2025中考英语备考必背话题作文专题07 - 旅游与交通学习案（含参考范文+写作详解，人教新目标版适用）

2025中考备考必背话题作文专题07 - 旅游与交通
简介：
命题视角与设计意图
本专题以“旅游与交通”为主题，精心设计了10个贴近学生生活、具有教育意义的作文题目，旨在全面考查学生的英语语言运用能力和综合素质。题目涵盖学校旅行、家庭旅游、交通方式等多个方面，既关注学生的日常生活体验，又引导他们思考如何通过旅游与交通增长见识、了解文化。
题目设计与能力考查
每个题目都经过反复推敲，旨在考查学生在不同情境下的写作能力和思维深度。例如，“Our school trip”要求学生描述一次学校旅行的经历，考查学生的叙事能力和细节描写能力；“A trip to Mount Lu”则需要学生介绍旅行的方式、活动和感受，考查学生的信息整合能力和语言表达能力。
例文示范与指导意义
提供的例文语言规范、结构严谨、表达流畅，具有较高的示范价值。例文涵盖了多种体裁和风格，如记叙文、说明文等，能够满足不同题目的写作需求。通过对例文的深入分析和学习，学生可以更好地理解命题意图，掌握各类话题作文的写作技巧和方法，提高写作水平和应试能力。
实际应用与备考价值
本专题适用于2025年中考备考的学生，帮助他们在复习过程中有针对性地提高英语写作水平。同时，也适用于英语教师作为教学资源，用于课堂上的写作指导和练习。通过本专题的训练，学生能够积累丰富的写作素材和表达方式，提升语言运用能力和综合素质，为中考英语写作部分奠定坚实的基础。
一、书面表达
1．请根据下面的提示内容，以“Our school trip”为题写一篇英语短文，描述你们去农场郊游时的经历。
内容包括：上周六你们去阳光农场（Sunshine Farm）郊游。上午你们体验了挤牛奶和喂鸡，还摘了新鲜的蔬菜。下午你们在农场散步，和农场主聊天。你们玩得很开心。
要求：
1.词数70左右；
2.文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。
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【答案】例文
Our school trip
Last Saturday we had a great school trip.
We went to Sunshine Farm by bike. In the morning, we milked cows and fed chickens. We also went to the field to pick some fresh vegetables. It was interesting. In the afternoon, we went for a walk on the farm. We talked with the farmer and he told us something about his farm.
We learned a lot and had a great time on the farm. We were tired but happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，整体说明上周末去阳光农场郊游的情况；
第二步，描述上午和下午的活动；
第三步，最后表达对于这次郊游的感受。
[亮点词汇]
① milk cows 挤牛奶
② feed chickens 喂鸡
③ go for a walk 散步
[高分句型]
We talked with the farmer and he told us something about his farm. （并列句）
2．请你根据下面提示，以“A trip to Mount Lu”为题写一篇英语短文，介绍一下你们班上周末去庐山旅游的情况。
写作要点：
1. How did you get to Mount Lu
2. What did you do there
3. Did you have a good time
要求：
1.短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3.词数70左右。
A trip to Mount Lu
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【答案】例文
A trip to Mount Lu
Last weekend, all the teachers and students in my class visited Mount Lu.
We met at the school gate at 7:00 on Saturday morning. We took some food and drinks with us. When everyone arrived, we went to Mount Lu by train. On the train, we talked and sang songs. After about two hours, we got to the foot of it. Then we started to climb the mountain. We saw the sea of clouds there. Along the way, we took quite a lot of photos.
All in all, we had a good time there.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意要点齐全，且表述清晰符合逻辑。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。用“上周末，我们班所有的老师和学生参观了庐山。”引出下文。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“交通方式、事件和感受”三个方面作出详细描述。
第三步，书写结语。表达“我们玩的很开心”，进行情感升华。
[亮点词汇]
①by train搭乘火车
②the sea of clouds云海
③all in all总的来说
[高分句型]
When everyone arrived, we went to Mount Lu by train.(when引导的时间状语从句)
3．假如今年暑假你和家人一起去了桂林旅游，请你根据下面的要点用英语介绍一下这次旅游的情况。
要点：
1. What was the weather like
2. Where did you visit
3. What food did you eat
4. How did you feel about the trip
要求：
1.内容必须包含所给的信息，可适当发挥，使行文连贯；
2.语篇完整，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等个人信息：
4.词数70左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词汇: Elephant Trunk Hill (象鼻山), Lijiang River (漓江), Yangshuo, Guilin rice noodles
Now let me tell you something about my trip.
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【答案】例文：
Now let me tell you something about my trip. This summer vacation, I went to Guilin with my family. The weather was sunny and hot. First, we went to Elephant Trunk Hill. It was wonderful. After that, we visited Lijiang River. The water was clean and cool. Then we visited Yangshuo, too. It was beautiful. We took a lot of photos and had a lot of fun there. We also ate Guilin rice noodles. They were very delicious. We stayed there for three days. We had a wonderful time.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般过去时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍去旅游的地点、时间、天气、食物。
第二步，详细介绍在景点的所作所为和感受。
[亮点词汇]
①tell sb. about sth.关于某事告诉某人
②take a lot of photos照许多照片
③have a wonderful time过得很愉快
[高分句型]
①The water was clean and cool.（and并列连接两个形容词）
②We took a lot of photos and had a lot of fun.（and并列连接两个动词短语）
4．假如你是Mike，你正在哈尔滨度假，你的好朋友们正在海南度假。请你根据下面写作要点用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你和你的好朋友们是如何度过假期的。
内容包括：
1. 天气如何？
2. 你正在做什么？
3. 你觉得这次假期如何？
要求：
1. 短文应包括上述所有的内容，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3. 词数70左右。
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【答案】例文
Hello! My name is Mike. My friends and I are taking a vacation in different places.
My family and I are having a great time visiting Harbin. The weather is cold and snowy here. We’re wearing hats and warm coats. I am so happy to see the white world. My father and I are skating. My mother is building a snowman. We are having fun.
My friends are in Hainan now. It’s warm and sunny there. They are having fun playing on the beach. Some are swimming in the sea. Some are playing beach volleyball. They are having a good time too.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“现在进行时”；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己和朋友是如何度过假期的，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，表述清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题，介绍自己和朋友在不同的地方度假；
第二步，介绍自己的度假情况，包括地点、天气、进行的活动及感受；
第三步，介绍朋友们度假的情况。
[亮点词汇]
①have a great time玩得开心
②on the beach在沙滩上
③take a vacation度假
[高分句型]
I am so happy to see the white world. (不定式作原因状语)
5．假如你们一家人正在海南度假，请根据下面提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍海南的天气和你们正在做的事情。
写作要点：
1. What’s the weather like in Hainan 2. What are you doing there 3. How do you feel
要求：
1.短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；3.词数70左右。
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【答案】例文
I am on a vacation in Hainan with my family.
The weather here is warm and sunny. At this time, some children are swimming happily with their parents. Now we are having a good time on the beach. My sister and I are playing volleyball with other children. My mother is swimming in the sea. She looks cool. My father is taking photos here and there. He enjoys his photos.
How happy we are!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，描述作者一家在海南度假的情景。
②时态：时态主要为“现在进行时”，描述当前正在进行的动作和状态。
③提示：需涵盖海南的天气、作者一家正在进行的活动及个人的感受，要包含所有写作要点，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，明确要介绍的是在海南度假时当地的天气情况，以及作者一家正在做的事情和个人感受，确保涵盖全部提示要点。
第二步，依次描述海南的天气特点，比如温暖阳光充足；接着详细阐述一家人各自正在进行的活动。
[亮点词汇]
①on a vacation 度假
②have a good time 玩得开心
③look cool 看起来很酷
[高分句型]
①The weather here is warm and sunny.（使用主系表结构简洁描述天气状况）
②My sister and I are playing volleyball with other children.（现在进行时描述正在进行的动作）
③How happy we are!（使用感叹句表达强烈的情感 ）
6．假如你是李华，你的笔友 David 给你写了一封邮件，询问关于你的一些情况。请你根据其邮件内容，写一封回信。
Dear Li Hua,
How’s it going I heard you have many hobbies. What are you good at What club do you want to join in your school Is your school far from home Could you please tell me how far is it How do you get to school How long does it take
Hope to hear from you soon. Best wishes!
Yours,
David
具体要求：
1.字数不少于60个单词；
2.语言通顺流畅，可适当发挥；
3.开头结尾已经给出，请接着写，但不计入总词数。
Dear David,
I am glad to get your email. Let me tell you something about myself.
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Yours
Li Hua
【答案】范文
Dear David,
I am glad to get your email. Let me tell you something about myself.
I have many hobbies, such as playing basketball, reading books, and listening to music. I am good at playing basketball, and I spend a lot of time practicing it. In school, I want to join the basketball club because it can help me improve my skills and make new friends.
My school is not far from home. It is about 3 kilometers away. I usually take the bus to school, and it takes me about 20 minutes. Sometimes, I ride my bike if the weather is fine.
I hope to hear from you soon. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件。
② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据David的邮件内容，回信需要涵盖以下信息：兴趣爱好、擅长的领域、想加入的社团、学校与家的距离、上学方式及所需时间。注意语言通顺流畅，适当添加细节，避免遗漏信息。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的兴趣爱好和擅长的领域；
第二步，说明自己想加入的社团；
第三步，描述学校与家的距离及上学方式；
第四步，总结并表达对David的期待。
[亮点词汇]
① be good at 擅长
② take the bus 乘公交车
③ spend time doing sth. 花时间做某事
[高分句型]
① I am good at playing basketball, and I spend a lot of time practicing it.（并列句）
② I want to join the basketball club because it can help me improve my skills.（because引导的原因状语从句）
③ Sometimes, I ride my bike if the weather is fine.（if引导的条件状语从句）
7．安全是每个人成长中最需要关注的话题。作为一名即将毕业的九年级学生，请你根据图中所提示的几个方面，以“Safety First”为题，用英语写一篇短文给即将入学的七年级新生一些安全建议。
注意：1. 条理清晰，语意连贯，句式规范，字迹工整；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息；
3. 词数：80~100。
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【答案】
Safety First
It is very important for us teenagers to be safe from danger both at home and at school. There are many things to be paid attention to.
First of all, when you are at school, always remember to wait in line because you are living in groups. Also, you should avoid playing silly tricks on others, especially when you are having after-school activities. Besides, the traffic is getting busier and worse nowadays. Both car drivers and walkers should pay more attention to the traffic signs and other rules. What’s more, you should also eat healthy food at school and at home. Eat fewer snacks and exercise more. Last but not least, it is also a good idea to be friendly to others and stay with some friends wherever you go.
Please always keep this in mind: safety first.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。分别从在校、交通、食品以及其它方面给出具体的安全建议。
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①pay attention to注意……
②play tricks on sb捉弄某人
③avoid doing sth避免做某事
④be friendly to sb对某人友好
[高分句型]
①First of all, when you are at school, always remember to wait in line because you are living in groups. (when引导的时间状语从句；because引导的原因状语从句)
②It is very important for us teenagers to be safe from danger both at home and at school. (It作形式主语)
8．紧张而充实的初中生活即将结束。假设你想要利用今年的暑假和父母一起去云南旅游，了解当地文化，增长见闻，放松身心。请你根据以下提示，写一篇关于云南旅游的文章。
1. 出行方式；2. 旅行活动；3. 你的感悟。
要求：1. 语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；2. 词数：80左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
After the high school entrance examination, I will travel to Yunnan with my parents.
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【答案】范文：
After the high school entrance examination, I will travel to Yunnan with my parents.
First of all, we’ll fly to Kunming. It’s famous for the Lake Dian which is a good place to enjoy the fresh air. Then two days later, we’ll take a train to Lijiang. We can enjoy the wonderful scenery on the way and meet people from different places.
By the way, we’ll stay in Lijiang for four days. The weather there is comfortable. What’s more, there are lots of special cuisines which are cheap and delicious.
Last but not least, travelling is one of the ways for studying. I want to visit different places to learn about different culture one day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，引出话题；
第二步，介绍出行方式以及旅行活动；
第三步，介绍自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①fly to飞往
②be famous for…以……而闻名
③take a train坐火车
④last but not least最后但同样重要的是
[高分句型]
It’s famous for the Lake Dian which is a good place to enjoy the fresh air. (which引导定语从句)
9．假如你是李华，请根据美国交换生Mike的邮件进行回复。
Dear Li Hua, How’s everything going I can’t wait to live and study with you next month. I really want to know something. Can you help me How do you usually go to school How long does it take Are there any interesting activities or clubs in your school What about your school rules I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Mike
要求：
(1) 内容必须包括以上所有信息提示，可适当发挥；
(2) 词数：80字左右，邮件的格式和开头已给出，不计入总字数；
(3) 不得出现任何的真实信息 (姓名、校名、地名等)。
Dear Mike,
It’s nice to get your email.
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I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mike,
It’s nice to get your email. Let me share my school life with you.
I usually go to school by bus. It takes me about twenty minutes to get to school. My school life is colorful. There are many different kinds of activities and clubs in our school. Sometimes I play basketball with my classmates after school. I also join the English club every Tuesday because I’m interested in English.
There are also many school rules. We can’t be late for class and we have to wear school uniforms. Besides, we must finish homework on time. But our school makes rules to help us.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，回复邮件，根据邮件内容回答上学方式及所需时间、学校活动、俱乐部等；
第二步，介绍几个校规；
第三步，期待回信并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①share sth with sb与某人分享某物
②be interested in sth对某事感兴趣
③be later for class上课迟到
④finish homework on time按时完成作业
[高分句型]
①It takes me about twenty minutes to get to school. (it固定句型)
②I also join the English club every Tuesday because I’m interested in English. (because引导的原因状语从句)
10．科技创新是社会生产力发展的源泉。假如你是李华，你上周参观了未来汽车设计展览会。请根据以下提示写一篇短文，介绍你在展会上看到的一款新型未来汽车。
新型未来汽车
优势 环保、安全、易操控
特点 1.使用水作为动力来源，时速可达300km2.司机可以用大脑驾驶汽车，不用手脚3.遇到交通拥堵，可以飞到空中
观点 你对这款汽车的评价
要求：
1.短文须包含以上所有要点，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
3.词数70个左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Last week, I saw a kind of new car in a car show.
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【答案】例文
Last week, I saw a kind of new car in a car show. It is good for the environment. It is easy and safe to drive, too. This kind of car uses water to power it. It can run at a speed of 300 kilometers an hour. The driver can drive the car with his brain. He doesn’t need to use his hands or feet. When the traffic is heavy, it can fly up to the sky. What an amazing car it is!
In my opinion, this kind of car can make our life more convenient and better in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“表格提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，整体说明新型汽车的优势；
第二步，具体阐述新型汽车特点；
第三步，最后表达你的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①at a speed of以……速度
②fly up to飞起来
③in my opinion在我看来
[高分句型]
①When the traffic is heavy, it can fly up to the sky.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②What an amazing car it is!（感叹句）