2025年鲁教版（五四制）九年级中考英语一轮复习 第三部分话题写作学历案模板 话题健康与安全
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健康与安全写作指导
一．学习目标：
1.基于写作目的、文体和要求，分析范文结构，列出如何保持健康与安全的内容要点；
2.确定描述保持健康与安全的重要性，如何保持健康与安全，呼吁大家保持健康与安全的句式结构；
3.发现范文中作者用于描述保持健康与安全的重要性，如何保持健康与安全，呼吁大家保持健康与安全的生动表达方式和句型，将其应用于自己的写作中；
4.通过自评和互评，改进初稿的结构、内容和语言。
二．学习方法指导:
1.作文要有清晰地开头和结尾
2.作文中间段逻辑清晰，明确的连接词
3.作文中要运用恰当的句型和丰富的词语
三．写作要求：
新冠疫情提醒人们更加重视健康，越来越多的人通过运动来保持健康，但是运动安全也不容小觑。请你用英语写一篇100词左右的短文，给校报的英语栏目English Corner投稿，号召同学们重视运动安全。
要点提示:1.介绍运动安全(现状、重要性……);2.给出运动安全的建议(着裝、热身、规则……)3.表达号召。
要求:1.书写规范,表达连贯,可根据内容适当发挥;2.文中不得出现真实的区县、学校及姓名;3.开头已给出,不计人总词数。
COVID-19 has taught us to pay more attention to our health.
四．教学过程：
Task1思路点拨
1. 体裁:应用文2. 人称:第一人称和第三人称为主 3. 时态:一般现在时
Task2写作导图:
Task3 学以致用(说明：归纳总结每一段相关的好句型)
Para 1. 开篇点题，运动安全的现状及重要性
1.COVID-19 has taught us to pay more attention to our health.
2.Now more and more people do sports to keep healthy.
3. However ，some students get hurt while doing sports.
4.Pay attention to sports safety, and some accidents will be prevented. （试着用if引导的条件状语从句来升格此句）
Para 2. 给出安全运动的建议
1.What can we do to keep safe in doing sports Here are some suggestions.
2. Firstly，we should wear sports clothes and shoes. We shouldn't wear jeans.（试着用had better升格此句）
3. Secondly, we must take warming-up exercise before doing sports.
4.Lastly, following the rules is also necessary. Listen to the teacher carefully and follow the rules in P.E. class. （试着用when|导的时间状语从句升格此句）If we get hurt, we must tell our teachers or call 120 for help in time.
Para 3. 号召大家重视运动安全
1.In a word，sports safety is very important.
2.Be sure to keep safe in doing sports.
范文：
COVID-19 has taught us to pay more attention to our health. Now more and more people do sports to keep healthy. However ，some students get hurt while doing sports. Pay attention to sports safety, and some accidents will be prevented.
What can we do to keep safe in doing sports Here are some suggestions. Firstly，we should wear sports clothes and shoes. We shouldn't wear jeans. Secondly, we must take warming-up exercise before doing sports. Lastly, following the rules is also necessary. Listen to the teacher carefully and follow the rules in P.E. class. If we get hurt, we must tell our teachers or call 120 for help in time.
In a word，sports safety is very important. Be sure to keep safe in doing sports.
Task4 Homework:写作小练笔
公众健康日（7月7日），旨在倡导“全民健康,快乐为本”的理念。随着生活水平的提高,健康越来越受到重视。你班准备组织一个以“健康”为主题的演讲活动，请你根据以下要点提示,准备一篇题为“How to live a healthy and happy life”,100词左右的英语演讲稿。
提示:1.身休健康;2.心理健康:3.对未来的希望。
注意:1.书写规范、表达连贯,可根据内容适当发挥;2.文中不得出现真实的区县、学校及姓名。
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
自评量表（说明：结合自己的写作话题，根据每一段的写作内容，制作切实可行的问题）
问题 是 否 如果为“否”,如何改进
你在短文的第一段是否点明了健康的重要性，并为第二段作铺垫？
你在短文第二段是否介绍了如何保持健康（至少三点）？
你在短文的最后一段是否升华主题，倡导大家保持健康？
你在短文各段中是否提供了重要和充足的细节支撑？
你的短文是否使用了恰当的句型和丰富的词汇？
你的短文在拼写、语法和标点方面是否都正确？
【学后反思】
Future Focus （今后 焦点） This assessment suggests that I should focus on:(这个评价提醒我应该注意：）
I could do this by:（我可以通过...做到这些）
范文
How to live a healthy and happy life
Hi, my dear classmates,
With the improvement of living conditions, we are paying more and more attention to our health, which includes both physical and mental health. Then how can we students live a healthy and happy life
Firstly, we should keep our body healthy. Not only do we need to eat healthy food, but we also need to exercise in a proper way every day. For example, we can run for 30 minutes every morning or play sports after school. Meanwhile, we still need enough sleep every day.
Secondly, mental health is also very important. We need to love our life and try to be active. We need to get along well with others as well. When we ' re sad, we can communicate with our parents, teachers and friends frankly .
In a word, I hope everyone can have a healthy body and mind, and only in this way can we live a healthy and happy life.
That ' s all. Thank you!
Task5作文拓展（说明：找出与话题相关的三到四篇作文）
Text1
近年来学生安全事故频发，如交通安全事故、火灾事故、校园霸凌、溺水事故、食物中毒等，它们已变成十分严重的社会问题．请以 Safety first 为题，结合自己的日常学习和生活，介绍两三种保护自身安全的原则或做法。
写作要求：
1．请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；
2．文中不能出现你的真实姓名和校名．
3. 100词左右.
范文
Safety first
It is important for us students to be careful when we meet with something dangerous. Here are some safety rules.
First, we must obey traffic rules, and remember to watch the traffic lights while crossing the roads. Second, when a fire breaks out, the right thing we should do is to cover our mouths and noses with wet clothes or towels to keep us away from the smoke. Third, when we meet with school bullying, we must deal with it wisely, and timely tell our teachers or parents what has happened.
In a word, we are supposed to strictly follow safety rules to keep us safe.
Text2
暑假即将开始，为使学生过一个安全、充实、快乐的暑假，学校制定了暑期安全规则，主要内容如下：1．家庭安全：小心用火用电；2．游泳安全：不要独自外出游泳；3．交通安全：过马路要当心，不在马路上玩耍．
请你根据以上提示，自拟标题，写一篇英语短文．
写作要求：
1．请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；
2．文中不能出现你的真实姓名和校名．
3. 100词左右.
范文
Safety rules for the summer holiday
To ensure that we will spend a safe summer holiday, our school has set safety rules for us to follow.
Firstly, we are supposed to use fire and electricity carefully. When we stop using them, do not forget to turn off the switches. Secondly, we are not allowed to swim alone in a river or a lake. Thirdly, we must strictly follow traffic rules when we cross the streets, and never play on the streets. Lastly，we should pay attention to sports safety. When we do sports, we should wear sports clothes and shoes.
If we follow these rules, we will have a safe and happy summer holiday.
Text3
为提醒广大青少年重视保护视力，某英语报正在开展以 Saving our eyesight 为题的征文活动．请根据以下写作提示写一篇英语短文用于投稿，说明造成青少年近视的原因并提出保护视力的合理建议．
写作提示： read in wrong places, spend too much time doing the homework or using electronic products
写作要求：
1．语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
2．写作提示必须全部用上，并作适当发挥；
3．文中不得出现你的真实姓名和校名；
4.100词左右．
范文
Saving our eyesight
According to a report, over 50% of the students from high schools and higher education institutions have a poor eyesight.
The students ' bad eyesight is mainly due to the unhealthy habits of using their eyes. First of all, many of them read in wrong places, such as on the bed, on the bus, and in bright sunlight. Second, a large number of students too much time doing their homework or using electronic products, but little time taking exercise or doing outdoor activities.
To protect our eyes, we should learn how to use our eyes correctly. First, we must read in a right place. More importantly , we need to spend more time taking exercise or doing outdoor activities after school , and spend less time using mobile phones , computers and other electronic products .
一．学习目标：
1.基于写作目的、文体和要求，分析范文结构，列出如何保持健康与安全的内容要点；
2.确定描述保持健康与安全的重要性，如何保持健康与安全，呼吁大家保持健康与安全的句式结构；
3.发现范文中作者用于描述保持健康与安全的重要性，如何保持健康与安全，呼吁大家保持健康与安全的生动表达方式和句型，将其应用于自己的写作中；
4.通过自评和互评，改进初稿的结构、内容和语言。
二．学习方法指导:
1.作文要有清晰地开头和结尾
2.作文中间段逻辑清晰，明确的连接词
3.作文中要运用恰当的句型和丰富的词语
三．写作要求：
新冠疫情提醒人们更加重视健康，越来越多的人通过运动来保持健康，但是运动安全也不容小觑。请你用英语写一篇100词左右的短文，给校报的英语栏目English Corner投稿，号召同学们重视运动安全。
要点提示:1.介绍运动安全(现状、重要性……);2.给出运动安全的建议(着裝、热身、规则……)3.表达号召。
要求:1.书写规范,表达连贯,可根据内容适当发挥;2.文中不得出现真实的区县、学校及姓名;3.开头已给出,不计人总词数。
COVID-19 has taught us to pay more attention to our health.
四．教学过程：
Task1思路点拨
1. 体裁:应用文2. 人称:第一人称和第三人称为主 3. 时态:一般现在时
Task2写作导图:
Task3 学以致用(说明：归纳总结每一段相关的好句型)
Para 1. 开篇点题，运动安全的现状及重要性
1.COVID-19 has taught us to pay more attention to our health.
2.Now more and more people do sports to keep healthy.
3. However ，some students get hurt while doing sports.
4.Pay attention to sports safety, and some accidents will be prevented. （试着用if引导的条件状语从句来升格此句）
Para 2. 给出安全运动的建议
1.What can we do to keep safe in doing sports Here are some suggestions.
2. Firstly，we should wear sports clothes and shoes. We shouldn't wear jeans.（试着用had better升格此句）
3. Secondly, we must take warming-up exercise before doing sports.
4.Lastly, following the rules is also necessary. Listen to the teacher carefully and follow the rules in P.E. class. （试着用when|导的时间状语从句升格此句）If we get hurt, we must tell our teachers or call 120 for help in time.
Para 3. 号召大家重视运动安全
1.In a word，sports safety is very important.
2.Be sure to keep safe in doing sports.
范文：
COVID-19 has taught us to pay more attention to our health. Now more and more people do sports to keep healthy. However ，some students get hurt while doing sports. Pay attention to sports safety, and some accidents will be prevented.
What can we do to keep safe in doing sports Here are some suggestions. Firstly，we should wear sports clothes and shoes. We shouldn't wear jeans. Secondly, we must take warming-up exercise before doing sports. Lastly, following the rules is also necessary. Listen to the teacher carefully and follow the rules in P.E. class. If we get hurt, we must tell our teachers or call 120 for help in time.
In a word，sports safety is very important. Be sure to keep safe in doing sports.
Task4 Homework:写作小练笔
公众健康日（7月7日），旨在倡导“全民健康,快乐为本”的理念。随着生活水平的提高,健康越来越受到重视。你班准备组织一个以“健康”为主题的演讲活动，请你根据以下要点提示,准备一篇题为“How to live a healthy and happy life”,100词左右的英语演讲稿。
提示:1.身休健康;2.心理健康:3.对未来的希望。
注意:1.书写规范、表达连贯,可根据内容适当发挥;2.文中不得出现真实的区县、学校及姓名。
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
自评量表（说明：结合自己的写作话题，根据每一段的写作内容，制作切实可行的问题）
问题 是 否 如果为“否”,如何改进
你在短文的第一段是否点明了健康的重要性，并为第二段作铺垫？
你在短文第二段是否介绍了如何保持健康（至少三点）？
你在短文的最后一段是否升华主题，倡导大家保持健康？
你在短文各段中是否提供了重要和充足的细节支撑？
你的短文是否使用了恰当的句型和丰富的词汇？
你的短文在拼写、语法和标点方面是否都正确？
【学后反思】
Future Focus （今后 焦点） This assessment suggests that I should focus on:(这个评价提醒我应该注意：）
I could do this by:（我可以通过...做到这些）
范文
How to live a healthy and happy life
Hi, my dear classmates,
With the improvement of living conditions, we are paying more and more attention to our health, which includes both physical and mental health. Then how can we students live a healthy and happy life
Firstly, we should keep our body healthy. Not only do we need to eat healthy food, but we also need to exercise in a proper way every day. For example, we can run for 30 minutes every morning or play sports after school. Meanwhile, we still need enough sleep every day.
Secondly, mental health is also very important. We need to love our life and try to be active. We need to get along well with others as well. When we ' re sad, we can communicate with our parents, teachers and friends frankly .
In a word, I hope everyone can have a healthy body and mind, and only in this way can we live a healthy and happy life.
That ' s all. Thank you!
Task5作文拓展（说明：找出与话题相关的三到四篇作文）
Text1
近年来学生安全事故频发，如交通安全事故、火灾事故、校园霸凌、溺水事故、食物中毒等，它们已变成十分严重的社会问题．请以 Safety first 为题，结合自己的日常学习和生活，介绍两三种保护自身安全的原则或做法。
写作要求：
1．请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；
2．文中不能出现你的真实姓名和校名．
3. 100词左右.
范文
Safety first
It is important for us students to be careful when we meet with something dangerous. Here are some safety rules.
First, we must obey traffic rules, and remember to watch the traffic lights while crossing the roads. Second, when a fire breaks out, the right thing we should do is to cover our mouths and noses with wet clothes or towels to keep us away from the smoke. Third, when we meet with school bullying, we must deal with it wisely, and timely tell our teachers or parents what has happened.
In a word, we are supposed to strictly follow safety rules to keep us safe.
Text2
暑假即将开始，为使学生过一个安全、充实、快乐的暑假，学校制定了暑期安全规则，主要内容如下：1．家庭安全：小心用火用电；2．游泳安全：不要独自外出游泳；3．交通安全：过马路要当心，不在马路上玩耍．
请你根据以上提示，自拟标题，写一篇英语短文．
写作要求：
1．请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；
2．文中不能出现你的真实姓名和校名．
3. 100词左右.
范文
Safety rules for the summer holiday
To ensure that we will spend a safe summer holiday, our school has set safety rules for us to follow.
Firstly, we are supposed to use fire and electricity carefully. When we stop using them, do not forget to turn off the switches. Secondly, we are not allowed to swim alone in a river or a lake. Thirdly, we must strictly follow traffic rules when we cross the streets, and never play on the streets. Lastly，we should pay attention to sports safety. When we do sports, we should wear sports clothes and shoes.
If we follow these rules, we will have a safe and happy summer holiday.
Text3
为提醒广大青少年重视保护视力，某英语报正在开展以 Saving our eyesight 为题的征文活动．请根据以下写作提示写一篇英语短文用于投稿，说明造成青少年近视的原因并提出保护视力的合理建议．
写作提示： read in wrong places, spend too much time doing the homework or using electronic products
写作要求：
1．语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
2．写作提示必须全部用上，并作适当发挥；
3．文中不得出现你的真实姓名和校名；
4.100词左右．
范文
Saving our eyesight
According to a report, over 50% of the students from high schools and higher education institutions have a poor eyesight.
The students ' bad eyesight is mainly due to the unhealthy habits of using their eyes. First of all, many of them read in wrong places, such as on the bed, on the bus, and in bright sunlight. Second, a large number of students too much time doing their homework or using electronic products, but little time taking exercise or doing outdoor activities.
To protect our eyes, we should learn how to use our eyes correctly. First, we must read in a right place. More importantly , we need to spend more time taking exercise or doing outdoor activities after school , and spend less time using mobile phones , computers and other electronic products .