Unit 4 Cartoons and comic strips 单元话题书面表达（含答案+解析） -2024-2025学年八年级英语下册单元重难点高频易错题专练（沪教牛津版）

Unit 4 Cartoons and comic strips
单元话题书面表达
一、书面表达
1．请以"My favourite cartoon"为题，根据提示写一篇80词左右的作文，可适当发挥。
提示：
1）我最喜欢的卡通片是《猫和老鼠》，我很小的时候就开始看这部动画片了；
2）Tom和Jerry非常可爱，他们的生活很有意思；
3）尽管已经播出很多年了，全世界的小朋友仍然非常喜欢它。
My favourite cartoon
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2．每个人喜欢的卡通人物（cartoon character）各不相同，请你以“My favourite cartoon character”为题及下列提示写一篇短文，描述你喜欢的卡通人物及原因。要求：80词左右。
内容提示：
1）你喜欢的卡通人物的外貌；
2）你喜欢的卡通人物的基本特征，如饮食习惯及性格特点等；
3）你喜欢它的原因。
My favourite cartoon character
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3．孩子应该看漫画书吗 请根据以下提示，谈一谈孩子看漫画书的利弊。
内容提示：⑴利：漫画书内容有趣，可以给孩子带来快乐；看漫画书可以提升孩子的看图能力及幽默感(sense of humour)；从漫画中可以学到一些知识；
⑵弊：漫画书字太少，对语言学习没有帮助；有些漫画中含有不健康的内容，不利于孩子的成长；
⑶谈谈你的看法。
要求：⑴条理清晰，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确，逻辑严谨；
⑵80词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数，可适当扩展。
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4．每个人喜欢的卡通形象(cartoon character) 各不相同，请你根据以下提示写一篇短文，描述你喜欢的卡通形象及原因。要求80词左右，可适当发挥。
提示：1）你喜欢的卡通形象的外貌及衣着；
2）你喜欢的卡通形象的基本特征，如饮食习惯、性格特点等；
3）你喜欢他／她／它的原因。
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5．下面六幅图画描述了父与子的一个有趣的故事。请你根据这些图画及所提供的信息，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文来叙述这个故事。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
提示：晚餐已经准备完毕；父亲找汤姆吃饭；汤姆却躺在地板上看书；……后来汤姆来了，父亲却……
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6．写作
目前中学生学习任务重，学习压力大，而广泛的阅读有利于开拓视野，调节身心。在课业学习和业余生活中，你喜欢阅读吗？你喜欢读什么样的书呢？作为中学生的你，是如何看待阅读的呢？请就这个话题，谈谈你的想法和理由，可适当给出建议。
注意：①词数：80词左右；
②条理清楚，语意连贯，字迹工整，可适当发挥。
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答案解析部分
1．My favourite cartoon My favourite cartoon is Tom and Jerry. It is really classic. When I was young, I began watching it. It brought me and my parents much happiness because my parents always watched it with me. Tom and Jerry are very lovely. Their life is very interesting because they are real friends though they always fight with each other. Although it has been played for many years, little children around the world still love it very much.
这是一篇命题类作文，本文要求以"My favourite cartoon"为题讲述卡通片《猫和老鼠》，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要适当添加内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。
本文结构紧凑，语言简练，要点齐全，本文还采用了丰富的句型，比如运用了When I was young, I began watching it时间状语从句，Their life is very interesting because they are real friends though they always fight with each other原因状语从句，Although it has been played for many years, little children around the world still love it very much让步状语从句等复合句，以及has been played现在完成时的被动语态等用法，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少。
2．My favourite cartoon character
When I was very young, I started to watch a lot of classic Disney cartoon films. The familiar names of Snow White, Peter Pan and others are just like my friends. I admire the heroes of these characters, because they show me the courage to defeat difficulties. Among all kinds of heroes, I like Belle best.
In the cartoon film Beauty and the Beast, Belle is a different girl. She is smart and dares to fight against the traditional ideas. People around her regard a girl's value is to marry a man and then take care of the house chores. Also, Belle is a brave girl. She likes reading and she has her own thoughts.
I love Belle very much. What about you
这是一篇命题性英文写作，本文要求以“My favourite cartoon character”为题写一篇短文，描述你喜欢的卡通人物及原因。 文章的内容要根据题目所给的提纲进行书写。文章中句子的时态用一般现在时，人称主要是第三人称单数，文章在书写时语句要通顺，上下文的逻辑关系要合理，文章不要出现语法和拼写错误。
这篇短文作者写出了自己最喜欢的动画片是什么，描述了卡通人物的外貌和基本特征以及喜欢它的原因。文章使用了常用的短语和句式结构，例如：start to do sth；a lot of；classic cartoon films；just like；all kinds of；dare to do sth；fight against；traditional ideas；regard...as..；take care of；like doing sth等。
3． Should children read comic strips People who are for it think comic strips are interesting and children can get fun from them. They also believe that reading comic strips can improve children's abilities of reading pictures and their sense of humour. Children can also get some knowledge when reading comic strips. However, other people think there are only a few words in comic strips so children can get little help for their language studies. They also worry that some unhealthy contents in comic strips will do harm to children. In my opinion, children can read comic strips, but have to choose the right ones.
本文是一篇提纲类的文章。作文要求结合内容提示，描述一下孩子看漫画的利与弊。写作时通过看漫画书的好处与坏处进行论述，然后引入自己的观点。注意文章用一般现在时，注意连接词，注意语句上下的逻辑联系。
文章当中运用了很多比较好的句子和短语，如 get fun from， People who are for it think comic strips are interesting and children can get fun from them. Children can also get some knowledge when reading comic strips。平时阅读写作的时候多积累一些比较好的句子和短语，这样可以给文章增色不少。
4． My favourite cartoon character is Mickey Mouse. Mickey Mouse is a country mouse. He has a lovely face and a small black nose. He always wears white gloves and red clothes. He doesn't have any brothers or sisters, but he has a lot of friends. He is very different from other mice. For example, he doesn't like eating cheese. He just likes eating vegetables and chicken wings. I like him because he is a bit like me in character! He is kind and friendly, and so am I.
这是一篇给定材料的书面表达，写作的话题为 My Favorite Cartoon Character is…在写作时应注意符合题意，根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语惯。写作时，应选阅读提示，弄清所有信息，明确写作要点；根据要点写出关键词短语或句，组词成句。连句成篇，注意使用一般现在时态。
这是一篇比较不错的作文，从整体来说，把材料中的三个要点都写了出来，句意完整，没有语法错误，符合英语的表达习惯。范文中也有不少比较不错的短语及语句。比如 for example；like doing sth。经典语句so am I。还有He doesn't have any brothers or sisters， 此处的or用的非常正确；还有He is very different from other mice.涉及到固定短语be different from。
5．One possible version:
Dinner was ready. But Tom was not at the table. So Tom's father went to look for him and found him reading an interesting book on the floor Tom's father sent Tom to the dinner table. Tom and his mother were ready for the meal. But this time, Tom's father didn't join them at the table. So Tom went back to look for his father. He was so surprised to find that his father was lying on the floor and reading that interesting book.
本文要求看图写话，要求根据图画的提示来完整地叙述整个故事。首先写晚餐已经准备完毕；然后写父亲找汤姆吃饭；再写汤姆躺在地板上看书；最后写汤姆来到餐桌前准备吃饭后，却发现父亲不见了，最后发现父亲正躺在地板上看书。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般过去时态，人称主要是第三人称，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题。写作中注意上下文的过渡要符合逻辑关系。
这篇短文详细、全面地叙述了整个故事，并包含了文中所要求的全部信息。其中一些短语的准确使用为文章增色不少。如at the table，look for，was lying on，on the floor，ready for，was so surprised to。文中连接词的使用也是文章的一大亮点，如So，But 等词的使用。学习中注意总结并牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有辑性，更富有条理。
6．范文：
I am a student. Though I'm busy with my lessons, my free time is full of happiness and joy. I love reading because it helps me study better. I often do some reading in the evening. I think books are our best friends. They give us much knowledge. I find reading books is a good way to relax myself. At the same time it can also help me broaden my horizons. So I suggest that teachers should give us less homework to do so that we can have more time to read.
（1）仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。 （2） 提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语， 按照一定逻辑关系来写。（3）根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。