Unit 3 Animal friends 单元话题书面表达专练（含参考范文+写作指导）-2024-2025学年六年级英语下册单元重难点高频易错题专练（鲁教版五四学制（2024））

Unit 3 Animal friends
单元话题书面表达专练
一、书面表达
1．假设你有一只宠物猫，非常讨人喜欢，请你把它介绍给我们吧。
提示：内容包括它的名字、性格、年龄、外貌、喜欢的食物、生活习惯等。
写作要求：
1. 语言流畅，层次清晰，可以适当发挥。
2. 词数：不少于60 词，书写规范，卷面整洁。
3.文中不能出现考生本人的学校名称和姓名。
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2．请以“My favourite animal”为题，运用本单元所学的表达方式，写一篇60词左右的短文，描述你所喜欢的动物的习性、特征及你为什么喜欢它等。
内容包括：
1）Do you like animals
2）Which animal do you like best Why
My favourite animal
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3．每个人都有自己最喜欢的动物。假如你是Jill，现在正和你的朋友们谈论自己最喜欢的动物以及原因。下面表格中是你们谈论的内容，请以Our favorite animals为题，写一篇文章。60词以上，可以适当发挥。（文章开头已经给出，不计入总词数）
Persons Favorite animals Reasons
Lisa 猫 能抓老鼠，并且很可爱
Eric 狗 能做很多事，是最受欢迎的宠物
Jil1 马 擅长奔跑，并且很漂亮
Our favorite animals
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4．假设你们学校这个月开展了一项活动叫作“Our Animal Friends”，要求学生踊跃给校英语报投稿，讲述你和动物之间的故事。根据下面的问题提示，写一篇作文，快给校报投稿吧！提示：1）What animalist
2）Where did you get it
3）How do you get along with it
4）What's your opinion (看法) about animals
要求：1）60词左右；
语言表达准确，语义连贯，可适当发挥。
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5．请根据下面的内容提示，以“What a wonderful dog”为题写一篇短文。60词以上，可适当发挥。
提示：
1）玛利亚（Maria）是2岁孩子大卫（David）的奶奶，她疼爱孙子，但有点健忘（forgetful）。
2）一次她带着孙子和她的狗去公园看大妈 （Dama）们跳广场舞 （square dancing），忽然自己也想学跳舞。
3）她玩得太高兴而忘记带孩子回家，回到家才想起把孩子忘在公园里。
4）等她急忙回公园找时，发现她的宠物狗一直待在孩子的身边。
What a wonderful dog
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6．上周你去了深圳野生动物园(Shenzhen Safari Park)，请根据你的所观所感，写一篇短文，词数80左右。
要点：1）有很多游客，可以开车进入动物园，并且可以和马、大象一起玩，它们很友好；2）看到了大熊猫，它们黑白相间，性情温和，看起来像熊，喜欢吃竹子；3）老虎很孤独，也许它们想回到森林里；4．野生动物变得越来越少，保护野生动物很重要。
要求：要点全部表达清楚，可适当拓展，语法正确、语句通顺。
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7．May是来自宝安中学（Bao'an Middle School）七年级的一名学生，她是校动物保护俱乐部（Helping Animals Club）的成员，May向Shenzhen Daily的主编写信谈她参加俱乐部的原因和如何保护野生动物的看法。写作内容：
姓名 May
参加的俱乐部 Helping Animals Club
原因 动物是我们的朋友，但现在却处于危险之中，我们应该保护它们
方法 少吃肉，不杀野生动物，保护环境，保护动物的家园
protect保护in danger处于危险之中wild野生的environment环境
写作要求：1）表达清楚、语句通顺、意思连贯；2）应用表格中的所有信息，并适当发挥；3）60词以上。文章的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear editor,
I am May and I come from Bao'an Middle School. My favorite club is Helping Animals Club.
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Best wishes,
May
答案解析部分
1．I have a pet cat. Its name is Coco. It's only three months old. It's white and small. It's very cute. It likes drinking milk and eating fish. It likes jumping up and down. At noon, it likes sleeping in the sun. At night, it likes sleeping with me together. I like it very much.
开头引入：直接点明主题，说明自己有一只宠物猫。介绍宠物猫：名字：使用了简单的直接描述"Its name is Coco."。年龄：用"It's only three months old."来准确表达小猫的年龄。外貌：描述了猫的毛色和体型"It's white and small."，并使用了"It's very cute."来强调其可爱。喜欢的食物：列举了两种食物"It likes drinking milk and eating fish."，通过并列结构展现了猫的饮食喜好。描述生活习惯：使用了两个时间段来描述猫的不同习性："At noon, it likes sleeping in the sun." 和 "At night, it likes sleeping with me together."。结尾表达情感：用"I like it very much."简单直接地表达了对小猫的喜爱。时态：全文采用了现在时，符合描述宠物当前状态的要求。句式：使用了简单句和并列句，如"It's white and small."和"It likes drinking milk and eating fish."，结构清晰。固定搭配：如"likes drinking milk and eating fish"中的"likes doing sth."，和"sleeping with me together"中的"together"作为副词修饰动词，都是地道的英语表达。
考查提纲作文。注意写作内容要完整，符合题目要求，没有遗漏重要信息。使用适当的形容词和动词来描述小猫的特点和习性，使描述更加生动。结尾表达作者对小猫的喜爱，增强了文章的情感色彩。
2．My favourite animal
I like animals very much, but among all the animals I like dogs best, and I have a pet dog. Its name is Beibei. It has long black hair, and its hair is very bright. It has a pair of bright eyes. It is very clever. It often helps me do a lot of things, and it can make me happy when I feel sad. It likes meat very much, but sometimes it eats ice cream. It looks very funny. I like it a lot.
这是一篇命题作文。本文要求按照所给的题目My favourite animal，运用本单元所学的表达方式写一篇英语短文来介绍你最喜爱的动物。写作中要包含所给的两个方面的内容，你最喜欢的动物是什么，和你喜欢它们的原因。文章的句子时态用一般现在时。句子的主语用第三人称单数。文章在书写时语句要通顺，语言要流畅，文章中不要出现语法和拼写错误。
这篇文章按照题目的要求写出自己最喜欢的动物是狗，并且描写了狗的模样和喜欢它的原因。文章使用了常用的句式结构，句式结构简单，容易理解。文章使用了一些短语，例如：a pet dog；long black hair；a pair of；help sb. do sth; a lot of；make+宾语+形容词；ice cream；a lot等。
3．Our favorite animals
Everyone has his /her favorite animal. Now my two friends and I are talking about our favorite animals. Lisa likes cats best. She thinks that they can catch mice and they look very lovely. Dogs are Eric's favorite animals. He thinks that they can do lots of things for people and they are the most popular pets. As for me,
I like horses best. Because they are good at running and they are very beautiful.
这是一篇提示性作文，要求介绍一吉尔的语气介绍一下自己和朋友最喜欢的动物，以及各自动物可爱的地方。三人的宠物及各自的特点以表格的形式告诉了我们，所以直接按照表格描述即可，时态使用一般现在时，人称使用第一人称和第三人称。
文章开门点题，告诉读者每个人都有自己最喜欢的动物，这样就很自然地引出了话题，然后根据表格顺序介绍各自喜欢的动物和特点。文章简短，但是结构合理叙事清晰有条理。在语言运用上很到位，使用了常见的短语，比如talk about；lots of；as for me；be good at等，句子有并列句也有复合句， Now my two friends and I are talking about our favorite animals. 这是一个并列句， She thinks that they can catch mice and they look very lovely. 这是一个宾语从句， Because they are good at running and they are very beautiful. 使用because说明原因，总体上看这是一篇不错的习作。
4． I keep a cat.
My mother bought it for me because I like animals. The cat is white all the body. It looks
very shy. When it first came to our home, it was very afraid of us. Later, it got used to the life. Now, when I come back from school, it always follows me everywhere. It sleeps in our living room at night. Our family members all love it because it is really lovely.
I think animals are our friends. If you keep it, don't give up keeping it easily. If they are homeless, they will live a hard life and do harm to other people.
这是一篇材料作文，要求假设你们学校这个月开展了一项活动叫作“Our Animal Friends”，要求学生踊跃给校英语报投稿，讲述你和动物之间的故事。动笔前要认真审题，深入挖掘题材内涵，注意写作中要包含所给的四个提示，你养的动物是什么，你在哪得到的，你是如何和它相处的以及你对动物的看法。根据所给内容提示可知本文主要用一般现在时，人称主要是第一人称单数和第三人称单数，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题，写作中注意上下文的过渡，要符合逻辑关系，符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇短文根据所给的问题提示将四个方面的内容逐一进行了陈述。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。一些固定短语，如be afraid of；get used to；come back from；give up；do harm to等以及句型结构When it first came to our home, it was very afraid of us. Later, it got used to the life. If you keep it, don't give up keeping it easily. If they are homeless, they will live a hard life and do harm to other people.等运用较为得体，表达比较准确，使文章更加流畅、自然。
5．What a wonderful dog
Maria is a 2-year-old kid—David's grandma. She likes her grandson very much, but she is a little forgetful.
One day, she took her grandson and her dog to watch Damas' square dancing in the park. Suddenly, she wanted to join them and learned to dance. She was so happy that she forgot to take her grandson home. When she arrived home, she noticed that she left her grandson in the park. She hurried to the park to look for
him, and she found that her dog was there with her grandson. What a wonderful dog! He stayed with the kid all the time until his owner came back!
这是一篇命题作文和提示作文。 要求根据下面的内容提示，以“What a wonderful dog”为题写一篇短文。60词以上 ，要求包括提示中所有内容，也可适当发挥，合理使用连接词，使得语句通顺，语意连贯，注意上下文的过渡要符合逻辑关系，符合英语表达习惯，本文主要使用第三人称，一般过去时。
这是一篇命题作文和提示作文。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚，完整，时态运用灵活，准确，一些固定短语，如 a little 有一点；want to do sth.想要做某事；so…that…如此……以至于……；forget to do sth.忘记做某事； look for 寻找；等和句型结构 She was so happy that she forgot to take her grandson home. When she arrived home, she noticed that she left her grandson in the park.What a wonderful dog! 等的运用较为得体，使得文章更加流畅，自然。
6． Last week, I visited Shenzhen Safari Park. There were many tourists in the park. You can drive into the park and see many kinds of animals. The horses and elephants are friendly. You can play with them. I saw some pandas in the park. They are black and white. They are kind and look like bears. They like eating bamboo. I saw some tigers too. They looked unhappy and felt lonely. Perhaps they wanted to return to the forests. Wild animals are getting fewer and fewer, so it's important to protect them.
本文是一篇记叙文，全文要用一般过去时和一般现在时进行描述，重点突出在动物园的所见所闻和感受。文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点，行文间要注意简化描述，用简短的语句代替冗长的语句，在作文完成的时候，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节，写作时，要注意谓语动词形式的变化，写作要点已给出，不可以逐词翻译。
开篇即点明主题，Last week, I visited Shenzhen Safari Park. There were many tourists in the park. 文中适当运用like doing，want to do等非谓语动词，使得语言灵活，语法规则正确，使整篇短文意思连贯，表达流畅。
7．Dear editor,
I am May and I come from Bao'an Middle School. My favorite club is Helping Animals Club. I join Helping Animals Club because I think animals are our friends. However, many of them are in danger. It is important for us to protect them. There are lots of ways to protect them. For example, we can eat less meat in our daily lives and kill fewer wild animals. We can also protect our environment and their homes.
Best wishes,
May
这是一篇应用文，要求根据提示，向Shenzhen Daily的主编写信谈她参加俱乐部的原因和如何保护野生动物的看法 。写作时，注意书信语言的准确性，时态要用一般现在时。
写作时，作文内容全面 ，涵盖要求信息，运用好词好句，如：in danger；ways to do sth.；for example；eat less meat；kill fewer wild animals等，高分句型（1） It is important for us to protect them. 高分句型（2）For example, we can eat less meat in our daily lives and kill fewer wild animals. 符合英语思维逻辑，同时要使用好书面语言，以及一些衔接词,如and, because，however等，文章上下文逻辑关系更为紧密。