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Unit 1 The secret of happiness
第5课时 话题写作指导
Learning objectives
01
会运用一般过去时简单描述欢乐时刻；
02
通过本次写作课，了解快乐幸福的途径
Pre- writing
Work in groups and share your opinion with your partners.
Talk about a short story about feeling happy through helping others.
Time(时间) 上周六
Place(地点) 我家附近的游泳池
Characters(人物) 我、朋友、男孩及其pet cat
Event(事件) 在游泳听到呼救声游过去
Ending(结局) 尽力帮男孩拉出小猫
Feeling(感受) 男孩感谢，我们感到非常高兴
Pre- writing----Task 2
思路点拨:
1)开头句
1. It's important to help others
2. When people help each other, it makes the world...
3. In fact, happiness is always around you.
2)中间句
1. Last Sunday, I went swimming with my friend.
2. Suddenly we heard someone shout, “ Help! Help!’
3. I tried my best to ...
4. Finally, we succeeded in helping sb. ...
3)结尾句
1. Helping other people makes ... feel.
2. If everyone helps others, our world will become...
while-writing-----Discussion
Work in groups and discuss, meanwhile, write down the notes.
1. Last Saturday, I was swimming with my friend in the pool when we heard someone shouting for help.
2. A little cat fell into water and a boy was crying for help.
3.It was really not a very easy job, but we didn't give up.
4.The boy thanked us again and again.
5. Helping others is helping ourselves,
because it gives us happiness, too.
首先 first, firstly, first of all
其次second, then, what’s more
最后 at last, finally, in the end, last but not least
转折 however, but
结果或结束 Finally At last（最后；终于）
In the end（最后；最终）
While-writing----Task 3
Remember the notes
It's important and happy to help others.
Last Saturday, I was swimming with my friend in the pool when we heard someone shouting for help. A little cat fell into water. A boy was crying for help. So we tried our best to save the cat out of water. It was really not a very easy job, but we didn't give up. Finally, we succeeded. The cat was safe. The boy thanked us again and again.
My friend and I felt very happy. Helping others is helping ourselves, because it gives us happiness, too.
While-writing----Task 4
参考范文
Homework
Homework
1.Recite the composition.
2.Make a book page about ways to be happy according to the guide on Page 16.
3.Preview the new words in Unit 2.
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教学 课题 第5课时 话题写作指导
课时 教学 目标 1.学会运用一般过去时简单描述欢乐时刻; 2.通过本次写作课,了解快乐、幸福的途径。
核心 语言 知识 1.核心词汇:make sb happy 2.核心句式: (1)But love,in fact,is the key to happiness. (2)It can move us,change us and give us a life full of happiness.
课堂 导学 ◆Step 1 Warm-up Work in groups,check students' writing according to the following questions. Did you include characters,a setting and events Did you use the words and expressions from the reading passage Did you give your opinion about the secrets of happiness ◆Step 2 Writing Pre-writing Task 1 Share the story with the class. Task 2 Give writing instruction and point out the elements of writing. While-writing Task 1 Present a new writing task and guide students to finish the task. 假设你是李华,请根据表格内要点,写一段70词左右的经历。 Time(时间)上周六Place(地点)我家附近的游泳池Characters(人物)我、朋友、男孩及其pet catEvent(事件)在游泳时听到呼救声游过去Ending(结局)尽力帮男孩拉出小猫Feeling(感受)男孩感谢,我们感到非常高兴
Task 2 思路点拨: 1.开头句 ①It's important to help others. ②When people help each other,it makes the world… ③In fact,happiness is always around you. 2.中间句 ①Last Saturday,I went swimming with my friend. ②Suddenly we heard someone shout,“Help!Help!” ③I tried my best to… ④Finally,we succeeded in helping…
课堂 导学 3.结尾句 ①Helping other people makes… feel… ②If everyone helps others,our world will become… Task 3 Some transitional expressions. 首先 first,firstly,first of all 其次second,then,what's more 最后 at last,finally,in the end,last but not least 转折 however,but 表示事情最终结果或结束Finally(最后;终于),At last(最后;终于),In the end(最后;最终) Task 4 Complete the whole passage. Give students about 5 minutes to connect their words,expressions and sentences together. Post-writing Task 1 Ask students to improve or correct their passage and show the whole passage to students. 参考范文: Last Saturday,in the swimming pool near my home,I was swimming with my friend when we heard someone shouting for help. A little cat was struggling in the water.A boy was crying “My poor kitty!Help!” So we tried our best to pull the cat out of the water.It was really not a very easy job,but we didn't give up.Finally,we succeeded.The cat was safe.The boy thanked us again and again,saying that we were real heroes. My friend and I felt very happy.Helping others is helping ourselves,because it gives us happiness,too. Task 2 Vote on the best three passages and show them to the students.
板书 设计 Unit 1 The secrets of happiness 话题写作指导 1.Phrase:make sb happy 2.Sentences: (1)But love,in fact,is the key to happiness. (2)It can move us,change us and give us a life full of happiness.
作业 布置 1.Recite the composition. 2.Make a book page about ways to be happy according to the guide on page 16. 3.Preview the new words in Unit 2.
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第5课时 话题写作指导
英语 七年级下册WY
栏目导航
写作指导
类文训练
话题分析
本单元的话题是“幸福、快乐”。不同的人对“幸福、快乐”这一概念的定义是不尽相同的,该话题写作通常是通过具体事件即“幸福时刻”映射不同的人对“幸福、快乐”的理解,倡导人们追求幸福、快乐的生活。
话题分析
【写作任务】
幸福是什么 幸福是父母为你营造的温馨的家,幸福是老师望向你的赞许的目光,幸福是孤独时朋友的陪伴,幸福是…… 请你以“My Happiness”为题,根据思维导图内容提示写一件曾经发生过的令你感到幸福的事情。
写作指导
要求:1.短文须包含导图中的要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
3.词数70左右(首句已为你写好,不计入总词数)。
My Happiness
Happiness is important in our lives.
【思路点拨】
第一步:审题 体裁: 人称: 时态:
第二步:列提纲
记叙文
第一人称
一般过去时
第三步:句子积累
开头句:
1. is everyone.幸福属于每个人。
2.Happiness is always you if you
it.
只要你用心体会,幸福就永远在你身边。
Happiness
for
around
put
your
heart
into
中间句:
1.But when I got back home late,my parents
.
但是当我回家晚的时候,我父母知道发生了什么。
2.If you take every chance you get,you can be a and
person.
如果你抓住每一个机会,你可以成为一个快乐和幸运的人。
knew
what
happened
happy
lucky
3.I am happy to who always me
and teachers who guide me.
我很高兴有一直支持我的朋友和指导我的老师。
4.I was moved and to work
harder.
我很感动,下定决心更加努力学习。
have
friends
support
made
up
my
mind
结尾句:
1.I feel happy while .当帮助他人时,
我感到很快乐。
2.Happiness how you treat life.幸福取决
于你如何对待生活。
helping
others
depends
on
【范文品鉴】
My Happiness
Happiness is important in our lives.In fact,happiness is always around us if we put our heart into it.
Once,I had a bad mark at a maths test.I was afraid to meet my parents.But when I got back home late,my parents knew what happened.They said to me,“It doesn’t matter.
Remember we’ll always be here with you when you need help.We believe you can be better next time.Never give up!”I was moved and made up my mind to work harder.
I feel happy.Whenever I am in trouble,I can feel my parents’ love.
类文训练
幸福的感觉如同蜜糖般甘甜,阳光般灿烂。只要用心感受,幸福无处不在。你最幸福的时刻是什么 学校英文校刊正在进行以“My Happy Moment”为题的英语征文比赛,请你根据以下思维导图内容提示写一篇短文投稿。
要求:1.短文须包含上述要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
3.词数70左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
My Happy Moment
Happiness can make a great difference to people.
One possible version:
My Happy Moment
Happiness can make a great difference to people.My mother always tells me to keep smiling when I meet difficulties.It can help me solve the trouble.
Last month I had an important exam.But I failed.I could do nothing but keep worrying about my grades.Luckily my teacher encouraged me a lot.I found out the problem with her help.After that,I smile again.I am sure as long as I keep working hard,I will have a bright future.
I am thankful to those who give a hand to me.With their support I can grow up happily.
谢谢观赏！
