2025年中考英语热点作文--人与自我专题03
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一、书面表达
1.今年春季开学,学校优化课间活动方案,延长课间活动到15分钟,让孩子们有更多的时间走出教室,身上有汗,眼里有光,在快乐中成长。假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Frank发来邮件,询问你校“阳光大课间”活动的开展情况。请你根据提示内容给他写封回信。邮件内容须包含以下内容:
要求:
1. 格式正确,语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整、规范;
2. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
3. 词数:不少于70。
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【答案】例文
Dear Frank,
I’m glad to receive your email about our school’s Sunshine Break, which lasts for 15 minutes.
It aims to keep students healthy and strong and make our school life colorful by organizing different sports activities during breaks. The activities include running, doing exercises, playing basketball, and more. I think this is a fantastic program. It not only improves our physical health but also benefits our mental health. Moreover, it’s good for the cooperation and communication among students.
I hope you will have the opportunity to experience this activity someday. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 本文是一封电子邮件。
② 时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”。
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏要点。注意行文连贯,逻辑清晰,无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,对收到Frank的邮件表示开心;
第二步,详细介绍课间活动及自己对课间活动的看法;
第三步,希望Frank有机会体验“阳光大课间”。
[亮点词汇]
①lasts for持续
②improves our physical health改善身体健康
③Looking forward to期待
[高分句型]
① I’m glad to receive your email about our school’s Sunshine Break, which lasts for 15 minutes. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
② I hope you will have the opportunity to experience this activity someday. (省略that的宾语从句)
2.在我们的校园生活中,难免碰到一些意外事件,发生事故之后我们应该学会如何解决。有时我们可以自己解决,有时我们需要寻求帮助。请讲述你所经历的一次校园意外事件及妥善解决的方式,并说说你对校园安全的感悟。
要求:词数不少于80,短文中不允许出现真实姓名和校名。
(1)书写工整,卷面整洁;
(2)注意分段,语句通顺,语法正确;
(3)80-120词左右;
(4)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校。
要点:
Word bank
Accidents Feelings/Advice
on a cold morning in the hallways go downstairs suddenly (突然) ...happened when... break the leg have a nosebleed feel sick get hit on... fall down have trouble with /doing play an important role in take good care of follow the rules had better make a difference to It’s meaningful for
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【答案】例文:
My Experience of a Campus Accident
One cold morning, when I was going downstairs in the hallways, an accident happened. Suddenly, I slipped and fell down. I felt very painful and couldn’t stand up. Some classmates saw me and came to help. They took me to the school infirmary.
The doctor checked me carefully and said I was not seriously injured. I was so relieved.
This accident made me realize that campus safety plays an important role in our daily life. We had better follow the rules and be careful. It’s meaningful for us to keep ourselves safe.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态:时态主要用“一般过去时”,穿插“一般现在时”。
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意要点齐全,可适当拓展。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。描述时间、地点、人物、事件。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。按照故事情节的发展的顺序,介绍故事的开端、发展、高潮和结局。
第三步,书写结语。表达“保护我们自身的安全是有意义的”,进行情感升华。
[亮点词汇]
①suddenly忽然
②painful疼痛的
③realize意识到
[高分句型]
①The doctor checked me carefully and said I was not seriously injured. I was so relieved. (宾语从句)
3.本周末有一批外国游客要来动物园参观大熊猫,假如你是他们的导游,请你根据下面表格中的要点提示,写一篇不少于80词的文章来介绍大熊猫。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
特征 黑白相间;可爱友好……
生活习性 住在森林中;一天吃大约10公斤竹子……
生存现状 人类砍伐森林;熊猫宝宝死于疾病……
保护措施 做研究;政府帮助保护熊猫……
Welcome to China! I’m glad to be your guide today. We will see pandas soon. Now let me tell you something about pandas.
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【答案】例文
Welcome to China! I’m glad to be your guide today. We will see pandas soon. Now let me tell you something about pandas.
Pandas are white and black. They are very cute and friendly to people. They feed on bamboo. Adult pandas spend more than 12 hours a day eating about 10 kilos of bamboo. They mainly live in some forests and mountains in Sichuan Province, Gansu Province and Shan’xi Province. Now pandas are becoming fewer and fewer in number. On the one hand, plenty of trees have been cut down by human. On the other hand, panda babies often die from illnesses and do not live very long.
So the Chinese government is thinking about ways to protect them. People build many research bases to care for baby pandas. Some education programs also send people to schools to tell children about the importance of saving pandas. Besides these, the government is also planting more bamboo trees so there will be more forests for pandas to live in.
Let’s protect pandas together.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 本文是一篇材料作文。
② 时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”。
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏要点。注意行文连贯,逻辑清晰,无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接给出的开头,另起一段;
第二步,详细介绍熊猫的相关信息,包括熊猫的特征、生活习性和生存现状;
第三步,介绍人们为保护熊猫采取的措施;
第四步,呼吁大家一起保护熊猫。
[亮点词汇]
①friendly to people对人们友好
②feed on以……为食物
③On the one hand… On the other hand一方面……,另一方面……
④cut down砍伐
⑤die from illnesses死于疾病
[高分句型]
① Adult pandas spend more than 12 hours a day eating about 10 kilos of bamboo. (“spend time doing”结构)
② Now pandas are becoming fewer and fewer in number. (“比较级+and+比较级”结构)
4.我们都知道熊猫是中国的国宝,请根据下面的信息提示以“My favourite animal”为题写一篇英语短文。
内容包括:
1. 有大约1600只熊猫生存在野外,在动物园和研究中心大约有340只。
2. 熊猫生存在中国西南部的森林和大山中,每天吃大约30千克竹子和其他植物。
3. 熊猫产崽少,成活率低,幼崽经常死亡。竹林面积逐渐减少,熊猫正在失去它们的家园。
4. 熊猫是世界自然基金会 (the WWF) 的象征,这种黑白色的动物是世界人们的喜爱。
注意:
1. 80词左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
My favourite animal
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【答案】
My favourite animals are pandas. There are only about 1,600 pandas in the wild today. Zoos and research centers are looking after about 340 pandas.
Pandas live in the forests and mountains of Southwest China. The panda eats about 30 kilos of bamboo a day as well as other plants. Pandas are in danger. They do not have many babies, and baby pandas often die. The situation is getting very difficult. The bamboo forests are getting smaller, so pandas are losing their home.
The panda is the symbol of the WWF. The black and white animal is the favourite of people all over the world.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇以介绍自己最喜欢的动物为主题的书面表达,属于说明文;
②时态:主要为一般现在时;
③提示:围绕熊猫展开,包含了熊猫的数量、栖息地、饮食习惯、生存现状以及其象征意义等要点,在熊猫的生存危机以及受欢迎程度上突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点明最喜欢的动物是熊猫,即“My favourite animals are pandas.”;
第二步,详细介绍熊猫的相关信息:先说明野生和人工饲养的熊猫数量,接着介绍熊猫的栖息地和饮食习惯,然后阐述熊猫面临的生存危机,如幼崽数量少、易死亡以及竹林减少导致栖息地丧失等情况;
第三步,说明熊猫是世界自然基金会 (WWF) 的象征,并且是全世界人们喜爱的动物,强调熊猫的重要地位和受欢迎程度。
[亮点词汇]
①in the wild在野外
②look after照顾,照料
③as well as也,和……一样
[高分句型]
①There are only about 1,600 pandas in the wild today. (there be句型,用于说明存在的数量情况)
②The bamboo forests are getting smaller, so pandas are losing their home. (so引导的结果状语从句,表明因果关系)
5.目前有许多种学生不重视课外阅读,请你根据下表内容写一篇英语短文,对这一现状进行分析并写出你对阅读的看法和打算。词数80左右。
不进行课外阅读的原因 1. 家庭作业太多;2. 没有好的阅读习惯; 3. 大部分时间花在电脑或网络上; 4. 不知道阅读的重要性。
课外阅读的好处 1. 更好地了解世界; 2. 学会如何思考;3. 增长知识;4. 让生活更丰富多彩。
你的打算 ……(至少两点)
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【答案】例文
Nowadays, many students do not pay enough attention to extracurricular reading. There are many reasons for this. Firstly, they have too much homework. Secondly, they lack good reading habits. Thirdly, they spend too much time on computers or the Internet. Lastly, they do not realize the importance of reading.
However, reading has many benefits. It helps us better understand the world, learn how to think, gain knowledge, and make life more colorful.
As for me, I plan to read at least one book every month and set aside 30 minutes each day for reading. I believe that by doing so, I can improve my knowledge and broaden my horizons. Reading is not just a habit; it is a way to enrich our lives.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 本文是一篇材料作文。
② 时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”。
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏要点。注意行文连贯,逻辑清晰,无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明许多学生不重视课外阅读的事实;
第二步,说明不进行课外阅读的原因;
第三步,介绍课外阅读的好处;
第四步,介绍自己打算如何进行课外阅读。
[亮点词汇]
①pay enough attention to足够关注
②lack good reading habits缺少好的阅读习惯
③make life more colorful让生活更多彩
④at least至少
⑤set aside留出
[高分句型]
① I believe that by doing so, I can improve my knowledge and broaden my horizons. (that引导的宾语从句)
6.假设你是李辉,你校英语报“Protect the Environment”专栏面向全校学生征集主题海报及宣传稿,需要用英语向大家宣讲环保的意义及作为中学生怎样保护环境。请你根据以下海报提示,以“Save the Earth: Let’s Do Our Part!”为题,用英语给专栏写一篇稿件。
要求:
1. 包括提示中所有的写作要点;
2. 条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥
3. 稿件中不能出现真实的人名和地名等信息;
4. 词数:100词左右。题目和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
内容提示:
1. Why is it important to protect the environment
2. As a middle school student, what can you do to protect the environment
4. How can we encourage more people to take part in environmental protection
4. Something more about environmental protection.
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【答案】例文
Save the Earth: Let’s Do Our Part!
Protecting the environment is very important because it keeps our planet healthy and safe. If we don’t take care of the Earth, we will face problems like pollution, climate change, and the loss of natural resources.
As a middle school student, I can do many things to help. For example, I can save water by turning off the tap when I brush my teeth. I can also recycle paper, plastic and glass to reduce waste. Another way is to use public transportation or ride a bike instead of asking for a car ride.
To encourage more people to join in, we can organize clean-up activities in our community or school. We can also share information about environmental protection on social media to raise awareness.
Let’s work together to protect our Earth. Every small action counts, and if everyone does their part, we can make a big difference!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文,围绕“环保”这一主题展开;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,包括环保的重要性、中学生如何保护环境、如何鼓励更多人参与环保等,考生需注意不要遗漏这些信息,并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。开头直接点明环保的重要性;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。详细介绍中学生可以采取的环保行动,以及如何鼓励更多人参与环保;
第三步,书写结语。呼吁大家共同努力,保护地球。
[亮点词汇]
①protect the environment保护环境
②save water节约用水
③reduce waste减少浪费
④raise awareness提高意识
⑤make a difference产生影响
[高分句型]
①If we don’t take care of the Earth, we will face problems like pollution, climate change, and the loss of natural resources. (if引导的条件状语从句)
②I can save water by turning off the tap when I brush my teeth. (by引导的方式状语;when引导的时间状语从句)
7.假设你是李华,你的美国笔友Sam即将来中国旅行。请你根据表格内容,给他写一封信,介绍中国的餐桌礼仪。
要求:1. 包含表格内容,告诉对方该做的和不该做的;
2. 不少于80词。开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sam,
You must be excited about coming to China soon! As you know, Chinese culture is totally different from that in America. Let me give you some advice about Chinese table manners.
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I am looking forward to meeting you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Sam,
You must be excited about coming to China soon! As you know, Chinese culture is totally different from that in America. Let me give you some advice about Chinese table manners.
First of all, you should be on time when you are asked to eat a meal. Second, you are supposed to let the old eat first at table because it’s our fine tradition to respect the old. Third, you should eat up the food. It shows your love for the dishes.
Otherwise, you aren’t supposed to stick your chopsticks into your food. It’s rude. Besides, it is quite impolite to speak loudly while eating. You shouldn’t point at anyone with your chopsticks, either.
I hope the advice will be helpful to you.
I am looking forward to meeting you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要求已给出,学生不要遗漏题目中的要点,适当添加细节,条理清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍餐桌礼仪中应该做的事情;
第二步,介绍餐桌礼仪中不应该做的事情;
第三步,表达希望对对方有所帮助。
[亮点词汇]
①be supposed to do应该做某事
②be helpful to sb对某人有用
③point at指向
[高分句型]
Besides, it is quite impolite to speak loudly while eating. (it作形式主语)
8.某中学生英文杂志社正在举办题为“A Place I Have Been to”的征文活动。请你根据下面的思维导图用英语写一篇100词左右的短文,介绍你曾经去过的某个地方,然后向杂志社投稿。
时态:一般现在时和现在完成时
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【答案】例文
A Place I Have Been to
I have been to Kunming. Last summer holiday, I visited there with my parents.
Kunming is the capital city of Yunnan Province. It’s in southwest China and has a population of about 6 million. One great thing about Kunming is that the temperature is almost the same all year round. So you can go whenever you like.
In Kunming, you can have a relaxing holiday by visiting some interesting places like Dianchi, Green Lake Park and so on. What’s more, you can eat many kinds of delicious food, for example, the famous crossing-the-bridge noodles. Each year, thousands of visitors come to Kunming to take a holiday.
All in all, I think Kunming is the most beautiful city in China. If I have time, I will go there again.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态“一般现在时”与“现在完成时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍曾经去过的城市;
第二步,具体介绍所去地的位置和人口、当地的天气以及食物;
第三步,书写结语,表达想要再去一次的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①a population of人口数量为……
②all year round全年
③take a holiday度假
[高分句型]
①One great thing about Kunming is that the temperature is almost the same all year round.(that引导的表语从句)
②All in all, I think Kunming is the most beautiful city in China.(宾语从句)
9.无论是校内还是校外,社会给青少年提供了很多参与志愿活动的机会。同学们积极参加志愿者服务,从中培养乐于助人,服务社会的意识。请以“Giving Is Receiving”为题,结合自己平时的志愿者爱心行动和感受用英文写一篇短文。
写作要求:
1. 介绍喜欢参加志愿服务的原因;
2. 介绍参与过的志愿服务内容;
3. 参与志愿服务的感受。
文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。词数100左右。
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【答案】例文
Giving Is Receiving
I am fond of volunteering because it brings me a sense of achievement and allows me to contribute to society. It makes me feel that I can make a difference in others’ lives.
I have been involved in several volunteer activities. I once joined a reading-for-the-blind program, where I read books aloud to visually-impaired people. Also, I took part in a community clean-up event, helping to make our neighborhood more beautiful.
Volunteering is not just about giving. When I see the gratitude in the eyes of those I help, I know that I have received something precious as well. It has broadened my horizons and taught me the true meaning of kindness.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”、“一般过去时”和“现在完成时”;
提示:文章围绕题目要求,分别阐述喜欢参加志愿服务的原因、参与过的服务内容以及参与后的感受,没有遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,介绍自己喜欢志愿服务的原因;
第二步,详细介绍参与的两项志愿活动;
第三步,书写结语,表达自己对志愿服务的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①be fond of喜欢
②be involved in参与
③visually-impaired视力受损的
[高分句型]
①I am fond of volunteering because it brings me a sense of achievement and allows me to contribute to society. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②I once joined a reading-for-the-blind program, where I read books aloud to visually-impaired people. (where引导的定语从句)
10.以“My Experiences in Sichuan”为题,根据下列英语写一篇短文描述你的经历。
提示:
1、曾经去过四川很多次;
2、四川在中国的西南部,这里风景优美,每年都有很多游客到此旅游;
3、去过峨眉山、 九寨沟等景区;
4、品尝了很多传统美食;
5、还没有看过川剧,打算下次再去。
提示词语:places of interest, Mount Emei , Jiuzhaigou,
sunrise (日出) , Sichuan Opera , take photos
提示问题:
1. Where have you been
2. What have you done there
3. How did you feel
要求:
(1)包含所给要点,可适当发;
(2)条理清楚,语句通顺,行文连贯;
(3)词数:80词左右。
My Experiences in Sichuan
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【答案】例文:
My Experiences in Sichuan
I have been to Sichuan many times. Located in the southwest of China, Sichuan is famous for its beautiful scenery and attracts many tourists every year.
During my visits, I explored several places of interest, such as Mount Emei and Jiuzhaigou. At Mount Emei, I watched the sunrise and took many photos. In Jiuzhaigou, I was amazed by the colorful lakes and waterfalls. I also enjoyed many traditional Sichuan dishes, which were delicious and spicy. However, I haven’t had the chance to watch Sichuan Opera yet, but I plan to see it on my next trip.
My experiences in Sichuan were unforgettable, and I can’t wait to visit it again!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:以 “一般过去时” 为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并适当添加细节,突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍四川旅行的经历;
第二步,抒发感想。
[亮点词汇]
①located in 位于
②is famous for 因……而有名
③can’t wait to 迫不及待
[高分句型]
I also enjoyed many traditional Sichuan dishes, which were delicious and spicy. (定语从句)
11.在当今世界,很多野生动物都濒临灭绝。在我国,老虎是重点保护动物。请根据以下表格所提供的信息,以“Tigers are in danger”为题, 写一篇英文短文, 号召大家行动起来保护动物。
外貌 大而强壮;黑条纹(dark stripes) ……
特点 跑得快;擅长捕捉其他动物
生存现状 人类捕杀:没有足够的食物……
拯救措施 减少森林砍伐……
要求:
1.文中必须包含所有要点,不能逐条翻译,可拓展思路,适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实的班级与人名;
3. 条理清楚、字迹工整,词数80——100。
Tigers are in danger
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【答案】例文
Tigers are in danger
Tigers are the largest living cats in the world. They are big and strong. They have bright eyes. They have orange fur with dark stripes. They look so powerful!
Tigers can run very fast. They are good at hunting other animals for food. People think them as the king of the forest.
Now tigers are in danger because hunters are hunting them for their fur and bones. Also, tigers do not have enough food to eat. And people always cut down many trees and kill tigers so that get their fur. We should do something to help them. We should make some nature reserves for them. And we should not cut forests. We should not wear tiger furs or use their bones for medicine.
I hope tigers can live peacefully on earth with people.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,首先介绍老虎的外貌和特点;
第二步,其次介绍老虎的生存现状;
第三步,介绍拯救措施。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at擅长
②be in danger处于危险中
③cut down砍倒
[高分句型]
①Now tigers are in danger because hunters are hunting them for their fur and bones.(because引导的原因状语从句)
②And people always cut down many trees and kill tigers so that get their fur.(so that引导的目的状语从句)
12.假如你是Lily,你的好友Alice来信说她最近感觉很疲劳,很紧张,很容易生气。请你给Alice写一封回信,从睡眠、饮食和运动等方面给她提一些建议。
1. 要点:1)Alice告诉了你有关她的什么信息;
2)你打算给她一些什么样的建议。
2. 要求:1)文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名;
2)词数100词左右 (开头已和结尾给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Alice,
I’m sorry to hear that you have some problems. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Lily
【答案】例文
Dear Alice,
I’m sorry to hear that you have some problems. You mentioned feeling tired, nervous and getting angry easily recently. It must be really tough for you.
Here are some suggestions to help you out. Firstly, make sure you get enough sleep. Lack of sleep can cause all these problems. Go to bed early and create a quiet environment. Secondly, pay attention to your diet. Have more fruits, vegetables and whole grains. They can provide you with essential nutrients. Avoid junk food and too much caffeine. Finally, exercise regularly. It can reduce stress and make you feel energetic. You can go for a jog, do yoga or take a dance class.
I hope these suggestions will be helpful. Take care of yourself and I believe you’ll feel better soon.
Yours,
Lily
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:一般现在时为主;
③提示:写作要点和开头已给出,考试应注意要求中的内容,充实细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头表明收到来信并对Alice的状况表示同情,引出主题;
第二步,详细给出从睡眠、饮食和运动方面的建议;
第三步,结尾表达希望建议有用,祝福Alice尽快好转。
[亮点词汇]
①tough艰难的
②lack of缺少
③pay attention to注意
④energetic精力充沛的
[高分句型]
① Firstly, make sure you get enough sleep. (祈使句)
② I hope these suggestions will be helpful. (省略that的宾语从句)
13.我们无法帮助每个人,但每个人都能帮助到某些人。假如你是学校志愿者姜琦,下周末你将参加学校组织的志愿者活动,你想把此事分享给你的同学们并在英语口语课上进行发言。请你根据下面要点提示写一篇发言稿,向同学们介绍志愿活动的相关情况,号召大家都能积极参加活动,并谈谈你对志愿者工作的看法。
写作要点:
1. 很高兴能够参加志愿者活动。
2. 倡议同学们参加活动:
(1) 星期六在敬老院帮助老人
(2) 星期日去人民公园……
(3) 号召更多的人参加
3. 谈谈你对志愿者工作的看法。
写作要求:
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名
2. 可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯
3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰
4. 至少 80 词
Dear classmates,
I am a volunteer in our school.
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【答案】例文:
Dear classmates,
I am a volunteer in our school. I’m excited to join the volunteer activities next weekend and want to invite you all to participate!
On Saturday, we will visit the nursing home to help the elderly. We can chat with them, clean their rooms, and even perform songs to bring them joy. On Sunday, we’ll go to People’s Park to clean up rubbish and plant flowers, making the park more beautiful. Volunteering is a chance to help others and improve our community.
I believe volunteering is meaningful. It teaches us kindness and teamwork, and every small action can make a big difference. Let’s work together and encourage more people to join us!
Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇发言稿;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。发言稿需要包含对志愿者活动的介绍、号召同学们参与以及个人对志愿者工作的看法。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表达自己参加志愿活动的心情;
第二步,具体介绍志愿活动的时间、地点及内容,并且号召同学们参加活动;
第三步,最后谈论自己对志愿活动的看法。
[亮点词汇]
① chat with them和他们聊天
② clean up清理
③ make a big difference带来很大改变
[高分句型]
① It teaches us kindness and teamwork, and every small action can make a big difference.(and连接两个并列句)
② Let’s work together and encourage more people to join us!(祈使句)
14.你最喜爱的动物是什么?你和它之间发生了哪些故事呢?请根据下面的写作要点和要求,用英语写一篇短文,和大家分享一下吧。
写作要点:
1. 你最喜爱的动物是什么?
2. 它有什么样的外貌及性格特点?
3. 你们之间有着怎样难忘的故事?
写作要求:
1. 文中须包含上述所有要点,语句通顺,意思连贯,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现考生姓名、校名或地名等真实信息;
3. 词数60左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Today I want to share my favourite animal with you.
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【答案】例文
Today I want to share my favourite animal with you.
It is my grandfather’s pet—a parrot. Her name is Lucky. I gave her the name because it’s a symbol of good luck. Lucky is 3 years old. She is green and yellow, and she looks extremely beautiful. Lucky is kind of lazy. Her favourite food is rice. She likes playing with me and imitating my words. She is also good at singing. She always sings to me when I come back from school.
Lucky is not only a pet, but also my friend.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章应该包括所列3个方面的要点,要适当补充,使文章内容充实;行文时多用第三人称,尽量多使用短语和句型;写作中适当使用连接词,使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题:分享最喜欢的动物;
第二步,具体介绍鹦鹉Lucky的基本信息和特点;
第三步,升华主题,强调Lucky的双重角色:宠物与朋友。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at 擅长
②not only … but also … 不但……而且……
[高分句型]
①I gave her the name because it’s a symbol of good luck. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②She always sings to me when I come back from school. (when引导的时间状语从句)
15.近期,“玉兔二号”月球车在月球表面留下了月饼形状的图案,引发了广泛关注。你所在班级就“太空探索是否值得”进行了讨论。请根据下表信息,用英语写一篇演讲稿,介绍讨论情况并表达你的个人观点。
观点 理由
30%反对 1.离我们的生活遥远
2.投入成本高
70%赞同 1.探索宇宙的奥秘
2.有助于科技进步
你的观点 ……
注意:
(1)词数100左右;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:月球车lunar rover
Is Space Exploration Worth It
Hello, everyone!
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【答案】例文:
Is Space Exploration Worth It
Hello, everyone! Recently, “Yutu-2” lunar rover left a mooncake-shaped pattern on the moon, which has attracted wide attention. In our class, we had a discussion about whether space exploration is worth it.
Thirty percent of my classmates are against it. They think space is too far away from our daily life and the cost is too high. However, seventy percent, including me, support it. We believe exploring the mysteries of the universe is exciting and it helps push scientific and technological progress.
Personally, I think space exploration is valuable. It broadens our horizons and may bring benefits to humanity in the future. So, let’s keep exploring!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已明确给出,包括两方观点(反对与赞同)及其理由,以及个人观点。考生应确保覆盖所有要点,并适当添加细节来支持各自的观点,同时清晰表达个人的立场。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题。通过“Hello, everyone!”开场,并提出讨论的主题“Is Space Exploration Worth It ”;
第二步,介绍讨论情况。先介绍反对方的观点(30%反对)及其理由(离我们的生活遥远、投入成本高),然后介绍赞同方的观点(70%赞同)及其理由(探索宇宙的奥秘、有助于科技进步);
第三步,表达个人观点。在介绍了两方的观点后,明确提出自己的看法,并给出相应的理由或支持点。
[亮点词汇]
①lunar rover 月球车
②mooncake-shaped pattern 月饼形状的图案
③space exploration 太空探索
④be against 反对
⑤scientific and technological progress 科技进步
[高分句型]
①Recently, “Yutu-2” lunar rover left a mooncake-shaped pattern on the moon, which has attracted wide attention.(非限制性定语从句)
②Thirty percent of my classmates are against it, while seventy percent, including me, support it.(while表示对比,连接两个并列的句子)
③We believe exploring the mysteries of the universe is exciting and it helps push scientific and technological progress.(动名词作主语)
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