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Unit 5 Amazing nature
第5课时 话题写作指导
Learning objectives
01
会运用本单元所学知识对神奇的自然风光及其保护措施进行简单写作；
02
通过本次写作课，提高自己在日常生活中保护环境的意识。
Warm-up
以……而著名
充满
贯穿于……之中
因做某事而自豪
可能做某事
寻求；需要，亟需
be famous for
be full of
run through
be proud to do sth.
be likely to do sth.
cry for
Warm-up
下降
一年年的
干涸
像，诸如，例如
保护大自然的重要性
阻止……做某事
go down
year by year
dry up
such as
the importance of protecting nature
stop…from doing sth.
Recite the following sentences
1.蔚蓝的天空总是给我一种平静的感觉。
The lovely blue of the sky always gives me a calm feeling.
2.它就像高原上的一片汪洋。
It is like a great sea above the plateau.
3.语言无法表达我对河流及湖泊的热爱。
And words can't express my love for the rivers and lakes.
4.在我心中，它比任何其他地方都好。
In my heart, it's better than any other place.
5.少用水，否则我将在接下来的100年内干涸。
Take less water, or I'll dry up within the next 100 years.
6. 然而，人们正在砍伐树木为农业腾出空间。
However, people are cutting down trees to make space for farming.
Warm-up
Pre- writing
Some natural wonders have problems now. What example can you give us
Do a survey
Work in groups and share your opinion with your partners.
Pre- writing
Today’s topic
假如你的李华，你的家乡是某市的一个村庄，一条河流流经你的家乡。请根据以下要点，写一篇英语短文，描述你家乡的变化。
要点：1. What was it like before
2. What problems does it face
3. What should we do to protect it
要求：1. 70词左右(开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数)
2. 尽可能用上以下表达：give…a calm feeling,
cry for help, call on sb. to do sth.
Pre- writing----Task 2
思路点拨:
1. There is a river running through it.
2.The river used to be so clean that it gave us a calm feeling.
3.Some people began to throw away rubbish into it.
4.The river is crying aloud for help.
5.What should we do to protect it
6.We should plant more trees and often clean the river.
7.We should call on more people to protect our environment.
8.Hope my hometown will become beautiful soon.
while-writing-----Discussion
Work in groups and discuss, meanwhile, write down the notes.
首先 first, firstly, first of all
其次 second, then, what’s more
最后 at last, finally, in the end, last but not least
转折 however, but 实际上 in fact
不仅...而且... not only... but also...
总而言之 in short, in one word, all in all
While-writing----Task 3
Remember the notes
While-writing----Task 3
Writing time
My hometown is a village in a county. There is a river running through it. The river used to be so clean that it gave us a calm feeling. But later some people began to throw away rubbish into it, so the river was dirty and smelly. And now the river is crying aloud for help. What should we do to protect it
First, we mustn’t throw waste into the river. Then, we should plant more trees and often clean the river. What’s more, we should call on more people to protect our environment.
Hope my hometown will become beautiful soon.
While-writing----Task 4
参考范文
1.Recite the composition.
2.Make a poster about a natural wonder.
3.Preview the new words in Unit 6.
Homework
Homework
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教学 课题 第5课时 话题写作指导
课时 教学 目标 1.学会运用本单元所学知识对神奇的自然风光及其保护措施进行简单写作; 2.能够通过本次写作课,提高自己在日常生活中保护环境的意识。
核心 语言 知识 核心句式: (1)I'm not a sea but a lake. (2)My water level is going down.I am becoming smaller year by year. (3)Take less water,or I'll dry up within the next 100 years. (4)However,people are cutting down my trees for wood and to make space for farming. (5)Please stop climate change.I'm turning into Waterworld!
课堂 导学 ◆Step 1 Warm-up Task 1 Check the homework. Task 2 Tick some students' writing and show them to the class. Task 3 翻译下列短语(3 minutes) 1.以……而著名 be famous for 2.充满 be full of 3.贯穿于……之中 run through 4. 因做某事而自豪 be proud to do sth 5.可能做某事 be likely to do sth 6.寻求;需要,亟需 cry for 7.下降 go down 8.逐年;一年又一年 year by year 9.干涸 dry up 10. 像;诸如;例如 such as 11.阻止……做某事 stop…from doing sth 12.保护大自然的重要性 the importance of protecting nature Task 4 Recite the following sentences,using 3 minutes. 1.蔚蓝的天空总是给我一种平静的感觉。 The lovely blue of the sky always gives me a calm feeling. 2.它就像高原上的一片汪洋。 It is like a great sea above the plateau. 3.语言无法表达我对河流及湖泊的热爱。 And words can't express my love for the rivers and lakes. 4.在我心中,它比任何其他地方都好。 In my heart,it's better than any other place. 5.少抽些水吧,不然用不了一百年我就干涸了。 Take less water,or I'll dry up within the next 100 years. 6. 然而,人们正在砍伐我的树木,以获取木材并为农业腾出空间。 However,people are cutting down my trees for wood and to make space for farming. ◆Step 2 Writing Pre-writing Do a survey. Think of some natural wonders with problems.Choose one to talk about in groups. While-writing Task 1 Present a new writing task and guide students to finish the task.
课堂 导学 假如你是李华,你的家乡是某市的一个村庄,一条河流流经你的家乡。请根据以下要点,写一篇英语短文,描述你家乡的变化。 要点:1.What was it like before 2.What problems does it face 3.What should we do to protect it 要求:1.70词左右; 2.尽可能用上所给表达:give…a calm feeling,cry for help,call on sb to do sth。 Task 2 思路点拨: Task 3 Discussion. Work in groups and discuss,meanwhile,write down their notes. Task 4 Share their sentences in class. 1. There is a river running through it. 2.The river used to be so clean that it gave us a calm feeling. 3.Some people began to throw away rubbish into it. 4.The river is crying aloud for help. 5.What should we do to protect it 6.We should plant more trees and often clean the river. 7.We should call on more people to protect our environment. 8.Hope my hometown will become beautiful soon. Task 5 Some transitional expressions. 首先 first,firstly,first of all 其次second,then,what's more 最后 at last,finally,in the end,last but not least 转折 however,but 不仅……而且…… not only…but also… 实际上 in fact 总而言之 in short,in one word,all in all Task 6 Complete the whole passage. Give students about 5 minutes to connect their words,expressions and sentences together. Post-writing Task 1 Ask students to improve or correct their passage and show the whole passage to students.
课堂 导学 参考范文: My hometown is a village in a city.There is a river running through it.The river used to be so clean that it gave us a calm feeling.But later some people began to throw away rubbish into it,so the river was dirty and smelly.And now the river is crying aloud for help.What should we do to protect it First,we mustn't throw waste into the river.Then,we should plant more trees and often clean the river.What's more,we should call on more people to protect our environment. Hope my hometown will become beautiful soon. Task 2 Vote on the best three passages and show them to the students.
板书 设计 Unit 5 Amazing nature 话题写作指导 Sentences: (1)I'm not a sea but a lake. (2)My water level is going down.I am becoming smaller year by year. (3)Take less water,or I'll dry up within the next 100 years. (4)However,people are cutting down my trees for wood and to make space for farming. (5)Please stop climate change.I'm turning into Waterworld!
作业 布置 1.Recite the composition. 2.Make a poster about a natural wonder. 3.Preview the new words in Unit 6.
教学 反思
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第5课时 话题写作指导
写作指导
类文训练
话题分析
本单元以“奇妙的大自然”为话题,分别从大自然的美过渡到了人类对大自然的破坏,留给我们的思考就是我们应该采取什么措施来保护大自然。
话题分析
【写作任务】
我们的世界因为有生物而丰富多彩、妙趣横生。保护它们,就是守护我们的未来。下面,让我们一起来听听熊猫惜惜的倾诉吧!
假如你是熊猫惜惜,请根据思维导图中的信息给人类朋友写一封 70 词左右的书信。
写作指导
要求:1.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
2.书信的开头和结尾已为你写出,不计入总词数。
【思路点拨】
第一步:审题 体裁: 人称: 时态:
第二步:列提纲
记叙文
第一人称
一般现在时
第三步:句子积累
开头句:
1. is Xixi.I’m a panda.我叫惜惜。我是一只熊猫。
2.There are many interesting places in my town.我的镇上有许
多有趣的地方。
My
name
中间句:
1.The river so clean that it gave us a
calm feeling.
这条河过去很干净,给我一种平静的感觉。
2.Pandas are species,and there aren’t many
of us left in the wild.
熊猫是一种濒危物种,我们在野外的数量已经不多了。
used
to
be
an
endangered
3.People trees and build roads.人们砍伐树木和
修路。
4. should we do to it 我们应该做什么来保
护它
cut
down
What
protect
结尾句:
1.Also,please others about pandas
and the environment.
还有,请教育其他人保护熊猫和环境。
2.Please climate change.I’m
Waterworld!
请阻止气候变化。我要变成水世界了!
educate
protecting
stop
turning
into
名言名句:
1.Blue sky,natural smile.碧水蓝天,笑容自然。
2.Protecting the environment is every man’s responsibility.
保护环境是每一个人的责任。
【范文品鉴】
Dear friends,
My name is Xixi.I’m a panda.I am 13 years old and I come from Sichuan.
As you know,people regard me as the symbols of China. I like eating bamboo and sleeping in the sun.But I have some troubles.I have few friends,so I often feel lonely and my home is often destroyed.People cut down trees and build roads.This makes me very sad.
I hope people can protect our homes.They shouldn’t cut down so many trees.They should set up more protected areas for us.Also,please educate others about protecting pandas and the environment.
Let’s make the world a better place.
Yours,
Xixi
类文训练
假如你是李华,你的家乡是贵州的一个村庄,一条河流流经你的家乡。请根据以下要点,以“My Hometown”为题写一篇70词左右的英语短文,描述你家乡的变化。
要求:1.标题、开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
3.尽可能用上以下表达:give…a calm feeling,cry for help,
call on sb to do sth
My Hometown
My hometown is a village in Guizhou.There is a river running through it.
Hope my hometown will become beautiful soon.
One possible version:
My Hometown
My hometown is a village in Guizhou.There is a river running through it.The river used to be so clean that it gave us a calm feeling.But later some people began to throw rubbish into it,so the river was dirty and smelly.And now the river is crying aloud for help.What should we do to protect it
First,we mustn’t throw waste into the river.Then,we should plant more trees and often clean the river.What’s more,we should call on more people to protect our environment.
Hope my hometown will become beautiful soon.
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