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2025中考备考必背话题作文专题11 - 计划,愿望与情感
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主题深度与广度兼具:围绕 “计划,愿望与情感” 主题,不仅涉及个人学习、生活计划和对未来的憧憬,如新学期计划、高中生活规划,还涵盖家庭、校园、社会生活中的情感体验,像感恩老师同学、感受父母之爱、分享幸福经历等。此外,部分题目引导学生关注社会文化,如弘扬中国传统文化,培养学生跨文化交际意识和综合素质,符合中考对学生知识储备和思维能力的考查方向。
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一、书面表达
1.同学们,寒假愉快而又充实地结束了,你们也迎来了新的学期。为了激励大家在新学期合理规划自己的学习和生活,我校英文广播站开展征文活动。假如你是李华,请以“Plans for new term”为题写一篇英语短文投稿,谈一谈你新学期的计划吧!内容包括:
1.新学期的愿望;
2.新学期的计划 (学习、生活、活动等方面);
3.你的期待。
注意:
1.词数为60词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.内容必须包含所给要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称;
参考词汇:make progress (取得进步),take exercise (锻炼身体),after-school activities (课外活动),enjoy (v.喜欢)
Plans for new term
Hello, everyone. As we all know, plans are very important.
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【答案】例文:
Plans for new term
Hello, everyone. As we all know, plans are very important.
In the new term, I hope to make great progress in my studies. To achieve this, I’ll review lessons regularly and read more books. I believe that reading various books can broaden my horizons. In daily life, I plan to take exercise three times a week to keep healthy. What’s more, I’ll actively join in after-school activities like the English club, which provides a good chance for me to practice speaking English. I’m looking forward to a meaningful and enjoyable new term.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏信息,考生结合自身经历,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出主题——新学期计划;
第二步,介绍新学期计划,包括:学习、生活和活动三个方面;
第三步,最后表达对新学期的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①as we all know众所周知
②make great progress in在……方面取得巨大进步
③broaden my horizons开阔我的眼界
[高分句型]
①I’ll actively join in after-school activities like the English club, which provides a good chance for me to practice speaking English. (which引导的定语从句)
②I believe that reading various books can broaden my horizons. (that引导的宾语从句)
2.新学期开始了,欢迎同学们又回到了学校。在新学期里,你有什么打算吗?请你从学习、锻炼、爱好、与父母的关系或交友等方面谈谈你的新学期的决心。
要求:
1. 语句通顺,语义连贯,可适当发挥。
2. 词数80个词左右。
New term is coming. To improve my life, I’m going to make some New Term’s resolutions.
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【答案】例文
New term is coming. To improve my life, I’m going to make some New Term’s resolutions. I’m going to study hard to get good grades. I want to be better. And I’m not going to eat junk food because it is bad for my health. I want to eat more fruit and vegetables. To keep healthy, I will get lots of exercise such as running and playing basketball. Then I decide to take up a new hobby. I like music very much so I’m going to learn to play the piano. I love my parents very much. I plan to do more housework to make them have more time to relax. And I’m going to make more friends. These are my resolutions and I hope I can keep them.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文为一篇说明文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般将来时”;
③提示:提示内容已给出,注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作目的——介绍新学期的决心;
第二步,从“学习、锻炼、爱好、与父母的关系或交友”等方面谈谈你的新学期的决心;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①study hard努力学习
②keep healthy保持健康
③take up开始从事
④make friends交朋友
[高分句型]
And I’m not going to eat junk food because it is bad for my health. (because引导的原因状语从句)
3.假如你叫李华,你的笔友Mike来信询问你的寒假计划。请结合以下提示告诉他你的寒假安排与计划。
提示:
1. 每天坚持运动,健康饮食;
2. 举办一次家庭聚会,做美味的食物庆祝春节;
3. 制定一些计划,为新学期做准备;
4. 请至少补充一条自己的想法。
要求:
1. 短文内容必须包括所有要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
3. 词数80左右。
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【答案】例文
Dear Mike,
I’m excited to share my winter vacation plans with you!
First, I will exercise every day and maintain a healthy diet to stay fit. Second, I’m planning a family gathering to celebrate the Spring Festival, where we’ll cook delicious food together. Third, I’ll make some study plans to prepare for the new semester. Additionally, I want to read at least two books to broaden my knowledge. I’m looking forward to a productive and enjoyable holiday!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:一般现在时与一般将来时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并适当添加细节,突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己的寒假计划;
第二步,表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①share with与……分享
②healthy diet健康的饮食
③stay fit保持健康
[高分句型]
Second, I’m planning a family gathering to celebrate the Spring Festival, where we’ll cook delicious food together.(定语从句)
4.假如你是沈程,初中生活即将结束,你所向往的高中生活即将来临。现在老师让你代表你校毕业生做毕业演讲。请你根据以下信息,用英文写一篇演讲稿。
写作要点:
1.感谢老师给予机会发言;
2.对初中学习生活的回顾;
(1)难忘多彩的学校生活
(2)感谢大家的帮助
3.畅想一下自己对未来高中生活的规划。
写作要求:
1.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。
3.字迹工整、语言精炼、表达准确、条理清晰。
4.至少80词。
Dear teachers and classmates,
I’m Shen Cheng. It’s my great honor to stand here. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you for your attention.
【答案】例文
Dear teachers and classmates,
I’m Shen Cheng. It’s my great honor to stand here. Thanks for my teacher giving me this chance.
It has been three years since we came to the beautiful school. I will never forget colorful school life. Our school is very beautiful. We have colorful activities every term. Our teachers always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. We have learned a lot and made great progress during the last three years. I am thankful to my teachers and students.
In the future, I will study hard and realize my dream as soon as possible.
That’s all. Thank you for your attention.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态为“现在完成时、一般现在时和一般将来时”;
③提示:根据提示内容进行写作,可适当增添细节,使内容充实,行文连贯,并突出重点写作。
[写作步骤]
第一步,感谢老师给予机会发言;
第二步,回顾自己的初中生活;
第三步,表达自己对未来的规划。
[亮点词汇]
①try to do sth尽力做某事
②make great progress取得巨大进步
③as soon as possible尽快
[高分句型]
It has been three years since we came to the beautiful school. (since引导的时间状语从句)
5.假设你是李华,你所在的学校将举办短视频创作大赛,目的是弘扬中国文化,你也想参加大赛。请你用英语在San的视频下方评论区给他留言,请根据下面的思维导图完成你的写作。
作文要求:(1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;(2)不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现真实的校名、地名和姓名;(3)词数80左右。作文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Li Hua,
Hi! After reading your story, ___________________
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【答案】例文
Li Hua,
Hi! After reading your story, I am proud of what you have done to spread Chinese culture. And I also want to do something for it, so I decide to take part in our school’s short video competition.
The theme of my video will be Paper Cutting because it’s one of the most traditional Chinese art forms. It is not only beautiful but also very useful. The paper is folded and cut by hand. The most common pictures are flowers and animals. During the Spring Festival, they are put on windows, doors and walls as symbols of good luck.
However, I find it difficult to make a good video on my own. I really hope that you can offer me some advice. I am looking forward to your reply.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,为评论区留言写作;
② 时态:时态以一般现在时为主;
③ 提示:写作主题已给出,需根据思维导图内容提示完成留言,适当拓展信息,使文章更连贯,内容更丰富。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表达对San视频的欣赏,并点明自己也想参加短视频创作大赛的意图;
第二步,说明参赛目的并简要描述自己计划创作的内容;
第三步,表达对San的期待,希望他也能参与或支持。
[亮点词汇]
① be proud of以……为傲
② take part in参加
③ not only…but also…不仅……而且……
④ on one’s own靠自己
⑤ look forward to期待
[高分句型]
① The theme of my video will be Paper Cutting because it’s one of the most traditional Chinese art forms.(原因状语从句)
② During the Spring Festival, they are put on windows, doors and walls as symbols of good luck.(被动语态)
③ I really hope that you can offer me some advice.(宾语从句)
6.亲爱的同学们,紧张忙碌的初三生活即将结束,丰富多彩的暑假就要来临。怎样安排好暑假生活,过一个充实而有意义的暑假呢?请根据下文提示,写一下你的暑假计划吧!
暑假计划
1.早睡早起,健康饮食,锻炼身体;
2.坚持读书,发展兴趣,适当放松;
3.勤做家务,关爱他人,服务社区;
4.……(自主发挥,至少两点)
注意事项:
1.词数90左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息.
Summer plans
The summer holiday is coming. Here’s my plan for it.
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I think if I carry out this plan, I will have a colourful and meaningful summer holiday.
【答案】例文
Summer plans
The summer holiday is coming. Here’s my plan for it.
First, I will keep a healthy lifestyle by going to bed early and getting up early. I’ll eat more vegetables and fruits, and exercise every day. Second, I plan to read books for an hour daily and practice my hobby, like drawing. I’ll also relax by listening to music. Third, I want to help my parents with housework and volunteer at the community library. Besides, I will prepare for senior high school by reviewing math and English. Finally, I hope to spend time with friends, such as hiking or visiting museums.
I think if I carry out this plan, I will have a colourful and meaningful summer holiday.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般将来时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图;
第二步,具体介绍自己的暑假计划;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①keep a healthy lifestyle 保持健康的生活方式
②plan to do sth 计划做某事
③prepare for 为……做准备
④such as 例如
[高分句型]
①Third, I want to help my parents with housework and volunteer at the community library.(并列结构)
②Besides, I will prepare for senior high school by reviewing math and English.(动名词作宾语)
7.新的一年,文中学子心怀梦想,蓄力生长,朝着全新的目标扬帆起航。假如你是Joe,请你根据下面表格中的信息谈一谈自己和家人的新年计划。
父亲 加强锻炼,找一份更好的工作,挣更多的钱
母亲 学唱歌跳舞,学做更多好吃的饭菜
我(Joe) 想成为一名篮球运动员,每天练习打篮球;努力学习,取得好成绩
妹妹 想成为一名歌手,打算上声乐课;少吃垃圾食品,多吃水果蔬菜;和同学处理好关系,成为一名好的倾诉者。
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【答案】
The new year is coming, and my family and I have some plans. First, my father wants to exercise more, find a better job and make more money. Then, my mother plans to learn singing and dancing, and she also wants to cook more delicious meals. As for me, I want to be a basketball player, so I will practice playing basketball every day. I will also study hard to get good grades. Finally, my sister hopes to become a singer. She is going to take vocal lessons. She decides to eat less junk food and have more fruits and vegetables. Besides, she will try to get along well with classmates and be a good listener. I believe that my family and I can achieve our goals if we work hard.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:主要为一般将来时态;
③提示:根据表格中的提示信息,介绍自己一家人的新年计划,不要遗漏要点,可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,引出关于新年计划的主题;
第二步,按照表格内容,具体阐述每个人的新年计划;
第三步,书写结语,表明期待和愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①make money赚钱
②plan to do sth.计划去做某事
③As for至于
④get along well with和……相处融洽
[高分句型]
①I believe that my family and I can achieve our goals if we work hard. (宾语从句、条件状语从句)
8.幸福是获得成功,是给予,是成长……你校英语校报正在开展以“幸福”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李辉,请你用英文,以“Happiness in My Life”为题,写一篇短文投稿,表达你对幸福的正确理解。
提示:
1. 你对幸福的理解;
2. 描述一件令你感到幸福的事情 (需要交代时间、地点、过程与感受);
3. 针对此事发表简单的看法和感想。
要求:
1. 语意连贯、层次清晰;
2. 词数70左右。
Happiness in My Life
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【答案】例文
Happiness in My Life
Happiness is important in our lives. In fact, I think happiness springs from love in our hearts.
I’ll never forget an experience. Once, I had a bad mark in a maths exam. I was nervous and afraid to meet my parents. But when I got back home, my parents knew what happened, and they said to me, “It doesn’t matter. Remember we’ll always be beside you when you need help. We believe you can do better next time.” This touched me greatly and I decided to work harder. At last, I made great progress.
I feel happy. Whenever I’m in trouble, I can feel my parents’ love. I want to be a good child and the pride of my parents.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般过去时”;
③提示:文章应该包括3个方面的提示要点,要适当补充,使文章内容充实;行文时多用第一人称,尽量多使用短语和句型;写作中适当使用连接词,使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点明主题,阐述幸福在生活中的重要性,并表明自己对幸福的理解;
第二步,讲述具体事例;
第三步,书写总结,表达愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①spring from起源于
②make great progress取得巨大的进步
[高分句型]
①Whenever I’m in trouble, I can feel my parents’ love. (whenever引导的状语从句)
②We believe you can do better next time. (宾语从句)
9.爱他人先爱己,学会取悦自己也是非常重要的。心情能影响人的身体健康。最近很多网友在一些英文网站论坛上讨论如何拥有好心情,并发表了自己的观点。请你以“How to Be in a Good Mood”为题,根据提示并适当发挥,写出自己的相关看法,词数80左右。
内容提示:
1.保持好心情的重要性;
2.你是怎样让自己拥有好心情的。
参考词汇:sports, communication, volunteer...
How to Be in a Good Mood
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【答案】例文
How to Be in a Good Mood
It’s important for us to have a good mood, because moods can affect people’s health. Here are some suggestions about how to be in a good mood.
First, we can do sports, because it will make us healthy and happy. Second, travelling is a good way of relaxing and staying in a good mood. Third, we can do something meaningful like reading or volunteering. We can get a strong feeling of satisfaction when we learn a lot or hear thanks from others. Fourth, talking to others, especially our friends, can help us calm down and feel easy. Also, hanging out to see a film also makes us feel joyful.
All in all, when you are in a bad mood, just go out to enjoy the beauty of nature or try something that can make you calm, or find someone you trust to talk with to release your anxiety or sadness.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:主要是“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据写作要点,介绍如何保持好心情。注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍好心情的重要性,引出下文具体建议;
第二步,具体介绍如何保持心情;
第三步,总结全文,让大家保持良好心情。
[亮点词汇]
①like doing sth喜欢做某事
②talk with与……聊天
③all in all总之
[高分句型]
①It’s important for us to have a good mood, because moods can affect people’s health.(It固定句型)
②Here are some suggestions about how to be in a good mood. (倒装句)
10.我们的生活中处处充满着爱,有父母的爱,有老师的爱,有同学的爱,有朋友的爱……请以“Love Around Me(我身边的爱)”为题,写一篇短文。内容要点如下:
爱你的人 爱的表现
父母 为你做早餐;送你上学……
老师 传授知识;照顾你……
同学 一起学习;和睦相处……
朋友 在网上交流;分享快乐与烦恼……
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【答案】范文:
Love around me
There is lots of love around me in my everyday life. Every day I can receive love from my parents, my teachers, my classmates and my friends. In the morning, my lovely mother cooks delicious food for me. Then my father drives me to school. At school all the teachers not only look after me well but also teach me lots of useful knowledge. My dear classmates and I study together happily, getting on well with each other. I chat online with friends in my spare time. They often share my pleasure and trouble. I often feel happy and excited when I get love from them. I make a decision to study hard and make great progress. Here, I should say to them, “Thank you for all your love.”
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据表格内容进行写作,可适当增添细节,以使行文连贯,表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明自己身边有很多“爱”;
第二步,分别具体介绍爱自己的人以及爱的表现;
第三步,书写结语,表达对这些人的感恩。
[亮点词汇]
①look after照顾
②get on well with和……友好相处
③not only…but also…不但……而且……
④in one’s spare time在某人的空闲时间
⑤make great progress取得巨大进步
[高分句型]
①There is lots of love around me in my everyday life. (There be句型)
②I often feel happy and excited when I get love from them. (when引导的时间状语从句)