2025年牛津译林版英语中考专题复习课件：专题复习：书面表达(共53张PPT)

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2025年英语中考复习
专题复习：书面表达
聚焦中考
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熟悉中考英语书面表达的各种题型，如补全对话、看图填词、看图写话等。了解这些题型的考试目的和要求，比如测试的主要内容通常是以日常生活为背景，进行简洁的会话或写作。
在日常学习中，要注意句型与对话的学习，积极参加听说训练的教学活动，达到会话相当熟练的程度。同时，要注意归纳和应用常在情景中使用的习惯用语、套语，做到脱口而出，应对如流
核心知识点
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掌握解题技巧：
在解题时，要注意看清题目的要求与提供的场景，确定需要使用哪些习惯用语，哪种时态，以及根据词数限制选择最佳的表达方式。表达要正确，注意英美人常用的习惯用语，避免随意翻译。同时，要注意口语与书面语的区别及一些特殊的表达方法。
四步骤法：
认真审题，包括文字说明、图表、短文提供的资料和信息，以及参考词汇、字数要求等，准确把握人物关系和故事情节，理解主题大意，审清文体，确定格式，确定人称、主体时态。列出要点，结合提示信息，把涉及的所有写作要点逐条列出，编写要点提纲，组织语言。完成写作时，语言要纯正地道，避免母语的影响；用多种表达方式，避免重复和呆板；使用熟悉的短语、句式，提高准确率。
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考点1 “做法建议”类作文写作指南
分析近几年中考的书面表达题型中，“做法建议”类的话题比较热门，是命题人青睐的选题方向。
通过全面分析和总结发现，该话题主要侧重以下六个方面：人物行为方面；学习方面；人际方面；环保方面；安全方面；健康方面。
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1. 开头句
学习篇
（1）I am very glad to hear that you will come back to China and study in my school next term. Here are some suggestions for you.
（2）I’m sorry to know that you are having some problems now. I’d like to give you some suggestions.
（3） In order to have more chances to practice and improve English, we are involved in many kinds of group work and pair work activities in English classes.
（4）A great number of students can’t finish their tasks, which leads to bad results and makes them less interested in their study. How can we solve the problem Here are some suggestions.
（5）So I would like to suggest that everyone should borrow more books and read good books.
（6）There is no endless time for us to spend. So how can we make good use of time to make our study and life better
文明城市篇
（1）Nowadays we are trying our best to make Xining become a civilized city. As students, we must know what we should do and what we shouldn’t do.
（2）As citizens of Green City, we should not only protect our environment but also follow the traffic rules.
（3）As junior students, we have also made some contributions to the civilized Suqian.
（4）Being a teenager of Lianyungang, what should I do to help build a civilized city
（5）Here are my ideas about how to create a harmonious community.
（6）Here I’d like to tell you something that will make your school life more comfortable and wonderful.
（7）So how can we help protect our city’s environment and make it a greener place to live Here are some small things we all can do and should do.
（8）With the development of the society, more and more e-products are used in our daily life, making us live conveniently and comfortably.
健康生活篇
（1）As we know, keeping in a good mood is good for our health and study. Here are some suggestions for you.
（2）As teenagers, it’s very important for us to keep safe. But sometimes accidents may happen around us. So how can we keep safe
（3）Summer holiday is coming. And swimming safety becomes a big problem. So I’d like to give you some advice to keep off the danger.
（4）Everybody, men or women, young or old, should have a good habit of doing sports. So should I, and so I do.
2. 中间句
人际交流篇
（1）If your parents get angry, you should try to communicate with them about it.
（2）What’s more, you should be polite to everyone, which will make you get on well with others anytime.
（3）Besides, if someone doesn’t want to exchange his or her ideas, maybe he or she may lose the chances to know more new methods about learning English.
文明城市篇
（1）Do remember no matter where we go, be sure not to throw litter everywhere.
（2）To make it more and more beautiful, I don’t litter everywhere to make the school environment cleaner.
（3）Firstly, when we are on the way to school from home, we should follow the traffic lights and rules to avoid the traffic accidents.
（4）In this way, we can be a virtue teenager and help to build our city into a civilized one.
健康生活篇
（1）To keep yourself safe, you mustn’t go somewhere dangerous.
（2）Last but not least, when you are surfing the Internet at home, you should be careful to make friends online to keep yourself safe.
（3）In the school, I take an active part in P.E. lessons. Sometimes we play football and volleyball. Sometimes we play basketball, table tennis or badminton. Football is my favorite sport.
3. 结尾句
（1）I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you.
（2）It’s our duty to do what we can do to make our city more beautiful. I believe if everyone makes an effort, Xining will be one of the most beautiful cities in our country.
（3）All in all, we will try our best to do what we can do to make ourselves and Suqian city more civilized.
（4）Everyone should make a contribution to the building of a harmonious community.
（5）If you follow the advice that I have mentioned above, you will be successful.
（6）Only when we spend it properly, can we make our life meaningful and colorful.
（7）Last but not least, the government can make some rules even laws to make people realize the seriousness of e-waste.
★重点聚焦
现在越来越多的人通过运动保持健康，但是运动安全也不容小觑。请你给校报的英语栏目English Corner投稿，号召同学们重视运动安全。
写作要点：
①运动安全的现状和重要性；
②运动安全的建议（着装、热身、规则……）。
写作要求：
①内容必须积极问上，并包含所有要点；
②结构完整，语句流畅，意思清楚、连贯；
③使用正确和较丰富的词汇和语法结构，书写规范；
④文中不得透露个人信息，否则不予评分；
⑤词数80左右（短文首句已给出，不计入总词数）。
Now more and more people do sports to keep healthy. _____
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具体写作思路如下:
1. 批注审题（5定审题）
（1）定主题：运动安全；
（2）定人称：第一人称；
（3）定文体：说明文；
（4）定时态：一般现在时；
（5）定要点：陈述运动安全的现状和重要性；从着装、热身规则等方面具体给出运动安全的建议。
2. 列提纲写句子 （注意人称、时态及其他语法规则）
开篇：引出话题——运动安全的现状及重要性。
越来越多的人通过做运动来保持健康（keep healthy）。
Now more and more people do sports to keep healthy __________.(已给出)
正文：运动安全的建议
着装：穿运动服和运动鞋（sports clothes and shoes）。
We should _________________.
We’d better not wear jeans.
热身：运动前热身（warm up）。
We must ___________________.
规则：体育课上遵守规则（follow rules） 。
We should __________________.
运动安全很重要（important）。
Sports safety is _______________.
结尾：呼应主题。
3. 写成篇章（注意衔接连贯）
【高分范文——亮点点拨】
①句使用了if 引导的条件状语从句来衔接上下文；
②句使用了which引导的定语从句修饰先行词“sports clothes and shoes”使文章内容更加丰富；
③句使用了when引导的时间状语从句衔接上文。
●现学现用
假如你是李华，你的英国朋友珍妮（Jenny）因视力减退感到不安，向你倾诉。请根据以下提示，用英语写一封电子邮件给她，谈谈你在保护视力方面的一些做法，并提出建议。
写作要点：
①近视原因：阅读坏习惯、使用手机时间过长……；
②提出建议：户外活动、做眼保健操……。
写作要求：
①文中必须包括以上内容，可适当发挥，增加细节，以使行文连贯；
②文中不能出现真实的校名、人名和其他真实信息；
③词数不少于80（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：eyesight视力 mobile phone手机
Dear Jenny,
I’m sorry to know that your eyesight is getting weaker. _____________
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Yours,
Li Hua
例文
Dear Jenny,
I’m sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker. I’d like to share with you some ways of protecting eyesight in my daily life.
At school, I often go out of the classroom to play with my classmates or do physical exercise during the breaks. In my free time, I also try hard to avoid using the mobile phone or computer. You know, the light they give off is harmful to our eyes. Besides, doing eye exercises plays an important role in relaxing my tired eyes. Lastly, I usually have my eyes examined every term to make sure my eyes stay healthy.
I hope you’ll find my ways helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本文属于书信类作文，要求我们以李华的身份，给自己的英国笔友珍妮写信，向他介绍一下你在保护视力方面的做法。通过审题可知，这篇短文应使用一般现在时，用第一人称来叙述。内容应包括：首先讲述题目中迈克的视力减退问题，并引出文章的主题；然后具体介绍自己在保护视力方面的做法，这一部分是文章的主体，可以按照题目中所列的内容进行介绍，并对第四条进行补充；最后提出自己的希望或祝愿。写作时应注意：短文应按内容表达的需要，分成三段，每一段一个主题；内容应包括题目中的所有要点，不能遗漏；根据表达需要，增加细节内容，使文章更加充实、丰富。其次应注意文章的表达，不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译，句式应符合英语的表达习惯。句子结构应完整，以简单句为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式和结构的使用，提升作文档次。同时语句之间应使用恰当的衔接成分，使行文连贯，表达流畅。
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中考实战分析
A （2022·金华）假设你是李华，你的英国朋友（Jack）来信说他对“中国红”很感兴趣，想了解“中国红”在中国人日常生活中的体现。请你根据以下表格信息写一封回信介绍“中国红”。
写作要求：
①词数70左右；
②可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
③短文的开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数；
④文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。
参考词汇：
受欢迎的popular 代表stand for 幸福happiness
好运good luck 春节the Spring Festival 剪纸 paper cuts
灯笼lanterns 红包red packets
Dear Jack,
It’s great to receive your letter. Knowing that you’re interested in Chinese red, I’m writing to tell you something about it. ____________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I truly hope my letter will help you understand Chinese red better.
Yours,
Li Hua
例文
Dear Jack,
It’s great to receive your letter. I’m writing to tell you something about Chinese red. Chinese red, considered as the symbolic color of China, is extremely popular with Chinese people. It usually represents happiness, and we believe that it can bring us good luck.
People in our country attach such great importance to Chinese red that they use many red objects in some important events. For instance, in a wedding, you can see that the bride is in a red wedding dress and the wedding room is decorated in red. What’s more, the houses are also filled with red paper cuts, lanterns and Chinese Knots during the Spring Festival. Children will get red packets for best wishes as well. Obviously, Chinese red plays a significant role and enjoys the highest popularity in China.
I truly hope my letter will help you understand Chinese red better.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本文属于书信类作文，向你的英国朋友介绍“中国红”。包括地位、代表、使用场所以及表达方式。注意时态的准确运用，灵活运用所学的单词、短语以及句型。切记不要遗漏要点。
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（2023·苏州）假设你是李华，某英语网站正在举办以“感恩父母”为主题的征文活动。请根据表格中的内容用英文写一篇题为“A Letter to My Parents”的短文，用于投稿。
写作要求：
①词数70左右；
②可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
③短文的开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数；
④文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。
参考词汇：
感谢某人……thank sb. for... 养育raise 做饭cook food
生病be sick 信任trust 关心care about 个人感受personal feeling
处于困难中be in trouble 健康的 health
A Letter to My Parents
Dear Mum and Dad,
I’m writing to express my thanks for all your care and love.
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Thanks again for everything you have done for me.
Love,
Li Hua
例文
A Letter to My Parents
Dear Mum and Dad,
I’m writing to express my thanks for all your care and love.
First of all, I want to thank you for raising me. I thank you for looking after me every day and taking care of me when I’m sick. I would also like to thank you for your trust and care about my personal feelings. You encouraged me when I was in trouble. So I have to study hard to repay you. At the same time, I wish you keep healthy and happy.
Thanks again for everything you have done for me.
Love,
Li Hua
【解析】
本文属于话题类作文，要求根据题目 “A Letter to My Parents”和提示的内容完成作文。写作时，要注意语句通顺，语意连贯，紧扣要点；注意句子之间的连接与过渡，并注意涵盖所给提示。
短文主要以第一人称来行文，时态以一般现在时为主。文章开头和结尾已给出，也给出了相关要点的词汇，在写作中要综合运用所学知识，适当运用连词、副词等进行过渡。同时要注意保证语法正确，避免出现单词拼写错误。
（2023·泉州）假设你是李华，你们学校正在开展环保公益活动。你的英国笔友（Tony）想了解活动的有关情况。请你用英文给他回复一封邮件。
写作要点：①周末到社区发表保护环境的演讲；
②到山上植树；
③垃圾分类投放；
④收集可回收利用的废品。
写作要求：①词数70左右；
②可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
③邮件的开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数；
④文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。
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参考词汇：
社区community 发表演讲give speeches
保护环境protect the environment 植树plant trees 垃圾rubbish
把……分成……divide...into... 收集collect 回收利用recycle 废品waste
Dear Tony,
I’m very glad that you are interested in our environment-protecting activity. Now let me tell you something about it.
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We cannot hope for rapid change, but every little bit helps!
With my best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
例文
Dear Tony,
I’m very glad that you are interested in our environment-protecting activity. Now let me tell you something about it.
We made a speech on environmental protection in the community at the weekend so that more people could understand the importance of environmental protection. We went to the hill in groups to plant trees.
I think the more trees there are, the fresher our air will be. Waste sorting plays an important role in protecting the environment. We started with small things every day to sort waste. In order to save resources, we also collected recyclable waste.
We cannot hope for rapid change, but every little bit helps!
With my best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本文属于书信类作文。要求将题目要求叙述清楚并进行拓展。
本文综合运用一般现在时和一般过去时。在 写作时第一段点题；第二段详述活动的内容；第 三段提出希望。写作时注意语句通顺、语法正确、语意完整。
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（2024·张家界）假设你是李雷，是建华中学一名九年级学生。市里将举行一年一度的中学生英语演讲比赛，今年演讲题目为“My Dream”。请你根据以下提示，写一篇英语演讲稿为此做准备。
写作要点：
①What do you want to be
②Why do you want to be a/an…
③How are you going to be a /an…
写作要求：
①需包含上述三个要点，可适当发挥；
②语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范，卷面整洁；
③词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数；
④文中不能出现“李雷”和“建华中学”以外的人名、校名或地名。
My Dream
Hello, everyone! I’m glad to be here to share my dream with you.____
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例文
My Dream
Hello, everyone! I’m glad to be here to share my dream with you.
Of course it is true that different persons have different dreams. A dream is like a light tower showing the way when one is sailing on the sea. Without it one may not know where he goes or even gets lost in life, so have a dream and that really matters.
What is my dream When I was a little child I wanted to be a great judge and protect the rights of citizens. But as time goes by things have changed and so has my dream. Now I’ve decided to become a doctor which can help reduce pain in patients or even save their lives. I believe the job is helpful and worth doing. But how to make it come true.
I know it is really a big challenge for me though. Whatever it is I will work hard and go all out for it. From now on I will spend more time learning my lessons so that I can go to my ideal university. At the same time, I am going to expose myself to books on medicine. I am sure I will achieve my dream. As a saying goes: If you can dream it you can do it.
Thank you!
【解析】
本文属于提纲类作文。需要把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义。不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词和句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要富于变化。平时除了加强词汇积累以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以达到事半功倍的效果。
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（2023·武汉）做家务是学生应尽的义务。假设你是李雷，是建华中学一名九年级学生，请以“My Experience of Doing Housework”为题写一篇英语小短文，介绍你平时做家务的情况及感受。
写作要点：
①你做家务的原因；
②你平时做的家务（至少举一个例子）；
③你对做家务的感受。
写作要求：
①包含上述三个要点，可适当发挥；
②语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范，卷面整洁；
③文中不能出现“李雷”和“建华中学”以外的人名、校名或地名；
④词数80左右。
My Experience of Doing Housework
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例文
My Experience of Doing Housework
As a family member, it’s our duty to help our parents do housework.
Last Sunday, when my parents went out shopping to buy food for lunch, I began to clean my house. First, I swept the floor and wiped the table. Then, I collected all the books and other things and put them in place. Finally, I took all the rubbish out. When my parents came back, they were surprised and praised me. I felt so happy at that time, so I keep doing housework, such as sweeping the floor or tidying the room.
Sharing the housework with our parents means showing love to them, so I suggest all of us should take action from now on.
【解析】
本文属于材料类作文，要求围绕做家务的经历写一篇短文。
本文主要采用一般现在时和一般过去时，分为三段式：第一段说明自己做家务的原因；第二段介绍自己曾经做家务的经历以及自己常做哪些家务；最后一段发表自己对做家务的看法。写作时注意保持主谓一致，逻辑连贯，应做到无语法和标点错误。
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（2023·银川）假如你是李华，在过去的三年，英语老师教会了你很多英语知识和技能，开拓了你的视野。你感激英语老师的付出，决定将来继续学好并用好英语。请你结合以下提示和要求，用英语写一篇短文。
写作要点：
①你的英语老师（外貌、性格......）
②你学会了(唱英文歌，欣赏英文电影；用英语讲小故事；用英语进行简单交流......）
③感恩和决心(感恩老师的教导；继续努力学习英语；用英语向世界讲述中国故事......)
写作要求：
①文章必须包括所给提示内容，可展开思路，适当发挥；
②文中不能出现真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息；
③80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
I’m Li Hua. My English teacher is __________________________
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例文
I’m Li Hua. My English teacher is Ms. Zhang. She is a tall and outgoing lady who is very patient with all of us.
Ms. Zhang has taught me English for 3 years. I like her interesting classes. Learning English helps me become more open-minded. Now I can talk with others in English fluently and read some English books. I can also tell some stories in English. Besides, enjoying English songs and movies has become one of my hobbies.
Ms. Zhang is an excellent teacher, to whom I want to say thanks. I decide to learn more English in the future, and try my best to tell the story of China in English to the world.
【解析】
本文属于材料类作文。根据要点提示，介绍一下你的英语老师，描述你所学会的东西，同时感激英语老师的付出，决定将来继续学好并用好英语。
本文时态以一般现在时为主。人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。叙述时可适当运用短语句型或从句，使文章更加出彩。写作时确保语句通顺，无单词拼写和语法错误。
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