(共24张PPT)
Unit 4 JOURNEY ACROSS A VAST LAND
1. Trace Li Daiyu’s traveling to Halifax and list travel
experience in Toronto and Montreal
2. Analyze the content of Li Daiyu’s traveling and
summarize tips on writing
3. Write a travel journal of Shanghai explore the meaning of travel in spiritual uplift and enlightenment.
To do list
Li Daiyu and Liu Qian were excited to continue their rail journey in Toronto and Montreal to visit their cousin in Halifax.
Text Type:______________.
In order of __________.
travel journal
time/places
Tip 1: include six essential elements of a travel journal.
why
what
where
when
how
who
Activity 1: Read for the main idea
Activity 2: Read for structure
记
TRAVEL
Part 1 : Para ___________
1-4
5-9
10
Part 2 : Para ___________
Part 3 : Para ___________
What they experienced in Toronto.
What they experienced in Montreal.
Time on the train to Halifax.
saw misty clouds
saw skyscrapers
went to CN Tower
met Li Fei in Chinatown and got food.
saw signs and ads in French
but people speak English
visited artists in workplaces
Toronto
astonished
Montreal
surprised
Activity 3: List what they experienced in Toronto and Montreal.
what they saw
How they felt
What they did
Summarize what they experienced
Activity 3: Conclude what they learned about Canada.
what they saw
what they did
what they did
what they saw
Montreal
Toronto
1. saw misty clouds
2. saw skyscrapers and old-fashioned cars
1. went up the CN Tower
2. met Lin Fei in Chinatown.
and got food there.
1. signs and ads in French
and people spoke English
1. visited artists in workplaces
Read and appreciate
Standing in the distance, they were astonished to see misty cloud rising from the Great Niagara Falls, which is on the south side of the lake.
Standing in the distance, I was …, which …
Huangpu River
Standing in the distance, I was amazed to see the gentle waves of the Huangpu river shining in the sunlight, which reflected the beautiful city skyline.
Huangpu River
Smell
Sound
Smell
Taste
Touch
picturesque scenery
Sight
travel
journal
Appreciate different sensory description about Canada
Sight
Touch
Taste
Sound
Smell
Standing in the distance, they were astonished to see misty cloud rising from the Great Niagara Falls, which is on the south side of the lake.
The cool breeze from the Niagara Falls touches my skin, providing a refreshing break for me.
Eating Chinese food and drinking local toast provoded the perfect mix of flavors that represented the food in Canada.
The delicious smell of Chinese food in Chinatown flowed through the street, tempting me to have a taste.
The happy laughter and excited talking of people filled the air in the reataurant, creating a joyful and fun atmosphere,
Tip 2: use
sensory description
Activity 4: Conclude what they learned.
what they saw
what they did
what they did
what they saw
Montreal
Toronto
1. saw misty clouds
2. saw skyscrapers and old-fashioned cars
1. went up the CN Tower
2. met Lin Fei in Chinatown.
and got Chinese food.
1. signs and ads in French
and people spoke English
1. visited artists in workplaces
食物
传统
艺术
自然
CN tower
skyscrapers of glass and steel
beautiful cobblestone streets and old brick buildings
architecture
Chinatown
coexisting
Could you find out other descriptive words of architecture in Para.10
architecture
Activity 4: Conclude what they learned.
what they saw
what they did
what they did
what they saw
Montreal
Toronto
1. saw misty clouds
2. saw skyscrapers and old-fashioned cars
1. went up the CN Tower
2. met Lin Fei in Chinatown.
and got food there.
1. signs and ads in French
and people spoke English
1. visited artists in workplaces
Chinese food
coffee
toast
cheese
Are there other kinds of food in Canada
tasty food
Activity 4: Conclude what they learned.
what they saw
what they did
what they did
what they saw
Montreal
Toronto
1. saw misty clouds
2. saw skyscrapers and old-fashioned cars
1. went up the CN Tower
2. met Lin Fei in Chinatown.
and got food there.
1. signs and ads in French
and people spoke English
1. visited artists in workplaces
authentic art
picturesque
scenery
coexisting
architecture
authentic
art
tasty
food
1. skyscraper and CN
tower,
2. cobblestone streets,
old brick buildings
1. artists in their worlplace
2. inspiring art exhibits
1. Chinese food,
2. coffee, toast, and cheese
1. misty clouds rising from Niagara Falls
Canada
1.
Activity 5 : Find linking words to connect different experiences.
So, they went on tour of city
So, you can guess …
Therefore, we ……
In contrast to Toronto,…
Tip 3: use discourse markers
1.
01
02
03
brief introduction
what you experienced
conclusion
Summary : How to write a travel journal
structure
and
content
03
04
picturesque scenery
food
architecture
art
tips
discourse marker
sensory description
essential elements
Suppose you were Li Daiyu’s cousin Mary, write a travel journal about 80 words, telling us about your trip in Shanghai.
Activity 6: Write a travel journal
1.
01
02
03
brief introduction
What you experienced
conclusion
techniques
write a travel journal
structure
and
content
03
04
picturesque scenery
food
architecture
art
essential elements
discourse marker
sensory description
记
TRAVEL
Suppose you are Li Dayu’s cousin Mary, write a travel journal about 80 words, telling us about your trip in Shanghai.
Activity 6: Write a travel journal
记
TRAVEL
Checklist stars
Do you write the essay with essential elements of travel journal (who,what,why,where,when,how)
Do you use sensory description
Does the content use discourse markers to show relationship
Do you have neat writing
aste delicious
food
ealize how big the world is
ppreciate
different
culture
isit
different
places
njoy
beautiful
scenery
eave happy
memory
Why do you
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记
TRAVEL
Travel Try Trek
行走天下
游历 · 知新 · 乐行
to various places
different cultures
with pleasure
广闻博识
步履生风
记
TRAVEL
Assignment
Look back to Mary’s travel route across China and finish the whole travel journal from Tibet to Shanghai.
Do remember to record what you experienced. Just go around the world.
