Unit 4 No Rules， No Order 单元话题书面表达专练（含参考范文+写作指导）-2024-2025学年六年级英语下册单元重难点高频易错题专练（鲁教版五四学制（2024））

Unit 4 No Rules, No Order
单元话题书面表达专练
一、书面表达
1． 提示: 没有规矩, 不成方圆。自从进入初中以来, 你一定发现我们学校里有各种规则, 请你以"My School Rules"为题介绍学校的几条规则并说说你的看法。
要求: 1. 注意紧扣主题, 意思连贯, 语言通畅, 书写规范。2. 不得使用真实姓名和学校, 如需使用名字, 请用Mike, Gina等英文名, 校名统一使用Guangming Middle School.3. 60词左右。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2． 亲爱的同学们，一转眼你们已加入初中这个温暖的班集体快一年了，班级是让你有归属感的地方，同时也需要同学们遵守规矩，共同维护班级的荣誉。请以"My Class Rules"为题写一篇短文，介绍一下你们班的班规，并谈谈你的看法。
要求：1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；2. 文中不得使用真实姓名和校名，校名统一用Guangming Middle School; 3. 书面表达必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分；4. 抄袭试卷中相关材料的，抄袭部分不给分。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3． 假如你是班长，为了更好地帮助班主任管理班级，请你给班级制订一些教室规则。
要求：
1. 规则要涉及学生的学习习惯、纪律、卫生、同学关系等；
2. 规则不少于5条。
Classroom Rules
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4． 你们学校新建的游泳池将于近期开放， 为了更好地维护它，学校打算从学生中征集意见，请你拟定一些规则，供学校参考。
提示：1. 开放时间……2. 游泳前应该……，游泳时应该……3. 游泳时不应该……
要求：1. 内容包括以上所有提示信息，可适当发挥。2. 60词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数
I'm happy our school swimming pool will open next week. Here are some rules.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5． B. 书面表达无论在家里还是在学校，我们都有很多规则要遵守。请你根据下列提示，以"Rules" 为题写一篇英语短文，给校刊《英语天地》投稿，内容包括: 1. 在家和学校需要遵守的规则；2. 你对这些规则的看法。
作文要求: 1. 不得在作文中出现真实校名和真实姓名；2. 语句连贯，词数60左右。
Rules
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6． 假如你是Clark, 父母对你非常严厉，制定了许多家规，对此你感到很不满意。请根据以下内容给 Dr.Know 写一封信。
每天6:00起床，整理床铺。每天下午5:30前回家。写作业时保持安静，不能吵闹。晚饭 前练习半小时的钢琴。晚饭后洗碗。晚上不能出去与朋友玩耍。上学日晚上不准看电视和玩电脑游戏。周末打扫房间。
Dear Dr . Know,
There are too many rules in my family.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Clark
答案解析部分
1．My School Rules
At Guangming Middle School, we have some important rules to help us grow better. First, we must wear uniforms every day to show unity. Second, students need to keep the classroom clean and quiet during study time. Finally, running in the hallway is not allowed for safety.
I think these rules are necessary. They teach us responsibility and help everyone focus on learning. Although some rules seem strict, they make our school a better place.
考查命题作文，要求以"My School Rules"为题介绍学校的几条规则并说说你的看法。注意合理使用连接词，使得语句通顺，语意连贯，注意上下文的连接要符合逻辑关系，符合英语表达习惯，本文主要使用第一人称，一般现在时。
考查命题作文，注意单词拼写的正确性，语法使用的准确性，时态运用的灵活性，本文可能用到的短语：all kinds of各种各样的，in one' s opinion在某人看来，as well也，listen to 听，try one' s best to do sth尽某人最大的努力做某事，be good for对……有好处，等等。
2．My Class Rules
We have some rules in our class. Let me tell you something about them.
First, we can't be late for class. As students, being on time is very important for us. Second, we can't speak loudly in the class. We must listen to the teachers carefully and take notes seriously so that we can study well. Third, we need to keep the classroom clean and tidy.
Knowing some basic rules is good for our life. Therefore, I don't think the rules are bad for us. All in all, without rules, nothing can be finished. I agree with these rules in my class.
这是一篇命题作文。要求根据所给内容写一篇以"My Class Rules"为题写一篇短文，介绍一下你们班的班规，并谈谈你的看法。写作时应遵循以下步骤：第一步，开篇点题，表明自己班级里有一些班规；第二步，具体介绍这些班规；第三步，阐述自己对这些班规的看法。根据材料内容可知本文主要用一般现在时，写作要点已给出，写作时应注意文章逻辑通顺，书写工整，并突出重点。
这篇文章内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。一些固定短语，如be late for迟到；on time按时；take sth. seriously认真对待某事；be good for对……有好处；all in all总之等运用较为得体，表达比较准确。下列句式增加了文章亮点，使文章更加流畅自然。如：We must listen to the teachers carefully and take notes seriously so that we can study well.（so that引导的结果状语从句）；Knowing some basic rules is good for our life.（动名词短语作主语）。
3．One possible version:
Classroom rules
Here are some classroom rules. I hope you can do as the rules say. In the classroom, we can't be noisy when we are studying. We must keep quiet. We must clean our classroom on time and keep it clean all day. We can't eat or listen to music. We must be friendly to our classmates. We can't fight. I think these rules are good for us. It's best to follow them.
这是一篇提示性作文，这篇初中英语试题的写作思路主要围绕着作为班长如何为班级制定有效的教室规则，以确保班级的学习氛围、纪律、卫生和同学关系都能得到良好的维护。首先，写作应从引入班级规则的目的出发，强调规则的重要性，接着，进入规则的制定部分。根据题目要求，规则应涉及学生的学习习惯、纪律、卫生和同学关系等方面。在写作时，可以逐一列举这些方面的规则，并给出具体的解释或建议。最后，可以再次强调这些规则的重要性，并鼓励同学们共同遵守。这样的写作思路既符合题目的要求，又能够全面、具体地表达出作为班长为班级制定规则的考虑和期望。
这篇范文符合题目的要求，结构清晰，语言准确，能够有效传达出教室规则的重要性和必要性，是一篇优秀的范文。 关于教室规则的范文写得非常清晰且有条理。作者首先明确了这些规则的目的，接着，文中列出了具体的规则，包括学习时应保持安静、及时清洁教室并保持其整洁、禁止在教室内吃东西或听音乐、以及要与同学友好相处、不得打架等。同时运用了一些好句，增添了亮点"I hope you can do as the rules say." 这句话表达了作者对于同学们能够遵守规则的期望，语气恳切。"We must keep our classroom on time and keep it clean all day." 这句话使用了"on time"和"all day"两个短语，强调了清洁教室的及时性和持续性。"We must be friendly to our classmates. We can't fight." 这句话通过对比"友好"和"打架"两个行为，突出了同学之间应该和谐相处的重要性。"It's best to follow them." 这句话简洁明了地呼吁大家遵守规则，语气坚定且易于接受。
4．I'm happy our school swimming pool will open next week. Here are some rules.
We can only go swimming from 5:00 p. m. to 9:30 p. m. from Monday to Friday. We must remember to take a shower and wear a swimming cap before swimming. We mustn't run! Also, we can't eat or drink in the pool. All of us need to follow the rules and we must keep the pool clean.
这是一篇提示作文，话题是为了更好地维护新的游泳池，学校打算从学生中征集意见，请你拟定一些规则。时态主要是一般现在时，人称用第一人称。注意运用情态动词，如can，must，need等；并且注意形容词的使用，如happy，some，clean等；写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的词数，不要太多也不要太少。
作文内容全面，涵盖所有要求信息。运用好词好句，如next week下周； go swimming 去游泳；from...to...从……到……； take a shower 洗淋浴； follow the rules 遵守规则；and连接的并列句 All of us need to follow the rules and we must keep the pool clean. 等；连词and的运用使文章上下文逻辑更加紧密。
5．One possible version:
Rules
There are many rules for me to follow. I think some of them are useful. At home, I must get up early and run for half an hour. Also, I must get to school on time. And I can't run in the classroom.
But I don't like some of them. At home, I have to read books after dinner. I can't go out in the evening. These rules are too strict. On school days, I must wear the school uniform. I don't think it's cool.
这是一篇命题作文。本文要求按照所给的题目结合提示内容完成一篇关于规则的文章。写作中要包含作者在家和学校需要遵守的规则的相关信息，以及作者对这些规则的看法。根据材料内容可知本文要用一般现在时，人称是第一人称，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题，写作中注意上下文的过渡，要符合逻辑关系。
这篇短文列举了作者在家和学校需要遵守的规则，并从两个方面即作者喜欢的和不喜欢的，分别介绍了一些需要遵守的规则。文章条理清晰，表达比较准确。一些句型结构I think some of them are useful.I don't think it's cool.等运用较为得体。还恰当地运用了连接词also, and，but 等，使文章更加流畅自然。
6．Dear Dr. Know,There are too many rules in my family. My parents are strict with me. I'm not happy at home. I have to get up at 6:00 every morning. I must make the bed. I must get home before 5: 30 every afternoon. When I do my homework, I must keep quiet. I can't be noisy. I have to practice playing the piano for half an hour before dinner. After dinner I have to do the dishes. I can't go out with my friends at night. On school nights, I can't watch TV or play computer games. I must clean my room on weekends. Rules, rules, rules! It's terrible. What can I do, Dr, Know
Yours,
Clark
这是一篇材料作文，要求根据以下内容给 Dr.Know 写一封信。写作内容包括一天的具体时间、活动安排。根据内容要求可知本文的主要时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意并列连词的使用和主谓一致问题，写作中要注意上下文的过渡和逻辑，要符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇短文对一天的具体时间、活动安排进行了详细论述。内容全面、详尽，意思连贯，表达清楚，时态和人称的运用灵活准确。其中使用的when引导的时间状语从句等句型使得文章的逻辑性大大增强；使用的make the bed铺床，keep quiet保持安静，practice doing sth.练习做某事等短语增加了文章的可读性。日常进行写作训练注意多运用常见句式和短语，使表达更为流畅。