应用文写作 给英国笔友分享新年登高活动的邮件 讲义-云南省曲靖市会泽县2024-2025学年高二上学期期末统一考试英语试题
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| 名称 | 应用文写作 给英国笔友分享新年登高活动的邮件 讲义-云南省曲靖市会泽县2024-2025学年高二上学期期末统一考试英语试题 |  | |
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| 科目 | 英语 | ||
| 更新时间 | 2025-03-02 16:22:38 | ||
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写作
假设你是李华, 上周五你们班组织了新年登高活动。请你给你的英国笔友 Emma 写一封电子邮件分享这次的经历, 内容包括:
1. 活动过程;
2. 你的感想和收获。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Dear Emma
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
给英国笔友分享新年登高活动的邮件
一、写作提纲
第一段：开头引入
问候笔友 Emma，表达写信目的，即分享新年登高活动。
第二段：活动过程
描述出发的时间、地点和参与人员。
讲述登山途中大家相互鼓励、克服困难的场景。
提及到达山顶后的活动，如欣赏风景、拍照留念等。
第三段：感想和收获
阐述活动对自己身体和精神方面的积极影响。
强调活动增进了同学间的友谊。
总结活动是新年很棒的开端，并表达对笔友的祝福和期待回信。
二、语言积累
（一）短语
gather together 聚集在一起
set off for 出发前往
encourage each other 相互鼓励
reach the peak 到达山顶
enjoy the view 欣赏风景
take photos 拍照
strengthen one's body 强身健体
deepen friendship 加深友谊
a great start to 一个很棒的开端
look forward to 期待
（二）佳句
It was an unforgettable experience that filled our hearts with joy and enthusiasm.
这是一次令人难忘的经历，让我们的心中充满了喜悦和热情。
As we made our way up the mountain, the fresh air and beautiful scenery made us feel refreshed.
在我们登山的过程中，清新的空气和美丽的风景让我们感到神清气爽。
With everyone's joint efforts, we finally conquered the mountain and achieved our goal.
在大家的共同努力下，我们最终征服了这座山，实现了目标。
This activity not only brought us closer to nature but also enhanced our teamwork spirit.
这次活动不仅让我们更亲近大自然，还增强了我们的团队合作精神。
I truly believe that such meaningful activities can leave a lasting impression on our lives.
我真的相信，这样有意义的活动能在我们的生活中留下深刻的印象。
三、写作示范
示范一
Dear Emma,
How's everything going I'm eager to share our New Year's hiking adventure with you.
Last Friday morning, our class gathered at the school gate and set off for the nearby mountain. The uphill journey was tough, yet we motivated one another. When we reached the peak, the breathtaking view took our breath away. We celebrated by taking numerous photos.
This activity not only built up our strength but also tightened our bond. It was an ideal kick - off for the new year. Looking forward to your stories.
Yours,
Li Hua
示范二
Dear Emma,
Hope this email finds you well. I'm writing to tell you about our wonderful New Year's hiking activity.
Early last Friday, we assembled and started our hike. Along the way, we faced challenges, but our mutual encouragement kept us going. At the top, we were greeted by a magnificent view. We spent some time enjoying it and took pictures to mark the moment.
This experience not only strengthened us physically but also deepened our friendship. It was a perfect start to the new year. I'm waiting to hear from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
示范三
Dear Emma,
How have you been I'm really excited to share our New Year's hiking activity with you.
Last Friday, our class gathered and set out for the mountain. During the hike, we helped each other overcome difficulties. Once we arrived at the peak, we were fascinated by the beautiful view. We took photos and cheered to celebrate.
This activity not only made us stronger but also made our friendship more solid. It was a great beginning for the new year. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Emma,
How are you Last Friday, our class organized a New Year mountain-climbing event. We set off early, hiking through crisp winter air. Though the path was steep, we encouraged each other, laughing and singing. At the summit, we took group photos, wrote wishes on red ribbons, and shared snacks while enjoying the breathtaking view.
This experience taught me the power of teamwork and perseverance. I also gained a deeper appreciation for nature’s beauty. Have you had any memorable New Year traditions recently
Looking forward to hearing from you!
Yours,
Li Hua
假设你是李华, 上周五你们班组织了新年登高活动。请你给你的英国笔友 Emma 写一封电子邮件分享这次的经历, 内容包括:
1. 活动过程;
2. 你的感想和收获。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Dear Emma
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
给英国笔友分享新年登高活动的邮件
一、写作提纲
第一段：开头引入
问候笔友 Emma，表达写信目的，即分享新年登高活动。
第二段：活动过程
描述出发的时间、地点和参与人员。
讲述登山途中大家相互鼓励、克服困难的场景。
提及到达山顶后的活动，如欣赏风景、拍照留念等。
第三段：感想和收获
阐述活动对自己身体和精神方面的积极影响。
强调活动增进了同学间的友谊。
总结活动是新年很棒的开端，并表达对笔友的祝福和期待回信。
二、语言积累
（一）短语
gather together 聚集在一起
set off for 出发前往
encourage each other 相互鼓励
reach the peak 到达山顶
enjoy the view 欣赏风景
take photos 拍照
strengthen one's body 强身健体
deepen friendship 加深友谊
a great start to 一个很棒的开端
look forward to 期待
（二）佳句
It was an unforgettable experience that filled our hearts with joy and enthusiasm.
这是一次令人难忘的经历，让我们的心中充满了喜悦和热情。
As we made our way up the mountain, the fresh air and beautiful scenery made us feel refreshed.
在我们登山的过程中，清新的空气和美丽的风景让我们感到神清气爽。
With everyone's joint efforts, we finally conquered the mountain and achieved our goal.
在大家的共同努力下，我们最终征服了这座山，实现了目标。
This activity not only brought us closer to nature but also enhanced our teamwork spirit.
这次活动不仅让我们更亲近大自然，还增强了我们的团队合作精神。
I truly believe that such meaningful activities can leave a lasting impression on our lives.
我真的相信，这样有意义的活动能在我们的生活中留下深刻的印象。
三、写作示范
示范一
Dear Emma,
How's everything going I'm eager to share our New Year's hiking adventure with you.
Last Friday morning, our class gathered at the school gate and set off for the nearby mountain. The uphill journey was tough, yet we motivated one another. When we reached the peak, the breathtaking view took our breath away. We celebrated by taking numerous photos.
This activity not only built up our strength but also tightened our bond. It was an ideal kick - off for the new year. Looking forward to your stories.
Yours,
Li Hua
示范二
Dear Emma,
Hope this email finds you well. I'm writing to tell you about our wonderful New Year's hiking activity.
Early last Friday, we assembled and started our hike. Along the way, we faced challenges, but our mutual encouragement kept us going. At the top, we were greeted by a magnificent view. We spent some time enjoying it and took pictures to mark the moment.
This experience not only strengthened us physically but also deepened our friendship. It was a perfect start to the new year. I'm waiting to hear from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
示范三
Dear Emma,
How have you been I'm really excited to share our New Year's hiking activity with you.
Last Friday, our class gathered and set out for the mountain. During the hike, we helped each other overcome difficulties. Once we arrived at the peak, we were fascinated by the beautiful view. We took photos and cheered to celebrate.
This activity not only made us stronger but also made our friendship more solid. It was a great beginning for the new year. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Emma,
How are you Last Friday, our class organized a New Year mountain-climbing event. We set off early, hiking through crisp winter air. Though the path was steep, we encouraged each other, laughing and singing. At the summit, we took group photos, wrote wishes on red ribbons, and shared snacks while enjoying the breathtaking view.
This experience taught me the power of teamwork and perseverance. I also gained a deeper appreciation for nature’s beauty. Have you had any memorable New Year traditions recently
Looking forward to hearing from you!
Yours,
Li Hua