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2025中考备考必背话题作文专题14 - 畅想未来
简介:
这份文档围绕 “畅想未来” 主题精心编制,为中考英语写作备考提供了全面且实用的资源,深度契合中考英语写作的考查趋势与要求。
从命题角度来看,“畅想未来” 这一主题极具时代性和开放性,能有效考查学生的想象力、逻辑思维能力以及英语语言表达能力。它鼓励学生突破现实的局限,对未来生活、职业、科技发展等方面进行大胆设想和描述,不仅符合中考英语注重考查学生综合素养的导向,还能激发学生的创新思维。
文档中的题目类型丰富多样,涵盖材料作文、征文、演讲稿、发言稿等多种体裁。不同体裁的题目为学生提供了多样化的写作情境,有助于学生熟悉中考英语写作的各种题型,提升应对不同写作任务的能力。例如,以 “The life in the future” 为题的材料作文,要求学生全面想象未来生活的各个方面,锻炼学生构建完整文章框架和描述复杂场景的能力;而 “My Dream Life in 20 Years” 的演讲稿,则更侧重于考查学生在特定场合下,清晰、流畅地表达观点和情感的能力。
题目难度层次分明,从 70 - 80 词的基础写作,到 100 词左右需要更深入思考和表达的题目,满足了不同水平学生的学习需求。基础题目着重考查学生对简单要点的描述和基本语法的运用,帮助学生打下坚实的写作基础;而难度较高的题目则要求学生综合运用复杂的语法结构、丰富的词汇以及合理的逻辑推理,对未来进行深入探讨和分析,培养学生的高阶写作能力。
在内容方面,题目涉及未来生活的多个领域,如未来的职业、居住环境、交通出行、科技应用等,引导学生关注社会发展和科技进步对生活的影响。同时,部分题目要求学生结合自身的兴趣和理想,阐述为实现未来目标所做的准备,使学生能够将个人的梦想与未来的发展紧密结合,增强写作的真实性和感染力。
每个题目都配有详细的写作指导,包括总体分析、写作步骤、亮点词汇和高分句型,帮助学生明确写作思路,掌握写作技巧,积累优秀的表达方式。这些指导不仅有助于学生在考试中取得优异成绩,更能提升学生的英语写作水平和综合素养,为学生的未来发展奠定坚实的基础。
一、书面表达
1.随着科学的进步,社会的发展,未来的生活将会变成什么样子呢?请以“The life in the future”为题写一篇文章,按下列提示完成。
1. 想象一下未来生活会是什么样子;
2. 具体介绍一下未来的生活:很多事情都由电脑和机器人完成。例如:料理家务、购物、看病,孩子们通过网络把课堂搬到家里,人们可以活到200岁等;
3. 为了未来美好的的生活,我们现在应该怎么做?80词左右。
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【答案】例文
The life in the future
In the future, life will be very different from what it is today. With the development of science and society, many things will change for the better.
Imagine a world where computers and robots do most of the work. They will take care of our houses, do the shopping, and even help us see doctors. Children won’t need to go to school. They can study at home through the Internet. What’s more, because of medical advances, people may live to be 200 years old!
To enjoy such a wonderful life in the future, we need to work hard now. We should study science and technology to make these dreams come true. At the same time, we must learn to use technology wisely and protect our environment. Only in this way can we ensure a bright future for ourselves and generations to come.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:主要采用“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章需围绕三个核心点展开:对未来生活的想象、具体描述未来生活场景、以及当前为实现未来美好生活应采取的行动。考生应确保覆盖所有提示要点,同时保持逻辑清晰,内容连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。开篇即提出主题,以此引出对未来生活的探讨。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。首先,概述未来生活的总体想象;接着,详细介绍未来的生活场景;
第三步,书写结语。强调当前行动的重要性,提出对未来美好生活的展望。
[亮点词汇]
①be different from与……不同
②for the better向更好的方向发展
③take care of照顾
④medical advances医学进步
[高分句型]
Imagine a world where computers and robots do most of the work. (定语从句)
2.党的二十大报告提出:到2035年美丽中国建设目标基本实现。为展示对未来美好生活的憧憬,学校英语校刊正在开展“My life in 2035”的征文活动。请你围绕下图的三个问题,用英文写一篇短文投稿。
注意:
1. 根据上图所给提示,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
3. 词数80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My life in 2035
Hello, everyone. I’d like to share what my life will be like in 2035.
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【答案】例文
My life in 2035
Hello, everyone. I’d like to share what my life will be like in 2035.
I think I will be a computer programmer in 2035, because I am interested in computer science. And I will work in Shanghai, because there will be more advanced technology and more job opportunities.
At home, I will have a robot to help with the housework, so I will have more free time. When I am free, I will do more exercise to keep healthy. Also, I will go travelling to relax. One day I will even go to Hong Kong for my holiday.
I believe that my life in 2035 will be fulfilling and wonderful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本题是一篇材料作文;
②时态:本文用一般将来时;
③提示:畅想并且描述自己在2035年的生活,需要遵照所给要求,信息覆盖全面,适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,问候,表达自己想和大家分享2035年的生活的意愿,引出下文;
第二步,描述自己在2035年的工作和工作地点,注意细节充分,三观正确;
第三步,描述自己在2035年如何度过空闲时间,注意表达准确;
第四步,表达自己对2035年生活的期待,总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in…对……感兴趣
②advanced technology先进的技术
③go travelling去旅行
[高分句型]
①I think I will be a computer programmer in 2035, because I am interested in computer science.(原因状语从句)
②When I am free, I will do more exercise to keep healthy.(时间状语从句)
3.人生需精心规划,方可铸就美好未来。参考导图信息写一篇英语短文,预想十年后的自己,再讲讲追梦打算,踏实奔赴梦想。
要求:
1. 必须包含所有导图信息,可适当发挥,词数不少于70词;
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名和地名。
My future
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【答案】例文:
My future
Only by making a good plan for life can we reach a wonderful future. I dream to be a football player. In ten years, I will live in Beijing and I will play for a football club. As a football player, I will practice hard for the games. I will have a good relationship with my partners and make friends with them. I will live in a small apartment by myself. On weekends, I will go to the places of interest to learn more about the history of China. In order to achieve my dream, I am going to spend more time playing football. I am going to a football school to learn how to play football well. In a word, I will try my best to make my dream come true.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本题是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般将来时”;
③提示:根据导图信息,介绍十年后的自己,不能遗漏信息,可适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己十年后的生活,包括工作、居住地、空闲时间的活动等;
第二步,介绍自己将会如何实现自己的梦想;
第三步,书写结语,表达自己实现梦想的决心。
[亮点词汇]
①have a good relationship 保持良好的关系
②by oneself 独自
③the places of interest 名胜古迹
[高分句型]
①Only by making a good plan for life can we reach a wonderful future.(倒装句)
②In a word, I will try my best to make my dream come true.(动词不定式表目的)
4.假设你是 Susan,本周你校要举行一场有关畅想未来的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下思维导图,以“My Dream Life in 20 Years”为题,写一篇英语演讲稿。
写作要求:
(1) 思维导图中的四块内容为必写内容,每块内容可根据行文需求进行增减。
(2) 词数80词左右,开头已经给出,不计入总词数;
(3) 文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名等信息。
Hello everyone:
My speech topic is “My Dream Life in 20 Years” _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Hello everyone:
My speech topic is “My Dream Life in 20 Years”. My life in 20 years will be easy. I think I will be an engineer and work at home. I will live in the countryside, because the environment there is clean and beautiful. Then I will live with my parents, and maybe I will have a child of my own. We will have our own farm. And we will plant different kinds of fruits. In my free time, I will have a trip to other planets with my family or friends. And I will look for renewable resources on other planets. What’s more, I will have a new friend—a robot. She will clean the house for me and cook me my favorite food.
I think my life in 20 years will be more comfortable than it is now. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态以“一般将来时为主”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏提示中的要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己未来的职业、生活和业余活动。
第二步,总结自己的未来生活。
[亮点词汇]
①different kinds of不同种类的
②In my free time在我业余时间
③look for寻找
[高分句型]
①I will live in the countryside, because the environment there is clean and beautiful. (because引导原因状语从句)
②I think my life in 20 years will be more comfortable than it is now. (省略that的宾语从句)
5.某中学英语报正在征稿,请结合本单元所学内容及自己的想象,以“My dream home” (人称:第一人称 时态:一般现在时) 为题,写一篇英语短文投稿。词数80左右 (开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
语篇类型:应用文
My dream home
My dream home is very big. It’s in a quiet town.
Step 1 谋篇布局指导
第一段:开篇点题
My dream home is... It’s in... / It lies in...
第二段:文章主体
①There are... in my dream home.
②It has two floors./ There are two floors.
③There is... on the ground floor.
④On the first floor, there is...
第三段:归纳总结
①I love my dream home and hope to have a house like this some day.
②I will have lots of fun/ have a good time in my dream home.
Step 2 高阶表达应用
1. A big kitchen and a dining room are on the ground floor. (用there be句型升格)
2. I love my dream home. I hope to have a house like this some day. (用and进行升格)
【答案】 例文:
My dream home
My dream home is very big. It’s in a quiet town.
It has two floors, and it is a building with a garden and a swimming pool. The garden is full of many kinds of flowers. There is a big kitchen and a dining room on the ground floor. I can invite more than 20 friends to my home to have dinner. On the first floor, there is a computer room and a big living room. I can chat with my friends over a cup of tea in the living room. It is also comfortable to watch TV in it. Of course, I have my own bedroom.
I love my dream home and hope to have a house like this some day.
There is a big kitchen and a dining room on the ground floor. I love my dream home and hope to have a house like this some day.
【详解】【小题1】[总体分析]
①本文是一篇话题作文;
②人称和时态:人称为第一人称;时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏要点。注意行文连贯,逻辑清晰,无拼写和语法错误。
写作步骤]
第一步,承接给出的开头,点明主题;
第二步,详细介绍梦想中的家的具体情况;
第三步,书写总结。
[亮点词汇]
①be full of充满
②more than超过
③chat with与……聊天
[高分句型]
①There is a big kitchen and a dining room on the ground floor. (there be句型)
②I love my dream home and hope to have a house like this some day. (and并列句)
【小题2】句意:在一楼有一个大厨房和一间餐厅。改为there be句型,要遵循就近原则,在“a big kitchen and a dining room”中,离谓语最近的“a big kitchen”,为单数,所以用is。故填There is a big kitchen and a dining room on the ground floor.
【小题3】句意:我爱我的梦想中的家,并且希望有一天能拥有这样的一所房子。改为and连接的句子,这两个句子的主语都是I,and要放在两个并列谓语部分之间。故填I love my dream home and hope to have a house like this some day.
6.“无人机飞行员、数据工程师、机器人教练、太空厨师……”在人工智能AI (Artificial Intelligence) 高速发展的今天,这些曾经闻所未闻的职业正在逐步走入大众视野。假如你是李华,请向某英语报Future Life栏目投稿,谈谈你对未来职业的看法。内容包括:
1.对于人们未来职业的预测,工作类型、方式、地点及时长等;
2.未来职业变化带来的影响;
3.中学生适应未来职业应做的准备,健康生活、个人提升、人际关系等。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
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【答案】例文
Dear Editor,
With the rapid development of the Artificial Intelligence, many new occupations have emerged, such as drone pilots, data engineers, robot coaches, and space chefs.
I believe that in the future, people will only need to work at home for one hour a day, because other work will be done by robots. So we will have more time to travel to relax ourselves. We will also have more time to spend with our family. In order to adapt to these, we should now actively exercise our bodies and work hard to learn the relevant knowledge of AI so that we can better adapt to the future. At the same time, we should improve our relationship with our family and friends.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是材料作文。
②时态:主要使用“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”。
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。在信的开头指出人工智能发展带来新职业这一背景,引出对未来生活和应对策略的讨论。
第二步,具体阐述。先描述未来因机器人工作导致人们工作时间缩短及生活变化;再针对这种变化,详细说明人们现在应从锻炼身体、学习知识、改善人际关系等方面做好准备,全面且有条理地阐述观点。
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①rapid development 快速发展
②artificial intelligence 人工智能
③emerge 出现
④drone pilot 无人机驾驶员
⑤data engineer 数据工程师
⑥robot coach 机器人教练
⑦space chef 太空厨师
⑧adapt to 适应
⑨relevant knowledge 相关知识
[高分句型]
①I believe that in the future, people will only need to work at home for one hour a day, because other work will be done by robots.(宾语从句)(because引导原因状语从句)
②So we should now actively exercise our bodies and work hard to learn the relevant knowledge of AI so that we can better adapt to the future.(目的状语从句)
7.“心中有梦,眼里有光,脚下有路,未来可期”。你一定有自己的梦想,心中设计了自己美好的未来,并为之不懈努力着。
请以 “My Future” 为题写一篇短文描述你的未来生活和梦想。
要求:1. 对未来的描述中包括你的职业、生活环境等,并说明构想的理由。
2. 为实现梦想的未来生活,你打算怎样做 (至少两条)
注意:1. 文中不能出现真实的人名和校名;2. 字数100词左右。
My future
In the future, I will ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例:
My future
In the future, I will be a doctor. Because I want to help people to keep healthy. I am good at looking after others. I think it’s a meaningful job and it will make me happy. In the future, I will live in my hometown, Qingdao. Because my parents and friends are all here. I will have a robot to help me to do the housework so I will have enough free time to relax after work.
To have a good future, I will study hard and go to university to learn the medicine and how to care for others. I am going to read a lot to open my eyes and get more knowledge.
I think my life in the future will be wonderful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、描述自己未来的职业、生活环境等,并说明构想的理由;
第二步、介绍自己如何实现梦想中的未来生活。
[亮点词汇]
①in the future未来
②keep healthy保持健康
③be good at擅长
④do the housework做家务
⑤care for照顾
[高分句型]
①I think it’s a meaningful job and it will make me happy. (省略that的宾语从句)
②To have a good future, I will study hard and go to university to learn the medicine and how to care for others. (“疑问词+不定式”结构)
8.科技发展日新月异,人工智能、虚拟现实技术的突破和应用,都将为我们的未来带来无限的可能。假设你校英语社团下周的交流主题是My life in 2050。请你根据以下提示,畅想一下你未来的工作和生活,写一篇发言稿,与社团同学分享。
注意:(1)短文须包含提示内容,可以适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等相关信息;
(3)词数:80—100;开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! What will my life be like in 2050 Let me tell you my predictions.
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That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【答案】
例文
Hello, everyone! What will my life be like in 2050 Let me tell you my predictions.
In 2050, with the development of science and technology, I think I will work as a scientist to develop cutting-edge technology, which is beneficial to human beings. At home, I will have a smart robot helper that can do housework, cook delicious meals, and even teach me new skills. The smart robot helper will make our life easier and more comfortable. Traveling will be much faster and more convenient. I might use flying cars or high-speed trains to explore the world and allow me to visit my friends or work in different cities quickly. Life will be more exciting and comfortable thanks to advanced technology.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【详解】【总体分析】
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,具体为发言稿,用于英语社团的交流活动;
②时态:主要使用一般将来时,因为是对未来生活的预测;
③提示:根据题目要求,发言稿应包含对未来工作、家庭生活以及交通方式的预测,同时要注意适当发挥,使内容更加丰富和生动。
【写作步骤】
第一步,表明写作意图。通过提问“What will my life be like in 2050 ”来引出对未来生活的预测,并明确将要分享的内容。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。
工作方面:预测自己将成为一名科学家,致力于人工智能和虚拟现实技术的研发,强调这些技术对人类社会的积极影响。
家庭生活:描述家中将拥有的智能机器人助手,它如何帮助处理家务、烹饪美食,甚至教授新技能,以及这种智能生活带来的便利和舒适。
交通方式:预测未来的交通将更加快速和便捷,如使用飞行汽车或高速列车进行长途旅行,这将极大地缩短旅行时间,使生活更加丰富多彩。
第三步,书写结语。以“That’s all. Thanks for listening.”作为结尾,简洁明了地结束发言,并表达感谢。
【亮点词汇】
①cutting-edge technology 尖端技术
②beneficial 有益的
③high-speed trains 高速列车
④advanced 高级的,先进的
【高分句型】
①In 2050, with the development of science and technology, I think I will work as a scientist to develop cutting-edge technology, which is beneficial to human beings.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
②At home, I will have a smart robot helper that can do housework, cook delicious meals, and even teach me new skills.(that引导的定语从句)