读后续写：在珠宝店工作青少年的故事 讲义-2025届广东省广州市普通高中毕业班2月调研考试英语试卷
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读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The Last-Minute Purchase
Me work in a jewellery (珠宝) store It was hard to imagine. I didn’t wear any accessories, not even a watch. However, I was a teenager who needed money and the store had a help-wanted sign in the window. My lack of interest in jewellery was reflected in my sales. After two weeks, George, my boss, brought out the sales figures. I was dead last.
The closer we got to Christmas, the busier the store got. True to form, many customers rushed into the store desperate to find the perfect gift for their loved ones. Of course, we had just what they wanted, showing them the more expensive items and only showing lower-priced ones if they asked.
About a half-hour before closing, a young girl came into the store with a worried look. I asked if I could help her. “I want to buy a gift for my mom,” she said. “It has to be something very special.” “What can you tell me about your mom ” I asked. “She’s beautiful.” she replied. My next question was how much money she had to spend. “Six dollars.”— that was still not much money, even though this happened way back when I was a teenager.
I knew we had some options in her price range. I patiently showed her several pieces. Nothing seemed special enough for the young girl’s mom. The store was filling up, with wallets being flipped out like a shootout. George’s eyes followed me like searchlights looking for enemy aircraft.
Finally, like the star in the east, a pair of earrings appeared. “They’re perfect. My mom will love these.” the little girl gasped. It came to $4.98. As I started to put the earrings in a bag, two big, brown eyes sparkled at me with great joy— the joy of this season.
“Could you gift-wrap them, please ” she requested. I got out one of the store’s special boxes, wrapped the earrings in gold paper, put a red ribbon around it. The gift looked beautiful, fit for the best mom in the world. She must have been the best mom in the world. What other kind of mother would raise such a wonderful child
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Head held high, the girl danced out of the store, delighted as a little deer.
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George stared at me with wide eyes—though it was Christmas, he wasn’t merry at all.
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在珠宝店工作青少年的故事续写
续写要点（两段）
第一段（女孩离开后的影响）
女孩的快乐感染其他顾客，引发连锁反应
主角转变销售策略，强调情感价值而非价格
珠宝店氛围从功利转向温情
第二段（George 的反应与转变）
George 因低价销售愤怒，顾客却认可主角的服务
通过顾客的反馈，George 意识到真诚的重要性
主旨升华：物质价值与情感意义的对比
情感线（150 字）
女孩的纯粹喜悦：通过 “danced out”“sparkled” 展现童真与爱。
顾客的情感共鸣：其他顾客被感染，从 “smiled” 到主动购买。
主角的职业觉醒：从 “dead last” 到发现珠宝承载的 “stories”。
George 的功利与矛盾：对低价销售的愤怒 vs. 顾客认可带来的反思。
主题升华：通过 “true wealth isn’t in diamonds” 点明情感联结的价值。
故事线（6 条）
女孩快乐离开→2. 顾客受感染→3. 主角卖出更多商品→4. George 批评低价销售→5. 顾客为服务付费→6. George 态度转变
主旨升华句（5 句英文）
"The most precious jewels are not found in display cases but in the moments we create for others."
"A $4.98 gift can hold more love than a diamond necklace—if it’s wrapped in sincerity."
"Business isn’t just about numbers; it’s about touching hearts and leaving footprints of kindness."
"In a world obsessed with price tags, the greatest treasures are often the cheapest to give."
"Jewellery tarnishes, but the warmth of a genuine smile lasts forever."
写作示范一
续写第一段：
Head held high, the girl danced out of the store, delighted as a little deer. Her laughter lingered, melting the frost on the windows. A man in a tailored suit paused, watching her skip away. "You’re good with kids," he said, then pointed to a pearl bracelet. "I’ll take that. Wrap it for my daughter." Within minutes, three more customers approached me, drawn not by glittering displays but by the warmth in the air. I sold a $150 pendant by sharing how it reminded me of my grandmother’s necklace. George’s jaw dropped.
续写第二段：
George stared at me with wide eyes—though it was Christmas, he wasn’t merry at all. "You gave away a $4.98 sale " he growled. Before I could respond, the suited man returned. "Your associate here has a gift," he said, pressing a $100 bill into my hand. "That bracelet It’s not for my daughter—it’s for the woman who raised me. Thank you for making me remember." George’s face paled. Later, he mumbled, "Maybe… we should stock more affordable items." As I left, snowflakes swirled around the store’s glowing sign. Tonight, I learned that true luxury isn’t in gold—it’s in the stories we help people tell.
写作示范二
续写第一段：
Head held high, the girl danced out of the store, delighted as a little deer. Her golden gift box shimmered like a star. A grandmotherly woman wiped her eyes. "You made that child’s Christmas," she said, then picked out a pair of emerald earrings. "Wrap these for my granddaughter. She’s studying to be a nurse." Another customer bought a silver locket, inspired by the girl’s love. I sold $500 worth of jewellery in 20 minutes, each time asking, "What story does this piece hold " George’s eyes bulged.
续写第二段：
George stared at me with wide eyes—though it was Christmas, he wasn’t merry at all. "That $4.98 sale was a waste of time!" he snapped. Just then, the grandmotherly woman reappeared. "This young man doesn’t just sell jewellery," she told George. "He sells hope. Here’s a $200 tip—split it with him." George’s anger faded. Later, he patted my back. "You’re onto something," he admitted. As I walked home, the cold air stung my cheeks, but my heart glowed. Tonight, I realized that the best gifts aren’t bought—they’re moments when someone feels truly seen.
参考答案
Head held high, the girl danced out of the store, delighted as a little deer. Watching her skip away, I couldn’t help but imagine the surprised and touched expression illuminating her mother’s face when she received this gift. I felt a sense of satisfaction, knowing that I had played a part in creating such a beautiful memory for them. It was moments like these that made all the long hours and stressful days in the store worthwhile. However, as I was immersed in this warm feeling, I suddenly felt a pair of eyes on me.
George stared at me with wide eyes— though it was Christmas, he wasn’t merry at all. “We were overwhelmed by customers eager to splurge, and she spent almost nothing! Every minute is precious, but you were dallying with her!” Without fear or hesitation, I replied firmly, “Yes, there were many with lots of money, but this child knows the true spirit of giving. She gave most of what she had. ” Falling silent for an extended moment, finally, he nodded thoughtfully, “Maybe you’re right.” As the faint chime of Christmas bells echoed in the distance, we both realized the true spirit of Christmas beyond sales— giving and caring.
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The Last-Minute Purchase
Me work in a jewellery (珠宝) store It was hard to imagine. I didn’t wear any accessories, not even a watch. However, I was a teenager who needed money and the store had a help-wanted sign in the window. My lack of interest in jewellery was reflected in my sales. After two weeks, George, my boss, brought out the sales figures. I was dead last.
The closer we got to Christmas, the busier the store got. True to form, many customers rushed into the store desperate to find the perfect gift for their loved ones. Of course, we had just what they wanted, showing them the more expensive items and only showing lower-priced ones if they asked.
About a half-hour before closing, a young girl came into the store with a worried look. I asked if I could help her. “I want to buy a gift for my mom,” she said. “It has to be something very special.” “What can you tell me about your mom ” I asked. “She’s beautiful.” she replied. My next question was how much money she had to spend. “Six dollars.”— that was still not much money, even though this happened way back when I was a teenager.
I knew we had some options in her price range. I patiently showed her several pieces. Nothing seemed special enough for the young girl’s mom. The store was filling up, with wallets being flipped out like a shootout. George’s eyes followed me like searchlights looking for enemy aircraft.
Finally, like the star in the east, a pair of earrings appeared. “They’re perfect. My mom will love these.” the little girl gasped. It came to $4.98. As I started to put the earrings in a bag, two big, brown eyes sparkled at me with great joy— the joy of this season.
“Could you gift-wrap them, please ” she requested. I got out one of the store’s special boxes, wrapped the earrings in gold paper, put a red ribbon around it. The gift looked beautiful, fit for the best mom in the world. She must have been the best mom in the world. What other kind of mother would raise such a wonderful child
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Head held high, the girl danced out of the store, delighted as a little deer.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________
George stared at me with wide eyes—though it was Christmas, he wasn’t merry at all.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
在珠宝店工作青少年的故事续写
续写要点（两段）
第一段（女孩离开后的影响）
女孩的快乐感染其他顾客，引发连锁反应
主角转变销售策略，强调情感价值而非价格
珠宝店氛围从功利转向温情
第二段（George 的反应与转变）
George 因低价销售愤怒，顾客却认可主角的服务
通过顾客的反馈，George 意识到真诚的重要性
主旨升华：物质价值与情感意义的对比
情感线（150 字）
女孩的纯粹喜悦：通过 “danced out”“sparkled” 展现童真与爱。
顾客的情感共鸣：其他顾客被感染，从 “smiled” 到主动购买。
主角的职业觉醒：从 “dead last” 到发现珠宝承载的 “stories”。
George 的功利与矛盾：对低价销售的愤怒 vs. 顾客认可带来的反思。
主题升华：通过 “true wealth isn’t in diamonds” 点明情感联结的价值。
故事线（6 条）
女孩快乐离开→2. 顾客受感染→3. 主角卖出更多商品→4. George 批评低价销售→5. 顾客为服务付费→6. George 态度转变
主旨升华句（5 句英文）
"The most precious jewels are not found in display cases but in the moments we create for others."
"A $4.98 gift can hold more love than a diamond necklace—if it’s wrapped in sincerity."
"Business isn’t just about numbers; it’s about touching hearts and leaving footprints of kindness."
"In a world obsessed with price tags, the greatest treasures are often the cheapest to give."
"Jewellery tarnishes, but the warmth of a genuine smile lasts forever."
写作示范一
续写第一段：
Head held high, the girl danced out of the store, delighted as a little deer. Her laughter lingered, melting the frost on the windows. A man in a tailored suit paused, watching her skip away. "You’re good with kids," he said, then pointed to a pearl bracelet. "I’ll take that. Wrap it for my daughter." Within minutes, three more customers approached me, drawn not by glittering displays but by the warmth in the air. I sold a $150 pendant by sharing how it reminded me of my grandmother’s necklace. George’s jaw dropped.
续写第二段：
George stared at me with wide eyes—though it was Christmas, he wasn’t merry at all. "You gave away a $4.98 sale " he growled. Before I could respond, the suited man returned. "Your associate here has a gift," he said, pressing a $100 bill into my hand. "That bracelet It’s not for my daughter—it’s for the woman who raised me. Thank you for making me remember." George’s face paled. Later, he mumbled, "Maybe… we should stock more affordable items." As I left, snowflakes swirled around the store’s glowing sign. Tonight, I learned that true luxury isn’t in gold—it’s in the stories we help people tell.
写作示范二
续写第一段：
Head held high, the girl danced out of the store, delighted as a little deer. Her golden gift box shimmered like a star. A grandmotherly woman wiped her eyes. "You made that child’s Christmas," she said, then picked out a pair of emerald earrings. "Wrap these for my granddaughter. She’s studying to be a nurse." Another customer bought a silver locket, inspired by the girl’s love. I sold $500 worth of jewellery in 20 minutes, each time asking, "What story does this piece hold " George’s eyes bulged.
续写第二段：
George stared at me with wide eyes—though it was Christmas, he wasn’t merry at all. "That $4.98 sale was a waste of time!" he snapped. Just then, the grandmotherly woman reappeared. "This young man doesn’t just sell jewellery," she told George. "He sells hope. Here’s a $200 tip—split it with him." George’s anger faded. Later, he patted my back. "You’re onto something," he admitted. As I walked home, the cold air stung my cheeks, but my heart glowed. Tonight, I realized that the best gifts aren’t bought—they’re moments when someone feels truly seen.
参考答案
Head held high, the girl danced out of the store, delighted as a little deer. Watching her skip away, I couldn’t help but imagine the surprised and touched expression illuminating her mother’s face when she received this gift. I felt a sense of satisfaction, knowing that I had played a part in creating such a beautiful memory for them. It was moments like these that made all the long hours and stressful days in the store worthwhile. However, as I was immersed in this warm feeling, I suddenly felt a pair of eyes on me.
George stared at me with wide eyes— though it was Christmas, he wasn’t merry at all. “We were overwhelmed by customers eager to splurge, and she spent almost nothing! Every minute is precious, but you were dallying with her!” Without fear or hesitation, I replied firmly, “Yes, there were many with lots of money, but this child knows the true spirit of giving. She gave most of what she had. ” Falling silent for an extended moment, finally, he nodded thoughtfully, “Maybe you’re right.” As the faint chime of Christmas bells echoed in the distance, we both realized the true spirit of Christmas beyond sales— giving and caring.