专题二 短文类
01 投稿
Writing 1 (2021年天津第一次)
假设你是晨光中学的李津。我市为外国友人提供生活信息的某英文网站新增了 《最美中华》栏目,请你给该栏目投稿,介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。内容包括:
(1)该地方的基本情况(如名称、地理位置等);
(2)该地方的特色(如文化、景点等);
(3)你对该地方的印象和感受。
注意:(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
A Beautiful Place in China
March 19, 2021
By Li Jin
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Writing 2 (2019年天津第一次)
假设你是晨光中学的李津。为配合学校的“读书月”活动,你校英语社团的微信公众号开展以“Let’s Read”为题的征文活动。要求同学们根据个人的阅读体会,从所读过的书籍中选定一种类型,推荐给其他同学。现请你投稿,文章内容应包括:
(1)推荐书籍的类型及特点;
(2)推荐的理由。
参考词汇:
科幻小说 science fiction 侦探小说 detective novel 魔幻小说 fantasy
传记文学 biography 科普读物 popular science
注意:
(1)词数不少于 100;
(2)所选书籍类型不限于参考词汇给出的范围;
(3)内容充实、行文连贯;
(4)题目已给出,不计入总词数。
March 22, 2019
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By Li Jin
一、考点综述
投稿属于短文类写作,演讲稿、通知、宣传稿、新闻报道、倡议书、日记、约稿等都属于短文类写作。 投稿,通常会有特定的主题,写一篇相关话题的小短文即可,小短文以记叙文或者议论文为主。要求学生掌握相关的词汇、能够描述相关的事件,表达自己的感情或就相关话题表达自己的观点。
二、典例示范
【例1】
你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 读报的经历;2. 喜爱的栏目;3. 期望和祝福。
注意:1. 写作词数应为100左右;
2. 请按如下格式写字答题卡的相应位置作答。
Youth and Me ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
1. 写作步骤
对于“参赛”和“征文”的英语作文,常以记叙文为主。分为写人和叙事两种。写作步骤如下:
1.认真审题,提炼主题
认真分析标题或材料所提供的信息,确定主题。注意标题的含义很多,建议写自己最擅长和熟悉的人和事。
2.联系生活,确定要点
以主题为纲,进一步思考其内涵和外延,联系自己的学习、生活实际,确定写作的要点。高考英语书面表达试题凸显时代性,学生要多关注社会生活实际。
3.细化要点,布局谋篇
细化要点,使文章更丰满。可以采用三段式的写作模式来行文。最好拟个提纲,以明确主次,切忌心中无数、边想边写。
4.斟词酌句,组句成篇
选择适当的词语或结构将要点表达出来,选择适当的句型和适当的过渡语组句成文。尽量使用不同的单词、短语和语法结构,使表达多样化。
3. 段落结构
第一段:引出话题,点明主题。→主题呈现
第二段:叙述具体情况,列出层次一二三。→事件描述
第三段:总结(表达感谢,祝福与祝愿),升华意义。 →呼应主题
高分范文
Youth and Me
(引出话题,点明主题)On occasion of the 10th Anniversary of Youth, I, as a devoted reader, would like to express my sincere congratulations to you with great excitement.
(叙述具体情况,列出层次)Youth has accompanied me for three years during my high school. It involves all topics that senior students are interested in and leads us to feel the wonderful outside world. As a loyal reader of Youth I am always absorbed in columns on teenagers from which I can get inspiring stories and gain much pleasure from exciting news.
(总结:表达感谢,祝福与祝愿,升华意义)I sincerely hope that Youth can make greater progress and attract more readers to share their stories.
Youth and Me
(引出话题,点明主题)Since I entered senior high school, Youth has kept me company. Whenever I have time, I take Youth and immerse(使沉浸于) myself in it. It brings me so much joy and helps me pull through my darkest days.
(叙述具体情况,列出层次)Of her ten columns, Foreign Culture is my favorite. The column exposes me to different cultures, which not only broadens my horizons but also makes me feel relaxed.
(总结:表达感谢,祝福与祝愿,升华意义)I sincerely hope Youth will achieve greater success and enjoy more popularity.
【例2】
最近,你校英语报开设了“ Extra-curricular Activities”的栏目,请你根据以下提示,为该栏目写一篇英文稿件,介绍相关情况。(100词左右)
1.介绍你校课外活动的情况;2.介绍你的参与情况;3.为学校开展课外活动提出建议。
Extra-curricular Activities
Nowadays, extra-curricular activities are becoming increasingly popular in high schools, which greatly add color to our life.
A variety of extra-curricular activities, such as martial arts and Chinese calligraphy, are being held in our school, among which ping-pong program is my cup of tea. Through this activity, not only have I made some new friends but also I have become more confident and have improved my health.
I highly recommend that our school should organize more worthwhile activities for students and leave students more time for activities by giving them less homework.
【例3】
某英文报社举办以“I Like Reading”为主题的征文活动,你打算投稿。请根据以下要点写一篇短文:
1.你为什么喜欢读书;
2.你喜欢读哪一类的书(例如:历史、科学、文学等)?请给出至少两个理由。
注意:词数100左右。
I Like Reading
Reading is my favorite hobby. I can never stop the love for reading because books are like wise teachers as well as good friends in my life. As all we know, books are the source of knowledge. I benefit a great deal from reading.
There are a variety of books for us to choose from, like/such as history books, science books, literary books and so on. But what interests me most is literary books, especially those written by famous writers. For one thing, they help to improve my writing skills and broaden my horizons. For another, they can enrich my life and provide me with great fun. What’s more, some literary works can give us new perspectives to look at the world around us.
Isn’t it a pleasure to have great calm in mind while you are reading Enjoy your reading!
三、真题演练
Writing 1 (2019年天津第一次)
假设你是晨光中学的李津。为配合学校的“读书月”活动,你校英语社团的微信公众号开展以“Let’s Read”为题的征文活动。要求同学们根据个人的阅读体会,从所读过的书籍中选定一种类型,推荐给其他同学。现请你投稿,文章内容应包括:
(1)推荐书籍的类型及特点;
(2)推荐的理由。
参考词汇:
科幻小说 science fiction 侦探小说 detective novel 魔幻小说 fantasy
传记文学 biography 科普读物 popular science
注意:
(1)词数不少于 100;
(2)所选书籍类型不限于参考词汇给出的范围;
(3)内容充实、行文连贯;
(4)题目已给出,不计入总词数。
March 22, 2019
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By Li Jin
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一篇英语征文。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,本篇为一篇英语征文;假设你是晨光中学的李津。为配合学校的“读书月”活动,你校英语社团的微信公众号开展以“Let’s Read”为题的征文活动。要求同学们根据个人的阅读体会,从所读过的书籍中选定一种类型,推荐给其他同学。现请你投稿,文章内容应包括:(1)推荐书籍的类型及特点;(2)推荐的理由。人称应使用第一、三人称,时态应为一般现在时。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如:introduce/recommend a book to you(给你推荐一本书),belong to(属于),author(作者)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【范文】
March 22, 2019
Today I'd like to introduce a book to you which I like much——The Five Thousand Years History, which belongs to history books.
The author selects important and famous figures and events in the history of China, which he organizes and cuts them according to historical materials(素材), and writes in modern language to make them easy to understand. This book opens a history gate to me and I feel more confident about my own country. I am proud that I am a Chinese and I will make more efforts to build a more powerful country and let Chinese history be more brilliant.
I think everyone should read it and get this wonderful experience. I do hope you'll like it! Enjoy reading!
By Li Jin
Writing 2 (2021年天津第一次)
假设你是晨光中学的李津。我市为外国友人提供生活信息的某英文网站新增了 《最美中华》栏目,请你给该栏目投稿,介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。内容包括:
(1)该地方的基本情况(如名称、地理位置等);
(2)该地方的特色(如文化、景点等);
(3)你对该地方的印象和感受。
注意:(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
A Beautiful Place in China
March 19, 2021
By Li Jin
【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文,要求给英文网站《最美中华》栏目投稿,介绍介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:说明文
时态: 一般现在时
结构:总分法
第一段是文章的总起段,说明四川省有很多著名的景点;第二段介绍景点九寨沟和都江堰灌溉工程,第三部分说明你对该地方的印象和感受。
要求:
1. 说明四川省有很多著名的景点
①四川的地理位置:中国西南部
②著名景点:九寨沟、都江堰灌溉工程
2. 介绍景点九寨沟和都江堰灌溉工程
① 九寨沟是自然保护区
②给人印象最深的层层叠叠的瀑布和五颜六色的湖泊,有很多珍稀动植物
③都江堰灌溉工程始于2000多年前,现在仍然起着灌溉的作用
3. 你对该地方的印象和感受:九寨沟的美景和都江堰灌溉工程的建造会让你惊叹
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
be located in;is situated by; world-famous;places of interest;a nature reserve ;impressive;multi-level waterfalls;have a chance to do…;rare animals;scenic spot;date from;play an important part in;be amazed by
第三步:连词成句
(1) Sichuan Province is located in southwestern part of China.
(2) It enjoys many world-famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation project.
(3)Jiuzhaigou National Park is a nature reserve in the north of Sichuan Province.
(4) What is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes.
(5) Walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals such as giant pandas, golden monkeys.
(6) There are many species of rare plants protected here.
(7) Another famous scenic spot is Dujiangyan Irrigation Project.
(8) It dates from over 2,000 years ago.
(9) It is still playing an important part in irrigation today.
(10) I’m sure the visitors will be amazed by its construction.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇
1.表递进关系:what is more
2.表转折关系:however
3.表示列举:such as, like
A Beautiful Place in China
March 19, 2021
By Li Jin
Sichuan Province is located in southwestern part of China. It enjoys many world-famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation project.
Jiuzhaigou National Park is a nature reserve in the north of Sichuan Province. What is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes. What’s more , walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals like giant pandas, golden monkeys. There are also many species of rare plants protected here. Another famous scenic spot is Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. It dates from over 2,000 years ago. However, it is still playing an important part in irrigation today.
I’m sure the visitors will be amazed by the beautiful scenery in Jiazhaigou as well as the construction Dujiangyan Irrigation Project.
A Beautiful Place in China
March 19, 2021
By Li Jin
The Place I like best is Yangliuqing Ancient Town, which is situated by the Grand Canal in Xiqing District, Tianjin.
I like the place not only because it is my hometown where I was born and brought up, but also because it has the famous New Year Pictures, representing the local culture and well-known both at home and abroad. Besides, the Shi Family Mansion, the largest of its kind in North China with its typically beautiful brick carvings(雕刻品), has attracted large numbers of tourists each year.
I am proud of being a citizen of Yangliuqing and I firmly believe that my hometown will become more impressive with the development of the Grand Canal Economy.