期末综合复习单元话题必背满分英语作文10篇-2025牛津译林版英语九年级上册
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期末综合复习单元话题必背满分英语作文10篇
2025牛津译林版英语九年级上册
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《期末综合复习单元话题必背满分英语作文10篇（2025牛津译林版英语九年级上册）》是为九年级学生编写的一份英语写作复习资料，旨在帮助学生高效提升写作能力，顺利应对期末考试。文档包含10篇必背的满分英语作文，按照牛津译林版九年级上册英语教材的模块单元话题顺序排列，覆盖了各单元的重要写作主题和常见题型。
每篇作文都具备高度的教学价值，不仅是高质量的范文，也为学生提供了写作技巧和结构上的指导。通过这些范文，学生可以深入理解如何构思文章、选择合适的词汇和句型，以及如何表达观点、呈现逻辑，使文章更加完整、清晰、流畅。
本资料适合用作期末复习的重点参考资料，特别适用于期末前的强化复习和高效备考。通过背诵和模仿范文，学生不仅能提高英语作文的写作技巧，还能积累常用表达，增强自信心。文档中的写作分析和建议，也将帮助学生在实际考试中更好地组织语言，提升作文分数。
一、书面表达
1．学校计划邀请同学参加“Take over Challenge”活动，即用一天的时间体验某种工作，例如画家、工程师、医生、运动员、音乐家、演员等。请以“The job I want to take over for a day”为题，根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文。
1. What job would you like to take over for a day
2. What qualities does this job require (Choose a person in the picture as an example.)
3. Why do you choose this job
☆take over接管
注意：
1. 内容涵盖所有要点，可作适当发挥，全文连贯通顺；
2. 词数100左右 (已给出的开头部分不计入总词数) ；
3. 文中不得提及有关个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
满分范文：
The job I want to take over for a day
Among so many jobs, I want to work as a youth worker for a day.
To be a youth worker requires attractive qualities, such as being helpful and patient. Take Mr. Friend as an example. When students are in trouble, he’s willing to listen patiently and try to help them out. More importantly, he always puts himself in others’ shoes.
Teenagers of my age may have different problems. I think being a youth worker is possibly a good way to help others deal with worries as well as stress. I’m looking forward to having a meaningful experience and giving a helping hand.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。直接说明想要体验什么工作，比如青年工作者；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍这个工作需要什么样的品质及你选择这个工作的原因；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②in trouble处于麻烦中
③More importantly更重要的是
④teenagers of my age我的同龄青少年
⑤as well as和
[高分句型]
①When students are in trouble, he’s willing to listen patiently and try to help them out. (时间状语从句)
②I think being a youth worker is possibly a good way to help others deal with worries as well as stress. (宾语从句)
2．现在，随着中国的快速发展，越来越多的外国友人开始关注中国文化，并希望和中国学生做笔友。假定你是李华，加拿大学生 Robert希望了解有关你的爱好，成为你的笔友。请认真阅读他写给你的邮件，根据邮件内容及你的了解用英语回复。
To: Lihua@
From:Robert2008@
Subject: Making friends
Dear Li Hua, How are you I’m really interested in Chinese culture and wants to make friends with you, would you please tell me something about yourself: ● What is your animal sign ● What personalities do you have Are they connected to your animal sign ● What’s your favourite colour Why do you like it Please write back soon. Best withes. Robert
注意：
1.词数100左右，文章开头与结尾已写好，不计入总词数。
2.回复须包括注所有内容要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
3.文中不得提及真实的人名和学校名称等相关信息。
满分范文：
Dear Robert,
I’m glad that you like to make pen friends with me. Let me tell you something about myself to you.
My animal sign is the Dragon. I am very outgoing and I like making friends with people around me. I have extremely high expectations of myself and I am very careful. I’m considered to be energetic and ambitious, which might be related to my animal sign.
My favourite colour is green. When spring comes, everything comes to life and everything is green. So I think green is a symbol of life and energy.
I really hope we can be pen friends. I am looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据邮件中的信息进行写作，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，介绍自己的生肖和性格；
第三步，介绍自己最喜欢的颜色和原因；
第四步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be considered to be被认为是
②be related to和……有关
③a symbol of……的象征
[高分句型]
①I’m considered to be energetic and ambitious, which might be related to my animal sign. (which引导的定语从句)
②So I think green is a symbol of life and energy. (宾语从句)
3．假如你是Sandy，你们班的英语老师Mr. Lee想了解班级同学的状况，以便有针对性地对学生进行考前心理辅导。请你根据下面的内容要求，给Mr. Lee写封电子邮件，说明自己目前的情况，自己所做的努力，并请他给你仍有的困惑提一些建议。内容要点如下：
1. 目前的情况 1. 学业重，上课困，没有学习动力 2. 父母不理解，运动休闲时间少 3. ……
2. 所做的努力 1. 合理规划时间，提高上课效率 2. 运动或听音乐，放松自己 3. ……
3. 仍有的困惑 1. 父母只关注成绩 2. 因升学压力大同学之间偶尔相处不愉快 3. ……
要求：
1. 短文要包含所有的要点，可适当发挥；
2. 语言通顺，语法正确，结构合理，层次要清晰，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名，词数100左右。
满分范文：
Dear Mr. Lee,
I’m very glad to write to you. I have some problems and feel really stressed these days. Every day, I have so much homework to do that I feel sleepy in class. I hardly have any spare time for sports, which makes my life very boring.
I know it is important to finish all my homework on time, so I am trying to plan my day carefully. And it will help me relax by listening to music or exercising. Sometimes, when I feel tired, I will look at blue things, as blue can bring peace to my mind and body.
However, I still can’t solve some of my problems. For example, my parents think it is more important to get a good grade than to have a happy studying. Moreover, I can meet some problems with my friends because of the pressure of study.
What should I do Can you offer me some suggestions I hope to have a good talk with you soon.
Best wishes,
Sandy
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，交代自己目前的情况；
第二步，交代自己所做的努力；
第三步，阐述目前仍有的困惑并期望得到建议。
[亮点词汇]
①solve解决
②because of因为
③be glad to do sth.很高兴做某事
[高分句型]
①I know it is important to finish all my homework on time, so I am trying to plan my day carefully.（so引导结果状语从句）
②Sometimes, when I feel tired, I will look at blue things, as blue can bring peace to my mind and body.（when引导时间状语从句）
4．为了树立榜样，创建优良的校风，你校英语俱乐部近日开展主题为“A role model around me”的英语演讲大赛，写一篇演讲稿介绍你心目中的“模范少年”（Role Model）全红婵。
要求：
1）须包含提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥，条理清晰；
2）词数：不少于80词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：
中国跳水运动员 Chinese diver 奥运会 Olympic Games
冠军 champion 金牌 gold medal 世界纪录 world record
满分范文：
A Role Model Around Me Today, I’m glad to introduce my role model to you. Her name is Quan Hongchan. She is a Chinese diver. She was born in a poor family in Zhanjiang on March 28, 2007. She began to receive diving training in 2014 in Zhanjiang Sports School.
Since she joined the national team in 2020, she has won many gold medals in various competitions, such as the 19th Asian Games in Hangzhou, the 32nd Olympic Games in Tokyo and the 33rd Olympic Games in Paris. It is her hard training and strong will that make her so successful.
I think I should learn from her. I will never give up when I meet difficulties in my life. And I should achieve my goals through hard work.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为演讲稿；
②时态：根据实际描述灵活运用各种时态；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据文章已给出的开头，介绍全红婵的个人信息；
第二步，介绍她的主要成就；
第三步，谈谈自己从她身上学到的东西。
[亮点词汇]
①be born in出生于
②learn from sb.向某人学习
③give up放弃
④such as例如
[高分句型]
①It is her hard training and strong will that make her so successful.（强调句）
②I will never give up when I meet difficulties in my life.（when引导的时间状语从句）
5．书面表达
假设你们班级即将召开以“感恩”为主题的班会，要求向大家介绍一下你最想向谁表达感恩之情，他或她为你做了什么，你又将怎样回报他或她的付出。请结合上文内容，以“Thank you, my…”为题写一篇发言稿。
要求：
1.句子通顺，语意连贯；
2.包括所有提示内容；
3.80词左右。
满分范文：
Thank You, My Mother
Wherever we are today, whatever we are, we owe it to our parents who have given and taught us so much, so we should thank them, especially, thank our mother. I think my mother is one of the best mothers in the world.
She is the busiest one in my family. She does all the house work for the family and cares about my study. She has taught me a lot. She does lots of things for me. But she never wants anything in return. How will I show my thanks to my mother First, this year, I am going to give her a surprise birthday party and buy her a special present. Second, I’ll do well in school. Third, I’ll help her do housework when I’m free. I want to make her happy.
In a word, I love my mother.
【详解】试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，题目中给出的材料较为齐全。写作中注意将所提示内容的情况介绍清楚。根据材料可知，本文主要用一般现在时态，第三人称进行叙述，写作中主语时态及主谓一致等问题。注意不要遗漏要点，做到语句通顺。为了使意思更加连贯可适当使用连接词。
【亮点说明】本文在写作中使用了很多固定句式，如：owe……to……把……归功于……；one of the＋最高级，最……之一；care about关系；lots of许多；in return作为回报；do well in在……做的好；连词wherever，whatever，so，but及序数词的使用使得本文看起来逻辑清楚，条理分明。所以在学习中，我们应注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.
6．假设你叫李华，学校将在下周五举办一场主题为“我最喜欢的电影”的英语角活动，请你根据以下要点用英语写一篇演讲稿，分享你最喜欢的一部电影。
要点：
1. 喜欢的电影类型及原因；
2. 介绍最喜欢的一部电影及其主要内容；
3. 看电影的好处。
注意：1. 可在要点提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
2. 不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和学生的真实姓名；
3. 语句连贯，词数100左右。作文的标题和开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
满分范文：
My Favorite Movie
Dear friends, what kind of movies do you like I’m really into science fiction movies because they can take me to a world full of imagination and advanced technology.
My favorite one is “Interstellar”. In this movie, the Earth is facing a serious environmental crisis. A group of astronauts are sent on a mission to find a new habitable planet for humanity. They travel through a wormhole and experience various adventures in different galaxies. The special effects are extremely stunning, making the space scenes look so real.
Watching movies is a great way to relax. It broadens our horizons and enriches our knowledge. We can also learn different cultures and values from them. That’s why I love movies so much.
Thank you!
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿。
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
［写作步骤］
第一步，表明写作意图。开头以提问引出自己对电影类型的喜好，为下文介绍最喜欢的电影做铺垫。
第二步，具体阐述。先说明喜欢科幻电影的原因，再详细介绍《星际穿越》的故事背景、主要情节和特效，让听众了解电影内容，随后分析看电影的好处，阐述各好处的具体表现及意义。
第三步，书写结语。
［亮点词汇］
①science fiction movies 科幻电影
②imagination 想象力
③advanced technology 先进技术
④Interstellar《星际穿越》
⑤environmental crisis 环境危机
⑥astronaut 宇航员
⑦habitable planet 可居住星球
⑧wormhole 虫洞
⑨galaxy 星系
⑩stunning 令人惊叹的
［高分句型］
I’m really into science fiction movies because they can take me to a world full of imagination and advanced technology.（because引导原因状语从句）
7．研究表明音乐对人们的情绪有着重要的影响，因此人们用不同的音乐来调节心情。请根据下表提示内容，写一篇英语短文。
听音乐前的情绪状态 音乐类型 听音乐后的心境
压力大，过分焦虑 流行音乐 放松
沉迷电脑游戏，兴奋过度 乡村音乐 平静
困倦，疲劳 摇滚音乐 振奋
以自己为例：孤独，悲伤 …… ……
满分范文：
Research has shown that music has an important effect on one’s moods. So people use different kinds of music to change moods.
If you feel stressed and worry a lot, you can listen to pop music and you will feel relaxed. Some students are crazy about computer games and feel overexcited, so they can listen to country music and they will feel calm and peaceful. Some people feel tired and sleepy, so they can listen to rock music. After listening, they will feel excited. Sometimes I feel lonely and sad. I often listen to light music. It makes me feel happy again.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文。
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据提示材料分别写出听了不同音乐的情绪前后的对比。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出音乐的重要性。
第二步，具体阐述每一种音乐带来的不同感受。
[亮点词汇]
① has an important effect on sth对某事有重要的影响
② different kinds of各种各样的
③ be crazy about对……痴迷
[高分句型]
① If you feel stressed and worry a lot, you can listen to pop music and you will feel relaxed（if引导了条件状语从句）
② It makes me feel happy again（make sb do sth结构中省略to的动词不定式作宾补）
8．如今，青少年的娱乐方式与他们父母辈小时候的娱乐方式大有不同，某英文报观点专栏就此向全国中小学生征稿。请你写一篇英语短文投稿，简要描述图片内容，谈谈你的看法并提出建议，让青少年通过阅读这篇文章有所启发。
注意：（1）词数：110左右；
（2）开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等。
满分范文：
With the development of society, teenagers’ recreation has also changed.
From picture 1, we can see some children playing outside in the past. In picture 2, a boy is playing computer games. He’s surrounded by all kinds of electronics. In the past, children always had a good time, but now the teenagers always feel lonely.
Nowadays, with the development of technology, there are many after-school entertainment activities. We should choose some activities that are good for our health. We had better balance the time between exercising and playing on the computer.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据所给图片完成写作，给出自己的建议，注意语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题；
第二步，具体描述画面中的内容，并对比过去和现在的娱乐方式；
第三步，表达自己的看法和建议。
[亮点词汇]
①see sb doing sth看见某人正在做某事
②play computer games玩电脑游戏
③have a good time玩得开心
④had better最好
[高分句型]
①We should choose some activities that are good for our health.（that引导的定语从句）
9．学校举办了一次主题为“The Beauty of Art in My Heart”的英语演讲比赛，鼓励学生分享自己最喜欢的艺术形式，并说明喜欢的原因。你会选择哪一种艺术形式？请结合自己的兴趣，描述你喜欢的艺术形式，并说明理由。
以下艺术形式仅供参考：
● 视觉艺术 (visual Arts): 绘画(painting)、雕塑(sculpture)...
● 影视艺术 (film and TV arts): 电影(films)、电视节目(TV programmes)...
● 文学艺术 (literary arts): 侦探故事(detective stories)、小说(novels)...
注意：
1. 短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
满分范文：
My favorite form of art
Good morning, everyone! My favorite form of art is film. A film is a form that combines motion pictures, music and stories together.
I like music and reading so much, and films can make me enjoy them in a different way. First of all, films are like windows to different worlds, letting me experience a variety of emotions and cultures. Besides, each film is a unique journey, creating something truly magical for us. Furthermore, watching films is a good way to relax ourselves and can help to refresh us.
In short, film is really a beautiful form of art. Hope all of you can like it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏重要的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明自己最爱的艺术形式是哪种及该艺术形式的特点；
第二步，具体阐述喜欢该艺术形式的理由；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①in a different way以一种不同的方式
②first of all首先
③a variety of各种各样的
④in short总之
[高分句型]
①A film is a form that combines motion pictures, music and stories together. (that引导定语从句)
②Furthermore, watching films is a good way to relax ourselves and can help to refresh us.(动名词作主语)
10．书面表达
假如你叫李华，昨天晚上你看电影在回家途中目击了一起抢劫案(robbery)。请就以下信息，以李华的名义写一份给警方的书面材料，要求字数90左右。材料的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总字数。
案发时间 昨天晚上大约九点
案发地点 电影院附近的一条街道拐角处
作案人情况 两个男子，一个戴着墨镜的高个子，一个矮个子
受害人情况 一位年轻的女士，戴着一条金项链和一块金手表
案发经过 你正在街道上走着，突然听到身后有人呼救。你看到两个男子正抢劫(rob)一名女子。女子和他们进行了激烈的搏斗(have a fierce fight with...)。当你赶到时，两个劫匪(robber)已骑着他们自己的车逃跑。女子的金表被抢劫了，但幸运的是女子没有受伤。
满分范文：
Dear Sir / Madam,
I’m writing to report a robbery to you. It was at 9 p.m. Last night. The scene of the robbery was at the corner of a street near the cinema.
When the robbery happened, I was walking in the street. Suddenly I heard someone calling for help behind. I turned around and found two men were robbing a young woman. The woman put up a fierce fight with them. I ran up to them quickly, but when I got there, the robbers had been away on their own bikes, the woman’s gold watch had been robbed of, and she was lying on the ground. Luckily, she was not hurt.
The suspect were two men. One was tall with sunglasses, and the other was. I hope the information will help you catch the robbers.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下你看电影在回家途中目击的一起抢劫案。所提供的材料中列举了案发经过。
2.例文点评：主要从时间、地点、经过来描述：1）．时间：昨天晚上大约九点It was at 9 p.m. Last night.；2）．地点：电影院附近的一条街道拐角处；3）．经过：你正在街道上走着，I was walking in the street.突然听到身后有人呼救call for help，你看到两个男子正抢劫一名女子see(find) sb doing sth.,女子和他们进行了激烈的搏斗have a fierce fight with.，当你赶到时，两个劫匪已骑着他们自己的车逃跑run away/be away。女子的金表被抢劫了be robbed of，但幸运的（Luckily）是女子没有受伤。时态为一般过在时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须材料卡片上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密。
3. 高分亮点：
1）. When the robbery happened, I was walking in the street 当抢劫案发生时，我正在街上走着。句子 I was walking in the street是过去进行时态。
2）. when I got there, the robbers had been away on their own bikes，the woman’s gold watch had been robbed of. 当我赶到时，两个劫匪已骑着他们自己的车逃跑，女子的金表被抢劫了。从句为一般过去时态，主句用过去完成时态，表过去的过去。
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《期末综合复习单元话题必背满分英语作文10篇（2025牛津译林版英语九年级上册）》是为九年级学生编写的一份英语写作复习资料，旨在帮助学生高效提升写作能力，顺利应对期末考试。文档包含10篇必背的满分英语作文，按照牛津译林版九年级上册英语教材的模块单元话题顺序排列，覆盖了各单元的重要写作主题和常见题型。
每篇作文都具备高度的教学价值，不仅是高质量的范文，也为学生提供了写作技巧和结构上的指导。通过这些范文，学生可以深入理解如何构思文章、选择合适的词汇和句型，以及如何表达观点、呈现逻辑，使文章更加完整、清晰、流畅。
本资料适合用作期末复习的重点参考资料，特别适用于期末前的强化复习和高效备考。通过背诵和模仿范文，学生不仅能提高英语作文的写作技巧，还能积累常用表达，增强自信心。文档中的写作分析和建议，也将帮助学生在实际考试中更好地组织语言，提升作文分数。
一、书面表达
1．学校计划邀请同学参加“Take over Challenge”活动，即用一天的时间体验某种工作，例如画家、工程师、医生、运动员、音乐家、演员等。请以“The job I want to take over for a day”为题，根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文。
1. What job would you like to take over for a day
2. What qualities does this job require (Choose a person in the picture as an example.)
3. Why do you choose this job
☆take over接管
注意：
1. 内容涵盖所有要点，可作适当发挥，全文连贯通顺；
2. 词数100左右 (已给出的开头部分不计入总词数) ；
3. 文中不得提及有关个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
满分范文：
The job I want to take over for a day
Among so many jobs, I want to work as a youth worker for a day.
To be a youth worker requires attractive qualities, such as being helpful and patient. Take Mr. Friend as an example. When students are in trouble, he’s willing to listen patiently and try to help them out. More importantly, he always puts himself in others’ shoes.
Teenagers of my age may have different problems. I think being a youth worker is possibly a good way to help others deal with worries as well as stress. I’m looking forward to having a meaningful experience and giving a helping hand.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。直接说明想要体验什么工作，比如青年工作者；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍这个工作需要什么样的品质及你选择这个工作的原因；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②in trouble处于麻烦中
③More importantly更重要的是
④teenagers of my age我的同龄青少年
⑤as well as和
[高分句型]
①When students are in trouble, he’s willing to listen patiently and try to help them out. (时间状语从句)
②I think being a youth worker is possibly a good way to help others deal with worries as well as stress. (宾语从句)
2．现在，随着中国的快速发展，越来越多的外国友人开始关注中国文化，并希望和中国学生做笔友。假定你是李华，加拿大学生 Robert希望了解有关你的爱好，成为你的笔友。请认真阅读他写给你的邮件，根据邮件内容及你的了解用英语回复。
To: Lihua@
From:Robert2008@
Subject: Making friends
Dear Li Hua, How are you I’m really interested in Chinese culture and wants to make friends with you, would you please tell me something about yourself: ● What is your animal sign ● What personalities do you have Are they connected to your animal sign ● What’s your favourite colour Why do you like it Please write back soon. Best withes. Robert
注意：
1.词数100左右，文章开头与结尾已写好，不计入总词数。
2.回复须包括注所有内容要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
3.文中不得提及真实的人名和学校名称等相关信息。
满分范文：
Dear Robert,
I’m glad that you like to make pen friends with me. Let me tell you something about myself to you.
My animal sign is the Dragon. I am very outgoing and I like making friends with people around me. I have extremely high expectations of myself and I am very careful. I’m considered to be energetic and ambitious, which might be related to my animal sign.
My favourite colour is green. When spring comes, everything comes to life and everything is green. So I think green is a symbol of life and energy.
I really hope we can be pen friends. I am looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据邮件中的信息进行写作，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，介绍自己的生肖和性格；
第三步，介绍自己最喜欢的颜色和原因；
第四步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be considered to be被认为是
②be related to和……有关
③a symbol of……的象征
[高分句型]
①I’m considered to be energetic and ambitious, which might be related to my animal sign. (which引导的定语从句)
②So I think green is a symbol of life and energy. (宾语从句)
3．假如你是Sandy，你们班的英语老师Mr. Lee想了解班级同学的状况，以便有针对性地对学生进行考前心理辅导。请你根据下面的内容要求，给Mr. Lee写封电子邮件，说明自己目前的情况，自己所做的努力，并请他给你仍有的困惑提一些建议。内容要点如下：
1. 目前的情况 1. 学业重，上课困，没有学习动力 2. 父母不理解，运动休闲时间少 3. ……
2. 所做的努力 1. 合理规划时间，提高上课效率 2. 运动或听音乐，放松自己 3. ……
3. 仍有的困惑 1. 父母只关注成绩 2. 因升学压力大同学之间偶尔相处不愉快 3. ……
要求：
1. 短文要包含所有的要点，可适当发挥；
2. 语言通顺，语法正确，结构合理，层次要清晰，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名，词数100左右。
满分范文：
Dear Mr. Lee,
I’m very glad to write to you. I have some problems and feel really stressed these days. Every day, I have so much homework to do that I feel sleepy in class. I hardly have any spare time for sports, which makes my life very boring.
I know it is important to finish all my homework on time, so I am trying to plan my day carefully. And it will help me relax by listening to music or exercising. Sometimes, when I feel tired, I will look at blue things, as blue can bring peace to my mind and body.
However, I still can’t solve some of my problems. For example, my parents think it is more important to get a good grade than to have a happy studying. Moreover, I can meet some problems with my friends because of the pressure of study.
What should I do Can you offer me some suggestions I hope to have a good talk with you soon.
Best wishes,
Sandy
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，交代自己目前的情况；
第二步，交代自己所做的努力；
第三步，阐述目前仍有的困惑并期望得到建议。
[亮点词汇]
①solve解决
②because of因为
③be glad to do sth.很高兴做某事
[高分句型]
①I know it is important to finish all my homework on time, so I am trying to plan my day carefully.（so引导结果状语从句）
②Sometimes, when I feel tired, I will look at blue things, as blue can bring peace to my mind and body.（when引导时间状语从句）
4．为了树立榜样，创建优良的校风，你校英语俱乐部近日开展主题为“A role model around me”的英语演讲大赛，写一篇演讲稿介绍你心目中的“模范少年”（Role Model）全红婵。
要求：
1）须包含提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥，条理清晰；
2）词数：不少于80词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：
中国跳水运动员 Chinese diver 奥运会 Olympic Games
冠军 champion 金牌 gold medal 世界纪录 world record
满分范文：
A Role Model Around Me Today, I’m glad to introduce my role model to you. Her name is Quan Hongchan. She is a Chinese diver. She was born in a poor family in Zhanjiang on March 28, 2007. She began to receive diving training in 2014 in Zhanjiang Sports School.
Since she joined the national team in 2020, she has won many gold medals in various competitions, such as the 19th Asian Games in Hangzhou, the 32nd Olympic Games in Tokyo and the 33rd Olympic Games in Paris. It is her hard training and strong will that make her so successful.
I think I should learn from her. I will never give up when I meet difficulties in my life. And I should achieve my goals through hard work.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为演讲稿；
②时态：根据实际描述灵活运用各种时态；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据文章已给出的开头，介绍全红婵的个人信息；
第二步，介绍她的主要成就；
第三步，谈谈自己从她身上学到的东西。
[亮点词汇]
①be born in出生于
②learn from sb.向某人学习
③give up放弃
④such as例如
[高分句型]
①It is her hard training and strong will that make her so successful.（强调句）
②I will never give up when I meet difficulties in my life.（when引导的时间状语从句）
5．书面表达
假设你们班级即将召开以“感恩”为主题的班会，要求向大家介绍一下你最想向谁表达感恩之情，他或她为你做了什么，你又将怎样回报他或她的付出。请结合上文内容，以“Thank you, my…”为题写一篇发言稿。
要求：
1.句子通顺，语意连贯；
2.包括所有提示内容；
3.80词左右。
满分范文：
Thank You, My Mother
Wherever we are today, whatever we are, we owe it to our parents who have given and taught us so much, so we should thank them, especially, thank our mother. I think my mother is one of the best mothers in the world.
She is the busiest one in my family. She does all the house work for the family and cares about my study. She has taught me a lot. She does lots of things for me. But she never wants anything in return. How will I show my thanks to my mother First, this year, I am going to give her a surprise birthday party and buy her a special present. Second, I’ll do well in school. Third, I’ll help her do housework when I’m free. I want to make her happy.
In a word, I love my mother.
【详解】试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，题目中给出的材料较为齐全。写作中注意将所提示内容的情况介绍清楚。根据材料可知，本文主要用一般现在时态，第三人称进行叙述，写作中主语时态及主谓一致等问题。注意不要遗漏要点，做到语句通顺。为了使意思更加连贯可适当使用连接词。
【亮点说明】本文在写作中使用了很多固定句式，如：owe……to……把……归功于……；one of the＋最高级，最……之一；care about关系；lots of许多；in return作为回报；do well in在……做的好；连词wherever，whatever，so，but及序数词的使用使得本文看起来逻辑清楚，条理分明。所以在学习中，我们应注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.
6．假设你叫李华，学校将在下周五举办一场主题为“我最喜欢的电影”的英语角活动，请你根据以下要点用英语写一篇演讲稿，分享你最喜欢的一部电影。
要点：
1. 喜欢的电影类型及原因；
2. 介绍最喜欢的一部电影及其主要内容；
3. 看电影的好处。
注意：1. 可在要点提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
2. 不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和学生的真实姓名；
3. 语句连贯，词数100左右。作文的标题和开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
满分范文：
My Favorite Movie
Dear friends, what kind of movies do you like I’m really into science fiction movies because they can take me to a world full of imagination and advanced technology.
My favorite one is “Interstellar”. In this movie, the Earth is facing a serious environmental crisis. A group of astronauts are sent on a mission to find a new habitable planet for humanity. They travel through a wormhole and experience various adventures in different galaxies. The special effects are extremely stunning, making the space scenes look so real.
Watching movies is a great way to relax. It broadens our horizons and enriches our knowledge. We can also learn different cultures and values from them. That’s why I love movies so much.
Thank you!
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿。
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
［写作步骤］
第一步，表明写作意图。开头以提问引出自己对电影类型的喜好，为下文介绍最喜欢的电影做铺垫。
第二步，具体阐述。先说明喜欢科幻电影的原因，再详细介绍《星际穿越》的故事背景、主要情节和特效，让听众了解电影内容，随后分析看电影的好处，阐述各好处的具体表现及意义。
第三步，书写结语。
［亮点词汇］
①science fiction movies 科幻电影
②imagination 想象力
③advanced technology 先进技术
④Interstellar《星际穿越》
⑤environmental crisis 环境危机
⑥astronaut 宇航员
⑦habitable planet 可居住星球
⑧wormhole 虫洞
⑨galaxy 星系
⑩stunning 令人惊叹的
［高分句型］
I’m really into science fiction movies because they can take me to a world full of imagination and advanced technology.（because引导原因状语从句）
7．研究表明音乐对人们的情绪有着重要的影响，因此人们用不同的音乐来调节心情。请根据下表提示内容，写一篇英语短文。
听音乐前的情绪状态 音乐类型 听音乐后的心境
压力大，过分焦虑 流行音乐 放松
沉迷电脑游戏，兴奋过度 乡村音乐 平静
困倦，疲劳 摇滚音乐 振奋
以自己为例：孤独，悲伤 …… ……
满分范文：
Research has shown that music has an important effect on one’s moods. So people use different kinds of music to change moods.
If you feel stressed and worry a lot, you can listen to pop music and you will feel relaxed. Some students are crazy about computer games and feel overexcited, so they can listen to country music and they will feel calm and peaceful. Some people feel tired and sleepy, so they can listen to rock music. After listening, they will feel excited. Sometimes I feel lonely and sad. I often listen to light music. It makes me feel happy again.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文。
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据提示材料分别写出听了不同音乐的情绪前后的对比。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出音乐的重要性。
第二步，具体阐述每一种音乐带来的不同感受。
[亮点词汇]
① has an important effect on sth对某事有重要的影响
② different kinds of各种各样的
③ be crazy about对……痴迷
[高分句型]
① If you feel stressed and worry a lot, you can listen to pop music and you will feel relaxed（if引导了条件状语从句）
② It makes me feel happy again（make sb do sth结构中省略to的动词不定式作宾补）
8．如今，青少年的娱乐方式与他们父母辈小时候的娱乐方式大有不同，某英文报观点专栏就此向全国中小学生征稿。请你写一篇英语短文投稿，简要描述图片内容，谈谈你的看法并提出建议，让青少年通过阅读这篇文章有所启发。
注意：（1）词数：110左右；
（2）开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等。
满分范文：
With the development of society, teenagers’ recreation has also changed.
From picture 1, we can see some children playing outside in the past. In picture 2, a boy is playing computer games. He’s surrounded by all kinds of electronics. In the past, children always had a good time, but now the teenagers always feel lonely.
Nowadays, with the development of technology, there are many after-school entertainment activities. We should choose some activities that are good for our health. We had better balance the time between exercising and playing on the computer.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据所给图片完成写作，给出自己的建议，注意语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题；
第二步，具体描述画面中的内容，并对比过去和现在的娱乐方式；
第三步，表达自己的看法和建议。
[亮点词汇]
①see sb doing sth看见某人正在做某事
②play computer games玩电脑游戏
③have a good time玩得开心
④had better最好
[高分句型]
①We should choose some activities that are good for our health.（that引导的定语从句）
9．学校举办了一次主题为“The Beauty of Art in My Heart”的英语演讲比赛，鼓励学生分享自己最喜欢的艺术形式，并说明喜欢的原因。你会选择哪一种艺术形式？请结合自己的兴趣，描述你喜欢的艺术形式，并说明理由。
以下艺术形式仅供参考：
● 视觉艺术 (visual Arts): 绘画(painting)、雕塑(sculpture)...
● 影视艺术 (film and TV arts): 电影(films)、电视节目(TV programmes)...
● 文学艺术 (literary arts): 侦探故事(detective stories)、小说(novels)...
注意：
1. 短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
满分范文：
My favorite form of art
Good morning, everyone! My favorite form of art is film. A film is a form that combines motion pictures, music and stories together.
I like music and reading so much, and films can make me enjoy them in a different way. First of all, films are like windows to different worlds, letting me experience a variety of emotions and cultures. Besides, each film is a unique journey, creating something truly magical for us. Furthermore, watching films is a good way to relax ourselves and can help to refresh us.
In short, film is really a beautiful form of art. Hope all of you can like it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏重要的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明自己最爱的艺术形式是哪种及该艺术形式的特点；
第二步，具体阐述喜欢该艺术形式的理由；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①in a different way以一种不同的方式
②first of all首先
③a variety of各种各样的
④in short总之
[高分句型]
①A film is a form that combines motion pictures, music and stories together. (that引导定语从句)
②Furthermore, watching films is a good way to relax ourselves and can help to refresh us.(动名词作主语)
10．书面表达
假如你叫李华，昨天晚上你看电影在回家途中目击了一起抢劫案(robbery)。请就以下信息，以李华的名义写一份给警方的书面材料，要求字数90左右。材料的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总字数。
案发时间 昨天晚上大约九点
案发地点 电影院附近的一条街道拐角处
作案人情况 两个男子，一个戴着墨镜的高个子，一个矮个子
受害人情况 一位年轻的女士，戴着一条金项链和一块金手表
案发经过 你正在街道上走着，突然听到身后有人呼救。你看到两个男子正抢劫(rob)一名女子。女子和他们进行了激烈的搏斗(have a fierce fight with...)。当你赶到时，两个劫匪(robber)已骑着他们自己的车逃跑。女子的金表被抢劫了，但幸运的是女子没有受伤。
满分范文：
Dear Sir / Madam,
I’m writing to report a robbery to you. It was at 9 p.m. Last night. The scene of the robbery was at the corner of a street near the cinema.
When the robbery happened, I was walking in the street. Suddenly I heard someone calling for help behind. I turned around and found two men were robbing a young woman. The woman put up a fierce fight with them. I ran up to them quickly, but when I got there, the robbers had been away on their own bikes, the woman’s gold watch had been robbed of, and she was lying on the ground. Luckily, she was not hurt.
The suspect were two men. One was tall with sunglasses, and the other was. I hope the information will help you catch the robbers.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下你看电影在回家途中目击的一起抢劫案。所提供的材料中列举了案发经过。
2.例文点评：主要从时间、地点、经过来描述：1）．时间：昨天晚上大约九点It was at 9 p.m. Last night.；2）．地点：电影院附近的一条街道拐角处；3）．经过：你正在街道上走着，I was walking in the street.突然听到身后有人呼救call for help，你看到两个男子正抢劫一名女子see(find) sb doing sth.,女子和他们进行了激烈的搏斗have a fierce fight with.，当你赶到时，两个劫匪已骑着他们自己的车逃跑run away/be away。女子的金表被抢劫了be robbed of，但幸运的（Luckily）是女子没有受伤。时态为一般过在时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须材料卡片上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密。
3. 高分亮点：
1）. When the robbery happened, I was walking in the street 当抢劫案发生时，我正在街上走着。句子 I was walking in the street是过去进行时态。
2）. when I got there, the robbers had been away on their own bikes，the woman’s gold watch had been robbed of. 当我赶到时，两个劫匪已骑着他们自己的车逃跑，女子的金表被抢劫了。从句为一般过去时态，主句用过去完成时态，表过去的过去。
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