Unit 6 Enjoying Cycling
单元话题满分范文必背
基础语篇巩固练
1．（23-24八年级下·福建泉州·期末）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友 Eric对你们学校去年假期组织的研学旅行非常感兴趣。请你结合以下图表信息，用英语写一封电子邮件，向他介绍这次研学之旅并谈谈你的看法。词数80左右。
Time July 13, 2022
Palace West Hill Farm
Activities learn to grow rice, grow vegetables, cook lunch together...
Meaning walk out of schools, learn about the society and nature...
注意事项：
1）必须包含所提示的信息，可适当发挥，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2）意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3）请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。
Dear Eric,
How are you I’m glad to tell you something about our school study trip last year.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I wish to get your e-mail soon.
Yours
Li Hua
2．（23-24八年级下·福建龙岩·期中）假如你是李华，你的英国好友David很喜欢北京，于是你决定做他的向导，和他一起从上海出发去北京旅行。请你根据以下表格内容及要求，用英语给David写一封邮件，向他介绍这次出行的安排。
Travel plan
Time From August 15th to 22nd
Way to travel By train (about 5 hours)
What to do visit places of great interest, enjoy delicious food, …
Hotel a standard room, 350/day
要求：
（1）必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥，80词左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
（2）意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
（3）请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
Dear David,
I’m glad that we are going on an eight-day visit to Beijing. To have a wonderful trip, I’ve made a travel plan for us. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
3．（23-24八年级下·福建莆田·期中）假如你是李华，你打算在即将到来的“五一”假期和家人去杭州旅游。请根据导图提示，向你的笔友Jack写封信介绍你的旅行计划。
注意事项：
1. 必须包含思维导图所列要点，并适当发挥，使内容充实，行文连贯；
2. 字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清晰；
3. 要求 80 词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Lingyin Temple：灵隐寺
Dear Jack,
I’m very happy because May Day is coming.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．（23-24八年级下·福建泉州·期中）读万卷书，行万里路。旅行不仅能开拓我们的视野，而且还能丰富我们的生活。你校校刊英语专栏以“Travel” 为主题举办了一场征文比赛。请你根据右边的图示信息，用英语写一篇短文，向专栏投稿。词数80词左右。
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。
Travel is good for us in many ways.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5．（23-24八年级下·福建泉州·期中）上周六你班到西山 (West Hills) 郊游，假如你是李华，请你根据表格里的内容提示，用英语写一封电子邮件与你的笔友Jim分享这次旅行经历，词数80左右。
注意：
1. 必须包含所提示的信息，可以适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达清楚，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及相关提示信息。
When Last Saturday
Who My classmates and I
Where West Hills
How By bus
What 1. Enjoy the flowers and birds 2. Cook food by ourselves 3. Pick apples and strawberries 4. …
Dear Jim,
How is it going Today I would like to tell you about my trip to…
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
6．（23-24八年级下·福建泉州·期中）假如你叫李华，你告诉你的澳大利亚笔友 David 关于去年五一假期的旅游经历。请你根据以下思维导图的提示用英语给 David 写一封信。词数 80 左右。
注意事项：1、必须包含所有要点信息，可适当发挥；
2、开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3、请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
Dear David,
How are you doing these days I’d like to tell you about my travel experiences.
Last May Day holiday, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Li Hua
7．（23-24八年级下·福建福州·期中）假如你是李华，清明节期间你去了杭州春游。请你结合以下图示，给你的外国笔友Mike分享你这次的旅行经历和感受，80词左右。
注意事项：
1.必须包含所提示的信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。
Dear Mike,
How are you I’d like to tell you about my travel experiences. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
8．（23-24八年级下·福建泉州·期中）假设你是李华，上周你们学校组织到红星农场(Red Star Farm)研学旅行。请根据下图提示，用英语写一封邮件给你的外国笔友 Sam，向他介绍你们研学旅行的活动情况以及自己的收获和感想。词数 70 左右。
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，并适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用提示信息以外的姓名、校名及地名。
Dear Sam,
How are you
I had a wonderful trip last weekend. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
重难语篇拔高练
9．（23-24八年级下·福建泉州·期中）“五一”劳动节就要来了，你打算和好朋友去上海旅游。请根据思维导图，写一篇短文介绍此次旅行计划。要求：80词左右；开头已给出，不计入词数。
I’m very excited because May Day is coming.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
10．（23-24八年级下·福建南平·期中）假设你是李明，为了拓宽你的视野和丰富你的课余生活，你父母亲计划和你趁着五一节假一起到武夷山游玩。请你根据以下面的提示，展开合理的想象，给你的澳大利亚笔友Ben 发个电子邮件，介绍你的旅游计划。词数80左右。
Where When Who How What it is famous for Feelings What
Mount Wuyi May Day With your parents By train Nine-bend Stream(九曲溪) Goddess Peak(玉女峰) Thin Strip of Sky(一线天) Dahongpao（大红袍） Glad, Look forward to Take Photos …
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所提示的信息，可适当发挥，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。
Dear Ben,
How are you doing these days I am glad to tell you my travel plan to Mount Wuyi this May Day.___________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
How will you spend your May Day Please write to me soon.
Sincerely yours,
Li MingUnit 6 Enjoying Cycling
单元话题满分范文必背
基础语篇巩固练
1．（23-24八年级下·福建泉州·期末）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友 Eric对你们学校去年假期组织的研学旅行非常感兴趣。请你结合以下图表信息，用英语写一封电子邮件，向他介绍这次研学之旅并谈谈你的看法。词数80左右。
Time July 13, 2022
Palace West Hill Farm
Activities learn to grow rice, grow vegetables, cook lunch together...
Meaning walk out of schools, learn about the society and nature...
注意事项：
1）必须包含所提示的信息，可适当发挥，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2）意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3）请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。
Dear Eric,
How are you I’m glad to tell you something about our school study trip last year.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I wish to get your e-mail soon.
Yours
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Eric,
How are you I’m glad to tell you something about our school study trip last year.
We went to the West Hill Farm on July 13, 2022. It was a sunny day. At the beginning of the activity, we did different kinds of activities. For example, some learnt how to grow rice with the farmers, others learnt how to grow vegetables. At last, we cooked lunch together.
I think this activity is very meaningful. We can walk out of schools and learn about the society and nature. I hope the school can have more activities like this.
I wish to get your e-mail soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件。
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中对你的研学之旅的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“请你结合以下图表信息，用英语写一封电子邮件，向他介绍这次研学之旅并谈谈你的看法”来引出中重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“时间、活动、意义等”几个方面重点介绍你的研学之旅的具体情况
第三步，书写结语，表达“希望能尽快收到你的邮件”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①school study trip研学之旅；
②for example例如；
③at last最后；
④wish to do sth希望做某事。
[高分句型]
①For example, some learnt how to grow rice with the farmers, others learnt how to grow vegetables. (疑问词+to do作宾语)
②I think this activity is very meaningful. (I think接宾语从句)
2．（23-24八年级下·福建龙岩·期中）假如你是李华，你的英国好友David很喜欢北京，于是你决定做他的向导，和他一起从上海出发去北京旅行。请你根据以下表格内容及要求，用英语给David写一封邮件，向他介绍这次出行的安排。
Travel plan
Time From August 15th to 22nd
Way to travel By train (about 5 hours)
What to do visit places of great interest, enjoy delicious food, …
Hotel a standard room, 350/day
要求：
（1）必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥，80词左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
（2）意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
（3）请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
Dear David,
I’m glad that we are going on an eight-day visit to Beijing. To have a wonderful trip, I’ve made a travel plan for us. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear David,
I’m glad that we are going on an eight-day visit to Beijing. To have a wonderful trip, I’ve made a travel plan for us. Now let me tell you something about it.
Our trip is from August 15th to 22nd. It will take us about 5 hours to get there by train. We’ll visit many places of interest and enjoy all kinds of delicious food. Because you’re interested in Beijing culture, we’ll show you around Beijing hutongs. I’ve booked a hotel room online. It is a standard room. It costs 350 yuan for one night. I hope the room will make you feel comfortable.
I’m looking forward to this trip!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态以“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：材料表格所给内容不得遗漏，可适当增加细节；注意邮件格式。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章已给开头，写明邮件意图；
第二步，阐述旅行计划详情；
第三步，书写结语，表达期望。
[亮点词汇]
①place of interest名胜
②show sb around带某人参观
③all kinds of各种各样的
[高分句型]
①Because you’re interested in Beijing culture, we’ll show you around Beijing hutongs.（原因状语从句）
②I hope the room will make you feel comfortable.（宾语从句）
3．（23-24八年级下·福建莆田·期中）假如你是李华，你打算在即将到来的“五一”假期和家人去杭州旅游。请根据导图提示，向你的笔友Jack写封信介绍你的旅行计划。
注意事项：
1. 必须包含思维导图所列要点，并适当发挥，使内容充实，行文连贯；
2. 字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清晰；
3. 要求 80 词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Lingyin Temple：灵隐寺
Dear Jack,
I’m very happy because May Day is coming.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Dear Jack,
I’m very happy because May Day is coming. I’m going to travel to Hangzhou with my family. We’ll go there by plane. I will stay at Rua Jia Hotel and plan to spend three days in Hangzhou.
First, we will visit Lingyin Temple on the first day. I think it will be very interesting. We are going to the West Lake the next day. I can’t wait to see this beautiful lake. It is very famous, and many poets wrote poems here. On the third day we are going to taste the food of Hangzhou. Then we’re going to go shopping. Finally in the evening we will go home.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，整体介绍自己要去杭州旅行；
第二步，介绍自己和家人如何去、住在哪里以及玩几天；
第三步，最后具体介绍在杭州要做什么。
[亮点词汇]
① plan to do sth计划做某事
② can’t wait to do sth迫不及待做某事
③ go shopping购物
[高分句型]
I think it will be very interesting.（宾语从句）
4．（23-24八年级下·福建泉州·期中）读万卷书，行万里路。旅行不仅能开拓我们的视野，而且还能丰富我们的生活。你校校刊英语专栏以“Travel” 为主题举办了一场征文比赛。请你根据右边的图示信息，用英语写一篇短文，向专栏投稿。词数80词左右。
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。
Travel is good for us in many ways.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Travel is good for us in many ways.
First, we can enjoy the beautiful scenery of different places by travelling. We can see many places with our own eyes. We can visit some famous cities and scenic spots. Second, we will meet people with different interests and see different things when we travel. We can get ideas of the conditions and customs of other people, taste different foods and local flavors if we like. In this way, we can understand how differently other people live. Third, travel will not only help us get knowledge of geography, history and other knowledge, but also help us keep healthy and enjoy nature. Finally, travel can help us keep fit and get relaxed.
With all these advantages of travel, it is no wonder that travel has become more popular than ever in China.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为 “一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总述旅游在很多方面对我们有好处；
第二步，结合图示，具体介绍旅游的好处；
第三步，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①be good for 对……有益
②in this way 以这种方式
③keep fit 保持健康
[高分句型]
①Third, travel will not only help us get knowledge of geography, history and other knowledge, but also help us keep healthy and enjoy nature（not only ... but also 不仅……而且……）
②With all these advantages of travel, it is no wonder that travel has become more popular than ever in China.（it is no wonder that 难怪……）
5．（23-24八年级下·福建泉州·期中）上周六你班到西山 (West Hills) 郊游，假如你是李华，请你根据表格里的内容提示，用英语写一封电子邮件与你的笔友Jim分享这次旅行经历，词数80左右。
注意：
1. 必须包含所提示的信息，可以适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达清楚，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及相关提示信息。
When Last Saturday
Who My classmates and I
Where West Hills
How By bus
What 1. Enjoy the flowers and birds 2. Cook food by ourselves 3. Pick apples and strawberries 4. …
Dear Jim,
How is it going Today I would like to tell you about my trip to…
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】参考答案：
Dear Jim,
How is it going Today I would like to tell you about my trip to West Hills with my classmates last Saturday.
We went there by bus. When we got there, we were surprised at the green trees and beautiful flowers. It’s so great. We also saw some birds. They were flying and singing happily. In the morning, we picked some apples and strawberries. It was very interesting. We cooked the lunch by ourselves. I think it’s full of fun. After lunch, we caught some fish in the river. During our trip, we also took many photos.
We all had a good time on that day. I hope to go there again.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：作文必须包含所提示的信息，注意适当发挥，使文章语言表达清楚、语义通顺连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，说明旅行去了哪里；
第二步，介绍旅行的时间、人物、交通方式以及干了些什么。
第三步，表达对此次旅行的看法并承接结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①be surprised at对……感到惊讶
②by oneself独自
③be full of充满
[高分句型]
①When we got there, we were surprised at the green trees and beautiful flowers. (when引导时间状语从句)
6．（23-24八年级下·福建泉州·期中）假如你叫李华，你告诉你的澳大利亚笔友 David 关于去年五一假期的旅游经历。请你根据以下思维导图的提示用英语给 David 写一封信。词数 80 左右。
注意事项：1、必须包含所有要点信息，可适当发挥；
2、开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3、请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
Dear David,
How are you doing these days I’d like to tell you about my travel experiences.
Last May Day holiday, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear David,
How are you doing these days I’d like to tell you about my travel experiences.
Last May Day holiday, I went to Sanya for a holiday with my parents by plane. Sanya is in the south of China. When we arrived there, we were attracted by the beautiful scenery. We had a three-day trip and took a lot of photos. We went to many places of interest, went swimming in the sea and enjoyed the sunshine on the beach. The seafood was very delicious. The people there were friendly. It was really a wonderful trip! I hope I can go there again.
Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般过去时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出上一年五一假期的旅游经历；
第二步，介绍旅游的地点、时间、活动内容等；
第三步，写出对此旅游经历的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①by plane坐飞机
②be attracted by被……吸引
③take photos拍照
[高分句型]
When we arrived there, we were attracted by the beautiful scenery.（when引导的时间状语从句）
7．（23-24八年级下·福建福州·期中）假如你是李华，清明节期间你去了杭州春游。请你结合以下图示，给你的外国笔友Mike分享你这次的旅行经历和感受，80词左右。
注意事项：
1.必须包含所提示的信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。
Dear Mike,
How are you I’d like to tell you about my travel experiences. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mike,
How are you I’d like to tell you about my travel experiences.
I had a 3-day visit to Hangzhou with my parents. We went there on April 4th by plane. The weather was pleasant when we arrived. Hangzhou is a big city and there were lots of places to visit. On our first day, we visited the museum. Then, we explored the West Lake. It was so beautiful that I took a lot of photos there. We felt the beauty of the city and had a great time.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的假期情况以及感受，并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，要告诉朋友自己的旅行经历；
第二步，详细介绍自己去了哪里，那里的天气以及风景等；
第三步，介绍自己的感受并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①lots of很多
②take photos拍照
③have a great time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①The weather was pleasant when we arrived. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②It was so beautiful that I took a lot of photos there. (so...that...引导的结果状语从句)
8．（23-24八年级下·福建泉州·期中）假设你是李华，上周你们学校组织到红星农场(Red Star Farm)研学旅行。请根据下图提示，用英语写一封邮件给你的外国笔友 Sam，向他介绍你们研学旅行的活动情况以及自己的收获和感想。词数 70 左右。
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，并适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用提示信息以外的姓名、校名及地名。
Dear Sam,
How are you
I had a wonderful trip last weekend. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】参考范文
Dear Sam,
How are you
I had a wonderful trip last weekend. Last Sunday, we visited Red Star Farm by subway. It took us half an hour to get to the farm by subway. After we got there, we walked around the farm and visited it. We fed the animals on the farm. The pigs and ducks were cute. We also cooked meals by ourselves. The noodles we cooked were delicious.
We were happy and excited. We hope that we can visit the farm next time. What about your last weekend I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。引出上周研学旅行的话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。具体阐述研学旅行的具体活动；
第三步，书写结语。总结研学旅行的收获的感想。
[亮点词汇]
①walk around 四处走走
②get to 到达
③what about ……怎么样
[高分句型]
①It took us half an hour to get to the farm by subway. (it作形式主语)
②The noodles we cooked were delicious. (省略了关系词that/which的定语从句)
③We hope that we can visit the farm next time. (宾语从句）
重难语篇拔高练
9．（23-24八年级下·福建泉州·期中）“五一”劳动节就要来了，你打算和好朋友去上海旅游。请根据思维导图，写一篇短文介绍此次旅行计划。要求：80词左右；开头已给出，不计入词数。
I’m very excited because May Day is coming.
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【答案】例文
I’m very excited because May Day is coming. I’m going on a three-day visit to Shanghai with my parents. We will go there by air.
On the first day, we will visit Shanghai Disneyland Park. I’d like to take some photos with Mickey Mouse. There are lots of fun things there and I am sure we’ll have a good time.
On the second day, we’ll visit the museum in the morning. In the afternoon, we’ll have a good rest in the hotel. In the evening, we plan to take a walk along the Huangpu River and try some local delicious food.
On the third day, we’ll go to Oriental Pearl Tower and have a good look at the city. In the afternoon, we’ll do some shopping at Nanjing Road. In the evening, we’ll fly back to our hometown.
I think we will have fun in Shanghai. We can’t wait to go there.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般将来时”；
③提示：文章应该包括思维导图中的要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你的旅行计划，包括人物、时间、地点和方式；
第二步，具体介绍三天的行程安排；
第三步，总结与期待。
[亮点词汇]
①can’t wait to do sth. 迫不及待做某事
②plan to do sth.计划做某事
[高分句型]
①I think we will have fun in Shanghai. (宾语从句)
②There are lots of fun things there and I am sure we’ll have a good time. (and连接并列句)
10．（23-24八年级下·福建南平·期中）假设你是李明，为了拓宽你的视野和丰富你的课余生活，你父母亲计划和你趁着五一节假一起到武夷山游玩。请你根据以下面的提示，展开合理的想象，给你的澳大利亚笔友Ben 发个电子邮件，介绍你的旅游计划。词数80左右。
Where When Who How What it is famous for Feelings What
Mount Wuyi May Day With your parents By train Nine-bend Stream(九曲溪) Goddess Peak(玉女峰) Thin Strip of Sky(一线天) Dahongpao（大红袍） Glad, Look forward to Take Photos …
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所提示的信息，可适当发挥，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。
Dear Ben,
How are you doing these days I am glad to tell you my travel plan to Mount Wuyi this May Day.___________________________________
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How will you spend your May Day Please write to me soon.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
【答案】例文
Dear Ben,
How are you doing these days I am glad to tell you my travel plan to Mount Wuyi this May Day. May Day is coming soon. My parents and I are going on a three-day visit to Mount Wuyi. We plan to go there by train because it’s cheap and interesting. My father will book the tickets for us on the phone. Mount Wuyi is famous for Nine-bend Stream, Goddess Peak, Thin Strip of Sky, Dahongpao and so on. The most interesting thing for me is to take a boat on Nine-bend Stream. We will enjoy the local delicious food and take photos. And we will taste Dahongpao as well. I am sure we will have a good trip. I am looking forward to visiting Mount Wuyi soon.
How will you spend your May Day Please write to me soon.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件。
②时态：一般现在时和一般将来时。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目给出的要点，如地点、时间、人物、交通方式、活动安排及感受。考生写作中，适当添加细节，突出写作要点。
［写作步骤］
第一步，引出话题。五一即将来临，打算游玩武夷山。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。详细介绍游玩安排，包括交通方式、游玩时长、游玩地点及活动安排。
第三步，书写结语。表达对这次游玩的期待。
［亮点词汇］
①plan to do...计划做……
②be famous for...因……而出名
③have a good trip旅行愉快
④look forward to doing ...期盼做……
［高分句型］
①We plan to go there by train because it’s cheap and interesting.(because引导的原因状语从句)
②The most interesting thing for me is to take a boat on Nine-bend Stream. (to do做表语)
