应用文:现象评议类
你校英文报调查发现学生的注意力水平整体呈下降趋势。因此,将于下周举办一场以“How to improve concentration”为主题的英文演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿,内容包括: 1.影响注意力的因素;2.提高注意力的方法。
How to improve concentration
Good morning, everyone.________________________________
Thank you for your attention!
第一段 写作背景 写作目的---
第二段 分析原因 解决办法---
原因:接触数码设备 繁重的作业 缺乏锻炼
办法:远离数码设备 牢记学业重要性 休息
第三段 重申 祝福------------
优化注意力 提升学业
第一段 写作背景 写作目的
根据我校英语报开展的一项调查,当今学生的专注一直在下降,这引起了广泛的关注。我很荣幸能在这里就这一问题发表演讲。
According to a survey conducted by our school English newspaper, the concentration of today’s students has been on decline, which arouses much concern. I feel honored to deliver a speech concerning the problem here.
第二段 分析原因 提出解决办法 总-分
许多因素导致/可以解释这个现象,包括经常接触数码设备,繁重的学校作业以及缺乏足够的锻炼,这可能会分散注意力,削弱我们集中注意的能力。
Many factors contribute to/can account for the phenomenon, including constant exposure to digital devices, heavy schoolwork as well as a shortage of enough exercise, which may cause distraction and weaken our ability to focus.
为了改善这种情况,我们应该牢记专注学业的重要性,并在工作日远离数字设备,以尽量减少其负面影响。此外,在长时间学习时定期休息是有益的,让大脑休息和充电。
To improve the situation, we should bear in mind the importance of focusing on our studies, and keep away from digital devices at weekdays to minimize their negative influence. Besides, it is beneficial to take regular breaks during long periods of studying, allowing the brain to rest and recharge.
第三段 重申 祝福
希望我们所有人都能优化我们的注意力,把我们的学习成绩更上一层楼。感谢你们的关注!
Hopefully, all of us can optimize our concentration and advance our academic performance to the next level. Thank you for your attention!
你将参加英语课上的“一分钟演讲”活动。请你针对部分同学在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象写一篇演讲稿,内容包括:(1) 陈述看法; (2) 提出建议。
审题
演讲目的---引出话题(并简要评论)
看法-------该现象的正面和负面影响,并提出建议
正: 记录美好时刻;表达自我
负:侵犯隐私;打扰学习环境----- so征求许可;保持安静
重申(再次扣题),祝福
提纲:
Good morning everyone!
Today, I’d like to discuss the growing trend of ____________________
____________________. While this activity can be___________________, it also _________________________.
On the positive side, short videos help us ___________________________
_______________________________. However, __________________________________, and __________________________________________. To address these issues, I advocate __________________________________________________________________
______________________. Plus, ________________________________________________
__________________________.
In conclusion, when_________________________, let’s ___________________
_____________________, thus_____________________________________. Thank you for your attention!
范文及译文
Good morning everyone! Today, I’d like to discuss the growing trend of filming short videos on campus. While this activity can be fun and creative, it also encounters some criticism. On the positive side, short videos help us record memorable moments and express ourselves creatively. However, filming without permission may invade others’ privacy, and noisy recordings can disturb peaceful learning environment. To address these issues, I advocate every producer ask for consent/permission before filming others to respect their privacy. Plus, keep quiet in study areas to minimize the negative influence. In conclusion, when shooting short videos, let’s be mindful of how our behavior may affect others, thus making our campus a better place for everyone. Thank you! 今天,我想讨论一下在校园里拍摄视频短片这种不断增长的趋势。虽然这个活动可能有趣,有创造性,但它也遭遇了一些批评。 从积极的方面来看,短片可以帮助我们记录难忘的时刻,创造性地表达自己。然而,未经许可的拍摄可能会侵犯他人的隐私,吵闹的录制可能会干扰宁静的学习环境。为解决这些问题,我提倡每位制作者在拍摄其他人前都要征求同意/许可,以尊重他们的隐私。另外,在学习区域保持安静,以最小化其负面影响。 总之,在拍摄短视频时,让我们要注意我们的行为可能会如何影响他人,从而使我们的校园成为一个更好的地方。谢谢你!
(2025广州零模)假定你是李华。外教Ryan打算使用AI技术辅助英文作文批改,并向同学们征询意见,请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括:1.你的看法;2.你的建议。
审题
演讲目的---引出话题
看法-------该现象的正面和负面影响,并提出建议
正: 高效,即刻,
负:缺乏创造力和情感表达
重申(再次扣题),祝福
Dear Ryan, I’m excited about your plan to use AI for essay grading! AI can enhance efficiency by catching grammar and spelling errors and offering suggestions instantly, which helps students revise and polish their work independently. However, AI might overlook values like creativity or cultural context, which human instructors excel at. To optimize this, I suggest combining AI with personalized teacher reviews, which will make the grading process more balanced and personalized. Thank you for valuing our opinions! Looking forward to your innovative approach and hoping this new technology will benefit our learning experience. Dear Ryan, 我对你计划使用AI进行论文评分感到很激动! 人工智能可以通过发现语法和拼写错误并立即提供建议来提高效率,从而帮助学生独立地修改和完善他们的功课。然而,人工智能可能会忽视人类导师所擅长的创造力或文化背景等有价值之处。 为了优化,我建议将人工智能与个性化的教师评论相结合,这将使评分过程更加平衡和个性化。 感谢您重视我们的意见!期待您的创新方法,并希望这项新技术将有利于我们的学习经验。