本的：basic→fundamental
此外：besides→additionally
乐趣：fun→pleasure
为某人提供某物：offer sb sth→provide sb with sth
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Classic works, written by masters, present great thoughts through fascinating stories and language.
拓展句：Classic works which are written by masters present great thoughts through fascinating stories and language.
[高分句型1]That is why I recommend another category of books: literary books.(why引导的表语从句)
[高分句型1]I’ll be glad if you can consider my recommendation.(if引导的条件状语从句)
7．Dear students,
The reading room for English original books in school library is now open to the public. Here I will tell you something detailed about it.
First of all, it is located on the third floor and opens from 8:00 am to 5:30 pm on weekdays and 9:00 am to 4:00 pm at weekends. I strongly recommend you go there in your spare time because it provides English materials in the original you can never find anywhere else. Besides, it is likely that you will meet people who are interested in or skilled at English there and you can make friends with them.
I strongly believe that you will make great progress in English in the end through hard work. Looking forward to seeing you there.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇公开信，向同学们推荐校图书馆新开设的英语原著阅览室。
【要点详解】1.词汇积累
空闲时间：spare time→free time
提供：provide→offer
此外：besides→ what’s more
擅长：be skilled at→be good at
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：First of all, it is located on the third floor and opens from 8:00 am to 5:30 pm on weekdays and 9:00 am to 4:00 pm at weekends.
拓展句：First of all, it is located on the third floor, which opens from 8:00 am to 5:30 pm on weekdays and 9:00 am to 4:00 pm at weekends.
【高分句型1】I strongly recommend you go there in your spare time because it provides English materials in the original you can never find anywhere else.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句和省略关系词的定语从句）
【高分句型2】I strongly believe that you will make great progress in English in the end through hard work.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
8．Dear Sir or Madam,
Knowing that our library is planning to hold an activity called “The Power of Reading”, I’m writing to give some recommendations.
First, we can set up a reading corner in each class, encouraging students to bring their own books to the corner and share them with others. In addition, we can also call on students to write their reading feelings and give rewards to those who submit the best ones. What’s more, a composition competition should be held. Every student has access to the competition.
Such activities will not only offer us joy and excitement, but also encourage us to think critically. I’d appreciate it if you could take my recommendations into account.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作，学校图书馆打算开展一次主题为“阅读的力量”的读书活动，现向全校学生征集活动方案。要求考生给图书馆写一封信，推荐活动方案，并介绍具体的活动安排和活动的意义。
【要点详解】1. 词汇积累
设立：set up→establish
呼吁：call on→appeal to
提交：submit→hand in
考虑：take ... into account→ take... into consideration
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：What’s more, a composition competition should be held. Every student has access to the competition.
拓展句：What’s more, a composition competition should be held, which every student has access to.
【高分句型1】Knowing that our library is planning to hold an activity called “The Power of Reading”, I’m writing to give some recommendations.(运用了现在分词短语作状语、that引导宾语从句以及过去分词作后置定语)
【高分句型2】In addition, we can also call on students to write their reading feelings and give rewards to those who submit the best ones. (运用了who引导限制性定语从句)Unit 4 Exploring literature
单元写作深度指导-向学校图书馆推荐书籍（原卷版）
(教材原句)(A play is )usually made up of dialogues between characters and stage directions.
(戏剧)通常由角色之间的对话和舞台指示组成。
【写作借鉴】
at this stage 目前,现阶段
be/go on the stage 当/成为演员;登台演出
at...stage 处于……阶段
leave the stage 退出舞台
set the stage for sth. 使某事成为可能;为某事铺平了道路
stage by stage 逐步地
▲当先行词stage表示事物的发展阶段或所处的状态时,定语从句的关系词用where表示抽象的地点。类似的词还有situation, point, case, position等。
▲(应用文之演讲稿)我们必须努力学习为未来找工作打好基础。
We must study hard to set the stage for our future job hunting.
1.题型解读
推荐信是常用的一种书信文体,它可以向某人或某个组织推荐某物或某人。一般来说,作者推荐的物或者人都具有鲜明突出的特征和优秀品质。推荐信的用语要简洁,具有说服力且内容要真实可信。
自我推荐或向学生推荐某人、某事、某物时,语气要肯定,并对所推荐的人、事、物给予正面评价。
2.突破策略
【语料积累】
1.教材词汇
(1)chapter n.章节;篇章
(2)poetry n.诗集,诗歌
(3)stage n.舞台;阶段;步骤 vt. 上演,举办
(4)autobiography n.自传
(5)biography n.传记,传记作品
2.常用词块
(1)推荐对象
①science books 科学书籍
②literary books 文学书籍
③classic works 经典作品
④science fiction 科幻小说
(2)推荐理由
①arouse our curiosity 激发我们的好奇心
②broaden our horizons 开阔我们的视野
③promote traditional culture 弘扬传统文化
④enjoy the beauty of the language 欣赏语言之美
⑤have a better understanding of 更好理解……
3.话题句式
(1)段首句
①I feel greatly honored to recommend to you a book about the history of China.
我很荣幸向你推荐一本关于中国历史的书。
②Learning that our school library is going to buy books, I’d like to give some suggestions.
得知我们学校图书馆要买书,我想给出一些建议。
(2)主体段落句
①It is universally acknowledged that this is one of the best novels about contemporary rural life.
人们公认,这是一部反映当代农村生活的最好的小说之一。
②The book is of great help for us to learn about the history of Tang Dynasty.
这本书对我们了解唐朝历史很有帮助。
(3)段尾句
①In a word, I would appreciate it if you could consider my recommendation.
总之,如果你能考虑我的推荐,我将不胜感激。
②Based on the above facts, I strongly recommend the book to you.
基于以上事实,我向你强烈推荐这本书。
假如你是晨光中学的李津,你的英国外教Alex打算在寒假里发起“英语经典诵读(English Classics for Recitation)”活动,现就诵读书目征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Alex写一封电子邮件:
1.你打算推荐的一本书;
2.推荐的原因;
3.希望从活动中有何收获。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
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【写作示例】
Step 1:读题布局
Step 2:词句激活
1.我听说你打算开展一项名为“英语经典诵读”的活动。
I heard that you intend to launch an activity called English Classics for Recitation.
2.能有机会发表我的意见,我感到非常荣幸。
I feel much honored to have the chance to make my voice heard.
3.我想推荐的书是《简·爱》。
The book I’d like to recommend is Jane Eyre.
4.作为19世纪出版的经典小说之一,《简·爱》的语言和简的性格都很美。
As one of the classic novels published in the 19th century, its beauty not only lies in the language, but also exists in the characteristics of Jane.
5.我坚信,女主人公简勤奋、善良和追求独立自由的品质一定会深深地打动读者。
I firmly believe that the heroine Jane’s diligence, kindness and pursuit of independence and freedom will surely touch the readers deeply.
Step 衔接成篇
Dear Alex,
I’m Li Jin, a student at Chenguang High School.Hearing that you intend to launch an activity called English Classics for Recitation, I feel much honored to have the chance to make my voice heard.
The book I’d like to recommend is Jane Eyre.As one of the classic novels published in the 19th century, its beauty not only lies in the language, but also exists in the characteristics of Jane.I firmly believe that the heroine Jane’s diligence, kindness and pursuit of independence and freedom will surely touch the readers deeply.
I hope the activity will be of great benefit to our growth.We will not only learn much knowledge but also broaden our horizons.
Yours sincerely,
Li Jin
1．假设你是来自光明中学的李华，你最近读了一本非常吸引人的书，并认为它应该被添加到学校图书馆的藏书中。请你写一封信给学校图书馆管理员推荐这本书。
内容包括：
（1）书籍的基本信息；
（2）推荐原因。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80词左右，已给出的部分不计入总词数；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear librarian,
I am Li Hua, a student at Guangming Middle School. I’m writing this letter to recommend a book to you.
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Yours sincerely,
Li hua
2．学校图书馆最近举办阅读分享活动，假如你是李华，请你用英语写一封信，推荐你最近在读的《红楼梦》(A Dream of Red Mansions)，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
注意：1．词数80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear librarian,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
3．假定你是李华。你校外文阅览室准备购置一批英文图书，现征集学生意见。请用英文写一封邮件至校长信箱，推荐一些英文书籍，内容包括：
1.推荐的类型；
2.推荐的理由。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sir,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
4．学校图书馆需要购置一批新书，现向学生征求意见。假定你是李华，请你用英语给图书馆Thomas老师写一封邮件，推荐科普类图书(popular science books)和文学类图书(literary books)，并分别说明推荐理由。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Thomas，
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Yours，
Li Hua
5．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom对中国书籍非常感兴趣，想让你推荐一类有趣又能提升思维品质的中国图书。请你给他写一封信，内容包括：
1. 推荐的图书类别；
2. 推荐理由。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
6．学校图书馆需要购置一批新书，现向学生征求意见。假如你是李华，请你用英语给图书馆Ryan老师写一封信，推荐图书。主要内容有：
1. 推荐书目：科普类(popular science books)和文学类(literary books)等；
2. 简单介绍图书；
3. 说明推荐理由。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Ryan,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
7．假如你是你校英文报记者李华，校图书馆新开设了英语原著（English original books）阅览室，请你写一篇公开信向同学们推荐这个阅览室，内容包括：
1. 览室的具体位置和开放时间；
2. 推荐的理由；
3. 表达期待。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear students,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
8．假设你是启明中学的学生李华，你校图书馆打算开展一次主题为“阅读的力量”的读书活动，现向全校学生征集活动方案，写一封信给图书馆，推荐活动方案，内容须包括：
1. 具体的活动安排；
2. 活动的意义。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir or Madam,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
