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Unit 2 Go for it!
第5课时 话题写作指导
Learning objectives
01
会运用不定代词对体育运动或运动爱好者进行简单写作；
02
通过本次写作课，制定自己的运动计划。
Pre- writing
Work in their groups to think about some sports teams and talk about their story, their spirits and your comment to them.
Do a survey
Work in groups and share your opinion with your partners.
Pre- writing
Today’s topic
女排精神激励了我们一代又一代人。团队协作是女排精神的精髓。假如你是李华，你校打算举行一次宣扬女排精神的英语写作比赛。请你结合以下图示，简要叙述你的一次团队协作经历，说说团队协作的益处，并谈谈对中国女排的感受。
要求：词数80左右。
参考词汇：Chinese women’s volleyball team中国女排, title冠军
Pre- writing----Task 2
思路点拨:
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
[写作步骤]
第一步，点题，并指出女排精神是团队协作；
第二步，结合自己的经历，详细讲述团队协作的优点；
第三步，对女排给出自己的看法，并收尾。
1.The spirit of Chinese women’s volleyball team is teamwork.
2.Teamwork also improves my friendship with others.
3.Because of studying in groups, I am not worried about it any more.
4.I become more confident with my classmates’ help.
5.In my opinion, Chinese women’s volleyball team is close to many people’s heart.
6. people love them for their trust each other while working together.
while-writing-----Task 3 Discussion
Work in groups and discuss, meanwhile, write down the notes.
首先 first, firstly, first of all
其次 second, then, what’s more
最后 at last, finally, in the end, last but not least
转折 however, but 实际上 in fact
不仅...而且... not only... but also...
总而言之 in short, in one word, all in all
While-writing----Task 4
Remember the notes
While-writing----Task 3
Writing time
The spirit of Chinese women’s volleyball team is teamwork. With the spirit, they won lots of titles for our country and encouraged lots of people.
In fact, teamwork also improves my friendship with others. I still remember when I was in Grade 5, my maths was very poor. Because of studying in groups, I am not worried about it any more. I become more confident with my classmates’ help.
In my opinion, Chinese women’s volleyball team is close to many people’s heart, people love them for their trust each other while working together.
While-writing----Task 4
参考范文
1.Recite the composition.
2.Make a poster of a sports moment according to the Presenting ideas.
3.Preview the new words in Unit 3.
Homework
Homework
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教学 课题 第5课时 话题写作指导
课时 教学 目标 1.学会运用不定代词对体育运动或运动爱好者进行简单写作; 2.通过本次写作课,制定自己的运动计划。
核心 语言 知识 1.核心词汇:sports team name of the team history story spirit comment 2.核心句式: (1)All of them held their breath. (2)Her brave actions encouraged the whole team. (3)None of the players lost heart. (4)However,the players never gave up. (5)They took every chance to learn and improve. (6)People wondered about the key to their success.
课堂 导学 ◆Step 1 Warm-up Work in groups.Check students' writing according to the following questions. Did you include all the ideas from Step 1 Did you use the words and expressions from the reading passage Did you give your opinion about the team ◆Step 2 Writing Pre-writing Task 1 Share the passage with the class. Task 2 Give writing instruction and point out the elements of writing. While-writing Task 1 Present a new writing task and guide students to finish the task. 女排精神激励了我们一代又一代人。团队协作是女排精神的精髓。假如你是李华,你校打算举行一次宣扬女排精神的英语写作比赛。请你结合以下图示,简要叙述你的一次团队协作经历,说说团队协作的益处,并谈谈对中国女排的感受。 要求:词数80左右。 参考词汇:the Chinese women's volleyball team中国女排,title冠军 Task 2 思路点拨: 1.题材:本文是一篇记叙文; 2.时态:本文应以“一般现在时”为主。 写作步骤: 第一步:点题,并指出女排精神是团队协作; 第二步:结合自己的经历,详细讲述团队协作的优点; 第三步:对女排给出自己的看法,并收尾。 Task 3 Share their sentences in class. 1.The spirit of the Chinese women's volleyball team is teamwork.
课堂 导学 2.Teamwork also improves my friendship with others. 3.Because of studying in groups,I am not worried about it any more. 4.I become more confident with my classmates' help. 5.In my opinion,the Chinese women's volleyball team is close to many people's hearts. 6.People love them for their trust in each other while working together. Task 4 Some transitional expressions 首先 first,firstly,first of all 其次second,secondly,then,what's more 最后 at last,finally,in the end,last but not least 转折 however,but 不仅……而且…… not only…but also… 实际上 in fact 总而言之 in short,in one word,all in all 我认为 in my opinion Task 5 Complete the whole passage. Give students about 5 minutes to connect their words,expressions and sentences together. Post-writing Task 1 Ask students to improve or correct their passages and show the whole passage to students. 参考范文: The spirit of the Chinese women's volleyball team is teamwork.With the spirit,they won lots of titles for our country and encouraged lots of people. In fact,teamwork also improves my friendship with others.I still remember when I was in Grade 5,my maths was very poor.Because of studying in groups,I am not worried about it any more.I become more confident with my classmates' help.In addition,we also learn from each other by teamwork. In my opinion,the Chinese women's volleyball team is close to many people's hearts.People love them for their trust in each other while working together. Task 2 Vote on the best three passages and show them to the students.
板书 设计 Unit 2 Go for it! 话题写作指导 1.Words and phrases:sports team name of the team history story spirit comment 2.Sentences: (1)All of them held their breath. (2)Her brave actions encouraged the whole team. (3)None of the players lost heart. (4)However,the players never gave up. (5)They took every chance to learn and improve. (6)People wondered about the key to their success.
作业 布置 1.Recite the composition. 2.Make a poster of a sports moment according to the Presenting ideas. 3.Preview the new words in Unit 3.
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第5课时 话题写作指导
写作指导
类文训练
话题分析
本单元的话题是“体育精神”。该话题的写作内容通常是结合某人或某团队体育事迹,一是肯定体育运动既能给我们带来乐趣又能让我们保持健康,二是弘扬全力以赴、永不放弃的精神。
话题分析
【写作任务】
你校正在组织英文作文比赛。请以“我最喜欢的运动”为主题,根据思维导图写一篇70词左右的短文参赛。
写作指导
要求:1.短文须包含上述要点,可适当增加细节;
2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
My Favourite Sport
【思路点拨】
第一步:审题 体裁: 人称: 时态:
第二步:列提纲
记叙文
第一人称
一般现在时
第三步:句子积累
开头句:
1.Recently,sports very many
people.最近,运动受到很多人的欢迎。
2.However, playing basketball.然
而,我对打篮球感兴趣。
are
popular
with
I’m
interested
in
中间句:
1.Running becomes of my life.跑
步变成了我生活中重要的一部分。
2. sports,I my health and my
life.
多亏了运动,我的健康和生活都得到了改善。
an
important
part
Thanks
to
improved
3.What’s more,we need to sports
safety.
更重要的是,我们需要注意运动安全。
4.In my opinion,doing sports because
it my body and mind.
我认为,做运动让我强壮因为它能强健体魄和思想。
pay
attention
to
makes
me
strong
builds
up
结尾句:
1.Sports are our health
make us enjoy our lives a lot.
运动不仅有益于我们的健康,而且让我们享受生活。
2.Playing sports is beneficial and from
now.
做运动有益处,让我们从现在开始吧。
not
only
good
for
but
but
let’s
start
名言名句:
Enjoy sports,enjoy life.享受运动,享受生活。
【范文品鉴】
My Favourite Sport
There are many kinds of sports activities in our lives.
However,I’m interested in playing basketball. I always play basketball with my friends after school every day or at weekends.
As we all know,sports benefit us in many ways. First,sports can make us fit and strong.Second,sports can also help us relax after a period of tiring study.What’s more,we need to pay attention to sports safety.
In short,it’s good for us to do exercise.Playing sports is beneficial and let’s start from now.
类文训练
享受运动,享受生活。你喜欢运动吗 你享受过运动带来的乐趣
吗 请以“Enjoy Sports,Enjoy Life”为题,用英语写一篇70词左右的短文,叙述一次你通过运动享受生活的经历,或谈谈运动给我们带来的好处。
要求:1.内容积极向上;
2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
Enjoy Sports,Enjoy Life
One possible version:
Enjoy Sports,Enjoy Life
Sports are important for us.They are not only good for our health but also make us enjoy our lives a lot.
I used to be weak and be ill.After seeing a doctor,he advised me to play sports.I followed his advice and played sports every day.Several months later,I became stronger and more relaxed.I was seldom ill.I studied harder than before and got better grades.I enjoyed myself every day.Thanks to sports,I improved my health and my life.
Let’s start to enjoy sports and enjoy life!
