Unit 3 Traditional skills 单元话题书面表达（含答案+解析） -2024-2025学年八年级英语下册单元重难点高频易错题专练（沪教牛津版）

Unit 3 Traditional skills
单元话题书面表达
一、书面表达
1． 假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Justin來信咨询你校为贫因地区儿童筹款活动的具体事宜，请你写一封回信，内容包括：1 活动安排：2.活动意义：3.表示期待。
要求：1. 词数80~100，开头已为你写好，不计人总词数；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Justin,
You asked me about the money-raising activity in our school in your letter.
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Yours,
Lily
2．请根据下面的要点提示，向你的朋友Peter 介绍粤剧艺术的一代宗师——红线女。
要求：词数：80左右，可以适当发挥(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
要点提示：
1）出生地点：广东，出生时间：1925年12月25日，去世时间：2013年12月8日；
2）小时候常常随妈妈到戏院看戏，回家后在家自己练习；
3）后来拜舅母为师，勤奋练习；
4）在过去的许多年里，她帮助发展粤语文化，并且创作了自己的戏剧风格；
5）你的评价。
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3．糖画(sugar painting)是我们的传统技艺之一。你在网上看到了介绍这门传统技艺的视频，你很想把它介绍给大家。请根据以下提示，写一篇80词左右的英语短文介绍糖画，并谈谈你对它的一些看法。
提示：
1）起源于明代。
2）由糖制成，可食用并且是一种艺术品。
3）最初，可以被制成老虎、狮子、花朵等图案。
4）后来被制作成人们喜欢的图案。
Sugar painting is one of the most important Chinese traditional skills.
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4．剪纸是中国传统的技艺之一。关于剪纸这门艺术，你了解多少呢 请根据下面的中文提示写一篇英语作文，80词左右，可适当发挥。
提示：1）剪纸取材简单，受到人们的喜爱；
2）剪纸有各种形状，如人物、动物、花和吉祥的汉字等；
3）剪纸通常被贴在窗户、门或者墙上；
4）剪纸经常出现在节日或婚礼上，因为人们认为它能带来幸福和好运。
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5．每个人都有自己的业余爱好，有益的业余爱好不但可以陶冶我们的情操，增强我们的体质，放松我们的身心，还能让我们在学习或工作时精力更旺盛，效率更高。作为一名中学生，你在忙碌的学习之余做些什么 请根据以下提示写一篇短文，谈一谈你的业余爱好。
要点提示：1）你的业余爱好是什么；
2）重点讲述你从事业余爱好的一次经历；
3）你的业余爱好对你学习、生活的影响。
要求：1）短文的内容应包含所提示的要点，语言要流畅，可围绕要点提示适当增加情节，使短文的意思连贯；
短文的词数80左右。
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6．假设你是林峰，请根据以下提示向大家介绍你做中式厨师的王叔叔。要求：80词左右，可以适当发挥。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
要点提示：
1）他又高又壮，留着黑色短发，喜欢做中国菜；
2）烹饪美味的食物需要精湛的技艺以及一些工具；
3）你的着法。
Today I want to talk about Uncle Wang.
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7．剪纸，又叫刻纸、窗花，是中国最古老的民间艺术之一。它源远流长，经久不衰，是中国民间艺术中的瑰宝。请以Lingling的口吻给你的美国朋友Ann写一封信，介绍中国的剪纸。
内容提示：⑴剪纸有长达两千年的历史；
⑵主要流行于中国北方，并且为老年人所喜爱；
⑶剪纸有各种形状，比如：动植物、象征健康或好运的中国人物角色等；
⑷人们常常在春节或结婚时将剪纸贴于门窗上。
要求：⑴条理清晰，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确，逻辑严谨
⑵80词左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数，可适当扩展。
Dear Ann,
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Yours,
Lingling
答案解析部分
1．暂未更新
这是一篇应用文类型的作文。本文要求以回信的形式介绍学校为贫困地区儿童筹款活动的安排、意义以及表达期待。文章需要使用第一人称和第三人称，时态以一般现在时为主，用于描述活动安排和意义；使用一般将来时表达期待。文章中应包含以下要点：包括活动的安排、活动的意义、活动的教育意义以及对Justin参与或支持活动的期待。在写作过程中，可以使用一些高级词汇和句型，如条件句、定语从句等，以增加文章的得分点。同时，注意使用恰当的连接词使文章行文连贯。
本题是一篇应用文，要求学生以李华的身份给美国笔友Justin回信，介绍学校为贫困地区儿童筹款活动的具体事宜。这类型的作文要求学生能够清晰、连贯地表达出活动安排、意义以及个人的期待，同时也考察学生运用英语进行实际沟通的能力。在写作时，可以运用以下好词好句来提升文章的质量：1. 活动安排："On Saturday, we will have a fun day to raise money."（周六，我们将举办一个有趣的筹款日。）2. 活动意义："This will help kids who don't have enough money for school."（这将帮助那些没有足够钱上学的孩子们。）3. 表示期待："I hope you can join us and be a part of this special day."（我希望你能加入我们，成为这个特别日子的一部分。）
2． Hi, Peter. I will introduce you something about the most famous master, Hung Sin nui.
She was born in Guangdong on December 25, 1925 and died on December 8, 2013. When she was young, she often went to the theatre to watch the plays with her mom. After that, she went back home to practise hard by herself. Later, she learned to study opera from her aunt. She worked so hard that she finally succeeded. In the past, she helped develop the art of Guangdong Opera. She also created her own style of opera.
I think Hung Sin nui was really a great artist, and we should learn from her.
这是一篇提示性作文，时态主要是一般过去时，人称主要用第三人称单数和第一人称。注意运用形容词，如famous，young，own和great等；需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的词数，不要太多也不要太少。
作文内容全面，涵盖所有要求信息。运用好词好句，如be born；go back home；so...that；in the past；when引导的时间状语从句When she was young, she often went to the theatre to watch the plays with her mom.；so...that引导的结果状语从句 She worked so hard that she finally succeeded. ；省略that的宾语从句I think Hung Sin nui was really a great artist, and we should learn from her.等。
3．Sugar painting is one of the most important Chinese traditional skills. It started from the Ming Dynasty. It is made of sugar. It is not only a kind of food but also a kind of art.
At first, sugar paintings were usually made into different patterns of tigers, lions, flowers and so on. Later, the patterns of sugar paintings include all kinds of things that people like.
It is an excellent skill. But it is not popular among young people today. So we should try our best to protect this traditional skill.
这是一篇提纲作文，要求介绍糖画，并谈论看法。写作中要包含所给的四个方面的内容，糖画的来源，由糖制成，可食用并且是一种艺术品， 最初，可以被制成老虎、狮子、花朵等图案，后来被制作成人们喜欢的图案以及你的看法。 根据所给内容可知本文要用一般过去时和一般现在时，人称主要是第三人称单数，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题，写作中注意上下文的过渡，要符合逻辑关系，符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇文章内容完整、表达准确、结构清晰，恰当地运用了连词、副词、固定搭配等。其中一些用法，如：started from；is made of；not only…but also；a kind of；At first；were usually made into；and so on；all kinds of；try our best to等，都是可圈可点之处。
4．Paper cutting is one of the traditional skills in China. Only paper and scissors are required in paper cutting, so people enjoy doing it in their daily life. Paper cutting can be made in different shapes, such as figures, animals, flowers and Chinese characters with good meanings. Paper cutting is usually put up on the windows, doors as well as walls. People often use paper cutting on weddings or festivals because they think paper cutting can bring them happiness and good luck.
这是一篇提纲作文。要求根据中文提示写一篇英语作文来介绍剪纸这门中国的传统技艺。写作中要包含所给的四个方面的内容，剪纸的取材，剪纸的形状，剪纸贴的位置以及剪纸的寓意。根据所给内容可知本文要用一般现在时，人称主要是第三人称单数，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题，写作中注意上下文的过渡，要符合逻辑关系，符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇文章使用了常用的短语，例如：paper cutting；traditional skill；be required；enjoy doing；daily life；different shapes；such as；put up；as well as；good luck，文章的结构简单，容易理解。上下文层次清楚，逻辑关系合理，是一篇不错的文章。
5． There are a great many hobbies to choose
from. Some people enjoy collecting stamps while others choose to spend their time on music. My hobby is playing basketball.
Last weekend, I joined a team to play basketball against another one in our neighbourhood. The match was really exciting, because everyone tried his best to win. Even though we lost the game finally, it brought us so much fun.
Playing basketball is a good way to build up my body and relax myself. Therefore, I can be more efficient in my study. But I will always remember that it's unwise to spend too much time playing it.
这是一篇提纲作文。要求根据提示写一篇短文，谈一谈你的业余爱好。首先浏览提示，分析提示中需要写的内容，业余爱好是什么，重点讲述你从事业余爱好的一次经历，可以适当发挥，注意要表明业余爱好对你学习、生活的影响。写作时主要用第一人称，时态用一般现在时和一般过去时，写作时注意表达准确，语句通顺，做到上下文联系紧密，要符合英文表达方式。
这篇文章内容全面，涵盖所有提示内容，表达清楚准确，时态与人称使用得当。使用了一些固定搭配enjoy collecting stamps，spend...on...、play basketball、build up和Even though；同时使用了句型There are a great many hobbies to choose from. But I will always remember that it's unwise to spend too much time playing it. 和 Even though we lost the game finally, it brought us so much fun. 这些短语或句子给文章增色不少。
6． Today I want to talk about Uncle Wang. He is a cook. He is tall and strong with short and black hair. He enjoys cooking Chinese food and is good at it.
Uncle Wang started to cook because of a TV show A Bite of China. He thinks cooking is a kind of art. Good skills and many tools are required to cook delicious food. He always goes to different places of China and learns to cook the local food. During the process, he makes a lot of friends and improves his cooking skills.
I like his food very much all the time because it looks good and tastes delicious. I hope I can be a great cook like him one day and cook for my family.
这是一篇提纲作文，主要介绍做中式厨师的王叔叔 。时态是一般现在时，首先介绍王叔叔的外貌和喜好；然后介绍王叔叔学习烹饪的的原因及对烹饪的看法；最后介绍自己的看法。为文章增色，注意运用好词好句，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
写作时作文内容全面，运用好词好句，如：want to do；enjoy doing；be good at；start to do；because of；a kind of；be required to do；make a lot of friends等。被动语态、状语从句和宾语从句的运用为文章增色不少，如：He thinks cooking is a kind of art. Good skills and many tools are required to cook delicious food. I like his food very much all the time because it looks good and tastes delicious. I hope I can be a great cook like him one day and cook for my family.等。连词and、because的运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
7．Dear Ann,
How are you doing I would like to introduce a traditional Chinese skill to you. It is paper cutting.
Paper cutting has a long history. It can date back to 2,000 years ago. Many people like it, especially
elderly people. Paper cuttings are made widely in the northern part of China. People in that area do well in making paper cuttings. They cut paper into different shapes, like plants, animals, or the Chinese characters for health or good luck.
People usually put them on doors or windows when they celebrate the Spring. Festival, weddings and so on.
Welcome to China and I hope you want to learn how to make paper cuttings.
Yours,
Lingling
这是一篇提纲类的作文。写这篇文章主要结合题目给的内容提示进行写作，写这篇文章一开始介绍一下历史，然后讲一下现状和剪纸的意义，本文采用一般现在时，用了第三人称，注意写作时的时态，注意上下文的过渡和逻辑结构。
考查了根据提纲写作。这篇短文全面讲述了剪纸的起源，以及现在的发展现状，文章用了较多的短语，如introduce a traditional Chinese skill to you ， in the northern part of China ， date back to ， put them on doors or windows 等，注意平时多积累短语和词句，这样可以给文章增色不少。