(共12张PPT)
Unit 6 An old man tried to
move the mountains
单元话题写作导航
写作话题剖析
本单元的写作话题是写一个故事类的记叙文。在写作时，首先要把故事的
主要角色写出来，其次简单介绍故事发展的过程，最后写出故事的结局。此处
要注意描述故事时所用的时态要以一般过去时和一般现在时为主。
写作素材积累
词组积累
1. 迷路
2. 带走
3. 把……变成……
4. 多亏了；由于
名言典句
心之所愿，无事不成。
Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.
get lost
take away
turn…into…
thanks to
高分范文欣赏
假如你是李华，请你根据下面所给图画，给大家讲述这一经典故事。
play games，tank（水缸），
full of water fall into
think over，pick up，throw at
break be saved 写作要求：
1. 短文须包含图中所有信息，并适当拓展。
2. 文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。
3. 词数80左右。
思路点拨：
范文欣赏：
Sima Guang Hit the Tank
Once Sima Guang was playing games with several children in the backyard.
There was a large water tank in the yard. It was full of water. When they were
playing，one child fell into the tank. Other children started to cry，running for
help.However，Sima Guang was different. Sima Guang thought it over and then had
an idea. He picked up a big stone and threw it at the water tank.“Bang！”The tank
broke and the water ran out. The child was saved.
Sima Guang was clever and helpful.We should learn from him.
小试牛刀
在你的成长过程中一定读过或听说过许多神话、童话故事， 这些故事深深
地植入我们的大脑，伴随我们成长，故事或多或少影响了我们的做人、做事。
请根据思维导图提示，以 “My Favorite Story— ”为题，写一篇80词左
右的英语短文， 谈谈你曾经读过的或听说过的故事，这个故事对你产生了什么
样的影响，从这本书中你学到了什么。
写作要求：
1. 结合实际，补全标题；
2. 短文须包含导图中的所有信息，并适当拓展。
3. 文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。
My Favorite Story—
The Fox and the Crow
My favorite story is The Fox and the Crow. The fox wanted to get the meat in
the crow’s mouth. So he said a lot of beautiful words to the crow. The crow was so
happy that he opened his mouth to sin g a song. But as soon as he opened his mouth，
the meat fell onto the ground and the fox got it.
I think the story is interesting and meaningful. It reminds us that we should
never believe the person who wants to cheat us. (共33张PPT)
Unit 6 An old man tried to move the mountains
第六课时 Section B (3a-Self Check)
3a
Write some key words from each scene. Then discuss your answers with your partner.
Scene 1: plan, kill, save, outside, moonlight
Scene 2: _____________________________
Scene 3: _____________________________
Scene 4: ______________________________
Scene 5: _____________________________
Scene 6: _____________________________
Scene 7:______________________________
lazy, forest, get wood
white stones, be lost, moon, bright
slept, back, forest again, moon, can’t
no more, bread, moon rises, follow
bread, ground, birds, walking, find
lost, song, follow, house, eat
Complete the summary of the play.
Gretel heard that their _________ planned to ___ her and her brother. But Hansel had a plan to ____ himself and his sister. He went to get some white _____ before he went to bed that night. The next day, the wife sent the children to the _____. Hansel ________ the stones as they walked. Later that night, they could see the stones because of the shining ______. The stones showed them the way home.
stepmother
kill
save
stones
forest
dropped
moon
3b
Hansel wanted to get more stones, but his stepmother did not let him go out. The next morning, the wife sent the children to the forest again. Hansel had no stones, so he dropped _____ of _____. But the ____ ate them, so Hansel and Gretel were ___ in the forest. They walked until they saw a ____ made of food. Hansel wanted to ___ the house, but then they heard the voice of an old _______ coming from the house.
pieces
bread
birds
lost
house
eat
woman
Guess the character,and What story was it from
The story is about the movie
__________________.
Frozen
Guess the character,and What story was it from
The story is about the movie
__________________.
Zootopia
Guess the character,and What story was it from
Everyone called the book_____________.
Little Mermaid
Guess the character,and What story was it from
All of folk stories , My favorite one is _____________.
Mu Lan
When I was a little child, My mom always told a story named_______________.
Guess the character,and What story was it from
Little Red Riding Hood
How much do you know about the story Little Red Riding Hood
____________________, there was a little girl who liked wearing a red hat, so everybody called her ________________.
Once upon a time
Little Red Riding Hood
小红帽把这个给你外婆送去，记住不要走小路哦。。。
_________, her mother asked her to _________ some food to her sick grandma.
Her mother __________Little Red Ride Hood to ________ her grandmother as soon as possible.
One day
send
told
get to
_________________her grandma's home, Little Red Riding Hood met a wolf. ___________ the wolf saw Little Red Riding Hood, he _____________her.
On the way to
As soon as
started to follow
The wolf _______ eat Little Red Riding Hood,so he told Little Red Riding Hood that there were many beautiful flowers in the forest. The wolf _____ Little Red Riding Hood ________what he said.
wanted to
led
to believe
真的吗？那我要去看一看，顺便给外婆摘一些~~~
那边森林里很多漂亮的小花，你肯定从来没见过~~
Little Red Riding Hood was _______ to see the beautiful flowers along the way _____ she fogot her mother’s words.After that, the wolf __________ the old woman’s home.
so happy
that
ran into
眼睛大，
好看的清楚你的样子啊
外婆外婆，你的眼睛怎么那么大啊
Before Little Red Riding Hood came, the wolf ___________ her grandma and _______ eat Little Red Riding Hood in the bed. When Little Red Riding Hood ______ and ________the bed , she _______ the truth at once, and she ____________ the house.
dressed up as
waited to
arrived
got close to
knew
rushed out of
Luckily, a hunter __________, seeing what really happened, and so he ______ the wolf and _____ Little Red Riding Hood and her grandma.
passed by
killed
saved
________________________________(小红帽真幸运）！This story _______ us that
don’t trust strangers easily.
How lucky Little Red Riding Hood was
reminds
以读促写
三段式
以开门见山的方式将读者引入故事
正文讲述故事的发展过程
结尾以精炼的语言阐述故事的寓意并表达自己的观点
故事发展过程
Setting
Characters
Beginning
Middle
End
On the way to...
The story reminds us that...
Once upon a time,...
When I was a child...
One day...
After that,...
Luckily,...
在写作的过程中，要特别注意人物及故事情节的顺序!
1. We’ll be late unless ______________
________________________________
2. You won’t be successful unless ________________________________
we get up at once and take a taxi there.
you work hard on all the subjects.
Self Check
1
Use your own ideas to complete the sentences.
3. As soon as I got to the bus stop
________________________________
4. Bill opened his book as soon as
________________________________
I called my uncle to meet me there.
Miss Miller came into the classroom.
5. The movie was so touching that
________________________________
6. The boy was so excited that
________________________________
some girls couldn’t hold their tears.
he could hardly go to sleep all night.
2
Fill in the blanks with the correct forms of the words in brackets.
Once upon a time, there _______ (be) an emperor. He _______ (love) buying and looking at clothes. One day, two brothers _______ (come) to the city. They _______ (tell) the emperor that they could make beautiful clothes for him, but he must ________ (give) them silk and gold.
was
loved
came
told
give
The brothers ________ (be) bad people. They ________ (keep) all the silk and gold themselves. They told the emperor the clothes they made _______ (be) special because only clever people could ______ (see) them. When the emperor _______(put) on the clothes, all he could see was his underwear.
were
kept
were
see
put
But he didn’t want people to _______ (think) he was stupid, so he ______(say) the clothes were beautiful. Then he _______ (walk) around the city in his new clothes until one boy _______ (shout), “The emperor isn’t wearing any clothes!”
think
said
walked
shouted
Ｉ.用if 或unless填空
Rachel will be pleased ______she passes her driving test.
2. The bus won’t stop_________ you ring the bell.
3. I can’t read your writing ________you print it clearly.
4. Emma will be upset _____she doesn’t get the job.
5. You can’t go inside the cinema_______ you get a ticket.
6. Don’t bother(打扰)to ring me _______you have something important.
if
unless
unless
if
unless
unless
Exercises
1. 葛雷特听到他们的继母计划杀死她和她的哥哥。
Gretel heard that their stepmother _______ ____ ___ her and her brother.
2. 晚上晚一些的时候，由于明亮的月光，他们能看清那些石子。
Later that night, they could see the stones _______ ____ the ________ moon.
Ⅱ.根据汉语意思完成英语句子
planned to kill
because of
shining
3. 韩塞尔没有石子，因此他扔了一些面包屑。
Hansel had no stones ___ he dropped ______ of bread.
4. 他们一直走，直到看见一间由食物盖的房子。
They walked ____ they saw a house _____ ____ food.
so
pieces
until
made of
5．今天并不冷，但是有点凉。
It is not cold today but __ _____ ___ cool.
6．这个故事使我想起了我的一次亲身经历。
The story ________ ____ _____ an experience I once had.
7．可能会有很大的损失，因此我们不能冒险。
There might be __ ______ to lose ____ we couldn't take any risks.
a little bit
reminds me of
so much
that
8．他们正致力于把海水转变成饮用水。
They are trying to ______ the sea water ______ drinking water.
9．只要你肯帮我，你叫我做什么我都愿意。
___ ______ ___ you help me, I'll do whatever you ask me to do.
turn
into
As long as
请你根据以下图片和所给提示词，用英文写一个《乌鸦喝水》 (The Crow Drank the Water)的故事，并用1～2句话谈谈故事给你的启示。
要求：
1.故事应包括所提供的信息，可适当拓展补充；
2.词数：80左右；
Homework
万能模板
Once upon on time,
One day,
So,
At last,
My favorite story
is...
The story reminds us that
