2025年1月浙江首考读后续写 导学案（含答案）-2025届高三下学期英语复习专项
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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Kevin was pretty bored. His mother was at work, and his father had been away on business. Therefore, he was left in the care of Mrs. Hill, an old lady who lived next door. His parents had raised the 12-year-old to be a good boy. He never got into trouble, though sometimes he wanted to do risky things. Mrs. Hill was asleep. Kevin sighed (叹息) and hoped something exciting would happen. Suddenly, a movement outside caught his eye.
Mrs. Hill’s front window faced Mr. and Mrs. Green’s house across the street. The couple had both gone to work, so it was strange that someone was over there. Kevin stared at the man at their front door. Suddenly, the man jumped through an open window into the house. With his heart in his mouth, Kevin grabbed Mrs. Hill’s home phone and called the police.
Thinking that the man might get away with whatever he wanted before the police arrived, Kevin decided to do something. He rushed out of Mrs. Hill’s house and crossed the street quickly. Grabbing a branch from a cut-down tree, he jumped in through the window. “Stop right there! You must leave right now!” he called out, holding the branch with both hands.
The man froze for a second, but when he saw the skinny boy he breathed a sigh of relief. “Hey, kid, put that down. It was my home. My parents used to live here and my father’s watch was here,” he explained, trying to lift a floorboard.
（翻译划线句子：
）
At that moment, the sounds of a police car echoed (回响) in the air. The man stood up in a panic, then ran through the house toward the window and jumped out. Kevin followed out and told the arriving police officers what had happened. They pursued and arrested the man.
Kevin went back to Mrs. Hill’s house. Somehow he wasn’t sure he had done the right thing. “What if he has told the truth ” he thought to himself. The man’s words sounded pretty convincing.
Paragraph 1: When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home, Kevin went to talk to them.
Paragraph 2: Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station.
评分细节：
1.文章中人物关系复杂，若人物关系有错位，不能打高分，18分以下。
2.情节问题，把man写成小偷的不能上四档，15分以下。
3.第一段情节中把watch找出来要提到floorboard，与上文协同。
4.第一段没有在找watch+第二段the man是小偷，那基本二档，不超过11分。
分句构思：
第一段：When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home, Kevin went to talk to them.
（1）首句提示语，告诉我们Kevin准备去和Mr.和Mrs. Green谈谈发生的事情。你能想象Kevin的心情吗？他一定有些 吧，因为他要把所有事情都告诉他们，尤其是涉及到那个“陌生男人”。所以，接下来的句子应该是描述Kevin和他们沟通时的情感以及告知的具体内容，一句话简述即可，不宜过长。
（2）接下来会怎么发展呢？既然Kevin把一切告诉了他们，大家应该会有反应了。嗯，下一句应该是Mr.和Mrs. Green的 ，特别是他们听完Kevin的话之后。
（3）他们听完之后表达了感激。然后呢？既然那人提到了 和 ，他们一定都会心存疑问，那么他们下一步会做什么呢？肯定会 。
（4）而这一行动也正好验证了Kevin心里的 ，没错，接下来一定会发现 ，这时候就增加了悬念！读者会好奇，这块手表到底是谁的呢？Mr.和Mrs. Green会解释，东西 。
（5）听到这个消息后，Kevin的内心应该有一些变化，接下来的句子就可以自然地写出他的这种心理变化
。
第二段开头句：Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station.
来到警察局了，警察显然要 。这时，事情的真相也快揭晓了，接下来就应该说出真相了，是吧？
这里就揭示了真相， 。通过“checked out”确认了他的故事。
这时Kevin的 ，毕竟他一开始怀疑这个人，后来怀疑自己可能误解了他，最后自己确实误解了这个人。
但这个人的行为 。 这时候，警察应该会 ，即便这个人说的是事实，他的行为也 。
故事即将结束，故事的结尾可以是Kevin回顾这一切时的一些心理活动，前文提到了Kevin在这无聊的一天想要 和 ，他终于如愿以偿了。
翻译练习：
他把事情的经过说了一遍，从那个男人闯入到他声称父亲留下的手表，他的心在胸腔里怦怦直跳。
听了凯文的讲述后，格林夫妇表达了他们的感激之情。
然后他们冲向那块地板。当他们查看地板下面时，他们的眼睛睁大了，因为他们发现了一块手表 —— 但这不是他们的.
他的直觉一直都是对的，但他心中仍有疑虑。那个男人说的会是真话吗？
一到警察局，警察就把那个男人带出来审问。
很明显，他说的情况属实 —— 他的父母曾经住在格林家的房子里，那块手表确实是他父亲的。
尽管如此，警察还是警告了那个男人他的鲁莽行为。
随着案件结束，凯文不禁暗自笑了。
这一次，他做了一件令人兴奋的事 —— 也许还有点冒险 —— 但最终，这一切都是值得的。
就像他所希望的那样，发生了一件激动人心的事。
Keys：
When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home, Kevin went to talk to them. His heart pounded in his chest as he relayed（v. 转达；n.接力赛） what had happened, from the man breaking in to his claims(n.声称) about the watch left behind by his father. After listening to Kevin, Mr. and Mrs. Green expressed their gratitude. And then they rushed to the floorboard. The moment they checked under the floorboard, their eyes widened as they found a watch—yet it wasn’t theirs. His gut feeling（直觉） had been right all along, but doubt lingered in his mind. Could the man truly be telling the truth
Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station. Once at the station, the police officer brought out the man for questioning（提问；询问；盘问）. It became clear that his story checked out（查证属实；证明是对的）—his parents had once lived in the Green’s house, and the watch was indeed his father’s. Still, the police warned the man about his reckless（鲁莽的） behavior. As the case came to a close, Kevin couldn't help but smile to himself. For once, he had done something exciting—and maybe a little risky—but in the end, it had been worth it. Just like he had hoped, something thrilling had happened.
语料加餐——：
以下句子通过精确的心理描写和情感波动展现了Kevin在面对复杂情境时的内心世界。
As Kevin spoke, his words seemed to weigh heavily on him. 当Kevin说话时，他的话语似乎让他感到沉重。
As they checked under the floorboard and found the watch, Kevin’s stomach sank.
当他们检查地板下并发现手表时，Kevin的心情沉了下去。
His heart fluttered nervously in his chest as he waited for their judgment.
当他等待他们的判断时，心脏在胸中紧张地跳动。
He had acted on impulse, not knowing how things would turn out.他是凭冲动行动的，不知道事情会如何发展。
5. Kevin followed closely, his mind filled with uncertainty. Kevin紧跟其后，内心充满了不确定。
6. As they returned to their house, he trailed behind them, his mind racing with questions.当他们回到家时，Kevin跟在他们身后，脑海中充满了疑问。
7. When they found the watch under the floorboard, Kevin felt a knot tighten in his stomach.当他们在地板下发现手表时，Kevin感到肚子里一阵紧绷。
8. Kevin felt a mix of relief and confusion. Kevin感到一股释然与困惑交织在一起。
10. Kevin felt a wave of uncertainty wash over him.Kevin感到一阵不确定的情绪涌上心头。
Kevin was pretty bored. His mother was at work, and his father had been away on business. Therefore, he was left in the care of Mrs. Hill, an old lady who lived next door. His parents had raised the 12-year-old to be a good boy. He never got into trouble, though sometimes he wanted to do risky things. Mrs. Hill was asleep. Kevin sighed (叹息) and hoped something exciting would happen. Suddenly, a movement outside caught his eye.
Mrs. Hill’s front window faced Mr. and Mrs. Green’s house across the street. The couple had both gone to work, so it was strange that someone was over there. Kevin stared at the man at their front door. Suddenly, the man jumped through an open window into the house. With his heart in his mouth, Kevin grabbed Mrs. Hill’s home phone and called the police.
Thinking that the man might get away with whatever he wanted before the police arrived, Kevin decided to do something. He rushed out of Mrs. Hill’s house and crossed the street quickly. Grabbing a branch from a cut-down tree, he jumped in through the window. “Stop right there! You must leave right now!” he called out, holding the branch with both hands.
The man froze for a second, but when he saw the skinny boy he breathed a sigh of relief. “Hey, kid, put that down. It was my home. My parents used to live here and my father’s watch was here,” he explained, trying to lift a floorboard.
（翻译划线句子：
）
At that moment, the sounds of a police car echoed (回响) in the air. The man stood up in a panic, then ran through the house toward the window and jumped out. Kevin followed out and told the arriving police officers what had happened. They pursued and arrested the man.
Kevin went back to Mrs. Hill’s house. Somehow he wasn’t sure he had done the right thing. “What if he has told the truth ” he thought to himself. The man’s words sounded pretty convincing.
Paragraph 1: When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home, Kevin went to talk to them.
Paragraph 2: Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station.
评分细节：
1.文章中人物关系复杂，若人物关系有错位，不能打高分，18分以下。
2.情节问题，把man写成小偷的不能上四档，15分以下。
3.第一段情节中把watch找出来要提到floorboard，与上文协同。
4.第一段没有在找watch+第二段the man是小偷，那基本二档，不超过11分。
分句构思：
第一段：When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home, Kevin went to talk to them.
（1）首句提示语，告诉我们Kevin准备去和Mr.和Mrs. Green谈谈发生的事情。你能想象Kevin的心情吗？他一定有些 吧，因为他要把所有事情都告诉他们，尤其是涉及到那个“陌生男人”。所以，接下来的句子应该是描述Kevin和他们沟通时的情感以及告知的具体内容，一句话简述即可，不宜过长。
（2）接下来会怎么发展呢？既然Kevin把一切告诉了他们，大家应该会有反应了。嗯，下一句应该是Mr.和Mrs. Green的 ，特别是他们听完Kevin的话之后。
（3）他们听完之后表达了感激。然后呢？既然那人提到了 和 ，他们一定都会心存疑问，那么他们下一步会做什么呢？肯定会 。
（4）而这一行动也正好验证了Kevin心里的 ，没错，接下来一定会发现 ，这时候就增加了悬念！读者会好奇，这块手表到底是谁的呢？Mr.和Mrs. Green会解释，东西 。
（5）听到这个消息后，Kevin的内心应该有一些变化，接下来的句子就可以自然地写出他的这种心理变化
。
第二段开头句：Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station.
来到警察局了，警察显然要 。这时，事情的真相也快揭晓了，接下来就应该说出真相了，是吧？
这里就揭示了真相， 。通过“checked out”确认了他的故事。
这时Kevin的 ，毕竟他一开始怀疑这个人，后来怀疑自己可能误解了他，最后自己确实误解了这个人。
但这个人的行为 。 这时候，警察应该会 ，即便这个人说的是事实，他的行为也 。
故事即将结束，故事的结尾可以是Kevin回顾这一切时的一些心理活动，前文提到了Kevin在这无聊的一天想要 和 ，他终于如愿以偿了。
翻译练习：
他把事情的经过说了一遍，从那个男人闯入到他声称父亲留下的手表，他的心在胸腔里怦怦直跳。
听了凯文的讲述后，格林夫妇表达了他们的感激之情。
然后他们冲向那块地板。当他们查看地板下面时，他们的眼睛睁大了，因为他们发现了一块手表 —— 但这不是他们的.
他的直觉一直都是对的，但他心中仍有疑虑。那个男人说的会是真话吗？
一到警察局，警察就把那个男人带出来审问。
很明显，他说的情况属实 —— 他的父母曾经住在格林家的房子里，那块手表确实是他父亲的。
尽管如此，警察还是警告了那个男人他的鲁莽行为。
随着案件结束，凯文不禁暗自笑了。
这一次，他做了一件令人兴奋的事 —— 也许还有点冒险 —— 但最终，这一切都是值得的。
就像他所希望的那样，发生了一件激动人心的事。
Keys：
When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home, Kevin went to talk to them. His heart pounded in his chest as he relayed（v. 转达；n.接力赛） what had happened, from the man breaking in to his claims(n.声称) about the watch left behind by his father. After listening to Kevin, Mr. and Mrs. Green expressed their gratitude. And then they rushed to the floorboard. The moment they checked under the floorboard, their eyes widened as they found a watch—yet it wasn’t theirs. His gut feeling（直觉） had been right all along, but doubt lingered in his mind. Could the man truly be telling the truth
Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station. Once at the station, the police officer brought out the man for questioning（提问；询问；盘问）. It became clear that his story checked out（查证属实；证明是对的）—his parents had once lived in the Green’s house, and the watch was indeed his father’s. Still, the police warned the man about his reckless（鲁莽的） behavior. As the case came to a close, Kevin couldn't help but smile to himself. For once, he had done something exciting—and maybe a little risky—but in the end, it had been worth it. Just like he had hoped, something thrilling had happened.
语料加餐——：
以下句子通过精确的心理描写和情感波动展现了Kevin在面对复杂情境时的内心世界。
As Kevin spoke, his words seemed to weigh heavily on him. 当Kevin说话时，他的话语似乎让他感到沉重。
As they checked under the floorboard and found the watch, Kevin’s stomach sank.
当他们检查地板下并发现手表时，Kevin的心情沉了下去。
His heart fluttered nervously in his chest as he waited for their judgment.
当他等待他们的判断时，心脏在胸中紧张地跳动。
He had acted on impulse, not knowing how things would turn out.他是凭冲动行动的，不知道事情会如何发展。
5. Kevin followed closely, his mind filled with uncertainty. Kevin紧跟其后，内心充满了不确定。
6. As they returned to their house, he trailed behind them, his mind racing with questions.当他们回到家时，Kevin跟在他们身后，脑海中充满了疑问。
7. When they found the watch under the floorboard, Kevin felt a knot tighten in his stomach.当他们在地板下发现手表时，Kevin感到肚子里一阵紧绷。
8. Kevin felt a mix of relief and confusion. Kevin感到一股释然与困惑交织在一起。
10. Kevin felt a wave of uncertainty wash over him.Kevin感到一阵不确定的情绪涌上心头。