人教版八年级下册Unit 5 What were you doing when the rainstorm came? Writingk课件(共13张PPT)

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学会写一篇关于身体不适并给出建议的文章。
You can take away our money， houses， cars， or even our clothes and we can live.But if our health is taken away， we will surely die.That is why we always try to keep healthy.
Last Friday afternoon， it began to rain when I was playing football with my friends.We were so interested in playing that nobody was willing to go back home.The next day， I had a bad headache.In the afternoon， I got a high fever.My mother took me to the hospital.The doctor advised me to take some medicine， drink more water and have a good rest.He told me not to play in the rain any more.What’s more， I also had to lie in bed.I took the doctor’s advice and now I feel much better.
From this experience， I know well the importance of keeping healthy.
一、根据文章内容，回答下面的问题。
1.What was the weather like last Friday afternoon？
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2.What was wrong with the writer last Saturday afternoon？
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3.Who took the writer to the hospital？
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4.What did the doctor advise the writer not to do？
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5.What does the writer know well from this experience？
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He knows well the importance of keeping healthy.
The doctor advised him not to play in the rain any more.
The writer’s mother took him to the hospital.
He had/got a high fever.
It was rainy/raining.
二、重点短语积累。
6.拿走　 　 _
7.保持健康　 　 _
8.对……感兴趣　 _
9.愿意　 _
10.发高烧　 _
11.建议某人吃药 _
12.好好休息　 _
13.告诉某人不要做某事 _
14.接受医生的建议 _
15.感觉好很多　 　 _
　feel much better　

take the doctor’s advice
tell sb.not to do sth.
　have a good rest
advise sb.to take some medicine
　have/get a high fever
　be willing to
　be interested in
　keep healthy　
　take away　
三、重点句型解析并造句。
★ The doctor advised me to take some medicine， drink more water and have a good rest.He told me not to play in the rain any more.医生建议我吃药、多喝水并好好休息。他告诉我再也不要在雨中玩耍。
advise sb.to do sth.建议某人做某事；tell sb.(not) to do sth.告诉某人(不要)做某事。
16.我建议你多吃蔬菜。I 　 　 more vegetables.
17.我妈妈经常告诉我不要熬夜。
My mother often 　 　 late.
　tells me not to stay up　
　advise you to eat　
写作一：完成课本P7~P8 3a， 3b的练习。
写作二：你的朋友Jimmy由于长时间玩电脑游戏，所以现在身体不适，出现了头痛、眼睛不舒服、腰背酸痛、无法移动脖子等情况。假如你是李华，请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一封信给他提一些建议。
注意：
(1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
(2)不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
(3)语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
第一步：审题。体裁：应用文——书信　人称　 _
时态　 _
第二步：列框架。
　一般现在时
　第一、三人称
第三步：列出主要的短语。
1.身体不舒服　 _ 　
2.头痛　 _
3.背痛　 _ 　　　
4.眼睛痛　 _
5.做眼保健操　 _ 　　　
6.躺下　 _
7.休息　 _ 　　　
8.看医生　 _
　see a doctor/go to a doctor
　have a rest
　lie down
　do eye exercises
　have sore eyes
　have a sore back
　have a headache
　feel sick/not feel well
It’s important for us to learn English well. 对我们来说学好英语很重要。
玩电脑游戏对我们的眼睛有害。
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2.had better (not) do sth. 最好(不)做某事
You had better study hard so that you can pass the exam. 你最好努力学习以便你能通过考试。
他最好远离电脑休息。
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He had better take breaks away from the computer.
第四步：重点句子仿写。
1.It is + adj. for sb.to do…　对某人来说，做……是……
It’s bad for our eyes to play computer games.
Dear Jimmy，
I hear that you are feeling uncomfortable now. Let me share my opinions with you.
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It is bad for our body to play computer games for too long.You always sit in the same way without moving, so you have sore eyes and a sore back now. (身体不适的原因一，1分)Besides, You can’t move your neck and have a headache because you don’t have a good sleep at night. (原因二，1分)
第五步：运用and， or， so， because， but， first， then等连接词将以上要点连成文章，并注意句型多样化。
In my opinion， first of all， you had better take breaks away from the computer.(建议一，1分)Then， you should do eye exercises to relax your eyes and lie down to have a rest.(建议二，1分) Last but not least， if you still feel bad， you should go to a doctor.(建议三，1分)
I hope you can live a healthy life and feel better soon.(祝愿，1分)
Yours，
Li Hua
(作文评分细则与标准请参照本书最后一页)
项目 自评分 互评分 老师评分
内容分 1.Jimmy身体不适的原因；(2分) 2.你的建议；(3分) 3.祝愿他过健康的生活。(1分)
语言分
连贯性
合计(总分15分)