(共26张PPT)
Unit 4 Sharing
Using language:
Make a speech about China’s aid to other countries
Learning Objectives
By the end of the class, you will be able to
share the story about China offering aid to other countries;
grasp the structure and language features of a speech;
write a good speech and revise it with the help of the checklist.
Do you know what kind of aids China offers to other countries
China has offered COVID-19 vaccines to 153 countries, Laos included.
China offers to build wells for drought-hit countries, such as Ghana.
China helps Africans to build railways.
Lead-in
1. Predict the content of this passage.
A speech about China’s aid to other countries.
2. What might be included in this speech
Achievements, personal opinions…
Reading for content
What are some examples of the work that Chinese people do to help others overseas
Why was Bingbing upset when her mother went to Tanzania
What are some of the problems people face in Tanzania
What are two things that Bingbing's mother is helping with
Why is this work worth it
What are some examples of the work that Chinese people do to help others overseas
They have built roads in the Congo, a port in Pakistan, railways in Panama, an airport in Sri Lanka. Chinese miners, oil workers, agricultural experts, mechanics, and doctors work in nearly every corner of the world.
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2. Why was Bingbing upset when her mother went to Tanzania
Because her mother cooked her dinner every night and took good care of her. But more importantly, she was her best friend.
What are some of the problems people face in Tanzania
The country has many health problems, and many of the people are quite poor and live without things we take for granted.
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What are two things that Bingbing's mother is helping with
She helped build a cardiac hospital and she goes to rural villages to provide medical treatment, help those with disabilities, and provide consultation and training for local doctors.
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5. Why is this work worth it
It is worth it to the lives of the people she is helping. But by any criteria this work is worth it to us as well, because it shows that we are global citizens interested in world stability, and that we feel responsible for others and are ready to build a community with a shared future for mankind.
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Reading for structure
1. What is the key rhetorical question used in this speech
2. What is the answer to this rhetorical question
3. What does the speaker use to get her message across
a case study
a joke
an analysis of the history
and causes of the issue
4. How did Bingbing’s feelings about the topic change, and what caused this change
5. How does the speech end
a hypothetical example
a personal story
facts and data
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Reading for structure
1. What is the key rhetorical question used in this speech
2. What is the answer to this rhetorical question
3. What does the speaker use to get her message across
a case study
a joke
an analysis of the history
and causes of the issue
4. How did Bingbing’s feelings about the topic change, and what caused this change
5. How does the speech end
a hypothetical example
a personal story
facts and data
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What is the key rhetorical question used in this speech
Is it worth it
2. What is the answer to this rhetorical question
Yes, to the lives of the people she is helping, it is worth it. But by any criteria this work is worth it to us as well, because it shows that we are global citizens interested in world stability, and that we feel responsible for others and are ready to build a community with a shared future for mankind.
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3. What does the speaker use to get her message across
a case study
a joke
an analysis of the history
and causes of the issue
a hypothetical example
a personal story
facts and data
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4. How did Bingbing’s feelings about the topic change, and what caused this change
She was unhappy that her mother had left, but then her feelings changed when she began to see how great help her mother was bringing, and now she is proud of her mother’s work.
5. How does the speech end
The speech ends with an appeal to the audience to consider becoming volunteers.
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Rhetorical question
Answer to the question
Ending
The structure of the speech
Topic of the speech
Content of the speech
Theme of the speech
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personal story
turning point
appeal
Structure of the speech Language feature Way of writing Function
Rhetorical question
Answer to the question
Ending
Read the text part by part and complete the chart.
Reading for language
Description of a familiar phenomenon followed by a question.
To attract attention of the audience to the topic.
Discussion: Are there other rhetorical questions to start a speech
Description of a familiar phenomenon
Rhetorical question(s)
Is it worth it
Why help …
What if…
Does it really matter…
other rhetorical questions to start a speech
1.You don't expect me to go along with that crazy scheme, do you
(To engage the audience and to personalize the question.)
2. Why is the Belt and Road beneficial to the promotion of economy
(To raise a question.)
3. The amount of plastic in the ocean is rising at a considerable rate. How many efforts will it take you to help reduce this
(To emphasize a statement and to evoke emotions.)
4. “O Wind| If Winter comes, can Spring be far behind ”
(To cite a famous poem.)
5. Remember how things used to be 10 years ago
(To raise interests by making comparison.)
Telling a personal story:personal connection
Using examples
Citing data
Using citations
To make the speech convincing, informative, and inspiring
I had the same question myself.
But for me…
You see, …
To be honest,…
But then I began to hear about…
Turning point
Personal connection
Examples of achievements
Expressing personal reflection or attitude
Sharing future plans
Appeal
Quotes
To reiterate the theme
Today, I want to relay to you that…
By any criteria this work is worth it to us all, because…
Now that I understand…
In the future, I pray that…
Personal reflection
Appeal
Rhetorical question
Answer to the question
Ending
The structure of the speech
Topic of the speech
Content of the speech
Theme of the speech
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Description of a familiar phenomenon
Rhetorical question(s)
Turning point
Personal connection
Examples of achievement
Personal reflection
Appeal
Role (Who are you ) Audience (Who are you talking to ) Format (What's the style of your passage ) Topic
(What are you focusing on )
A student
Your classmates and teachers
A speech
China’s aid
Fill the chart (RAFT) and decide what you’re going to write.
Writing
China has offered COVID-19 vaccines to 153 countries, Laos included.
China offers to build wells for drought-hit countries, such as Ghana.
China helps Africans to build railways.
Rhetorical question Description of a familiar phenomenon
Rhetorical question(s)
Answer to the question Personal connection
Turning point
Examples of achievement
Ending Personal reflection
Appeal
Draw an outline based on the structure of the speech.
□1. Is the topic China aiding other countries
□ 2. Does the writer use proper rhetorical questions
□ 3. Are all parts of a good speech included
□ 4. Are those parts coherent
□ 5. Are there any grammar or spelling errors
□ 6. Is the handwriting easy to read
Draft your speech with the help of the outline you’ve drawn.
Use the checklist to give feedback on this draft.
every day
until
At first
Then
Appeal
Since water is scarce,even though the water is harmful,people go ahead and drink the water, which makes them sick.
to
Draft your speech with the help of the outline you’ve drawn.
Use the checklist to give feed back on this draft.
□1. Is the topic China aiding other countries
□ 2. Does the writer use proper rhetorical questions
□ 3. Are all parts of a good speech included
□ 4. Are those parts coherent
□ 5. Are there any grammar or spelling errors
□ 6. Is the handwriting easy to read