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Unit 4 The art of having fun
第5课时 话题写作指导
Learning objectives
01
会运用祈使句对娱乐活动进行简单写作；
02
通过本次写作课，学会在身心愉悦的环境之下学习。
Warm-up
社交媒体
打开
控制；接管
吞噬某人的时间
迷失在……；陷入
酸痛的脖子
social media
turn on
take over
eat away sb’s time
get lost in
sore necks
Warm-up
错失(……的)机会
不肯听取某事
现实世界
用一种平衡的方式
解决问题
12. 在……的帮助下
miss out (on…)
be deaf to
the real world
in a balanced way
solve the problem
with the help of
Recite the following sentences
1. 娱乐在很多方面都很重要。
Fun is important in a number of ways.
2. 娱乐可以除去坏情绪并使我们精神振奋。
Fun can do away with bad feelings and lift our spirits.
3. 娱乐会使我们感觉年轻。
Fun keeps us feeling youthful.
4. 娱乐是与他人建立联系的好方法。
Having fun is a good way to connect with others.
5. 这个怪兽开始一点一点地吃掉我们的时间。
The monster starts to eat away our time, minute by minute.
6. 我们应该以一种平衡的方式进行娱乐。
We should have fun in a balanced way.
Warm-up
Pre- writing
What fun activity do you like best
Do a survey
Work in groups and share your opinion with your partners.
“只工作不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。但过多玩耍，聪明孩子也会变傻。”请根据所给要点，谈谈你的看法。
1. 娱乐重要性 2. 过多娱乐的缺点 3. 你的看法
Pre- writing----Task 2
思路点拨:
首段:
中间段落:
尾段:
Describe the importance of having fun.
Maybe they can talk about it from three parts.
Describe the disadvantages of having too much fun.
Maybe they can talk about it from two parts.
Give our own opinions and state how to solve the
problem.
1.Fun can do away with bad feelings and lift our spirits.
2.It keeps us feeling youthful.
3.Having fun is a good way to connect with others.
4.Too much fun is like a time-eating monster.
5.It will eat away our time, and even make us get lost in it.
6.We should have fun in a balanced way.
while-writing-----Discussion
Work in groups and discuss, meanwhile, write down the notes.
首先 first, firstly, first of all
其次 second, then, what’s more
最后 at last, finally, in the end, last but not least
转折 however, but 实际上 in fact
不仅...而且... not only... but also...
总而言之 in short, in one word, all in all
While-writing----Task 3
Remember the notes
Fun is important in a number of ways. First, it can do away with bad feelings and lift our spirits. Then, it keeps us feeling youthful. At last, having fun is a good way to connect with others.
However, too much fun is like a time-eating monster. It will eat away our time, and even make us get lost in it.
So, we should have fun in a proper way. We need to work hard. But we should be able to play hard, too.
While-writing----Task 4
参考范文
1.Recite the composition.
2.Make a report on fun activities.
3.Preview the new words in Unit 5.
Homework
Homework
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教学 课题 第5课时 话题写作指导
课时 教学 目标 1.学会运用祈使句对娱乐活动进行简单写作; 2.通过本次写作课,学会在身心愉悦的环境下学习。
核心 语言 知识 核心句式: (1)It starts to eat away our time,minute by minute. (2)But we just sit there and look at the screen without noticing it at all. (3)But we can keep it away by having fun in a balanced way. (4)There is so much for you to do.
课堂 导学 ◆Step 1 Warm-up Task 1 Check the homework. Task 2 Tick some students' writings and show them to the class. Task 3 翻译下列短语(3 minutes) 1.社交媒体 social media 2.打开 turn on 3.控制;接管 take over 4.吞噬某人的时间 eat away sb's time 5.迷失在……;陷入 get lost in 6.脖子酸痛 sore necks 7.错失(……的)机会 miss out (on…) 8.不肯听取某事 be deaf to 9.现实世界 the real world 10.用一种平衡的方式 in a balanced way 11.解决问题 solve the problem 12.在……的帮助下 with the help of Task 4 Recite the following sentences,using 3 minutes. 1.娱乐在很多方面都很重要。 Fun is important in a number of ways. 2.娱乐可以去除坏情绪并使我们精神振奋。 Fun can do away with bad feelings and lift our spirits. 3.娱乐也会使我们感觉年轻。 Fun also keeps us feeling youthful. 4. 娱乐是与他人建立联系的好方法。 Having fun is a good way to connect with others. 5.这个怪兽开始一点一点地吃掉我们的时间。 The monster starts to eat away our time,minute by minute. 6.我们应该以一种平衡的方式进行娱乐。 We should have fun in a balanced way. ◆Step 2 Writing Pre-writing Do a survey Ask students in their groups what fun activity they like best to do.Then show the topic of today's writing. While-writing Task 1 Present a new writing task and guide students to finish the task. “只工作不玩耍,聪明孩子也变傻。但过多玩耍,聪明孩子也会变傻。”请根据所给要点,谈谈你的看法。不少于70词。 1.娱乐的重要性;2.过多娱乐的缺点;3.你的看法。 Task 2 思路点拨: 首段: Describe the importance of having fun.Perhaps it can be talked about in two ways.
课堂 导学 中间段落: Describe the disadvantages of having too much fun.Perhaps they can be talked about in two ways. 尾段: Give our own opinions and state how to solve the problem. Task 3 Discussion. Work in groups and discuss,meanwhile,write down their notes. Task 4 Share their sentences in class. 1.Fun can do away with bad feelings and lift our spirits. 2.It keeps us feeling youthful. 3.Having fun is a good way to connect with others. 4.Too much fun is like a time-eating monster. 5.It will eat away our time,and even make us get lost in it. 6.We should have fun in a balanced way. Task 5 Some transitional expressions. 首先 first,firstly,first of all 其次 second,then,what's more 最后 at last,finally,in the end,last but not least 转折 however,but 不仅……而且…… not only… but also… 实际上 in fact 总而言之 in short,in one word,all in all Task 6 Complete the whole passage. Give students about 5 minutes to connect their words,expressions and sentences together. Post-writing Task 1 Ask students to improve or correct their passages and show the whole passage to students. 参考范文: Fun is important in a number of ways.First,it can do away with bad feelings and lift our spirits.Then,it keeps us feeling youthful.At last,having fun is a good way to connect with others. However,too much fun is like a time-eating monster.It will eat away our time,and even make us get lost in it. So,we should have fun in a proper way.We need to work hard.But we should be able to play hard,too. Task 2 Vote on the best three passages and show them to the students.
板书 设计 Unit 4 The art of having fun 话题写作指导 Sentences: (1)It starts to eat away our time,minute by minute. (2)But we just sit there and look at the screen without noticing it at all. (3)But we can keep it away by having fun in a balanced way. (4)There is so much for you to do.
作业 布置 1.Recite the composition. 2.Make a report on fun activities. 3.Preview the new words in Unit 5.
教学 反思
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第5课时 话题写作指导
写作指导
类文训练
话题分析
本单元以“娱乐的艺术”为话题,分别从娱乐的重要性及过度娱乐所带来的问题两个方面进行了描述。通过学习本单元,我们得到了启示,即在学习和生活中我们应该适度娱乐。
话题分析
【写作任务】
目前短视频很受同学们欢迎,甚至很多同学沉迷其中。请根据以下要点和要求,用英语写一篇70词左右的短文谈一谈你的看法。
写作指导
优点 短小;有趣;缓解压力
缺点 质量不一;耗费时间
你的看法 ……
要求:1.开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.提示词:short video 短视频。
【思路点拨】
第一步:审题 体裁: 人称:
时态:
第二步:列提纲
议论文
第一人称
一般现在时
第三步:句子积累
开头句:
1.Fun is important in ways.娱乐在很
多方面都很重要。
2.Having fun is connect with
others.
娱乐是与他人建立联系的好方法。
a
number
of
a
good
way
to
中间句:
1.As we know,short videos are but .
我们都知道,短视频短但是有趣。
2. , good things
short videos.On the other hand,try not to spend
too much time on them.
一方面可以通过短视频学习好的东西。另一方面尽量避免花费过多
时间在上面。
short
interesting
On
the
one
hand
learn
from
3.These activities because
they me and have fun.
这些活动对我来说很重要,因为它们帮助我放松和娱乐。
4.They monsters and eat away our time.
它们就像怪兽吃掉了我们的时间。
are
important
to
me
help
relax
are
like
结尾句:
1.We should in a proper way.
我们应该以一种恰当的方式进行娱乐。
2.I believe that having these hobbies my life
more and .
我相信拥有这些爱好让我的生活更加丰富多彩和有意义。
have
fun
makes
colourful
meaningful
名言名句:
All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.只工作不玩耍,聪明孩子也变傻。
【范文品鉴】
Short videos are very popular with us,and even some of us get lost in them.
As we know,short videos are short but interesting. They can do away with bad feelings and lift our spirits.However,not all short videos are good for people.Some of them are even harmful.
They are like monsters and eat away our time.
In my opinion,we should have fun in a balanced way. On the one hand,learn good things from short videos.On the other hand,
try not to spend too much time on them.
类文训练
只工作不玩耍,聪明孩子也变傻。娱乐是我们生活中不可或缺的一部分,它让我们在忙碌中得到放松和快乐。但过多玩耍,也会使聪明孩子变傻。只有找到适合自己的娱乐方式,适度娱乐,才能够使身心愉悦。请根据所给要点,谈谈你的看法。
1.娱乐的重要性;2.过度娱乐的缺点;3.你的看法。
要求:70词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Fun is important in a number of ways.First,
One possible version:
Fun is important in a number of ways.First,it can do away with bad feelings and lift our spirits.Then,it keeps us feeling youthful.At last,having fun is a good way to connect with others.
However,too much fun is like a time-eating monster.It will eat away our time,and even make us get lost in it.
So,we should have fun in a proper way.We need to work hard.But we should be able to play hard,too.
