期末综合复习单元必背优秀满分英语作文10篇（三）-2025人教版英语八年级下册

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期末综合复习单元必背满分英语作文10篇
2025人教版英语八年级下册
简介：
《期末综合复习单元必背满分英语作文10篇（2025人教版英语八年级下册）》是为八年级学生编写的一份全面的英语写作复习资料，按照人教版八年级下册英语教材的单元话题顺序排列，涵盖了各单元的核心主题和常考的写作题型。
每篇作文不仅是一个高质量的范文示例，也为学生提供了如何构思文章、安排结构、使用恰当词汇和句型的写作技巧。通过学习这些范文，学生能够掌握文章写作的基本方法，提升自己的写作水平，并能够自如地应对各种作文题目。
本资料非常适合用于期末复习、课后巩固以及针对性写作训练。通过背诵、模仿和分析这些作文，学生不仅能够提高写作技巧，还能够积累常见写作素材，增强面对作文题目的信心。文档中的写作技巧和结构分析也帮助学生理解如何有效组织文章、表达观点，从而提高写作分数。
一、书面表达
1．许多孩子喜欢吃零食，这是导致他们肥胖的主要原因之一。英语课上，老师引导学生就吃零食这一问题展开讨论。请你参考以下提示写一篇英语短文，简要谈谈你的看法。
提示：
1. 吃零食是一种坏习惯；
2. 科学家们说有些零食含有大量的脂肪和糖，人们摄取的脂肪和糖越多，越容易发胖。
要求：
1. 80词左右；
2. 可适当补充细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：snack n.零食 take in摄取 overweight adj.肥胖的；超重的
满分作文：
Most of the students in our class like eating snacks. I think it’s a bad habit. Snacks are delicious, but they are bad for our health if we eat lots of them. Do you know why Scientists say some snacks have too much fat and sugar. The more fat and sugar we take in, the more easily we will become fat. Becoming overweight can cause a lot of health problems and even illnesses. So in order to keep healthy, we shouldn’t eat lots of snacks.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为议论文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏作文提示里的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“大多数学生都吃零食”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“吃零食有害健康、科学家论证等”几个方面介绍具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。呼吁大家少吃零食，保持健康。
[亮点词汇]
①bad habit坏习惯
②delicious美味
③be bad for对……有害
④overweight超重
⑤health problems健康问题
[高分句型]
①the more fat and sugar we take in, the more easily we will become fat. (“the+比较级，the+比较”句型）
②So in order to keep healthy, we shouldn’t eat lots of snacks. (“in order to”引导目的状语)
2．根据以下提示，以“I’m Happy to Help Others”为题，写一篇英语短文。
内容:
1. 过去我将钱花在买衣服和零食上；
2. 老师告诉我们有很多儿童缺少衣服和食物，更不能上学；
3. 从那以后，我将零花钱捐给一个帮助儿童的组织；
4. 我为能帮助别人而自豪。
要求:
1. 语句通顺，语意连贯；
2. 必须包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
3. 80词左右（不含所给词）。
满分作文：
I’m Happy to Help Others
Everyone needs help. I used to buy clothes and snacks with my pocket money. But sometimes they were a waste of money. One day, our teacher told us in some places in the world, there were many poor children and they didn’t have enough clothes and food. They even couldn’t go to school. Hearing that, I felt sorry for them. I should do something for them. From then on, I gave away my pocket money to an organization to help children. I hope I can help the poor kids. At least they can buy a book. This makes me feel very happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：注意不要遗漏提示内容中给出的要点，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。内容是根据提示，以“I’m Happy to Help Others”为题，写一篇英语短文。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。首先介绍过去我将钱花在买衣服和零食上；然后从老师那儿得知还有很多儿童缺少衣服和食物，更不能上学；其次介绍从那以后，我将零花钱捐给一个帮助儿童的组织。
第三步：书写结语。表示“我为能帮助别人而自豪。”
[亮点词汇]
①pocket money零花钱
②a waste of mone浪费金钱
③felt sorry for感到抱歉
④gave away捐赠
[高分句型]
①One day, our teacher told us in some places in the world, there were many poor children and they didn’t have enough clothes and food.（there be句型）
②From then on, I gave away my pocket money to an organization to help children.（to help children.做目的状语）
③This makes me feel very happy.（make sb. do sth.让某人做某事）
3．假如你是文昌中学一名八年级的学生，上周末你们班开展了一次帮父母做家务（Helping Parents Do Housework）的活动。请你根据下面的要点提示，写一篇英语短文，叙述你上周做家务的过程及感受。要求不少于80词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
要点提示：（1）做家务的起因；
（2）做了哪些家务；
（3）父母的反应以及个人的感受。
满分作文：
I am a Grade 8 student in Wenchang Middle School. Last week, our class held an activity called “Helping Parents Do Housework”. Everyone in my class took an active part in the activity.
As for me, I did a lot of chores because my parents were away last Saturday morning. First, I swept the floor, cleaned all the rooms and took out the rubbish. Then, I made the bed and folded the clothes. Finally, I watered the flowers in our garden. After doing the chores, I was very tired but happy. When my parents came back and saw what I had done, they were pleased with me. From then on, I decided to help my parents do more housework in my spare time.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中的三点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明做家务的起因。总体介绍该活动，如名称、活动范围、总体表现等；
第二步，具体叙述做了哪些家务。写作过程中需注意做家务的逻辑，要符合实际情况；
第三步，描写父母的反应和个人的感受。
[亮点词汇]
① hold an activity called ... 开展了一个名叫……的活动
② take an active part in 积极参与
③ as for ... 关于……
④ be pleased with ... 对……感到开心和满意
⑤ in my spare time 在我的空闲时间
[高分句型]
① After doing the chores, I was very tired but happy. （介词after后接动名词）
② When my parents came back and saw what I had done, they were pleased with me. （when引导的时间状语从句；what引导的宾语从句）
4．每个人都不可能没有烦恼，当你有烦恼时，试着控制你的情绪，因为情绪可以影响你的生活中的很多方面。所以生活中应当多相信自己，笑对人生，多与父母、朋友沟通。
请你展开想象，写一篇文章。
要求：
1、条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范。
2、提示词：feel happy, mirror, the best, talk with, help others in need, believe, have a nice day, express feelings
3、不少于80个单词。
满分作文：
Nobody can be happy all the time. When you become unhappy, you should try to control your feelings. Because bad feelings can make you lose your friends and give you other bad effects.
Here are some ways to make you feel better.
1. Look in the mirror and speak to yourself, “I’m the best in the world. I can do anything.”
2. Do something for others. You will feel happy if you always help others in need.
【详解】1、题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，写作时首先介绍每个人都有不好的情绪，然后介绍不好的情绪带来的影响，最后提出能让你感觉好点的方法，可适当发挥。
2、写作指导：本文应该以第一人称和第二人称来叙述内容，时态采用一般现在时为主；介绍情绪以及让你感觉好点的方法时，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。
5．每个人都经历过令自己难忘的事情。那么，令你难忘的事情是什么呢？请根据下面的表格提示，展开合理想象，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。
What the event was first place, piano competition
When it happened 10:00 a.m., February 5th
What you were doing drawing
What your parents were doing cleaning up the house
Why this event was important first time
满分作文：
I will never forget the day when I knew I won the first place in the piano competition. It happened at 10:00 a.m. on February 5th. I was drawing in my room when the phone rang suddenly. Since my parents were busy cleaning up the house, I picked up the phone. It was from my piano teacher. She told me I won the first place in the piano competition. I was so excited that I couldn’t say a word. The prize was very important to me because it was my first time to win a prize in a competition.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应根据汉语提示的内容，叙述令自己难忘的事情，包括事件是什么、发生在什么时候、当时正在干什么、以及此事件重要的原因。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一和第三人称来叙述故事内容，时态采用一般过去时为主，用过去进行时描述场景。场景应描写细致，故事的背景和过程需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。
6．假设你是阳光中学八年级的学生李平，你的英国笔友Henry向你请教成语“守株待兔”。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 描述故事；2. 概括寓意。
注意: 1. 词数90左右；2. 邮件中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
参考词汇：野兔hare；树桩tree stump
满分作文：
Dear Henry,
I’m glad to tell you the story of Wait for Wind Falls. In ancient China, there was a poor farmer. He was too lazy to work hard every day.
One day, while the farmer was working on the farm, a hare ran so fast that it bumped into the tree stump and died. The farmer was very happy to take the hare home and cooked a delicious meal. From then on, he didn’t work anymore. He waited near the tree stump for hares day after day until he was dying. Also, the crops in the field all died because of lack of care.
This story tells us we should not always depend on good luck. The past experience doesn’t always work. Happy life comes from hard work.
Yours,
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。内容是给你的英国笔友Henry介绍成语“守株待兔”的故事内容和寓意。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。首先描述故事；其次概括寓意。
第三步：书写结语。过去的经验并不总是有效的。幸福的生活来自努力工作。
[亮点词汇]
①too…to…太……而不能……
②from then on从那时起
③day after day日复一日
④because of因为，由于
⑤depend on依靠
[高分句型]
①One day, while the farmer was working on the farm, a hare ran so fast that it bumped into the tree sturmp and died.（while引导的时间状语从句）
②He waited near the tree sturmp for hares day after day until he was dying.（until引导的时间状语从句）
7．你听说过某些濒临灭绝的动物吗？请以“Why Should We Protect Wild Animals ” 为题，写一篇短文，说明为什么要保护野生动物。
写作内容：
（1）为什么有些野生动物处于危险之中？
（2）为什么保护野生动物很重要？
（3）我们应该采取什么措施来保护野生动物？
写作要求：
（1）不得照抄原文；不得出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
（2）条理清晰，意思连贯，词数70个左右。
满分作文：
Why Should We Protect Wild Animals
I think there are many endangered animals in the world, such as tigers and pandas. When farmers cut down trees, tigers can no longer hide and hunt. Many tigers are killed by people who want to sell their fur for money. And there are few places where pandas can live.
We are not alone in the world. We human beings could not live without all the plants and animals around us. So protecting wildlife animals is very important. We must take measures to keep plants from being destroyed and stop animals from being killed. If each of us can plant a tree and build a birdhouse, the world will be more beautiful. It is very easy but useful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，举例说明现在有很多动物濒临灭绝；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容；
第三步，书写结语表达“希望大家都能行动起来”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②no longer不再
③take measures采取措施
[高分句型]
①Many tigers are killed by people who want to sell their fur for money.(who引导的定语从句)
②If each of us can plant a tree and build a birdhouse, the world will be more beautiful.(if引导条件状语从句）
8．请根据下面内容，以“My Favorite Book”为题，写一篇英语短文。
My Favorite Book
名称和作者 主要人物介绍
主要内容或情节 个人观点或感想
满分作文：
My Favorite Book
My favorite book is Harry Potter. It is written by British writer J. K. Rowling. It is full of interesting stories. And it is one of the funniest books I have read.
The main character of the book is Harry Potter. He’s a brave and clever boy who fights against powerful enemies. I have learned a lot from him. We should be confident and brave like Harry Potter. And we should love and protect our friends.
I like reading Harry Potter very much and I have read it three times. I think it is an interesting book.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要题中给出的四个要点信息，写短文介绍自己最喜欢的一本书。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍最喜欢的书的名称、作者；
第二步，介绍主要人物及情节，并发表个人观点；
第三步，简单收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①be full of 充满
②fight against 与……作斗争
[高分句型]
①And it is one of the funniest books I have read.（省略that的定语从句）
②He’s a brave and clever boy who fights against powerful enemies.（who引导定语从句）
③I like reading Harry Potter very much and I have read it three times.（and连接并列句）
9．假如你是Jenny，请你给你的朋友Tom写一封电子邮件，向他介绍你和父母在暑假时来中国旅行的所见、所闻、所感。词数不少于80。
Places Xi’an Beijing
Things visited the Terracotta Army visited the Great Wall, ate Beijing Roast Duck and Beijing snacks
Feelings wonderful; great excited
Dear Tom,
My parents and I had a good trip in China.
满分作文：
Dear Tom,
My parents and I had a good trip in China.
First, we went to an ancient city—Xi’an. It is one of the most beautiful cities that I have ever visited. We stayed there for three days and visited the Terracotta Army. The weather was great and the Terracotta Army was so wonderful that we took a lot of photos.
After that, we went to Beijing to visit the Great Wall. It’s a good place to visit and there were many tourists. I was so excited when I was climbing the Great Wall. Just as the Chinese often say, “One who fails to reach the Great Wall is not a hero.” I felt like a hero when I stood on the top of it. We also ate Beijing Roast Duck and Beijing snacks. They were quite delicious.
We’ll be back soon. See you.
Yours,
Jenny
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件，属于电子邮件写作；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接邮件开头，引出话题；
第二步，先按照表格中的要点介绍去西安的所见、所闻、所感，再介绍北京之旅的所见、所闻、所感，可列举具体的事例；
第三步，表示会尽快回来并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①feel like感觉像
②on the top of在……的顶端
[高分句型]
①It is one of the most beautiful cities that I have ever visited.（that引导限制性定语从句）
②The weather was great and the Terracotta Army was so wonderful that we took a lot of photos.（so…that引导结果状语从句）
③I was so excited when I was climbing the Great Wall.（when引导的时间状语从句）
④Just as the Chinese often say, “One who fails to reach the Great Wall is not a hero.”（引用名言名句）
10．你打算做些什么去帮助西部的同学？请写一篇短文表达你的想法。
写作内容：以下有几种活动方案：
1. 捐赠学习用品；
2. 假期去当志愿者；
3. 通过写信的方式交朋友。
（请从以上方案中选择一种或几种，谈谈自己的看法。）
写作要求：
1. 不得照抄原文；不得出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
2. 条理清晰，意思连贯，词数70个左右。
满分作文：
I think the volunteers are great. They volunteer to go where they are needed. If I have the opportunity in the future, I will do the same things as they do.I can also do some volunteer work now. I can go there during the summer vacations. I’m going to take some school things there because I know they don’t have enough money to buy them.
I’m good at English and math, so I am going to help them with these subjects. And I also want to help them do the housework, so they can have more time to study.
I think being a volunteer is really a good idea.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”及“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接上文，表达自己也打算帮助西部的同学；
第二步，分几个方面介绍自己能为西部的同学做些什么；
第三步，书写结语，对文章做出总结。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at擅长
②help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
③want to do sth想要做某事
[高分句型]
①I’m going to take some school things there because I know they don’t have enough money to buy them.（because引导的原因状语从句；省略that的宾语从句）
②And I also want to help them do the housework, so they can have more time to study.（含so的并列句）
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